'Maria's Revenge' Sonic Creepypasta

[@heypeterReal]

The quality of the story might be up for debate, but the footage that accompanied it was pretty mint

[@intenseoof1338]

huh?

[@Matth3w-wil]

@@intenseoof1338If you watched other vids he has talked about trying to improve the quality of videos, he was probably doing a self reflection.

[@willowmunson1444]

the footage was the best part. the cliche “lost media” story contrasted with the bright colors of sonic adventure was amazing

[@Wizardjones69]

​@@willowmunson1444the problem was THE edgy part of the story

[@The_half_hedgehog_dude]

​@@Wizardjones69 i agree Like why did something so fucked up be in this story

[@SAENICSAENIC]

I remember this old ass creepypasta. It was one of the only ones that actually felt realistic to me. It's always been in the back of my mind and always felt very underrated to me.

[@morgue.dweller]

op: Maria was nude and in a suggestive pose also op: blood?!?! but this is a Sonic game!!!

[@redymedy]

yeah but that part can be explained, usually for clothing they have a base model underneath, and the clothing above, like dolls kinda, the blood graphic physically doesnt exist in SA2, the rest could happen without adding anything new.

[@hipepleful]

​@redymedy I understood it as like an ACTUAL naked model, and not just "barbie naked", if thar makes any sense.

[@gabriellleonster8719]

If i could change something in the creepypasta, i would left the poses part just vague enough, so it can be explained like a weird series of bugs that happens to bring back some bad memories to the protagonist, so the story would be the protagonist coping through the game bugs. I like the part of a cut plot about an infectious disease, tho.

[@DjDeadpig]

If I were to rewrite this story, I’d change the abuse Maria receives. Instead, what if it was the scientists treating her like a lab rat that made her depressed, and Gerald couldn’t do anything about it due to him being caught up in his work, leading to her eventual death. Gerald would be wracked with guilt after this and shadow wouldn’t be able to fully process her death and start hallucinating her everywhere, to the point where he’d convince himself in order to appease her, he’d have to kill Gerald to get revenge in her honour.

[@eljaminlatour6633]

"Maria's Revenge" sounds like the title of a well written story, but to me, it isn't. The biggest low was the fact that Maria in this story was nude, in suggestive poses, and done by her grandpa and the other scientists. To me, that's just distasteful, reminds me of Blackout's Dormitabis or Urbanspook, they're worse than what happened in Maria's Revenge, but still. To me, that's just shocking for the sake of shocking. Also, correction about what the author claims, NIDS is a genetic disease and can't be contagious.

[@blue-flare7060]

That’s honestly what shock value is sadly but I would agree it’s honestly distasteful. Like I think the concept of Maria appears around the stage and have her hair on the chao and stuck on the title screen is cool. But I don’t like the implication (this case in the Maria revenge creepy pasta) that Maria was practically taken advantage of in the ark. Which isn’t true since we know Gerald would never want anything bad happen to her.

[@KOINOYOKUSHIRYOKU]

Words cannot express how much I love the intro the strange gaming. It feels so cozy

[@yourcordialvermillionchapw2398]

Yes, very homey vibe indeed. Glad I am not the only one.

[@VessIsWired.]

Hello fellow azumi pfp

[@screamingahhh2808]

Minus the quality of the writing the thing that pisses me off the most is the fact they say S rank even though it'd be A rank

[@laneplain107]

very real

[@Bakesuta]

I think the writer was blatantly ignored information.

[@diegodankquixote-wry3242]

I remember SOG reading this back in the day. Such edgelord and tastless nonsense story.

[@Shadow-hw3kn]

tasteless*

[@Dawntje_]

Didn't Muta at the time say "Ok, what the fuck?" Or something like it after reading it?

[@Wizardjones69]

I think the only major flaw in this creepypasta is the fact that the "beta content" that the protagonist experienced was in a dolphin emulator, wasnt supposed to be in a dreamcast one, the "beta content" would be scrapped in the gamecube port

[@Barakon]

Does dolphin not emulate a Dreamcast?

[@maskdcat2619]

@@Barakon I am not sure but in the story he said this was the gamecube port

[@TheMusicGuy72]

8:40 why does maria remind me of that megamind meme in this picture

[@blue-flare7060]

“No rings?”

[@Alex_Off-Beat]

This story really seemed like it was going somewhere cool but it just kinda falls apart in the second half

[@Perdix64]

It fell apart at the “nude Maria” part.

[@eljaminlatour6633]

​@@Perdix64 Yeah, that's just something shocking for the sake of shocking. It's not as bad as the Urbanspook series, but still, very distasteful, Lolita type content is just unacceptable in creepypastas and horror media as a whole.

[@pokken64]

Well that was disgusting, time to wipe my memory

[@yourcordialvermillionchapw2398]

If only it were that easy dude... If only. You'd want to focus on the better good thoughts in life... But the evils keep revealing.

[@biygas]

The thing I like about this one is how calm the narrator is about it. He doesn't start throwing up or anything stupid like that.

[@slimeinabox]

The plot starts good, gets great, goes dark, becomes trash. It's seems like a bad copy-cat of Godzilla NES. If I were to compare pasta to water quality and have Godzilla NES be steam purified drinking water, then this one is algae filled mosquito larva infested old car tire water. I don't want to be to harsh but that's where I'm placing it. edit: you know what? i was to hash. I just didnt like the ending. moving ranking up from "mosquito larva infested old car tire water" to "pool water"

[@slimeinabox]

Listen to the story again, Wow I misinterpreted a lot of that lmao. same opinion though.

[@laneplain107]

this story is nasty, but im very annoyed by the fact that they said genocide city was still in sonic 2 via hacking the game. this isnt true, and genocide city zone never made it out of the concept stages iirc and was eventually turned into metropolis zone

Loved hearing this again, I'd forgotten about it completely. Didn't know you also narrated game pastas! Lovely to see you filling out such a dead niche. It would be cool to hear longer stories, but honestly all pasta narrations are great.

[@heypeterReal]

Gaming creepypastas are the primary focus of when I upload a creepypasta, with occasional exceptions. I do like the longer ones, I just need more time to plan around narrating them because the shorter ones can be done and uploaded in a few hours compared to something much longer like NES Godzilla

[@CopenorMcbrokeleg]

@@heypeterRealWill you do NES Godzilla creepypasta? Yes it's been covered here on youtube by others already, but myself and others would like to hear you narrate it if you choose to do so.

[@jojobizadTRASH]

The OG footage carries the whole story, in my opinion. I can see how it's trying to be this Stephen King-like short story of a narrator discovering a secret that opened a whole new can of worms. The story is a bit rough around the edges, but that's up for debate. I bet it was pretty ahead of its time, but it has aged a bit when looking at it now.

[@LPBvgc]

"The cutscene was normal" "Rouge's voice was playing normally" "The subtitles were incorrect" Sounds like SA2 is now a foreign language show on Netflix with the english Dub and CC on.

[@Excusib7209-ty3mz]

"Maria... *explosion*"

[@justsem1368]

What the fuck, IS THAT SHADOW DI-

[@VreyIsGrey]

(14 seconds of unedited laughter)

[@SansINess53]

Maria's revenge (my take) : The story starts the same way, you need to do the game boy cube emulator to do it, The story starts, shadow is up above the bridge everything is normal but then shadow just starts to look off, starting to look to his left and right but then, he hears maria's voice behind him and he sees maria but he sees maria without eyes, mouth, and nose. Shadow weirdly enough isn't terrified but instead he looks just confused on why maria is here. But then she disappears. This time teleporting to the screen looking the player with blank black eyes. Shadow is alone again but this time there's no background it's blank black. And everything turns off. And when we reach the jungle level Shadow looms over and instead of seeing sonic, he sees maria again, instead of battling against sonic, shadow battles against gerald, and the subtitle says to kill gerald. But there is no person there, after he finishes, in front of shadow there's a gun soldier. The same GUN soldier that killed $&@#*. The later level sonic and shadow battle but we play as sonic, and shadow doesn't attack us instead looks to his left all the time while shadow and sonic run, the screen goes blank but then we go to later scene, Shadow in a capsule screaming why %&#*% is doing this, but %^#*% which is called maria by shadow asks shadow to do her a wish. Bring Humanity to Doom.. When amy confronts shadow, she tries but nothing works with him, amy says this "would maria wanted this?", shadow immediately attacks amy as we see maria in the background staring cheerfully at shadow as he murders amy. The later on we skip everything up until the final hazard, this time sonic fights it with knuckles' and tails' and rogue's support. Shadow is nowhere to be seen But when everyone defeats the final hazard they notice amy is nowhere to be seen Sonic finds her.. Dead. Shadow absorbs chaos energy, telling sonic, that humanity is selfish, and that they tortured shadow and then we see a scene where gun tried to shoot shadow done because he wasn't obeying them. Then shadow turns into super form asking sonic what are his last words. Sonic rages like a mad man slamming the ground and his fur turns dark and sonic's pupils are gone replaced with white blank eyes. Sonic attacks shadow and they both have a intense battle and when shadow is exhausted. Shadow relives his life, seeing how terrible it was, accepting his death But gerald tells shadow to not give up but nothing works. Sonic kills shadow off, killing him in a brutal manner. In the after life, Shadow and maria meet again, happy reunite together, Ţøģęţhəŕ føřēvêŕ. ... that didn't happen, Shadow is just all alone. Maria left him, he was no use for her.

[@omens255]

I like the take but the Dark Sonic was getting into a Fanfic territory 😂

[@SansINess53]

@@omens255 did you want fleetway instead?

[@SansINess53]

@@omens255 I mean it's more juice to have him instead of having him be in base ngl.

[@UtSonicAM_NavySketcher]

Isn't Shadow like, immortal? Or did I get that info from somewhere not so trustworthy

[@SansINess53]

@@UtSonicAM_NavySketcher he isn't immortal but he was made to be immortal so maria is able to get rid of her sickness.

[@WiFiDown37811]

I'll be honest, I've never liked this creepypasta simply because of what the story is implying. Maria being r*ped by her grandfather and the other scientists just feels...really off to me. I have experience with things similar to what this implies happened to Maria and it does genuinely just give me bad vibes. I don't think that stories should avoid topics like this because there are stories out there that handle this kind of topic really well (stories like Borasca and Penpal), but this one...this one kinda felt like it was written in bad taste. That being said, it's not an awful creepypasta. I agree that it's one of the better Sonic creepypastas and it is written pretty well. I just personally would've liked it if it's subject material was handled with more tact. That's just me though EDIT: I almost forgot to mention how I don't see how Maria being r*ped fills up any plot holes or makes anything make more sense. It's part of my problem with this story. It just says "Maria being r*ped fills up the plot holes in SA2 because trust me". I've never had an issue with this game and I thought the story was well written enough. I am biased tho because it's always been my favorite Sonic game

[@mr.werb15md90]

first thing's first, you are a wonderful narrator, and your content is a joy. while I don't think "one R--- victim calling out to another well meaning victim" is that bad of an idea, you need to do it REALLY WELL. I don't mind the main character, the fact he recovered from his experience reduces the edgelordiness I think. Maria is a sick joke. she already had a tragedy, heck, her illness gave her two, why would she need a 3rd, especially one like this? I will say, though, I LOVED the beginning, and everything up until those R--- photos kept me engaged.

[@fl4m1ng07]

Bro was sick of her death being joked ahout

[@akabread5537]

dudeee no way i remember seeing this creepypasta as a kid and it scared me so bad. i never hear anyone talk about it tho, thought i was the only person to really remember it lol

[@dadlh6394]

The start of the story was heading in a good direction but then it became worse... By alot

[@ilovemywhiteshoes]

did shadow fart or is she a big old liar

[@yourcordialvermillionchapw2398]

Yes, she was the one who smelt it therefore he was the one who dealt it (Snapcube Reference).

[@ScuttleBugReal]

@@yourcordialvermillionchapw2398Whoever made the rhyme did the crime.

[@willowmunson1444]

i’m four minutes in, this is so fucking stupid and i love it

[@lforlost131]

trust me, before the 10 minute mark, it gets questionable

[@fl4m1ng07]

Real

[@darkhorse744]

Ngl, I thought the title was Mario's revenge. Which sounds like a very weird kind of Sonic Creepypasta.

[@NeweRen]

that horrible intro cutscene will permanentally be a CERTIFIED HOOD CLASSIC

[@MochiiMochaPop]

Just found this channel as of this message, and I am excited to see what else there is to discover here.. Keep it up!!

[@Matt-zu2lu]

This story isn’t scary, shocking or interesting, it’s just distasteful…

[@yosuvarley415]

Genuinely one of my favorite creepypastas despite its quality (partly because Sa2 is my favorite game and that Maria is one of my favorite Sonic characters). Yea, its messy. Yes it sucks after the opening act. Yea the writing is sloppy. But this game gets the horror that is 100% sa2 and for that its #real

[@da-sonic]

i remember watching a top 10 gaming compilation video with this in it

[@Barakon]

3:33 Maybe they switched to the Dreamcast version once they downloaded the Maria menu theme? Or maybe the Maria theme was a or hack/modified file that added supposed beta content back?

[@WiFiDown37811]

I'll be honest, I've never liked this creepypasta simply because of what the story is implying. Maria being r*ped by her grandfather and the other scientists just feels...really off to me. I have experience with things similar to what this implies happened to Maria and it does genuinely just give me bad vibes. I don't think that stories should avoid topics like this because there are stories out there that handle this kind of topic really well (stories like Borasca and Penpal), but this one...this one kinda felt like it was written in bad taste. That being said, it's not an awful creepypasta. I agree that it's one of the better Sonic creepypastas and it is written pretty well. I just personally would've liked it if it's subject material was handled with more tact. That's just me though

[@lordcrimson908]

The creepypasta of legend that i completely forgot existed

[@TheCoolerMoonJam]

You lost me after you started talking about Sega putting in a sa plot in a sonic game

[@Kelswagsinandballin]

The intro is really nice

[@WhatTheCheick]

Deleted my initial reading for something more thought out I’m about 18 minutes in and I’ll finish it, but this story is just tactless, it feels like it’s only going to use these elements for shock value rather than anything worthwhile or thoughtful I don’t fault this channel, it’s just a reading, but in future I’d recommend content warnings for people who may need it Also the replies in the original post are so shortsighted Update: having finished it, I see an attempt given the whole relation aspect but it’s still very poorly executed, and I do disagree with it being “One of the best” I wouldn’t want to see the worst if that’s the case

[@Dawntje_]

Hey, surprised seeing you here. I'm not fully in rn and I agree it would be best for a CW. But there are creepypastas that handle those kind of subjects much worse, there's a creepypasta of Bill's backyard which ends in uuuuh... No. Kiyoshi SNES, an Earthbound pasta which uses the Japanese serial killer being put into the game and talking about how his victims were killed and r worded in detail. And there's another EB pasta that poorly deals with mental illness and anguish. Trust me, there's so much worse.

[@nanowithbeans2511]

Nice to see this classic covered by a more ASMR-ish voice.

[@DragonSlicer]

What a horrible story and it really didn’t need that part in the story with the “poses”.

[@Pat_amto]

That shit was actually so unnecessary

[@handrising3714]

The screenshots are so creepy, weird and ominous lol i would shit myself if that appears

[@sonidash216]

What the *Yoshi* did you say about my Lord and Savior Sonic EXE?

[@aquelgamermexicano]

The main things i don't like too much about the story are the r@pe element which is just added for the sake of shock value, i just don't think the story needed something of that nature for the sake of making it scary. The backstory of the ARK as a whole is pretty messed up as it is so you could have just made it about the illness and how Gerald doomed them all by being contagious. It's all in the creepypasta, but i can't help but feel they thought it needed more "spice" so they added that for the hell of it.

[@Alexplayzgtagfr]

You know that isn’t a bad story it actually has a dark but good ending where the good characters get what they deserve justice

[@DjDeadpig]

Swear I get I hate you vibes from this story Both are Rom hacks Both have edgy secret endings in them Once getting those endings, the game is corrupted Probably more stuff but you get the point

[@teethgirlprod]

"all S rank"

[@woaddragon]

Well...i should see this video at 3:00 am

[@wrongemail5242]

Related to creepy pastas that cover series topics in unrelated games. There was a huniepop creepy pasta that SOG(mutahar) read forever ago that was about his wife leaving him and dying in a car accident I think that has always stuck with me for being so bizarre. You should do that one.

[@Oceantaikutsuu]

8:43 No rings?

[@VessIsWired.]

Does anyone else feel like might be a vent story?

[@sahilhossain8204]

Lore of 'Maria's Revenge' Sonic Creepypasta momentum 100

[@Emammany]

bro this was supposed to be a creepypasta not a fanfic wtf

[@MegadriveMaster.]

Pretty good ngl I guess there is some parts that seem a bit cliche but atleast it tried something nre

[@Sumeguy257]

Can you please do legend of sen and sonic has passed by pls?

[@momto2bs]

This is definitely better than most gaming pastas

[@Wandergirl108]

Chill out, people, this story isn't that bad for a video game pasta. Don't get me wrong, I'm a sucker for video game pastas, but there are far more nonsensical routes to take than this, this avoided a lot of video game pasta clichés fairly admirably all things considered. As for people calling this "tasteless" because it attaches r-word to a Sonic game…again, chill, it's a video game creepypasta, turning a beloved childhood video game dark is kind of the point. To me, this didn't feel like a cheap attempt to be dark, it felt like there was a heartfelt point to the story - maybe the author really did go through what he says he did in the story and this was something he wrote to help work through it, I don't know for sure but that's the vibe I get. I don't know, this really isn't that awfully written, I've read and even enjoyed way worse.

[@Wizardjones69]

Still edgy as hell

[@gabriellleonster8719]

I was thinking something similar. That, at the end, the protagonist finds out that someone else ensured a similar experience, but now the protagonist can make justice. I get why many people feel annoyed because "serious topics in a Sonic game is so edgy" and stuff, but idk, i enjoyed the story.

[@parjupiter134]

You're right, people apparently likes to get frustrated for some stupid fanfiction flaws. I still think it could've been better : the GBA connection thing looks out of place, the story doesn't know itself if it tells about a haunted ROM or hidden game files and I guessed way too early the creepypasta was about r#]@ on Maria. But it has real potential. People complaining about serious, or edgy, stuff in the Sonic games don't seem to remember the Adventure games were putting the bar really high on the "edgy" content at their release times.

[@playernotfound9489]

the entire point of the STH franchise was built off of mario but edgy@@Wizardjones69

[@CassiusStelar]

Honestly. Fucking sucks. Just using rXpe for shock value.

[@yourcordialvermillionchapw2398]

Still a highly morbid reality, could have been executed much better yes.

[@CassiusStelar]

@@yourcordialvermillionchapw2398 yeah that's what people said about the tomb raider reboot too. But it still sucks ass.

[@austinreavis4226]

I kinda wanna see someone rewrite this creepypasta, or do a retake or something at least

[@CassiusStelar]

@@austinreavis4226 simple proposed edit. In the actual lore she got fucking shot by a military officer, who in one version of the canon deeply regrets what he has done and wishes to atone. Make the story about Shadow going after *him* . Make the twist be that he's fucking old and repentant but Shadow gives no fucks. Make Maria haunt *him*

[@Devout214]

Jesus died for us all! Have a wonderful day! Jesus is God! (The Holy Trinity is true, no oneness or modalism) Also *cough cough* Outlast 2 *cough cough*

[@NeweRen]

1:41 hm yes. S - R A N K S

[@DefileOdds]

Cut trejul!

[@BlockyTheBrickMaster]

TOILET revenge when?

[@malachigv]

No.

[@eldark7883]

Hey peter is this real, did it happen in real life?

[@yourcordialvermillionchapw2398]

The "Terrible Act" that happens to her here, unfortunately happens everyday, actually... Oh, but Maria's Revenge isn't real sure.

[@henrique_best686]

Dude just add some noise to the video, youtube's compression destroyd the footage even more than it usualy does.

[@rocketanimations1980]

Sheesh there's no s rank in sa2

[@smellimonke9724]

Real

[@Some-random-guy-bleble]

Real

[@k0dori]

real

[@hoobamcdooba29]

Real

[@yourcordialvermillionchapw2398]

Realest of the reals.

[@pyronexcon9162]

Real

[@Alexplayzgtagfr]

Is this a creepy pasta or is this a inappropriate video

[@samuelhjf]

Are you blind well I will give the answer and yes of course the video is a Creepypasta

[@cay7809]

crouch on the rails or ur bad at the game

[@Millycat21]

Bro there no s ranks

[@Wizardjones69]

Dormitabis lore vibes in this creepypasta, it could be good, but my god its edgy

[@GeometryDashLover3344]

👍

[@EpicKMetalSonic]

This is even worse than Sonic.exe, by a long shot. Do not lie.

[@Wizardjones69]

Nah

[@EpicKMetalSonic]

Yuh.@@Wizardjones69

[@EpicKMetalSonic]

@@Wizardjones69 yuh.

[@ToxikBox]

YeeeeEeeeeEEEESSSSSSS

[@roastytoasty1997]

this shit ass 😭🔥🔥🔥

[@Some-random-guy-bleble]

Second baby

[@Devout214]

Jesus died for us all! Have a wonderful day! Jesus is God! (The Holy Trinity is the truth, no modalism or oneness)

[@playernotfound9489]

didn't ask

[@Devout214]

@@playernotfound9489 that doesn’t matter

[@DeezNuts-uk9bd]

why we posting this on a videogame rape story​@@Devout214

[@yoshietakayama]

didn't ask

[@Devout214]

@@yoshietakayama It don matter