I like that Discord is brought into the story. Many stories involving Fluttershy in danger don't bring him into account.
@siobhanprice465 Жыл бұрын
you should look into "endless" and "the corpse bride" for that interaction xoxoxoxo I agree with that too xoxoxoxoxo
@daddyyahweh93284 жыл бұрын
Hello, this is the writer Ponybird21. I managed to find this audio again after it was brought to my attention that someone had done a reading of my story. And I am quite flattered, thank you so much. However, I do wish you had notified me about this and asked for permission. Thank you at least for giving me credit (granted this is a pretty old story) but still, that is my one complaint. Otherwise, I love it, much more than my original actually. You definitely spiced it up very nicely. Have a wonderful day!
@Sparrow96424 жыл бұрын
I apologize so much. The main reason is because this was back when I really didn't think permission was needed, stupid me. Regardless, I'm thrilled you enjoyed my take on it and apologize profusely for not linking it to you!
@daddyyahweh93284 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much. And I am going to say it again. Your editing made this story MUCH better than my story. And that's something I don't mind saying one bit, from one artist to another. ❤️🧡💛💚💙💜
@Sparrow96424 жыл бұрын
@@daddyyahweh9328 Yeah, when I first read it, I was kinda disappointed on how it was written, and had really enjoyed the concept, because it was different, so I just added those extra details to it to give more of the punch it needed to hit home. I'm just glad you're fine with those edits :)
@MobyTheMerpup1852 Жыл бұрын
Oh dear I’m impressed as this is a walk in the park for me. I’ve read fanfics where the family tires it self apart. I have seen things that would kill people or more accurately drive them to suicide. I’ve gone through all of that and survived. I’ve seen my own mind break over and over especially in August last year, or rather because of one realisation, I was in denial for over 10 years all because of one stupid ad, as a new born was aborted.
@TheGlitchingFox Жыл бұрын
I know this was 5 years ago, but dang, this actually made me cry
@stargamergirl48506 жыл бұрын
So what happened to Fluttershy
@infinitestyle55305 жыл бұрын
if you hush , you wont forgive yourself...
@quintonjones26992 жыл бұрын
Amazing job Sparrow
@rae-rae80053 жыл бұрын
Honestly, the voices needed a bit of work, but this story was fantastic.
@geronimocharles15847 жыл бұрын
LOVE HUSH
@archeishere15 жыл бұрын
hey sparrow i got a new creepypasta on mlp and our new little murdery puppet is cheese sandwich and his factory lets call it.... The Laught Factory where tons of creepy stuff going on like distance creepy laughts and cheese the creepy murderer
@M.W.K69967 жыл бұрын
Can you do "Playing With My Heart" in the future?
@vannamelondemon1056 жыл бұрын
I LOVE YOUR VIDEOS
@memelordjackfrost99585 жыл бұрын
what is the name of the background music u use for this story? it sounds very melancholic and beautiful
@Sparrow96425 жыл бұрын
It's a Silent Hill track called "Letters." The pitch is altered slightly.
@rayannasmith23367 жыл бұрын
Hey Sparrow, can I give you a little bit of advice when you want to use red text? Can you please outline the words or make the red a little light. Thanks.
@rayannasmith23367 жыл бұрын
Good video though.
@Sparrow96427 жыл бұрын
I did add an outline, and that's the default red color my editing software has. I think the hard thing with the text is the format it's in, but it was the closest thing I could find to fit a more sad story. Thanks for the advice, and I'll work on fixing that.