Midnight Storm // Experimental Short Film

So, this is an experimental story telling idea I had. Let me explain:
I love writing and I love filmmaking and I was bored so I thought I'd mess around and try to integrate the two. Audio books are big right now and I wondered if you could make them a little more interesting and try to further engage the listener with ambient sounds.
P.S. I don't have any money for actors or voice actors so please don't judge me for doing it all myself haha
This video is best experienced with headphones on. Let me know what you think. If you have any ideas to add to it, let me know in the comments too :)
Peace! :)
Equipment Used:
Sony A6500
Helios 58mm f2
Samyang 24mm f1.5
Zoom H1 Audio Recorder
Cheep Amazon Tripod
Edited and Colour Graded in Premiere Pro
Song: The Lengths by The Black Keys

[@kendrapayne7598]

Lovely, and sad. Very captivating to me.

[@ikke391]

Wow this is really great! Just discovered your channel and saw a few of your videos! Really like how your tell your stories and the feeling that comes with them! You have got a new subscriber

[@CianHamilton]

Thanks so much. I really appreciate it :)

[@thedingo1572]

Your a very talented young man.

[@johannesfeederle]

Hey Cian!!! what a great film!!! this really shows the power of film, words and sound!!! great combination of all!!! keep up the good work! greetings from Germany!!

[@CianHamilton]

Ah thanks so much man. Really appreciate it 😊

[@reellifeproductions5877]

Absolutely love this!! This could be a whole new genre.

[@tadhgb9208]

Love it !! would love to see this acted out too.

[@CianHamilton]

Haha me too

[@oliviafitzgerald6876]

Cian this is brilliant, well done. A great idea and wonderfully encaptured. You are talented in lots of ways and I look forward to seeing more from you. Keep doing what you love. Hugs from an old friend in Denmark xxx

[@CianHamilton]

Ah thanks so much Olivia 😊😊 what a nice thing to say 😍 hugs from an old friend back home! xx

[@MotionBoatFilms]

Great story man very good to watch!

[@CianHamilton]

Thank you :) i appreciate that

[@lauriemacpherson7647]

Bravo Cian - make more please.

[@CianHamilton]

Haha thanks Laurie. I shall! 😊

[@JaneCharlotte]

Love this! Was expecting a car crash😬 glad I was wrong! Great story telling😁✌🏼

[@CianHamilton]

Thank you thank you :) i thought a car crash might be a bit obvious. I'm glad you were glad Haha

[@parkourkinsale]

Best vid yet

[@CianHamilton]

Haha cheers dude :)