How to Write a CLEAR THESIS Statement: Examples of a Thesis Statement

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I think you mixed the background information with the thesis statement, correct me if i am mistake.

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Is the use of : or ; common in thesis statements?

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I have not seen that, and it looks like the punctuation would not be correct.

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Climate change can cause many problems; 3 main effects of climate change are sea ice loss, accelerated sea level rise, and longer, more intense heat waves. How is this for a thesis statement? I would greatly appreciated it if u can get back to me on this, i need to see if im on the right track.

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The thesis statement is very good! I would probably separate the two parts into two separate sentences since the thesis should really just focus on the main idea (the three main effects...).

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If you write on the spot, that's fine. It's important for you to know how to write a thesis statement easily and correctly so that you can write on the spot quickly. It takes some practice, but you can do it! 😀

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And one more can we start our writing with thesis sentences?

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Yes, but it depends on the writing assignment. If you need to write a full essay, the thesis statement comes at the end of the introduction. That means that the introduction paragraph contains a hook to catch the reader’s attention and some background information and finally ends with the thesis statement at the end of the introduction paragraph

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How do we do a thesis statement to a music video

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That depends on what your essay is supposed to discuss. What do you want to reader to know? Once you know that, you can write your thesis statement. Look at your assignment and look for a question that you are supposed to answer. Try to see what the different parts of your essay are supposed to do. Are you analyzing a music video? Explaining why a music video is your favorite?

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can you please write a Thesis statement on this topic " impact of Gaza war on gaza"

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That's your topic, but what you do want to say about the topic? Causes? Solutions? etc.

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You're right, you should not write the thesis statement as a question. However, you should make a question that you keep for yourself as the question that you are trying to answer. The answer to that question is the thesis statement. For example: What are the reasons that people should have a pet? People should have a pet for the following reasons: companionship, exercise, and ... The question helps you focus on what you are trying to accomplish in the essay. The answer to the question is your thesis statement.

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The question is Do technologies have a positive or negative effect on personal safety? I have select positive points. Is my thesis statement correct? Check my positive examples below and tell Thesis: The positive effects of technologies on personal safety are best for the following examples:machines, communication and ppe.

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It is OK, but a better thesis would list the positive effects. What are the positive effects that you're going to discuss in your essay? Another option is to leave the key points out of the thesis. For instance: Technologies have a positive effect on personal safety.

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I have given examples of the positive effects above, can you suggest 3 best positive examples of the above question?

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