Well done and well read. Appreciate a real person, with real diction, and awareness of punctuation. Thank you ..
@uwe27496 ай бұрын
Sadly it`s common the use of text to Speech systems. But this Channel uses god old Methods, so congratulations.
@Nyrufa7 ай бұрын
For a professional smuggler, he was a dumbass to start questioning their rhetoric right as they came to congratulate him. Then told them he was going to pull up and leave after they declared their first attacks would be happening. He should have continued playing along until he had a chance to get off the planet. Also, for a story called "humans have the most valuable items in the galaxy", the story didn't really cover any of those. It was just some guy stumbling upon encrypted information and being drafted to work as a spy.
@TheAgamemnon9117 ай бұрын
I can forgive a few irrational decisions and plotholes, but I can't overlook that the narration is all over the place, skipping over times and events that could have been used to flesh out the setting and instead focusing much on details that don't serve much purpose in explaining anything... This story meanders around, engages few concepts, explores nothing, understands little, arrives nowhere and leaves with the sour aftertaste of "Might have been an AI author".
@Will-W7 ай бұрын
Well read. Great inflection. Real voices are so much better than those AI read channels out there.
@edhenderson16557 ай бұрын
Excellent, well done. Must say, the description of a smuggler sounded like a description of Hans Solo.
@a.j.nunnaurbiz65357 ай бұрын
Thank you for reading this yourself! Excellently done, btw. And my congratulations to the author--good pacing, excellent description and dialogue, and I really want to know what happens next! Dare I hope there will be more? 👍👏
@luckyrobinshomestead7 ай бұрын
I hope there is more to this. While it makes a great short story, it also makes a great beginning to a longer story. Well told.
@futuresonex7 ай бұрын
Your narration is excellent. I look forward to a part 2!
@chimpthrownoutofaplane35217 ай бұрын
“The right man in the wrong place can make all the difference in the world."
@RealEnerjak7 ай бұрын
Gman Half Life 2.
@johnchase76677 ай бұрын
It is so nice to see a real person read and now some AI that makes all the simple mistakes over and over. Thank you so much !
@StarboundHFY7 ай бұрын
My pleasure!
@d6joe7 ай бұрын
Wait a minute, he was about out of air, then he goes on a big journey?
@ireallyreallyhategoogle7 ай бұрын
yep
@debra-qq1np7 ай бұрын
It did say the ship he found had air(stale)
@natenance78067 ай бұрын
It'a magic space air
@Pitraptor7 ай бұрын
@@natenance7806no doubt bought from a bunch of space balls.
@johnblakeH7 ай бұрын
Grade 9+ plot armor...
@saintpaulsnail7 ай бұрын
When did he get his life support fixed?
@aroddo29537 ай бұрын
Er, so he fled from the Concord to Elysium after discovering info about the Coalition and the ramshackle Elysium sends him to spy against the Coalition which wants to fight against their common enemy? And then they spring him somehow from the brig in the middle of the Coalition fleet which is shooting at some unspecified someone and send him to the Concord from which he originally fled in the first place? Am I missing something or does this story make no sense?
@smiley30126 ай бұрын
Always like the way you read these.
@darksider1117 ай бұрын
Excellent story, well done
@StarboundHFY7 ай бұрын
Thank you very much!
@budrohammbone28067 ай бұрын
Such a nice change from the half-baked software. Well Done subbed.
@StarboundHFY7 ай бұрын
Thanks for the sub!
@TheReaverOfDarkness7 ай бұрын
What does the title have to do with the story?
@saparotrob78887 ай бұрын
Best damn AI narrator I've ever seen or heard. Amazingly human! Liked and subscribed.
@michaellewis32267 ай бұрын
Excellent story, good narration.
@czinn3277 ай бұрын
I looked for another story this purple, but all I could find was Barney's bum. Nice narration though.
@markwhelan16527 ай бұрын
Well done.
@AMVayanefan7 ай бұрын
summoning your internal Werner Herzog?
@brucerawlinson58397 ай бұрын
Well done on the narration at least you can speak and pronounce the English language properly go you 👍👍👍👍
@pppaybackkk7 ай бұрын
Ummm... The name's Sss-ill-at, I think, not Slit. Still a billion times better than AI. You do so well the miss just was that more noticeable to me.
@Reh81117 ай бұрын
Good story great narration such a change from bland boring computer generated voices. Keep it up Hope there's more. Im subscribed. 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👏👏
@TheHellbillyx7 ай бұрын
prof read and playback what you did and fix what you missed but other than that damn good story telling.
@mikkelnpetersen7 ай бұрын
I prefer narration like this, compared to AI reading.
@murphymmc7 ай бұрын
This is like an old Mickey Spillane novel, same kind of seedy flavor, more corny that most. More words used than needed for descriptions, entertaining in that odd way when you have nothing else to read or watch. We'll see if this improves, it's really got only one direction to go ...up.
@SCP019867 ай бұрын
Slilit did nothing wrong
@leadingauctions84407 ай бұрын
So one group fighting a Tyrant Genocidal Empire, hindered another group fighting the same???
@Knife_Collector7 ай бұрын
Yea.. kinda confuses me,,,
@leadingauctions84407 ай бұрын
@@Knife_Collector As it did to myself.
@TheJHMAN17 ай бұрын
Yeah no Ai.
@I.C.U-c7l7 ай бұрын
Sorry we dont need to see you talking..... But thanks for the story..... Please take out the video
@homoerectus69537 ай бұрын
that's your opinion mate. Many of us like to see him narrate as it shows he's not an AI but a person.