The rat catcher's tale

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Monstergarden

Monstergarden

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@enclavecomms.officer5219
@enclavecomms.officer5219 2 жыл бұрын
Top to bottom, writing and drawings, this is some serious gourmet shit
@monlenz
@monlenz 2 жыл бұрын
im glad you liked it
@MetalKingStudio
@MetalKingStudio Жыл бұрын
I was about to say the same thing.
@placeholderdoe
@placeholderdoe Жыл бұрын
@@monlenz haven’t gotten into fantasy but I would totally buy a book of this
@hhhicantbreath5960
@hhhicantbreath5960 Жыл бұрын
@@placeholderdoe This is less "fanasy", and more of just some genre bending, GOURMET, conceptualization and masterful artwork. This world reminds me of Scorn and Kenshi.
@ILL_STEAL_YOUR_TEA
@ILL_STEAL_YOUR_TEA Жыл бұрын
@@hhhicantbreath5960 Scorn + Kenshi with a spicing of magic? Aight I'm in
@_zurr
@_zurr Жыл бұрын
Manamorphosis is the perfect name for a magical-mutation phenomenon. Totally stealing that for a DnD game!
@lofty123cheese3
@lofty123cheese3 Жыл бұрын
My thoughts exactly when I heard it! Such a cool name for such a cool concept
@Smajtastic
@Smajtastic Жыл бұрын
I hope none of my players come across this channel, for I shall be called thief and imatator
@weftw1se
@weftw1se Жыл бұрын
There is a 2e setting (Dark Sun) that uses this concept. Defilers (one type of magic user) mutate into dragons over time.
@kpo1389
@kpo1389 Жыл бұрын
And think that mana is pure will make everything come together
@gus6
@gus6 Жыл бұрын
Stealing in general is for suckas, but if you are using it for fun in a game, probably no harm no foul...
@SleepyCrow98
@SleepyCrow98 Жыл бұрын
the birds are a super cool touch i can imagine they have a almost naturally formed symbiotic relationship the birds circle bodies allowing the rat catcher to locate fresh materials and the birds get acess to more easily cut meat that they dont have to spend time pecking at into small pieces to eat.
@spikycode4823
@spikycode4823 Жыл бұрын
Thank you for your insights, SleepyCrow98
@jaiga2304
@jaiga2304 Жыл бұрын
i also like to think the birds also gather around him to eat the flaked-off pieces of skin
@wynnnnnnn5227
@wynnnnnnn5227 Жыл бұрын
I love this
@no-lifenoah7861
@no-lifenoah7861 9 ай бұрын
Ravens and crows are 100% smart enough to figure out an arrangement like that
@oystersaucee_
@oystersaucee_ 6 ай бұрын
@@no-lifenoah7861 smart enough to tell their kids bout him too, id love to think its been one long lineage that follows him
@Czar_Moss
@Czar_Moss Жыл бұрын
his hands slowly undergoing necrosis from mana use is so fucking cool
@Cheshire5174
@Cheshire5174 Жыл бұрын
"the mud hides more than it shows" gave me a mental image of what, seen through the early-morning fog, looks like nothing more than the stump of a small tree growing out of a mound in middle of the field, only for that mound to rise up, and it become clear that this stump was actually the hat of a tall, wide creature, and the mound was its tatty old robes
@WardenZmey
@WardenZmey Жыл бұрын
Big fan of dark fantasy. Glad that youtube recommended you
@monlenz
@monlenz Жыл бұрын
thank you i like dark fantasy too so thats what my art tends to go towards. There will be lots more like it!
@caseyomalley1117
@caseyomalley1117 Жыл бұрын
This was....a lot. From design to the story. The creative process showed the care and irritation of the creator, the amount of ink, and led on paper just showed so much, it was as if the rat catcher moved each stroke, equal parts deterring the artist from their own creation, but assisting just enough to allow the creator to chase this morbid yet beautiful high. Every thing about this world has enticed me to seek more, its so beautiful.
@falsevacuum4667
@falsevacuum4667 Жыл бұрын
Damn, even your comment is pure poetry.
@IFuckedMyMother
@IFuckedMyMother 8 ай бұрын
@@falsevacuum4667*poetic* 🤓☝️
@linktera4245
@linktera4245 5 ай бұрын
I love the idea of the wind whistling through the rat catchers stolen fingers, making this gentle sort of haunting hollow sound (think like a quiet Khaen) as he moves across flat windy fields. Makes me think surviving mages would be slightly terrfied of that noise.
@buboniccraig896
@buboniccraig896 9 ай бұрын
Manamorphosis is a great explanation for why mages have less health, from a game perspective
@fredericbaue
@fredericbaue Жыл бұрын
Meerschaum, pronounced meer-shawm, is an interesting magnesium silicate called sepiolite that is naturally soft and easy to carve until exposed to heat. It is porous and floats on water, so it absorbs the tar of the tobacco changing it's color over a long time from white to yellow, orange, and then red. Mined in Turkey and carved in Vienna, the material quickly replaced the more common clay pipes. Sepiolite is also used in cat litter 😉
@Justadeathgod
@Justadeathgod Жыл бұрын
could also be written as mare-shawm. Its actual meaning would be "sea-foam" in german.
@LethalPastry
@LethalPastry Жыл бұрын
Hope he sees this because tar is part of his magic lore, so his pipe could be completely red!
@deeznuts-kw6yv
@deeznuts-kw6yv Жыл бұрын
I could very well see the pipe being used to remove the excess tar in the rat catchers body, ngl
@CockatooDude
@CockatooDude 11 ай бұрын
@@LethalPastry Nah dude he uses his big magic to keep it white so he can flex on the haters.
@markojovanovic6398
@markojovanovic6398 Жыл бұрын
You are really talented artist, I'm saying that because you could've given up but you didn't you improved and now you managed to draw a masterpiece and the story is very good I personally adore the grim world building you use as inspiration for your art you should continue with this world its really interesting. So please continue making videos about this grim yet magical and very beautiful world and all the characters within it
@markojovanovic6398
@markojovanovic6398 Жыл бұрын
I meant to say you are not as talented as some other and yet you still improve and one day very, very soon you will come to level were no one will be able to say anything bad about your art
@monlenz
@monlenz Жыл бұрын
@@markojovanovic6398 thank you for the encouragement. I will keep going and try to improve my art. but There will always be people that dont like it that is just a part of it.
@jnewmanguy2806
@jnewmanguy2806 Жыл бұрын
Itd be cool if the glute he plays is only audible for rats, so he isn't noticed by humans, but if you pay attention, a soldier could see the rats freaking out.
@mim3189
@mim3189 Жыл бұрын
...I am in awe of the implications of the magic/mana system. Also, it makes sense for carrion type birds to a literal "corpse picker." And even if you change it, it's a funeral concept to work around! (⁠◠⁠‿⁠◕⁠)
@MysteriousPerson1991
@MysteriousPerson1991 10 ай бұрын
The person that made that story should right a fucking horror story. That little tale was amazing.
@gcampbell1448
@gcampbell1448 Жыл бұрын
[I really like this character and I think he lends himself well to verse so I wrote a nursery rhyme for young mages to learn] Across the moors, the Ratcatcher comes To call his darlings in from the cold. He plucks the trinkets from their thumbs With bloodied hands, impossibly old. If you should spy him in the field Or in your dreams at night. His hook-like crutch he's sure to weild And snatch you from the fight. Across the moors the Ratchatcher comes Flanked by corvids, feathered, black. We'll soon become his sorry sons And, once we do, we won't come back.
@sportenapfeltorten2095
@sportenapfeltorten2095 Жыл бұрын
BAMM Holy cow that is awsome. :O Is there more of you to read?
@gcampbell1448
@gcampbell1448 Жыл бұрын
@@sportenapfeltorten2095 ☺cheers
@Benitheeboss1
@Benitheeboss1 Жыл бұрын
Fabulous!!!
@KarachoBolzen
@KarachoBolzen Жыл бұрын
I think it might've been cool if he didn't just hang the thimbles on his arms, but each of those was actually on an extra finger. Like he has been eating so much tar that the extra fingers have grown all the way down his forearms, so now they look like overgrown twigs. Would also give him motivation for taking the thimbles, he's actively using them so he expects to amplify his power, tying back to his power hunger. Take it or leave it, but anyways! The concept on this one is insane, I've always liked "Leichenfledderer"-characters (body-looters in english, but that's a specific german term for "people who rob the fallen specifically after/during a battle") and the idea for the tar is messed up in the best possible way! Loved the video throughout, great job!
@JoeWicke
@JoeWicke Жыл бұрын
that would be vary cool!
@botabonk1253
@botabonk1253 Жыл бұрын
It would kinda look like wings... Crows and Ravens and Rats and Fingers
@anonimoqualquer5503
@anonimoqualquer5503 10 ай бұрын
I think that this could work well but with a twist Thimbles alow you to cast magic ok But that doenst mean more Thimbles = stronger spell There is 2 good options 1: more thimbles passed a certain number (like more than 11) muntiply the power of the spell in a HUGE level, but the mana usage is Proportionally bigger (like the power is 4x but the cost is 5x) Meaning the most pratical aplication of this is multiple mages combine their thimbles to make launch a devastating spell 2: more thimbles doest mean more power but less "heat" like not only you need mana to cast the spell but also wait for the thimble "cool down" With better materials you can make thimbles that cool down faster But you can compensate this with the Amount 3: because he have a huge amount of them, he can cast a gigantic amount of diferent spells, so much that sometimes not even him can know what exactly gonna come out of his fingers (for a boss fight for example)
@TheImpishSquire
@TheImpishSquire Жыл бұрын
Monstergarden, do you ever finish a video and think, "Aaaah that was a really good one!" I hope you do, because this video is the second of yours I've ever seen and I love it like hell.
@Alex-P-
@Alex-P- 6 ай бұрын
I never knew how much I liked this type of fiction - dark fantasy I think it would be called. Dark, gritty, muddy, with an archaic atmosphere. I was transfixed by this video, it's a masterpiece of fantasy design and storytelling. What I would give to read a book in this style and with such characters...
@jackhaining-spriggs3981
@jackhaining-spriggs3981 Жыл бұрын
The way you recite this tale is almost song-like in your rythm and passion. Not only are you a impressive artist and story writer, but a remarkable orator as well.
@crowsguard
@crowsguard 10 ай бұрын
he didn't write the story, his friend did. his art and worldbuliding is so engaging though
@KayBbyXOXOXO
@KayBbyXOXOXO Жыл бұрын
I wish I could draw like you one day. I’ve barely managed a style of flat and conventionally attractive characters. But my current character idea is absolutely not that. Absolutely love being able to see your reference images and how they work into your ideas. It’s make my own art more creative and I’m happier with it
@noahbryan85
@noahbryan85 11 ай бұрын
What is your character?
@YOUCANTDOTHATONTELEVISION
@YOUCANTDOTHATONTELEVISION Жыл бұрын
Great story and great design. I gave some support with a thumbs up and a subscribe!
@monlenz
@monlenz Жыл бұрын
really appreciate the support
@poeticcube5714
@poeticcube5714 Жыл бұрын
Tolkien would love you. In a different universe, you two could've forged the most elaborate and amazing fantasy universe. I think Lord of the Rings and most fantasy worlds would be all the better had you been involved. You are so full of talent!
@boaz2578
@boaz2578 Жыл бұрын
My head canon says those birds are his children. He transformed them by accident. He may or may not regret it.
@mutialtanovv1718
@mutialtanovv1718 2 жыл бұрын
i really like the design, bravo.
@monlenz
@monlenz 2 жыл бұрын
thank you
@joelall1son
@joelall1son Жыл бұрын
I love this design - I can picture the sound of the thimbles twinkling and clattering as he moves.
@eddoh2701
@eddoh2701 Жыл бұрын
You see a feeble man, who cares you thought, but the moment he stretches his hand covered in "bloody DOG TAGS"
@conjurekween1627
@conjurekween1627 9 ай бұрын
The Mirsham Pipe is a really cool little detail. They're made of a porous substance that reminds me of bone in texture, structure and colour
@artenkey7645
@artenkey7645 Жыл бұрын
I believe this character would work great in a visual media, just a silent mysterious figure in the background doing something sinister and the viewer has no idea what to expect from him
@aramisdagaz9
@aramisdagaz9 Жыл бұрын
If this were a TTRPG, the bodies of dead mages would no doubt be a target for scavengers and those looking for quick money. Many would probably be put off from this occupation or side hustle not by the idea of absconding with the dead like ghouls, but by the thought of dealing with those who would pay for them. The Rat Catcher sounds like a subtly frightening individual simply because of the nature of his work and the lengths he's willing to go for more power and knowledge, but even for those who fear only the harm others can do to them, he's also terrifyingly powerful. Mages sound like the sort of profession where most die young and thus the old should be feared.
@PuppyPuppet13
@PuppyPuppet13 Жыл бұрын
Holy cow did your buddy do an amazing job on that tale.I was just going to share this with my one friend, but. Ow I need to show it to others as well.
@OctopusContrapunctus
@OctopusContrapunctus Жыл бұрын
I just discovered this channel, but im already a big fan. The design, the Storytelling, both of top notch quality
@Moshuun
@Moshuun Жыл бұрын
That thimble thing was pure genius. Nice touch.
@hardboil8658
@hardboil8658 Жыл бұрын
I love how tar mirrors an actual addiction in this story
@dre179
@dre179 Жыл бұрын
i feel like i found some traveler obscure journal, that describes what he had seen along his journey. I loved it.
@shubbyyyy
@shubbyyyy Жыл бұрын
An encounter with the rat catcher: My old man was drafted to fight the opposing army in the civil war. I knew this day would come, after all i was born into this conflict. my father had always had a penchant for fire magic and was regarded as such being considered a pillar in the community. But thats all in the past now, Rickter, his ashy shepard companion, returns with his journal and a letter of condolence regarding his death on the field of battle. It reads "your father did what no one else was willing to do. the few of us there were left to save owe our lives to him. we sent Rickter ahead to deliver his journal of magical research to you we hope it reaches you in good faith". I tend to Rickters wounds, hes a tough mutt but mangled nonetheless. My fathers journal contains everything knows of fire magics, he always said he would teach me the way of fire but i never thought it would be like this, it is what it is i suppose. Flipping through the journal he mentions that without a powerful catlyst and years of magical experience fire magic at this caliber he describes can easily kill a man at the cast of a single spell, I take it as a mere challenge. As im searching for wood i can use as a catlyst for an environmental cast i think "this would be much more simple with fathers thimble". i realize it must remain on his corpse. the thimble that i considered to be my birthright is now sitting in the middle of a barren battlefield just rusting away, i refuse to stand idley by and allow that to happen. so i gather up a flint, steel, oil, some firewood, give rickter a kiss goodbye and set off to take whats rightfully mine. Ive been following our armys trail for days. corpses of neighbors and men i had seen everyday but some months ago are scattered everywhere, my father nowhere to be seen. I knew what i was looking for, the smoke that came from his body had a scent of burnt grass easily trackable with someone familiar to it like me plus it was generally visible from pretty far away. i encounter whats left of the regiment my father was assigned to lead into the battle "What are you doing here!!?" they ask me "im here to retrive my old mans thimble, which way is he?" the crowd goes quiet avoiding my eye contact until one speaks up "last i saw he was due west of here but..." "but what?" "it seemed the rat catcher was dragging his corpse away..." This news left me beyond infuriated. I had been told of the rat catchers scavenging ways as well of his powerful magic but ill be damned if i let a mere rodent stand between me and whats rightfully mine. "one of you lend me a thimble." they offer me the best thimble they have, a shiny copper one with patterns of swirls and twists. itll have to do for now. i thank the men and wish them safe passage back home and with that im off west to fight the rat catcher and take back whats mine. I smell the smoke, i must be close. i use the supplies i brought with me along with rags from the clothes of a corpse and a large log from the ground to make a large torch, the plan is to use the copper thimble in conjuntion with an environmental cast to burn the rat catcher down in one giant flaming attack. it risky sure but what do i have to lose. continuing west i can now see my fathers smoke stack, im close now, a couple more feet and i start to hear a somber sounding flute playing. odd, am i really that hungry to halucinate like that? i mean going days without food wasnt exactly abnormal for me the village hardly had enough for everyone, my father took it as a chance to teach me the importance of fasting to build magical constitution and i had been drinking water from ponds on the way. thats when i saw him, the rat catcher. he was the one playing the flute, figures. his skin flaked behind him and he slowly walked along, my father nowhere to be seen. i plant the torch i made earlier in the ground and harness the energy of its fire. "FWOOSH" i engulf the rat catcher in a cloud of flame a moment of victory quickly fades to a world of pain, my ears ring violently, my vision tunnels, and i can feel the tar enter my blood stream as i drop to one knee clutching my body but i dont care all thats left now is to recover so i can get what i came here for. as i get my hearing back i notice i can still hear the flute. i look to where i had scorched the rat catcher even with my vision blurry and doubled i can tell hes not there but for some reason i can still hear his flute playing. i turn around to see him standing behind walking the other direction, my fathers corpse dragging behind on his hook. the rat catcher i burned before was an illusory spell he probably sensed me miles away, i had been played. i think about calling out to him but i decide against it to save my energy. i gather what little might i have left and cast a large sweeping wall of fire to cover my approach toward the rat catcher. by body aches with every step i take, im running off pure willpower at this point. i see a green light peer through the smoke of my previous attack. he casts a kind of terraforming magic to catch my foot as im running i trip over and hit my head hard on the ground. "how did he know where i was?!" i think as i wriggle my shoe off my foot, breaking free of the ground. im in pursuit again finally reaching my fathers still volitile corpse i search for his thimble, its usually on his left middle finger but its nowhere to be seen. "you fight like a wild animal" says the rat catcher as he lifts his arms revealing all his collected thimbles of dead sourcerers alike "but all wild animals die eventually" i spot my fathers thimble in his collection. it shimmers gold with patterns of fire "THATS MY THIMBLE!!!" i shout at him pointing at my fathers thimble my arm trembling from exhaustion "then take it" in a fit of rage i harness whats left of my energy and my fathers leftover in his corpse magic and cast an explosive rend with all my might im thrown up in the air several meters by the blast at the peak i see the rat catcher still unscathed moments before crashing back to the ground knocking me unconsious. My head is pounding, i cant move my body, everything hurts, the tar has made its way into my lungs, i can hardly breathe "what happened?" i think "am i..... dead?" then i hear the rat catcher "youve earned this thimble your spirit and determination will prove you very useful in your future. our paths will cross again but next time you will be the corpse. help is on the way, you caused quite a commotion here." i try to respond but my body is still to weak but i hear him walking away, still playing his flute this time a beautiful, soft, hopeful melody. I awake in a tent bandages on my body and head. everything still hurts very much yet i still let out a sigh of relief, im alive. i stand to get up and leave and i notice a little smoke coming off my body, i must have undergone some metamorphysis from exerting so much magic. i step outside to see a full moon. it makes me think of the rat catcher and how maybe we were destined to meet.
@shubbyyyy
@shubbyyyy Жыл бұрын
i left out details and context for added layer of mystery and also because i wrote this in like 55 minutes and just didnt think about alot of that, but i would still love to clear up/ brainstorm things i left out.
@lazyluca1660
@lazyluca1660 Жыл бұрын
Cool story
@brennanlangless8912
@brennanlangless8912 Жыл бұрын
The backstory to this character is incredible but for some reason I feel sorry for the rat catcher as his past appearance and yet I also paradoxically feel angry at what he’s done to become his current appearance and yet I understand why he does what he does
@cuffedjeans7320
@cuffedjeans7320 Жыл бұрын
Dude, this setting is so cool. It makes me want to play a D&D game set in this world, or at least to do more worldbuilding for my own world. Also, the designs remind me a lot of the game Darkwood, which I would totally recommend looking at if you haven't already.
@charliecheeseb8994
@charliecheeseb8994 Жыл бұрын
Listening to that story made me feel like I was sitting around a campfire, watching an old, battle-worn adventurer telling me one of the many stories and tales he had amassed over the years. I hope you never stop worldbuilding; It's one thing to be passionate about something, but when it's something you've got a wide range of skills in too - such as your drawing, storytelling and design ideas - that's when it becomes something more. Thanks Monstergarden, for rekindling my love for worldbuilding
@TheOneAndOnly_Background
@TheOneAndOnly_Background Жыл бұрын
a treat on my recommended. as an aspiring writer, that story told at the end was a thing of beauty.
@Oblinski
@Oblinski Жыл бұрын
Monstergarden I love this channel. The lore of the world is super intriguing and a fresh concept i've never heard before. I have a suggestion though regarding the name of the rat catcher. It certainly fits the vibe of the character, but I wonder if there is any way to include rats into his character somehow. A rat catcher's job is to capture pests namely rats. My idea for fitting the name to his character is that he views war and the sides that wage it as pests as he is not loyal to either side. He is disgusted at the depths at which people would go for mana. Thus he views the corpses of the fallen not as human, but as filthy rats plaguing the land and by collecting tar he is selling his services to any who will pay thereby receiving the name by those on the battlefield as the Rat Catcher.
@simplymatt6140
@simplymatt6140 Жыл бұрын
I don't know how I've come across this channel, but I'm glad I did. It's really freakin rad!
@cesare_1302
@cesare_1302 Жыл бұрын
Great artwork for a great story
@over2175
@over2175 Жыл бұрын
from one artist to another this is amazing.
@startingfromlevelone9510
@startingfromlevelone9510 Жыл бұрын
Awesome and horrifying. Great world building and tragic horror story writing.
@senatuspopulusqueromanus2082
@senatuspopulusqueromanus2082 Жыл бұрын
Sir, I'm extremely jealous of your level of skill.
@UnluckyFatGuy
@UnluckyFatGuy Жыл бұрын
Man I love these characters! It'd be cool to see them animated in a Don Bluth cartoon style.
@cmbaz1140
@cmbaz1140 Жыл бұрын
I also get secrets of NIMH vibes form him...
@ehad1753
@ehad1753 Жыл бұрын
This kind of reminds me to old and darker Jazza content. Loving it
@chudyjoza
@chudyjoza Жыл бұрын
The tale and the desing are amazing. It really gives ancestor memories' from darkest dungeon vibe. Can't wait for another tale from you.
@owlmanac
@owlmanac Жыл бұрын
im in love with this world already
@Convincing_Reality
@Convincing_Reality Жыл бұрын
This is such a rich story which gives such an amazing sense of depth to this piece. Bravo!
@beaniehead6130
@beaniehead6130 Жыл бұрын
WOAH!!!! the story ur friend on dis wrote is literally so good!!!! i love the art too! its so spooky and the design leaves no plot holes. i found ut channel today with the video of magic system. im going through ur videos. i love world building so much, i love the art u do that comes with it. its spooky and unsettling yet pulls u in like a hook in ur gut and i just want to see more and more of this! i want to see this world, system and characters ur creating becoming into a beautiful, intricate and absolutely amazing story!
@aeaaaaeeeaaeaeae
@aeaaaaeeeaaeaeae Жыл бұрын
I just got this in my recommended and I'm not dissapointed at all. your art is AMAZING and it just looks cool, thank you for posting this c:
@jonanderson5137
@jonanderson5137 Жыл бұрын
There are many pipes and many pipe materials. Meerchaum pipes are fantastic for a heavy smoker because unlike wood or corn cob they're porous stone. A lot of guys smoke them while wearing gloves to avoid and darkening from hand oils. Ive had a few, a couple nice custom pipes and a nice plain one. I got sidetracked there. I'm fairly certain it's pronounced meer-shum like beer-thumb.
@richtigmann1
@richtigmann1 Жыл бұрын
this is legitimately a really good design concept that works soo well with the magic system, the design is so good! I love the storytelling and the drawings
@svendinsvinderlin4569
@svendinsvinderlin4569 Жыл бұрын
I'm not even really into fantasy stuff but holy shit every video on this channel has me hooked
@oligb1469
@oligb1469 Жыл бұрын
AAAAAAND like that I've subscribed, this video is amazing, fantastic art and amazing story telling just perfect!
@xicufwm
@xicufwm Жыл бұрын
The writing is amazing! And having the visuals coming to life make the whole experience superb. Congrats!
@mjp152
@mjp152 10 ай бұрын
Evokes a blend of a renaissance plague doctor and the Groke from the moomin valley. So good - you have a really unique and distinct spin on fantasy.
@TungstenEnthusiast
@TungstenEnthusiast Жыл бұрын
He's so cool, i love the wandering whimsical af guy
@jacko0394
@jacko0394 Жыл бұрын
This is what I (and I think many others) have been looking for. Refined, intriguing, suspenseful. Fantastic stuff. Know that we appreciate the time and effort you put into these! Please, don't push yourself into burnout.
@gustavakerman2566
@gustavakerman2566 Жыл бұрын
Forget the visual art, the storytelling was just so amazing. Though the art was fantastic of course. I am literally falling asleep listening to this
@alexjeffrey3981
@alexjeffrey3981 Жыл бұрын
I wonder if the crows that accompany him are there to eat the skin that sloughs off his hands as he casts his spells, and the parts of the mages he doesn't take for himself
@meirzamsky
@meirzamsky Жыл бұрын
mysterious, wide brim hat, a pipe, two ravens, roaming the battlefield, yup this is odin.
@rens2998
@rens2998 Жыл бұрын
Maybe the ravens eat the magic organ of the wizards when the rat catcher is done with them. Maybe the crows have long legs or look different in some other way
@brandondoane332
@brandondoane332 Жыл бұрын
I adore the magic system youve created.
@jae4ze
@jae4ze Жыл бұрын
If this lore were for a ttrpg I would play it instantly, I could also listen to a whole audiobook read by you.
@silversteampunk
@silversteampunk Жыл бұрын
I love your character/creature designs so much! You have such a strong aesthetic and your shape language is incredible! The story was sooo good as well!
@codysangVAvods
@codysangVAvods Жыл бұрын
This whole series so far has felt like if dnd and Darkwood had a grotesque baby and im all here for it
@MaaikeMin
@MaaikeMin Жыл бұрын
Great stuff! I love seeing your creative process!
@yo5tan
@yo5tan Жыл бұрын
I absolutely adore what I've seen of this setting and system you've built!
@pocketmaster100
@pocketmaster100 Жыл бұрын
This concept is amazing. I like it a lot and enjoy listenning to the video.
@cyrilgigee4630
@cyrilgigee4630 Жыл бұрын
This is a truly fascinating setting. I hope to be able to take a brief step into it myself some day, whether it be through literature or a TTRPG campaign or a videogame or anything else.
@axlefoxe
@axlefoxe Жыл бұрын
Man, hitting the like button for this one just felt like no where's near enough, this is fantastic.
@JonathanGhost42
@JonathanGhost42 Жыл бұрын
The design, the idea and the story are all fascinating and well done!
@Toxshot
@Toxshot Жыл бұрын
Incredible work put in this character, gongrats to all involved
@christiaancoetzee1696
@christiaancoetzee1696 Жыл бұрын
I can just imagine fighting in a war and you are startled by a noise and just wake to see a hunched dark figure over the corpse of a friend, and all he does is brings his disgusting hand to his face and say… shhhh
@AW_Designs
@AW_Designs Жыл бұрын
Wow, the imagination here is truly inspired and inspiring!
@ruralmason9729
@ruralmason9729 Жыл бұрын
You have a great voice for reading stories like these. Your gonna blow up. Congratulations
@marcssena8848
@marcssena8848 Жыл бұрын
I really think this isn't a character that needed a backstory, the mystery would given him way more carisma, but that is just my opinion, great video and project btw
@corvair5454
@corvair5454 Жыл бұрын
Your world's aesthetic feels like Path of Exile. I really love the vibe that it gives.
@EvoSchecter
@EvoSchecter Жыл бұрын
As a person who suffers from Skin Problems. This Character is my Spirit Animal!
@KeKe-bv8qv
@KeKe-bv8qv 4 ай бұрын
Dang, you've gone and got me all inspired and junk now. This is really cool to both watch and listen to.
@creamygames7927
@creamygames7927 Жыл бұрын
I love how you added the magic system in his character design
@ludwigvanmichael1183
@ludwigvanmichael1183 Жыл бұрын
Creativity is such an amazing superpower to have
@Elesnouman
@Elesnouman Жыл бұрын
I really like how gritty your fantasy world is. Many fictional worlds ar straight up tolkien copies, wich are not bad by all means. But original ideas are always more welcomed.
@jikkermanccini
@jikkermanccini Жыл бұрын
Absolutely in love with your style. I've been designing a similar character recently, and I made the exact same revelation about posture. As soon as I gave it a hunchback, it fit the personality soooo much better.
@NotLaurel6578
@NotLaurel6578 Жыл бұрын
Absolutely Chilling!! I love it🤩 The voice, the presence, the Artwork! Incroyable 🤯
@thimblepunk7359
@thimblepunk7359 Жыл бұрын
had a slightly spooky moment during this. i was moving around the office chair in my room and didn't notice that the pneumatic tube bit has some kind of oily lubrication. as the video makes its finally chilling points about the tar i look at my hand and notice for the first time a sticky black residue. anyway great vid
@skylarken1184
@skylarken1184 Жыл бұрын
A harrowing tale and a haunting design. You deserve your success good sir.
@elijahfenter1178
@elijahfenter1178 Жыл бұрын
Beautifully written, beautifully read, beautifully drawn, and beautifully imagined!. I really adore your world and it's unique fantasy nature
@CarNerd7
@CarNerd7 Жыл бұрын
I absolutely LOVE this!! I have always loved such mysterious characters with such amazing and intriguing designs! I love the story you're building and as an artist these are the types of characters and stories I wanna make too! I love the minute details and the addition of crows/ravens gives it even more depth, Just amazing!
@jamescanjuggle
@jamescanjuggle Жыл бұрын
absolutely stunning, both the story writer and yourself for narration.
@darkestcarving8735
@darkestcarving8735 Жыл бұрын
I love this more material interpretation of magic And it's grim nature~
@pyrod3695
@pyrod3695 Жыл бұрын
To me, it feels like you've re-described death or the image of death from the black plague. A mix of malicious yet somber creature which has humble beginnings. The rat catcher seems almost like he's afflicted or addicted to his work.
@call_me_mado5987
@call_me_mado5987 Жыл бұрын
Man, if i had a game studio, definetely would like help from this guy to make characters, honestly man this is quite creative, the story, the design, all of it.
@RavenMoodle
@RavenMoodle Жыл бұрын
There are so many small world building things you've brought up in this video alone that is SO engaging, and creative. Terms, objects, etc. i'm amazed by how your mind works with this stuff. super envious.
@ThomasWilson-yc7ht
@ThomasWilson-yc7ht Жыл бұрын
Excellent tale! Love the concept and this has given me some things to think on for my own world building! Keep it up!
@Sentient_moss_with_mange
@Sentient_moss_with_mange Жыл бұрын
He hunches back all the time, has an interesting in magic, corpses and trinkets? He’s literally me
@_necromuncher
@_necromuncher Жыл бұрын
Gotta say that your videos are my exact brew of lore, design and deep dive into non-conventional worldbuilding . Just watched your mages and dwarves vids while drawing and I could FEEL my brain expanding deepr into my own design. Thank you for that and for your awesome, honest and unique videos!
@patrickmitchell3497
@patrickmitchell3497 Жыл бұрын
Absolutely in love with this, feels like the black company. Kick ass!
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