"I Watch People in Cages" [COMPLETE] | CreepyPasta Storyime

[@tiffanyabad2570]

TD: *reveals himself* Me: *exasperated* "He just abbreviated 'The Devil'?"

[@OmegaWalnutChug]

I only realized that now after seeing this. It seems so obvious now. *SHOOK*

[@punpkin-314-pi5]

TD - The Devil F - Famine P - Pestilence W - War D - Death The 7 cages - the 7 deadly sins i assume 8th cage - ?????? a new sin???

[@vincentvalenzuela5718]

Earl is envy? Lisa the 6y/o is lust With abaddon and beelzebub as her imaginary friends

[@evilhutdug4665]

Vincent Valenzuela abaddon and beelzebub are devil kings or something right?

[@PurpleColonel]

The coin one is greed. The whole 3 day thing is like a Jesus coming back sort of allusion I guess?

[@Onesaltysoul]

Fun fact! There were actually 8 sins originally. :D The eighth that isn’t used anymore can be described as Despair, or the loss of hope.

[@punpkin-314-pi5]

THAT WOULD MAKE SENSE!!!

[@thegreatwormbaby5310]

"So my job is I keep people in cages " My mind: "so you work at a jail"

[@00Jj262]

Cage is different than a cell. Cells usually have walls, these cages sound like they're bars all around.

[@yourlittleinsomniac5369]

My brain: so you work for DHS

[@patientlywatching7775]

@@00Jj262 "They finished up the insulation" (referring to the 8th cage). They must have walls or they'd not be insulated. I'm not being sarcastic; I just heard it and your comment came to mind (a year too late probably). I'm actually surprised that I even caught that.

[@crytlmeen]

@@patientlywatching7775I think that insulation was just a mispronunciation of installation.

[@E-Box]

@@crytlmeen Did he actually say "insulation"? I thought I just misheard MCP say "installation". @patientlywatching7775 As the original reads; "The installation of the eighth cage wrapped up yesterday".

[@vanellopescorner8882]

Lisa: *disappears* Him: Screw telling my boss, I gotta get this on reddit!

[@charliekopp3774]

Him: screw living gotta tell my fans im gonna die.

[@remp5529]

My favorite part of this story is how the author includes biblical figures without straight up saying so. Like how TD is the Devil and the four agents are the four horsemen of the apocalypse.

[@rio03100]

It's kinda funny that TD's The Devil.

[@savagegamerbear7409]

Dont forget about their name, Cerberus the devils gaurd doge

[@tylercoon1791]

Earl is Samson, what with his hair being uncut giving him strength

[@mattiekarwin3667]

I keep feeling like the grease burn injury on his hand is a reference to something but to what I can't figure out.

[@Greenbee12964]

Lisa’s imaginary friend is named Mr Abba, or in Hebrew- Father

[@WhitneyDahlin]

So what were the monsters in the cages? A vampire, succubus, lizard person or alien (oxygen tank means they aren't used to the atmosphere here) Lisa is Betty's cousin which if you remember was one of the little girls that started the Salem witch trials. Supposedly the girls were possessed or Bewitched. So Lisa is probably possessed and her doll is likely her familar or a demon taking the form of a doll. The guy with the long hair is probably meant to represent Samson from the Bible who had immense strength as long as his hair was kept long but he said he was born in the 1800s so maybe it's just a genetic super power and his kryptonite is cutting his hair. The religious Mary's are probably just normal people that for whatever reason have some power to make their prayers come true, like witches probably. As for Chad he was born right as the nuclear bombs were dropped so he's possibly some type of radioactive mutant and the green liquid he drinks is probably radioactive something as well. That leaves the guy with coins for eyes. Perhaps he's a zombie or some sort of reanimated/undead corpse? Coins were placed on the eyes of the dead to keep them closed for hundreds of years. Nowdays they just sew the eyes of the dead shut. Idk he's the only one I don't have much theories for. He doesn't need to eat or drink, he can somehow read with coins for eyes and he doesn't feel pain. I also think the security guard is a monster because he doesn't remember his life before his job and he says he can't remember before he started writing things down, he ate human meat for hours and hours and loved it. He also has some type of psychic ability since he and the other monsters are the only ones who can see the doll most of the time and he had that vision of himself on the ceiling perhaps he's a wendigo or something like that. Anyway I would love to hear your guys theories and thoughts on the monsters

[@sherrykachika4090]

I read them all as particularly dangerous Transgressions against God, continually reborn in new incarnations. Supernatural creatures like a Succubus or vampire (perhaps representing recklessly greedy humans) preying on his creations. Mary and the Samson guy being those who've forsaken his gifts or perverted their god's name for murderous Zealotry. A Witch and her familiar and a reference to Charon (Ferryman of the Dead) for those who lead themselves or others astray from God's order. And the last two were Humanity using science to make themselves into Gods, Like Nuclear Weapons (Green Toxic Liquid) and the newest cage being made for Space Flight (Hence the Alien-esque thing with Oxygen Tanks) I can't completely speak to how human the guard was, but it's worth pointing out, the agent they sent to watch him was F. He was literally trapped in a room with Famine itself, and kept asking to be let out to find food, becoming more desperate. So...

[@SpaceCore2053]

Or, Chad is drinking Monster Energy Drink, and he's just a normal Chad.

[@cyberspinosaur1145]

Sherry Kachika I'm thinking the security guard may have started becoming a wendigo, even if not cannibalism is frowned upon pretty much worldwide, that alone would be a huge sin. Why they left Famine in charge of him, however, if beyond me. Seems like he was doomed

[@cjsunder5292]

@@cyberspinosaur1145 Honestly, go ahead and try to choose another one of the four horsemen you'd rather be locked in a room with. I believe famine was just the coolest dude and the one that was least likely to kill the poor dude. And about the wendigo thing, they were giving Mary(?) raw meat because she was a zombie or something, but in the end they were giving the guard cooked meat and water so he was apparently still human. Idk, imo the author thought it was already pretty hard to explain that the devil would hire a random dude to watch over abominations so he left it open to interpretations by ending on a "any human can be seen as a monster" kinda note, which is cool with me.

[@lucytucker8561]

Bob for the guy who has money for eyes. Bob actually means 'money' in Ireland. It's not as important but I thought I'd add that 😅

[@Deadman_Elit3]

16:00 Hastur! The King in Yellow "Have you seen the yellow sign?" I probably got more excited than I should have at that reference

[@BlackCat-vs1jz]

same

[@rainraingoaway9446]

Mind explaining then?

[@Deadman_Elit3]

@@rainraingoaway9446 Hastur, also known as "The King in Yellow" or "The Yellow King" is a character from the Lovecraftian/Cthulhu mythos. His lore is a little vague to me but I do know that he is an eldritch godlike being who wants to enslave the human race. He's an enemy to other gods of the mythos because they want to kill humans which contradicts his goal. The nun was a fanatic cultist of Hastur

[@chatch621]

More like False King

[@AnubisX3]

It reminded me of True Detective

[@skulibaumgardner242]

Man just roasting every normal name “Oh your name’s bill? That Reminds me of eating rats”

[@taylormademyself89]

When it comes to long stories with part 1 through whatever I I always wait for the complete story like this one 🤘😎🙏

[@mikeschannel910]

Kendall ,TaylorMade gift from above,Taylor I cant wait but still go back for the entire thing

[@matosz23]

I wait too. I prefer it.

[@dratoriasgaming9935]

@@mikeschannel910 4l

[@dexterwaltz8884]

I do that and save em for when I work

[@kimberlythompson7946]

I Agree it's sometimes aggravating to only hear a small bit of the story, I try to hold out until the complete video comes out.

[@Artretha]

This was a hell of a story...no pun intended.

[@silverdrag0n_]

the amount of detail of this story is making me shook. the symbolism is so well executed. maybe a bit cheesy, but still very well done.

[@jacquelinemacabra9672]

This is really one of those stories that warrants a second reading after the plot twist is revealed

[@Mountain8ear]

But you should only LISTEN once.

[@atimidbirb]

FIVE HUNDRED DOLLARS A DAY? My dude for that I would personally hand feed Lisa every single day

[@ThreeofMoths]

War, famine, pestilence, and death? Talk about rad! I'm absolutely loving this series!

[@savagegamerbear7409]

Cerberus the guardian of the gates of the underworld. The four horsemen Famine, War, Plague and finally their leader Death. this story had a lot of thought put into it. In my opinion it's one of the best stories I've listened to, and MrCreepyPasta such a great reading. 10/10

[@thomasdowling2011]

I dont know why but I always pictures War as the leader of the horsemen instead of Death

[@trevnti]

Loved this story. I know there’s a lot of speculation so here’s what it sounds like to my brain. Dante’s Inferno - TD (ppl say the devil, imma say the Deceiver… they’re both Satan but since he changes his appearance is go with the latter) 1 - Limbo, the foyer to the other 9 levels. OP is originally here. Not an innocent soul but hasn’t warranted advancement to other levels Lust - Cassie Gluttony - Fred Wrath - Bill (assuming unlike Lisa he has no control) Greed - Bob Heresy - Mary Violence - Lisa (if we take the birth date during the witch trials as a major point) BecUse violence is regarded as a sin of beastiality. Premeditated. Many great kings were in this circle. Also she has Abba (Father) and Bezel (Satan) as friends (though Abba could also be abandon) Fraud - Chad Treachery- Earl is hard to place. Depending on if his Nazareth comment stands. Maybe that was considered treason. But the math doesn’t work. Maybe it’s for OP Cerberus is transformed into the 4 horsemen the guardians of hell.

[@noahharvey9446]

I was intrigued by the theories, looked into a lot of ideas, this was what I got theory wise. I cling onto the nine circles of hell idea really quick, thinking maybe they aren’t in a specific order? The obvious ones in my mind, are the following, Cassie, Lust Bob, Greed Mary, Heresy, assuming that the nuns did things similar to the one in the story, acquiring money for the church in wrong ways Lissa, Violence, Bill, Wrath Honestly those two could easily be swapped Then the next two I feel I fit together enough to make sense Chad, being Fraud, considering his appearance of high social standing, perhaps buying himself into a position, his inability to talk, and the black ooze possibly being tar? On of the many punishments in this circle is being thrown into a pit of tar The Storyteller/ninth cage, being betrayal, for abandoning his position, attacking his boss, who just happened to be satan The only others are Fred not really fitting either remaining circles of Limbo or Gluttony, and Earl, who was heavily referenced to being Samson, a biblical hero Any thoughts? My only other idea is that the story teller just works for a gas station and took some shrooms or something

[@savagegamerbear7409]

Bruh, genius ending to a story like this... And it was all just a bad trip XD

[@MexicanzChannel]

Or guys, Fred is gluttony and earl is sloth?

[@lucytucker8561]

The word bob actually means 'money' in Ireland so that's probably why he calls the money-eyed monsters Bob.

[@jakeb.6487]

OH WOW! Your work is so great! It legitimately sounds like each character has their own voice. LOVING it.

[@scorpionsystem536]

Absolutely love this! The ending was impeccable. 🤘

[@E-Box]

I think it sucked.

[@lonewolfbadassery]

Love the way you say "and unhinged his fucking jaw". +1

[@hannahmetzger6622]

I _loved_ this story!!! Despite it being a creepypasta story, it had a VERY great Slice-of-Lifey vibe for it!! Great job, MCP, great job!! :3.

[@qpN4SiRqp]

Iv been waiting for this to be a completed work ....not disappointed Keep pushing out content MCP Would you consider doing "what happens when you right a letter to satan instead of Santa " ....I really enjoy your style of narration...you dont sound like a artificial voice bot from google and you bring the life to these characters that grips my attention

[@joshuamarquez693]

“I would’ve posted this yesterday but…monsters wanting to eat my bones…. priorities you know?”

[@theazza2328]

Great series to listen too, thanks for all the great content mrcreepypasta

[@Axxtentac]

Liked both of the narrations of you and Mr. Creeps, different feel but not a bad one.

[@claredyj2015]

Have been binging on ur videos today! Really enjoyed this series, helped me get through cleaning bathrooms!

[@torytellstales]

When "F" was in the room that's when he started getting hungry, F stands for famine of the four horsemen

[@decayedmother]

I do love seeing some Lovecraftian themes in stories

[@hunterpoort6040]

I love this CreepyPasta so much it’s by far my favorite

[@citrusuber8419]

"I watch people in Cages, they did bad things and now they are here." Me: Wait so your a Jail Security Officer?

[@dexterwaltz8884]

That's what I said

[@dominiquewoodards1410]

I haven't seen it yet but heres my short theory as I think everybody has got everything else. The 7 cages at first were for the 7 sins, then 9 cages for the 9 circles of hell.

[@ginacamacho3554]

I very much so enjoy your narration. Thank u

[@YaGuyALT]

once I heard "yellow sign" I fucking knew it was gonna be hastur and I was right on the fucking moneu

[@toadflaxflower]

'We give Chad a cup of green liquid' You mean a health smoothie?

[@bigttgothgf9478]

I decided to doodle Lisa as I was listening this and I gave her a teddy bear with a ripped head because I didn't wanna draw hands :P. I didn't realise she would have one in the story. I was kinda happy about it so I thought I'd let you know.😁

[@coyoteartist]

Story character: it's weird a black ops group named Cerberus only has 4 people when the monsters had happily offed a group of 15 guards. Me: it's weird a black ops group named Cerberus has 4 members because Cerberus only has three heads.

[@Natalie66796]

*Reads the title* You watch cage dancers? Okay, whatever suits you my guy

[@descendingpixel2391]

This kinda reminds me of the scp foundation

[@glizzardwizard2401]

I haven't slept after listening to these stories

[@PungentTowelWasTaken]

love me some lovecraftian monsters in these stories :D

[@centipedicmonster5084]

This is more interesting than scary

[@StarlightGlimmerr]

I love the reference to Lovecraft/Chambers :p The King In Yellow

[@PaulosTheGamer]

... that was the ENDING?

[@finn_in_the_bin5263]

makes sense though, if you think about it. the 'people' in the cages were monsters, inhuman creatures, and by the maddening hunger, the memory loss, and the uncontrollable feasting on human flesh it seemed the narrator was beginning to turn full Windigo

[@carterjwilkerson]

9:10 “Her favorite movie is A Serbian Film.” Oh. Okay now that’s DEFINITELY fucked up.

[@wojtekthegreat2115]

"Jay Walkin'"

[@richardbrukardt7872]

Another good SCP style story

[@cb-akp]

her favorite movie is a serbian film? how charming...

[@pcepenjor586]

The movie title is pure bullshit.

[@morbidmuppet]

I was rather surprised to hear a reference to that.. film..

[@AnubisX3]

I kinda liked that movie

[@cb-akp]

@@AnubisX3 very edgy and cool

[@AnubisX3]

-chloe- Not at all, I just really like the movie. Don’t get why everyone is so sensitive about it. You do realize everything done was just an act right? None of it was real .

[@_BigRed_]

Thinking the notification said part 4 be like:

[@Bno-mw3js]

i vew them all from my gray mirror and the lighter they get the darker my self becomes in these reflections

[@Mountain8ear]

Without any punctuation, I can only read this like you are a monotone robot. But then I realized, a robot wouldn't misspell the word view... Da*n it, what are you?!

[@CezaMVO]

Amazing story

[@steves578]

"Favorite film a Serbian film" Jesus F*cking christ that is dark

[@ReqLeBeax]

Very good story

[@wendydornoc6374]

Can u do a story about defeating inner deamons.. One with the inner dialog.. Because i am quitting smoking and in the deep watchs of the night i have trouble.. Ty..

[@bugpopss]

he doesnt write the stories, only reads them. perhaps if you find a story like that you can suggest it to him?

[@l2j867]

Thank you 😌

[@user-TheEngineer]

"A Serbian Film" is also my favorite family film 😊

[@kreuger2062]

Very wholesome and fulfilling. 😃

[@vincentvalenzuela5718]

Fred: pride (no mirrors) Cassie: lust (succubus?) Earl: gluttony (don't miss their food?) Mary: ???? Chad: envy (women problems) Bob: Greed (coinssss) Lisa: sloth (doesn't do anything?) Bill: wrath?

[@Chilldude579]

Hey I tried to do the same thing, I only got 3 but I'm confident about my guesses, cassey is most likely sloth since her cage is constantly electrocuted: most likely to keep her awake. Other than that Fred and Bob yeah same

[@vincentvalenzuela5718]

@@Chilldude579 but cassie is a succubus who eats human flesh, right? Lust is the sin of the flesh?

[@jessicafranks164]

I just got a Wayfair ad before this lol

[@Josh-nu9gv]

24:56 voice crack pog

[@tytokumei]

Hey, Mr. Creepypasta? In the name of this video, "Storytime" is missing its "T". Have a great day, love your story time :)

[@centipedicmonster5084]

No it's not...

[@Abraham_Torres]

Where would the take the monsters every 3 days? And the new transfers are the same as the previous ?

[@brockmiller1384]

Math doesn’t add up on this one. Different inhabitant every 3 days and he’s worked there for 10 years, yet when he describes what religion or race the different cages were it only adds up to like 30-40isj

[@kinkerton1344]

Okay. That's very cool. But hear me out. Next part of Lily Madwhip?

[@toadflaxflower]

A guy named TD IS HE LITERALLY ABBREVIATING 'THE DEVIL'

[@officerwaifu6408]

"Her favorite movie is A Serbian Film." *NO*

[@pcepenjor586]

The movie title is pure bullshit, second time stating that while reading the comments... Hate the producer that much lol

[@austinrk30]

I'm slow, what is the writer alluding to?

[@AdamSmith-qr5hd]

@@austinrk30 u and me brother

[@AnubisX3]

Petar Cepenjor why didn’t you like the movie? It really wasn’t that bad.

[@what1shappening]

This gives me slight SCP vibes

[@psuedomyspace]

This just feels like Black Mesa with extra steps.

[@kates5528]

Any chance you could make the volume a little louder on your narration and then when the commercials come on they won’t be so much louder than the story?

[@karmaakabane127]

Wait does this mean that he's in a cage now? 46:20

[@Eileen139]

thats what im thinking

[@ChristopheRobyn]

So if the Cerberus response teams lead is "D" would that make them The Big D 😂 😂

[@robertathespider5311]

I heard this forever ago and I was estatic to find it because I never finished it

[@extratea605]

why the hell do I always have to watch this shit at night it's actually scary me a little bit

[@MagicTacoXB]

I thought this was gonna be about ICE

[@WizzardJC]

37:16 my bookmark

[@kates5528]

Never mind this is a crazy amount of commercials in here and multiple ones. I can’t listen to this anymore.

[@lavasharkandboygirl9716]

Haaster? The king in yellow!? YOO

[@nukahyatt9802]

I love me some Salem witch trial references

[@psychoticplayz6294]

Shit for $500 a day sign me the fuck up

[@DRIFTKINGJR.]

the talkitive mary says, "i thought the doll was a vessel for HASTUR. this is the name of a demi god from chuthulu. also known as the king in yellow, or just the yellow. Hastur is referenced in a few of the stories about that world. hastur has no true shape , but is always tentecales and wearing yellow. he is talked about in many of the novels. FUCKING PRICLESS!!!!

[@joshuaroberts8764]

Her cousin is Betty White

[@vincentvalenzuela5718]

Abaddon and Beelzebub haha

[@tiffanymason2945]

TD=The Devil 👿

[@CAT-xd6vt]

why do i now want to take this job

[@themachine2823]

So it's the seven deadly sins, but I cant work out the last, 8 and 9.

[@sammycinnamon7300]

8 might be all the experiments to make people live longer. The gene splicing, bringing back extinct animals, cloning, elongating life beyond the norm, general meddling in gods work. And 9 well, when you dance with the devil, he calls the tune. He said he could go free when the others are caught, but he must help him. Cant work out what that's about so it looks like he'll be there for good.

[@Onesaltysoul]

The eighth sin actually used to be Despair. Not sure why it was removed to make 7.

[@VTC05]

How was that girl born in 1600 something in Massachusetts when the US didn't exist back then??

[@emilyvalentine4565]

Reckon it’s a reference to the Salem witch trials, which happened in what is now Massachusetts; seeing as the story takes place in 2020 and Lisa is obviously aware time has passed since the puritan era, I would assume she just said “Massachusetts” instead of “a town in what is now called Massachusetts” for ease of speech.

[@StevyJoe]

During quarantine it feels like being in a cage

[@juliancamacho3837]

WAIT THATS IT!?!?

[@lil-tater]

i thought this was gunna be a preachy story about ICE, lol

[@ninthninja05]

Satan doesn't seem that bad. He shouldn't have asked questions.

[@centipedicmonster5084]

Yeah just get 500 dollars a day. That's what I would do.

[@dannynolovexx11xx39]

Massachusetts was founded in 1780

[@anncharron9792]

Isn't the thumbnail Juggernsut from 13 ghosts?

[@fightvale57]

you dont have a twitter tho?

[@DRIFTKINGJR.]

oooooo mow i want to known all the religions they were! and i love that sexcter 33:03

[@gothicdragonwarriorqueen5819]

Scary-as-shit cool!!!🙂🖤☠💀👻🦇⚰🕷🕸

[@randomperson6004]

666 views....huh I wonder if it's a sign

[@titliroy4713]

So, he's in the cage now? Why?😶

[@adalicortes4515]

Is Lisa from the witch trials?

[@Crippled_Crow]

Consumes casey's food

[@pxnda6142]

storyime 🙂

[@AnubisX3]

I liked A Serbian Film too. Dope soundtrack 👌🏽