IELTS Writing Task 2 - IELTS Master Plans and Writes a Model Discussion Essay in Real Time

[@Ielts-master]

New style so let me know how you feel about this type of lesson!

[@abdullahrashel192]

IELTS Master can I get your email address ? Which one you use or check regular basis

[@Ielts-master]

You can contact me at www.ielts-master.com/contact/

[@orxanhuseynovv]

👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

[@thedailymark84]

I think this is an awesome idea. I want to see you do more of these.

[@a.h.a.aboelaph2374]

please post the other types of questions in real time as opinion essays , causes ,solutions ...

[@aaravmalla9070]

First essay format and now this, no other channel could understand the needs of Ielts test takers more then you.

[@meisaahvazi3637]

its look like i answer this question , love how you explain while you thinking and writing, hope to see more like this videos

[@talaalthinayyan8882]

one of the most helpful IELTS channels. thank you!

[@amirokhovat7887]

That was a perfect way to actually illustrate this task, thank you for everything you do, I found it absolutely useful.

[@johnmarkdereal8576]

Awesome Master Lee. I prefer this kind of teaching approach because it gives more details to what is expected in Task 2. It goes deeper than just simply planning. I observe, however, few typographical errors which you didn’t bother to check as well as redundant use of words particularly the subordinating conjunction (or adverb clause) ‘while’. This is because you stopped checking the content when you finished the conclusion. In actual writing, I believe, going back to the writing as means of polishing (and have it reviewed for errors) is a crucial step for a higher band.

[@wilianmartins6723]

Perfect, I'm really impressed how fast and practical you are. I would like more videos like this.

[@axrorbekanvarxanov6770]

Wow, unimaginable and unexpected ideas and answers... Perfectly natural and it's definite this essay is band 9+

[@adastraperaspera2528]

Lee, i wana more videos on how your operate these exams (Reading task). It's really practical!

[@ritishsharma9448]

Truely awesome....................loved it......

[@bilalhaseeb1936]

You sir, are absolutely a genius . I admire your efforts and methods. :) I have previously scored 6 bands in writing without planning but this time hopely by using this technique I can raise my score to 7 . Thank you Sir.

[@ROSHAN2023new]

This is the teacher I was looking, thank you very much, Appreciate very much

[@mkaur2912]

Very effective method of teaching.Very helpful.Its a discussion essay.Plz discuss other types like opinion based as well as advantages and disadvantage essays with full explanation.Thanks.

[@gdfjfgjeggdghffh6341]

Very clear and direct explaination

[@kurtgisi]

I look forward to seeing much more video on how to write effectively like this.

[@liumworldcreator3705]

amazing-model essay. Thanks

[@abdullahrashel192]

You are a great teacher. Love you. God bless you always 💖

[@nuruddinsamnani7642]

its was really great, helped how to think, write & rectify the sentences simultaneously, looking for more such videos other on topics

[@DLP11111]

Hi Lee, appreciate your efforts, can you please make more videos on different topics. Thanks

[@shahabshahabi6262]

Hi Lee Excellent approach. I have a question? For irreversible damage should we explain and develop Global Warming in your essay? If it is adequate to just refer, it'll be so simpler for me. Thanks a bunch

[@user-cc8oj2by8i]

Thanks for that lesson, i always fall short on my word count. i am amazed on how you can make a 399 words so simple.

[@Eddiepotter123]

very well explained .i need more practice in task 2 general.

[@Reboost269]

Sir, please do more like that videos please... That kind of videos are very useful.

[@sondosmazyed5364]

I'm interested in this lesson

[@aminabilimbek]

You could alter words plant and animal more formal word as flora and fauna, earth terrestrials. It is just suggestions to avoid repeating word more

[@mann3901]

Can you make a video like all types of mainly use vocabulary in IELTS please please

[@Muhammadfarhan-bp1rp]

bro u hv perfect channel goood job

[@onlymusic2005]

The only thing that I could utilize from this lecture is the approach to writing 2 essays: planning then writing...

[@Ielts-master]

thanks for the feedback!

[@wendyli2360]

IELTS Master, it would be even better that we can see how you can polish your own writing, so we cannot only learn how you did it from planning to writing but also the article itself such as grammar and phrases. Thank you ahead if you could do a follow up video.

[@hellyaroza]

You are fantastic teacher, I love you Mr. Lee :D

[@vishulkhadwal5957]

You’re doing a tremendously amazing work. Your are really very helpful. Good work 👌👌👍

[@johnnydepp6879]

Please make this kind of other videos so we can benefit from them because it is very effective one

[@oyu7141]

real quick question. at conclusion paragraph, which part did you paraphrase? your opinion?

[@firasali1383]

So useful,, thank you so much👍🏽

[@shahzadAwan786]

You are an amazing teacher. Are these available in pdf ? Because it will be more helpful for your fans

[@meisaahvazi3637]

i believe if you add useful tips such as vocabulary and grammar would be amazing and appreciable

[@GAMEZONE2018]

It's really very helpful for me....

[@sdhillon4232]

Sir is it right to use word 'we' in writing task 2

[@manushik1392]

ThAnk YoU....

[@peterwoo2489]

Do you think it's actually a problem writing too much?

[@janatsharma]

What's the meaning of dire?

[@engalipak]

Can we just write 'one reason' per paragraph and expand on it soley in a focused way? Please advise

[@АктореКанатбай]

Ali Faridi yes you can You should argue effectively

[@sumairakhan4531]

Hi, u said 399 words r nt acceptable what to do if u realise this at d end of writing ..should we go back n strike off some sentences? Do we loose points in exceeding word limit ... During planng the skeleton , do we need to plan for the no of sentences we gonna write so that we r in the word limit ? U r videos hav been very helpful , had i came across it before my target wud hv been acheived in a single attempt.. Thaaaaanks a ton from india 🙏🏻Master lee👍🏻

[@Ielts-master]

It's ok to write 399 words, but it's not reasonable for most students to be able to write this many words on topic in 40 minutes. There's only a minimum word count, not a maximum.

[@wesalmurad8745]

this is acadamic writing or general?

[@sirusharma513]

I think it might be an excellent essay but I couldn't read it because the letters are too small.

[@martconception5830]

Other living organisms such plants and wild animals have been tremendously affected from human activities. Some people believe that that the damage incurred are beyond human control, while others are optimistic that restoration are feasible from its current state.

[@poochyboi]

holy shit i just took this 3 weeks ago...exact same question...got 6.5 even though im an english teacher.

[@yut.2527]

If the question like this, can I add the example in my country about the wrong waste disposal. There are a lot of garbage in the ocean so it directly effect to the sea animals. bla bla bla... (sorry for the spelling and gramma if it wrong)

[@ajayrabari2736]

But sir you are do not use linker for example furthermore. Moreover. However in addition.

[@wilkoartale1112]

are we not supposed to provide arguments in favour of our thesis? then of course it's also good to make a concession... but in this essay you focus a lot on the concession instead of providing arguments (except one) to sustain your thesis.

[@madhuduraichamy7694]

If you explain about new vacublary which you used here it will be more useful...😀

[@Ielts-master]

Definitely something that I can do in the future. It's a bit hard to do without preparation but I can try. Were there any words that you were particularly confused by or interested in?

[@wendyli2360]

IELTS Master in your writing, it says, ‘the first reason is that the kind of problems that we have are irreversible.’ I’m just a bit confused about the use of plural form, because if there is the kind of problems, it should be singular form right? Sorry I’m not very sure and I’ve made quite a lot mistakes in singular and plural forms, but I’m trying to improve and learn more. It would be great that I could get some advice.

[@karimmuhsin3094]

in the first sentence you copy the structure. I heard that we shouldn't copy the structure?!

[@Ielts-master]

+Karim Muhsin I paraphrased the sentences to introduce the topic. Where did you hear you shouldn't do that?

[@karimmuhsin3094]

Cambridge writing skills. The teacher stated very clearly that we should change the structure. Basically, we should ready the topic sentence and we understand it, then we rewrite it in our own words. I am just asking. Thank you for the lecture and the effort.

[@DrKakashi-ep9pq]

@@karimmuhsin3094 that's exactly what he did...

[@rocksagar1355]

its nice but provide us more like it

[@mizalamizala2317]

2 many words, 399

[@umersalahuddin3892]

most species are extinct already