Koiwl's Tears (WIP Animatic)

Koiwl has run out of Flesh Starver's Tears, a vital ingredient for his McGuffin potion, and so he goes out to find some.
This animatic was the last assignment of my first semester at Conestoga College. Unfortunately, I wasn't able to fully complete it in time, due to having created a story too long and complicated for the timeframe I was given. Hence, you'll notice that about two-thirds of the images are extremely rough sketches. There are also some smaller details about the animatic that I had to change due to cultural insensitivities (The Flesh Starver wasn't originally called that...), or ideas that didn't work out like I hoped they would (There was going to be a Kraken fight, but it bloated the story too much).
That said, I am proud of what I was able to produce. I'm still studying animation, but I really hope I'll find time to finish this (at which point, I'll unlist this video and link to the reupload).
MUSIC CREDITS:
Magic Escape Room - Kevin MacLeod
What Lurks In The Dark - Dave Deville
Hellfire - Alexander Nakaranda
Mine 4.4 - Radion Nechaev
Open Sea (Folk) - Frank Schroeter
Banger - Alexander Nakarada
Crime Time - Frank Schroeter
Fish In The Sea (feat. Admiral Bob) - Sascha Ende
All of the above music was retrieved from filmmusic.io, under a CC BY 4.0 License.