the personal statement that GOT ME INTO OXFORD

today i’m sharing how i wrote a personal statement for oxford. i've broken it down into a simple, 5-paragraph structure for writing your personal statement - and you can use it for any UK university!
remember that everything will work out fine - just put your best writing into it, and remember to ask someone to read it over with you!
with love,
kwok
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[@kwok]

remember that this really shouldn't be a stressful experience - give it your best shot, and make sure you take a look a the samples i shared with you. i hope they're helpful, & best of luck! with love, kwok

[@chq2252]

You write so elegantly and formally! Thank you for the tips! I need to revise my personal statement haha

[@user-xb6pb1jt3k]

You are so well-spoken and have great and straightforward tips! Thank you!

[@Yoongles732]

Omg this has been the most informative personal statement video ive seen yet! Very detailed and yet so quick to understand! Thank you!

[@charie2973]

Thank you for sharing your wisdom in this video. I am not writing a personal statement but your structure is helping me to shape my answers better! - for the questions i got asked in my job application. Love your vibe and your content ;)

[@maxied2549]

The first paragraph of your law personal statement is so sad to read in light of what's happening now😢

[@harryburns8304]

Honestly your videos are sosos helpful. Writing a personal statement was always such a daunting thing but this makes it seem so much more accessible and simple. Thank you for helping future uni students out!

[@rotemalm2002]

Thank you so so much! I was so lost and I used your tips ans structure and it helped me and calmed me dow so much and now I have something great to work with!! I'm pretty proud of what I have so far and the credit totally goes to you!! will come back to update if I got in!

[@gretatachirai391]

I just wanted to say that i considered a lot of ps videos in order to write a perfect ps and this was by far the best ur tips and structure was very helpful and allowed me to write an interesting cv!!! THANK YOU SO MUCHHHH

[@emilkrastev3208]

Congratulations on reaching 2(.39)K subscribers!:) Hope to see this channel grow because your content is amazing :)

[@aadilahkhan9166]

yes, you're back !!!!

[@romanstaszak244]

Fantastic video 😀👍 Straight to the points in very short and informative way. I like very much its simplicity. I am going to use your hints and tips for my personal statement. Once again thank you very much Kwok 😀👍

[@butterflyeatsgrapes]

This is the best video I've ever watched! Made my day so much 🌻🔆😭

[@fionacrumble]

The amount of time I have watched this video. THANK U THANK U THANK U. Wishing you the best

[@edithc5243]

Thank you, kwok! for all of your videos and sharing. ❤️🎈

[@maazhmd_]

Thank you Kwok for helping me out with my personal statement.I'm currently a final year student at high school from India and I intend to apply to the reputed colleges in the UK for my undergraduate study in law.Giving us all a glimpse of your own personal statement was really thoughtful of you and gave me an idea as to how should I structure my personal statement.Thanks once again😊

[@amandadean2620]

Thank you so much for sharing your actual statements ❤

[@milktpapiv-3815]

Why do I love your vibe already

[@kwok]

& i love your comment

[@chiazammbadugha8567]

this was so helpful!!!! Thank youuuuuu

[@CarmenLopez-hk3ri]

This video was very helpful! thank you!❤️

[@Jamie-nt3eh]

You are obviously very intelligent which helps allot!

[@sagewydleshire2037]

😄This is so kind of you Kwok;😊 You’re actually almost writing the personal statement for us viewers.😄 I am so grateful that I found you. Although it was not a long video,😸 this was a really rich,❄️ plentiful content that you created.⛄️ With those tips that you gave us, our personal statements would be verisimilar.😃🌟 thank you very much.💥 May God bless you, amazing person✨. Also may you find all your desires in front of your eyes soon.💫

[@selene._.2235]

Hello kwok, a lil fan of yours from Hong Kong! I’m inspired by you around a year ago and since then aspired to be an oxford law student too! Would you please make a video on LNAT as well? I would be really grateful to know more about what is happening on the day of the test beforehand since LNAT is really stressful to me(and some of my friends)!

[@Void-fc6jn]

If you don't mind me asking, what was your score on the LNAT? Awesome vido!!! Definitely alleviated some of my stress about applying to uni.

[@Julia-ku5vy]

Thank you so so so much for this video!

[@kwok]

you're so welcome!!!!

[@kaelynng2549]

I LOVE UR VIDEOSS! As a year 1 law student, I'm curious to know how u study law i.e. notes/reading skills! Can u share about them? Thank you ;)

[@lamlamco275]

Thank you so much!!!

[@Elvis-guy1973]

"Going beyond the books", paragraph 3 got me stuck. Iv'e had no work experience in my chosen course(Social Policy & Social Change) how should I write this?

[@sudecapoglu584]

Thank you for the absolutely amazing content and video. I was wondering whether you, or someone you kindly direct to, would be able to review a personal statement. Thanks so much again. Greetings🌸

[@Ilya_012]

Thank you ❤

[@zahra-kz1dj]

is it okay if i dont put line breaks? bc my line exceeds the 47 limit :(

[@nicole1789]

Oof that first paragraph hits different rn..

[@Elvis-guy1973]

Paragraph 4 is really easy?🤔I didnt do particularly well at school. I'm attempting to be a mature student. So what should I put here?

[@brandonl0504]

Hii, can u make a video on LNAT? Thanks!

[@hambun367]

I prefer oxford then Harvard. I think if I get into oxford {hopefully a scholarship} I’ll pick medical school 🦋 this really helped me improve on my studying to make my parents proud

[@charliechalk]

Did you get in?

[@valentineparlhomenko-shevc4561]

im cryin what am i supposted to write if my english is awful and i havent read any smart books😭😭

[@phasc5605]

did you apply for 2 courses?

[@thegirlnamedashmita1969]

Hi! Thanks for this amazing video. Can I send my written personal statement to you for reading and checking what's wrong in it. It shall help me a lot. Please le me know how can I give you?

[@afrazahmed6437]

HI, I am applying soon enough and plz need someone to tell me how my personal statement looks. Someone who is experienced . Plz if someone can help me

[@negaraaa]

where do i find this pre-university books to read that you mentioned?

[@kwok]

here's a useful one, it includes many subjects' suggested readings :) www.ox.ac.uk/admissions/undergraduate/courses/suggested-subject-resources

[@eirena831]

struggling with my final version of law PS, i should watched this helpful video earlier...

[@chq2252]

😮‍💨 my personal statement is full of I and Me. It sounds like a 5yr old wrote it 😭

[@user-km5ms7kk9h]

Can you kindly help me polish up my ps 😢

[@adams2735]

The banana break! XD

[@adams2735]

omg there's a second one

[@zainabasli2308]

I am sorry but would you mind check mine, if you have time ofc