How to Write an Awesome "Why This College?" Essay

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College Essay Guy

College Essay Guy

Күн бұрын

The "Why us" or "Why this college" essay is a chance for you to demonstrate why you're a great match for a particular school. In this college essay guide, I'll cover how to write a great "Why us" essay, the most common mistakes to avoid, and some things you'll probably want to be sure you do. as well as a few of my favorite approaches.
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00:00 - Intro
00:53 - Common mistakes to avoid
04:31 - How to find all the resources you need
07:07 - 3 approaches to writing a "Why us" essay
15:57 - What if you don't know what you want to study?
18:52 - 3 ways to make sure your essay is doing its job
19:45 - Additional resources
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@gmh471
@gmh471 10 ай бұрын
The problem is that for most kids, they decide that they like particular college precisely because of things like the location, the campus, the size, ranking, athletics, the town, majors offered, etc. This is why I think the "why College X" essay is perhaps the worst supplemental essay topic used by colleges as it invites students to write the phoniest of all the phony essays they are forced to write. "I am excited to study thermodynamics with Professor Cohen after reading his article Thermodynamics In The 21st Century in New England Science Journal" even though the essay reader will never know that I found this information via a Google search and the reader has no idea one way or the other whether I actually read the article (I didn't). Essentially, the students who are able to be the most effective BS artists will win the admissions game. And it IS a game.
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 8 ай бұрын
Thanks for chiming in!
@davidohaegbulam9988
@davidohaegbulam9988 8 ай бұрын
It really is a game... And I'm going to win.
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@gustavolopezsanchez3249 8 ай бұрын
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@amytrinnaman2211
@amytrinnaman2211 2 жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
Happy to help! Thanks for watching. :)
@madhushriiyengar7156
@madhushriiyengar7156 2 жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
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@counselorqfs3911 2 жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
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@ramapandey9579 2 жыл бұрын
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@moneyhearts 8 ай бұрын
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@jon62314
@jon62314 2 жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
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@kalisanath4833 Жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
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@mahasaleh Жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
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@viviencheng_ 2 жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
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@evilgriffing1825 2 жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
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@WendyBeatoVarsityAbroad
@WendyBeatoVarsityAbroad 2 жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
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@DrBStepsToTheFutureLLC
@DrBStepsToTheFutureLLC 2 жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
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@lifewithrobert2
@lifewithrobert2 Жыл бұрын
Thanks a lot; just finished the why us for Warren Wilson College. Your tips were really helpful!
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
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@dc4067
@dc4067 Жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
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@marcelamorais577 Жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
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@miltonvento1822
@miltonvento1822 2 жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
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@chitrasubbu7397
@chitrasubbu7397 2 жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
You are welcome! Thanks for watching. :)
@julieherrera239
@julieherrera239 Жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
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@nataliemcfadden8643 Жыл бұрын
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@lilianatawoi741 Жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
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@nirelleksenasitchoa7652 Жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
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@nourrr5910
@nourrr5910 Жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 11 ай бұрын
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@leomunguba5939 2 жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
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@chandramdutta3328 2 жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
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@ceilingfloor6797
@ceilingfloor6797 7 ай бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 4 ай бұрын
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@profbolt9462
@profbolt9462 Жыл бұрын
A video on, "Why you need a scholarship essay" from a particular would very much be helpful...Could you share some tips on how to go about such an essay?
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
Check out this guide: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/how-to-write-a-scholarship-essay
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@br1ann88 Жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
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@Hermonyyy
@Hermonyyy Жыл бұрын
I just finished my personal essay for my common application and started with my supplemental essay and using your methods and tips I am going really fast. If I got accepted by the Universities I choose, I promise you are the only person that I will mention and thank i.e. after my parents😊. Thank you very very very much Mr. Ethan you have made my life easier.(not a lie)
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
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@derickfigueroa8526 Жыл бұрын
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@felipemendonca9451 Жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
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@christinas8720 Жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
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@rafidchowdhury1036
@rafidchowdhury1036 5 ай бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 4 ай бұрын
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@Jayvyn-sz1sx 10 ай бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 8 ай бұрын
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@adiso7613 2 жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
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@amanueldaniel6431 2 жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
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@ifeanyianyoku8650 2 жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
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@diegoschlussel
@diegoschlussel Жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
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@pretentiousdelinquent
@pretentiousdelinquent 7 ай бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 7 ай бұрын
Thanks for watching :)
@sheepish7815
@sheepish7815 Жыл бұрын
im writing an artist statement essay, and there are like 3 resources max, I pray for future students you will find a way in the future to help us with it!
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 11 ай бұрын
Thanks for the suggestion! We'll make a note of it.
@lulu_8615
@lulu_8615 2 жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
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@duongothuy8649 4 ай бұрын
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@hawimegersa9560
@hawimegersa9560 Жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
You're welcome!
@magicthegatheringlover4277
@magicthegatheringlover4277 Жыл бұрын
I love how a great deal of this video is: it is called a "why this college essay" but don't write down the reasons you are most likely to want that college. Why have I (and I assume most people) chosen the schools I did? The ranking and location with consideration to the weather
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
Thanks for watching!
@arjunarun9174
@arjunarun9174 Жыл бұрын
These videos are really helpful. Is it possible to go into depth with a specific university's essay prompt, e.g. UMichigan's Ross Admissions portfolio.
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
Thanks! We have crash courses for over 70 schools on the website here: www.collegeessayguy.com/supplemental-essays Check it out!
@Banana-Joanne
@Banana-Joanne 2 жыл бұрын
damn seeing all these sample essays makes me wonder if mine are good enough haha. I've got work to do.
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
You got this!
@quanger6496
@quanger6496 2 жыл бұрын
THANK YOU
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
YOU'RE WELCOME :)
@juliagu6165
@juliagu6165 Жыл бұрын
“lowkey” was absolutely used correctly. hats off to the coolest college guy on the internet
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
Thanks for the validation. :)
@uygunpolatov551
@uygunpolatov551 10 ай бұрын
Rlly awesome
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 10 ай бұрын
Thanks for watching!
@shadrackboakye8002
@shadrackboakye8002 2 жыл бұрын
I really can't imagine how many people have gotten into their dreams schools because if this guy
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
I hope it's a lot! Thanks for watching. :)
@nanomacaron232
@nanomacaron232 2 жыл бұрын
I’m not applying for a college, but instead this really good high school that offers majors I’m interested in. Although, this still really helps, thanks!
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
Awesome! Thanks for watching.
@nanomacaron232
@nanomacaron232 2 жыл бұрын
@@Collegeessayguy If you don’t mind I have a question. Do you think it’s appropriate to directly mention their mission statement if you explain why it’s important to you? Or should it not be mentioned at all?
@annaheloise9838
@annaheloise9838 2 жыл бұрын
Hi Ethan! Thanks so much for your step by step analyzing the WHY US ESSAY, it really helps me a lot. By the way, I just bought The Best 386 Colleges from The Princeton Review, which is the 2021 version. Can I still use that as a guide for students applied this year? Will it mislead me somehow?
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
Your 2021 version should work great! :)
@ndirangujames2028
@ndirangujames2028 Жыл бұрын
Awesome tips. Please make one on why major.
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
Thanks for the tip. We have a guide for the "Why Major" essay here: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/why-major-college-essay
@ndirangujames2028
@ndirangujames2028 Жыл бұрын
@@Collegeessayguy Thanks
@spongeyamon
@spongeyamon 2 жыл бұрын
Every single time I watch your video, I learn so much and I'm taking notes like crazy. You are so informative, engaging and totally entertaining! My daughter and I are vegetarians... LOVE YOUR MEAT & POTATOES "edit"! Ha Ha. We are half-way thru your paid webinar series and it's soooo worth the money! Love the flexibility and access to materials! Thanks so much for easing us into this nail-biting process. ~Mommy of a senior in Texas!
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
Wow, thank you! Glad you're here. :)
@thebosstex1172
@thebosstex1172 6 ай бұрын
I have a strength of writing pretty well. I’m no author though, nor in any profession I could use it for. I also feel like I could hone it more. What degree/major in college should I go for that could potentially lead to that pays thrivable income?
@dc4067
@dc4067 Жыл бұрын
it was great tonight
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
Thanks for watching!
@marcthompson5442
@marcthompson5442 2 жыл бұрын
Hi Ethan, great content as always. Will you please clarify your 2nd point at the end during the "3 ways to make sure..." segment? You mention that students should bold their reasons but you never state that they should remove these bolded points before submitting their final versions on their applications. On your CEG website's guide to the "Why Us" essays, you specifically state not to leave the bolded words in the final draft and that you only did that in the examples to highlight the context. I've had students argue that "Ethan told me to bold my reasons in his video!" and so I'm just requesting a definitive answer right here, please. :)
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
Hi there! Thanks for asking. My definitive answer: Unbold before submitting!
@victorchidera4966
@victorchidera4966 Жыл бұрын
First I want to start by saying your videos are really helpful to me, thank you now my question is as an international student (Nigeria) Is it OK to include some of my traditional experiences in my essay?
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
Yes, that is OK!
@sthv777
@sthv777 Жыл бұрын
The uni I am applying to has 5 different options to choose from for these supplemental essays. "Why us ?" is one of them but there is also another option to write about my strategy to solve an issue and i think i can do better on later but i don't have much idea on HOW to write that whereas for the "why us" essay, well your vid is so helpful. So, I am confused. Which one do you think is a better choice ? Plus, do uni prefer "why us" essay to other essays ?
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
The "Why us" essay is likely a good choice if there are multiple prompt options. Of course the choice is yours!
@giulianaayleenfernandez1610
@giulianaayleenfernandez1610 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you for everything Ethan! I cannot find the chart´s link. Can you leave it here in the comments? I would love to use that chart to organize my why us essays.
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
Hey! Thanks for bringing this to our attention. The link to the chart is now included at the blog post linked in the description. Here is the direct link to the chart as well: docs.google.com/document/d/1SC43Y8HgsPlnlVmrzJkjmwFPKMiNnt07uix8m_p7zBw/edit?usp=sharing Hope this helps!
@catherinexie4376
@catherinexie4376 Жыл бұрын
Thank you Ethan! This video is so helpful for me ! !! I have a question that bothers me for a long time, which is: can I mention institutes, programs or labs that aren't in the specific college (such as the arts and science college) I am applying to? The essay requirement is "Considering the specific undergraduate school you have selected, describe how you intend to explore your academic and intellectual interests at the University of Pennsylvania".
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
That should be OK! Here's a free guide to the UPenn essays: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/upenn-university-pennsylvania-supplemental-essay
@catherinexie4376
@catherinexie4376 Жыл бұрын
@@Collegeessayguy Thank you!Your advice has been so helpful in my application season!
@HydraulicBeanbag
@HydraulicBeanbag Жыл бұрын
You aren’t too old to say low-key 🌝. My calc teacher used to say it all the time
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
LOL. Thank you!
@anivaldosambo7394
@anivaldosambo7394 2 жыл бұрын
Hey Ethan, Thanks for the video. if you don't mind I would like to ask you a question: for the essays that we don't have much room ( 150 to 250 words) How can we get that detailed information there?
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
It's possible. I recommend taking a no-fluff approach. Maybe you'll only mention 1 or 2 school-specific qualities in your essay compared to the usual 3-7. For more help, take a look at my guide to the "Why us" essay here: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/why-this-college-essay
@anivaldosambo7394
@anivaldosambo7394 2 жыл бұрын
@@Collegeessayguy Thank you very much
@adewaleadenle2022
@adewaleadenle2022 2 жыл бұрын
hello Ethan, do you have any videos or points for international students who can't write essays in general.
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
Hi there! My upcoming online courses will help you write your college essays. More info on them here: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-courses (Note: they're pay-what-you-can, and we'll approve your request no matter how much!)
@shujayethossain6554
@shujayethossain6554 Жыл бұрын
When submitting essays to schools, should I highlight specific word/senetneces to draw the reader’s attention? Thank you!
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
Nope! Most applications tend to not allow text formatting anyway. Hope this helps!
@eqlimatahery4698
@eqlimatahery4698 2 жыл бұрын
that is great
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
Thanks for watching!
@SubhaRaj-ri3xv
@SubhaRaj-ri3xv 3 ай бұрын
Can you make a video on how to write a essay on "why this major?".
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 3 ай бұрын
Noted! Thank you
@reneebushey1251
@reneebushey1251 9 ай бұрын
Question - if you are applying to a college that your parents went to or that you have a family connection to, how do you recommend incorporating that?
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 8 ай бұрын
You'll have an chance to answer questions about this in the school's application itself, so you don't need to write about it in your essays.
@alyssanestingen5073
@alyssanestingen5073 Жыл бұрын
what do i do if i already wrote my main essay on how i fell in love with law? I plan on majoring in political science, but having discussed that in my personal essay already I feel like it would be repetitive? Should I talk about my other interests outside of Law and what the school offers for that? Or dive deeper into my law passion?
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
It might be a good idea to round yourself out in other parts of your application and mention other things besides your passion for law. :)
@juliesisk2132
@juliesisk2132 2 жыл бұрын
Great example essays. Can not find the chart anywhere...or anywhere that it is printable!
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
Thanks! The chart is linked in the blog post in the description. Here is a direct link to the chart which you can download/copy for your own use. docs.google.com/document/d/1SC43Y8HgsPlnlVmrzJkjmwFPKMiNnt07uix8m_p7zBw/edit?usp=sharing
@iambehryz3421
@iambehryz3421 Жыл бұрын
I don't know what is low key, but I am sure ur low key is great
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
LOL thank you!
@johndylens9297
@johndylens9297 2 жыл бұрын
I have a question. If I am a basketball player, in addition of the specific course I will attend, can't a talk about the basketball team of the university that I'll integrate without forgetting to state my admiration for the coach and some players? And also can't I talk about specific character please???
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
It's your essay/application, so it's ultimately up to you. My advice to you is-answer the question(s) the prompt is asking. It's not always necessary to tie all your essays back to a sport or activity you engage in regularly. There are plenty of opportunities elsewhere in your application to make your point about those areas of your life. Try to keep your essays essential so that you're displaying what is important to you AND what the admissions officers are asking for.
@revlordmusic4440
@revlordmusic4440 Жыл бұрын
this video actually got me into NYU without even giving them my friggin SAT lmao
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 11 ай бұрын
Awesome! Congrats to you!
@taijariley5753
@taijariley5753 2 жыл бұрын
What if you're interested in applying to a school that is located outside of the US? Would it be okay to bring up location then?
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
Maybe. It's ultimately up to you! The more specific you can get, the better. :)
@allenfrederick675
@allenfrederick675 Жыл бұрын
Please can you deal with statement of purpose for graduates?
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
Noted. Thanks for the suggestion.
@quinmreecorey8663
@quinmreecorey8663 2 жыл бұрын
I believe you used "low key" correctly, not too old
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
LOL thanks for that!
@cicilblinkz4204
@cicilblinkz4204 Жыл бұрын
Can I type my name at the portion of the common app general demanding for ED signature??
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 11 ай бұрын
Yep, you'll have the option to do that when applying ED/EA/REA, depending on the school in Common App.
@chloe-kq3gq
@chloe-kq3gq 8 ай бұрын
6:40
@HelloHello-hv1kd
@HelloHello-hv1kd Жыл бұрын
5:43
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
Thanks for watching!
@beamlakfekadu1421
@beamlakfekadu1421 2 жыл бұрын
Ethan this is a great video🙏 Please help me! I am an Ethiopian and I am really passionate to get into a US college. But last year I got rejected from 20 schools. I have alot of problems. Is there anyway I can get help from you
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
Hi there! Thanks for reaching out. My next round of online courses is starting in September; I'd love to have you join in. The courses are pay-what-you-can (and no one is turned away for lack of funds). In the courses there are opportunities to receive live feedback from me on your essays and to find a writing/accountability partner in our Discord community. Here's a link where you can learn more: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-courses
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
Also, I recommend trying to get in contact with your local Education USA center: educationusa.state.gov/find-advising-center
@tevian9404
@tevian9404 2 жыл бұрын
I think you are my favourite American out of the Americans I haven't met!
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
LOL. Thanks!
@vanshithbhandari1696
@vanshithbhandari1696 2 жыл бұрын
Hey Ethan! So I assume that you've read Geronimo Stilton(GS). I actually I know what I'll study but I've always been interested in exploring and I still am because I feel that there's a LOT o stuff I don't know about. So I am planning to write my essay - just like Geronimo Stilton goes on adventures exploring different worlds(I mean parts of the world) I wish to explore the areas of study/culture etc etc in their college. Also I want to study CS which makes me relatable to GS as that dude is a journalist and he still explores different stuff and integrates it into his work in the form of publishing articles, as I want to integrate the different fields if study I'll be exploring into CS - which in my case this essay will be for Cornell and Princeton. And so I wanna write my essay this way. What do you think about this? Would greatly appreciate an answer from you. And your advice has helped me a lot with writing my personal statement. Thanks PS: You can be a great beat boxer haha
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
Overall it could work! Just make sure you're relating the essay back to you rather than GS. Try outlining this topic to get a better idea if it'll work for you. :) Love the creativity!
@vanshithbhandari1696
@vanshithbhandari1696 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much Ethan for the response! Greatly appreciate it. And love you and your content
@clawd_not_cloud
@clawd_not_cloud 10 ай бұрын
My school is only giving me 100 words or fewer for this question ='(
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 8 ай бұрын
We might have a free guide for the school's prompt you're asking about. Check here: www.collegeessayguy.com/supplemental-essays
@wonjang8615
@wonjang8615 2 жыл бұрын
What would be some other good, impressive facts to get out of my school research?
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
Anything that is specific/unique to the school-- that way, whoever reads your essay knows you did some quality research. :)
@berosta7337
@berosta7337 Жыл бұрын
After watched couple dozens of videos just realized something. Doesn't Ethan looks like Steve? If you instead of asking who is Steve and you just thought of Steve Jobs I believe he really does.
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
LOL that is a first!
@rasikav.5955
@rasikav.5955 Жыл бұрын
hi - from the webstream for the giveaway!!
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
Thanks for being here. :)
@ennaa2577
@ennaa2577 9 ай бұрын
does anyone know tips for shor 250-300 essays, can't seem to find it😭
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 8 ай бұрын
We might have a free guide for the school's prompt you're asking about. Check here: www.collegeessayguy.com/supplemental-essays
@ennaa2577
@ennaa2577 8 ай бұрын
@@Collegeessayguy thanks!
@markus_park
@markus_park 2 жыл бұрын
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@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
Hi Markus. Thanks for writing in. We've heard from other folks in Kazakhstan who have the same issue. So sorry about that. Please email us at help@collegeessayguy.com if you continue to have trouble accessing our website.
@foxywaxy4279
@foxywaxy4279 9 ай бұрын
I lvoe your jokes
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 8 ай бұрын
LOL thank you!
@edenislive
@edenislive Жыл бұрын
2:00 what a great effort on lip syncing 🤣🤣
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy Жыл бұрын
Thanks for watching!
@nuariamen6356
@nuariamen6356 Жыл бұрын
definitely not too old to say lowkey
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 11 ай бұрын
LOL thank you!
@user-lx3kh5en5w
@user-lx3kh5en5w 2 жыл бұрын
حلو 🌹😍
@Collegeessayguy
@Collegeessayguy 2 жыл бұрын
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