I can't believe empress theressa 5-minute-crafted her way out of a government execution
@KrimsonRogue2 жыл бұрын
This is now one of my favorite comments ever!
@mackerelmafia28982 жыл бұрын
@@KrimsonRogue Absolute legend, still reading the comments after two and a half years
@Chocobo0Scribe2 жыл бұрын
I’d also say she somehow TroomTroom’d her way out
@messiyer132 жыл бұрын
@@KrimsonRogue Have you read anything worse than Empress Theresa?
@noveltea95932 жыл бұрын
Ohhh burn 🔥 😅
@cyrusphoenix02895 жыл бұрын
I want "im sitting on a throne of books your opinion means jackshit to me." On a t-shirt
@Anyratac5 жыл бұрын
CyrusEros how much would you pay for one
@cyrusphoenix02895 жыл бұрын
@@Anyratac i mean if its something like redbubble it depends on the design or art thats involved 23 bucks is average Also material comes in to mind
@Hopppp5 жыл бұрын
CyrusEros I really like your pfp, what is it?
@cyrusphoenix02895 жыл бұрын
@@Hopppp i think its a vocaloid. I googled guy vocaloid. Ill get back to you about what it is.
@kaidorade13175 жыл бұрын
I would buy that shirt!
@Mels01035 жыл бұрын
Chapter One: I was a cute kid Chapter Four: I skydived thousands of feet with my Coke bottles in my armpits
@t.thomas89195 жыл бұрын
Pacing... where the hell are you?!
@XenRiddle5 жыл бұрын
Legendary...
@BichaelStevens5 жыл бұрын
JRPG logic: Chapter one: find lost kitty Chapter ten: Enter the womb of mankind to kill the primordial God
@NosferatuWickedTTRPG5 жыл бұрын
@@BichaelStevens To be fair you already have a 100 hours in game with JRPGs lol
@ForcedHandleName5 жыл бұрын
She ain't gonna be too cute after she lands.
@mathsucker132 жыл бұрын
Tbh, "Lucy the crackhead who lives under the stairs" is a much more compelling premise and character than whatever this is.
@amonrawya30642 жыл бұрын
I would read a book about Lucy, the crackhead who lives under the stairs.
@thedeepfriar745 Жыл бұрын
Cormac McCarthy could take that character and turn it into an award winning novel
@TheMrMojoRisin67 Жыл бұрын
Sounds like a Nightvale parody character.
@funnynickname1126 Жыл бұрын
@@TheMrMojoRisin67this got a laugh out of me, thank you lmao
@devilishjester7718 Жыл бұрын
New sonic OC game protagonist confirmed
@Gotham_Outlaw5 жыл бұрын
"I'm sitting on a throne of books" *Knowledge is power*
@hydrofalls81545 жыл бұрын
the best part
@sugarm18605 жыл бұрын
Game of Books sounds like such a good show
@thevoidlookspretty70795 жыл бұрын
An Emperor Rogue. How’s that for a royal title?
@Gotham_Outlaw5 жыл бұрын
@@thevoidlookspretty7079 He would be on a Thanos level of power seeing as how Thanos was knowledgeable himself.
@michelsand53995 жыл бұрын
"Heavy is the head, that wears the paper crown." -Krimson Rogue 2019
@hibbityschwibbity62024 жыл бұрын
Moral to the story: Be nice to the critics. Sometimes they're the only ones who buy your book
@BigPuddin4 жыл бұрын
More people have seen this critique than bought that lunatic's book.
@zakai-kaz4 жыл бұрын
The Raddest Chad 🇹🇩
@BigPuddin4 жыл бұрын
@@zakai-kaz Ah, the land of eternal vampires. Lovely place.
@GrumbleBricks4 жыл бұрын
It's either them or the universities
@imveryangryitsnotbutter4 жыл бұрын
These days, the only thing exposure pays for is COVID.
@ponypublications5 жыл бұрын
The line "I was born, I had a good time, I was vaporized by a bomb" would actually be kinda funny in a better book ngl.
@Error403HRD4 жыл бұрын
Actually, I'm using this as a writing prompt now.
@ponypublications4 жыл бұрын
@@Error403HRD Awesome! Someone needs to do it justice.
@jptata31614 жыл бұрын
See that's a good first sentence! I want to read that book.
@angelsartandgaming4 жыл бұрын
I want to put this line in a Guardians of a Galaxy fic cause this seems like a GOTG quote. Rocket: Well, I was born, had a good time, was vaporized by a bomb.
@KaliqueClawthorne4 жыл бұрын
@@angelsartandgaming The mantis(cosplayer) in me : Ohh, you poor little cat. You need a hug.
@JackHallowLantern2 жыл бұрын
I've been working on a book idea for 10 years. Had the idea since I was twelve. Since its conception, I have written, erased, rewritten, and revised my ideas and writing in meticulous and excruciating detail. I was convinced for years that my ideas were stupid, or that my writing wasn't "good enough". If it was less than perfect, it wasn't worth sharing. After seeing several reviews of literature, all of which is better burned in a symbolic fire than read with mortal eyes...I have decided to give my novel the ol' college try, because, dear God in Heaven, anything I write cannot be as bad as this.
@elizabethyoung53042 жыл бұрын
Yeah, watching the reviews in this series I feel vindicated. So, it's back to editing my two novel rough drafts. Hope you have fun as well in your own endeavors @Jack o'Lantern
@thequeenofcringe15852 жыл бұрын
I once got the idea for a story where you have to remove the brain or heart of a shapeshifter in order to kill one, because otherwise the shapeshifter could just heal themselves with the shapeshifting powers. I thought it would make shapeshifters overpowered, but it turns out that they weren’t. Shapeshifters can still die of old age, it just takes much longer than humans. Turns out setting clear limitations and keeping the magic consistent makes a better story.
@TheAdrift2 жыл бұрын
Here’s the most valuable piece of advice I’ve ever gotten: “If you’re worried about whether or not you can ever do something right, don’t be, because there is someone out there CONFIDENTLY doing it wrong as we speak!” 🤣 In all seriousness, the fact that you even acknowledge that you could make a mistake means you’re headed in the right direction. From one writer to another, you got this! 😊
@koppsr2 жыл бұрын
@some rando That is legitimately the best advice I've ever heard. I'm going to print that on a shirt and wear it every god damn day from now on.😎👍👍👍👍
@zamp_gaming2 жыл бұрын
I've been working on mine since freshmen year of high school. It's been 15 years. At least a dozen rewrites, revisions, new ideas, scrapping of old ones. I felt the same as you for so long and kept my writing restricted to just a couple select friends. Not even my husband has read more than a chapter, and that was about two rewrites ago. Books like this give writers like us a much needed confidence boost. There's no doubt in my mind our books will be far better than this dumpster fire.
@Διόνυσος-ξ5ξ5 жыл бұрын
First Image: Jesus has entered the video and sits on a throne draped in the fur of a Dalmatian, surrounded by volumes of man's greatest works and in his hand, he holds man's greatest mistake.
@stoppickingurnose78525 жыл бұрын
This is beautiful.
@elenaobradovic41815 жыл бұрын
This is better Christian imagery than anything in the book itself
@adrianinha195 жыл бұрын
I love this!
@lud34455 жыл бұрын
And a pillow saying just one more chapter
@skyblade74385 жыл бұрын
If it's as comfortable as Krim says, I should try that book chair some time.
@ImportAustralia5 жыл бұрын
"Congratulations Onision, you are no longer the worst writer I've ever read." You're telling me... this is worse than Reaper's Creek. JESUS.
@shosty5755 жыл бұрын
CHRIST
@dillonparker66245 жыл бұрын
Reapers creek was bad because it was a power fantasy fan fic for Greg. Empress Theresa is barely even a story, like there is no real characters or story to speak of. If your story is missing a story, then your story is awful.
@ImportAustralia5 жыл бұрын
@@dillonparker6624 Iunno. This dude's OC is starting to sound like just as much of a power fantasy as Greg's self insert at this point.
@oriihimeno5 жыл бұрын
I honestly can't tell the difference.
@skyblade74385 жыл бұрын
I mean, Theresa doesn't have underage sex.
@whatifgaming16615 жыл бұрын
"I was born. I had a good time. I was vaporized by a bomb." This line would have been very meaningful...if it wasnt from this book.
@ForcedHandleName5 жыл бұрын
That sounds like a really good opening line in a better book.
@jennasyde56774 жыл бұрын
It sounds like it's come straight from Douglas Adams
@CaptainTittus4 жыл бұрын
Sounds like what I would say after being nuked off the face of the earth does this section of the book go into anything related to the nuking of Japan? From what I am getting from everyone is that is a no
@graceanderson87314 жыл бұрын
Interesting perspective. Usually when people draw attention to that line it's to call it funny, but here people deem it one of the best aspects of this story. Just goes to show how everyone is different.
@juanmoreno65914 жыл бұрын
@@graceanderson8731 It's both. It is indeed a line that has a lot of potential as a set up for a story and which a skilled writter could run with for something fantastic. But is also completely absurd in the way it is actually used in this book.
@raikaschieck16342 жыл бұрын
"I was cute as a button" as an opening line would work, if you make the story about that. I had the idea of a girl who won child beauty pageants multiple times, which serious distorts her self image and world view, as she grows up.
@unimpartialobserver Жыл бұрын
What if she grew up, wasn't cute anymore, and was rejected by everyone now that she was of no more use to them?
@janjanbinks1710 Жыл бұрын
@@unimpartialobserver That's a cool premise : Theresa as a child was this talented and gifted child and her family "adores" her since they exploited said talent. They never cared for her outside of how useful she is for them, and so after she grows up she gets intense burnout and falls into denial and shame since she's no longer her family's special girl and they no longer sing her praises or love her anymore due to her intense burnout that makes her useless to them. She struggles with her self worth and falls into deep depression, she sees no meaning to her life now that she's not the family's showpony, and she hallucinaes this extra terrestrial being inhibiting her body and giving her super powers that make her feel special again and make everyone interested in her again. She falls so deep into denial that she can't see her sad reality anymore.
@stratoshine Жыл бұрын
@@janjanbinks1710 why do publishing companies pick up people like the author of this book and not people like you :sob:
@handhelder82310 ай бұрын
@@janjanbinks1710relatable lol
@willpitts522314 күн бұрын
@stratoshine If it makes you feel any better, they didn't. This was self-published.
@reapeashooter24 жыл бұрын
I'd call Norman the YandereDev of literature, but at least he finished his book.
@KrimsonRogue4 жыл бұрын
Shots fired. XD
@ember34114 жыл бұрын
This comment needs more appreciation
@natemanning9244 жыл бұрын
Dude, just turn yourself in. You are a goddamn murderer.
@theedgypenguin40834 жыл бұрын
Okay that was beautiful
@pasiaangelo64424 жыл бұрын
Jesus christ you murdered him.
@RawkLobstah884 жыл бұрын
"I've seen better foreshadowing on the expiration date on my milk" Oh my god this is brilliant.
@fellowhuman88304 жыл бұрын
I'm going to use that for criticism
@beeze-knees4 жыл бұрын
Me: *WRITE THAT DOWN* *WRITE THAT DOWN*
@kenwood_94744 жыл бұрын
That was seriously good!
@left-2-write284 жыл бұрын
I actually choked on my coffee laughing at that. Still disappointing I wasn't drinking milk to make it ironic.
@KaiKrimson564 жыл бұрын
@@left-2-write28 *Milk one day before it expires.
@Snoogen114 жыл бұрын
What Krimson said: "Congratulations Onision, you are no longer the worst author I have ever read" What Onision heard: "I'm so sorry Greg, I was wrong in my initial analyses, and I have reviewed my opinion. You are the most godly and manly writer that ever existed and I really hope you don't throat punch me like 23 star master general president diety arthur did to those airmen".
@user-hanging-at-the-hanged-man4 жыл бұрын
Snoogen11 **those poor airmen who didn’t do anything before I broke his arm and gouged out his eye*
@chongjunxiang30024 жыл бұрын
Please don't drop my jaw like the 14 years old LORD Daniel did to girlfriend father.
@skyblade74384 жыл бұрын
@@chongjunxiang3002 Please allow me the dignity of a magnificent coffin.
@licasabinaandreea23614 жыл бұрын
Please do not defeat me like you did with that school shooter- oh....WAIT
@natemanning9244 жыл бұрын
If you try hard enough, you can turn any comment section into an Onision bad circle jerk.
@rogerroger99522 жыл бұрын
Me: "Yeah, this book is obviously garbage, but it's not much worse than some wattpad stories or fanfictions. Him: "And that's just the first chapter." Me: "Humanity was a mistake."
@bloodrosereaper2099 Жыл бұрын
Almost makes you want to build a time machine, go back to the primordial earth and kick our fishy ancestor back into the ocean before that asshole even thinks about coming on land.
@theflyingspaget Жыл бұрын
Wattpad stories usually written by 10-20 year olds who end up cringing at their work as they improve and move on. This book was released when Norman was about 50. Sure, maybe he'd never written before that, but the series doesn't get any better as it goes on. Wattpad and fanfiction is 100 times better than this mess.
@lunaeons45 Жыл бұрын
@theflyingspaget plus its kinda fun watching writers get better in real time.
@KamiRecca4 жыл бұрын
The cover always strikes me as a woman in a commercial pilots uniform standing on an airfield.
@ZiessRides4 жыл бұрын
I thought the same thing lol
@knshinn24 жыл бұрын
@Crow Theresa And The Magic Railroad
@nickirkland13474 жыл бұрын
I'm 2 mins in... it wasn't?? Edit: I reached the cover analysis... I thought those men on the ground are planes or something lol
@suspicioususer4 жыл бұрын
After closer inspection its suppose to be an Army Uniform. aaaand she's a 5 star General because of course she is
@siluriantides4 жыл бұрын
@@suspicioususer I'M A FIVE-STAR MAN
@Jean-Berry5 жыл бұрын
Onision: "I am the author of the worst book in the history of literature" Norman: *Hold my garbage bag of 11 coke bottles*
@mintchoco6255 жыл бұрын
And the coke ain't from a company, if you get my drift
@LegoManiac_1015 жыл бұрын
Jean Maté Adolf Hitler: “Halte Mein Bier”
@MegaFat15 жыл бұрын
Onision is still probably the worst.
@OneEyeShadow5 жыл бұрын
@@mintchoco625 "Is Pepsi okay?" "No. How am I supposed to snort that?"
@cartoonosaurus5 жыл бұрын
The worst part about the Coke bottles is that she doesn't even drink them, she just dumps the soda on the floor. What a waste.
@songweretson4 жыл бұрын
Wait. "Theresa's a good girl. Theresa doesn't talk to reporters." .... but she was on TV. Which, I imagine, involves talking about reporters.
@LucasDeziderio4 жыл бұрын
You don't understand. She never talked to them. She just stood there. Menacingly.
@onyxrose43494 жыл бұрын
@@LucasDeziderio SHE'S JUST STANDING THERE. MENACINGLY!!!
@alexanderinoa78504 жыл бұрын
Lucas Dezidério Yare yare, you’re really trying to interview me?
@ZorotheGallade4 жыл бұрын
@@onyxrose4349 WEE WOO WEE WOO
@rooksclown3164 жыл бұрын
@@ZorotheGallade Theresa is in the mailbox!
@-niaa3 жыл бұрын
I think, canonically, the officers thought Theresa was just really emotionally attached to the garbage bag, possibly even the garbage in the bag, and could not bring themselves to strip her of her last dignity to bring her comfort trash to her execution.
@-niaa3 жыл бұрын
I think about that garbage bag in this light a lot. She didn’t have a genius escape plan, she just really liked the shape of the coke bottles and collected them for pure joy.
@gabbodelaparrawrites2 жыл бұрын
That's giving too much credit and emotional depth to that man's writing skills. It also sounds like something Prime Minister Whatever would say to make the case for Empress Tee. 😅
@mypasswordsareplottingagai94482 жыл бұрын
Lmaoo 😭😭
@Tcoldsteel2 жыл бұрын
Comfort trash…😂
@KM-hv1jg2 жыл бұрын
“You wouldn’t part a Mary Sue from her trash?”
@noprobsrobs86805 жыл бұрын
"How many of you are there?" "Hundreds." "That's a lot of people." This exchange is so uncanny and hilarious that it's like something a character in a Monty Python sketch would say.
@wolfieinu4 жыл бұрын
@Lassi Kinnunen "And now for something completely different. Coke bottles"
@akaijuinomaha53244 жыл бұрын
I’m pretty sure this entire book is a Monty Python sketch
@CAMSLAYER134 жыл бұрын
I can hear it on Eric idles voice
@kgpspyguy4 жыл бұрын
There actually are SOME concepts in this book that could be really interesting if they were implemented by a competent writer. I like the idea of a child being gifted with cosmic power, and then using that power to win at baseball of all things. That line about "Hal" giving her super strength as it was needed, rather then all at once could've also been interesting if done right. IE That bit where she tries to bend the horseshoes and can't do it until Hal "seems to get the idea." Is actually sort of compelling. I don't know, maybe I'm just desperate to find something positive in all this.
@CAMSLAYER134 жыл бұрын
@@kgpspyguy hey even a blind squirrels is right twice a day. You'd hope that after so many random plot points that go nowhere there'd be /something/ that has potential.
@baileybrian95604 жыл бұрын
"He aimed for wonder woman, and we got Lucy the crackhead who lives under the stairs" LOL
@SallinKari4 жыл бұрын
"You're a wizard Lucy... but we're going to leave you under the stairs."
@joethehero24 жыл бұрын
A.K.A.: Bonkers Betty from ASBR. Outta my way, sperm bank!
@QJ894 жыл бұрын
"Do you have any humility?" "I do not know what that means!"
@PoyntFury5 жыл бұрын
To be fair, even if Onision isn't the worst author, he still has the lovely distinction of being the worst person.
@sorrychangedmyusername35944 жыл бұрын
Jaystation would be equal to him.
@winterwolf69104 жыл бұрын
Neither would Onision to be fair
@souvikmitra61614 жыл бұрын
@leah rose but he has completion in Itookgaypotion I mean Iamjaystation...
@porcirain91434 жыл бұрын
@@souvikmitra6161 yeah he's terrible but as far as I know he hasn't left multiple people with broken self esteem and groom multiple teen agers
@BJWFenix4 жыл бұрын
if you want a worse writer and a barely better human check out brett keane..
@StrawberryNova3 жыл бұрын
...Norman referring to Krimson as being "immersed in fourth rate media" and then directly saying his character is better due to avoiding "THE media" irks me because it implies that not only does Norman refuse to acknowledge the difference between media (books, movies, etc) and THE media (reporters and the like), but that he's okay with making himself look like an idiot for the sake of saying "you're a troll and my waifu OC is better than you." Willful ignorance is annoying.
@Kaanfight2 жыл бұрын
Normal was implying Krimson was just really into independent journalism that’s off the beaten path
@Grim_Sister2 жыл бұрын
Norman also writes that his character hates classical art and architecture (when she visits France). The man won’t know good media if you stole a Rembrandt and hit him with it
@shipper-of-heart88982 жыл бұрын
@@Grim_Sister which is funny because Norman compares his book to some of the greatest writings ever. But what can you expect from a man who compares his character to Stalin and Hitler?
@kevincairo89172 жыл бұрын
@@shipper-of-heart8898 heh, even writing a character comparable to your mentioned people can be great. Tanya from Saga of Tanya the Evil is literally little girl H itler yet it's better written than Norman's waifu oc.
@teslashark Жыл бұрын
Norman is likely actually insane, but never tested himself for scizophrenia or OCD.
@OdaSwifteye4 жыл бұрын
Elderly man writes novel about his OC Lolita Waifu.
@absolutelyyousless76054 жыл бұрын
He even has bad/normie taste in his waifu... -He should have picked monster girls instead.-
@Ashamaxa4 жыл бұрын
@@absolutelyyousless7605 Furry waifu
@snowlee66904 жыл бұрын
@@Ashamaxa no monster fuckers and furries are two different groups, tho they intersect at times aka werewolf
@punchyboi69154 жыл бұрын
Read by English major jesus
@L_mattox8 ай бұрын
@@AshamaxaYES
@misery82644 жыл бұрын
I just looked up Empress Theresa on Goodreads while watching this and almost fell off of my couch because Onisions books are listed in the ''Readers also enjoyed'' section next to it xD
@Jrez4 жыл бұрын
That's perfect. I never thought of finding more "so bad it's good" garbage that way!
@bificommander4 жыл бұрын
"Readers also enjoyed" Does pointing and laughing count as enjoying? I guess it does.
@1redrider1004 жыл бұрын
Pretty sure it’s mostly hate-readers more than anything else. Lol. Doesn’t speak well of either.
@nessyness54474 жыл бұрын
more like "readers also suffered with"
@setlerking4 жыл бұрын
I mean if you’d genuinely enjoy this book you would probably enjoy those too
@DavidArcher_5 жыл бұрын
"Compared to me Hitler will be but a footnote!"
@ryankelley29834 жыл бұрын
Makes it sound like she's gonna be empress of the holocaust 2: electric boogaloo
@Ramash4404 жыл бұрын
AKA when somebody compares you to Hitler but you get offended because Hitler was a pansy compared to you.
@TheThreatenedSwan4 жыл бұрын
It's a matter of indifference to me what a weak western European civilization will say about me
@tomservo92544 жыл бұрын
All I could think of from that line was how in Dune Messiah Paul quite literally makes exactly that statement about himself, but its impact is actually fully appropriate for the book's intent.
@couragew62604 жыл бұрын
Tom Servo I tend to hate it a lot when characters try to downplay a historical figure in some way unless the situation isn’t so much “I’m better than this person” but rather “I might as well be this person with what I’ve done.”
@TheEquestrianGallade3 жыл бұрын
Wait, so Theresa got a boyfriend, broke up with him because he's a two-timer, got a new boyfriend and married him, all in a single chapter in a book this freaking long? Complete with irrelevant bloviating and lack of actual detail? Onision's books had better love stories than that!
@bubbletea62692 жыл бұрын
I don’t know. They both have equal amounts of shit.
@frankisnot11482 жыл бұрын
At least Stones to However the FUCK You Spell That Name was somewhat cohesive and had something that looked like a plot.
@thequeenofcringe15852 жыл бұрын
@@frankisnot1148 not even just Stones to Broken Girl Who Needs Onion to Save Her, but in Lesbian Fetishization and Onion Becomes God too. At least with the lesbian character in Lesbian Fetishization. There’s some semblance of a buildup, even if it’s SUPER UNCOMFORTABLE.
@shipper-of-heart88982 жыл бұрын
@@thequeenofcringe1585 I cant tell what's worse- that or 'Reaper's Creek of a boy who has psychotic episodes and gets into a graphic sexual relationship with a girl two years older that keeps going until shes 18 and hes 16,then he learns he's the product of incestual r*pe between two god siblings and he becomes God in the process and gets physically older, with his gf making a remark of 'awww now you're too old for me' so basically admitting she's a p-do
@thequeenofcringe15852 жыл бұрын
@@shipper-of-heart8898 it’s all horrible
@jesterdicicco97944 жыл бұрын
"Bonus points I don't pay them in exposure I pay them in money" King go OFF!
@jadendafinger4 жыл бұрын
Nat DiCicco you referring to the company that made candy crush?
@GregoryMom4 жыл бұрын
ah yes screaming communist grape
@jadendafinger4 жыл бұрын
GregoryMom It is I also this is actually the sprite for when marx (soul) shoots his laser
@lazylittledragon4 жыл бұрын
A common expression used for first drafts of novels is "Saying your book is bad on the first draft is like saying your cake tastes bad while the ingredients are still on the counter." This book is like if you walked out of the store, dropped your bag of ingredients in the middle of the road, let it get run over by seven cars, took it home and made the cake anyway. Then set it on fire.
@PEDROGARCIA-qj3gr4 жыл бұрын
Exactly, I actually find some lines he wrote pretty funny, even the main character could fit in a dark comedy if all the point with her was being a narcissistic and hypocritical person with superpowers.
@bmiller74194 жыл бұрын
I’m feeling inspired lmao
@justin23084 жыл бұрын
Imagine if someone tried to make a movie of this book. The only way you could is if you put the book on a counter, cut its entire mass into uneven sections, pick a plot point you want, and then look through every section for anything that could work with that plot. Cut everything you find out with scissors, then paste it all in the order you feel works best to make the first draft of the script. You could have maybe 20 different movies from the same source material.
@joshuarieder28654 жыл бұрын
@@justin2308 It may work as a Netflix series following that same methodology. Considering how long it is, it could be a few seasons. And it would probably be better than the book by orders of magnitude, depending on whose hands it gets put into. An interesting way to put it is it could be a sci-fi fantasy with some sections of a slice of life of Teresa Sullivan. Maybe go into how she uses her powers, the consequences of such, her wrestling with the moral implications with herself, her religion, and everyone else, and get more creative with it than Norman. Maybe even use some of the critiques Krimson lays out in his series to improve it. The endings could either be a cautionary tale of absolute power corrupting absolutely or a tale of a hero trying to come to terms with her newfound power and making the world better off through a delicate balancing act. There's something interesting underneath all of the crap that Norman wrote, it's just that Norman is unable to deflate his ego enough to see it and improve upon it.
@nateharris93754 жыл бұрын
@@PEDROGARCIA-qj3gr When I first heard about this book I thought it was supposed to be similar to death note. A kid with a god complex and a very childish world view gets some sort of power. They then use that power to try and make the world a better place, but since they are a child with no experience or skills at anything relating to that they end up doing exact opposite of what they want. I thought Theresa was supposed to be the villain at first.
@Channel-dg5tn4 жыл бұрын
I'm just imagining KR walking into a Staples, raking the shelves clean of tabs, and then going up to the manager and asking if they have more. "But, sir, your cart is full." "MORE. TABS. PLEASE."
@sharonspears-mandeville23694 жыл бұрын
Cart? More like basket..but yeah,that- _and highlighters,so. Many. Highlighters,dude.._
@ilexdiapason4 жыл бұрын
@@sharonspears-mandeville2369 no, there are enough that he needs a cart to fit them all
@finnkatz4 жыл бұрын
I imagine he tetris' them so alot can fit
@sharonspears-mandeville23694 жыл бұрын
*kas :* nah,two trips,two carts and a basket.. And still..all the clearence-tagged highlighters.
@skyblade74384 жыл бұрын
He's the reason why there's rules against stockpiling.
@quietbirdelenor3 жыл бұрын
I really liked how you pointed out that this is a case of men writing women poorly because it's exactly what I thought when the whole reason she gets to skip a grade is because her hair becomes beautiful so she's sent to be with 'girls who are the same level of emotional maturity as she is' that's such a creepy way to think, like now that she's old enough to be physically attractive to me it must mean she's so much more mature than the other girls her age. She's the embodiment of his male fantasy and it's disturbing that he chose to start with that when the character was a child.
@HerneLiedel Жыл бұрын
that's not just creepy that's just plain disgusting
@KopperNeoman Жыл бұрын
I note that you phrased that as if it would be okay were it a female fantasy. 🤔
@quietbirdelenor Жыл бұрын
@@KopperNeoman How so? you've misunderstood, his comment in the video was about men writing women poorly so that is what my comment addresses. Just because I don't add the fact that the same situation reversed would also be creepy doesn't mean I find it ok. Don't twist my comment into something it never was.
@youdonegoofed Жыл бұрын
@@KopperNeoman Weirdo.
@Omega-lj9tq11 ай бұрын
@@KopperNeomanincel
@franklinturtle98493 жыл бұрын
Empress Theresa changed my life during the covid pandemic. Someone had bought up all of the toilet paper, and this book got me through it.
@ganii18043 жыл бұрын
the book can probably give you more symptoms than the virus itself
@weirddo36333 жыл бұрын
@@ganii1804 Well to be fair, a symptom of the virus is a lost of taste
@MsNotorials3 жыл бұрын
@@luisac919 no u
@SenOutOfContext3 жыл бұрын
@@MsNotorials lol
@bear10503 жыл бұрын
@@luisac919 C U Next Tuesday
@danielwesoowski76174 жыл бұрын
"I was cute as heck at the age of ten" feels to me like it's the wrong kind of cute in this context.
@jackhazardous40084 жыл бұрын
Cute to a lonely old man
@bigdaddydons62414 жыл бұрын
@Schiggy 2319 Shane dawson?
@QJ894 жыл бұрын
Especially when a middle aged man is writing it. 😐
@BigPuddin4 жыл бұрын
"I was heckin' cute, goshdarn it, pardon my French, suck my cock, shave my balls, touch my teats, smash my gash, tickle my pickle, pole my hole."
@vollzeitfaultier4 жыл бұрын
@@BigPuddin i am sorry, but i have to steal that.
@nachgeben5 жыл бұрын
"Who is selling dog doors for miniature horses?!" LMAO Bro, that was a legit Amazon commercial. He literally stole that idea from an Amazon commercial. That is the exact thing the commercial shows.
@porguinturtle38544 жыл бұрын
@@bookishmermaid9927 Who doesn't do that?
@mediaguyking70454 жыл бұрын
Bookish Mermaid in the commercial she just bought dog door for dogs, that conveniently works for miniature horses
@Kralledd4 жыл бұрын
kzbin.info/www/bejne/Z6qVlIyajsmGrpo
@lilaniloxi4 жыл бұрын
Yeah, and it seems that commercial came out a little before this book. so did he write it backwards?
@TheAirBear20004 жыл бұрын
@@mediaguyking7045 It makes me think of that baby carrier commercial from Gravity Falls. "IT WORKS FOR PIIIIIIIIIIIIGS!"
@eggomccool2 жыл бұрын
god, the reveal of ' that was the end... of CHAPTER ONE' a full 50 minutes into the video was so fucking good
@taffyadam603120 күн бұрын
i was terrified
@grimgrinningghostie4 жыл бұрын
"That is the end... of the first chapter." idk about y'all but my jaw literally dropped
@Solaris_1024 жыл бұрын
Wait I haven’t finished watching this so you mean to tell me that the first chapter is this entire video?
@thepovdweller4 жыл бұрын
@@Solaris_102 yup and there's 6 parts so far of 1hr+
@RogueT-Rex84684 жыл бұрын
Byeonara, sounds like someone who can’t quite word properly and tried to synopsis the entire first book of a long series... and then left hooks you with the biggest horrific plot twist in history.
@cyberus14034 жыл бұрын
Lesoveron more like a good half of the video took up chapter one.
@jackdaalfbrainork63924 жыл бұрын
Byeonara it just gets worse from hare mate...
@Shintigercurl5 жыл бұрын
hi krim. for those who don't know, the person who "challenged" norman........was me. i didn't expect krim to review this book. i merely brought him up because krim was the only book reviewer i trust and respect and norman hasn't any one do a proper review of the book on a larger platform. and if his book was truly good, krim would find some positives to say about it. needless to say, that simple challenge grew far beyond my own expectations. so now, i'm gonna sit back and enjoy watching norm's "masterpiece" get gutted in front of hundreds of thousands of people. and to you, krim, i salute you for doing what even i and many many others around the world couldn't do: actually finish reading this...................Apocolypse of literature.
@mannequia82945 жыл бұрын
u a brave boi
@skyblade74385 жыл бұрын
You have my eternal respect.
@Tytoalba7775 жыл бұрын
I have a feeling that this video is going to be seen by more than hundreds of thousands of people. I predict that this is going to cross into the millions.
@EG-mh8rc5 жыл бұрын
Verily, though hast done God's work.
@Shintigercurl5 жыл бұрын
naw. i just challenged his world view and he picked the wrong kind of fight. on the flip side, he did start spamming my book's amazon page with negative comments and insulting the people who reviewed my novel. one of them being my sister.
@justabitofamug69895 жыл бұрын
"I've seen better foreshadowing on the expiration date of my milk" why did I laugh so hard at this
@turtleanton65395 жыл бұрын
Its a funny turn of phrase
@formlesscorvid53365 жыл бұрын
OH MY FUCKING GOD I LOOKED AT THIS AND READ IT IN SYNC WITH HIM SAYING IT
@lollllolll.5 жыл бұрын
I laughed as well because we are used to the image of the mysterious and vague predictors in plot, expiration dates unironically are better at predicting than this stereotype
@Princess2Warrior5 жыл бұрын
*In an age where we have books as bad as The Hunger Games and Harry Potter, why are we making fun of this man's work? What makes his book so special?* *Eh, at least all the talk about his book will be free-advertisement and increased sales for him. Thanks, lemmings.*
@DeiUmbrarum5 жыл бұрын
@@Princess2Warrior In an age where we have books as adequate as The Hunger Games and Harry Potter, why are we making fun of this hilarious disaster that fails on every conceivable level? Dunno, hard to say. But I'm dying to know what you consider a good book now.
@Ara_Arasaka3 жыл бұрын
You own an actual…. Physical copy of Empress Theresa… that’s like owning a real copy of hand drawn Sonichu in legendary bad books. Awesome.
@milkwater12042 жыл бұрын
I need both of these things
@left-2-write282 жыл бұрын
Do you think Norman thinks Theresa is real like Chris thinks all his nonsense is real? I honestly wouldnt put it past him.
@ganii18042 жыл бұрын
would unironically want physical copies of every sonichu issue
@serenepogi2 жыл бұрын
@@left-2-write28 Norman wrote this for 40 years, the possibility is there
@cameronpeterson67342 жыл бұрын
I'm sure Norman believes he is married to Theresa in a different dimension that he has a psychic link to just like Chris Chan and his/her characters
@lucyk89354 жыл бұрын
"He aimed for Wonder Woman, and we got Lucy the Crackhead who lives under the stairs." this is gonna be my senior quote thank you
@sabribeser22683 жыл бұрын
She makes me want to start a Ressistance againts her world empire and liberate the United States of America from the tyrannical Mary Sue
@Silverheartpro3 жыл бұрын
Username checks out
@voilvelev67753 жыл бұрын
I would 100% read a book called "Lucy the Crackhead, who lives under the stairs"
@turkeygobblegod4 жыл бұрын
other you tubers: lol i’m a youtuber i’m a failure krimsonrogue: *flexes on a throne of books and his silver play button next to him*
@slevinchannel75893 жыл бұрын
Ok, but grammar?
@psuedomyspace3 жыл бұрын
I feel it's earned. Especially considering the rambling contrarian dumpster fire that is the author of Empress Theresa, whose name means so little to me that I can't be fucked to scroll up and look at the title of the video where it's written. I've read Twilight, Onision's books, Fifty Shades of Grey, and Trigger Warning (highly unfortunately) and somehow this was worse than all of them combined.
@jbones69303 жыл бұрын
Ik now I want a throne of books
@jackleanimations83823 жыл бұрын
I never saw a youtubers call themselves a failure oomf
@slevinchannel75893 жыл бұрын
@@jackleanimations8382 Haha.
@whiteraven5625 жыл бұрын
"This review isn't going to be too long; I won't go into too much detail" >Review is almost two hours long >Review is listed as "part 1"
@Dragonatrix5 жыл бұрын
> Review only coves *4 chapters* (of 28!)
@Sinstarclair5 жыл бұрын
@Grim reaper we might be sitting home for eons Pardon the pun
@Shadeius5 жыл бұрын
@Grim reaper About 5 times longer than reading the books would be since it would be deconstruction of every sentence.
@savanchandul74515 жыл бұрын
If he pointed out all of the flaws he'll be done before he's 70
@patriciasampson93174 жыл бұрын
Only the bad sections... This may take some time.
@claudis.40152 жыл бұрын
On Theresa skipping the 5th grade because of her hair: That means Norman, a grown man, is describing the emotional maturity of his teenage protagonist through her physical attributes. Yeah... I don't like it.
@Mario87456 Жыл бұрын
50:29 for those that want to see that exact part.
@malikapollard361811 ай бұрын
Why would a man write a character of a young girl in this modern era ... ? What's his reference? Especially since he is writing from the girl's pov. Being a parent could help, but obviously it didn't. So tired of men writing female and female writing male protagonists without caring that what they think of the opposite sex is just wrong.
@AshleyWilliams-xq7lj11 ай бұрын
@@malikapollard3618 it's weird how a lot of writers don't bother to base opposite sexed characters on people they know well (their habits, perspectives, opinions etc.) It's also a good idea to have someone of the opposite sex look over it and point out anything that's off. These things take so little effort too. I'm instantly reminded of the times Krimson said "Is this what the author thinks guys are like???"
@jaccobbailey82478 ай бұрын
@@AshleyWilliams-xq7lj I think it’s often a problem of perspective. There’s a lotta cultural context behind sex and gender, and it’s really hard to actually get that right. Now, to be fair, if you have a really hard time writing women, maybe you shouldn’t make your protagonist a female, but still. Normally it’s not as simple as just “write them like a person” because good god that’s not even advice; it’s a matter of context and perspective. And while you should have other women you know read through it for sensitivity focus and to hear what they think could improve it, there’s still a baseline problem there. Norman doesn’t seem to write ANYONE well tho, so who knows
@Nightman221k7 ай бұрын
I think he has a strange fetish for hair. The part where all the French people cry over Joan of Arc's skull having long strands of thick beautiful hair on it was weird as hell. First off, I always heard Joan cut her hair to look androgynous so I dunno if it'd be long, hair burns, and the French people crying over it? Oookay...
@dee_is_tired5 жыл бұрын
Empress Theresa, written: she was beautiful, a gorgeous young lady whose sheer artistic features were time stopping Empress Theresa, drawn: what you get when you melt an ugly mannequin
@sugars20705 жыл бұрын
And she was a cute kid too
@ahniandfriends1235 жыл бұрын
@@sugars2070 apparently if we saw this "cute kid" we would see an Uncanny valley Zelda-CDi-looking character that would appear in a dozen computer games when the creators wanted to create an older child character, if we were to go by this cover' s idea of what "attractiveness" is. (If you don't know what that looks like, think of a realistic child with the face of an adult that looked like it was photoshoped in "deepfake-style" )
@dee_is_tired5 жыл бұрын
Marisa thanks for reminding of what I was glad to forget
@dee_is_tired5 жыл бұрын
ahniandfriends123 like Renesme (?) in the last Twilight movie? bsjbsjds that was such a horrible idea
@luxnoctis47305 жыл бұрын
I read it as "a gorgeous young lady whose sheer _autistic_ features were time stopping."
@PENGUINGIRL12104 жыл бұрын
I see Theresa watched 5 minute crafts and learned how to make a lifejacket from a garbage bag and 11 coke bottles
@atuaangie51604 жыл бұрын
Imagine forgetting to close a bottle.
@glitchlord66634 жыл бұрын
@@atuaangie5160 enjoy drowning I guess.
@BigPuddin4 жыл бұрын
Unless she was using those components to craft cybernetic parts to graft onto her like the Twenty Dollar Man or some shit, I would say that her more immediate concern would be bellyflopping into the ocean with enough force to shatter her vertebrae.
@baumdf91344 жыл бұрын
@@BigPuddin the twenty dollar man is for some reason one of the most hilarious things I read today (although it would technically be the twenty dollar woman)
@BigPuddin4 жыл бұрын
@@baumdf9134 This kind of story doesn't merit accuracy like that.
@lionscave52565 жыл бұрын
Krimson: "This is all in chapter ONE." *Sees how much time has passed* Me: Oh no...
@t.thomas89195 жыл бұрын
Oh yes... I'm so happy I got snacks before clicking this. XD
@Arsenik175 жыл бұрын
That was weird, he said that just as I read your comment.
@TravisBroski5 жыл бұрын
"These are the ONLY good chapters, it gets WORSE!" *video is mere minutes to ending* Dear God...
@patrickfrost94055 жыл бұрын
Mauler should give Crim some tips.
@kayleenagel37325 жыл бұрын
Sees entire review is only 4 chapters OH NO
@Xehanort102 жыл бұрын
2:55 He's basically a creepy old religious fanatic obsessed with Joan of Arc so he wrote a story where she's a Mary Sue called Theresa. The Claude Frollo of authors.
@CorpusCacus2 жыл бұрын
Even Claude Frollo had a basic grasp of human interaction.
@unimpartialobserver Жыл бұрын
He's not even a religious fanatic; he's just a narcissist who either simps hard for Joan of Arc, or wishes he were her.
@my_girl_seraphine529410 ай бұрын
He’s like how George R. R. Martin loves to write about little girls and women
@aquaabouttogetfunky6 ай бұрын
@@my_girl_seraphine5294at least George is a competent writer who writes compelling stories…
@Paralellex4 жыл бұрын
"Theresa also has a tendency to take problems and solve them by making things much, much worse. Her solutions are some of the most creative and most idiotically dangerous things I have ever read." I don't think I've ever identified with the main character of a book more to be honest.
@jadendafinger4 жыл бұрын
TechnicalTortuga this statement confuses me? could you elaborate. sorry for phrasing it weirdly
@cyberus14034 жыл бұрын
dont try to relate to a terrible character of a terrible book
@jadendafinger4 жыл бұрын
@Morphing Taxi Oh. thanks! I just misinterpreted "Theresa knows what she's doing in the end :(" as Theresa knowing what she was doing like if you were to ask your friend "are you sure about this" and (s)he replies "I know what I'm doing!" I hope what i just said makes some sense
@johngoodman48294 жыл бұрын
Honestly he summed up every playthrough of Hitman I've ever done
@riannelynn1104 жыл бұрын
So I looked it up, the author has a website saying that this book should be taught in middle and high school and I wholeheartedly agree: "How to not write 101"
@shipper-of-heart88983 жыл бұрын
Norman: My book is NOT a YA novel Also Norman: 'show this to a seven year old girl, she'll love Empress Theresa' 'Teachers, here's a study guide in case you want to use this in your classrooms' 'grade level- 3rd grade+'
@unexpected24753 жыл бұрын
What's utterly hilarious about that is one review for the book (shown on the Down the Rabbit Hole vid) was a teacher who said they were disappointed in it and were looking for some class reading.
@Rainbowthewindsage3 жыл бұрын
Honestly I would use excerpts from the book in order to teach how to identify mistakes and criticize them in writing.
@pavladavlas3 жыл бұрын
Destructive Writing 101
@gracekim19983 жыл бұрын
Yep
@masonallen39614 жыл бұрын
To be fair to Norman, talking about your fictional characters like they were real people is something a lot of authors do. Even some incredibly talented ones do that. I saw a documentary where they said J.D. Salinger used to do that. Oh my god. I feel unclean. I just compared J.D. Salinger to the idiot who wrote Empress Theresa. I am so sorry.
@ZorotheGallade4 жыл бұрын
He uses it as a staple defense. "Well my character, which I purposefully stated being flawless, is flawless because I said so, that voids any contrary opinion you have"
@anduro74484 жыл бұрын
Thought that darn every author and his grandma does the "imagine fictional characters as real people" thing
@ZorotheGallade4 жыл бұрын
@@anduro7448 I do that to give them behaviors and reactions which are consistent with how real people would. Norman has it backwards. He thinks that only since he wrote his character that way, he can apply their twisted logic and morality to real life.
@anduro74484 жыл бұрын
@@ZorotheGallade k
@nevada_tomato4 жыл бұрын
The person who wrote mato mliec also did that, just not for the entire book. Look it up. Great story too
@pyrrhusofepirus84913 жыл бұрын
17:55 this reminds me of a review of Empress Theresa: “Empress Theresa is not a good book, neither is it a terrible book. It is one of those things that convinced me of the infinite mercy of god, anything less than infinite mercy would have incinerated this book before it was unleashed on an unsuspecting public”
@zoeb3573 Жыл бұрын
But if God's mercy was so infinite, surely he would have saved us from this
@robertblack93815 ай бұрын
@@zoeb3573 It is, but his wrath towards sinful and unrepentant people is equally infinite, so perhaps this is a forewarning of his coming judgment
@alli41495 жыл бұрын
The Author chose his fate like Donovan chose his grail in Indiana Jones: poorly.
@blokheadsreviews6795 жыл бұрын
Alli Does that make Krimson the knight in the temple?
@alli41495 жыл бұрын
Blok Head's Game Reviews yes, yes it does.
@DocKrazy5 жыл бұрын
@@alli4149 I'm fine with this
@lumps174 жыл бұрын
CrimsonRogue: "The review is not going to go on that long, I'm not going to go into too much detail." Me: Looks at the timestamp: 18:35 Looks at total time: 1:42:22 Looks in recommended: *PART 5* HMMMM
@KrimsonRogue4 жыл бұрын
Lol, oops. XD
@nessyness54474 жыл бұрын
there is part 5 now XD
@GameTavern22244 жыл бұрын
@@KrimsonRogue aren't those the guys who spent fifty million on coffee filters?
@lumps174 жыл бұрын
@@nessyness5447 Oh god. I'm going to watch it rn. XD
@cyn72614 жыл бұрын
He was on the first page when you made this comment. The first fucking page.
@nerdytv78945 жыл бұрын
From a distance, that cover actually looks like a screenshot from a really crappy Episode story...
@EspiritoDeDafne5 жыл бұрын
When I saw this cover, I was sure it was a children book and I was like "why he's going to tear down a children book?"
@michelsand53995 жыл бұрын
Laura Lorenzi oh shit! Same here. The artstyle reminds me of the books my elementary school used to recommend to support authors/artists during the postwar period.
@lkntgkltrndfl4 жыл бұрын
I thought it was a pixelated drawing.
@lkntgkltrndfl4 жыл бұрын
Also, for some reason, i feel really anxious and uneasy when i look at it.
@KaiKrimson564 жыл бұрын
What's funny is the cover is literally the entire first chapter when she gets kidnapped.
@EmiliFaust2 жыл бұрын
1:21:57 "But I didn't cry. I wasn't a phony movie actress using hysterics to milk all the drama she could out of every moment. I was a real person and I didn't give a damn what these kidnappers thought." Is the guy that wrote this a sociopath? Doesn't he understand that crying can sometimes be involuntary? Are there people out there that truly don't understand that most people cry without necessarily wanting or meaning to? I am really confused by this quote, though I think I am beginning to understand why some people get frustrated with 'hysterics' (crying) a little more now. They can't relate.
@eldritchabomination97262 жыл бұрын
Yea that always came off weird to me. If he still didn't want her to cry, couldn't* she just go numb and dissociate?
@Mathee5 ай бұрын
@@eldritchabomination9726 Oh, but if Theresa reacts with anything other than stoicism, that would imply that she's weak, and Theresa's not weak. At least, I'm sure that's how Norm sees it🙄
@BR-ec2ph4 жыл бұрын
When I was a little kid, I wrote a story about a King of Earth who lived in a diamond palace and was beautiful and smart and had a bunch of haters. I was 8. Why do I mention that? Oh, no reason.
@madisonb53954 жыл бұрын
And it was still better than this trash!
@salmonmankingoftheocean76244 жыл бұрын
When I was 8, I wrote stories about two races, one made of Crystals and one made of Rocks that just kinda fought each other for no reason. They were very imaginatively called Crystals and Rocks(except I spelt Crystal wrong without fail). They fought not with weapons, but by spitting Crystals/Rocks out of their mouths(well, I always wrote ‘shot’, but when I drew pictures it was always coming out of their mouths). I got the idea that in later books, there would be two new races. I think one was Glass, and the other was Dynamite. Dynamite. It was going to be a race literally made out of sticks of Dynamite. What the hell was I thinking? Why do I mention it? Cause I think it’s funny how dumb kids are, even when I was that kid.
@creacherfeacher82324 жыл бұрын
@@salmonmankingoftheocean7624 When I was 8-ish I had an idea for a story where a little girl figured out she could walk through her grandmother's mirror and was some sort of princess or some shit in the mirror world. But only this one special little girl could walk through this mirror 🤦♀️
@imadi98554 жыл бұрын
Creacher Feacher When I was 7 I wrote a story about 2 siblings who discovered they had inherited abilities from their missing father at the age of 14. The older brother could control fire and the younger sister could control mist/ turn into mist. The corporation that killed their father starts chasing the kids as well and they’re forced to run away from home one day when a bunch of bad guys arrive. Their mom helps them escape and then they come across a group of people who were apparently the father’s old friends and they teach the siblings how to control their abilities. Afterwards the older brother starts becoming an asshole and evil and his power is slowly corrupting him while the sister is just trying to find what strengths she is capable of mustering since everyone considered mist the weakest ability ever. And at some point there were some siren ladies who look beautiful to guys but not to women and they were trying to eat the brother and his friend while his sister was trying to save him but he kept pushing her away and being an asshole. This summary itself has more depth and character than this book could ever hope for
@creacherfeacher82324 жыл бұрын
@@imadi9855 you came up with all that at 7?! Damn
@vsGoliath963 жыл бұрын
With all the horrible, awkward descriptions of Theresa's teenage body, I can't help but feel that Norman has mastered the art of typing with one hand...
@geministrial9502 жыл бұрын
BAHAHAHAH
@segenshin18942 жыл бұрын
What's wrong with typing with one- oh...
@left-2-write282 жыл бұрын
Right? Like for a book that he goes out of his way to say has nothing that isnt family friendly, he focuses a suspicious amount of time describing her body. Gross, Norman.
@Dave-te5bs2 жыл бұрын
I think he did
@dinosaurthing72462 жыл бұрын
The funniest thing is this is probably true.
@RuinedSilver3 жыл бұрын
The more I think about the "Kidnapping" moment the more I laugh. She already has enhanced strength and unerring accuracy from hal, and hal has PROVEN that if he thinks she needs some form of enhancement he'll provide it. Not only should she be freaking out, not snarking, Hal should be freaking out as well and giving her death lasers and toxic pheromones and titanium skin and shit. There should be no "Kidnapping", there should be an incident in the morning news about a crater in the street.
@credencenoel48452 жыл бұрын
This actually sounds amazing Just the concept of someone getting the ability to "evolve" any superpower based on situation, and this ability permanently screwing them over hard, it would be so cool
@emeraldhummingbird75472 жыл бұрын
@@credencenoel4845 kind of sounds a little bit like SCP-682
@xenon89272 жыл бұрын
There’s a spider-man villain called The Answer whose power works like that. Basically he has whatever powers are useful for the current situation, but they only last until the situation that prompted them is over
@KM-hv1jg2 жыл бұрын
I’m listening to a book series with this same problem. The main character, a fourteen year old girl, can fend off full grown, trained warriors. However, when the plot requires her to get kidnapped, she suddenly forgets how to fight.
@deen7530 Жыл бұрын
@@emeraldhummingbird7547 No, 682's power has no drawbacks. A better example is SCP 1440.
@mauricepeploski66174 жыл бұрын
This man has essentially gone through this trainwreck of a book 4 times... Once to read it, once to film it, once to edit it, and at least once to explain to his therapist
@blueshell2924 жыл бұрын
I really thought up until the 3rd point that you meant the author, and my asscheeks clenched HARD at the thought of this becoming a movie. Jesus Christmas
@vadifadoms3 жыл бұрын
@@blueshell292 I'd watch the hell out of the movie if it existed.
@imperielgenecist13173 жыл бұрын
@@vadifadoms Just for the trainwreck it would be.
@MissBaphomet5 жыл бұрын
“Who is selling dog doors for miniature horses?” Is a far more thought provoking and interesting topic than the entirety of this book
@pokekitty15 жыл бұрын
the advert in question was an amazon one the whole point was that the door was ordered on their website.
@t.thomas89195 жыл бұрын
What's the pricing? I must know.
@frozensoul37345 жыл бұрын
@@pokekitty1 I loved that advert, the music and everything was so good but it was so surreal at the same time. His reaction to thinking this wasn't an actual advert is priceless
@StarlightStephanie5 жыл бұрын
Here's the commercial if you haven't seen it. kzbin.info/www/bejne/Z6qVlIyajsmGrpo
@MissBaphomet5 жыл бұрын
pokekitty1 I’m aware, I remember seeing it several times during it’s run. I was quoting Krim
@pattyisfine71985 жыл бұрын
“God doesn’t even show up” *Reapers* *Creek* *flashback* *intensifies*
@EspiritoDeDafne5 жыл бұрын
Sometimes it's for the better
@sanfransiscon5 жыл бұрын
Greg vs Theresa, battle to the cease of existence
@haggisa5 жыл бұрын
SOMaela 3st: Sempaiternal Noice.
@EspiritoDeDafne5 жыл бұрын
@@sanfransiscon But it is really worthy existing in a world where Daniel is God and Theresa is the Empress?
@dee_is_tired5 жыл бұрын
SOMaela 3st: Sempaiternal I ship it
@dowitcher2 жыл бұрын
1:19:57 as someone who recently got married, I cannot imagine a single woman out there who would describe what was supposedly the most exciting moment of her life this way. No woman who is marrying the love of her life who she is genuinely happy with would barely touch on what actually happened and only bother to describe the dress, much less care about “charming the crowd” with her cleavage. I barely remember what my own dress looked like because I was so excited to be marrying someone I had been head-over-heels in love with for the past five years. The only reason I can think of why she would be more focused on her dress and the crowd’s reaction to it than she would be on her husband is if she’s not marrying for love, but is actually getting married because she wants to draw more attention to herself. She isn’t getting married because she loves Steve, she’s getting married because it’s a chance for her to show off. Instead of “Love and marriage is a very serious commitment, which has its ups and downs and can sometimes be difficult” which would be a very good message for young women, we get “Look everyone! I got married as soon as I turned 18 and never had any problems in my relationship! I’m just so much better than you guys because I found my true love right away with zero effort on my part!” Which is not how relationships are supposed to work, especially not a healthy one.
@rnbrineg Жыл бұрын
Every thought that Theresa has echoes the author's narcissism. Like, every line. Every action. Every damned thing she does. The entire book is just Norman convincing himself he is perfect through a proxy. I'm pretty sure that's the entire reason this book exists. Edit: to add to this, there are some authors who do this, but at least they can somewhat disguise thier narcissism with an interesting plot, or amazing dialogue, or beautiful prose. Norman cannot do that. He's just telling you who he is through Theresa, with just enough imagination to make some kind of plot.
@Zelda00Gamer10 ай бұрын
Honestly I wonder if it’s because Norman is in love with his own OC. He married her off so she can be a good little trad wife, but honestly he wants to marry this fictional girl (she’s not a woman remember. She’s a “good girl” bleh). So in order to disassociate from the fact that she’s married to another (albeit fictional) man he describes how hot she is instead of their romance AT ALL
@AaronRotenberg4 жыл бұрын
The Amazon review calling this a first draft that got published is insulting to an awful lot of first drafts.
@ottercos4 жыл бұрын
yeah i've read better first drafts from 7th graders
@NapaCat4 жыл бұрын
@@ottercos I've read a better first draft from a 3rd grader than Empress Theresa.
@elizakarnopp89214 жыл бұрын
Its like the first draft of a short story I wrote in eighth grade while high on sugar at 2 am
@leannewho6644 жыл бұрын
my highschool overwatch fics were better than this and I wrote *terrible* overwatch fics
@L_mattox4 жыл бұрын
Fun fact: This set of video reviews is 7 and-a-half hours long.
@dbergerac96324 жыл бұрын
I can't wait for the animated film of the review. I'll pass on the book.
@raa98raa4 жыл бұрын
Worth it
@Emma-Queenofhell4 жыл бұрын
No it's 7 hours 16 minutes and 35 seconds so there for it's just over 7 hours I don't have any better to do
@viracocha60934 жыл бұрын
Mauler: that’s cute
@zeroducks10374 жыл бұрын
This. is the real info I needed. Bless you my friend
@growingperspective94845 жыл бұрын
Onision - writes a few of the most insane poorly written, egotistical books, Norman Boutin "hold my eleven bottles of coke"
@davidmauriciogutierrezespi52442 жыл бұрын
Krim: I'm not going to go in to too much detail Also Krim: *Makes FIVE videos about this book*
@undeadladybug77232 жыл бұрын
He could probably make ten videos about it and still barely cover everything.
@lalaliet4 жыл бұрын
This is what I listen to when I knit by the fire. The calmness, the warmth, the unbridled rage mixed with the sorrow of a man long broken, and the floofy yarn.
@sarahtimberlake784 жыл бұрын
poppy sundquist I do the same thing!!! Angry book reviews are the best thing to listen to while I knit!!
@localforestwitch72154 жыл бұрын
same, but it's with drawing/making plot/and gaming
@sunburn75334 жыл бұрын
@@localforestwitch7215 same!
@FragilxMind4 жыл бұрын
Was just crocheting to this.
@thecatapultdio47174 жыл бұрын
It works as background noise or just as something to watch and it’s great while trying to write stories.
@serpicopiu35915 жыл бұрын
First line of novel: *exists* Chris Hansen: Hi, Norman. Take a seat
@MagpieDynamics5 жыл бұрын
Oh, I fucking wish he would
@nootnewt35 жыл бұрын
The whole book reads like a 60 year old man writing a voice, not really (what should be) a “new adult” contemporary science fiction novel. I think in competent hands this book could have been a decent YA novel but Norman wanted to make sure Theresa was old enough to get married and have sex 😒
@sidgar15 жыл бұрын
Chris is too busy exposing Onision to worry about Norman right now :)
@@Kub1na32 Oh, that was the implication. So hype for this
@sugarm18605 жыл бұрын
And the description reads “this covers chapters 1-4”. The book has 28 chapters Edit: there’s 28 chapters, not 26
@Kub1na325 жыл бұрын
@@Silphanis Ah, I keep forgetting what tfw means.
@skyblade74385 жыл бұрын
23 minutes in and only 2 pages.
@sierrasanders6753 жыл бұрын
i love that the rock throwing is presented as a superpower. If you go to any village in India you will find multiple children who can do this. They can hit a rabid dog in the eye at 50 yards. This is a normal thing
@marynoble94642 жыл бұрын
white people powers just being average minority practices will always be my favorite ignorant author red flag
@yossarian00 Жыл бұрын
Theyre built different
@Wired_User Жыл бұрын
Someone should give them all slings. They’ll be out here braining man and dog alike.
@unimpartialobserver Жыл бұрын
You can tell when someone doesn't have kids; he doesn't understand how much kids can learn to do with just a little practice, and how shockingly well they can do it.
@justin2308 Жыл бұрын
The worst part about it is, I just now realized, Norman actually might’ve been trying to draw a parallel between Theresa and King David. Correction: He was trying to make Theresa one-up King David.
@RoninCatholic4 жыл бұрын
"I hire artists because they do it better. I don't pay them in exposure, I pay them in money." Best practices. :3
@vapid63114 жыл бұрын
Nah, pay people in exposure, they can buy food with that after all
@Mamorufumio4 жыл бұрын
@@vapid6311 well to be fair that works in southern asia countrys
@generalgrievous22024 жыл бұрын
@@Mamorufumio wait what? It does?
@thequeenofcringe15854 жыл бұрын
The only valid practice when working with artists.
@thepigeonmanlyon71554 жыл бұрын
More like standard practice if you're a rational human being
@mantassalavejus76255 жыл бұрын
When an author refers to his critics as "trolls" you know you're in for a ride.
@angelinageorge95265 жыл бұрын
Mantas Salavejus it’s like Amy’s baking company. Everyone is out to get them.
@shosty5755 жыл бұрын
@@angelinageorge9526 Another Gordon Ramsay fan. Yay!
@Sancyria5 жыл бұрын
@@angelinageorge9526 "we were hacked!"
@luxnoctis47305 жыл бұрын
**Chris Chan has entered the chat**
@The_child-catcher5 жыл бұрын
He would fit right in at marvel comics.
@Bryan-gy2zu5 жыл бұрын
*Biggest* plot hole in this section of this book is: Why would Theresa need thermal underwear if she *GENERATES HEAT* ?
@CT-se8vn5 жыл бұрын
The answer is yes
@nobody20215 жыл бұрын
Maybe she's a cold blooded lizard person and her heart is in her ass, so it's like a heat lamp
@ergogrrl5 жыл бұрын
WHY DID I NOT CATCH THIS BEFORE I AM SO ANGRY (Not really. Good catch, though.)
@Paranuui5 жыл бұрын
@@nobody2021 Hey, dont go trying to add an interesting twist to the book
@sugars20705 жыл бұрын
I'm not even halfway through and this is confusing
@luheartswarm45732 жыл бұрын
norman describing theresa's wedding clothing it's dangerously similar to "my immortal", that infamous beyond stupid fanfic
@rallandtariv21392 жыл бұрын
Ebony Dark’ness Dementia Ravenway definitely would’ve rocked a much better dress tho
@thequeenofcringe15852 жыл бұрын
@@rallandtariv2139 we all know that Ebony’s wedding dress would have STYLE.
@theunderstatement68422 жыл бұрын
wdym enoby is wae morr stailishh dan dat prep treesa!!!
@moon17492 жыл бұрын
@@theunderstatement6842 omg, the translate button fixes your comment because it thinks it's broken🤣😅 What sense does that make, it was already great.
@theunderstatement68422 жыл бұрын
@@moon1749 does it actually do any translating? or is the button just there
@mistahspoke92814 жыл бұрын
"This review won't be that long." -Part 1 out of 5, each part over an hour long,
@KrimsonRogue4 жыл бұрын
Oops. XD
@slevinchannel75893 жыл бұрын
@@KrimsonRogue Embarassingly, the Author thinks all Critics are Trolls... what a delusion...
@slevinchannel75893 жыл бұрын
@@KrimsonRogue Embarassingly, the Author thinks all Critics are Trolls... what a delusion...
@loturzelrestaurant3 жыл бұрын
@@KrimsonRogue I cant read your T-Shirt!!! HELP! HELP, KRIMSON! Come ot my Aid! I summon You!
@W0terB0tle3 жыл бұрын
@@KrimsonRogue I am surprised that you got a book that took you over 2 months to finish you reviewed it in just a couple of hours.
@thevoidlookspretty70795 жыл бұрын
The most telling sentence I’ve ever heard in my life: “This is the first fifty pages.”
@gretelschroeder30275 жыл бұрын
Very true!!!!! He has helped me with my own writing just by making these videos!!
@JGVIllustrations5 жыл бұрын
He sounded SO EXHAUSTED when he said and I felt immediately tired lmaoo
@MegaNightcore1015 жыл бұрын
Krim: WHO THE HELL IS SELLING DOG DOORS FOR MINIATURE HORSES? Amazon: *NERVOUS LAUGHTER*
@thimowellner76865 жыл бұрын
I KNEW it was an amazon advertisement even though I've never seen it. It's just so similar to the other ones.
When you said that there's a term many people would use to describe Theresa but you'd try your best not to say it during this review, it took me embarrassingly long to realise you did not mean c*nt, and in fact we were supposed to think of the term Mary Sue XD
@shrillbert2 жыл бұрын
Mary Sue? I though the term was Shit myself.
@Wote892 жыл бұрын
I... um... may have watched this review a dozen or more times and until your comment it never clicked that he wasn't implying the first one.
@thequeenofcringe15852 жыл бұрын
Both are applicable
@crestothegecko62792 жыл бұрын
i've always thought the word was cringe tbh
@kakashi09092 жыл бұрын
I was expecting invalid or retarded or down syndromes
@flowersky31__495 жыл бұрын
14:13 one page in and we're already getting the word "Mary Sue " tattooed into our brains
@tristanhartup49365 жыл бұрын
I'd say "scorched" rather than "tattooed".
@flowersky31__495 жыл бұрын
@@tristanhartup4936 perhaps burned into our flesh?
@tristanhartup49365 жыл бұрын
@@flowersky31__49 Pretty much
@haggisa5 жыл бұрын
Embroidered with a lobotomy needle.
@whiskeyhound5 жыл бұрын
I'm glad the author made sure to state this book wasn't for young adults, I'm only to the first page and I can't remember reading a single book that talked down to it's audience that much.
@DrMoonAtNight4 жыл бұрын
Wait, so let me get this straight. A fox shoots white stuff at a 10 year old girl’s stomach, then something starts to live inside her? Uhm, that’s definitely not creepy.
@jbones69303 жыл бұрын
😳
@Isaac-gh5ku3 жыл бұрын
😱
@KougajiCalling3 жыл бұрын
😰
@an0nym0us_slash353 жыл бұрын
*insert Tanjiro looking at the phone disgusted*
@moa43483 жыл бұрын
😟
@sjfih24 жыл бұрын
Theresa: "My body made a hard belly flop. I was knocked out." Me: "That's an interesting way to spell dead"
@nocount75174 жыл бұрын
Ocean used *[Surface Tension]*! It's super effective!
@caveman51284 жыл бұрын
Chris Yoder Yeah Ha Ha Ha how did she die? *hides knife behind back*
@Oinkoinkmurderorsmth4 жыл бұрын
No, but Onisions terms she 'rapidly ceased to exist." Or you know, dead with extra steps.
@cornerficus45132 жыл бұрын
I’ve finally got around to watching this and I need to say this for those of you going through the comments; the section at 56:44 is actually 100% a real commercial, because I’ve seen it before. This man just play-by-play described a real Amazon commercial in his book and called it “writing”.
@TheSteve2852 жыл бұрын
For those who don't believe: kzbin.info/www/bejne/Z6qVlIyajsmGrpo
@sillyd0g Жыл бұрын
i love that he never mentions in the text what its a commercial for because while i could very easily glean that it was an amazon commercial it does kind of make it sound like its literally just a commercial for dog doors
@colorstrike624211 ай бұрын
I was wondering why that section sounded so familiar! I just couldn’t remember what it was a commercial for.
@Tbm9985 жыл бұрын
“Prime Minister Blair is not prone to exaggeration”... what, Tony Blair? Tony “Lied about Iraq having weapons of mass destruction” Blair? Not prone to Exaggeration?
@jonathancampbell52315 жыл бұрын
That line aged super well.
@kevincass99175 жыл бұрын
Its not actually Tony Blair, its another character that has the same last name, but its not him. Its like Richard Blair or something.
@petehill72805 жыл бұрын
@@kevincass9917 The character's name was 'Peter Blair', if I remember correctly.
@hkazu635 жыл бұрын
Strong evidence that its not Tony Blair, the man who exaggerated the threat of Iraq over countries like Iran, Saudi Arabia and North Korea, if he’s not prone to exaggeration.
@evies.10185 жыл бұрын
I love how the character who is the Prime Minister is the one who tells Theresa she’ll be more remembered than Churchill 😂
@Shadowstar1284 жыл бұрын
I was rewatching this video and I just had an epiphany. Empress Theresa and Reapers Creek are essentially the same book. The stories are about unlikeable idiots gaining god like powers from aliens and use those powers to essentially ruin the world trying to fix it, they never get criticized for their fuck ups, both stories have endings with horrific implications that the authors don't seem to realize are nightmarish, and they're both written by wackjobs who can't take criticism to save their lives.
@Ramsey276one3 жыл бұрын
Read a comment like that in Down the Rabbit Hole on this THING (doesn’t deserve to be called a book/novel) and I cannot disagree XD
@jbones69303 жыл бұрын
I think you’re onto something
@justsomerandomguynoonecare89233 жыл бұрын
What is an ephiphany? I'm not a native english speaker
@Shadowstar1283 жыл бұрын
@@justsomerandomguynoonecare8923 an epiphany is a sudden or striking realization
@sabribeser22683 жыл бұрын
@@Shadowstar128 Theressa makes me want to start a Ressitance force againts her Empire
@fourgoatdowery53395 жыл бұрын
Empress Theresa inspires me to try writing stories, because even if it’s bad it couldn’t be THAT bad.
@noahlillis66024 жыл бұрын
Watching his reviews got me into writing again because i noticed i dont make these kinds of mistakes 🤣
@SenorMeinKrafter4 жыл бұрын
It takes skill to write so poorly
@professionalpainthuffer4 жыл бұрын
Nothing will ever be as bad as this. When you feel sad about writing, pull up The Eye Of Argon, by Jim Thies, and read it. Or try to, anyway. You will feel like a god.p
@rosaceae57954 жыл бұрын
@@professionalpainthuffer the eye of argon isn’t that bad, considering it was written by a 16 year old who admitted he didn’t know much about writing instead of a sixty year old man who proclaimed to have written the best novel.
@lynziewithaz5491 Жыл бұрын
Your effort to NOT say Mary Sue is admirable
@henryisthere Жыл бұрын
I was gonna go with narcissist. Mary Sue works too.
@malikapollard361811 ай бұрын
True. I don't like when characters have thoughts that are self agrandizing. Such a red flag. I found her self-absorbed, does mental gymnastics and I don't understand why her uniform pockets bend with her boobs. 😅😂
@emberproductions88419 ай бұрын
To be fair I was gonna go with Bitch, but I think all names apply
@moycorbin47506 ай бұрын
Professionals have standards
@bellaspopart4 жыл бұрын
“i’ve seen better foreshadowing on the expiration date on my MILK” oof, book gordon ramsey’s getting real heated
@tristanjohnson59923 жыл бұрын
He’s crossing over to regular Gordon
@slevinchannel75893 жыл бұрын
Embarassingly, the Author thinks all Critics are Trolls... what a delusion...
@jbones69303 жыл бұрын
M I L K
@loturzelrestaurant3 жыл бұрын
@@jbones6930 Imagine this was the Start: "Metal Rakets are weird weapons against Foxes. But my Mother used it as One anway. But the Enemy, the Fox, just walked away. That was one odd event... Well, whatever! Lets just begin this Story!" Would be better... much?
@user-ec4ej1ir3m3 жыл бұрын
22:04
@caitlinmace4 жыл бұрын
"She's just going along hoping she doesn't die." I've never felt so represented in literature before.
@DrMoonAtNight4 жыл бұрын
Caitlin MacEachern same with me. Except I hope I die. But hey, tomato tomato am I right? Right?
@BigPuddin4 жыл бұрын
@@DrMoonAtNight The entire strength of the whole "toh-may-toh, toh-mah-toh" expression is that it's phonetic and not typed. It's just really weird to read it as opposed to hearing it. Looks more like a person had a stroke or made a typo than is just using an expression. That or you're really stoked about tomatoes and are trying to reinforce that.
@DrMoonAtNight4 жыл бұрын
The Raddest Chad I know, but there’s not really any alternative. (that I know of.)
@BigPuddin4 жыл бұрын
@@DrMoonAtNight I don't really know of one either.
@DrMoonAtNight4 жыл бұрын
The Raddest Chad which is why I’m using toh-may-toh, toh-mah-toh. Because there’s no better alternative. Or any alternative at all.
@fake-copystories58494 жыл бұрын
'This isn't a young adult book.' Darling, this isn't even a children's book.
@annabanana76594 жыл бұрын
Dr Seuss and Roald Dahl would never!
@dat_nerd_boi80574 жыл бұрын
this is barely even a book... a **dictionary** has a more interesting plot and story...
@demonofsadism79154 жыл бұрын
Dat_Nerd_Boi Empress Theresa has a more interesting plot than a dictionary. Not at all for the reasons the author or want, and DEFINITELY not because the book is... “good” (yes that hurt to write) It’s only interesting because your just wondering “What is this dumb child gonna do next, and how is it gonna blow up and would definitely destroy the earth?” But the dictionary does have a better plot for sure.
@annakozuki89504 жыл бұрын
It's a zygote's book
@annakozuki89504 жыл бұрын
@Fen Vulpeus it's a sperm cell's book
@vampiricn1ght3 жыл бұрын
This is kinda minor... yet also important sorta. Theresa is from Massachusetts, and based on his mannerisms with this book near where Norman lives. If she's from any part of Massachusetts, she's not "a good girl" like she claims. As someone from Massachusetts, we're all awful people. We're all assholes of the highest caliber, and people who say they aren't are liars
@The_AGL_Group2 жыл бұрын
The term “Masshole” doesn’t exist without a reason-
@bertross3662 жыл бұрын
Everyone’s a prick here, especially myself!
@skeletonking25012 жыл бұрын
How the fuck haven’t you guys gone into anarchy yet?
@vampiricn1ght2 жыл бұрын
@@skeletonking2501 Because they all need to stick together against the rest of the world judging them for being assholes
@zacksefchick95352 жыл бұрын
@@skeletonking2501 we won't collapse until we take Maine back
@reddevil93123 жыл бұрын
"Bitch, I am sitting on a throne made of books!" needs to be a GIF
@WolfBitesAndSleepyGraves3 жыл бұрын
Hail to the book king
@songweretson2 жыл бұрын
It's still not a gif, and I am very disappointed
@thequeenofcringe15852 жыл бұрын
@@WolfBitesAndSleepyGraves BOOKS FOR THE BOOK KING
@WolfBitesAndSleepyGraves2 жыл бұрын
@@thequeenofcringe1585 BOOKS FOR THE BOOK THRONE
@yourlocaltheatrekid9002 жыл бұрын
one year later, I have made the GIF
@princesskib5 жыл бұрын
"Who would sell a little door for little horses?!" Amazon. Because it was an Amazon commercial. From around 3 years ago. Don't make a philosophical point off of a commercial for Amazon Prime, Norman.
@NavigatorBR5 жыл бұрын
I'm still in shock that this was a real commercial....
@t.thomas89195 жыл бұрын
Hmm. Search time for sale prices. I just get the feeling that will be more fun than this trashy book. Call it a gut feeling.
@sabr41745 жыл бұрын
Kelsey Bishop What’s worse than thinking Norman made that up on his own is knowing that he didn’t and that he literally described an actual Amazon commercial in his book... 🤦♀️
@OriginalBear5 жыл бұрын
Do think Norman added the commercial when he re-released Empress Theresa like he did with the cover art?
@-yeme-5 жыл бұрын
can I just say that having a dogflap in your front door big enough for a horse to get through, even a miniature one, is just asking to be burgled the second you leave the house
@ruyekahatori30734 жыл бұрын
Norman: this is not a young adult novel Also Norman: Show this book to your grandmother, show it to a 7 year old girl, they will both love Theresa! _So who is it for, Norman?_
@SorowFame4 жыл бұрын
It's one of those rare books directed at absolutely no one, a bold marketing decision.
@123phi1234 жыл бұрын
It's for everyone who isn't a young adult
@an8strengthkobold3604 жыл бұрын
Everyone and no one.
@ruyekahatori30734 жыл бұрын
his Amazon listing has the grade level as 5th-12th and i think the age is like, 8+???
@lilaniloxi4 жыл бұрын
the aliens from reaper's creek.
@ShatteredGlass9162 жыл бұрын
A 10 yo hallucinates that an Alien giving her a "white ball" and then create mass histeria by spreading it to everyone would be one hell of work of art lmao
@richardball5843 Жыл бұрын
I’m pretty sure this is what “The Monsters are due on Maple Street” was about.
@neadedios3106 Жыл бұрын
@@richardball5843you just unlocked a childhood memory
@aname8484 жыл бұрын
The one assassin's full name is actually "A Thousand Assassins"
@StoicVeR4 жыл бұрын
A better book than Empress Theresa ?
@Lunictd4 жыл бұрын
So, Hassan of the Hundred Faces?
@skeletonwar44454 жыл бұрын
@@Lunictd Thanks Asako. Now go back to reducing Arts resist.
@caveman51284 жыл бұрын
A Name now I’m imagining when he gets punched he just bursts into a thousand tiny assassins and they all run around and reform
@rg-ed5fr4 жыл бұрын
General Wellio ahaha that reminds me of the gnomes from Gravity Falls
@Bismuth83X4 жыл бұрын
The "jumping out of a plane with a nuclear bomb in it and surviving because I brought a bag of Coke bottles with me" thing sounds more like the backstory for a Metal Gear boss, to be honest...
@SorowFame4 жыл бұрын
Even Metal Gear wouldn't do that The bottles would probably be full of nanomachines.
@kabutoyakushi97394 жыл бұрын
Nanomachines, son
@huhthatsinteresting16444 жыл бұрын
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@beavatatlan4 жыл бұрын
@@huhthatsinteresting1644 Username checks out.
@vapid63114 жыл бұрын
yeah, but metal gear would make the character likable and have a massive amount of self awareness at how stupid it was
@BirchMonkey8573 жыл бұрын
Everyone: "Okay, so... I have a bit of criticism regarding your book." Norman: *"You question the words of the mighty Theresa?!"*
Better opening lines because I have no life: My name's Theresa Sullivan. I'm seventeen years old, and I guess I'm pretty average aside from the primordial alien merged with me on the cellular level. Aside from holding the world together with my blood, sweat, and tears, I like knitting, studying, and hanging out with my boyfriend. I love you Steve, best part of my hellish existence on this planet!
@sunn76152 жыл бұрын
See when I read this I get a creepy vibe, like I'm about to read a book from the perspective of the villain who succeeds at destroying the world despite the best efforts of the heroes to stop them
@agquad Жыл бұрын
@sunn7615 I literally don't believe you could ever portray Theresa in a benevolent light, as Norman failed to do. She is fundamentally an evil and corrupt concept.
@wolfbyte246810 ай бұрын
@@sunn7615 To be fair, that's what the book is about!
@marynoble94643 ай бұрын
This sounds like the start of a spunky, end of world, completely over it, chosen one who would *really* rather be fucking off feeding chickens and being bad at baking but she was unfortunately chosen by an alien that she's constantly passive aggressive towards in retaliation and I love it
@TheSaberWolfDuchess4 жыл бұрын
Y'know what's funny? When I used to see Empress Theresa, just the cover art, without any context? I actually thought it was a decent, unique style. It felt like something a grade-schooler would draw, like if it was a YA novel of some kind about a kid growing up in Soviet Russia or something. Knowing what it's about now and how the cover is unintentionally terrible has since soured that opinion.
@blueshell2924 жыл бұрын
Hm I see your point. Depressing, really.
@schufck52723 жыл бұрын
I thought for the longest time it was a historical book.
@FMeister943 жыл бұрын
I mean he drew it and people draw worse so I think it’s unfair that it draws the same level of criticism as his writing
@gregorythehuman3 жыл бұрын
@@FMeister94 yeah, but those people don’t claim their drawings are masterpieces for the ages
@markquigley16143 жыл бұрын
At least we got a far better set-up for a story out your first initial thoughts than this’ll ever be...!