Humans Are a Myth (Part 2) | HFY | A Short Sci-Fi Story

[@marksmusicCC]

Love the "non" reference to Star Gate

[@MichaelMeyer93]

Right?! I really enjoyed that. I dont think Ive seen another reference to SGA let alone the wraith in any of the stories from the /r/hfy

[@gmalonesr]

Impressive story telling. I was so glad to not hear "The road ahead was going to be long and hard" multiple times in a story.

[@pheonixblue01]

I’ve been noticing that too. Some of these stories use it once every 5 minutes or less.

[@brionhorvath5919]

At8

[@brionhorvath5919]

At 8

[@elmartaylor7445]

😂zeeby​@@brionhorvath5919

[@bobbywinicher9080]

Or another "the battle was over, but the war had just begun"

[@EvanEvans-yi4ue]

Better than any thing Hollywood has put out for years

[@exterminater267]

The Wraith fucked up so bad that they turned the remainder of Humanity into German Helldivers.

[@blockmg9425]

And they have the wrath of a 40k crusading Space marine

[@Edbi18]

and when you realise that SG: Atlantis Wraith evolved from bugs :D

[@nyazillagojira7079]

Democracy is coming for ya.

[@bobbywinicher9080]

​@@Edbi18GAAA i hated the look of those expecially when shepard had one wrapped around his neck.

[@Goldenudder1]

Now this is how scifi is supposed to be written.

[@mundane2024]

Agree

[@jBKht931]

As a former submariner I broke up laughing when I heard "Man battle Stations, let's fu¢k them up". 😂😂😂

[@Redman147]

Well you gotta say what's on your mind sometimes.

[@Avery_Hikari]

Ok, as promised I will get my Beer and Pizza t-shirt ordered! This is the first story on here that I have read that has made me fully invested. Well done author! Well done! I am now greedily awaiting part 3!!!

[@Shadow.Dragon]

Excellent episode! I hope we have more episodes set in both galaxies!

[@davidturner4824]

This turned out to be a great story.

[@elvisalpha]

I was really hoping for a second part. Thank you. This story is good. I would like to hear the other stories as well and hear about the retribution.

[@gmalonesr]

That was part 2. The 1st is on the channel and is the back story leading up to this part.

[@michaelnicholls766]

Excellent, a real Heinlein vibe with the story.

[@jecepon]

Venturing into storytelling and video expression, VideoGPT becomes my reliable companion, adding a touch of finesse to my creative endeavors.

[@TsugukiMc]

I love the "cannae part"😂😂 18:57

[@ComradeCommissarYuri]

The humans got soo angry with what happened to them.. they built a deathstar... without that pretty egregious flaw since the humans had seen that movie

[@halvpoe]

Of course it didn’t have that flaw. We learned from the Empire’s mistake.

[@daveofyorkshire301]

Well written and performed. I look forward to the next installment.

[@IceFiction404]

Thank You for Your Kind Words.

[@scottm.1182]

So I am dying for more of this tale!!

[@Michael_Brock]

This goes into sci fi ongoing playlist in hope of sequel.

[@Michael_Brock]

Btw great story selection and excellent narration.

[@blueeyeswhitedragon9839]

Riveting story telling ! Keep it up for part #2, and Thank-you.

[@unknownmusiclover3903]

This is part 2 . So I guess go enjoy part 1

[@futuresonex]

Looking forward to the next one!

[@epicsakura101]

I heard Revenge and immediately thought of the Dread Pirate Roberts and his ship Revenge

[@MrOnenut20]

Outstanding.... cant wait for the next installment

[@jacoballen3532]

Shoutout to stargate Atlantis

[@johnjakson444]

absolutely amazing what a few promts on the keyboard can do for a lazy grifer isn't it,

[@Redman147]

Ahhh. I can only imagine what a Marine would be like when he hit the ground. If it was me, even hundreds of years in the future, I'd be saying GET SOME!!!

[@zzing]

Really like this story. KZbin has been feeding me a lot of garbage recently.

[@IceFiction404]

Thank you

[@AlaricAchos]

thank you

[@Kaliburz]

Excellent

[@oldnotweak]

the AI moving around with backward faces and noodle limbs... XD fun story though

[@davidturner4824]

What a sad story.

[@Michael_Brock]

New edit to counter algo. Ignore previous text. Eff 21k views, 9k subs, 1 day. either this guy/girl knows how to prime algo, or is running in cheat mode, or has great stories. Edit do not regard text following edit its a thing trying to avoid owtube censorship.

[@ErisstheGoddessofmanhwas]

No part 3 ? Whyyyyyyyyyy🥺🥺🥺

[@stephenpickering8063]

Good story and gripping. I think you made a mistake in how quickly the fleet was ready for battle. 15 minutes is nowhere near enough to get people out of deep-freeze and make them aware of the situation, let alone move so many people between ships. Given a population of ~5M which would mean ~1M on each ship and say ~1/3 are non-combatants that's about a million you need to get transferred. Without everybody being ready for such a move and massive teleport. Would also agree with another poster in terms of taking prisoners for intel. Sounds likely the rescued aliens will be able to tell little about the wraiths, let alone the locations of whatever home systems they have so some info can possibly be found one way or another from prisoners. - Even if they refuse to say anything examination of live wraiths can give something of their background. However other than those points a well written set up and good battle details. Now communications with the new friends could be an issue - at least their similar enough the two races are able to live on each other's world's. Looking forward to seeing the other two chapters. :D

[@firefighter_raven]

I'm the author. I should have explained it better but they were starting the process and not actually getting them into combat. Only the ones currently out of cryo sleep were in the battle.

[@stephenpickering8063]

@@firefighter_raven OK, many thanks for clarifying.

[@johnmckown1267]

Hum, really should take a prisoner for military intel purposes.

[@bradgaines5091]

It's possible prisoners were taken the first time, but they couldn't be made to talk. Not to mention, there would be a need for blood that would have to be satisfied. That happens. And they also found another race fighting the enemy, so they might be able to provide the needed info.

[@drmachinewerke1]

This reminds me of the Antha. In All the Way Back

[@NguyễnAnh-w9x]

❤

[@anonygent]

Considering how far along we are now with in vitro fertilization and incubators, those future humans would have grown ten million new humans in those ten years.

[@trwsandford]

I like it!

[@CHMichael]

I know the stories on the other channel are ai written. Is this a better ai or human?

[@IceFiction404]

Its a Human!

[@azeravOS]

_But those tales are for another time_ Can that time be now?

[@IceFiction404]

Yes

[@michaelcoviello-v3w]

The race name is from stargate

[@davidlobo5630]

Is there more

[@comicsgatekeeper9746]

I right there until they mentioned that shitty stargate show

[@crazypedia1717]

So tired of these AI voice content farms 😢

[@gk5891]

Mispost. Jumped stories.

[@Michael_Brock]

??¿?¿? What did you see. I got a great start 1st story, then an excellent expansion in 2nd. Just hope this continues. ❤