remember that this really shouldn't be a stressful experience - give it your best shot, and make sure you take a look a the samples i shared with you. i hope they're helpful, & best of luck! with love, kwok
@kailenbains4418Ай бұрын
** VIDEO SUMMARY ** SECTION 1 - 'Start with one reason' - why do you want to study this subject? create an interesting intro SECTION 2 - 'Pick two ideas from books' - create two sentences about points you read in books and develop them to show your interest and further reading SECTION 3 - 'Going beyond the books' - summarise your work experience, courses, lectures or tv shows (something deeper than literature) SECTION 4 - 'High school subjects' - pick 1-2 of your school subjects and describe how they taught you skills that will prepare you for your uni course SECTION 5 - 'Extra curricular achievements' - talk about what skills it gave you and link it to your uni subjects - hobbies such as musical talents or sports --> Many say not to use AI such as Chat-GPT to write their essays, but if you provide it with data personalised to you and your own subjects, achievements and books you've read, it can help provide you with a structure! But of course, don't write your statement with AI...
@AimeeWhite-t2d3 күн бұрын
I love how straightforward and well-structured your tutorials are.
@chq2252 Жыл бұрын
You write so elegantly and formally! Thank you for the tips! I need to revise my personal statement haha
@НурисламКоныс-з7ц7 күн бұрын
Same
@chq22527 күн бұрын
@@НурисламКоныс-з7ц Best of luck! 🍀
@harryburns83043 жыл бұрын
Honestly your videos are sosos helpful. Writing a personal statement was always such a daunting thing but this makes it seem so much more accessible and simple. Thank you for helping future uni students out!
@Yoongles73210 ай бұрын
Omg this has been the most informative personal statement video ive seen yet! Very detailed and yet so quick to understand! Thank you!
@maazhmd_3 жыл бұрын
Thank you Kwok for helping me out with my personal statement.I'm currently a final year student at high school from India and I intend to apply to the reputed colleges in the UK for my undergraduate study in law.Giving us all a glimpse of your own personal statement was really thoughtful of you and gave me an idea as to how should I structure my personal statement.Thanks once again😊
@jumgkoo30792 күн бұрын
thank you for this video!! it's so helpful for me, im really greatful you uploaded! i will use these tips to write my personal statement and update this comment in a few months to see I got into my university choices!! I'll see you all in a few months- good luck ~~!!
@gretatachirai3913 жыл бұрын
I just wanted to say that i considered a lot of ps videos in order to write a perfect ps and this was by far the best ur tips and structure was very helpful and allowed me to write an interesting cv!!! THANK YOU SO MUCHHHH
@ChloeNoever8 ай бұрын
You are so well-spoken and have great and straightforward tips! Thank you!
@maxied25494 жыл бұрын
The first paragraph of your law personal statement is so sad to read in light of what's happening now😢
@rotemalm200210 ай бұрын
Thank you so so much! I was so lost and I used your tips ans structure and it helped me and calmed me dow so much and now I have something great to work with!! I'm pretty proud of what I have so far and the credit totally goes to you!! will come back to update if I got in!
@charie29733 жыл бұрын
Thank you for sharing your wisdom in this video. I am not writing a personal statement but your structure is helping me to shape my answers better! - for the questions i got asked in my job application. Love your vibe and your content ;)
@emilkrastev32084 жыл бұрын
Congratulations on reaching 2(.39)K subscribers!:) Hope to see this channel grow because your content is amazing :)
@milktpapiv-38154 жыл бұрын
Why do I love your vibe already
@kwok4 жыл бұрын
& i love your comment
@aadilahkhan91664 жыл бұрын
yes, you're back !!!!
@sagewydleshire20373 жыл бұрын
😄This is so kind of you Kwok;😊 You’re actually almost writing the personal statement for us viewers.😄 I am so grateful that I found you. Although it was not a long video,😸 this was a really rich,❄️ plentiful content that you created.⛄️ With those tips that you gave us, our personal statements would be verisimilar.😃🌟 thank you very much.💥 May God bless you, amazing person✨. Also may you find all your desires in front of your eyes soon.💫
@romanstaszak244 Жыл бұрын
Fantastic video 😀👍 Straight to the points in very short and informative way. I like very much its simplicity. I am going to use your hints and tips for my personal statement. Once again thank you very much Kwok 😀👍
@Jamie-nt3eh11 ай бұрын
You are obviously very intelligent which helps allot!
@bugonthemoon9 ай бұрын
The amount of time I have watched this video. THANK U THANK U THANK U. Wishing you the best
@ameliemichiels3787Ай бұрын
I am really so confused right now, becasue I've already watched so many personal statement video and literally every video says different things about how your personal statement should be and what should be included and what not... and I am just stressing out righ now cause i dont know which approach to take !
@Joy-kf1nnАй бұрын
Hey, I hope you actually get to read this so you know you’re not alone, I feel like we’re all bound to feel like this at the stage of personal statements. I have no idea what exactly you’re feeling but in my opinion, you’re gonna do just fine, no matter how difficult it feels or looks, you got this!! The few things I can tell you based off my own research is to write the actual format provided by UCAS to understand what the baseline is, then try to watch videos like these and get an idea of how to reword some things here and there. Don’t shy away from your careers teacher (if you have one) and also don’t be scared to get advice from friends who’ve graduated and how they did theirs, also AI if you’re having trouble with trying to find out how to word certain things and shorted long statements. Remember, you’ll never miss out on what’s meant for you, and always remember to do your best!!!
@amik8858 күн бұрын
Thank you so much - this was so helpful.
@hambun3674 жыл бұрын
I prefer oxford then Harvard. I think if I get into oxford {hopefully a scholarship} I’ll pick medical school 🦋 this really helped me improve on my studying to make my parents proud
@charliechalk10 ай бұрын
Did you get in?
@butterflyeatsgrapes3 ай бұрын
This is the best video I've ever watched! Made my day so much 🌻🔆😭
@nobody-mm7pi3 ай бұрын
This is soo sooo helpful, thank you very much..
@selene._.22354 жыл бұрын
Hello kwok, a lil fan of yours from Hong Kong! I’m inspired by you around a year ago and since then aspired to be an oxford law student too! Would you please make a video on LNAT as well? I would be really grateful to know more about what is happening on the day of the test beforehand since LNAT is really stressful to me(and some of my friends)!
@amandabritton238 ай бұрын
Thank you so much for sharing your actual statements ❤
@nicole17894 жыл бұрын
Oof that first paragraph hits different rn..
@Void-fc6jn11 ай бұрын
If you don't mind me asking, what was your score on the LNAT? Awesome vido!!! Definitely alleviated some of my stress about applying to uni.
@edithc52434 жыл бұрын
Thank you, kwok! for all of your videos and sharing. ❤️🎈
@Julia-ku5vy4 жыл бұрын
Thank you so so so much for this video!
@kwok4 жыл бұрын
you're so welcome!!!!
@chiazammbadugha85674 жыл бұрын
this was so helpful!!!! Thank youuuuuu
@kaelynng25494 жыл бұрын
I LOVE UR VIDEOSS! As a year 1 law student, I'm curious to know how u study law i.e. notes/reading skills! Can u share about them? Thank you ;)
@valentineparlhomenko-shevc45614 ай бұрын
im cryin what am i supposted to write if my english is awful and i havent read any smart books😭😭
@CarmenLopez-hk3ri3 жыл бұрын
This video was very helpful! thank you!❤️
@lamlamco2754 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much!!!
@sudecapoglu5843 жыл бұрын
Thank you for the absolutely amazing content and video. I was wondering whether you, or someone you kindly direct to, would be able to review a personal statement. Thanks so much again. Greetings🌸
@Ilya_0128 ай бұрын
Thank you ❤
@Elvis-guy19738 ай бұрын
"Going beyond the books", paragraph 3 got me stuck. Iv'e had no work experience in my chosen course(Social Policy & Social Change) how should I write this?
@Elvis-guy19738 ай бұрын
Paragraph 4 is really easy?🤔I didnt do particularly well at school. I'm attempting to be a mature student. So what should I put here?
@afrazahmed64379 ай бұрын
HI, I am applying soon enough and plz need someone to tell me how my personal statement looks. Someone who is experienced . Plz if someone can help me
@brandonl05044 жыл бұрын
Hii, can u make a video on LNAT? Thanks!
@tssukiee22 күн бұрын
did you find any good videos on the lnat btw haha
@malsi840Ай бұрын
hi Kwok, do you offer personal statement services? I am currently working on my law personal statement and would for someone to review/critique it?
@zahra-kz1dj2 жыл бұрын
is it okay if i dont put line breaks? bc my line exceeds the 47 limit :(
@mariamhassan4566Ай бұрын
hiii, what books did u read for law?
@eirena8313 жыл бұрын
struggling with my final version of law PS, i should watched this helpful video earlier...
@negaraaa2 жыл бұрын
where do i find this pre-university books to read that you mentioned?
@kwok2 жыл бұрын
here's a useful one, it includes many subjects' suggested readings :) www.ox.ac.uk/admissions/undergraduate/courses/suggested-subject-resources
@thegirlnamedashmita19693 жыл бұрын
Hi! Thanks for this amazing video. Can I send my written personal statement to you for reading and checking what's wrong in it. It shall help me a lot. Please le me know how can I give you?
@phasc5605 Жыл бұрын
did you apply for 2 courses?
@BeaulahSibanda6 ай бұрын
Can you kindly help me polish up my ps 😢
@NatNay-cu3uv2 ай бұрын
If this thing is going to Oxford I'll go elsewhere Ft
@chq225211 ай бұрын
😮💨 my personal statement is full of I and Me. It sounds like a 5yr old wrote it 😭
@fredrickagyemang9395Ай бұрын
😂😂😂😂
@chq2252Ай бұрын
@@fredrickagyemang9395 🤣 but hey it got me a good offer so I'm not complaining anymore haha
@jermaine773610 күн бұрын
I'm able to trust her more than other because of her ethnic origin.
@zainabasli23083 жыл бұрын
I am sorry but would you mind check mine, if you have time ofc