"Laughing in the Dark" by Kiriakos Vilchez | MrCreepyPasta's Storytime

[@GodOfWar221]

"It's the most fun in the park...when you're laughing in the dark" I feel that's appropriate, I think this is my new favorite creepypasta that you've narrated MCP.

[@elijahwatt9643]

love how you got the reference They were the Original Creepypasta stories

[@elijahwatt9643]

@@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 Well the story was obviously taken from it They just made it more adult

[@DrusillaDragonrose]

Pick the right door, and you’ll go free. Pick the wrong door, and there he’ll be.

[@Bluesit32]

Hah hah! Are you Afraid of the Dark reference!

[@DrusillaDragonrose]

It's one of my faves because of Zeebo who apparently has cousins now.

[@MrChaoticreign]

Give it baaaaack. Give me back my nose! I miss that show so much

[@santson1620]

mabey another time...

[@santson1620]

I'm always here.

[@UnicornskullSims]

I thought the first clown was going to turn out to just be one of his employees and then the female clown was real. Oh well.

[@watcheem]

Why would the clowns want to kill Bill? They came into existence from the pure fear that haunted house created and without Bill there is no more haunted house, the stupid clowns just committed suicide.

[@Blkninja25]

Because if everyone knew about them people would stay away, the only people they can attack are the ones that can see them, so yea

[@esmebloomfield1252]

+watcheem Maybe they're a fan of Quentin Tarantino

[@kojokiller998]

+watcheem bill is god

[@bravo075]

@@esmebloomfield1252 Get out.

[@monnae]

Was actually the best antagonist voices done, ever. I love it when you do evil voices, they have got to be the best!

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

Sailbotacinom Yeah and I can totally see LJ the monochrome clown boy telling this scary story to his friends as Jeff Smile Jane Princess Laughing Jack Ben Sally and their friends do their own Creepypasta Midnight Society

[@sandyr5407]

Can't start a fire, can't start a fire without a spark, this gun's for hire, even if we're just dancing in the dark

[@cancertismpatient5570]

Ur gay

[@ireallylikeslugs1769]

Cancertism Patient I'm gay

[@enterusername7412]

Sandy Rivera best song by Bruce Springsteen. XD

[@righteoustarnishedknight]

@@ireallylikeslugs1769 your gay

[@MultiJOKER218]

"All that can be heard was the clown laughing in the dark..." *Roll credits*

[@rafaeltrivino1790]

So weird how I watched "Are you afraid of the dark" only a coulple of days ago. "Its the most fun in the park... WHEN YOUR LAUGHING IN THE DARK." "Pick the right door and you'll go free, pick the wrong door and there he'll be."

[@philbettinger1741]

raped murderd robbed mugged twilight movie viewing maybe but i dont deal with maybes [guess what the maybe thing was from just guess]

[@rafaeltrivino1790]

Whats it from?

[@DKCGamerGirl]

That's exactly what I was thinking of when I saw the title for this video. Hands down one of the most terrifing episodes of the original AYAotD series. Has had me terifed of "Laugh In the Dark" attractions since I was a kid. That clown could get It a run for its money.

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

​@@DKCGamerGirl I like Are You Afraid of The Dark it's the only live action Nickelodeon show I like.

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

​@@rafaeltrivino1790 Are You Afraid of The Dark.

[@TheStacksGaming]

Lets listen to a creepypasta before bed he said. It would be fun he said. Well I'll have to sleep with one eye open now!

[@wolfkagome]

He talks to you too? What else has he told you? If you fall in to his clutches he'll never leave. Always there. Always whispering.

[@philbettinger1741]

you know what i mean just instead of a son its you're brian not a kid

[@shadowmist7941]

Is it wrong to admit that these are particularly my bedtime stories ?

[@jamesmoore8336]

Shadow Mist 💗 no. but it is wrong that there's a pink heart in your name.

[@arielhilltm6588]

+Shadow Mist 💗 same

[@BlueYoshi178]

I listen to these before I go to bed and on road trips or long car rides thx for not making my life boring and great narrating

[@0zmosis2001]

The piano in the background really completes the narrations and stories!

[@bramblechaser162]

Listening to this now- it’s amazing how much better your videos have gotten over the years!

[@user-oe1hq3wm4r]

Me- I'll watch a creepy-pasta before I go for an after-dark walk. Me 24 mins later- LOCK ALL THE DOORS!!!

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

I I bet it's Zeebo the Clown Ghost.

[@donutsacrifice2588]

So let me get this straight: Harley Quinn turned cannibal, killed Mister J, and then killed the old man? Now, THAT's messed up.

[@2016QuincySoulz]

"I hate sharing my meals." "...well shit."

[@firepolice3818]

Okay I don't usually leave comments but this one got to me, the ending. I know usually creepy pastas have a way of ending super sour or on a drastic note but the person making this made a huge mistake. They accidently in a sense set up an entirely different ending. The ending should have been this: it was his staff the whole time. My reasoning is this, one of the staff in the beginning comments that when was bill going to be scared?, on top of the argument that there was a female and a male staff. They had a ending in which it was his own employees scaring him the whole time. That and the ending was terrible. I usually like the works that alot of these artists do like mrcreepypasta and creepsmcpasta etc do but the fact that the ending wasn't scary, thrilling, or relevant to the story.

[@Chicagocanine]

Yeah I thought that was going to be how it ended.

[@loucathwil86]

Ditto, I was expecting this end aswell, and even though I was expecting it? I would have still enjoyed it! instead? we get a lovely old man who looks after his staff and wants his customers to be safe and well suffer a very unfair and cruel death. I know lifes a bitch, but this was a story, and I would've like to see him be rewarded for his good nature in some way.

[@tiddietickler5111]

Fire Police jUmp

[@nathanjacob0436]

Plot twist... Bill used a portal to get away. The clown was actually looking behind him for a McDonalds meal.

[@Alumirust]

Meh. The writer should really learn "Show don't tell" "The creepy clown, the psycho clown, etc..." Tell us HOW the clown is scary, WHY it's psycho. It was cliche, in my opinion. The idea of the clowns being born of the fear created in the house was interesting, though it could've been done better, with less cliches.

[@Bluesit32]

It's scary because it's a cackling clown with a butcher knife! What more do you need?

[@Alumirust]

TheBlues32 That's a massive cliche, and it isn't that scary when you've seen it done a billion times. It's overused.

[@hana-ir1sz]

Well why don't you tell that to the AUTHOR BRUH????!!!!!!!! DONT HATE THE PLAYER HATE THE GAME

[@tonyhoangson6936]

Hôn nhau trên cầu là cầu hôn- Hôn mà chẳng rời nhau là đính hôn - Hôn liền tù tì bảy phát là thất hôn - Hôn người nào đó gọi là hôn nhân - Hôn con vật nào đó gọi là hôn thú -Hôn vợ gọi là hôn thê - Hôn chồng gọi là hôn phu - Mơ hôn được người nào đó gọi là hôn ước- Mới hôn xong gọi là tân hôn - Hôn thêm cái nữa gọi là tái hôn - Hôn hai cái một lượt gọi là song hôn - Ðang hôn nửa chừng bị xô ra gọi là ly hôn…………hahaha….

[@Alumirust]

LE AWESOME GAMER Probably because I don't know the author, my delicious friend.

[@RestAndLetGo]

Are You Afraid Of The Dark? (Who else gets the reference???!!!! XD)

[@cafe97s18]

the show?

[@rafaeltrivino1790]

RestAndLetGo Just wrote my AYAOTD lines above. Zebo!!!

[@scientificbrony]

Not even a joke, a direct reference?

[@philbettinger1741]

those demon things remind me of the crawlers made of nova 6 or the zombies in cod black ops

[@dancoulson6579]

RestAndLetGo I instantly thought of it as soon as I saw the title.. Zebo...

[@julianne457]

Moral of the story: Don't open haunted houses.

[@WantingNot]

I love your tone when you narrate, pretty much anything. Your inflections and accent changes depending upon the character and it makes it so easy to tell them apart. You've got wonderful talent.

[@kathrynecker29]

The male clown sounds like Pennywise from IT. Haunts people, only certain people can see him. All that's missing is the multi-coloured balloons, horrifying monsters (mummies, werewolves etc.), homicidal, child murdering tendencies and silver dollar eyes.I can hear the Myuuji music in the background and I'm pretty sure that it's Lunatic as well.

[@emilyuram7854]

Killer username..

[@AsdfAsdf-mi6ks]

Damn it! I actually really liked Bill!!!! He was a cool dude!

[@DBD1665]

It's hilarious how MCP also voiced the female clow but it still sounds legit as fuck

[@blackrosepr61]

He has such a good girl voice

[@templar19]

Is there something strange in your house? Some half seen psycho with a taste for blood and fear? Well, fuck the police, fuck Ghost Hunters, hell fuck bringing another person with you, because we all know storming in there with nary a weapon, flashlight, or even the vestiges of a plan beyond 'Must face monster!' always work out GREAT for the protagonist!

[@Zenoasis3]

Floyd Palmer I don't think you watched the video.

[@templar19]

Zane enaZ Well, you'd be wrong.

[@Bluesit32]

Floyd Palmer Then you'd know he went inside to put up the signs and close the place up, not chase the clown.

[@ZarPof]

+TheBlues32 You'd also know he knocked that clown out and then ran away from it... I don't get it. FINISH HIM!

[@kevindurbin5377]

+Hiya!It's Kammy xxxx ghost busters dunanana

[@saigebergstrom4800]

This is honestly very well written and a very good story

[@logangonzales5028]

What makes this scary aside from the entire story itself is that I'm alone in the darkness of my living room with only the light from my computer screen illuminating a small part of the room.

[@gareth6956]

Every so often a special one comes around, I have been listening to mcp since 2011 and the writing in this hits it right in the top 10, good choice mcp.

[@mariobaquera4053]

I swear when i heard him say the name i thought he was about to make a fire ass track i always love every story he has. Mr.creepypasta your the best hands down.

[@sonnydecrosta4752]

I first believed that this was a return of Laughing Jack.... But this is sadly not true..... I won't be sleeping tonight. This was one of the best from Mr. Creepypasta.

[@the-ControlDevil]

This was a GREAT one. It's hard to find good 'new' creepy pasta, you seem to still pick the diamonds out though.

[@questionablemotivegirl6054]

I remember yelling "fuck all of you" to all the monsters of the haunted house. My mom made me apologize to the monsters. I did what I was told, while they were giving me creepy smiles.

[@ThunderStruck15]

Your creepy clown voice is so good. 1010

[@TheManmancool]

I think it would be awesome if he put random sound effects here and there, just out of the blue, make it sound like faint door is opening or faint footsteps, so that headphone users pee them selves.

[@panicatthefallout7710]

I legit just thought the clown was some kid who's been afraid of the house before and took it too personal. The ending was eh I guess.

[@Chicagocanine]

I thought the first clown was going to be that employee who had tried to scare the guy earlier. That would've been a good twist.

[@noittcerid196]

Yandere cannibal clown!!!.......EVERY MAN FOR HIMSELF!!!!

[@celestehamon7159]

I'm planning on making this story into a theatrical performance! I just love the feel of this piece! So twisted and demented, and besides, I know that this shit sells, there's a huge demographic inclination towards the horror genre right now

[@elijah9878]

She can't kill Bill it just like the movie "Kill Bill" they need to make 3 more movies before Bill can die.

[@sonicdv3953]

Elijah But bill died in part 2

[@jearelleno11]

This was fantastic 👏 Mr. Creepypasta never fails !

[@killmypoptart]

Pennywise fan fiction?

[@philbettinger1741]

SPOOKY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[@theanewman9275]

The title reminds me when I was little I use to laugh myself to sleep. So laughing in the dark comes naturally to me ;)

[@wesleythomas7125]

"Bill began screaming incessantly" What a strange thing to scream...

[@maryjane.999]

Sounds like the Wayans brothers in White Chicks, "What a beautiful chocolate man, ahehehe" 🙊

[@sfighter0085]

Great reading, a very unsettling story.

[@amyslater5081]

1 of the best stories I have heard I a while

[@adgforevermore3699]

I feel like Bill is the MVP. He's letting people down but at least they get to live another Halloween.

[@GmodPlusWoW]

"It's the most fun in the park!" *ambiguous laughter*

[@rpeters330]

This is battery acid you slime is all he would have to say

[@HydesNewFace]

It always brings a smile to my face hearing Mr. CP play the female role.

[@AsdfAsdf-mi6ks]

O.O your chuckle sounded like the happy mask salesman.

[@kugelblitz5229]

You're by far the best narrator for anything. (Only Morgan Freeman is better, no one can beat him.)

[@samial7237]

I love this channel more than almost any other, and the stories are godly awesome, but its been a while since I've been REALLY scared by a story. Its a challenge now, scare me.

[@dawsonstoneroad7549]

Creepypasta from this time held a much more visceral terror i love it

[@deadforce3031]

Was i the only one who felt bad for the clown that died? as much as i hate clowns this Creepypasta gave me the feels..Great Creepypast MCP!

[@ladypink7225]

No lie, best creepypasta I've heard. story was soooo good ♡♥

[@jhy432]

I can't wait till Halloween!! This makes me want it to come fasterrrr!!!!

[@TibleUWU]

Aww I was hoping for a plot twist in which all of his employees and coworkers simply got together to scare the piss out of him but the demented clown he saw was real but just simply watches from afar

[@rooster4951]

me and my friends always play creepypasta on our slumber parties this one is now my favorite

[@arggggggggggggggggg]

I really hoped this was about Laughing Jill. I hope there are Creepy Pastas out there about her.

[@FigureFilmz]

Okay, so here I am clicking on this video thinking to myself. Man, this is going to be just another clown themed creepypasta. But my god that twist! Loved it, I mean at first I was thinking the female clown was going to like treat the creator like a father or lover but I mean that works to.

[@tatianamilstead6036]

I love stuff like this. Thanks for the video

[@sonic1135]

Ah my favorite "Are You Afraid of the Dark" story granted this story was more then likely written before the show came out

[@kiaradp82]

its the most fun in the park when you're laughing in the dark my favorite (Are You Afraid of the Dark? ) episode

[@jenallen82]

Waited till a upload. Now I'm listening to it. ;)

[@StormSnakeMG]

So Bill was afraid of clowns, and the house created his greatest fears when he entered it... With love, Management.

[@drumsalive]

That was way creepy!! Haha awesome clown voice that was nuts

[@jabayzaballa8581]

Pretty good, gave me a chill.

[@noahdanielg]

Finally, a good creepy clown story that is actually creepy!

[@TheShadow0515]

Every time you say the clown it makes me laugh. My friends used to call my ex girlfriend the clown because she wore too much makeup lol

[@nohomo5981]

lagging on a normal video is one thing lagging on a creepypasta video is another

[@Cyphynte]

Crap. Its almost midnight... And I am completely terrified of clowns. THANK YOU MAN

[@GothAmaterasu]

Oooo I liked this one :3 Thanks again for making these!

[@castlevania4141]

alright..thats it. no more creepy pastas before bed. this one left me scarred for life. First IT when i was a kid now this and people wonder why phobia for clowns exists. Hell even Ronald McDonald creeps me out.

[@MultiJOKER218]

Amazing pasta MCP as always!!! Keep it up :)

[@saysHotdogs]

Wild violet eyes?! OMG ITS A TARGARYEN

[@andrebrown208]

Watching creepy vids at night are the best 😍😍

[@jrpone]

Zebo the clown..."Give it back"!!

[@tdfteam6413]

I get it jajajajaja

[@LORDSofCHAOS333]

dean this story was amazing

[@secretdragongamer4141]

Oh man, I wish I had money to buy those shirts. They look so frickin' cool!

[@ShadowStories]

That was mind-fuckingly amazing

[@toughteddybear5777]

Oh yeah fear of clowns? i've heard of that, it's called Bozophobia.

[@toughteddybear5777]

***** you're a mong

[@brockalicousmerk]

20 points

[@toughteddybear5777]

PoisonousBiscuit999 Why is no one getting this reference?

[@shadabonea]

+Toughteddybear Sheldon Cooper, ain't it?

[@tonyo6261]

Nice reference to Are You Afraid Of The Dark.

[@kentuckywildcatgobigblue7190]

Shitty Pasta by Kelli One day I went to a scary place and saw Slender Man. He white noised his way to me and then white noised out. Next I saw Ben Drowned. He was having a tea party with Jeff the Killer, Eyeless Jack, and Smile Dog. Oh and Laughing Jack was sitting there too in a pink frilly dress sipping from a little pink tea cup. When they saw me, they all got up and chased me. I cliche puked all over the place while Jeff told me to Go To Sleep. Eyeless Jack poked my kidney. Smile Dog smiled and whipped out his iPad to send me smile.jpg chain letters. And Laughing Jack threw gross circus candy at me. I screamed like a little pansy bitch and then I died. The End Be sure to read in the cliche spooky setting with no parents and the door closed. Lights off but candles allowed. Preferably in a closet.

[@MrTheguythatisbetter]

Better than this one.

[@kentuckywildcatgobigblue7190]

You mean mine is better right? :D

[@MrTheguythatisbetter]

Kentucky Wildcat way better.

[@kentuckywildcatgobigblue7190]

I 👍 your comment. 😁

[@PolandFeliksLukasiewiczChan]

Kentucky Wildcat 2SpOoKy5Me

[@DKCGamerGirl]

As someone who grew up with Are You Afraid of the Dark and was terrorized as a child (and, honestly, still as an adult) by Zeebo the Clown, as well as someone who recently read Stephen King's It, I know I defiantly should NOT be watching this a night in a dark, quiet room with headphones on.... Yet here I am..... I specifically clicked on this video because the title reminded me of that AYAOTD episode. * waves goodbuy to remaining sanity * Edit: Yup. Half way through the video, my cat jumped up on the bed and scared the shit out of me....

[@DriftTaxi]

As soon as that knife came out . . .2 to the body, one to the head . . .WOO HOO, we can open the attraction back up.

[@skykittyx3]

lol I here laughing at night it's my self telling jokes at like 8:00pm

[@EksaStelmere]

Good story, though I still can't get chills from it on account of the clowns. They don't seem scary for some reason.

[@aminashaikh2331]

I love this story soo much

[@MisterCake]

I love clowns! but this gave me slight chills.

[@kurohunt125]

bill be like: congratulations, you played yourself

[@Dogpool23]

Omg I remember this was in an are you afraid of the dark episode

[@jezebelolander795]

i am now terrified of clowns in the dark

[@eternitisRequiem]

Plot twist: the person filming at 20:00 + is having a stroke.

[@adamlindsay4761]

That story was very unnerving

[@cheyenne2111]

This was amazing!

[@retroreina400]

The clown giggles sound like the Happy Masked Salesman.

[@san_toad]

I love it so much I am extremely afraid of clowns... Thank you for this read

[@JammyJam21]

Is it weird that I listen to creepypasta's to sleep? I mean yes, the voices are soothing but idk why but i prefer to listen to scary stories to sleep...

[@MultiJOKER218]

Saaaaaaaaameeeeeee af

[@matthewrmartindale5568]

The voice echoes in my sleep^^ so it's soothing to an extent. But the actually story... (Shivers lightly)

[@senhuan]

It's pretty normal.

[@thearlingtonundertaker4344]

jelly fish I literally did that yesterday and when I wait for my shift to start.

[@thearlingtonundertaker4344]

jelly fish lol sometimes I hear like a scary part say I hear skin tearing noises they sound actually like ASMR so im not really scared cause it sounds not as loud it almost becomes like ASMR. even tho I usually listen to girl ASMR not guys but I fall asleep to creepy pastas I guess.

[@gatall91]

Best one yet