This is beautiful, hits hard. Your rhythm is so natural and it flows so well it’s like you’ve tuned into a frequency, very poised and clear. The sound of the words and the ebb and the flow and the sheer soul you put into your writing amazes and inspires me
@maxkeatepoetry69233 жыл бұрын
Thank you. Truly.
@RLukeHaueter3 жыл бұрын
Genuinely amazing. Thank you for putting these feelings into words, for vocalizing what it feels like to fall in love with someone that you were told you shouldn't.
@dorarandom78703 жыл бұрын
This took me to flashbacks of my friend that I was madly in love with, how new it was for me and how impossible it seemed. All the times I tried to deny it, saying that it's only friendship and forever nothing more... It broke me. I felt more. She knew it too. How couldn't she? Saying I'm so great and caring, humble and kind. In her words I sounded like diamond and I couldn't help but to be overwhelmed with joy. Every time she told me she doesn't feel loved I waned to take her hand, look her in the eye and tell her how much I loved her. I loved her in a way she couldn't and it tored me apart. But... It was okay? She saw me as a friend and it was okay. I was hurt, but it was like a bruise from a long run - sign that I'm doing something with worth. Her being loved is all I waned and I gave it to her. I was in pain, but satisfied. (Sorry, I never told anyone and this poem just made me feel like that again.)
@maxkeatepoetry69233 жыл бұрын
This tho^^^^
@absolute-creature3 жыл бұрын
This is so beautiful, the acting, the wording, the facial expressions... I'm just... "How hard I fighted"... I wasn't expecting this to make me feel so... Lonely, nostalgic and sad looking back to those confused thoughts and... Oh I'm so in love with your poetry ❤️
@nathanstafford77904 ай бұрын
😭😭😭😩😩😩 crying like a floodgate just opened up
@novaw57292 жыл бұрын
I'll be honest, I'm a bit late to the party, but I'd just like to express how beautiful a heart tugging this poem is. It's a true piece of art and it's sad how few likes there are
@tai.karo.053 жыл бұрын
No-one tries to fall in love. Whether it's with a boy, girl, mix of both, neither or any combination of those things, or not at all, no love is on purpose and no love is wrong ❤️🧡💛💚💙💜
@lilithrogers52043 жыл бұрын
So well written and presented, thank you...I know you speak for a lot of young people...and as an old Lesbian who didn't know how to express these thoughts when I had them as a young person, I so appreciate you.
@lanathas Жыл бұрын
Gorgeously worded and recited! ❤
@pwanderboi-u-95993 жыл бұрын
THIS IS SO CUTE OMG just found you on Tiktok and already love your videos lol, keep it up queen
@dreamer4Jesus13 жыл бұрын
Love this! You said it with such raw emotion yet such smooth rhythm. Thank you for speaking what most of us can’t even form into words! ❤️
@PresentMomentSpokenWord3 жыл бұрын
This is amazing!! Love the way you delivered it.
@elius15483 жыл бұрын
As someone who’s realizing they’re bi. Thank you so much. Side note, it’s nice to see another Owl House fan
@pwanderboi-u-95993 жыл бұрын
I looove Owl House, it's almost as cute as this poem... almost lol
@morpheus64213 жыл бұрын
I just found out you have a KZbin channel and I love slam poems so I subscribed but this was amazing. So filled with emotions. I wish to one day be able to write like that and read like that
@myrtesgracia61682 жыл бұрын
I didn't mean to too...😔😔😔😔
@amiawilkerson20712 жыл бұрын
can I use this as part of my poetry piece? I relate to this so much and I love it.
@maxkeatepoetry6923 Жыл бұрын
Hey, sorry I never saw this, I’ve been on the phattest hiatus ever finishing up college (but I’m about to graduate and I’m excited to get back to my personal creative work)! I’m gonna guess it’s probably too late for whatever you were wanting to use this for, but feel free! I just ask that if you use verbatim quotes that you accredit wherever possible ♡
@BevIsGuilty3 жыл бұрын
Found this bc of your tiktok and I am absolutely blown away thank you
@EmmaBGames3 жыл бұрын
I have felt the exact same.
@natvan58693 жыл бұрын
Beautiful
@rachel1833218 ай бұрын
I write poetry about women but I’ve never been with one I want to be with a woman for the rest of my life I’ve tried men but they are not into me and I’ve always admired the way a woman’s body looks boobs and all
@jule-153 ай бұрын
thankyou!
@yakiracolish75933 жыл бұрын
This was amazing
@rainbowgirl32252 жыл бұрын
Beautiful 🥰
@rarekid45193 жыл бұрын
I didn't mean to too😔.....
@seizedxshadowx3 жыл бұрын
💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
@kaymooneyhan99243 жыл бұрын
Me who just gave my girlfriend my sweater....ye I’m prettttyyy sure I’m not “just confused” about being bi my dudes I’m not straight or gay