Miss Barton's Famous Cakes - Film Noir Short

[@peoplezoo]

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[@billmurray7473]

THIS is a movie genre that Seriously needs a Comeback. Now More Than Ever.

[@NyghtDarkwatch]

This is 1000% true to the Noir genre. Costumes, set, dialogue, acting nuances --a joy to watch. Kudos to cast and crew!

[@TheloniousCube]

No, it really isn't. It's an okay suspense film, but it's not remotely noir

[@gardengatesopen]

I agree with NyghtDarkWatch. True noir & a joy to watch! AND now I want cake!

[@deaddocreallydeaddoc5244]

No, it isn't! This is a kinky horror film, closer to the Boris Karloff "Thriller" series of the late 1950s, and early 50s. A Film Noir is typically a crime-based film, not a Gothic Horror/Comedy.

[@johngore7744]

There should have been drinks and cigarettes.

[@TheloniousCube]

@@deaddocreallydeaddoc5244 It's false advertising

[@RaihanHossain-kq5py]

Haha.... the filmmakers just built up the suspense, and every time we expected violence, defied. There were no escaped murderers, no detectives or no poisned cake slices. Just bunch of recipe hunters...... however the making of the film is impeccable. True noir (minus the violence).......and I want to taste the cake.

[@mustangbrown5068]

3 years late to this party. You tube algorithm failed me until today . Would have watched this day 1!

[@casoogle5346]

The actress Lauren LaVera (I think?) did a fantastic job here! Her style is so true to form and her voice really sells the character! Well done!

[@joytekb]

Only explanation why this has soo little views is that you level of filmmaking don't deserve this platform. Best short movie i have seen here by far.

[@peoplezoo]

That means a lot...

[@sherryab3964]

100% agree!

[@Waldemar_la_Tendresse]

I would rather say TOP 10%, and I think that's good enough.

[@liseromar3212]

The make up artist in me did a little wiggle in my seat at the close up of the little tear running down her cheek, and I saw how true to the era her face make up was... Powder-tastical! ❤️ It's the attention paid to all those little details that made watching this such a gas. Kudos!

[@e.l.france5136]

Yes, I thought the tear (and the lighting on her cheek) was perfection. Your comment made me miss the old format of imdb

[@Teerapatkongrat]

Wow, this is so freaking brilliant, the music, the lighting, the camera movement. the acting, the story, the suspense. This is certainly the best Noir short film on youtube.

[@peoplezoo]

Hell of a review!

[@geraldmahoney4856]

And the lightning at the right time.

[@Heffalumpswoozles85]

Actually, the lighting sucks. It’s too soft and diffused. Films from this era were shot with hard lighting with a lot more contrast and low dynamic range. Everyone these days always gets the lighting wrong when trying to do period pieces.

[@geraldmahoney4856]

@@Heffalumpswoozles85 lightning not lightning.

[@Heffalumpswoozles85]

@@geraldmahoney4856 You replied to the wrong person. I didn’t write “lightning”.

[@MisterG2323]

The copy for the newspaper clippings is a sly touch. Superb slice of cinematic cake, this.

[@joyyoung3108]

This is beautifully​ shot. The play of shadows and light are amazing. There's tension and suspense mixed with humor. Great job.

[@peoplezoo]

Thanks joy!

[@JustWill6969]

Well written AND well shot? Why doesn't this have more views?!

[@christinamacneal4107]

Stupid film

[@RossRossiter]

Because the Kardasians

[@juju10683]

because people don't like either one of those things lol

[@jonesohneindiana]

Also well acted

[@freesaxon6835]

It should have more views!

[@NebulousJ]

The night night at the end is hysterical

[@ginaleith1510]

Omg I came here to say this 😂 'Night night.'

[@dreamer9375]

Everything about this video screams excellence. The actors, music, cinematography, clothes, ambience. Just top-notch.

[@johngore7744]

That guys beard didn’t look right for the 1950s. He looked like a hobo.

[@nagarajnanjagol]

I don't understand why such a terrific movie has not reached many people

[@peoplezoo]

Because then it won't be cool anymore

[@Waldemar_la_Tendresse]

Because KZbin is too full of crap, so that it's hard to find the gems?

[@ianchandler4649]

What an indelible short! It’s gripping, atmospheric, and well acted. Wish the Hollywood industry would do more noir films, but I know that good writing doesn’t always translate to decent box-office numbers.

[@pretzeltime3900]

Been watching KZbin videos for years. Just today this video was recommended. Why just now when this video was posted 3 years ago. It’s a wonderful short film. It should be recommended more often to more people.

[@peoplezoo]

For 3 years this film was getting very few views. Then randomly a couple months ago it started taking off… Why? No damn clue. The algorithm I guess?

[@GuardianFilmworks]

This was absolutely one of the best film noir shorts I have seen in a very long time. The lighting, acting and even the slight softening of the image transported me right to the height of the 40s when noir was at its peak! Well done! 👏👏

[@katashley1031]

Honestly, as an industry veteran I'm genuinely impressed. Beautifully filmed, wonderful music, some good dark comedic moments and suspense, perfectly ambiguous ending. Really just the facial hair and perhaps some lighting tweaks here and there and it's about perfect.

[@peoplezoo]

This means a lot.

[@ericjohnson6634]

I'm glad I'm not the only one for whom the facial hair stood out as a glaring anachronism.

[@johngore7744]

Me too the only men with beards like that in the 50s were sleeping on park benches.

[@jessicaheger1880]

They just escaped an insane asylum. The facial hair seemed believable to me.

[@robertwalker5521]

How do you know that the first pair are criminals...and the second pair are true police ........instead of the REVERSE?

[@richsenecal]

This is a fantastic movie! It reminds me of Twilight Zone episodes back in the early 60s. Very well done!

[@peoplezoo]

That and “Alfred Hitchcock Presents” were our biggest references for this

[@batturion]

Still one of the best noir shorts on here. The female lead, Lauren Lavera has since become a scream queen in the Terrifier films.

[@francis342]

I felt like I was transported to the 1940's and did not want to leave. Love the Black Noire genre. I want more.

[@afg3643]

great theme and movie...and them showing respect towards the film noir era...the dialogue...the b/w film and narrative with interwoven content...the film noir era would admire and be so proud..her acting... inquisitive, scared and cunning-superbly accomplished-just my "touche" for the film. In the days when men wore hats, you take off the hat in house.... if there was an academy award for acting in "short" movie's Lauren laverna should win best actress award...her mannerisms, authentic looks and gestures... beautiful and amazing...

[@Muirmaiden]

I absolutely love this! Extremely well-acted, well-shot, with fantastic music, a treat for a noir fan like myself!

[@saallday294]

A nod to Roald Dahl's 'Lamb to the Slaughter' Very well done.

[@anikeshmidya4882]

I have seen quite a few noir shorts on KZbin but I have to say this one takes the cake. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . **Literally**

[@roringusanda2837]

Get out! 😮👉

[@JVRRoos]

What an awesome film! Makes me so joyful to find such hidden gems on youtube! Hope you all reach the audience this film truly deserves. Beautiful!

[@hsefilms5994]

This gave me chills! I should not have watched this so late at night. Absolutely fantastic job.

[@john-thomaschavez8306]

Very well-done! The writing, acting, setting, and cinematography was all good, and the 4:3 aspect ratio wasn't just a nice callback to classic noir films, but also helped add to the suspense, as the boxier screen gave the impression of the protagonist feeling trapped. I also loved the use of lighting and shadows, as is must for any good noir film. But one thing that really stood out with the contrast of light and shadows was use of the lighting, especially when building up to the film's climax. Overall great job!

[@peoplezoo]

Thank you for the thoughtful review, John! Glad you enjoyed the lighting! Will pass the message on to our DP!

[@katekarp3494]

Masterpiece! You saw the turn but it didn't matter. It was so well--er, executed. Didn't go over the top, even with the thunder crash before one of the men said "Butcher Boys." Want to see more by this director.

[@michaelcarpenter4065]

Just seeing this for the first time. You perfectly captured the noir feel….the shadows, the music, and the acting were beautiful.

[@ringozeitgeist]

Excellent! The acting, writing, sets, camera work, and costumes are all first rate! So much attention to detail, I have to wonder why the one actor kept his beard. On a cop, in this time period? No way. She would have known immediately that he was a fake and not let them in the house. Also, though the fedoras are period, the way they're being worn is not. For detectives, it would have been snap brim or nothing. But enough quibbling. It's all terrific!

[@davidfusani]

I taught film for many years. This doesn't miss a trick. I love the facial reflection in the rainy window (see Robert Blake in In Cold Blood). Just the right amount of menace and satirical fun. Wonderful job at every level.

[@peoplezoo]

Means a lot! Great reference. Hadn’t even occurred to me the similarity, but spot on

[@Waldemar_la_Tendresse]

This short film stands out VERY much from the crowd of short films, in every positive way possible. Congratulations!

[@Bootstataboots]

I love that lean over the two "detectives" make to look into the kitchen lol

[@shuga1313]

This is noir perfection !!! Such an awesome film that I'm thrilled to have found . Kudos to the beautiful and talented lead actress and tremendous applause to the creative minds that bought this jewel into existence . More please !

[@peoplezoo]

check out our other work! More shorts coming soon as well!

[@shuga1313]

@@peoplezoo I definitely will ! Can't wait to see what the next masterpiece is !!!

[@deaddocreallydeaddoc5244]

This is not Film Noir. It's a Horror/Comedy. FN is about crime or dark human drama.

[@andrestarga007]

The BEST short film I've ever seen on youtube. Its incredibly well shot and set. Also superb acting. Thank you for this

[@danielhanawalt4998]

Something special about black and white films, especially with a little sinister twist. Well done.

[@fabled-pilgrim]

What a fantastic short film from start to finish. It was so tightly scripted, exquisitely performed and the atmosphere skipped from light hearted to tense in a heartbeat. It could easily have turned into a parody of the genre but it skillfully avoids doing that. Would love to see another short in this style.

[@Dagothownsneravar]

this deserves to be a big screen movie

[@Chr.U.Cas1622]

👍👌👏 Oh WOW, simply fantastic!

[@gretatudeg4877]

A wonderful movie. So well acting and directed ( and filmed). Quirky and thoughtful!

[@hopefullylost4012]

Well written, well directed, fittingly filmed and fabulously acted, not being too realistic. A brilliant short noir.

[@magicpanda-xuk5007]

As soon as the detectives left I said "Theres gonna be a knock at the door and 2 detectives 100%" I was so happy I guessed it

[@Mr_Guy_Fella]

This is fantastic. What a masterclass on film noir cinematic style! It's excellently crafted with music and tension. It baffles me this doesn't have more views.

[@TheLovelySolitary]

Wow!! 🙂🙂😊😊 This is gonna definitely be added to my favorite short movies list. I like the movie a lot in general, especially how the setting is kinda what you would see from a 1950's movie. And really loved the shocking twist at the end! 😦👍💕🤩😍

[@theGhoulman]

At the end I went aloud; "Oh, I liiike her".

[@Funky374]

Lovely, lovely, lovely Miss Barton

[@judyneville616]

This is truly a work of art!

[@akirafudo4419]

Omg this has to be one of the most amazing short I ever seen

[@maxj0930]

OK, so, you know how your phone is always listening to you, and then it comes up with suggestions when you are in search mode? I just finished watching episode nine of “only murders in the building“, and there’s an element of poisoning of food that is taking place in that episode. so, I ended up getting this suggested to me when I went to KZbin to look at random stuff. No, I don’t think it’s a coincidence. And yes, I’m glad I watched it! This is brilliant!

[@lordmullog]

Extraordinary well made. Good story with a cool twist and great atmosphere. The cinematography is astonishing as well. The old Film Noir Vibe is really coming through in every way. Music, framing, camera movement. Came across it and loved it.

[@heidihoney_]

It's excellent, hope you guys launch other films soon.

[@fxmorin439]

Now this is a GREAT Noir movie!

[@trevorbailey730]

I just watched the film, and it's so good. It's well shot, edited, and the acting is phenomenal. You should submit it to ALTER, and Short Of The Week, because this is up their alley. 🍻

[@meo8256]

I like this kind of storys. Even look vintage i still can felt my heart's start rising when the two detective shows to that women the scratches picture that look like them. I mean they actually the butcher boys who get escape from that prison. Thanks god that women so smart and not panicked. She finally save...❤❤❤

[@peoplezoo]

glad you liked!

[@lilquentint2447]

Love everything about it, especially Lauren’s and the detective’s performance. She’s one of the best final girls in the current horror genre. Overall very talented people on this production, kudos!

[@bayvillalobos9148]

Truly great. The lady really has that elegant charm from the past.

[@SuperChicken666]

Well written, well directed, well acted. Costumes were spot on. Even the smoke detector over the front door couldn't detract from the noir feel. ❤

[@peoplezoo]

Shhhhh 😂

[@FFOGHORN]

Just beautiful to watch! They didn’t just nail the period - at some points it felt like it was actually from the period.

[@benman1577]

"People love cinnamon. It should be on tables at restaurants along with salt and pepper. Anytime anyone says, "Oh This is so good. What's in it?" The answer invariably comes back, Cinnamon. Cinnamon. Again and again."

[@peoplezoo]

top tier comment

[@kiviuq3495]

Can't stand cinnamon.

[@peoplezoo]

😳

[@beingheardmedia6339]

This was SO GOOD!!!!!!! BRILLIANT concept. Bravo for shooting in Black and White (people seem to have forgotten how beautiful black and white films were). I fell in love with this film 2 seconds after it started. Oh! I need sequel. PLEASE!!!!!!! My first thought was Hitchcock does cake. But now I think it's more Stephen King meets Practical Magic 40s style. Please do a sequel!!!!

[@peoplezoo]

Check out our other work as well. More films are coming soon!

[@beingheardmedia6339]

@@peoplezoo I'll do that. Thanks!

[@Cathair]

I'm in love with this. Gorgeous homage to an unrepeatable era.

[@cathryncampbell8555]

This is a little slice of film noir Heaven! Now I yearn for a special cinnamon-infused cake....

[@dhananjaymishra7827]

I just stopped breathing in various scenes It's an amazing artwork

[@michaelcarpenter4065]

Loved it! Noir satire perfectly done. Great music score! Lauren LaVera is wonderful!

[@Karen-dk1ec]

Amazing how suspenseful a short film can be.

[@jorasparents]

My god, this was SUPERB!!!! This shows 100% that it doesn't take Hollywood-size budgets to make a truly great piece of film -- it takes true creativity, great sets and costumes, and an amazing cast, crew, and production staff. I'm blown away! (Also, I'm craving cake ...)

[@Paraprax]

Riveting! You three come off as actual movie stars, not just amateurs roped into played the part. This was a delight.

[@thomashardy1600]

I don’t know why some people hate this. This film is PERFECT! A perfect combination of classic noire and a twilight zone episode. Well done!

[@peoplezoo]

Who hates this?

[@thomashardy1600]

@@peoplezoo some of the other comments.

[@mariebenz1562]

Thank you! Brilliant! Extraordinary! Well done! The whole film should be recognized by more people. This made my day! Might I have another? More please. ❤

[@KayEl58]

Beautifully done. The lighting, costumes, makeup, the set, the script and acting all spot on!

[@peoplezoo]

Glad you enjoyed it! Check out our other work!

[@glynislailann9056]

Just one thing though. The gentleman should have taken their hats off when entering the house - old fashioned manners.

[@arturd.7329]

MasterPIECE

[@adantesvieirafaisca4227]

Absolutely awesome! Really enjoyed it! Well done every single Soul! Congratulations and thanks for sahring it! Keep up with the great work!

[@elisa9833]

This is sooo good! I was actually on the edge of my chair watching this!

[@luckyproductionfilms8158]

This was outstanding ! The camera movements were so smooth and precise. The performances were all well acted. I loved how the shots and cinematography were impactful and added to the overall storytelling of this film.

[@peoplezoo]

Glad you liked it. We spent a lot of time devising the camera moves. Check out our other work too!

[@luckyproductionfilms8158]

The time y'all spent on the camera movement definitely paid off and were excellent. I look forward to checking out your other works !@@peoplezoo

[@kpoplovve775]

This is my 4th time watching this piece of artwork!! I appreciate the attention to the design set, wardrobe, hair & make-up...AND the acting (Whaaaaat! Whoa!) OVATION!!!

[@lamathunderbolt]

Flawless, superb, dark.. Excellent

[@forleasenavidad8877]

This was great and captivating from start to finish, I loved this so much, every aspect is really solid and the production design is amazing!!

[@MP-gm5gg]

Loved it , the rain the actors, the mystery ,bravo.

[@Leung0iO]

The best black & white short film I ever seen ! Excellent !

[@aidan8151]

This is incredible, the ligthing is absoloutely impeccable and works brilliantly with the classic cinematography, well done team this film deserves way more views😀

[@melodymantra]

Amazing...this is pure art🔥🔥🔥 Views are less because this video is only for legends....keep the good work...love from India

[@darringraham9364]

This is most wonderful! Truly delightful filmmaking. I've shared it to my Facebook page with the comment that it is so good that it makes me quiver and flail-about. Thanks for making, y'all Makers of This! 😘

[@kurtweiand7086]

I so enjoyed this! It was a perfect movie in every way!

[@GarrettFrechette]

Brilliant.

[@paarshah]

Im truly amazed by this masterpiece

[@A7xeno]

A good humourous noir short film? What else could I ask for?

[@kylebrewer9582]

I liked it very much! Got confused towards the ending 🧐 But it also made me hungry 😂

[@kimerlyhogan6567]

I’m STILL confused about the ending!

[@curtisrobinson7962]

I agree. Q: What the hill happened?

[@sharksport01]

That's the point.

[@SalwanSameea]

This short movie had all the good stuff.

[@freesaxon6835]

An excellent short video, well shot, acted lighting, and editing everything 👌🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👍🏻

[@RZK33369]

I loved, loved, loved this film. Absolutely brilliant execution of your creative spark in all the glorious rich detail of all aspects. Very rich indeed.

[@seanarama]

This is more horror than noir. Maybe a horror-noir. Well done. I'd watch more.

[@reneeyounk9663]

I love this! Very good! I love the thriller drama... The not knowing... Very good!

[@richarddeleon3558]

This is straight out of the twilight zone ❤❤❤ seen it four times

[@64_akaashdutta41]

Fabulous in every aspect. The music is perfect.

[@savkelmanson]

obsessed with this

[@afg3643]

could not agree more. how such a story, acting and cinematography come together in 13 minutes. I tried doing a engine search for Laura Laverna...I would think she is doing much acting now...fanatical acting here...

[@carlossimeone5494]

This is awesome and inspiring. Thank you for making this

[@Vampirebear13]

This was excellent !!!!! Lauren La Vera is so beautiful & could easily be a stand in for Christina Ricci.

[@peoplezoo]

I think you mean Christina Ricci could be a stand in for Lauren LaVera

[@Vampirebear13]

@@peoplezoo Oh yes of course !!! She so beautiful & very obviously extremely talented. Even in B & W (which makes this video really work) Lauren gives a glowing performance 🥰

[@Graphicstation]

Well done, acting very period, and good story development - and of course the NOIR!!