-Emphasized the importance of planning. -Spend at least 20 (out of 60) minutes planning. If this is slightly over then it's okay so long as you write more efficiently. If you fail to plan, you're planning to fail. Quality>quantity. They are looking for a focussed, well-structured argument (see front cover of booklet). -When you see the question, do NOT change the wording of the question. Answer it directly. In this case, the 'hook word' is "values". -Annotation tip: only highlight adjectives and adverbs. This is often where the author gives an evaluative statement. -It is important to consider the form. In this case, it is IMAGINARY and not real. (why? did he know them well? does answering those improve my understanding?). From skimreading it, 'notable contemporaries' (what does society consider valuable socially and culturally) and the gender and socio economic status (woman not involved in conversation? owns an estate=wealth? how is wealth divided? economic system? social class?) and dynamics could offer a way in. But the woman is being discussed=she is notable. -When planning your response, it MUST be relevant to the question's wording, is focussed and easy to read. Will update tomorrow...
@mary-annannan52163 жыл бұрын
When I first applied to Oxford I got rejected. I was so frustrated because I felt I received little help with preparation/advice and tips about the process and revision methods. I didn't give up and this year I tried again. All I did was constantly watch ur videos on loop and do practice paper after practice paper. When people say you can't revise for the HAT I'll point them to your videos because their honestly so helpful, especially when you go to an underperforming school!! These videos are the reason why I got in this year :)
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
It's really kind of you to say this! Huge congratulations to you for persevering!
@caitlincharlotte24194 жыл бұрын
This has been so incredibly useful! Making notes throughout it I feel a lot less scared about facing the HAT test now. The way it's always explained on this channel is just so well done and makes it a lot less confusing and daunting when trying to tackle an Oxbridge application. Thank you!
@JesusCollegeOxford15714 жыл бұрын
Great to know! Thank you!
@dannykuhrt91444 жыл бұрын
The discussion of sleep is making me question the amount of US Election night I will stay up for! Terrible timing HAT!
@JesusCollegeOxford15714 жыл бұрын
Agreed! I'm also worried about my productivity on Wednesday!
@luchi71183 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for this video I’m only 15 and I live in Spain but it is my dream to study history at Oxford University and this video is really helpful ❤️
@maisie55113 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much, that was so helpful! Good luck to everyone for Thursday
@ewanwilson57834 жыл бұрын
This has been one of the most helpful videos I have ever watched, not only for the approach to the upcoming HAT test, but also for the approach to any essay based test. Thank you so much.
@JesusCollegeOxford15714 жыл бұрын
You're very welcome! Thanks for the kind comment
@linussteinmetz31173 жыл бұрын
I've never before watched a more helpful and transparent video on a part of the application process. Thanks!
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@jasonmuiruri Жыл бұрын
I've come back to this video for months and I think I'm finally ready and confident to take my test. Thank you so much for this, I am about to take my test.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 Жыл бұрын
Good luck!
@finnmenich60652 жыл бұрын
The countdowns approaching for my exam this year. This has been really helpful! Thank you!
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Good luck!
@morningdew72gh1111 ай бұрын
watching this the night before my HAT, wished I found it sooner but nonetheless very helpful
@JesusCollegeOxford157111 ай бұрын
Good luck!
@Wallace4326611 ай бұрын
Best of luck as well
@watchmedo6354 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much, this has been so useful! I've been going over practice papers and was feeling demotivated so I'm so happy I stumbled across this and made notes. Thanks!
@watchmedo6354 жыл бұрын
Also, do you know if we are able to use extra time or rest breaks that we qualify for as we would in a normal exam? Thank you!
@JesusCollegeOxford15714 жыл бұрын
@@watchmedo635 Thanks for your comments. You should be entitled to extra time if you qualify for it. You'll need to contact your test centre urgently to arrange for this. Also, let the College you're applying to know about this, if you haven't already. They can make adjustments for the admissions process.
@watchmedo6353 жыл бұрын
Good luck everyone! ✨
@eduardaregufe10373 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for the video! As a Brazilian student, I was unsure about how the exam would work, but this really calmed me down. Good luck for those who are taking the test today! We’ve got this :)
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Good luck to you too!
@milo28794 жыл бұрын
that was absolutely awesome. super helpful, thank you so much. wow, im shocked at how amazing that was, really appreciate it
@JesusCollegeOxford15714 жыл бұрын
You're welcome! Thanks for the kind words!
@mollylosty4958 Жыл бұрын
This video is a life saver thanks!! I have the HAT in two days and I'm excited to see what the source will be. Do you have any final tips? In particular, I am not sure how assertive I should be in my answer. For example should I be using phrases such as 'this could show', 'this lends credit to the idea that', 'this seems' etc? Or should I be more confident in my phrasing by using phrases such as 'this shows', 'actively illustrating that' etc? Thanks again!
@JesusCollegeOxford157111 ай бұрын
Good luck! And, good question! You should lean towards clarity. So avoid "It could be argued..." in favour of "I argue..." Phrases such as "this could show" are fine, however, if there is some ambiguity in the source. You don't have to be completely forthright, as in: ""The source definitely means..."
@user-iz2yn2lb9m4 жыл бұрын
These admissions videos have been fantastic. Thank you for all of the work that you have put into demystifying the application process! With regards to the caveat section, would this essentially be justifying why the essay elided a theme within the text (eg technology) because the focus on, for example, gender was more important (thereby avoiding a shopping list)? Is that the focus of the caveat section? Thanks!
@JesusCollegeOxford15714 жыл бұрын
Many thanks! Yes, a caveats section makes clear to your readers that you are aware of alternative explanations, but do not feel they are as powerful as your own. That way you strengthen your position. So introducing caveats is absolutely not sitting on the fence, but convincing your readers that not only are you right, but any alternatives are wrong!
@BlueBlockStudios10 күн бұрын
Thank you so much, this was really informative!
@JesusCollegeOxford15719 күн бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@aideon1303 жыл бұрын
Thank you for this video, very helpful for understanding the HAT. So essentially are we picking one theme, for example gender, and arguing why it is more important than others such as hierarchy? That’s just the one area with the structure I’m still getting my head around!
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
You don’t have to reduce to a single dominant theme, but do emphasise those themes you feel are most important.
@sukemckegney67712 жыл бұрын
So so helpful & incredibly articulated - thank you so much for this!
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Great, thanks!
@deanmatthewclegg28 Жыл бұрын
Really thorough, clear and helpful. Thank you.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 Жыл бұрын
Pleasure. Thank you!
@hannahturner36594 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much for this extremely helpful video! You mentioned that we should not write about specific historical perspectives on the subject in the source, however, if we take a more general approach to this, for example "a revisionist/functionalist/intentionalist historian may argue that ...", would this improve our marks or is it unnecessary? Many thanks
@JesusCollegeOxford15714 жыл бұрын
Demonstrating knowledge of historiography is not required, so will not directly affect your marks if you refer to revisionism, functionalism etc. But, you can use these ideas to deepen your analysis: "The author seems conflicted. On the one hand he imputes a great deal of agency to the characters discussed, but he also betrays a more fatalist narrative, where impersonal social and economic forces determine behaviour."
@charlietierney88384 жыл бұрын
How significant is the provenance of the source? Should we include a separate paragraph on it or attempt to integrate it throughout our answer? Great video. Thanks.
@JesusCollegeOxford15714 жыл бұрын
Thank you for your message. Provenance is usually important, but depends on the question. In the case covered in this video, provenance does matter -- it is a man writing a fake dialogue, he is clearly someone that associates with nobility, he clearly has aspects of a classical education etc. These sorts of elements of authorship can be used throughout the essay to add depth of analysis when describing how the author describes the social and cultural values of his community. You could keep this analysis to a stand alone paragraph, but I would have thought it is relevant to multiple points and therefore is best woven into the fabric of your case.
@avisaluja66784 жыл бұрын
Thank you for the great video! Do you have any exemplar essays or paragraphs we could use as an indicator of how we should be writing/structuring? Really want to avoid creating a shopping list!
@JesusCollegeOxford15714 жыл бұрын
There are sample essays for the ELAT test that are a helpful guide: www.ox.ac.uk/admissions/undergraduate/applying-to-oxford/tests/elat
@rebeccamyers91503 жыл бұрын
Thanks for the really helpful video :) In terms of provenance/caveats, I was wondering whether it would be best to try to thread them in throughout each theme paragraph, or to have a whole separate paragraph for them at the end. Also, if I have a separate caveats paragraph, do I still need three thematic paragraphs? Or would a caveats paragraph be much smaller?
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
You can address caveats after each theme. That can work well. You just need to be careful with time management. It may be more efficient to concentrate all caveats into a single paragraph. Either way, provided you address caveats and explain why you nonetheless think they do not defeat your thesis, all will be well.
@mary-annannan52164 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for taking the time to make these videos. I was wondering how long I should spend on each paragraph for an intro , 3 thematically arranged paragraphs, a provenance paragraph and conclusion?
@JesusCollegeOxford15714 жыл бұрын
You've got an hour for the test, of which at least 20 mins should be spent reading. That leaves at most 40 mins for the essay. Introductory paragraphs usually take the most time, because you need to summarise your entire case. Everything else will be much quicker to write. Key thing is to plan before you write. Even if you only leave 20 mins for writing, if you've planned well the writing will be quick and easy.
@jennykelly72734 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for the help! So if we do the past papers/check with the mark schemes, watch the UNIQ video and look around for other sources to practise with, is this enough? And do you have recommendations for somewhere to find sources?
@JesusCollegeOxford15714 жыл бұрын
That would be very good preparation. To go further, you should pick up an academic journal article (the kind that undergrads have to read) in a subject that interests you. For instance, if you're applying for medicine, look up articles in the Lancet or BMJ.
@mrkrabkrab54384 күн бұрын
Hi matt, I had one question on outside knowledge in terms of the HAT. Ideologies and concepts like liberalism, capitalism, or socialism- if I was to label someone as a socialist (and perhaps delve into a tiny bit of what actually being a socialist means), is that using outside knowledge? Where do you draw the line with outside knowledge, if it is fairly obvious?
@JesusCollegeOxford15714 күн бұрын
That likely would be using outside knowledge, yes. It's also quite unlikely to fit. The historical sources used for the HAT tend to be from pre-industrialised countries, and often come from long in the past. A term like "socialist" could be anachronistic and inappropriate.
@Annie71713 жыл бұрын
Dear Sir, If you end up having to read my work, I am THOROUGHLY SORRY :'DD I feel like I did unfathomably poorly on this one. Oh well :(
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
It's a really tough test, and pretty much everyone thinks they've under-performed. Keep your head up! At least you've had the guts to stretch yourself. If it doesn't work out, you've lost nothing and have nothing to be ashamed of.
@Annie71713 жыл бұрын
@@JesusCollegeOxford1571 That's true, I'll try to stick to this outlook! Thanks :)
@amphoramorph28562 жыл бұрын
This is super helpful! Quick question - would you include the definitions in the introduction, or have them as an entire separate paragraph?
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
You don’t want an overly long introduction, so may be best having a separate paragraph for any definitions. Thanks!
@archiealderdice1852Ай бұрын
Hi, was wondering if you have produced a similar video for the PhilAT, if not I think it would be incredibly helpful. Thanks in advance.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571Ай бұрын
Not yet! I would like to, but probably won’t be able to in time for this year’s test. Be sure to practice as many past papers as you can.
@youaretotallyright3686 Жыл бұрын
anyone watching right now- good luck!!!!!!!!!!
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 Жыл бұрын
Good luck!
@jonathantiley26814 жыл бұрын
Hi Matt, thank you for the very helpful and informative video. When structuring the answer is it best to structure the answer by themes or simply track down the text chronologically?
@JesusCollegeOxford15714 жыл бұрын
It is typically best to adopt a thematic structure that is connected to the question. EG: Introduction > deconstruction of the question > social values > cultural values > author provenance > conclusion.
@c.h.95472 жыл бұрын
Just took the test this morning, thank you for the guidance 🙏.
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Best of luck!
@herewardhill22954 жыл бұрын
Thank you for this video! I found it really helpful. You mentioned including caveats as part of the essay structure. I was wondering if these are included at the end of every thematic paragraph and what exactly is a caveat? Is it just acknowledging other factors that could have been included but explaining why they aren't as convincing? Also, is the ordering of your main body paragraphs important in this essay?
@JesusCollegeOxford15714 жыл бұрын
You can either include caveats at the end of every thematic paragraph, or bundle them all together before your conclusion. In a short essay like this, I'd be tempted to do the later, as it's more efficient. Yes, caveats are, as you nicely put it: "acknowledging other factors that could have been included but explaining why they aren't as convincing" Yes, the ordering of your main paragraphs is important. Try to order them in a way that makes sense to a reader. Imagine you're telling a story with beginning, middle and end. The first point made leads to the second then the third. One common technique is called a Funnel Structure, where you start with the largest range of analysis (society, for example), then funnel to more micro-level analyses: society > culture > individual.
@herewardhill22954 жыл бұрын
@@JesusCollegeOxford1571 Thank you for clarifying the use of caveats and the importance of paragraph structuring. I saw on a previous comment that a thesis statement is valued in a short essay. Can this statement be part of your introduction when you detail what your argument is?
@deimossy11 ай бұрын
Going through every single bit of material befofe my test in 3 hours! I'm convinced my heart and brain no longer exist 😭 (Also, last minute question, are we tested on what we're able to identify and expand on it? Or how well we identify something (even if its not everything) and expand on it?)
@JesusCollegeOxford157111 ай бұрын
Good luck! You wouldn't need to identify everything relevant. You need to respond to the question directly and fully. But you would not need to cover every possible point of relevance. Curating what you think are the most important points will be better than trying to cover everything thinly.
@deimossy11 ай бұрын
@@JesusCollegeOxford1571 thank you so much :), one follow up. In your video, you mentioned how we can say "while the essay hasn't discussed x, it is not as important as y", or well any refined form of that. Is that truly necessary, as in, will that bring up our grade? I'm worried I won't be able to think of an alternative argument
@JesusCollegeOxford157111 ай бұрын
That can help, but is not essential and won’t necessarily affect your grade. So, don’t worry if you can’t.
@frankdandrea26792 жыл бұрын
For the caveats is it more optimal to have them throughout like an evaluation of every point, or is it better to have them in a separate section before a conclusion?
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Either way can work well. It can make sense to evaluate each point in turn, so that your readers have your own analysis fresh in their minds. The ultimate goals are clarity and persuasiveness, so you need to decide which style you think best obtains these goals for you.
@okthankyou-i2m6 күн бұрын
hi matt, I have my HAT coming up. unfortunately over the last month or so i have been in an almost constant state of dissociation / 'brain fog' due to chronic anxiety that i won't have medication for until after the test. this has massively reduced my ability to write essays- whilst attempting to practise the HAT, i have barely been able to start my answers. i am worried that i am not in a good enough position to get an offer given the likely outcome of my HAT whilst this is the case, although the other areas of my application are very strong (as this was not a problem when doing my gcses / a level prediction exams), so I was wondering what weighting the test is given when choosing applicants? and whether it would simply be better to just apply next year given this is the case? thank you so much for the video!!
@JesusCollegeOxford15716 күн бұрын
I'm sorry to read that. I wish you all the best with it. The HAT is important, but other data including the submitted work and school grades are also important. You could contact the admissions officer at the college you apply to and inform them of this. May be best if it comes from a teacher, as corroboration. Admissions officer contact details can be found if you click on the relevant college name here: www.ox.ac.uk/admissions/undergraduate/colleges/a-z-of-colleges
@lishanzou99614 жыл бұрын
This is an incredibly useful video! Will candidates be selected base on HAT marks or the actual written responses in HAT? Is it possible that a candidate that gets low mark still be considered becuase she/he shows some potentials or historical skills in the HAT? Thanks!
@JesusCollegeOxford15714 жыл бұрын
It is possible for candidates to be considered, despite low marks on the HAT. One scenario is if a candidate is applying despite demonstrable educational disadvantages. Another scenario is if a candidate is distracted during the HAT yes, or their performance is otherwise impaired. Nonetheless, the HAT is a good predictor of who is shortlisted for interview, and well worth practicing. Good luck!
@Natalie-gv8my4 жыл бұрын
Thank you for this amazing video! Where best should the limitations of the source go? And would arguing vehemently for a certain point make it sound as if we are not aware of the source's weaknesses or would it make it a stronger argument, as suggested by the caveat section?
@JesusCollegeOxford15714 жыл бұрын
There's no absolute formula to structuring an essay. But, I'd be inclined to discuss weaknesses towards the end, because you want to set out your strongest points first, before acknowledging weaknesses. Imagine you're selling a new product -- you wouldn't start a presentation by explaining everything it can't do! Vehemence is tricky to interpret. We want an argument to be bold and convincing. But you must also admit nuance and show analytical sophistication. Vehemence could imply closed-mindedness, which is definitely not advisable.
@Natalie-gv8my4 жыл бұрын
@@JesusCollegeOxford1571 Thank you so much for all the help!
@elliottagg494Ай бұрын
super helpful video - really simple question, is the HAT written (ie pen and paper) or typed? literally can’t find this anywhere so any response would be greatly appreciated 🙏🙏
@JesusCollegeOxford1571Ай бұрын
Thanks! I believe the HAT is typed these days.
@sofiaripatti85932 жыл бұрын
Taking the HAT and TSA tmrw - SO NERVOUS!
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Good luck!
@Tom-c5z2b Жыл бұрын
I have the HAT next Friday and I’ve done most of the practices. A couple of history teachers at my school have taken a look at them for me and given me general advise, but I was wondering if there’s a way to get an accurate assessment of what mark I would have got. Do you have any advice on how to judge how good my responses are?
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 Жыл бұрын
It's not easy to mark your own work with the HAT I'm afraid. If you look at the marking schemes, on this website, they should give a good idea of what the examiners are looking for: www.ox.ac.uk/admissions/undergraduate/applying-to-oxford/guide/admissions-tests/hat#content-tab--3
@tristanbraun28702 жыл бұрын
Can one make a reference or a comparison to pieces like the bible: seeing the way women are portrait in the source would match biblical beliefs?
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
You won’t be given credit for demonstrating knowledge. So unless you’re drawing on something that’s in the sources, I would probably suggest you don’t provide extraneous information.
@RekhaShukla-y8h2 күн бұрын
It is impossible for me to obtain a reference letter from my teachers, as the school refuses to register as a centre and the teachers refuse to provide one independently, does Oxford University consider such circumstances? And can I apply without a reference letter?
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 күн бұрын
I think there are ways around this. Please contact the college admissions officer at the college you intend to apply to. You can find their contact details if you click on the relevant college name here: www.ox.ac.uk/admissions/undergraduate/colleges/a-z-of-colleges
@avacyn20004 жыл бұрын
Really Informative! Thanks so much :)
@JesusCollegeOxford15714 жыл бұрын
Glad you like it! Thank you
@christiankim50973 жыл бұрын
Is it better to quote the text within the analysis portion of the essay, or would paraphrasing suffice?
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Paraphrasing is usually sufficient, provided your paraphrasing is accurate. Occasionally if you wish to pick up on a specific nuance of language then quoting would be better.
@caitlinem28782 жыл бұрын
Thank you for this! If you read a source and can interpret many points from it, and some of these points contradict eachother, could you suggest that this is a limitation of the source? As due to the speculative nature from it, the conclusion that it is …… (depending what point you make) is indefinite?
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Yes, for sure. Just be careful, because it's always possible to say that a source can be interpreted in many ways, but ultimately you are being asked for your interpretation of these sources. So, at some point you need to make a determination, even if you sensibly admit that many other determinations are possible.
@caitlinem28782 жыл бұрын
@@JesusCollegeOxford1571 ah brilliant thank you for the clarification!
@sumitup8109 Жыл бұрын
@@JesusCollegeOxford1571 Hi, although this is an old video hopefully you can answer this question because I was a bit confused. Can you and should you describe the limitations of the source or your argument? Thank you :) .
@shenluo49504 жыл бұрын
Great video. Should we have a thesis statement for our answer?
@JesusCollegeOxford15714 жыл бұрын
Yes, a thesis statement at the start and finish of your essay can be very helpful for your readers.
@shenluo49504 жыл бұрын
@@JesusCollegeOxford1571 Great, thank you :)
@uchihaitachi98352 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much for the video sir. I just have a small doubt, I am from India and was not able to opt history as my major subject due to personal reasons. So can i still give HAT , even after having science as a major subject. Also to clear myself i am studying in school.
@alexgoodbody2 жыл бұрын
This is very helpful, thank you! Do you think it is better/clearer to quote or paraphrase when using evidence from the source? Thanks.
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Yes that is often a good way to maintain accuracy. Just be sure to analyse the quote and link it to your overall argument.
@patrickryce12254 жыл бұрын
Is there a pass mark for the test or is it just marked in accord to other candidates marks?
@JesusCollegeOxford15714 жыл бұрын
It is marked relative to other test takers, so there's no pass mark.Marking schemes are provided on our website, like this one: www.history.ox.ac.uk/file/650651 These give a good indication of what strong, middling and weak performances look like.
@alexgoodbody2 жыл бұрын
When writing a definition to prompt words in the question, should you define it relating to themes in the source or decontextualise it and use your own general definition?
@jamesfife72652 жыл бұрын
i'd say break it down into themes that you want to talk about, definitely keep it in context and essentially use the definition to outlay what your paragraphs are going to be on. Good luck for tomorrow.
@cheemaskillz49352 жыл бұрын
Those annoying politicians on TV who don’t answer the question. Erm most of them are Oxford graduates…
@frankdandrea26792 жыл бұрын
Do you get marks for discussing provenance? For example Nature or Date etc
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Provided you are not just reciting facts, then it can be helpful to analyse who, where, how a source was compiled.
@frankdandrea26792 жыл бұрын
@@JesusCollegeOxford1571 I really appreciate all your input on both the TSA and HAT before the exam on Thursday!
@yu-xuanchu86533 жыл бұрын
good video but can u like, make it shorter, more to the point like 1 hour is too long.