How to Write the New Diversity College Essays w/ Examples (Should you write about race?)

[@BasharatSadat-lh2xe]

Thank you so much Mr. Ethan. As an Afghan first generation student, I have benefited a lot from your videos. Thank you so much.

[@Collegeessayguy]

You're so welcome! Thanks for being here.

[@wjbqmzl4223]

I am glad I searched for this video. It is so helpful, and I am going to add a strong paragraph to my essay from what I learned here.

[@makkymozie]

this was so helpful, thank u!

[@Collegeessayguy]

Awesome! Thanks for watching.

[@kvnqphelix2871]

Thank you very much. Can you please do videos about filling my CSS profile or ISFA as an international applicant? i will be glad to hear from you

[@Collegeessayguy]

I'll make a note of it! Thanks!

[@alloma5343]

where can we find the link for the second paragraph mentioned at 6:15

[@Collegeessayguy]

At this link (which is also in the video description with other mentioned resources!): www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/diversity-supplemental-essay-prompts

[@ReyyanBecene]

does it have to follow this specific outline?I wrote about my observations in my home country and how they make feel alongside the fact that i will take action in a poetic manner.Do i have to put specified organzition name related to the college?

[@ReyyanBecene]

it's just sounds like it turns into a another why us essay with how much specifics are mentioned? I got the impression its supposed be more about the applicant

[@Collegeessayguy]

There is no "one-size-fits-all" approach to these kinds of prompts, so you could stick with what you've written if it feels authentic, unique, and like it answers the question(s) being asked. Onward!

[@waniyaamir5088]

Hi Ethan! Your essay videos have been immensely helpful, especially for someone who can't afford all the paid courses and professional reviews! Is there any chance that I can run you through my Harvard supplements before the Jan 1st deadline? Thanks again

[@Collegeessayguy]

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[@KhojiakbarAdkhamov]

pretty helpful, thank you

[@OriginalSOS]

How can you access information about Harvard's Student Clubs?

[@Collegeessayguy]

I'd recommend checking directly on their website or social media accounts!

[@muhammadkh4413]

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[@Collegeessayguy]

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I am the first person watching🎉

[@Collegeessayguy]

Nice! Thanks for watching.

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Second comment hehehe

[@Collegeessayguy]

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