IELTS Writing Task 2: How to Write an Introduction Part 1 - The Basics and Opinion Questions

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@aliasgharbaloch5819
@aliasgharbaloch5819 3 жыл бұрын
1. Introduction- it is often argued that most governments prefer to spend more budget on the development of railways rather than roads. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the idea that the goverrment should spend more money on railways compare to roads.
@haidyawad7966
@haidyawad7966 3 жыл бұрын
Q1- It is essential that nations provide perfect transportation facilities for their citizens.Although both trains and onland vehicles are equally important, I strongly agree that higher fund should be dedicated to improve railways due to its quicker and more comfortable service for a big category of travellers.
@khadishayeleussin.
@khadishayeleussin. 2 жыл бұрын
1) It is essential to give special meaning to transport facilities. I agree with the idea of developing railways, although improving roads and spending the budget in this way is also necessary for having a convenient transportation process.
@khadishayeleussin.
@khadishayeleussin. 2 жыл бұрын
3)Some individuals argue that other people work hard only to have income in their lives, also they think that money is the most important factor which is led to being employed. I especially agree with this statement, although for some individuals having a workforce is one of the steps toward the dream.
@chichochicho8141
@chichochicho8141 6 жыл бұрын
Thank you for the video. Here are my possible introductions. Number 1: The railway system is an important means of transportation for the rich and average citizen. Therefore, i strongly agree that government should spend and give more attention to the system. That notwithstanding, the roads shouldn't be left without maintenance, as citizens also ply the roads with their vehicles or the public transport system.
@hasan5260
@hasan5260 6 жыл бұрын
You have chosen good vocabularies. I am worry about my writing task.
@olafouad6782
@olafouad6782 7 жыл бұрын
Thank you for all your help:) I got 7 in Ielts Academic:)) L=7, R=7, W=6.5, S=7.5
@Ielts-master
@Ielts-master 7 жыл бұрын
+ola elbashir congratulations! That's awesome
@gehadalsharabeni7852
@gehadalsharabeni7852 7 жыл бұрын
congratulation ola!I just want to know how many essay did you write in your writing section and If you have any tips for me
@olafouad6782
@olafouad6782 7 жыл бұрын
gehad alsharabeni Hello Gehad. Sorry I can't get your question about essays. You can email me at ola.thawra@gmail.com
@sravanimuppa9115
@sravanimuppa9115 7 жыл бұрын
how do you prepare reading
@karunakarki7070
@karunakarki7070 7 жыл бұрын
Omg
@Ammaalrrufaye
@Ammaalrrufaye Жыл бұрын
thanks for this great video and this is my paraphrasing for the first sentence of the opinion introduction, please feel free for anyone to correct any mistake or giving any alternatives, that will help. "despite of the aim of any business is to achieve benefits, it is crucial to create a strong and sensible relationship with the society which is essential for any business' sustainability".
@alanliu6096
@alanliu6096 6 жыл бұрын
topic 2. Recently, more and more people tend to choose to live by themselves. I firmly believe this is a negative influence on the person him/herself, his/her family and the society in the long term. topic 3. Among the reasons that people are working hard today, some people claim the only one is for more income. I strongly cannot agree with this idea, in terms of fulfilling our own value and contributing more to the society. Thank you for the video, I feel more confident after this.
@AmirAli-zi2pk
@AmirAli-zi2pk 7 жыл бұрын
Great work, I really appreciate this Sir Lee but it is UNIQUE. It is different from other websites or even from my teacher's lecture but main thing is I am satisfied with that because I find it very helpful as a reader...don't know whether it will work or not? but I will be using these tips in my test that is after only 2 days ( 25th may 2017). 1) Many people have contrasting views with government about spending money on railway. While I agree that government should spend more money on railway because it is cheap and comfortable, but I also believe that roads are also important means of transportation. 2) Although many people started living alone in many countries nowadays, there are some people who still feel that residing alone is a negative progress. 3) While the primary purpose of working hard is most often to make money but there are some people who work hard for other reasons as well. kindly reply before 25th if possible.
@officalfebfrx4601
@officalfebfrx4601 6 жыл бұрын
Answer to the first question...i hope i may be correct.. It is argued that the expenditure of government's should be on metorways rather than roadways. I strongly agree with the idea that railways should be given more priority because it is flexible and carries a huge number of public to transport for one place to another in convient time
@clairewtulich2966
@clairewtulich2966 7 жыл бұрын
One of the best explanation I've heard and learnt...
@chichochicho8141
@chichochicho8141 6 жыл бұрын
Number 3: There's a saying that goes, "There is dignity in all labour." This goes a long way to ascertain that earning money is not the sole purpose of hard work, and to this i strongly agree with. This essay will discuss in detail, my opinion.
@jawad1422
@jawad1422 5 жыл бұрын
I'm not sure this is gonna work.
@chichochicho8141
@chichochicho8141 5 жыл бұрын
@@jawad1422 What would work?
@jawad1422
@jawad1422 5 жыл бұрын
@@chichochicho8141 check out the others replies .
@LukemjRN
@LukemjRN 6 жыл бұрын
Hello there, so far this is the only video that teaches on how to write an essay in another level. Writing “This essay will discuss” is so mechanical and everyone is doing it.
@haidyawad7966
@haidyawad7966 3 жыл бұрын
3-No one denies the immense need to money.Although income is one of the major destination of work, I still believe that self esteen and achieving goals are equally important.
@gelgregorio2952
@gelgregorio2952 4 жыл бұрын
Your style on teaching is very effective for me. Thank you.. Basically taught but efficient for people who don't have a problem to express in english but just needed a bit of guide in essay construction.
@Eva-oe3se
@Eva-oe3se 5 жыл бұрын
Thi is the greatest & most collected explanation I've ever heard so far, good on ya:)
@Mrsaad2005
@Mrsaad2005 6 жыл бұрын
Task 1 intro. There is a difference of opinion amongst people, whether government should spend money on building roads or railway tracks. Although I agree with the idea that government should build railwaytracks more than the roads, I also think that developing road network is equally useful for the country.
@alicjagoebiewska6147
@alicjagoebiewska6147 7 жыл бұрын
1. Communication is an essencial aspect of our life. There are certain ways to travel and sometimes people feel that they don’t have enough options. In my opinion trains has been neglected by many of the countries and I believe that investments in their progress is necessary. I just need score 5 tbo
@akhunzadaafaq3126
@akhunzadaafaq3126 6 жыл бұрын
Sample 1. It is essential for a prospering country to have an effective transport system. It is debatable weather the government should spend more on railways instead of roads. While both of them have their advantages and disadvantages, I believe roads have the upper hand as they are easy to build, maintain and just a more modern way of transport.
@haidyawad7966
@haidyawad7966 3 жыл бұрын
2-It is trendy these days that people prefere to lead independent life rather than living with a family. I believe that this attitude has some advantages as well as few drawbacks.
@ani2298
@ani2298 5 жыл бұрын
For the waste model question : 2. In order to increase recycling, some people want government intervention by penning new laws to ameliorate waste. I strongly agree that laws must be put in place as they will allow for a more 'streamlined and stricter approach ( PB A)' towards waste recycling while bringing in 'a monetary edge as well as creating new jobs' (PB B).
@manishashrestha248
@manishashrestha248 6 жыл бұрын
1.It is often argued that the large amount of money which is allocated for space exploration by government is a waste.Instead ,we can use them in much important sectorts like education and health.Although it is important to gain more knowledge about extra terrestrial life,I completely agree with the above statement. 2.It is true that some prisoners turns out to be better person after they released from the prison.There are people who feel that they can be the best person to make youngsters aware of consequences of criminal activities.I completely agree with this statement and believe that other methods are not as effective.
@ibrahima.s4133
@ibrahima.s4133 3 жыл бұрын
The content of this video is priceless, I thank you for this great effort.
@abdullahsheikh7806
@abdullahsheikh7806 7 жыл бұрын
answer to question 1 Since long ago, its debatable as to which segment of public transport facility, either railways or the roads a government should emphasize more. Both the segments have its own set of advantages and dsiadvantages, varying from economy to economy as per its geopgraphical conditions.
@tameradel2020
@tameradel2020 7 жыл бұрын
Transportation undoubtedly one of the most significant indications of countrie's improvement. So funding either railway or roads both are essential. And that up to the country it self what it's requirements.
@nicolekabamba7549
@nicolekabamba7549 Жыл бұрын
Thanks for your explanation.Very clear
@marziaalam6486
@marziaalam6486 7 жыл бұрын
Introduction for topic 3: Waste recycling is an essential aspect for a eco-friendly world, but unfortunately there are claims that home waste recycling is still not well in practice and that only government initiatives can improve the conditions. Although i agree making recycling of waste a legal requirement will improve the situation, but awareness among the citizens is the foremost requirement,
@savedbymercy
@savedbymercy 7 жыл бұрын
trying too hard.
@TheYamatai
@TheYamatai 6 жыл бұрын
It's good
@munawarshah373
@munawarshah373 6 жыл бұрын
Excellent
@dexydidi1050
@dexydidi1050 5 жыл бұрын
* these conditions *
@amyadams6001
@amyadams6001 5 жыл бұрын
I love this intro
@JenellePamela
@JenellePamela 5 жыл бұрын
1. Despite having sufficient funds for the development of railways and roads, some people propose that the government should give priority on railway progress rather than constructions of road. I personally agree that the government should give more focus on railways than roads since better railways provide more convenience traveling from one place to another. 2. Living independently in our society is becoming more popular in some countries. While I believe that it is a positive kind of development since learning how to live independently is a crucial part of personal growth, there can also be negative effects for some people when living alone. 3. Earning money is a reward for working hard, and some people are determined to work hard just to earn money. Although money is a great reward after putting so much time and effort into your work, I disagree with the idea that it is the only purpose to exert more effort in working especially if you are passionate in your work and your desire to gain experience is greater than what money can offer.
@anitathuo8112
@anitathuo8112 3 жыл бұрын
@janelle i need your help please can i email you?
@ddss3453
@ddss3453 5 жыл бұрын
It's the most useful lesson for writing introduction I have ever seen.
@mohammedhamid8302
@mohammedhamid8302 6 жыл бұрын
3) Some people argue that the sole benefit that workers gain from being in an employment is to make money. Although the main aim from having a job is improving the financial condition, I strongly believe that there are many more advantages from our work both for the individual and the society.
@ravindraacademy1999
@ravindraacademy1999 6 жыл бұрын
Hi. It is a superb way to improve writing introduction. I was confused about whether or not to write intention as I m going to elaborate or something like that.Thanks alot.
@jingyi_xiexie
@jingyi_xiexie 6 жыл бұрын
I LIKE YOUR SPEAKING STYLE VERY CLEAR AND EASY TO UNDERSTAND,. THE PRESENTATION LOOKS VERY CLEAN AS WELL. THANK YOU
@zahrayazdani4070
@zahrayazdani4070 4 жыл бұрын
introduction for topic 2: Business's social duties as important as having a high income. I completely agree with the idea that companies have responsibilities to society, especially about their activity's impact on the environment and providing suitable conditions for labours.
@trangthuy1420
@trangthuy1420 7 жыл бұрын
Hi, Mr Lee Tobe honest, I love your videos so much, because they help me a lots to improve my writing skill. they are extremely detail and clear. Plz, create more and more wonderful videos. Thanks in advance :))
@dhillondhillon3222
@dhillondhillon3222 6 жыл бұрын
Oh wow I think really very helpful for every one Ist time I feel very good about introduction So thnx g thnx a lot
@maheshtenapali8938
@maheshtenapali8938 4 жыл бұрын
Introduction: 1 : It is a long term outstanding dispute that, Council can expend more funds on railways rather than highways. I strongly agree that the number of passengers transported from train to various places in their day to day life is more than they travel on road. 2 . Majority of people are keen interest on living independently than ever before in few countries. In my view there are equal chances for both advantages and disadvantages towards the growth of society 3 . Few people often believe that the main aim to work hard is to make money. I strongly agree that people who worked hard had earned more money and achieved more success in life than others.
@burhanafridi603
@burhanafridi603 7 жыл бұрын
IELTS Master thanks for the videos, if you could please upload some videos about how to write a paragraph the same way you did the introduction Parts. These are very Informational and would help a lot of candidates
@chichochicho8141
@chichochicho8141 6 жыл бұрын
Number 2: People choosing to live alone has become the current trend in today's world. In my opinion, this is a rather brash stance, considering that different factors such as insecurity, loneliness, theft attacks, and even fire incidences can occur without adequate and prompt help from anyone. This essay will discuss these factors in detail.
@rajeshpatel8855
@rajeshpatel8855 6 жыл бұрын
Topic 1 While the primary purpose of a government is most often to how their country's progress increase, some people believe that Railways anyone of country lifeline in the world. I strongly agree that the government is doing what is right. Especially in terms of government jobs and providing good working condition. My opinion is reasoned out by arguments and examples in further paragraphs.
@rajeshpatel8855
@rajeshpatel8855 6 жыл бұрын
How to improve my writing skills????
@smarty_1296
@smarty_1296 6 жыл бұрын
1. It is clear that improved roads are crucial for a wide range of users but the arguments not only about new roads but also that governments should allocate budget to improve railways rather than roads. I strongly agree with this view that annual funds should be specified for amenities of railway services; in which economic growth can be highly observed between the cities and enhance national and international liaison on the social level. 2. Owing to the debate over the youth to live alone or with their families, many people believe that living alone support the independence, motivation to make more efforts, and self-trusting whilst others think that this may cause; a breach of familial relationships and lose the social traditions or enhance increasing in teenage crimes. I completely agree that people at their specific age should feel free and be independent away from their family and manage on their own. 3. The standing argument about a type of work and its impact on the results is noticeable, while some people think that the sole target to work hard is to gain money where Importance of money for the individuals or the groups cannot be deniable in the society, others believe that many intents can be achievable through working hard, such as self-estimation, apprenticeship, and social development.
@sonisony764
@sonisony764 6 жыл бұрын
3. Although struggling hard for money is the reality of life in present time, some people argue that it is the ultimate goal of life. While I agree that earning money is one of the most important things, I believe there are many other aspects people do hard work for.
@nikitabhavsar9499
@nikitabhavsar9499 5 жыл бұрын
It's a general perception that making money is the only agenda to work hard. While I do believe financial stability is the most important reason to work hard but not sole one as making your own identity is equally important.
@heenagrover8666
@heenagrover8666 5 жыл бұрын
Hi like your way of writing as m preparing for ielts general exam and i have very short span of time. I need your help if u can
@tanveersyed9139
@tanveersyed9139 7 жыл бұрын
Q1. Answer In some developing nations rail transport play's vital role in the movement of people, so their government should expend more budget on railways compare to other travels. I strongly agree to spend more money in increasing demand of public transport and less other modes to minimize environment affect. (48 words)
@neeldarji5167
@neeldarji5167 7 жыл бұрын
Hi Lee, I have written like as below. Please evaluate it if we can write this or not: In contemporary time, the demand for transportation means has immensely increased. Some governments emphasize more on railways and according to them, a huge investment has to be made on railways instead of roads. While I agree that railways provide quick and much more comfortable movement for passengers as well as goods, I firmly believe that the vital role of roads, especially in remote areas, should not be forgotten and hence certain proportion of money has to be spent on it.
@janakmodi9847
@janakmodi9847 6 жыл бұрын
Introduction to 1st topic: These days governing authorities are highly spending their resources towards expansion and maintenance of land transportation. While, railways being the most convenient source of facility for long distance commute, spending money towards it's growth is absolute necessity. However, I also believe that roads play an important role in our day to day commute.
@yetnayetyehuala811
@yetnayetyehuala811 7 жыл бұрын
Income generation was considered to be the only reason for people to do their work effectively. Although I some what agree that people work hard to get money , i also belive that there are additional reasons such as satisfaction, recognition and self development.
@MoodOnYouTube
@MoodOnYouTube 6 жыл бұрын
at present , people have been living frequently by them self in couple of the countries then the past , favourable benefits can be drown from living with family or with partnership unlike staying alone would cause negativity, i would generally say that living with family is more likely.
@nikitabhavsar9499
@nikitabhavsar9499 5 жыл бұрын
People prefer to live a separate life of their own is becoming a norm in few parts of the world which is strikingly opposite to living in a family. Well I do agree it has certain benefits as one can retain their privacy however the older people has to suffer more.
@junstorontolife7198
@junstorontolife7198 5 жыл бұрын
Nowadays, writing online is becoming more and more common, some people suggest that kids will rarely use their hands to write, in hence, they should not be taught to handwriting. In my opinion, while typing online is becoming popular, but handwriting still plays a very essential role and it is really important to teach children handwriting skills.
@ThaoPhuong-qx6pn
@ThaoPhuong-qx6pn 3 жыл бұрын
thank you for your share! It helpful for me!
@sawmanez8444
@sawmanez8444 7 жыл бұрын
Hello Mr. Lee, I found that it is very helpful tip. Millions thank.
@moeedkh
@moeedkh 6 жыл бұрын
Nowadays, many people are opting to live along rather than with a family. It is having catastrophic effects on our society which can be correlated with rising mental issues in our society Furthermore it has also contributed in falling social values among youngsters.
@naziaahmed3717
@naziaahmed3717 7 жыл бұрын
topic-3 The best source of recycling is waste products.People think by making government laws may help this recycling process is highly increased.As recycling is very much essential for the environment ,laws and orders must be needed and i believe that other effective ways are also be needed by using wastes for recycling.
@ani2298
@ani2298 5 жыл бұрын
1. While some people believe more money should be spent on railways than roads, others assert that roads should get a greater share of expenditure. Even though I agree with the importance of railways for sustaining the economy and growth of a country, I believe that roads, just because of their sheer number and reachability, should have a major chunk of the pie. 2. As compared to living in the company of fellow people, there is a shift towards solitary life in recent times. While I think it's important for people to have a choice to explore their lives on their own and have time to introspect it's equally important for them to consider the environmental and social implications of living in such solitude. 3. From ages, working has been solely associated with monetary benefits and the social status the job brings. While I agree that money is an important factor to consider, I believe that there are other equally if not more important factors such as satisfaction and healthcare.
@harmeetkaur1929
@harmeetkaur1929 6 жыл бұрын
1) Many would argue that governments should spend the funds on railways instead of roads.Although spending money on railways will be a beneficiary approach, spending on roads cannot be ignored. 2) Living alone in some nations has become a trend in the 21st century. Certainly, this was not the case few years back and it has some positive effects due to some obvious reasons but overall this is a negative development . 3) Money act as bedrock to fulfill most of the person's basic needs and beyond the basic needs, it helps us to achieve our life's goal.That is why some people's only motive to do hard work is to earn money but this is not the case for all people. For fair amount of people, other elements like personal interest, self satisfaction and social status are also crucial.
@joechou6822
@joechou6822 5 жыл бұрын
It is believed by some that governments should allocate more money to railways instead of roads. I completely agree with this argument because it is more environmentally friendly and the number of traffic accidents can be reduced if more people take a train as the mode of transport. Comparing to the past, more residents are deciding to live alone these days in several nations. From my point of view, I would argue that it is a negative phenomenon due to the reduction of interaction with people and more average household expenditure on living. It is sometimes argued that people work hard only for the purpose of getting paid. However, I disagree with this statement because some dedicate to their job for the reason to achieve self-fulfilment and purse their interest.
@rushansameera
@rushansameera 7 жыл бұрын
Transportation is a very important fact in the development of a country. This should based on the exact requirements and must target maximum efficiency and effectiveness. Therefore I disagree for spending more money on railways rather than roads because railways are not widely expanded but roads are connected all corners of the country. (53 words)
@sapnachand9234
@sapnachand9234 6 жыл бұрын
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@nasihatv5078
@nasihatv5078 6 жыл бұрын
I got 8.5. many many thakns sir
@jinimathew191
@jinimathew191 5 жыл бұрын
investing money on public transports such as railways and roads depends on the need and necessity of the people as well as the funds of the country.I strongly believe that the road transport system demands prime attention than railways as a result it will deteriorate the accident rates and improve the living standards of a common man.
@Funtazmo
@Funtazmo 7 жыл бұрын
very helpful, please continue guidance! thanks!
@syedqadri784
@syedqadri784 7 жыл бұрын
Introduction Railways should be developed more than the roads on priority basis by the government. I strongly agree, railways should be given utmost priority for development as they are much faster and cheaper compared to any other means but I also believe roads play a pivotal role in the overall development of city infrastructure. Please reply if this is enough or need further changes. I have my exam next week.
@alicjagoebiewska6147
@alicjagoebiewska6147 7 жыл бұрын
2.There is a certain moment in our life that we feel independent and have strong desire to leave parents home and move forward.. Wheter we decide to finally be by ourselves we should consider some pros and cons of this move. I belive that having own space is important but there i s also an aspect of feeling abondened with no chance to talk to anyone.
@nikitabhavsar9499
@nikitabhavsar9499 6 жыл бұрын
Introduction 3- It is agreeable that earning money is the primitive reason for working, I also believe that it is not the only reason as there are several people out there who work simply for their passion and hence money is not a prime consideration for them.
@LailaNazmeen
@LailaNazmeen 7 жыл бұрын
1. Some people are of the opinion that the government need to focus on developing railways instead of the roads. While I agree that advancement in railways is vital in a broader aspect, I also believe that roads are equally important in terms of overall living condition of a city or country.
@ramyakrishna2911
@ramyakrishna2911 6 жыл бұрын
Even though road transport is one of the main mean sources for the majority of people. But for some people railways is more efficient and convenient for their transportation. while I strongly agree that the government should spend money on a railway system that will encourage people to spend fewer expenses on petrol and it will result in a positive effect on the ecosystem.
@shiavmsharma3060
@shiavmsharma3060 7 жыл бұрын
u r really nice ,thanks for your help. i understand well now where I'm lacking. hope my next result will not struck up to 5.5 in writing in next exam..once again thank you so much really helpful video... and for sure I'll recommend to other
@codehanadi
@codehanadi 7 жыл бұрын
Hi very helpful video we need video for body paragraph structure and conclusion for agree and disagree and another types of opinions question than you
@Ielts-master
@Ielts-master 7 жыл бұрын
Working on it :-)
@codehanadi
@codehanadi 7 жыл бұрын
IELTS Master waiting your video 😊👍good luck
@codehanadi
@codehanadi 7 жыл бұрын
IELTS Master waiting your video good luck😊👍
@khadishayeleussin.
@khadishayeleussin. 2 жыл бұрын
2)Quantity of people who choose to live alone, increasing year to year. In the past time, the number of individuals who keep on living by themselves was not as high as nowadays. Moreover, living alone is a precious experience and the first step to being independent of parents or adults. Also, this step has led to less communication with other people, especially with family members.
@eshahans3677
@eshahans3677 6 жыл бұрын
Spending money on the infrastructure is an essential part of the country's development. It is argued that railways require more investment than the roads. While I agree railways of our country requires attention in terms of finance, I believe roadways are still compromised and need improvement. Hence the government should not cease the financial supply for roadways
@titilayojoseph7576
@titilayojoseph7576 3 жыл бұрын
Very helpful, thanks
@Bustleforge
@Bustleforge 7 жыл бұрын
Sir i got just overall 5.5 band (L.5.5,S6,R5.5 AND W5)last month now i am going to re appear in exams thank you so much for improve my writing
@sanoberkhan8518
@sanoberkhan8518 4 жыл бұрын
Please make similar explaining vedio for body paragraphs as well ,it's incredibly helpful !
@Thatonesashagirl
@Thatonesashagirl 5 жыл бұрын
can you please make a vid on how you would write the body paragraph of each of the topics youve used as an introduction?
@taricknegm1523
@taricknegm1523 7 жыл бұрын
1- It is generally claimed that a higher percentage of governmental budget should be allocated to railways than to road. While I admit that railways are essential, roads deserve at least equal attension. 2- In the current era, an increasing number of poeple choose to live alone in many parts of the world. I believe this growing trend has its outstanding drawbacks, eventhough it apparently has a few advantages. 3- Hard work is considered by some to have a single goal ; That is to make money. Although one important reason of work is to make a living, work fulfills many functions which are equally important.
@rahuldwivedi4758
@rahuldwivedi4758 6 жыл бұрын
"While numerous governments, the world over, contend that their most important goal is economic development, Many people argue that the other aspects of progress are equally significant. While I agree that economic growth is essential, I believe other forms of development are just as important. " can you please evaluate my introduction?
@gepeeacapulco6650
@gepeeacapulco6650 6 жыл бұрын
Here is another one: 2. Although some individual wants to live independently in this present time than before, I believe this could give a negative impact on one's life in the future. 3. While some individual believes that saving money is the only reason of making a great deal of effort, I strongly disagree with this idea, as there are many reasons why a person needs to strive hard. Firstly, for their childrens education and secondly, for future plans. Thanks a bunch..
@adkhangaming7442
@adkhangaming7442 6 жыл бұрын
(correction is requested coz i m new to writing task) In developed countries, people living trend is chaging rapidly, people prefer to live at their own as compare to past. In this essay i tend to agree with the statement, that it is more benificial for individual to live as people were living in past. First of all individual can get guaidance from experienced family member in every field of life and secondly, they have ease in bearing day to day expenses altogether.
@gepeeacapulco6650
@gepeeacapulco6650 6 жыл бұрын
sir lee,gud day to you! I need a correction on this if you have time: While the purpose of the government's money is on the roads, some people believe that it should preferably be spent on the railways. I strongly agree with the idea that railroads are most essential this days because it can ease traffic jams and mainly affordable for commuters.
@DarshilPatelMusic
@DarshilPatelMusic 6 жыл бұрын
Allies argued that giving more funding to railways rather than making roads. I completely agree this correspondence but it is also indispensable to give a concern to road infrastructure.
@enesdereli2665
@enesdereli2665 6 жыл бұрын
2- Despite the fact that the population number is getting bigger dramatically on our planet earth, demands and decisions about living together are changing day by day in the direction of living alone. While I strongly believe that living together gives social communication skill which is needed for human psychologhy, I also think living alone has some positive effects on creativity.
@aishwaryaupadhyay3193
@aishwaryaupadhyay3193 6 жыл бұрын
Topic 1 : Governing authorities should utilize entire amount of budget for the development of railways instead of growing road network.While enhancement of railway connectivity is a great need indeed but I believe that roads must get developed simultaneously wherever it’s advantageous and necessary to do so.
@wendyli2360
@wendyli2360 7 жыл бұрын
Hi, I'm just a bit confused about the introduction example for the 'country's progress' task. It says 'views about how their country's progress should be measured'. My response would be 'what areas their country should work on to progress', because I think when you talk about how something is measured, it should be the ways, methods or what tools should be used. Hope somebody could correct me or give me some advice. Cheers :)
@NYYS_AADO
@NYYS_AADO 7 жыл бұрын
Moreover, revenues allocated to roads rather the railways by the government should be increased since railways​ are in a way restricted. While I agree that good roads can facilitate transportation and increase income as well by using different means of transportation that is motors bikes, and others. l do believe that other projects also require huge support in financial wise for it's functioning and growth.
@joobinjianfar
@joobinjianfar 7 жыл бұрын
Introduction for topic 3: As many people may think that the primary goal of working hard is to make more money, I however do not fully agree with the idea and I hold the opinion that there are more reasons for being a hard worker than just financial incentives. I consider emotional motivations as important as earning money. To become a high achiever or the need to be the best can be strong drivers than push some people to work harder.
@chineseecho7786
@chineseecho7786 7 жыл бұрын
👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻really useful. I have learned a lot from your video
@syedqadri784
@syedqadri784 7 жыл бұрын
Introduction : Topic 3 People argue, money is often considered as a major factor behind the strenuous efforts by each individual. I strongly agree that money plays a vital role in forcing any individual to work beyond his comfort level. This is mainly done to reach professional ambitions, to provide good healthcare and also to improve the standard of living.
@mohammedhamid8302
@mohammedhamid8302 6 жыл бұрын
2) Nowadays a large number of individuals in some countries prefer to have a separate home to live in rather than sharing it with others. Although this has some advantages like privacy, I believe that loneliness has more negative effects.
@easyway7308
@easyway7308 5 жыл бұрын
Very easily taught sir nice
@sharondiva3953
@sharondiva3953 6 жыл бұрын
Money plays significant role in everyone's life. Although the main purpose of working in this modern society is to gain money and become financially stable, I completely disagree that people work diligently not only to earn money, there are also other aspects for working hard.
@lekzydaleadoffisial
@lekzydaleadoffisial 5 жыл бұрын
The role of authorities has been an issue of debate. Many governments believe that economic development is their main duty whereas, some individuals are of the opinion that other kinds of progress should be of equal significance. I think that governments should take other administrative duties as serious as developing the economy.
@saranyadevarajan1367
@saranyadevarajan1367 6 жыл бұрын
The Government across the globe focus on building it's infrastructure. There was constant debate whether they should spend more on roadways or railways. I believe that more funding should be done for roadways due to it's predominant use by the public when compared to the railways.
@MuhammadUsamaQamar
@MuhammadUsamaQamar 2 жыл бұрын
1. Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Ans: While roads are an essential medium of transportation. Some people believe that railroads are equally important and more investment should be done by the authorities on railway tracks instead of roadways. I strongly agree with this, as improving railroads will not only refine public transportation but also it will help to reduce the traffic on the roads.
@bumilicious499
@bumilicious499 4 жыл бұрын
1. Recently, countries have been spending a lot in infrastructure projects which connect people and bridge the gaps. For this reason, railways seem to have been left out and maintenance of trains are sometimes neglected. Though both metros and vehicles are important in transportation, I strongly agree that railways should be given more priority when it comes to a country's budget, especially that roads may influence people to buy more cars and also, trains transport people faster than cars on the road. 2. It is believed that there are 3 callings in life: to become single-blessed, married, or religious. Being married is the only calling that leaves a person to never be alone, while on being single-blessed and becoming a religious, a person always has a choice to live by him or herself. People have recently chosen to live solo rather than become social for several reasons, which are usually affected by past events. For me, this can cause both good and bad effects to the society. 3. Money has a great role in the lives of all individuals, and one of the methods to increase that is to work harder. Hence, many thought that employees who stay too focused on their jobs, and the business owners who do everything just to profit more, only strive for the sake of wealth. It is not always the case for me, because I believe that it is sometimes the sense of fulfillment and the lack of other social network that make a person become workaholic.
@moeedkh
@moeedkh 6 жыл бұрын
People are having an arduous lifestyle in modern world. Many observers question that if building wealth should be the solo purpose of life. In my view, resources are getting scarce on earth due to rising population. People have to work really hard to arrange basic necessities of their lives.
@indikaderaniyagala9340
@indikaderaniyagala9340 5 жыл бұрын
The government of a country should release funds on railways comparatively to the road system in order to boost the transport in a country. While I agree that more investment on railways are essential, I believe that development of roads is just as important.
@YasinAlmak
@YasinAlmak 7 жыл бұрын
People, in some countries, are more inclined to be in solitude in the present time than in the past. Given the deteriorating social skills among active people, I find it a highly negative development.
@moeedkh
@moeedkh 6 жыл бұрын
Today, many schools of thoughts believe that governments should allocate more funds to railway network improvement rather than betterment of roads. To my mind, having a effective railway system has many economic and environmental benefits. Beside reducing the overall cost of commutation in the country, it also curbs the CO2 emissions done by cars on daily basis.
@nazianasirnipa2170
@nazianasirnipa2170 6 жыл бұрын
It is sometimes thought that investing money on railways brings more benefits than on roads. While I agree that government ought to allocate expenditure for railways, roads should be invested with more money to improve traffic congestion in the road and also public transportation system.
@saraalrwas192
@saraalrwas192 7 жыл бұрын
1) As we are living in a world of crowdedness, some people think that the government should allocate more funding for building railways instead of roads. I totally believe that spotting the light on building railways is far more significance, especially in terms of minimizing the accidents and reducing the crowdedness level. 2) Recently, the number of people who make up their mind to live by their own is dramatically increasing in some specific countries than in the past. While I agree that living alone may helps in becoming more independent person, I strongly believe that this may has a further bad consequences. 3) In an expensive world, many people tend to see that the main reason of working hard enough is to make money. While I agree that doing the best you can in any job may earn you the amount of money you are always dreaming about, I strongly believe that there are much more valuable purposes of working hard.
@syedqadri784
@syedqadri784 7 жыл бұрын
Introduction: Topic 2 Most people in the present generation are of the opinion to live independently rather than growing together as a joint family as was the trend earlier. In my opinion, it is a negative growth as staying together helps nurture family values, share responsibilities, balance financial burden and social life.
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