"When We Were 18, My Friends And I Played The Staircase Game" Creepypasta

[@coyoteartist]

The Harpies were an interesting touch. Seems so often that these stories feel they need to make up a monster for everything when we have some good ones already for use.

[@forgottens7712]

What are harpies

[@jinhunterslay1638]

Better than another stupid creature with “razor sharp teeth”

[@TattooedPink]

They are screamy bird ladies

[@lyzzistormnightcore]

I gotta make sure I can't accidentally play this before I start listening No black staircase ✅ No friends ✅

[@bagelman7223]

I’m your friend now We just need a black staircase

[@bagelman7223]

@ashlyn braganza perfect bro we just gotta find that black stair case

[@silvathefox7239]

@ashlyn braganza “Yeets closed black paint container” here guys I got some

[@gracekisthardt2115]

👏EMoTioNal DaMaGE👏

[@ReturningNull]

Bad luck, I’m y’all’s friend now and I have a black stair case

[@cantthinkofagoodname42]

One and a half minutes in, I can already assume Margot is gonna die.

[@jessemartin2685]

Yo same. "was" and "had". That kid is D E A D. (I hit the 1m30s around the time posting This xD)

[@satanspit4101]

God I hope so. The writer of this. Kept going on and on. On how great she is. It was her dumb idea. When it works she acts insane.

[@rosetanner9817]

@@satanspit4101 ikr. 🤔😶😔😑

[@hauntedscythespiritfish2226]

I actually want to hear a sequel of Alexandra saving Johnathan. LOL Good story btw!

[@Fedico7000]

Spoiler

[@nasirbone979]

@@Fedico7000 dont read comments before finishing the video then.

[@MrDuckDrawz]

SAMMMMMMMME

[@starlaschroeppel]

please

[@pimplepanda1932]

If you find a follow up to the story lmk

[@jakwolfe3025]

Imagine how frustrating it'd be if this was a real story and all this person got was "wow this story you made up was hella dope here's an upvote!" Or something like that...man that'd be funny but sad

[@kaamn1829]

Asdfghjkl, I don't even know what I would do, I think I would just cry, laughing inside in some sad, sick sort of way. I guess as years pass tho, it might get funnier.

[@LostLagrange]

I’d probably propose it was just a story I made up from the start just to avoid that feeling of dejection and loneliness. After all who the hell would believe a story as macabre and horrifying as this!?, unless you’ve experienced the same thing or something similar. Hell I’m sure even the most open minded would refuse to believe it just to avoid the horror of it all. These stories are the exact reason I give the supernatural and anything related to it as wide a breath as possible lol, maybe it’s fake maybe it’s not, but I’d rather not stumble into it just to find out.

[@199Kim]

Hell yeah

[@pequenaesposa3286]

Well so many aspects of this were unrealistic and just impossible so... like the fact they didn't completely crash after having multiple adrenaline rushes

[@pequenaesposa3286]

Something that's scary is the left right game... many aspects of the human body reacting in those ways are actually completely factual...scarily factual when you think you can't actually Google those things you just have to work in embalming

[@yourroyalhighness6297]

The moment they left Jonathan, I felt like I wanna slap Margot so hard in the face. But at the same time, I knew she was right. If Alex returned, both of them might get stuck there, but if she proceeded, she'd be able to live. :

[@giotheweeb6251]

IK!!! I fell in love with jonathans character and how much Alex cared Abt him hurt my heart 😭😭 I wish this story had another part like omfg

[@puzzled3071]

okay spoilers

[@krexoriginal]

Ummm... y'all do know this is fiction, right? Psst, so is "Twighlight". 😁

[@yourroyalhighness6297]

@@krexoriginal okay?

[@ConfettiCasket]

@@krexoriginal HOLY SHIT??? FICTION??? WHAT?? Every. single. person. here KNOWS this is a R E A L story with R E A L People!! ITs not like people would make connections with fictional characters!! Thatd just be absurd!!!

[@MrCreeps]

I absolutely loved this story. I hope you enjoy it as well!

[@noonecares8932]

I hope there is a part 2. I started reading this the other night and didn’t get to finish it! I was super happy to see you reading this! Because I had a crap ton of homework and I love listening to you as I work on it

[@Rimuru-ray]

This would be a awsome story for a part 2. But it's already perfect.

[@robynsmith4164]

Hey Mr. Creeps! I ABSOLUTELY L♥️VED this story too! Your incredible narration skills genuinely brings the tales you choose, to life! I’m one of the biggest Horror Narration fans on this planet and over the past 6 years, have given every narrator a chance, no matter how many Subscribers they have… or don’t! You are doubtlessly the MOST UNIQUE narrator on the internet and imo the BEST! I have a handful of my top favorites ranging from millions of subs to under 15K… I like certain storytellers to narrate certain types of stories. It also depends on what time of day (usually night…) it is and the mood I’m in. BUT… YOU, MR. CREEPS can expertly narrate ANY TALE put before you with PERFECTION! I will give you this, I NEVER listen to you when I am actually TRYING to sleep. I do to relax… but I get so INTO the stories you narrate that my mind pays wayyy to much attention! You should have MILLIONS OF SUBSCRIBERS! We all love and appreciate you more than you could ever image MC and are also very grateful to know you and your narration style & voice! 😁 Love from Texas ♥️🤠🌴

[@kemuelreid5025]

Highlight of the day brother!! Keep it up!!!

[@shaddowbladegaming135]

I have been subscribed to this channel for a while but I did subscribe to the other channels

[@AnthonyRivera1999]

Mr.Creeps: Telling a Gripping and exciting story Me: jamming out to the music playing at 14:40 P.S. a sequel where Alex saves Johnathan is a must

[@starlaschroeppel]

I KNOW. sequel please

[@rosetanner9817]

TTT. YOU HIT 🎯 THAT RIGHT ON THE HEAD 😏

[@hunterfisher2065]

Umm I need that how do I find it

[@zombiemombie666]

Yes! Sequel is needed!!

[@djikari1762]

I know at one point in the video, a piano piece from Silent Hill 2 is in it.

[@youtubeconnollyfamily]

It’s amazing how consistent you are. Can’t believe you’re not at 1 million yet. I remember you were under 100 K when I subscribed.

[@kadybrinson8007]

99009 p 60 try pop to 50 t Tyr try to tr54

[@youtubeconnollyfamily]

@@kadybrinson8007 huh?

[@GR-bn3xj]

Seems like half his stories though are about teen fantasy stories. Not as realistic as some other channels

[@mrmills45]

@@GR-bn3xj Good. They don’t need to be realistic, that’s the beauty of fiction.

[@GR-bn3xj]

@@mrmills45 yes I get that but it's the teenage Angie I dont like as much... Probably bc I'm older now lol

[@FLEETINGGOAT15]

My question at the end is what happened to Margo and Jonathan's parents surely they would have millions of questions about their missing kids

[@ethanfurr8351]

And wouldn’t alex get blamed for the disappearances? my thoughts exactly

[@randonbracton8999]

​@@ethanfurr8351 thing is they would not have any proof

[@realboy1720]

@@randonbracton8999 except for the bloody clothes

[@bryanb8196]

The long video's is what I particularly like while playin my games. Well done, pal. Would love to see more of em frequently. With that bein said, keep up ya great work pal.

[@rofflesvanwagon]

Same man, I love gaming to these stories. Perfect for single player or level grinding. I tend to get too high and have to rewind all the time though ahaha

[@dragosdodon5199]

@@rofflesvanwagon depressing

[@literallycringeidk360]

Yep. Perfect to listen to while playing Genshin impact or cookie run

[@derpyhooves6667]

Exactly what i do. Grind levels or resources in games and listen to long spooky stories. Best shit ever

[@HateShitStainedCrackerss]

I save all Mr creeps, dark somnium and lighthouse horror vids for work

[@erinfish5085]

Margot made me so angry at the end, I was almost overjoyed she died. I just wished that Alexandra could’ve slapped her or yelled at her some more… I know I would’ve.

[@ChallengeIdeas]

The narrator irritated me, too. Him stopping the story for several minutes to pontificate about purpose and meaning being nonsense like the king of all fedoras, in the middle of a creepypasta no less, is so smug and pompous that I almost clicked away. It's plain to see he's not her friend. Friends don't hold one another in the sort of contempt that he clearly has for Margot. ETA: Oh, it's a girl protagonist. The tone of the narrator sounded like what you'd expect from a male character.

[@jackdurden466]

*****Spoiler Alert***** Oh Damn! The horror & end that embraced Margot, hit me out of nowhere, I definitely didn’t see that coming at all! Whew, and it was so graphic, I can only hope that Alex is able to get a wish also…well, apparently not, I’d have thought each of them would have gotten a wish but since only Margot knew it was an option or rule, no one else ever had any chance to make one. Great story Mr C! Props to the author!! 👍👍

[@blackmarketmilk]

they did the guy friend (i think John?) so dirty brooo, she deserved that end

[@AnthonyRivera1999]

@@blackmarketmilk FR! It ain’t enough to play homies feelings out here, now you gotta sacrifice us to paranormal games 😂

[@randomuser395]

dang if you see this please add another space before your thing, the first bit isnt hidden by read more and i got spoiled :/

[@Stolen_Rose]

Did she really not get her wish, though? She became proactive, driven, and ready to sacrifice it all for a person she wanted to bring back, much like the one she admired/envied.

[@waska1289]

@@Stolen_Rose Cough cough, coming full circle, cough cough.

[@claracatlady9844]

When Margo said “it changes based on what you fear or *want* …” I was like; ok so at the last staircase you get a wish or your hearts desire or get to bring somebody back from the dead and she wants her sister back. Yeah no trusting her is an awful idea. Black river? Boat? I’m pretty sure that’s the River Styx

[@mekachi1239]

Your 1hr or longer videos help me fall asleep almost every night. And I used to have really severe insomnia. I say used to but I still have bad nights every now and then. Honestly, your videos are the only reason I’ve gotten decent sleep lately. Thank you so much.

[@thepurpleman119]

It’s crazy how nobody asked

[@mekachi1239]

@@thepurpleman119 it’s crazy how you think that I give a sh*t.

[@thepurpleman119]

@@mekachi1239 it’s actually insane how little I care that you don’t give a sh*t

[@mekachi1239]

@@thepurpleman119 good comeback 👍👍 GG.

[@thepurpleman119]

@@mekachi1239 nah your comeback was better

[@KC-xd7ph]

This story was so captivating, loved it. I need there to be a part 2!

[@dootdoot7705]

1Hey Bobby!Play that one about falling down the stairs! 2Sure thing Johnny! 2*Falls down and dies* 1I love it!

[@q_0191]

ASDF reference! *I love it!*

[@noctis8596]

Love the asdf

[@didosauce6008]

This, THIS WAS GOLD. It was quite literally bone chilling

[@yootoobsuks4210]

I don't normally go for such long stories, but this was really good. Nice pick!

[@nathanielholcombe6935]

You guys do realize that at the end she is basically asking one of us to be a sacrifice?

[@thelairofblair]

She's looking to sacrifice herself. Survivors guilt.

[@carajada93]

Awesome, hearing a horror story at 3am while I work at an office in an completely empty floor

[@mannybadillo1]

You gonna take the stairs on you way out?

[@carajada93]

@@mannybadillo1 I took them a couple of times while listening lol, went and got a couple of cigs

[@michelinegosselin3879]

Dude. What a story! I was sitting on the edge of my seat.

[@CatLady-9327]

44:38 I didn't realize Alex was a girl until this moment

[@eliwhaler3227]

Same

[@coldpeppermint8909]

Same

[@forgottens7712]

Same

[@on-jo7716]

Lmao how are so many people saying same same same same same same same same same

[@rosetanner9817]

Skeet

[@rodedoggz]

Question: 1 of the rules was to not look back while on the staircase right? The narrator looked back at 2 different times while going back on the staircase and nothing happened.

[@jerrystoner04]

Well two people died so…?

[@karenjarrett8904]

I have one thing to say about The Staircase Game, Oh HELL NO ! This was a great story, talk about intense. Be careful what you wish for, like The Monkey’s Paw. Getting their son back.

[@lithangwendu8186]

This should be made into a movie.

[@adriennefrances9924]

This is one of the most amazing story ive heard in such a long time

[@evazauner]

i have to say: you improved your readingskills very much! now i can listen to you without thinking "hey dude, please blow your nose"!

[@joshdavis5720]

There is only one rule that echos back to me for margo's end. No matter how much you want it, no matter what rumors you hear. You can NEVER bring back the dead. A question That FMA asks. "For what could equal the value of a Human soul?" People don't come back from the dead. Not ever. It ain't worth trying to play God.

[@24playman58]

"i survived the staircase game and all i got is this lousy t-shirt"

[@rotaderp88]

60 minutes in and my anxiety level is so high Almost at the end and I want to die from how terrified I am

[@TheMurlocKeeper]

That's why you listen to these things while playing a game, and perhaps a pot of tea by your side

[@dakotahutchens1634]

As someone who has lost a sibling she absolutely is not justified in doing this

[@LampOnAHill-jsm]

***10 STARS*** So Alex wants to rescue Jonathan but without a sacrifice. Alex will be the sacrifice. And what will Jonathan be when he returns, should he successfully traverse the remaining staircases? Will he even be able to escape the mirrored room to do so with Alex sacrificing herself for absolutely nothing then? I think the first staircase will lead Alex right to Margot for retribution of some insane sort. Margot has no right to be wanting vengeance against Alex but I am betting she does hold that rage anyway. Alex is actually suicidal and that is her motivation for returning to the game. She knows she won't survive but it won't be by her own hand that she dies. What a sad story but omg THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER HEARD.

[@mageninja3261]

Its awesome how the background changes with each floor. Great job Mr.Creeps!

[@edcaluag7655]

She was a force of nature “Was”

[@dannychamberlain6244]

Jonathan, you were good son. Real good. Maybe even the best.

[@lizzyl9357]

Those crows must've been great friends, munching on those well-cooked faces together

[@navigatorofnone]

What a beautifully macabre story, and achingly sad to boot. 👏👏👏

[@that_one_cosplay]

This story gives me one more reason to stay out of my basement

[@bread_cat_gaming1]

this was a very detailed creepypasta

[@src6339]

More people playing with / or on staircases? I had no idea that this was such a popular pastime.

[@natotornado5185]

Not if your a search an rescue worker

[@edcaluag7655]

“New korean show on netflix” Hah nice one

[@crazyparanormalinvestigato2007]

Sounds like a normal day at work for me...........i work at walmart

[@itsjustme7487]

LOL

[@magicpyroninja]

Seems like Margo is not that good of a kid if she's arguing against the naughty Nice list cuz nice kids wouldn't have a problem

[@magicpyroninja]

Turns out I was right Margo is not a very nice person. Sacrificing one of her friends to bring back her long dead sister

[@Spideryote]

Trapped under ice for eternity That sucks :(

[@OvisLeo]

I'm so sad about Jonathan. Poor guy didn't deserve that. Also Margo should've been ripped apart slower, she did everybody so dirty but got that quick death smh

[@matthewmohri9990]

I'd say you, Swamp Dweller, Dr.Creepen, and Dead Man Talking are some of my favs. I think we all highly enjoy it when you guys do collaborations. It would be cool to get women story tellers in on the collaborations.

[@Pomegranate44]

I enjoy listening to these when im sick or stressed

[@whoatemylastcheezit511]

This was really good. Straight out of a King novel. Thanks for the great story!

[@rjkmannusaf0166]

You nailed it! You are an awesome narrator and you really outdid yourself with this story. Please keep the stories coming. Thank you!

[@crystalanimosity2374]

Id play the game, but we gotta rush between staircases and have the right supplies

[@swaginton1180]

30 seconds earlier: "oh do n't worry I have no intention of sacrificing someone elses life to save my one true love from eternal suffering. thats soooo not me. I would NEVER do that" 30 seconds later: "SO I'M LOOKING FOR VOLUNTEERS TO DO THIS DEATH GAME WITH ME!!!!!!!!"

[@rush357753]

Lol just what I thought also. Hmm 🤔

[@JaxxReyes]

Definitely looking forward to this game.

[@TheWallsAreSkin]

Yup

[@PaperLocket1]

@@TheWallsAreSkinare you still stuck in your house?

[@TheWallsAreSkin]

@@PaperLocket1 *y e s* it sucks

[@PaperLocket1]

@@TheWallsAreSkin wish I could help

[@plaguedoctor03]

Game

[@stanlystane7541]

Anyone notice the subtle nod to Squid Games?

[@sunflow57]

Excellent story. I love long creepypastas like these.

[@lonewolfnergiganos4000]

I have a feeling this video will get a part two.

[@marilynhands1859]

I hope so!!👍😁

[@aaronweaver9751]

Not me, am allergic to being torn apart. Hate when that happens. Gonna play the subway staircase game.

[@chrishartmann498]

... "I played the bookcase game.. what we found will blow your mind" I was alone

[@catlover2223]

Books?

[@GreenGardens051]

Darn these kids and their creepy games with stairs and stuff. What happened to the good of days of playing Minecraft and roblox

[@Lo0ny_T0ons]

Never thought I’d hear someone say that! This made my day

[@Chillcoder-mf2ci]

I fell asleep listening to this and now it’s another story lol

[@plantylady]

Just found out you have a podcast and I’m so excited!!

[@connorcooksey9352]

Please a part 2 of this story

[@80grey88]

Well, they DEFINITELY ran into some kronenbourg monsters 😂

[@siah7268]

WHERE IS PART 2??😁awesome story

[@-Dr.Plague-]

SCP Operation Descent Spooky scary skeletons Send shivers down your spine Shrieking skulls will shock your soul Seal your doom tonight Spooky scary skeletons Speak with such a screech You'll shake and shudder in surprise When you hear these zombies shriek We're so sorry skeletons You're so misunderstood You only want to socialize But I don't think we should Cause spooky scary skeletons Shout startling shrilly screams They'll sneak from their sarcophagus And just won't leave you be Spirits supernatural Are shy whats all the fuss But bags of bones seem so unsafe It's semi-serious! Spooky scary skeletons Are silly all the same They'll smile and scrabble slowly by And drive you so insane Sticks and stones will break your bones They seldom let you snooze Spooky scary skeletons Will wake you with a boo!

[@thepurpleman119]

Creeper (oh man) So way back in the mine Got our pickaxe swingin' from side to side (side to side) This task a grueling one Hope to find some diamonds tonight (night, night) Diamonds tonight Heads up, you hear a sound, turn around and look up Total shock fills your body Oh no it's you again I can never forget those eyes, eyes, eyes, eyes Cause baby tonight The creeper's tryin' to steal all our stuff again Cause baby tonight You grab your pick shovel and bolt again (bolt again) And run, run Until it's done, done Until the sun comes up in the morn' Cause baby tonight The creeper's tryin' to steal all our stuff again (stuff again) Just when you think you're safe Overhearsome hissing from right behind (right behind) That's a nice life you have Shame it's got to end at this time, time, time, time Blows up, and your health bar drops and you could use a 1-up Get inside don't be tardy So now you're stuck in there Half a heart is left but don't die, die, die Cause baby tonight The creeper's tryin' to steal all our stuff again Cause baby tonight You grab your pick shovel and bolt again (bolt again) And run, run Until it's done, done Until the sun comes up in the morn' Cause baby tonight The creeper's tryin' to steal all our stuff again (stuff again) Creepers, ya mine, haha Dig up diamonds, craft those diamonds, make some armor Get it baby, go and forge that like you so, mlg pro The sword's made of diamonds, so come at me bro Ha, training in your room under the torch light Hone that form to get you ready for the big fight Every single day in the whole night Creeper's out prowlin', (Whoo), alright Look at me, look at you Take my revenge that's what I'm gonna do I'm a warrior baby, what else is new And my blade's gonna tear through you Bring it Cause baby tonight The creeper's tryin' to steal all our stuff again (Get your stuff, yea let's take back the world, haha) Cause baby tonight You grab your sword, armor and go (it's on) Take your revenge (woo) So fight, fight Like it's the last, last Night of your life, life show them your bite (woo) Cause baby tonight The creeper's tryin' to steal all our stuff again Cause baby tonight You grab your pick shovel and bolt again (bolt again) And run, run Until it's done, done Until the sun comes up in the morn' Cause baby tonight The creeper's tryin' to steal all our stuff again (woo)

[@squishy4645]

Got my helmet on my head Figure out what that zombie said (what?) Lava all over the room Got a half-heart left, man, I am doomed Don't have any iron bars My pick just broke into some shards Scary noise, what should I do? Go left or right? I'll have to choose Visions of last time flash inside my mind I'm scared, oh well And I'm pretty sure there's a big creeper right there Don't mine at night I know you're lookin' at that cave And you're feelin' kind of brave Go to bed you'll be alright Don't mine at night There's nothing that is gonna change If you just wait until the day Zombies wanna eat your brains Don't mine at night I know it's me you're gonna thank Make a bed, it's not too late Three wool and three wooden planks Don't mine at night How many times I have to say Drop the pick and walk away, ay, woah Don't mine at night (Don't mine at night) Don't mine at night (Don't mine at night) Stomach's all tied up in knots This labyrinth, I'm gettin' lost This is really getting old Found like two pieces of coal Down one way there's just stone Monsters won't leave me alone Down another there's some lava And of course I get pwned Remember last time I tried to mine at night I failed, so bad I lost all my stuff, it was really tough That's it (rage quit) Don't mine at night I know you're lookin' at that cave And you're feelin' kinda brave Go to bed you'll be alright Don't mine at night There's nothing that is gonna change If you just wait until the day Zombies wanna eat your brains Don't mine at night I know it's me you're gonna thank Make a bed, it's not too late Three wool and three wooden planks Don't mine at night How many times I have to say Drop the pick and walk away, ay, woah Don't mine at night (Don't mine at night) Don't mine at night (Don't mine at night) D-O-N-T M-I-N-E D-O-N-T M-I-N-E D-O-N-T M-I-N-E D-O-N-T M-I-N-E Don't mine at night I know you're lookin' at that cave And you're feelin' kinda brave Go to bed you'll be alright Don't mine at night There's nothing that is gonna change If you just wait until the day Zombies wanna eat your brains Don't mine at night I know it's me you're gonna thank Make a bed, it's not too late Three wool and three wooden planks Don't mine at night How many times I have to say Drop the pick and walk away, ay, woah Don't mine at night (Don't mine at night)

[@ironwill6900]

just sitting with my dog listening to this :)

[@fieryblaze1737]

This is a good one, but has anybody ever heard of The Psychiatrist & Meat? A new KZbinr called Lady Of Darkness. She writes and even narrate her own stories. I came by her channel by complete accident. Those two are twisted ass Creepypasta!

[@inexturnal4138]

I played a different supernatural game myself actually. A game called 'the mr creeps game'. You start it by booting up youtube and going to mr creeps youtube channel. Pick a video of your own choice. There are only 3 rules. 1. Once you start watching, you can't stop. 2. Must wear headphones. 3. Once you're done, start another. I am still traumatized.

[@lolz1193]

Good story👏👏... Got me thinking tho... What if it was actually Alex's wish that got granted?... Maybe she was stressed and jealous of Margo's success so unconsciously she wanted her out of her life, and wanted Jonathan to be trapped by her 🤧... Or idk, having a spooky stories marathon messes with my mind a bit 😂

[@charlottestreet3301]

I thought that Alex was a boy

[@mykaelnyx8821]

But didn't they clearly state that somebody going inside has to be sacrificed to get the wish? If she wishes to save the guy, how is somebody NOT going to be sacrificed to attain this?

[@scarletteperez4697]

I think she survived and won the game the first time because she had no deep hidden wants she had already accepted defeat or life as was. Johnathan sadly got drawn in his blind love for Margo or could be also he couldn't face apart of himself so he became fair game for the mirrors. A part 2 where Alexandra goes back would be great this is a good storyboard

[@chriscoffman9991]

Awesome story! I hope there's a sequel

[@ukat37]

i just checked out the author’s reddit page and it looks like they’re starting a sequel! they said look out for part one between 01/12-01/16

[@chriscoffman9991]

@@ukat37 that's great news, thank you

[@joshdavis5720]

Also the author is currently in the process of a sequel to the Staircase Game

[@synedrus_]

Once they hit the mirror room I said "Oh! It's like a fucked up Infinity Train!"

[@marywiegand2050]

I love love love the long and I play my coloring games while I listen to them 😛. Thanks keep up the good work love your voice❤️❤️❤️🙏

[@narcat1488]

They did my man John DIRTY bro

[@hiya022]

I feel like there are 2 types of paranormal believers: The ones that want to play every single game in existence The ones that don't wanna fuck with spirits and just wanna stay safe and comfy

[@natec5477]

🤣agreed but you can sign me up as someone that would never play these games or work any of those jobs with insane paranormal rules

[@yb7689]

I would love to see this as a movie

[@Hellnogizmo]

"Iron grip" in a sea of blood? Am I the only nerd that laughed at this? 😅

[@yourroyalhighness6297]

Unpopular opinion: Everyone wants a lover like Alexandra. :>

[@jy840]

I’d probably not be above being condescending toward Jonathan after he decided to fuck everything up.

[@Blackguy-de5eh]

I’m listening to this at work when they counted the stairs from the maze 97,98,99 “sweettarts”

[@shaddowbladegaming135]

I love to listen to these around Halloween time

[@ErdriedDeirdre]

This reminds me of the Left Right Game story. I like it!

[@Knightwalker727]

"That new Korean show trending on Netflix"? Squid Game? 😂

[@Dekial544]

I'm hoping the author makes another part for this story

[@Mr_Lavender]

Well this is interesting... My name is Jonathan, I majored in biology and this video was released on my birthday... that's funky

[@A819A1L]

Well time to move into a bungalow! I always knew I hated stairs, I'm taking the lift 🛗 every time.

[@BlueTunda0000g]

This was an interesting story

[@lilyawoodburn]

Dude, wonderful job with all the backgrounds on this one, they lined up with the events in the story so well!

[@thedeadmafioso2629]

I've been re watching this vid since it's been uploaded and been falling asleep to it since forever. I adore this story so much and I really appreciate you reading this story! It's been a constant in my life and has been a inspiration for my art and life. You deserve the wild my good sir! I sincerely cherish this pasta. I always look forward to everything you post. Best of wishes - aliester.

[@bappyindecent1793]

I'm late to comment but this released a day after my bday and it was a amazing bday present. Adding the fact it's the 1st creepypasta reading thing i've listened to.

[@denzilnagel254]

I find it strange that in most stories, the MC must at least vomit once.

[@Rekr.Winter]

Margot got off too easy, she deserved a worse death than that, but it makes me happy to know her suffering will likely be eternal, reuniting with her sister only to be ripped apart again and again, eternally feeling the longing for her sister, only to get so close but never feel that satisfaction, now thats a true reward

[@angel79892]

I really enjoyed this story!

[@q_0191]

Imagine not going up stairs two at a time, up AND down.

[@yourroyalhighness6297]

Thinking of me swimming in blood already gives me anxiety. I don't have a phobia of ocean or blood but still, it would make me wanna puke. What more for those with phobias? omg

[@ashie8273]

when you realize you share the same name as the main character

[@tothemaxgetit]

GREAT IMAGINATION THAT SORRY WAS REALLY INTERESTING

[@averagejoe455]

He would have been immediately arrested for his friend's disappearances.