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02:14 - Slow pacing and filler content
05:02 - Forced humour
07:56 - Shallow magic systems
11:42 - Miscommunication as conflict
13:24 - Info-dumps
15:41 - Poor character development
18:47 - Gratuitous sex and violence
21:01 - Poorly executed tropes
25:04 - Forced romance
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