The Pen (Award winning short film at AFF 2023)

"This is a story about a very special pen called Max and a very broken young man named Samuel. Max is a sort of pen with a rare magic of consciousness and Samuel is a sort of young man with severe anxiety and depression. He believes academic success is the only success in life. He failed his tenth standard exam twice in a row. As Samuel heads possibly towards his third failure in a row, Max must deliver him to his true destiny or Samuel could be a victim of his own adamant belief. He is one failure away from stepping up the noose. But can a pen succeed where Families have failed?"
Starring : @ponio.dora @joram_manna , Joram Rempui , Joram Ania
Director, Cinematographer, Editor : @joram_jonah
Written by : @dusupai
Asst. Director: Joram Nana
Huge thanks to Jompi Ete for sharing her arts and Gyamar Nanam for helping us with both arts and the art gallery. This film would have been incomplete without the help of these two brilliant artists.
Also a big thanks to my big family for helping me out whenever I needed them.
Music : where words ends by @Robert Gromotka - Topic
Aero by ‪@tisakorean8112‬

[@unbeliebubble9853]

I'm a pre-med graduate. Honestly my entire college life was never fun to me. Why? Because it mentally drained me. Also it's not my line of what I'm good at and my parents chose this course for me. I have no choice but to obey them. I just counted the days till the end of graduation for it to be over. Good thing that there's my friends who makes my life fun but when I return home, I became sad again. My dreams and passion is opposite to what my parents want. I love art and anything related to creativity. Even if the piece I make is being done in a month, or year, I didn't complain because I simply love what I am doing. Now, I'm healing and heading towards my pursuing of my artist life!!! Academics is not the only way to succeed in life. Everyone has different talents, abilities, & hobbies. Don't chose the way for which you are not made for, it will lead you no where. And don't listen to toxic societies that brings you down. Just breathe in, breathe out, believe in yourself and never give up!!

[@Joramjonah]

❤️❤️❤️‍🩹

[@mairaraffles4041]

I am sorry but you don't have to "Obey them" when it comes to your life selections. You are the one who is going to be stuck with a carrer you don't like. I work in IT. My co-worker finished med school to please her parents, and then went to work in IT security because she hated the medical profession. Don't waste your time. Pick something you are passionate about, else you will be misserable doing something you don't enjoy.

[@maheshgiva8741]

Very well thought you have. I am, too, suffering with same problem. I don't like academics. Parents are just forcing every children to get high score in exams, and the feeling we feel is very robotic and heart colding. We just do is to scream silently.

[@XiiXiByNikki]

❤ HAPPY FOR YOU 😊

[@Bat_Boy]

C + E = O The challenge and the effort are more important than the outcome (success or failure). Many successful people have only succeeded once, but failed many times. They found joy in the effort (pain, suffering, sacrifice). The obstacle is the goal.

[@Cassandra5518]

I was in tears as I watched this excellent short film. Education is in crisis in almost all parts of the world and desperately many children are falling victim to pointless requirements. There are not enough and appropriate teachers to discover and support individual potential. Perhaps parents could give their children more care and love if they, the majority, were not struggling to make a living while others ( the exploiters) are swimming in money.

[@Joramjonah]

Hard truth as to how the world works 💔

[@aldinlee8528]

Academics are stressed over skills, out of misplaced notions of success. Parents are right to guide their kids into careers/jobs which will sustain them financially, as opposed to those which while they may be soul fulfilling have no reasonable prospects for providing sufficient income for a family. Yet, parents are not guided themselves, to see that academic course work is not the only path to such jobs. So, we have, like in our politics, two poles pulling our youth and their parents, neither of which for many is the healthiest path forward.

[@viz5215]

I love the fact that the cinematography matches the mindset of the aspirant and what he is going through: "The simple joys of life that blends with the scenery when he outside, doing what he loves and forgetting his problem. The sudden dark setting that depicts his mental struggles at home." The constant show of ⏰ time running out, a mother's love and words of a father who puts his insecurity into his son rather than encouraging him is such a recurring theme for those who give competitive exams. This video is in itself is like a Pen to me that teaches us to expand in our abled field instead of following the queue and to go forward. Beautifully captured and created. . . (To my dear aspirants: do give your best but please remember that no exam is ever bigger than your mental well being and that there is plenty of room for improvements+success in the fields that one can fully understand or enjoy doing the most! Just be a good creator, observer, smart and hardworking enough.)

[@siriusvlog9672]

❤❤❤

[@GYM1231]

Beautifully produced Jonah. Our society need people who understand and support child psychology and potential not just in academics but also art, entertainment and sports like the magical pen in this short movie. Cheers and congratulations! Thank you!

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you Nanam . And a big big thanks to you for your contribution in the film as well ❤

[@andyromat8406]

My tears came out I thought the boy died. in that scene, I can cop with him I love the narration and the script is beautifully written. Hats off to this gem I genuinely appreciate your work. The last scene just makes me happy the director comes himself and gives the film a life❤️

[@Joramjonah]

Beautifully said buddy . Thanks 😊 But the mysterious guy at the end is my youngest brother , the actor from all the best 😄 . It’s okay people often get confused him with me 😁

[@andyromat8406]

@@Joramjonah my gosh, he just looks like you. I got confused, I hope we'll get to see more of these in the coming days ❤️

[@nareshdev4119]

Used in any manner, Pen is always mighter than sword. No person is a born loser, but society's distractions make him a failure. As said, woods are lovely dark and deep, the same way inumerable avenues are present beyond academics. Sky is the limit! Never discourage any person to move towards success. Well-made Short with equally deserved award.

[@Joramjonah]

Beautifully put and thanks alot 😊

[@poniodora]

Watched many times and still it brings tears in my eyes🥺... Thank you Jonah bhaiya for giving me the opportunity and believing in me that I'm capable for the role. It was a great experience working with you and the team... I'm overwhelmed 😳 Congratulations 🎉💥❤ WE NAILED IT 💪

[@Joramjonah]

For a first timer ,You have definitely surpassed my expectations and I am very proud of you . I wish you the very best in your life ,Never change ❤

[@poniodora]

@@Joramjonah Thank you 🥺💗

[@monkeyking7234]

💗💗💗💗💗

[@siriusvlog9672]

Shine On brother Ponio. ❤❤

[@poniodora]

​@@siriusvlog9672 Thank you so much 🥺💗🙃

[@liverwortmosses8495]

Those drop year I took for neet preparation where I went through this rollercoaster ride emotion anxiety depression failure had me reminiscing my dark phase for a moment 😢 thank you for making this !

[@koi-fish2973]

Bhai ka yaad agya dekke.. Pura flashback chala gya kuch samai klye😊 June 18 2017 I lost him. May he rest in heavens glory. Thanks JJ and Team for creating this beautiful master piece (for me it's a master piece).. God bless you and may you have a bright future ahead🌸

[@Joramjonah]

I am very glad that the film has touched you and I hope that your brother is in a better place now . Thank you dear and May God bless you ❤

[@monkeyking7234]

🥺🥺🥺😭😭😭💔

[@ratnaroychoudhury1220]

It is so sad when a soul decides to end this beautiful God given life.due to outward harsh circumstances .There have to be more compassion kindness and love so no one feels so pressurised May your brother who took this drastic step be in light and peace.🙏🌺

[@geoben9801]

We're all good at something. It takes a lot of courage and strength to pursue your dreams. So many obstacles... Both real and imagined. Draw your sword, face the demons, And slay the dragons! There's nothing to fear but fear itself! 💪

[@praisethelord5048]

Such a wonderful work... Your work is so underrated you deserve much more success... And this short movie is well deserved for the award 👍👍👍 congratulations to all the cast and crew members of this master piece...

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you dear ❤❤

[@EuvictoryStudy]

God will always be with us. He will lead us to the right way ....❤❤❤❤

[@calmkate8]

awesome raising of awareness ... so much suicide comes from family/societal expectations. Encourage children's talents, let them blossom in their own time and way. We are all precious

[@jirniingurang3422]

I see there’s a lot of talented person in our state and I’m very proud to be an Arunachali ❤

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you dear ❤

[@estelsaradop492]

❤ A story of hope, something we all need. Youngsters need to know that life gives many chances. Most importantly, what may seem to be a setback or failure is life's way of steering us in a better direction. Thank you for the happy ending.

[@Joramjonah]

❤️❤️

[@MmaduabuchiTabs]

Indeed, many are going through alot. We must learn that challenges doesn't define whom we're, not until we accept defeat. We have to be strong in the phase of challenges, encouraging one another. Many have made mistakes,but every mistake can be corrected. Thank God i was able to stand after going through similar challenges. #MTBs

[@manichairdo9265]

Superb video in every respect. Depicting the inner and external struggles young people face. Showing the result of his decision to keep on anyway is a masterpiece. Greetings from Scotland. 🎉🎉🎉

[@Joramjonah]

I am glad you that you liked my film , thank you 😊

[@sm3296]

As the mother of a son who did take his life, I say love them, believe in them. Watch them to see changes. What you think can never happen in your family, happens. Life is never the same. Corey I miss you my beautiful son. ♥️

[@nataliedoyle4701]

I am very sorry for your loss. May you use your very sad experience to show others parents what they must focus on in their dealings with their children. It is so easy to lose sight of what is most important. I wish you strength. ❤❤❤

[@juliehayne4636]

❤

[@zaaz71]

He is in peace. He wants you to be liberated off the burden. Just tell "God my son is with you for he is well" Guide me too Father and make me free. Aum peace...

[@sm3296]

@@deborahduthie4519 sending you a big hug mama, I so understand.

[@roxanarosado8706]

I also lost my husband 20 years ago by the same way. It’s very sad. I hug you and your family

[@soulful_spectrum7]

Very Heart touching!! Each one of us probably relates to this as we neared exams and carries the expectations of frail shoulders!! Very well written, directed and executed !!

[@brianmccarthy5657]

I cried. I didn't think he'd survive. He did. I believe in MAGIC!

[@iceberg220]

Absolutely amazing story and very well produced movie! I'm producing my first movie, independently, with help of family and friends and your film is such an inspiration for someone like me; thank you!

[@sunitachoudhary4685]

This story is quite relatable with students and young people nowdays. I have also gone through this phase when you are trying but everything arounds you scares you to death. like while I'm driving i suddenly loose focus, while cutting fruits or veggies i don't know how knife goes too close to my wrist and many other things. eventually someone supported me alot, the person also don't know how much he helped me, but I'm really grateful for having them. I cried watching this because this is completely looking like my story quite a months ago. But one thing that is different and about no one talks is that there are some children who only knows about study. from their childhood the only thing they have done is to study. i myself a student who only knows about study and nothing else like I'm very poor in sports, singing, dancing, cooking, art, or any other activity. But when you start failing in the only thing you know, you don't know any other alternative. I was a topper till 10th but from 11th my grades fall drastically and the fear is not failing but what to do after failing because i don't know anything else. and this fear just makes your heart heavier and heavier.

[@vivicohen199]

@sunitachoudhary4685: Hoping desperately you'll come back to check responses to your message .... Some suggestions: horticulture, childcare, working with animals, caring for the elderly, needlework/sewing, apprenticeship in a trade (eg shoe making, watch repair) .... even working in a shop can bring satisfaction and contentment. You could also talk to a sympathetic teacher because it could well be that underlying anxiety is precipitating a sense of failure.

[@sunitachoudhary4685]

​@@vivicohen199Thanks for the suggestion but you know that these things in india are not much considered and seen as failure. I love my parents most and i never want to look like a disappointment to them. Like there is nothing bad in all these things actually they all are pretty good but they don't think like that and to them these are all wastage of time. Gratefully i have a teacher who quite understands my situation. They always guide and help me. They are exactly like the pen in the story, i have no idea what i would had done to myself if they don't come to help me

[@nelsonteron2325]

Kya baat kyaa baat... Man you both are a magical combination..... Boriahhhh...heads up superb

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you so much brother 😊

[@stefyguereschi]

SUCH A TOUCHING STORY,SO BEATIFULLY NARRADED AND EXECUTED. TO ALL THE PEOPLE OUT THERE:UNLEASH YOUR PASSION WITHOUT DOUBTING YOURSELF. NEVER GIVE UP ON YOUR DREAMS THE PEN'THE DREAM'THE FURURE'THE HAPPINESS 💚💛🧡🌞

[@AzharLatif-d4z]

Upper-case typing could never speak louder. The beauty of written words resides in their selection of meaning. Invest in a Dictionary of repute on your work-station. A laptop is much better. Creative writing is a hobby even if you read your own short stories to your friends and relatives. Don't waste postage mailing to headless editors who earn "Lefafas" from favorites.

[@stefyguereschi]

THANK 🌹

[@judyramsdell5997]

You cannot ever give someone enough praise. Think before you speak.

[@ayushkulkarni5378]

Yrr seriously ossom story I liked it very much to be very honest it is speechless how admiring, beautiful it is in his own way Hat's of to this bemesal story ❤❤❤❤❤❤🎉

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you dear , glad you liked it 😊

[@Pinklady-gt7xu]

Very heartouching film. I am watching from Europe Italy. The most important thing is to support our kids in what they are strong,not looking what the neighbours daughter or son does Our children should love what they do in life. There is too much competition in the educational systems and the parents minds worldwide.

[@Tani2828]

I don't usually cry to any movies. But this one is special and too beautiful. It goes deep into my heart. I had a year loss in Btech. My parents were very sad. All my life I had been a good ranker in class. My dad didn't spoke to me for months. I was helpless, lost all hopes in life.I thought of ending my life. But one day a miracle happened. I was on my way to my hostel from Naharlagun. I saw an opportunity. I was always an sport enthusiasts and wanted to represent my country to International level. Ever since that day I have a hope, a reason to live on and now I have been training hard to represent my nation and pursuing BTech too. Recently went for a competition I lost the fight(silver )but not myself anymore. For all of you out there. Don't give up. Academic isn't the only way. Hats off to the team.😄😄

[@Joramjonah]

“Say it louder” Your testimony is an example to all those lost souls out there . Wish you all the best in days to come 😊

[@matthewsanow6365]

I'm a failure student to but it doesn't meant to give up, as there r many reports of students who gave up on this stage n committed suicide etc in a short way to short story movie it tell us not to give up in our life but to choose the good scope which we r good at not in a way where we r talent less As now I'm demanding for more Long movie like this in coming days I'm really not satisfied i want more of this 🖐️🔥

[@Joramjonah]

Don’t give up buddy . Stay strong and good things will happen eventually ❤

[@Rituraj-Ravi]

Bro you've nailed it. ❤ I don't know it's your personal trauma or your skill to show trauma. Either way it's a beautiful piece of art.

[@clickorleave533]

I love every bit of this film. The cinemato, piano pieces, the direction, the story, the concept, all the things.

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you dear ❤

[@magnetdesignandadver]

Great film. Well acted and beautiful scenery. Very inspiring. Keep it up!

[@channelAmazing656.]

OMG, students life came out with ultimate reality.. Hat's off very encouraging movie 🎉🎉🎉👏👏

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you 😊

[@apbohham9291]

Wow... This is really a heart touched and inspiring short story 👌😌❤🤍love it❤ And without forgetting bro Dora your acting was out of words 🤐❤too good👍😇 may God continue to use you and bless you more In future🙏 I really love watching this video❤

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you 😊

[@user-jg2lb4xo9p]

We fight this every single minute of our lives... Keeping him ticking every hour ... every minute is so so tasking... i don't know when I will give up... Life has become so bleak... hugs your way guys...all of you...out there...all of you tat suffer...that scream silently..... .. a mom...

[@harjyras7557]

After watching the film, I noticed that the cinematography was particularly striking. The camera angles, framing, and lighting were used to great effect to convey the mood and emotions of the characters. For example, the use of close-up shots during intense moments helped to create a sense of intimacy and tension between the characters. The visual style of the film was also noteworthy, with a muted color palette that added to the overall melancholic tone. The sound design was also impressive, with a well-crafted mix of dialogue, music, and sound effects. The dialogue was clear and easy to follow, and the music helped to set the mood and tone of the film. The sound effects were also used effectively to create a sense of realism and immersion. In terms of narrative structure, the film was well-paced and engaging. The plot development was well-executed, with a clear beginning, middle, and end. The storytelling techniques used in the film were also effective, with a mix of flashbacks and present-day scenes that helped to create a sense of depth and complexity. Symbolism was also an important element of the film, with recurring motifs and metaphors that added to the overall meaning and impact of the story. For example, the pen itself was a powerful symbol of hope and redemption, representing the possibility of change and growth. In conclusion, “The Pen” is a well-crafted short film that effectively uses cinematography, sound design, narrative structure, and symbolism to create a powerful and engaging cinematic experience. My thesis statement for this analysis is that the film uses a combination of visual and auditory elements to explore themes of hope, redemption, and the power of human connection. John harjy Ras,

[@kayray4858]

I was bullied every day at school I only had one friend. My daughter never knew, she has loads of friends no enemies, and very happy and is very intelligent.🥹My grandchildren have loads of friends no enemies and very happy. They don’t know how awful my life was, because I went to college and university, I am now a registered Midwife. My life is wonderful. If anybody reads this please don’t give up, life really is amazing..🥹🥹

[@DingleDingleCasil196]

When we were younger, most of us experienced this kind of life, especially if you’re a love child, your parents meant they’re advising you the right way for your future life, the love and respect for them you’ve followed what they wanted you to be, the realization was too late enough to follow the path you wanted to be, you just go on and figured it out that you can please them with what they wanted you to be. The maturity will give you the chances to do what you love to do, it’s not too late, just think “life is full of surprises”. Beautiful story, thanks for sharing. God bless.

[@udopeepeace2118]

So beautiful & encouraging.I love it.short indeed but powerfully educative.

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you 😊

[@ridonakavlogs]

Tears rolling down as I type these: The message this movie wants to convey is sooo deep that People who really faced or went through such situations will find themselves crying buckets of tears. Lucky are those whose parents recognise the potential in their children letting them decide their future rather than giving lectures on how poorly their children have performed in the academic field. I really wish our education system to take a turn and give space for thé unique talents and skills. I wish every parents to see the potential of their children not only in academic fields but also in extra curricular activities. To all the people out there: Unleash your passion without doubting yourself. People might mock you for the grades you score but they would be wowed in future when they’ll see you shining💜 Never give up on your dreams ✨ Note: Suicide is not the only way out✨🫂

[@Joramjonah]

Annyu this is so well written ❤️❤️

[@suomotophoenix3450]

M speechless....everything is so aesthetic n intensify ❤❤❤❤....more recognition needs for this kind of talent film makers ❤❤❤...we want 3 hours durations movie like this cinematic n story with local dialects....damn authenticity ❤❤❤...God bless

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you so much dear , it means a lot ❤😊

[@suomotophoenix3450]

@Joramjonah bro pleasure is mine ...!!!😇

[@normanswazo8586]

A powerful message! Our societies these days put so much emphasis on examinations that they forget the importance of learning and a student’s passion for life that always exceeds the boundaries of the formal classroom. So much for progress…. I’ll take the days of the 1950s and 1960s with limited teaching resources, blackboards and chalk, over today’s technology any day.

[@Hajmola-r5u]

Cinematography, Screenplay, Directions as well as Actors are did great job 🎉

[@alokachishi2208]

How relatable! Thank you for producing it. 🧡🧡🧡

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you for watching 😊

[@MWTH37]

Excellent short film very touching and sends a great message "Never Give Up"

[@higiotacho750]

Beautiful story... Ponio, you did very well

[@poniodora]

Thank you Pacho 🤗💗

[@taitachung8083]

I also one of participant But after seing this feeling like this is the one! Congrats to all the team THE PEN 🖊. Keep it up....❤...

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you buddy , I wish you all the best for the next one 😊

[@taitachung8083]

@@Joramjonah hoping for the opportunity to meet with you with your work and ideas.😇

[@jessicajae7777]

i just wanted to hug him. hes an artist which is automatically a success. hes already succeeded. whoever instilled in him that only school success will lead you there also designed the failure that is the american school system. Academics need a revolution. where arts music and health come first and foremost. an artist is the most successful person on earth. we would still live in caves without art. art is the wheel....

[@Truthtouch-ke4yv]

Hm.. This shows the Truth of how Love is important and how lack of Love inside Family can ruin someone. Love each other, never become opposite. It was a pleasure to watch this. God bless You All.. 🙂❤️

[@Joramjonah]

Beautifully written and I am glad you liked it ❤️

[@minglandi9201]

❤❤❤❤❤❤ such a heart touching story. A beautiful real struggle story

[@TamTran-vw7zm]

Well Done, you. You have this old writer in tears. Many many people could use a pen such as this. Perhaps you have given it to us? Thank you.

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you dear , I am glad that you liked my film ❤

[@AZ.december25]

It's great short film*. Nature,Student&Life*.

[@thedumbkid]

One of the best short films I have ever watched . To have such a deep emotional toll in me in just mere 15minutes really tells how good of a artist you are . Beautifully crafted . Thanks for making such good short films .

[@jehamburg3110]

Wowwww... what a great story and message! Thank you for this beautiful and important work! Greetings and love from Hamburg, Germany!

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you dear ❤️😊

[@hadiechen-cn8es]

people are struggling for their life,, please be kind, Remember ALL people are STRUGGLING TO SURVIVE!❤️

[@KeshavVirochan]

Wow 😳😳 , you earned a life long viewer champ . Never ever stop inspiring, keep shining buddy. God is with you mate. ❤❤❤❤😊😊😊😊

[@danielhanawalt4998]

It's a mistake to try to put everyone in the same box. Not everyone will fit in and some will feel broken and feel like they are a disappointment to those who had certain expectations of them. The only thing parents should expect of their children is for them to find the box they DO fit in and do their best in it. It's important to know that not all in the box will be the same and achieve the same level. True success is finding one's place in life and being content there. It never hurts to strive to become better at something, but it DOES hurt to think that if you don't become the best in your box that you're a failure. Good work on your film. Well written and acted.

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you 😊

[@newlifewithnewhope369]

Beautiful & true story Everyone can connect ❤

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you

[@moksrosii3016]

No words, just too good... You guys did an amazing work... Keep it up!

[@joramdaniel6362]

Thank you for making my home look sooo beautiful❤

[@Joramjonah]

Your home was always beautiful 😄❤️

[@tajumrichi98]

Tearfull story. Truth scripts is the sign of true writer. Great awareness for whole people's of india and specially for arunachalis. My dear friend joram maj bhaijaan your act is commendable. Keep it up bro.

[@rissoapataya3044]

Bravo, great job. Jonah and Pai achi. Proud of you both.

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you Risso Bhai , means a lot ❤

[@xSpellboundx]

I did not even realize tears were running down my cheeks.❤❤❤

[@capbysandeep]

This is unbelievably beautiful. Literally, everything is perfect, the storytelling, the direction, cinematography, acting everything. Kudos to you, you made a brilliant movie.

[@youngken_lakehousestudio8188]

❤ this is just so beautiful. A reminder that we live in a world that is slowly losing its humanity to all kinds of things and social pressure.. School is not the definition of success. Support is what defines success, especially from parents to their kids.

[@JMNYC5]

...a beautifully told story with an important message, and even if it is hard to see clearly when the mind is cloudy, there is a way forward, one step at a time...🧡

[@Joramjonah]

Very well put ❤️

[@jamaicazjpqlrklz]

My observation after seeing the short film was that it had really striking cinematography. The movie's dialogue, music, and sound design are outstanding, establishing the tone and atmosphere. The dialogue is understandable and straightforward, and sound effects enhance immersion and realism. The plot has a well-paced structure with a distinct beginning, middle, and end, and the storytelling techniques, including flashbacks and current events, provide depth and complexity. Overall, the film's storytelling is well-crafted and engaging. A great deal of symbolism was used in the film, with recurring themes and metaphors that improved the narrative's overall impact and meaning. As an example, the pen itself suggested the possibility of growth and transformation while serving as a powerful symbol of hope and redemption. The Pen is a successfully constructed short film that creates an unforgettable and fascinating cinematic experience by successfully combining audio design, cinematography, symbolism, and storytelling. My perspective for this analysis is that the film uses a combination of visual and through sound elements to explore concepts of faith, redemption, and the power of human connection. Jamaica A. Macalisang

[@Khyodatada77]

Words are less to describe this masterpiece. It's wow! 💓

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you buddy , means a lot 😊

[@kghtetkyaing1459]

Heartwarming Story, Beautiful Cinematic.. Great Job Sir.

[@SwagatoChatterjeeFilms]

A truly magnificent film! ❤

[@solpaquibot8418]

an eye opener...a must see for all parents...

[@likhatadap8416]

No words.. @ponoidora an all team you all nailed it.. We would like to see more in near future @ponoidora acting.. Literally im going to watch again an again..

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you buddy 😊

[@SatNiC667-1]

You guys are the reason why i don't loose hope in filmmaking... still trying... love from west bengal..❤

[@vivicohen199]

EXQUISITE!! ❤ Ticks all the boxes for outstanding filmmaking.

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you 😊

[@MelissaLorraineStorm]

I wish I could hug all the people who get bullied and feel like they are a clown and not worth it. - me to me this was intense emotional.

[@tobe-you-tube6612]

Nobody should give so much power to another lifebeing. If you let your self worth on the hand of someone else, you will never be able to give enough love to your own mind and spirit.

[@bhoomikameghanathi1245]

Inspirational short movie ..... By the symbol of pen, people can understand many things ..... Failure is not end of life but it's beginning of success!!

[@allswell5688]

Outstanding Dear ponio(pagar)Dst❤❤

[@poniodora]

Thank you ajing 😅❤

[@allswell5688]

@@poniodora Aaya pa aato Ajing ❤️😁

[@subuampi1885]

Heart wrenchingly beautiful story, executed as beautifully as it has been narrated❤. Hope our people understood the message thats been so sincerely and truthfully put forward.

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you dear ❤️😊

[@siriusvlog9672]

❤❤❤

[@terriarheghan3676]

What an Awesome film. The message is heartbreaking yet necessary. As a mom of 3 young adults I’ve always encouraged not discouraged them to be who they are. And to pursue the careers that they are passionate about. Again, well done!👍🏽❤️🎬

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you ☺️♥️

[@tagerenu8183]

Wonderful work 👍with great message...👌 Many people can relate with the story including me... GBU🍀

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you dear , glad you liked the work 😊

[@NicatQafuroglu]

Heyif buna itirdiyim vaxta. Azərbaycandan girən olsa, bilsin, vaxt itirməyin qaqa)

[@taringyakam6182]

It's commendable that you've tackled such a sensitive topic. The emotional depth portrayed in the film was truly touching, and it serves as a reminder of the importance of compassion and understanding in our society ❤❤❤ BEAUTIFUL

[@ZimTabaLucy-uk8pv]

Thank God...❤❤ it's in Nyishi (tribal) language other than these jabarjasti wala hindi. Keep it up❤❤❤

[@Joramjonah]

😁❤

[@amarachijecinta]

Wow❤, thank you so much that was beautiful

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you , I am glad you liked it 😊

[@sangjowangdithungon9954]

Amazing work.. N very thoughtful particularly theme.. Liked it

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you 🙏

[@TheresaGreen-oq4xe]

The power of mothers You better know God created them. I'm an artist. My mom saw it in me when I was a child, bought me easel, paints and brushes inrolled me in art camp. I put it down for a while. When I turned 50, I picked it up again. It started out looking like nothing much, but I was compelled to do it, and it grow, now everyone loves my art. Now I see what my mom saw she wasn't a touchie, feelie kind of mother, but she gave me my first start.😢

[@keopicat1966]

BEAUTUFULL SHORT FILM

[@techinitin2777]

Lovely excellent work u deserve a million subscriber

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you , means a lot ❤

[@meangreenmememachine2890]

Hands down, best film about Anne Frank 👍🏻

[@hollyc4624]

❤ Thank you for bringing this incredible story to KZbin. This was so beautifully made and such an important topic.

[@sarmisthabanik9848]

Such a touching story ♥️ left me teary eyed... so beautifully narrated and executed 👏delivering such a important message 👏...kudos to the whole team...🎉The cinematography ,acting,BGM everything is on point 👌♥️well deserved... Everyone should watch it ♥️

[@Joramjonah]

❤❤❤❤❤

[@siriusvlog9672]

❤❤❤❤

[@tarunsahoo8430]

Best, I am speech less.🙏❤️

[@mtmunya3188]

A beautiful story immaculately executed ❤️. Kudos to the team !!! 🙌🏻

[@Joramjonah]

Thank you dear 😊

[@raghavendrans5237]

Very powerful message to be supportive of students especially during their hard times. Build their strengths so academics will also improve and students will be happier. Each ones journey is different and please have patience and perseverance and enable to get through their mental obstacles and succeed.

[@coldcanadian1138]

a pen saved me when i was younger

[@Tamingsouls]

Academics take years to suck the soul of artists who find themselves stuck in a 9 to 5 job which could lead to the death of mental health, hence, the increasing suicide rate or drug addiction. Thank you for conveying this message in such a unique depiction!

[@Joramjonah]

❤️‍🩹♥️

[@Tamingsouls]

@@Joramjonah Respect 🙏🌸🌸🌸

[@Joramjonah]

@@Tamingsouls thank you dear 🙏🏻

[@cliverichards9850]

Beautiful film with a heartfelt message,

[@drmichie1179]

Very well made! May you grow more!

[@mmandal-fp1ti]

Great man ...Keep It Up

[@danzylrohyt]

Such a beautiful film. Loved it 🙌🏻👏🏻🔥