the personal statement that GOT ME INTO OXFORD

[@kwok]

remember that this really shouldn't be a stressful experience - give it your best shot, and make sure you take a look a the samples i shared with you. i hope they're helpful, & best of luck! with love, kwok

[@kailenbains4418]

** VIDEO SUMMARY ** SECTION 1 - 'Start with one reason' - why do you want to study this subject? create an interesting intro SECTION 2 - 'Pick two ideas from books' - create two sentences about points you read in books and develop them to show your interest and further reading SECTION 3 - 'Going beyond the books' - summarise your work experience, courses, lectures or tv shows (something deeper than literature) SECTION 4 - 'High school subjects' - pick 1-2 of your school subjects and describe how they taught you skills that will prepare you for your uni course SECTION 5 - 'Extra curricular achievements' - talk about what skills it gave you and link it to your uni subjects - hobbies such as musical talents or sports --> Many say not to use AI such as Chat-GPT to write their essays, but if you provide it with data personalised to you and your own subjects, achievements and books you've read, it can help provide you with a structure! But of course, don't write your statement with AI...

[@chq2252]

You write so elegantly and formally! Thank you for the tips! I need to revise my personal statement haha

[@НурисламКоныс-з7ц]

Same

[@chq2252]

​@@НурисламКоныс-з7ц Best of luck! 🍀

[@Krisan829]

I've reviewed this vid three times before crafting my personal statement and came away with a wealth of ideas about how to craft a stellar application essay. All thanks to Kwok, my sweet girl mwah!

[@Yoongles732]

Omg this has been the most informative personal statement video ive seen yet! Very detailed and yet so quick to understand! Thank you!

[@ChloeNoever]

You are so well-spoken and have great and straightforward tips! Thank you!

[@harryburns8304]

Honestly your videos are sosos helpful. Writing a personal statement was always such a daunting thing but this makes it seem so much more accessible and simple. Thank you for helping future uni students out!

[@rotemalm2002]

Thank you so so much! I was so lost and I used your tips ans structure and it helped me and calmed me dow so much and now I have something great to work with!! I'm pretty proud of what I have so far and the credit totally goes to you!! will come back to update if I got in!

[@gretatachirai391]

I just wanted to say that i considered a lot of ps videos in order to write a perfect ps and this was by far the best ur tips and structure was very helpful and allowed me to write an interesting cv!!! THANK YOU SO MUCHHHH

[@maazhmd_]

Thank you Kwok for helping me out with my personal statement.I'm currently a final year student at high school from India and I intend to apply to the reputed colleges in the UK for my undergraduate study in law.Giving us all a glimpse of your own personal statement was really thoughtful of you and gave me an idea as to how should I structure my personal statement.Thanks once again😊

[@farahomar6880]

I love your advanced English vocabulary and the way it comes to you so naturally in speaking let alone writing I would pay you to write my personal statement for me if I could 😂😂😂

[@jumgkoo3079]

thank you for this video!! it's so helpful for me, im really greatful you uploaded! i will use these tips to write my personal statement and update this comment in a few months to see I got into my university choices!! I'll see you all in a few months- good luck ~~!!

[@kwok]

good luck xoxo

[@maxied2549]

The first paragraph of your law personal statement is so sad to read in light of what's happening now😢

[@charie2973]

Thank you for sharing your wisdom in this video. I am not writing a personal statement but your structure is helping me to shape my answers better! - for the questions i got asked in my job application. Love your vibe and your content ;)

[@Jamie-nt3eh]

You are obviously very intelligent which helps allot!

[@Valerieda-q3g]

THAN YOU SO MUCH. U ARE SO SWEET AND THİS İS REALLY HELPFUL.

[@romanstaszak244]

Fantastic video 😀👍 Straight to the points in very short and informative way. I like very much its simplicity. I am going to use your hints and tips for my personal statement. Once again thank you very much Kwok 😀👍

[@emilkrastev3208]

Congratulations on reaching 2(.39)K subscribers!:) Hope to see this channel grow because your content is amazing :)

[@milktpapiv-3815]

Why do I love your vibe already

[@kwok]

& i love your comment

[@bugonthemoon]

The amount of time I have watched this video. THANK U THANK U THANK U. Wishing you the best

[@Void-fc6jn]

If you don't mind me asking, what was your score on the LNAT? Awesome vido!!! Definitely alleviated some of my stress about applying to uni.

[@aadilahkhan9166]

yes, you're back !!!!

[@hambun367]

I prefer oxford then Harvard. I think if I get into oxford {hopefully a scholarship} I’ll pick medical school 🦋 this really helped me improve on my studying to make my parents proud

[@charliechalk]

Did you get in?

[@cupidwave]

ma'amm i really appreciate and adore u

[@sagewydleshire2037]

😄This is so kind of you Kwok;😊 You’re actually almost writing the personal statement for us viewers.😄 I am so grateful that I found you. Although it was not a long video,😸 this was a really rich,❄️ plentiful content that you created.⛄️ With those tips that you gave us, our personal statements would be verisimilar.😃🌟 thank you very much.💥 May God bless you, amazing person✨. Also may you find all your desires in front of your eyes soon.💫

[@nicole1789]

Oof that first paragraph hits different rn..

[@amandabritton23]

Thank you so much for sharing your actual statements ❤

[@nobody-mm7pi]

This is soo sooo helpful, thank you very much..

[@ameliemichiels3787]

I am really so confused right now, becasue I've already watched so many personal statement video and literally every video says different things about how your personal statement should be and what should be included and what not... and I am just stressing out righ now cause i dont know which approach to take !

[@Joy-kf1nn]

Hey, I hope you actually get to read this so you know you’re not alone, I feel like we’re all bound to feel like this at the stage of personal statements. I have no idea what exactly you’re feeling but in my opinion, you’re gonna do just fine, no matter how difficult it feels or looks, you got this!! The few things I can tell you based off my own research is to write the actual format provided by UCAS to understand what the baseline is, then try to watch videos like these and get an idea of how to reword some things here and there. Don’t shy away from your careers teacher (if you have one) and also don’t be scared to get advice from friends who’ve graduated and how they did theirs, also AI if you’re having trouble with trying to find out how to word certain things and shorted long statements. Remember, you’ll never miss out on what’s meant for you, and always remember to do your best!!!

[@amik885]

Thank you so much - this was so helpful.

[@butterflyeatsgrapes]

This is the best video I've ever watched! Made my day so much 🌻🔆😭

[@selene._.2235]

Hello kwok, a lil fan of yours from Hong Kong! I’m inspired by you around a year ago and since then aspired to be an oxford law student too! Would you please make a video on LNAT as well? I would be really grateful to know more about what is happening on the day of the test beforehand since LNAT is really stressful to me(and some of my friends)!

[@Julia-ku5vy]

Thank you so so so much for this video!

[@kwok]

you're so welcome!!!!

[@elgardth]

im cryin what am i supposted to write if my english is awful and i havent read any smart books😭😭

[@sarahdrio4623]

Thank you for sharing!

[@edithc5243]

Thank you, kwok! for all of your videos and sharing. ❤️🎈

[@Canizio913]

Nice personal statement 😊

[@kaelynng2549]

I LOVE UR VIDEOSS! As a year 1 law student, I'm curious to know how u study law i.e. notes/reading skills! Can u share about them? Thank you ;)

[@CarmenLopez-hk3ri]

This video was very helpful! thank you!❤️

[@Elvis-guy1973]

"Going beyond the books", paragraph 3 got me stuck. Iv'e had no work experience in my chosen course(Social Policy & Social Change) how should I write this?

[@chiazammbadugha8567]

this was so helpful!!!! Thank youuuuuu

[@sudecapoglu584]

Thank you for the absolutely amazing content and video. I was wondering whether you, or someone you kindly direct to, would be able to review a personal statement. Thanks so much again. Greetings🌸

[@Elvis-guy1973]

Paragraph 4 is really easy?🤔I didnt do particularly well at school. I'm attempting to be a mature student. So what should I put here?

[@malsi840]

hi Kwok, do you offer personal statement services? I am currently working on my law personal statement and would for someone to review/critique it?

[@zahra-kz1dj]

is it okay if i dont put line breaks? bc my line exceeds the 47 limit :(

[@lamlamco275]

Thank you so much!!!

[@mariamhassan4566]

hiii, what books did u read for law?

[@eirena831]

struggling with my final version of law PS, i should watched this helpful video earlier...

[@Ilya_012]

Thank you ❤

[@brandonl0504]

Hii, can u make a video on LNAT? Thanks!

[@tssukiee]

did you find any good videos on the lnat btw haha

[@afrazahmed6437]

HI, I am applying soon enough and plz need someone to tell me how my personal statement looks. Someone who is experienced . Plz if someone can help me

[@phasc5605]

did you apply for 2 courses?

[@thegirlnamedashmita1969]

Hi! Thanks for this amazing video. Can I send my written personal statement to you for reading and checking what's wrong in it. It shall help me a lot. Please le me know how can I give you?

[@chq2252]

😮‍💨 my personal statement is full of I and Me. It sounds like a 5yr old wrote it 😭

[@fredrickagyemang9395]

😂😂😂😂

[@chq2252]

@@fredrickagyemang9395 🤣 but hey it got me a good offer so I'm not complaining anymore haha

[@negaraaa]

where do i find this pre-university books to read that you mentioned?

[@kwok]

here's a useful one, it includes many subjects' suggested readings :) www.ox.ac.uk/admissions/undergraduate/courses/suggested-subject-resources

[@BeaulahSibanda]

Can you kindly help me polish up my ps 😢

[@NatNay-cu3uv]

If this thing is going to Oxford I'll go elsewhere Ft

[@zainabasli2308]

I am sorry but would you mind check mine, if you have time ofc

[@jermaine7736]

I'm able to trust her more than other because of her ethnic origin.

[@adams2735]

The banana break! XD

[@adams2735]

omg there's a second one