i read an OLD SCREENPLAY of the FNAF movie…

i showcase the differences between an old version of the fnaf movie i was given and the final film
all footage in this video belong to their respective copyright holders , five nights at freddy’s and it’s trademarks belong to scott cawthon and universal pictures, courtesy of blumhouse productions llc
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[@fan.of.nintendo]

Not gonna lie... the scene where Garrett fades into the darkness and William Afton emerges from the shadows would've been so cold. Wish they kept that in.

[@alexanderparker2219]

I can see why they cut it though. Just a few minutes earlier, we see a similar transition, where the kid possessing Foxy backs into pirates cove, and Foxy steps out. Garret stepping into the shadows and Afton emerging afterwards, would have probably lead the non Fnaf fans in the audience to thinking that Garrett was possessing the Yellow Rabbit.

[@anthonycuevasproduction]

Ya me two that would have gone so hard 😁

[@adammartinez8061]

⁠@@alexanderparker2219 And then with Afton Wearing the Yellow Rabbit; it Probably would’ve add some confusion and awkwardness.

[@adammartinez8061]

@@alexanderparker2219 And don’t forget, it probably would’ve made it look like He was trying to Kill his own brother for some reason……

[@wormyangel]

They actually kept it in the movie novel!! I bought it and read it recently and they kept it and it was so fucking cool!!!!

[@erikrodriguez6935]

I actually really like how this script potrayed afton, the way he only speaks the necessary makes him so mysterious and when he delivers the silver eyes reference saying "you can't hurt me, I'm one of them" hits sooo hard

[@WackyDemonFire]

I would've liked that better tbh, I didn't like his portrayal in the movie as classic evilly evil guy that's an idiot.

[@SCP-469]

I feel like people forget most of Afton’s dialogue is good paper, unlesss you have a super dramatic and already creepy voice, it sounds ass

[@TheLovely282]

@@WackyDemonFireWdym? Afton in the movie was portrayed as mabye eccentric but never into the realm of what ur saying lol

[@stripeythefilmmaker3255]

I honestly thought it was weird that he didn’t, seemed very in-character of him to talk a lot. Plus, it fits his character in The Silver Eyes as well since he only feels comfortable talking in any other persona other than William Afton, he is perfectly talking as The Yellow Rabbit or Dave Miller, or in the movie case, Steve Raglan. I do agree his line should’ve stayed in the script.

[@MewDenise]

Nah... I like him chatty. Now that he is dead and haunting the suit he can be less chatty but

[@nathangamble125]

I love that the script says that "the blonde boy separates himself from the machine". That actually makes it clear that the ghost is Golden Freddy, not just the animatronic.

[@H4ckdrag0n999]

This is FNAF, nothing is supposed to be clear.

[@North88856]

Stay away from me you bird

[@01reihanehdraw73]

we were all robbed of seeing bonnie giving Abby the piggyback ;; but jokes aside the movie could have REALY benefited from having more screen time! (not 3 hrs but def more than an hour and 40 mins)

[@entomdp]

i absolutely agree: i wish the film was at LEAST 2hr, probably 2hr30 maximum would’ve benefited

[@completelygivingup9413]

I agree!! Afton’s whole thing felt a little bit like it was added as a last bit, with how late it entered the movie. I know he appeared at the beginning but it felt a little late, no hints about him at all. We could’ve even seen something along the lines of Vanessa making what seems like a police report, or maybe she’s reporting to the owner about what happened at the place. Would definitely hint about how she wasn’t just a nice lady

[@pink-a-palouza7888]

Oh, that would’ve been such an adorable moment that I know some fans would’ve ripped to shreds when the movie came out but

[@CobbleBompster]

Nah, the whole animatronics acting innocent and shit is absurd. The whole “they’re just kids” argument is absurd too, because the Puppet describes them as animals in UCN. But above all it completely takes the horror out of them. They SHOULD be scary, and when things like them building a fort happen, it just feels like some fan fiction that a 6 year old fnaf fan came up with. I completely agree with the screen time part though, since one of my least favorite parts about the movie was how short it was.

[@thelolfaceguy]

we finally saw the piggyback scene!!! piper rubio (Actor of Abby) posted it on her instagram

[@godofthecripples1237]

I think Vanessa's introduction in this script is better. Her formerly working there causes no issues, but designing the vest? That's a GOOD contradiction, because it raises the question of... When? Well, as a kid, of course. She was the owner's daughter. It's a clue as to the twist that I bet most would gloss over on their first watch.

[@xvasion3801]

I actually didn't think of this. Really cool detail!

[@SCP-469]

This made me realise foxy could have been based on something Michael drew as a kid, like he was born before Freddy’s existence

[@TheKaijuKing54]

Garret appearing before Mike right before Afton’s entrance makes it carry so much more impact! I also like how there was more closure between Mike and Garret here as well. I really wish they kept that in the final film.

[@foursidekm]

My guess is they're probably saving closure for the sequel

[@chaoticneutral7976]

If they are gonna go with the Puppet being Garrett theory, it's likely he's gonna get closure when confronting his soul in the sequel(s)

[@kaizoisevil]

@@chaoticneutral7976it’s also possible that Garrett is balloon boy

[@roozufahkerson729]

@@kaizoisevil ive never thought of that. That would actually make sense on why on heck Balloon boy is everywhere on the 1st film 😭😭😭

[@kaizoisevil]

@@roozufahkerson729 And I don't think he was present when Abby drew the truth, so he may still think William is his friend. He might even get jealous, thinking Mike replaced him with Abby.

[@gechoman44iwantahippo]

Honestly, other than the death scenes, the final movie was better in every way. That being said, since a large portion of the fanbase wouldn’t have been able to see the movie if the death scenes hadn’t been changed, I understand why they did it, though I do still wish they would’ve filmed the more violent versions for an alternate cut. Also, I think the reason why Matpat’s cameo was different in the script is because they didn’t know what his role was actually going to be until closer to filming, since in his video on it, he said that he auditioned for Koryxkenshin’s role. That leads me to think they didn’t know who was going to have which role until they were about to start filming.

[@gechoman44iwantahippo]

Also, I specifically think that Ella being changed from a scooper to a springlock suit, and the springlock setup being added earlier in the film, was a very good call. It helps the general audiences understand what was going on during Afton’s death scene. Without all of that setup, I feel it would’ve felt like the springlock scene came out of nowhere.

[@gechoman44iwantahippo]

And obviously, the springlock death was better

[@SCP-469]

Hank getting killed in the the closet is better imo

[@lmads8023]

99% of the fnaf fanbase wouldn't of been able to see it

[@Boxheadedfreak]

Damn it's the guy from twitter

[@Axos_Abode]

Holy shit your right

[@Kickmeintheballs8]

Holy shit.. who?

[@averynormalacount2887]

ITS DA FREAKIN ENTOM!!

[@mmsthebest7047]

🤓🤓🤓 uhm actually it's X now so get ur fax right kid 🤓🤓🤓🤓 Edit: I'm joking. No shit nobody's calling it X now stop saying I'm being mean when I'm calling myself a nerd

[@wakuwakusonicpartolcar]

i cant believe this

[@BroCallMeCai]

The fort scene is so necessary. People so often just reduce the characters to their shells (Freddy, Bonnie. Chica, Foxy, Golden Freddy/Fredbear). They are the kids (Gabriel, Jeremy, Susie, Fritz, & Cassidy) whose souls exist within the suits. The children matter. What they went through matters. If they were not killed, these animatronics would not be the characters they are. The fort scene allows you to see that the children inside are still children at heart. Yes, they had a terrible ending in their previous life, but they are still children. They want to make new friends and have fun. The people that didn't like this scene, just don't ike the idea of humanizing the threats. Tough cookies. I'm glad the story emohasized the actual children just as much as the animatronics they live in.

[@skyr5247]

Exactly! It emphasizes the tragedy that these innocent kids had the chance to be kids taken away from them, and the fort scene is probably the first time they've felt any type of childlike fun in a decade, maybe more

[@This-is-a-commentt]

My problem is that it feels so clashing with the rest of the movie when it comes to tone, scene itself, fine (what was I saying. The scene sucks)

[@Jotakyy]

Idk they could of toned it down a bit, it was too much

[@DJG_Studios]

@@This-is-a-commenttI really like the way it clashes. juxtaposition and what not

[@souhiyori8032]

I mean, there should be a way to put the fort scene or smthn into the movie without it being off putting. It felt so detached from the previous scene and couldve been improved, but still glad to get what we have hahah. I wish the next movie to be better.

[@gerogie51]

seeing your daily twitter people that are usually shitposting and arguing on youtube is like seeing a drug dealer at your local supermarket

[@RoboWasTaken]

hello gerogie

[@gerogie51]

​@@RoboWasTakenwheres welcome to freddys

[@RoboWasTaken]

@@gerogie51 probably canceled

[@DiamondXD_]

Why are you here stinky gergie guy

[@caylya7869]

It isn’t just twitter.

[@Simon_tiger_fur]

21:29 the „stay away from her you bird” is a reference to the „sat away from her you bitch” from Alien

[@gmodn]

I was expecting this to be fake or a troll but this lines up pretty good with some of the bts we currently have of the movie, as well as the security footage teaser that blumhouse released a few weeks before the movie came out.

[@Eficiente_VSB]

I lost it at Afton controlling the building with his sheer evil and the cupcake going inside his suit with him already inside it.

[@igorhelandro6083]

The first one doesn't make sense and if the second one happened in the film, William's death would be more funny than shocking.

[@Eficiente_VSB]

@@igorhelandro6083 I say the first one makes sense as "his sheer evilness" is a stand-in for whatever superpowers he picked up over the years, which we know is something he has. But describing it with that wording is rich.

[@Personian]

Kind of glad they cut Jeff's Rated R death. That seemed to step into the boundaries of being so gory that it's unrealistic

[@P0INTL3SS.]

watch the boys bro 💀

[@theMailmansHere]

@@P0INTL3SS. shiver me timbers, the boys isn't horror

[@videoplayback_]

did saw had gore?

[@milesfernando]

@@theMailmansHere You missed the point, The Boys has CRAAZY gore

[@bluntkush5888]

Wym “unrealistic” u dont realize how durable we are.

[@Moondrop-mm3ry]

Hank getting impaled by Bonnie's guitar kinda makes more sense but the William Afton scene at the end is goofy 💀

[@chaoticneutral7976]

I remember a Reddit post of someone who saw a screening of some cut content that does line up with what you revealed except that they mentioned a scene of Young Vanessa witnessing the murders in a dark room but Afton himself is never shown. I wonder if that was filmed later but got cut as well. Otherwise, I would kill to have seen Bonnie give Abby a piggyback ride, he's such a sweetie in the movie EDIT: So I guess the original post was misinformation because while everything else does add up, that one scene never happened and was removed. Regardless, I hope we see more flashbacks of Young Vanessa and William Afton during the 80's because there's a lot of potential to show what he did to her to keep her quiet and how the murders affected her.

[@absolutechadd8895]

I tried to find the post again a while ago, and I found that it's been removed apparently for misinfo.

[@HistoricalScratch9]

That post was fake, but apparently everything they mentioned was actually true, except for this singular scene.

[@chaoticneutral7976]

​@@HistoricalScratch9Ah that's a shame, with everything else being accurate, I was certain that was also true. Thank you for informing me, I'll edit my original comment

[@chocomelo454]

apparently the scene DID kinda exist. but not really. they just changed the screams. at one point the children screaming is put over the part where Mike is looking at the photo of young Vanessa and William, to imply that Vanessa witnessed the MCI.

[@erikrodriguez6935]

07:30 "a burning desire to die in an electrical fire" sounds pretty much like a reference to TLT "Die in a fire" song and its lyrics It could also be foreshodowing the power afton has over the building that you explain later in the video

[@NightGuardJohnny]

Who let the FNAF Twitter guy on KZbin 😨all jokes aside, it's cool to finally hear you speak and hear an alternate version of the movie. I'll definitely put this on at while the gym or out on a walk in the next day or so

[@ThomasMilner-sg7qm]

i subscribe to you

[@Kreshura-tm5rb]

omg it's johnny

[@HeroKnight14]

It's him.

[@primetimeseven]

Finished the video. This is super interesting and considering the alleged 15 scripts this movie went through, its cool to see all of this stuff as someone passionately into FNAF I will say that I think while there are some cool and contextual moments that should've stayed like "No, he was before" and the Golden Freddy scene, but everything else feels like a much worse movie so I'm glad with what we got tbh💀 Especially that Afton bit. Jesus christ. Can't wait to see what other videos you make entom from twitter

[@beyondespair_]

Don't care what others say, even though they didn't give us a lot of William in the movie, what we did get of him was fantastic and I loved Matthew's portrayal of him in the movie, I'm glad it was changed.

[@lemonmeat]

afton saying nothing wouldve been VERY disappointing, i do wish he had a litttle bit more screen time as afton but knowing he wouldve said literally nothing im very grateful for what we got

[@kade8816]

why did you use the Lord's name at the end of ur comment?

[@ipeedonsunscats]

@@kade8816some people aren't religious, u don't need to comment on it 💀

[@kade8816]

@@ipeedonsunscatsjust makes no sense to even say His name here, did you know the creator of FNAF is Christian?

[@alexanderchippel]

There's like a 99% chance that this guy's source is one of Scott's burners.

[@MyNameIsKayser]

I was expecting a lot more closure on Garrett's subplot, and to think that we would've seen his ghost and he would interact with Mike, having one last encounter to book end his trauma and it was cut. I guess they changed this to give wiggle room to FNAF 2 and possibly 3 ending this story arc with the other game adjcent plot beats.

[@ToyFreddyGaming1987]

Very interesting to see the R-rated script for this film, even though there aren't too many differences. Overall I'd say I preferred the final cut, mostly due to the ending having more William Afton. Although there are some cut things I think should've been in the movie, and I really wished they retooled the Golden Freddy scene to be in the final version. Honestly I'm still hoping we get to see some of the abandoned scripts for the FNAF movie. They sound really interesting, and I really hope they surface one day. But either way, this is still a very good find.

[@ManicFiction]

I'm leading toward this version, due to its more accurate and imo, better portrayal of William.

[@xharerae]

the fact that they removed the scene where Garret fades out and Springbonnie appears is crazy, that would've been awesome. Though that WOULD imply that Garret... haunts Springbonnie suit? Because that would be really similar to Foxy's night 5 entrance, where he's shown as a kid at first, fades out, and appears as animatronic.

[@Charlotte4Short]

TBH I could never see the FNAF movie as nothing higher than PG-13. Scott doesn't really delve into gore, but more the IMPLICATION of gore. The most we got was a part from the games is pixelated blood and eyeballs. Mr. Cawthon is a less is more type of guy. I'm a little upset we didn't get to see the first guard's eyeballs drop onto the floor. That would be a great call-back :/ But I'm a big fan of this film. One thing I would change other than the cupcake nonsense is the ballpit scene. I was full on expecting William Afton to emerge from the ball pit and hold Abby hostage. That would be be terrifying.

[@crazycomputer3149]

The thing is, scott wrote these scripts, I'm pretty sure blumhouse wanted the PG-13 for a easy profit.

[@caylya7869]

Scott wrote these scripts, pretty sure it was blumhouse that wanted it pg-13. And that’s they main problem with this movie, it uses none of its implication to its fullest.

[@KamenIvvy]

well the you are wrong.

[@sonicroachdoggjrraven3263]

The whole cutting away and not seeing the deaths is so lame. There was not enough gusto in the final film.

[@EflowArc]

I feel like the post credits scene had the puppet. It would make most sense since it's private for "spoilers for the second film" (not confirmed just a guess)

[@beyondespair_]

I mean, puppet's music box melody was in the credits, so... It would have been really cool for me a scene of puppet just looking at Afton while he slowly dies.

[@ManicFiction]

I actually like how William is portrayed in this old script. A mostly quiet, sophisticated, killer that takes pride in wearing in his suit (which is pretty accurate to how William operates, especially in the Silver Eyes, down to the detail of even playing the part of Spring Bonnie through his twisted "happy-go-lucky" actions and him thinking that so long he wears his suit, he is "one of them") whom gives a sense of dread, and control over the situation IT'S JUST SO GOOD LIKE OH MY GOODNESS- Him also keeping the suit on is pretty on-brand and makes his killings more interesting. Using a suit that would usually give joy and laughter to children, twisted and contorted to be used to cause death and pain, and William having so much pride in his handiwork, as well as his little furry suit, that he even "roleplays" as Spring Bonnie through little gestures and actions, as if he was acting out a twisted version of Spring Bonnie, being a mostly silent killer like how he originally was in the games from FNaF 1-4, giving a dreadful presence. And Garret going into the shadows, and Afton stepping out also helps in his dreadful appearance. While I think the Movie's current William is fine, I do think he talked too much as Spring Bonnie, and didnt keep the full suit (including helmet) for too long. He didn't feel as connected to his suit, and had a little too much monologuing. While I do think he should have talked a little more, I do like this more Silver Eyes-accurate though cutting out half of his chatty attitude William that feels more like a legitimate threat despite his short appearance.

[@superadambomb5834]

I personally really liked how much Afton talked throughout the final act. He had so much joy in inflicting pain onto others and he acted as if killing garret and now killing Mike is some sick form of poetry. It also showed how he doesn’t take responsibility over his actions and projects onto other people specifically his daughter. He also seems to be friendly yet commanding with the animatronics and the moment they turn on him he shows them his true colors yelling out insults in a rather deranged way. He had a lot of behavior one would find in an abusor and a manipulator. This is honestly my favorite version of William.

[@Zeriq]

14:33 not the Sad nights at freddy's 😢

[@boyzilla78productions]

I can't believe I'm saying this but asides from like 2 or maybe 3 scenes, I actually prefer the pg-13 version instead of the r rated version. The scene with golden Freddy in the smoke fog is really cool (that definitely should've been kept in), the scene with the animatronics fighting Afton was cool (wish they implemented elements from that into the final springlock scene (key word, implemented elements, not add)), and the scene with Garret disappearing into the darkness is kinda cool as long as you don't think about how much it doesn't maks sense.

[@Youwillseesomething]

I do prefer parts of the R-rated script, which is a shame because the bits I preferred could’ve been added in a PG-13 script.

[@caylya7869]

@@YouwillseesomethingIt really could’ve and probably improved the movie a bit. I don’t see why not. They could’ve easily toned down the scenes.

[@nobodytheowl]

I think the Yellow Rabbit would've originally been closer to Glitchtrap's design. The fact it's described as having whiskers, but also the fact he practically never talks and dances around all weird.

[@SCP-469]

Literally never could have guessed this is your voice

[@klaudiso]

I can't believe Entom's voice isn't Charlie

[@wormyangel]

So watching this more, a lot of stuff from the r-rated script IS in the movie novel like max’s dog, aunt jane’s death, and also garret disappearing in the arch way

[@ConnorStierman]

Pretty interesting. While there are a few scenes I'm sad never made it to the final cut, I think the film we did get was miles better than what we could have gotten.

[@JacobArnold]

Not gonna lie, besides the more gruesome deaths and the Mike researching Freddys part, I’m really glad we got the final film and not this. This cut just has a lot of things that just don’t work as well as the final and some things that are a bit more strange. It also seems like this cut is a lot more “revealing” with connecting characters to the games and I honestly like how it’s more mysterious in the final. This cut just felt a bit too “spoon fed” with the connection points. Overall though, I would’ve been happy with this cut of the film but personally I think the final film is a lot better! That’s just my opinion though!

[@eonbree8593]

same

[@princesstt9778]

Agreed! There were some things in this script that would've been nice to have in the final cut, but overall, I'm happy with what we got.

[@not.iconic]

True, I think it would be cooler if it had the R-rated dream sequences instead of the PG13-rated but other than that, the movie was great

[@tylerrichardson3034]

The final version literally has a scene where Vanessa explains everything you need to know "The ghosts want to kill Abby, and the dude who killed the kids was the owner of this place, and he is also my father, and he also is somehow able to control the animatronics and make them kill people" That's as spoon fed as it gets, then a couple scenes later they also just spoon feed it to you that Afton killed Garret instead of just letting the audience figure it out themselves after seeing Vanessa with Garrett's airplane toy.

[@masterpokeball7368]

Garret disappearing into the darkness only for Afton to emerge is something i really wish they used in the movie, it also kinda reminds me of IT when Georgie turns into Pennywise

[@thelethalartist8387]

I was thinking the same thing about IT

[@Glitchizz2]

I like almost all the changes, except for Willam’s death. So I think what would be better is, after the animatronics attack Willam, he falls to the flower, and through the helmet off his head. He’s sweating profusely, and the camera shows the sweat slowly drip into the suit, then it triggers the first spring lock. He screams in uncontrollable pain, blood splattering all around him, covering the animatronics legs and lower half. He grabs his mask, attempting to hood back tears, “I always come back”, and just before putting the helmet on, sheds a tear drops, and putting helmet on, causes the rest of the spring locks to go off, covering the animatronics in blood, all around William is blood, and he screams, and the sound of him choking on his own blood plays as Mike Abby and Vanessa rush out of the building. The camera cuts to inside the pizzeria, fire has spread throughout the place, burning bits of the animatronics, Willam can no longer scream as his vocal cords have been cut, leaving behind a huge trail of blood, blood seething from the crevices of his suit, and the lights on the suit slowly go out, as he shakes uncontrollably. Let me know what you think of this version😊

[@beyondespair_]

Just add the puppet watching Afton's death, and for me, would have been fantastic.

[@Glitchizz2]

@@beyondespair_ while that would be great, I can’t since he’s not in the movie

[@Katto846]

but remember what phone guy said? the only things that would see the light of day would be the eyeballs and teeth. THAT would be cool to see. creepy music would play as his eyeballs slowly run down the suit and then when he shakes violently the teeth fall out with a clink clink noise oh my gosh i think thats the scariest thing i've ever typed

[@SCP-469]

Imma be fr I would’ve rathered Afton try to get to the storage room and be confronted by their actual ghosts

[@Glitchizz2]

@@SCP-469 could happen, but given the context of the scene, that would be impossible. His bones were crushed and he wouldn’t slither fast enough to reach that area. This could only happen by basically changing the whole scene, which wouldn’t fit into the movie. We do get this at the end of the movie with golden Freddy, though

[@hudsonthejojo2825]

While some stuff from this earlier draft like the more intense kills or the Golden Freddy scene would've been cool to see, I'm glad the film came out how it did for the most part. The one thing I think the film could've done more of is using the cameras, atleast 1 additional scene. Also having Afton get torn apart by the cupcake instead of getting Springlocked would've been so lame.

[@tylerrichardson3034]

Another thing that I think the film should have had was the power going out and Freddy showing up in the darkness. That could have been how the film opened.

[@hudsonthejojo2825]

@@tylerrichardson3034 Yes that too, forgot to mention.

[@dimosguy1987]

some of the R rated stuff that was cut off sounds really cool, gruesome and entertaining. the other stuff doesn't make any sense I'm pretty glad they're cut off or remade

[@godzillapark9075]

7:27 that's interesting because during Blumhouses campaign where you could send them a text and apply for a nightguard for Freddy's is the Reagan line and the fireline are both in those automated messages

[@Qu_3tz]

Only things I think could have been good additions to the film were Cassidy (Blonde Ghost Kid) and Mikes deal which I feel this version did it better, Garrett's ghost disappearing into the darkness then Springbonnie appearing which would have made Afton's appearance more surprising, and the Spring lock scene happening in the Kitchen at the end with the post credit scene (probably Afton still being alive or the Marionette appearing) Ik why the post credit scene was cut due to the fear of the film flopping and a sequel being impossible

[@lukacunningham342]

So…just to be clear, they didn’t unmask Afton as Raglan in the first script, umm…okay, um…may I ask: *why?*

[@MewDenise]

Hmmm maybe wanted a mystery for newcomers? "Guess the killer" thingy. Which would have angers fans cause we already know who it is

[@1Tombb]

I need this Rated R cut without the slight inconsistencies 😭🙏

[@bladearmorginga6582]

Ill say that the "Get away from her you bird" is a play on Aliens "Get away from her you bitch" which would have been a goofy nod to the alien franchise and paint Mike as the everyman who 100% isnt as bad ass as Ripley.

[@WackyDemonFire]

21:26 That's a reference to alien where Ripley says "stay away from her you bitch!" to the queen. They probably took it out because not every body is gonna understand that reference and it sounds funny.

[@MewDenise]

This version of "the deal" and the drawing of the yellow rabbit in the sand, is actually better. Golden boy did indeed "already tell him" by drawing the rabbit, but of course that doesn't tell Mike anything which frustrates him obviously

[@birdedup]

one thing I liked about in the script and wish we got we got in the film was Mike actually did some research on the missing case instead of having Vanessa giving out an exposition to him, and that scene of Garrett stepping into the darkness and out comes William.

[@birdedup]

go on someone do the joke...

[@seekerblackout]

Wow this really makes me appreciate what we got of Afton in the final movie because his scene having this little to it would've been incredibly disappointing. How would we even find out he was Raglan if he never takes the Spring Bonnie mask off? Was Raglan originally just an unrelated character?

[@SanZukulento]

I believe that Raglan was originally the phone guy and later he was changed to be purple guy.

[@rainthetroublemaker6102]

The fact that this script sounds good and what people wanted. It does have a bit of game reference instead of only books, but the movie was still good(in my opinion). I've heard there were many reason why they changed it, but i haven't heard anything yet.

[@PersonianOld]

This script does not sound good in any way, this script sounds goofy af

[@Demi_god28317]

​@@PersonianOldfr bro I'm glad they didn't add "sad nights at freddys" to the movie

[@korruptor9777]

First thing I noticed is it’s a lot less fan service. That’s completely fine with me but I’m pretty sure members of the community would not like it if this was the product they released over the version we have now.

[@lukacunningham342]

Y’know, as much as I love PG-13 movies, I have to say: *I would’ve LOVED to see that original Golden Freddy scene!*

[@tbtvstudios1]

When Steve (William) was on the phone and he mentioned the Ronald Reagan stuff, that was in the the short arg universal did before the movie

[@maxineschultze922]

The scene where Garrett tells Mike to let go should’ve been kept, Mike deserved some sort of closure (unless we’re getting that in the second movie)

[@Jackofzerotrades99]

This actually makes me appreciate what we got instead a LOT more

[@mrplayfulshade1038]

Tbh a mix of both would be better. There are things in this script I definitely perfer more then the final release

[@TonyTheCarrot]

Tbh yeah. But it gives a great idea for us fans to make fan films

[@oncomm04]

DAMN cupcake would have been an even bigger menace in this script

[@TailiaOfficial]

Finished watching it. This is an excellent video!. Really great stuff, and your narration is really good! That Golden Freddy scene man. MAN. That would've been amazing.

[@Notjo6200]

The entomening has begun…

[@tanakritgutzlapcharoen9457]

The "a deal is a deal" line is so fucking COLD GODDAMN THATS SOMETHING I WANTED

[@Buzzer-lt3xz]

the only thing i really WISH they kept was that scene where garrett fades into black and afton steps out because that is HARD ASF

[@brianburkhardt3692]

It’s too bad we’ll never see this version brought to (at least big budget) film, but I totally understand why they changed it. Rated R movies just don’t make as much money as PG13. They wouldn’t have smashed all those company records with an R rated FNAF. Which is unfortunate but just how things go in the film industry.

[@HyperDroid]

LET'S GOOOOOOOO ENTOM UPLOAD

[@Cats_n_Stuff]

I think the bird is actually a good reference to his brother because as soon as the engine starts thats when his brother lost his freedom and life.

[@operaghostkay]

I actually kinda like the inclusion of "I am one of them"

[@VOgaming51official]

I kinda like how "Look at the nasty thing you've become." turned into "Look at the nasty things you've become."

[@whocaresaboutthename6850]

​@@VOgaming51officialHe sees them as Family

[@Da_doggo104]

26:28 I think this is a reference to phone guy saying “I mean, you know, they usually move on to other things by now. I'm not implying that they died. Th-th-that's not what I meant.”

[@urmom1465]

I could be wrong but I think why at the part where garrett gets taken in the old script where Mike got distracted by a yellow bird could be a reference how withered chicas voicelines in UNC where she says "I was the first i have seen everything"

[@urmom1465]

and how the yellow bird probably saw garrett get taken

[@GoldenOcelot11]

I personally enjoyed the movie, but i like the R rated cut more tbh. I wish it was longer, with more scares, cuz for a horror movie it wasnt that scary. I really loved Afton's reveal tho, it was spot on the way the eyes lit up i loved it. i wish the animatronics got more kills, maybe not as gory but like def woulda preferred to have chica break the bat and then bonnie rush the kill. plus giving foxy a kill woulda been cool too. and the sick golden freddy scene would have been super super fun to watch. im hoping blumhouse listens to its fans for the second one, because honestly if they do, they could make something thats super good. altho im hoping the second movie skips the second game, but goes into the third game with a whole new cast (and maybe that cast goes back to josh like in FNAF: The Musical, that would be fun)

[@ThrowawayAccountPremium]

this is super interesting, thank you so much for sharing this! so excited for the blu-ray version! 😊

[@supermegabenji1026]

21:17 It would've been funny If he says "Get away from her you Stupid Duck" as a joke from Wayback in 2015 and 16 When KZbinrs call Chica a Duck instead of a chicken.

[@jacobb685]

I appreciate the final product so so much more now.

[@ShaneBrewsterYT]

very interesting to see an early version of the fnaf movie script. great video man!

[@bibstfer]

Thank you for posting this, it’s really interesting. Especially the vandals all being stuffed in a huge torture Freddy (quite the remnant extractor) and Garrets larger role

[@BrabyTheCool177]

27:33 I can guarantee you it was going to be a teaser of the puppet because of the song that plays at the end credits

[@lavasauce4229]

Honestly kinda wish they just scrapped Vanessa entirely and just have Afton call Mike every night like phone guy did, let him show off the exposition till Mike starts to realize something’s not right

[@gomotion]

this is crazy cool lmao

[@Strangeisntit_real]

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[@Daggoth65]

Would love to see a R rated Director Cut of the movie

[@Spinelsofficalwife]

15:21 that’s genius since she’s vanny omfg 😭

[@aleialoveswaterparks]

im so glad that the script is how it is now. i wouldve hated the movie if it came out as the original script my god was that terrible

[@S.A.F.I.vs3r]

"mike you are going to be spending five nights at FUCKING freddy's"

[@geekzone5685]

If we mix elements from the final movie and drafted script, it would be a good novelization of the 1st part of the story.

[@nobodytheowl]

Random little detail I like, but I think the idea of Afton throwing Mike into the fort would've been pretty cool. Because then the fort would have a sort of "payoff" for its setup, outside of the one scene it was built in. It also would've been nice logistically to acknowledge that it was still there the following night.

[@aydanneilson-bourke7378]

crazy! honestly im glad it is how it is. i loved the fort scene, I liked how everything played out. the scene with garrett turning into the yellow rabbit would've been very interesting those

[@ITSSNUPPY]

Interesting topic, thanks for the info it manages to fill in certain gaps and explain the overall direction of the story better even if some parts weren't included for obvious reasons.

[@Lichtrap75]

Been looking forward to this video ever since you posted it. Gotta say it was worth the wait!!! Super great video man, keep it up

[@witzendofficial]

the fort scene isnt even that bad cmon guys

[@sillycollecto]

this is AMAZING!!!! thank you for taking the time to share!

[@thelethalartist8387]

I'm glad Afton becoming one with the suit, and Max's death are the most violent parts we got, the other stuff being much more violent and gory for me would've messed it up. Hearing about the more gory parts made me envision in, and I'm happy it didn't make it in as the movie didn't need to be really gory as the games themselves aren't. Too many times movies stray from the games they're based off, this time I think they did things right, and while some of these ideas would've been a little better, I'm glad we got the movie we did. Also I can't wait for the Bendy movie!!

[@CarrieArt7]

Wow, Christian Stokes really sold that attack scene in his audition.

[@rjaxsyt2083]

If you could combine elements from both of these scripts we would have a masterpiece in our hands

[@jackindustriesrevamp]

How isn't anyone mentioning that we now have an official spring Bonnie design?

[@LouisTheWorstGamer]

Wow I can’t believe that this r rated script mostly got turned into the novel

[@Mushroom-Top]

27:16 holy, imagine being blonde boy thinking “meh, he could be in more pain.”

[@dizelraf]

William in the movie is an adaptational badass

[@ev.aftonz]

makes me so happy to hear more rumours about the fnaf 2 movie coming out basically confirmed in my opinion that there will be one, also some of the scenes from the old script would've been so fireeeee, makes me actually mad we didn't get to see them in the movie but I love it the way it is as well, also I love this video xdd

[@Existing_Productions]

Dough a dip, dil, dip, dil say a boy getting chilled!?!!??!!???‽¿¡‽∅

[@Chickenz_Forever282]

I loved the movie, but i would love an R rated movie too, even if i couldnt watch it 😂

[@OzoneYT]

please show more josh hutcherson next time thanks

[@entomdp]

noted

[@illioptopede]

i really hope we get to see some of these shots in the dvd release, a lot of these were really cool!

[@cellophanezebra4663]

You know he's a mega fan when he knows all the side characters names in the movie

[@Mr.Feather130]

Look guys look,it's the guy who got copies of the Tales from the Pizzaplex books early before it comes out on the release date that it was supposed to come out!

[@Flowermations]

Man! I do really wish we got to see the animatronics beating William´s yellow rabbit behind after remembering he killed them instead of surrounding him and staring at him menacingly, maybe we might possibly get that scene in the sequel.

[@lethal6973]

Just finished it, and hell, this was a pretty good video, loved the way you edited it! Also... I feel you on the golden freddy one, that sounded pretty darn good 😭, I don't mind some changes, but this and a few other ones should have been in the final product, ESPECIALLY afton entrance being handled like that, but despite this... I still loved this movie A LOT. Anyway, had a quick question... since you know nothing about the context of the scene, did your source said, or hinted at how big the spoiler of the scrapped post credits scene is? 🤔

[@kordacpz]

oh my god cassidy's monologue is insane hoooly shit

[@Ui_Henry35]

now THIS… THIS RIGHT HERE is EXACTLY what I wanted out of a fnaf R rated version. Other than a few differences from the final cut that I much prefer than the “R,” I ADORE the “R.” Now… if this was a “COMBINED” version of the “R” and final project (the 8 bit opening, having more depth of what happened to mikes parents, the switch from Garett to springtrap, springtraps scene from the final instead of the goofy “R” one etc) then replace the “R” version of aftons “death” with the springlock scene and add a bit more to it, this would’ve HANDS down been THE ABSOLUTE BEST fnaf film (imo) I still wish we’d gotten the “R” version of fnaf (or atleast an alternate cut for it) but the final project still did a phenomenal job.