10 likes and I’ll rewrite the whole script to make it make more sense N = narrator k = Katsuki D = Deku Ib = Izuku’s brother op = other person m = mind or in mind A = Aizawa 1.A=someone in class 1A N:Hello this is Izuku from immortal au.And I wanted to explain my story to you guys I hope you like it I guess N: I also forgot here will be Mita too she will be one of my friends when i’m a Child in my school and in Ua. okay. Okay. Let’s start now. D:ugh wheres Kacchan he said he will be here to play with me ... ugh why did I talk to him first D: there you are D:Kacchan what happened why are you crying? K:I- I asked my mum if she will let me go to hospital with you but she said no because she wanted me to help her clean my stupid room. so that means I can’t see what quirk you get D:(wow I didn’t know that Kacchan cares for me) It’s okay Kacchan I will show you my quirk instead Op:Izu help your brother wants to kill me!! D: what happened now Mita-chan Op:uhhhh I- I kinda broke your brothers hero figure D: you what!!!!!!!! Op: i’m sorry I didn’t know that it was his figure Idk Who thought this:(guess we’re dead now) Ib:oh Mita~ All:(oh sh!t) Ib: anyways me and Izuku need to go home D: why are you so early I wanted to play Ib: you forgot that you have to go to the doctor to find out your quirk. Didn’t you? D: oh yeah! I already forgot that. I told Kacchan that not even two minutes ago Ib: anyways let’s go or will be late for the appointment Izuku’s brother and him Let me go it hurts I don’t care let’s go Well.I can tell dad about it Oh really? And what is he going to do? Kill me? Very funny Yo what kind of brother are you? A better one than you that’s for sure Hey that hurts you know Do I look like I care You little Do me a favour-shut up No you shut up Hey I am the older brother you need to respect me you little sh!t Oh. Then what about you What about me? I just f*ck it up Wow so you finally admit it?Huh? If you want me to type more 15 likes Izuku andhis brother fighting still: Wow so you finally found out huh Find out what? That you’re the idiot Get back here! I’m going to kill you! (I will write some more later. I have school) K:so Do Any of you understand what just happened or is it just me? Op: nope I did not understand a thing * honestly I have no idea what the creator meant* K: good so it’s not just me who saw all of that Op: your Mrs Midoriya right? Inko: yeah that’s me! Op:well then Your son does have a quirk but it will turn up a little late so you don’t have to worry about him being quirkless Inko: thank you sir Op: no problem miss (I’m going to stop writing for a day or two because I am going through a move so I would like to focus on that if it’s not a problem)(i’m going to focus on it anyway) (Ok I’m back 👍) D:(happy noises/sounds) D n (Deku being a narrator/filling you in) Dn: from that day me, Kacchan and Mita-chan tried to get my quirk to show up. But it never did. A year goes by and we are in middle school. I get bullied because people don’t think I have a quick and that I am lying that I do have one.But don’t worry Kacchan and Mita-san always protect and help me. But one day, Something happened… K: is there something wrong? D’s pov:(why do I think someone is watching us?) D: what? How?? Kacchan, I’m still alive! K: how ….? How is that possible? D:I- I don’t know K: that doesn’t matter.At least you’re still alive (or) i’m just happy you’re still alive * I couldn’t decide which so I let you 😊* D:kacchan, can you please stop looking at my face? K: but your face (or) hair looks weird right now, it’s funny D: stop thinking about kissing me! We are only 15!! Op: now, Izuku Midoriya, Right? D: yes, that’s me Doctor. How am I not dead? Did I get a hit with a quirk? Because this has never happened before (My little sis made me fix something I’ll brb) (I’m back 😀) Op: oh, don’t worry, you are still alive because of your quirk. And the use of your quirk is for you to be immortal, so when you got a shot your quirk was the thing that saved you D: My quirk? Op: yes, your quirk D: but, What is my quirk called? Op:hmm, Let’s see. Your quirk is called immortality/immortal K: immortality/immortal? Op:mhm K: finally! Those bastards won’t bully you anymore! D:Kacchan wth Anyways, thanks for your help Doctor kacchan, why would you do that/why did you do that? K:bc- Op: where the hell were you gays?*the word gay is that because it’s true* K: get up so he can explain Op: oh right, sorry Sooo. what happened? K: why the hell do you want to know? Op: I think you were the one that told me to get up so that Izuku could explain? K:Oh yh(or)oh right Op:duh(or)obvi K:you litt- D: okay, stop trying to fight you two What? Can you let me explain now? * i’m so sorry I forgot about it for like a week or two lol* Op:•Waits for response• N: •after explaining• Op:• death stare• someone shot you…? I. Will. Kill. That. F*cking…b!tch! • mood swing• uhh umm you guys alright? * they abandon her* Op: come on guys! I’m not THAT scary! Am I? N: A few months after that day, before the (I have no idea) D: mum! I’m going to go out with my friends, okay? Inko: okay Izuku! take care! • walks out house to his destination• D M:(gosh- where are they?!) K:• sneaks up on Deku• D:Kacc- K:• kisses Deku•• stops kissing him• D: •flustered• K: still the same, huh deku? D• angry• Yo- Op: are you guys done yet? because at this rate I think I am gonna get ice cream by myself D & K: wait for us! We are coming too! D N: from that day forward me, Kacchan and Mita had so much fun together!we tell each other everything.!All of us got into UA!And to make matters better, we all got into the same class! okay! Now we should get to the story… A:get your a$$es in here! stop standing there like you’re some sort of models and get into class. Now! D:coming sensei! A: okay class. We have three new students- 1.A: are they nic-? A: let me finished! And how am I supposed to know whether they are nice or not!? Okay you 3. You can come in now D: come in you two A: introduce yourself and then go take a seat D: hello everyone! I am Izuku Midoriya! I am 16 years old! K: i’m Katsuki Bakugo I’m 16 years old Op: anyways! Hi! you can call me Mita, I am 16 years old K: let go of my hair loser! A: okay class . Get the hell out of my classroom 1.A: you’re the new student, right? I’m Kirishima, your classmate * his name is now ‘Kiri’* D: hi nice to meet you too • alarm• D: what is this? Kiri: villains are attacking! •D fights shiggy• Shiggy: you do you know that I’m not here alone, right? D: what do you mean? •D gets stabbed• •D takes out knife• Shiggy/ib: I am so sorry little bro! Please forgive me! D:f*ck off before I change my mind Shiggy/ib: okay. Thanks little bro! •shiggy/ib somehow disappears• K: this is why I love you. D: and this is how it’s done. Thanks for watching! Please subscribe for more! I hope you enjoyed the video! Editors note ✍🏼: not saying you have to like but this took me forever to finish 😅 lol 😅😅 Also just saying this is a great channel. it is great quality.(I watch their videos and I do understand the spelling mistakes occur because I am terrible at spellings. I have AutoCorrect)
@The-names-Luna10 ай бұрын
Damn- you wrote a lot
@PaytonClark-hs1fn10 ай бұрын
I think that you did a wonderful job even with the misspelled words. You did amazing, so keep working hard and always give it your all!
@Aizawa62410 ай бұрын
Omfg you actually did it :0
@-berry-toffee-bear-10 ай бұрын
thx I actually just wrote up to 3:10
@AkiraMinnox95610 ай бұрын
@@-berry-toffee-bear-damn- that’ll be a loooooot of writing to finish this.
@Nite_Fury10 ай бұрын
Aizawa at the end though🤣🤣🤣 He be like: ugh teenagers🙄🙄 great vid though
@Aiden322226 ай бұрын
Trying to read this killed my last brain cell💀
@dillon_is_a_noob5344 ай бұрын
Fr 😭🙏but still good tho
@Agamingbirdlover4 ай бұрын
same
@Meowplayz84983 ай бұрын
✩△□◇★⃤⃞⃞⃠⃤⃤⃞⃝⃟◯◈▣◉◆✪✦✧❒❐❏◘
@shelly_thedinosaur12 ай бұрын
Same
@AlleyBoles-i7t2 ай бұрын
Fr fr
@DarkWolf952YT4 ай бұрын
Aizawa's reaction at 13:16 KILLED me!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
@Rosebud2201610 ай бұрын
I understand every word and didn't realize that the words were messed up 😢
@Dracarys.3110 ай бұрын
The children really has GREAT grammar 😂
@-akemi-724810 ай бұрын
And the adults 😂
@eoeowo26 ай бұрын
Speaking of grammar have*
@Mikaguly3 ай бұрын
@@eoeowo2 I actually think it must be “has”, because we use “have” with I, you, they we. And this person is referring to a concrete individual, so the one who is incorrect is actually-you
@Editbecauseyes2 ай бұрын
@@MikagulyActually, it should be have. Has would be for a singular person, like child. For example “The child really has great grammar.” Have would be for children. “The children really have great grammar.” Therefore, the ACTUAL incorrect one here is you. Also you used the hyphen incorrectly. Please go to 4th and refresh your memory on punctuation.
@Class1A27010 ай бұрын
Is no one going to care that Aizawa said okay you CANT come in 😂😂😂
@Tamajesty3 ай бұрын
I thought I was the only one that noticed😂😂😂
@Itz-autoxX3 ай бұрын
Yeah😂😂
@Enchanted_tales_from_Shadow2 ай бұрын
I was laughing at that 😂😂😂
@rosalievinas9897Ай бұрын
Me like fr tho😭 10:40
@Glitch3rX10 ай бұрын
Aizawa: Ok 3 you *can't* come in Them coming in anyway
@MineBoy1120 күн бұрын
Just started and I'm being called gay. Just great.
@Alanagamer-ms2hvКүн бұрын
Boring
@russwright4483Ай бұрын
Godzilla had a stroke trying to read this 😂😂
@Flxurple10 ай бұрын
I give this video a 10/10
@Spicyangst10 ай бұрын
Qurk okay……WHAT THE FUK-anyway great video 👍
@hollitheodorsson97975 ай бұрын
I love this video 11/10
@FAN_PAGE_FOR_AddiraeeStudio7 күн бұрын
Trying to reading this almost gave a me stroke 😭😭😭 very good tho 🤩🤩🤩
@Dracarys.3110 ай бұрын
2:10 is that Touya before he became Charcoal 😂
@THEVERSKU0810 ай бұрын
i think so
@Blaze-14004 ай бұрын
Yes, yes it is
@LilyFields-l4h10 ай бұрын
Everyone is getting immortality and invincibility mixed up… the deku in this episode is invincible not immortality-
@Hana9574310 ай бұрын
Well deku is doth of them but l just say immortality but the thrue is that is deku doth the them
@JustAutumn12310 ай бұрын
Hi
@LilyFields-l4h10 ай бұрын
@@Hana95743say that in the title next time- Immortality will not show in this vid, put invincibility next time.
@chidiikoo4 ай бұрын
Love your vid
@Spencer_R_075 ай бұрын
My brain hurts👍👨🍳
@PoppyKing-i3s3 ай бұрын
Spelling is amazing
@Meowplayz84983 ай бұрын
Are you sarcastic bro?
@PoppyKing-i3s3 ай бұрын
@@Meowplayz8498 yes I'm being sarcastic I also lost brain cells reading that comment
@Meowplayz84983 ай бұрын
@@PoppyKing-i3s lol
@TiffanyHollander-Tran4 ай бұрын
New sub❤
@Damian_578_green10 ай бұрын
Good video, but lots of spelling mistakes, and btw not hating, but the krishima doesn't look like krishima 😅 13:28
@BakuDeku1546 ай бұрын
Great vid, but I didn’t really understand it because of the spelling errors…
@AlleyBoles-i7t2 ай бұрын
Can you remake this but the words spelled righ and add more to the video?
@Alicia-ve6nq10 ай бұрын
Bro I only have 2 percent left 😅
@RinnWasNotHere4 ай бұрын
not me somehow understanding this whole thing 💀 my brain just automatically assumed what word it was meant to say .
@Meowplayz84983 ай бұрын
Quirk ☒ Qurk☑ 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
@theCrystalUnit10 ай бұрын
im sorry why are their heads so big XD
@tajhonhudson8172Ай бұрын
You should've put immortality but also your tracker is he who offense and you sleep a lot of things wrong
@taliafellows9 ай бұрын
really good but just couldnt read it all cuz of the spelling mistakes but well done
@HannahElizDizon3 ай бұрын
The song is from the greatest showman
@Peyton2586 ай бұрын
If your invincible I don't think you feel anything immortal tho you still feel it Edit: stop making fun of her spelling mistakes
@Civil-vp7ln5 ай бұрын
Is that a 7 year old 😅😅 And wow your KZbin channel name is A that’s all
@imrantd10 ай бұрын
I don't get it there are many spelling mistakes
@PamLinebaugh429 ай бұрын
Either a really young elementary kid wrote this or someone just not learning to read
@abbie-ig9ur10 ай бұрын
some of the words are spelled wrong
@Madisonsstuff10 ай бұрын
Warning! Many many many many MANY mistakes 😊🎉 Your welcome
@Madisonsstuff10 ай бұрын
In the spelling 😂😂😂
@eoeowo26 ай бұрын
I got a stroke trying to read what they said... Read more...
@Mimi12chaib4 ай бұрын
.. Read more what???
@Mimi12chaib4 ай бұрын
@nikkinorris112310 ай бұрын
Why does Aizawa look like William afton
@Gacha-Puffle5 ай бұрын
I understand a few spelling errors…but there is one in every sentence
@TrishaBingham2 ай бұрын
Notice that the word guys is spelled wrong it's spelled gay with an s at the end
@PamLinebaugh429 ай бұрын
Am just putting this out their Grammer is important so is spelling if you aint sure how something is spelt then look up meaning from either Google or a book with words and meanings and asked around or onced u learn the correct spelling take 2 sheets of notebook paper and pencil write out the words 100x until u remember
@sjonniegaming4 ай бұрын
I dont want to be mean but the spelling is a bit bad
@mistuXnotXfound10 ай бұрын
Why do izuku, Katsuki and Aizawa look like Terrence Afton, Samuel Emily and Vincent/Shota Afton
@Kanae_kocho22110 ай бұрын
Probably because there main Au is that or they did a video like that
@Jinx12303 ай бұрын
12.04 nasıl o kiri??
@dtremblay692 ай бұрын
What are they saying?😂
@LilyCOMEN-meow8 ай бұрын
*ok... Get out of my classroom* me:HAGAHAHATSDGGDGDGDGDGFGDYDYCHFGHDDJD
@Scarlett_793-o9b10 ай бұрын
TO MANY MISSPELLED WORDS I CAN'T READ IT
@Glitch3rX10 ай бұрын
Same😂😂
@saimao-z7o10 ай бұрын
The fact I had to fix the bad grammar
@Chelovek_bez_imini3 ай бұрын
Guys ❌ Gays 👍
@man-ne1sm7 ай бұрын
10:40
@MaiyaLewis10 ай бұрын
All most all of the words were spelled wrong 😂😂
@Glitch3rX10 ай бұрын
Ikr
@Xx-ImWaTcHiNgYoU-xX10 ай бұрын
Don’t tell me bakugo doesn’t look like the Gacha Adrian’s
@Noob_rain_pro10 ай бұрын
Dude its like a 2 year old wrote this😅
@jmerlynjones8 ай бұрын
real
@HollowPurps10 ай бұрын
video good la but spelling not should work on it
@wellhill401710 ай бұрын
Please tell me you arent english please 😭
@pumpkin_pie61110 ай бұрын
Umm why are so many eazy words miss spelled
@xxextraxxX10 ай бұрын
They can misspell it as soon you understand them
@MarissaAtchison10 ай бұрын
You spelled some simple words wrong to stupid. "Easy" "misspelled"
@--MEEEEEEEE--10 ай бұрын
Pt 2??
@kelpspaw9 ай бұрын
Part 2?
@tajhonhudson8172Ай бұрын
You said intruse instead of introduce
@Scarlett_793-o9b10 ай бұрын
So many spelling mistakes Its making me mad
@Hana9574310 ай бұрын
I'm so sorry l don't mind to make you mad
@Anano4564 ай бұрын
Guys🚫 Gays✅
@albertcamus95 ай бұрын
Quirk❌ Qurk✅
@Lv3-ny1pl7 ай бұрын
LMFAO
@Mimi12chaib4 ай бұрын
this is hard to read grrr help i need to auto correct from now on
@Enchanted_tales_from_Shadow2 ай бұрын
I can't read anything
@JaneDoculan-n7g5 ай бұрын
Your garammar is bad😂😂😂😢😢
@MinaFromHELLАй бұрын
Speak for yourself
@Mimi12chaib4 ай бұрын
Too many spelling words welpp-😭😭
@Mimi12chaib4 ай бұрын
*"gays"*??! Is it guys or what i think it is???! 😭😭
@MilliePickup042 ай бұрын
The song nooooooo dose not match
@Moonstone116 ай бұрын
The spellings 💀✋ help-
@shelly_thedinosaur12 ай бұрын
Help the spelling💀
@rileyallen31452 ай бұрын
english might not be thier first language.
@blckpnklvr.26 ай бұрын
I couldn’t finish the video because of all the terrible spelling mistakes.. it hurts to watch. 😔 No hate!