i think something is missing. a what?

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[@someoneinthejungle]

one more time

[@misterfish9634]

Fr

[@justafoon]

Like everyone is saying, a vocal lead, but not lyrics, but just a little "ooh"s and "ah"s like in a Sonic OST.

[@madsans74278]

Yeah, that's what I just though

[@XFSEO]

@@madsans74278OMG ITS *THE* SONIC

[@madsans74278]

@@XFSEO YEAH

[@curfewsurf]

this is tuff add a lead to it

[@royalapple1674]

Every instruments are centered. You should give space with reverbs delays, create tension by adding silences on high presence instruments maybe. Adding a catchy lead melody could be great too !

[@ORRrrrr619]

can you play that one more time please?

[@EdibeatsByChuw]

some chords, a bassline, and maybe a little string or woodwind pattern to spice it up

[@Blexie]

vocal? or a very short break to bring energy back up

[@chanzi5514]

I SWEAR TO GOD I'VE HEARD THIS MELODY SOMEWHERE IM NOT DELUSIONAL

[@mynameiskrysta]

One more time daft punk

[@justastranger101]

i think the "go go!" voices like from revolution 909 would be nice

[@crayz12]

distortion and compression distortion is more of a personal preference, but compression is a big thing in french house (which seems to be what's happening here)

[@TutorialsWithBillyLMAO]

a treble for the hats

[@kembowhite1903]

Lead, A Pad, or a Vocal Chop

[@delta237]

this slaps!! just one more t1me

[@zmitter4844]

If you want to make it sound bigger I'd definitely add more layers to the bass

[@x8bitpixel]

This goes hard add some vocals like from sonic rush lol

[@stanis_aw]

a flute or high pitched synth maybe brass

[@s3nm3tsu]

by itself i think it could function well as a bridge or something, and then increase intensity during chorus - you could replace the higher end with something more intense then. Otherwise maybe effects (reverb, maybe halftime, etc)

[@Xh1ll]

vocal with some sort of a radio effect on it

[@UnknownA.P]

One mid instrument playing through out (prolly like a synth)

[@OfficialGowilaVR]

Bass

[@melty4402]

backing chords

[@BlueboLovings]

WHY IS THIS SO GOOD WHAT

[@EpikF1shy]

On the 3rd part where it repeats, add some effects to it like a melody of some sort

[@rag3parsley_420]

it woud do good with a high pitch note and a synth in the middle that stands out from all the others, if youre able to

[@borderline-passible]

shakers?

[@stardustpointone]

stronger snare?

[@daa2622]

definitely a bouncy lead melody

[@StickmanWithARocketSword]

Slap bass.

[@mattwrz]

HARD

[@realmodpotato]

a heavier clap 😭

[@AmbushianPVP]

Second melody

[@JustChinny]

cowbell

[@nimexwolf]

Bass with good presence and high freq open hats

[@cunnieseverywhere]

there already is bass

[@haydenburrus5571]

vocal chops

[@nbshftr]

watery color bass

[@processsquid2097]

maybe a mellow pad would work

[@3nd0_making_shit]

oh damn i think i need to stream i will rework that lulz

[@thenxker]

amen break

[@v1xtezz_music]

Try to add Chords without any spaces

[@Mustafa-et9mk]

mixing and a reese

[@nickclimbsrocks]

one more dancee

[@Edge_2]

Yeah sounds kinda empty? Add a lead and maybe edit sidechain a bit.

[@theedmbrewery6234]

Chords

[@emanfran]

this is just personal taste but a drop hoover maybe? to fill in the space?

[@yeetboy88]

idk some vocals

[@prodbyaryy]

is no one gonna question the bpm 😭

[@TheJoo9]

Amen break

[@yourneighbour3309]

damnnnnn damn i wanna prod smth like this🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

[@3nd0_making_shit]

just need a lil bit practicing

[@I.n.g.l.o.r.i.o.u.s]

Maybe vocal chops or add effects to it

[@JustFearer]

An amen break.

[@thnks147]

a punchy open hat

[@cunnieseverywhere]

none of these dudes know daft punk and that is expectable yet slightly annoying

[@wnerZenncMusic-ph8th]

add quiet white noise to give it a more full sound

[@RalseiSmokinAFatBlunt]

its missing highs imo

[@argfym]

Try adding spaces in the melody somewhere

[@jackwya]

probably a new flp

[@seos3011]

Ear Candy

[@RayWandererr]

Chopped vox or a peaky lead i guess

[@Andres_s]

Is this inspired by Space Laces?

[@KeMeYe]

pitch up and a acapella rap

[@tomatocat]

few soundgoodizers

[@Darkest_matter]

a piano?

[@pigeondrivesbus]

❌️ 1 more time ✅️ 2 more times

[@prodbywilso]

ONEEE MOREEE TIMEE

[@liebenomed]

a fucked up gritty crunchy ass destroyed distorded exploded bass with a white noise layered on it

[@FatBigFish]

a pad and none chopped keys

[@TheLazyBoi_]

A lot

[@eliottarchimbaud5867]

That "something" missing is not really needed, I think. The Daft Punk version is kinda "legato" so try adding a bass or synth that holds the root note

[@sevvenoaks6842]

clean up the mix, shorter releases, use a plucky bass, layer the melody with a synth/pluck with a better transient

[@martonikosko9828]

BIT OF A REWERB

[@BunnyBoyy1]

hmm, a lead or some good guitar

[@Corderkid]

I definetely see what you’re saying…. Maybe like a lead?

[@diablomxne7213]

am i the only one that sees 246 bpm?💀

[@officialnarn]

lol hahaha i didnt even realise it

[@3nd0_making_shit]

i'm too lazy to convert and do it in 123 bpm rlly

[@AldrinBro]

Can i use this for a vid?

[@3nd0_making_shit]

u actually can use my other music from my albums, just find endo works 1 or 2 in yt

[@snarb]

annie are you okay

[@3nd0_making_shit]

I think u wrong somewhere lul, but I don't blame you for that

[@LastRecs]

some girl vocal on the back

[@MusicMaster320]

It needs a lead and a pad

[@ackton]

hey isnt this one more time by daft punk?

[@slayvvrdsoldier]

Repetitive but cool ifw :3

[@imkali181]

x'rt

[@3nd0_making_shit]

?

[@theactualiosif]

Talent

[@TRVladdy]

A better mix and less plagiarism.

[@gzhu4278]

Too fast

[@lilaclunablossom]

Idk this fucking smacks