"My family has been stalked for the last 4 years" [COMPLETE] by Nick Botic | CreepyPasta Storytime

[@mumtazsheikh690]

Oh my God TELL YOUR WIFE. I hate it when husbands are like "I have to protect my family by hiding the fact that we're in serious and immediate danger"

[@brettjohnson536]

Yeah it's a really annoying troupe. It doesn't make any sense

[@uafc1]

Not like the wife did much though...

[@JayLoc0042]

A husband doesn't bring problems to his wife, he handles them to the best of his competence. Because if Dad/husband has to go to his wife for guidance/help, he looks incompetent and now Mom/child are more scared because Dad is unsure, and yes I totally went overboard just for a simple story.

[@austinjones7569]

@@JayLoc0042bro, who cares? By not telling your wife, you make her a liability and completely destroy her trust. Before you ask, yes I’m a husband and father. And no, I’m not dumb enough to hide this sort of thing from her.

[@JayLoc0042]

@@austinjones7569 Because women in general typically completely remain calm, cool, and collective in times of peril, which doesn't also make them a liability...gotcha.

[@zachmontminy]

"I just want her pictures!" "I'll skin her alive" huh

[@nini.vu_1438]

Excatly

[@samsonjones9332]

Same thing I said

[@SmokeystarOriginal]

I just want part two :(

[@gaamesso8002]

Bruh

[@milkpup9201]

"I just want to be her friend!" *"I'll skin her alive!"* *Well which one is it then?*

[@mykidsmom33]

"I don't want to hurt her!!" *"I will S K I N her like a DE A R"* *B O I W H A T*

[@mykidsmom33]

I'm gonna kms I'm so peeved at how this enDED HE CK

[@greene8419]

lol

[@gagne6928]

Him: You know I had to do it to em

[@morevampywolf3817]

Deer*

[@penguindp4379]

​@@gagne6928 ​OwO yeah yeah

[@teirdalin]

"Can we keep our neighbors dog?" "Yeah sure whatever."

[@selectidiot]

right.

[@nickbotic]

@@selectidiotit wasn’t the neighbor’s dog lol

[@selectidiot]

@@nickbotic you ducked that one.

[@alfredo6900]

Pet: **is in a creepypasta** *SO YOU HAVE CHOSEN DEATH*

[@mecanwinmac2796]

Hahaha I thought that too!

[@StephonZeno]

That's one of the things I hate most that occurs in creepypastas... Random animal abuse.

[@lordredman6137]

That's horror in general

[@j-dawg4774]

If the main character was anything like John Wick this story would be shorter, it took this dude almost 3 years to grow a pair and look for the killer who was stalking his family

[@sadboixx420xx9]

Some Random Teacher: So kids, what's the lesson of this story? Billy, do you know? Little Billy-Bob Jr.: Always confirm the kill? Teacher: YES! When you're going up against a psychotic killer/stalker, always make sure that they're dead. The simple double-tap would suffice, or if you're out of ammunition you could always grab the nearest item and use it as an improvised melee weapon! I hope you have all learned a valuable lesson today!

[@PixieStick-fh5uk]

Bethesda Addict I'll be taking notes sir

[@ThePokemon11]

He was shot in the throat though...like...the chances of surviving a point-plank bullet to the throat are about as slim as winning the lottery twice in a row, especially when you're sitting there bleeding out. He never mentioned the body not being there when the FBI showed up, chances are he bled out fairly quickly considering that area is home to several major arteries, and at the back of the neck is obviously the spinal cord. The shot was a killing blow for sure, my assumption is that the person killed was an accomplice, and that the real kidnapper wasn't in the area at the time.

[@TH-hy9kr]

@@ThePokemon11it was Michael Myers ;)

[@ThePokemon11]

@@TH-hy9kr Myers is still human.

[@beanbagstitcher9307]

@@ThePokemon11 The real stalker is the guy that was at Daisy's the night of the truck ransack. The guy that "couldn't" be the culprit because he was an active member of the local church.

[@JakobSeidl]

When you’re 52 minutes in and you realize you’ve already watched this...

[@kokichiowo6599]

Lmaoooo

[@raymondduenas3324]

AnonUser20 I read this at 52 minutes 🙃

[@miraculousmememaker2986]

@@MaticJ29 lmao 😂😂😂

[@punkfunkyeahstudios1718]

Shiiiiiii

[@nonamenotrace4333]

I realized halfway through I heard this like forever ago

[@WhatdidIsayagain]

Goddamnit, David King!

[@ethans3387]

David Fucking King :>

[@leftybefty9766]

I thought the same

[@outverts]

I watched that 2

[@morganspeaking]

WhatdidIsayagain i luv that one

[@marthalowe23]

David PFHUCKING king

[@razorbliz]

How to get a free dog Step 1 acquire psycho stalker guy Step 2 show him a drawing of the desired breed Step 3 if incorrect breed let them know you will find a better stalker Step 4 winning

[@NeiasaurusCreations]

This comment is so demented I chuckled.

[@noahdouglas369]

Just be like: "Um, excuse me can I talk to the manager?"

[@Gone_Berserk_625]

@Ian Yeetmore step 6 kill doggo when you love him most

[@miraculousmememaker2986]

Step 5: never leave doggo alone so he doesnt get cut up Step 6: Wait until stalker messes up and get him arrested Step 7: profit

[@odd_inhd9250]

Instructions unclear: dog got fucking fileted

[@PekiNim]

Dammit, MC, TELL YOUR WIFE, you emotionally stunted bag of frozen peas! I'm halfway through and so damn annoyed that he's not sharing vital information with his partner and putting them more at risk.

[@ollievendor7413]

I know! Jeez. He must hate his family. He's treating them all like luggage.

[@marissaayla9529]

EMOTIONALLY STUNTED BAG OF FROZEN PEAS. I AM DEADDDDD

[@jaz58107]

Same it's infuriating!

[@mrslasher1064]

She blamed him for everything anyway,so what was the point of telling her?

[@normal_human_female]

Uhggg!! me too!!!! He's a freaking idiot and didn't even give a chance to be helped ... Oh the cops aren't helping you and you have Todo things yourself??? What do you expect?! You didn't really DO anything to get them involved! Uuhhhhhggggg!!!

[@owenmeadows5202]

Damn you helpful stalker, those were my chores!

[@playersgambit4423]

Owen Meadows wow

[@ok-th7zv]

Owen Meadows Now it's personal...

[@reighkugol4545]

No

[@tybot43]

The episode of family Guy when Peter Upsets the amish and they start doing their Chores

[@Tsumi9008]

i don't care that you kidnapped my daughter, you mowed my lawn you sick fuck

[@MazSix45]

Omg it's so weird to hear you talk normally in the intro.

[@klusterfuk3688]

I DREAM OF LEE

[@alexlaw236]

I promise Clementine is safe, Lee

[@The_Maki1]

everyone not talking about your comment but instead talk about Lee in the walking dead ( i have nothing wrong with the walking dead series i enjoy them)

[@cooldude4225]

LEE

[@RyzrsWRLD]

Undead Beebo Stump xfcxcfx xcx xxcx xx. Xcc x xxxvzccxfxccxcfxx xxx xxxcz x ccxc zx x zxcccvcc xccc x cvc x cxc x xxxxxx cfxc xxx zxxxzxxxxxx x. F

[@Nekulturny]

I'm almost halfway through this story, and I have to say the protagonist is a real piece of garbage for keeping this from his wife. She needs to know whats going on.

[@lookatdemijipers]

he does the same shit again near the end too, real moron lol

[@j-dawg4774]

It took this dude almost 3 years to look for a murderer who was stalking his family. If I even smelled someone coming after my daughter I'd immediately baracade EVERY entrance and exit in the house and turn it into a stronghold, I don't blame the wife for hating her husband whatsoever

[@Poiuy]

Alternate title: World’s most bipolar stalker doesn’t know what he’s doing

[@Dreamur]

i know this is 5 months old but I just want you to know that this made me wheeze so loudly

[@Poiuy]

@@Dreamur Little did you know I’m still here

[@ozdunder]

i know this is 9 months old but I just want you to know that this made me wheeze so loudly

[@pollex.]

58% percent now

[@smoovy211]

@@ozdunder :(

[@loonsdio]

If only his daughter drew a Lamborghini

[@kokichiowo6599]

Lmao

[@nathantrombley4045]

Lmfao yup

[@colbartus5273]

helpmeimheldhostage and a 3 story mansion with a built in movie theatre

[@halflifemason]

lmao

[@scarelord3265]

@@kokichiowo6599 0

[@laura3861]

ITS ALWAYS THE DOG THAT DIES **cries**

[@Tsumi9008]

your picture is a cat, damn traitor

[@bat-z3286]

Laura-Dawn Massie yep

[@antonellan6794]

lawl so? poor dawg ig

[@red_doggo7219]

What is ig?

[@antonellan6794]

ig means i guess smh

[@tiffanypriore9220]

As a wife & mother of 2 young kids, I’d be livid if my husband kept all that from me. Completely stupid & unacceptable

[@polyarchzealot305]

I'm 30 minutes in. This guy kinda has it coming with how he is keeping all of this to himself

[@kari7403]

Right? I'd be *BEYOND* pisses off, if my spouse just chose to not let me know that the stalker is still around. This guy is an asshole.

[@taylatay4100]

@Slitwire No, he's still an ass. I won't say an assHOLE, but an ass nonetheless. Have you never heard the expression, "The road to hell is paved with good intentions"? That's literally this story. We all understand that the MC was doing what he thought was right, as a panicked and terrified parent, but the fact that if he had just given a heads up to ANY of his family most of this stuff wouldn't have happened. Now you can say, "Oh well we don't know that, only what happened in the story" and you're right for the most part but we can very well imagine realistically. If he had told his wife, she would have been horrified, stressed and worried. But would have ALSO most likely kept a closer eye in her daughter, ever vigilant from this psycho instead of being blindsided when she got snatched outta nowhere

[@taylatay4100]

@Slitwire If he had told his kids, even if it was the watered down, " Now kids, when you get approached by a stranger, even if they say they are a friend you should..." and this could have likely put a wrench in dude's plan. If the husband told his wife about the presents, she could have maybe spotted the new one at their daughter's bday and maybe intercepted. 🤷🏽‍♀️ Which is why we don't keep things from our family for their well-being, because it always becomes hurtful to their well-being

[@faebunny8239]

exactly, the fact he felt the need to "spare" his wife from vital information gives me HUGE mysoginist vibes. that's supposed to be a partner you communicate and work together with, but instead he infantilized her the entire time. I'd be beyond pissed.

[@leticiaalcala9665]

I didnt feel bad for him. Idk if thats a problem with me or him but you should tell your partner EVERYTHING if it involves your kids safety.

[@cowboy4323]

Narrator: the police weren't taking this seriously probably because everything that he stalker had done was pretty mundane aside from invading our truck (dog is brutally murdered) narrator: of course the first thing to do is to bury the dog and erase the message and not call the police

[@mattiekarwin3667]

While a plot convenience, there's a comical amount of that irl to be fair

[@thesuperdoge2476]

​@@mattiekarwin3667not really, it wouldnt change anything

[@mansoormahamud6122]

who thinks this should be a movie

[@maggyfoster8699]

mansoor mahamud me

[@nickbotic]

Stay tuned. It's in the works. We have a financier, and at least part of a script that I've worked on, just trying to find a filmmaker as passionate about the story as me and the manager I'm working with are. Go to nickbotic.com and sign up for the mailing list to get updates!

[@lilkane667]

wow if u make it anytime soon will see it

[@silvertheelf]

The long stories should gain one.

[@ashtonbueser9884]

Nick Botic, if you found one then i would support you through all your works this one is so perfect that you could call it "art".... Get it? Art? ( routing for you (: )

[@SundaysEnd]

Damn, this story really shook me up. Like I'm physically shaking right now. I hope there is a sequel. The only thing I didn't like was what an idiot the dad was at the beginning. Like I know he was scared but wouldn't he tell his wife when his daughter was at risk of being fucking murdered?

[@nickbotic]

I wrote this, and I will admit if there was one thing I would change (and am changing slightly in the script I'm working on for the adaptation), it was that he didn't tell his wife what was going on. Originally, there was an entire subplot about their time apart from each other after Katie is kidnapped which developed the wife's character a bit more, but I obviously ended up removing it. I'm glad you liked the rest though!

[@keishlamarie16]

Nick Botic are you gonna write a part 2!! Plzzzzz write a part 2

[@ThePokemon11]

Nick Botic, I really enjoyed this story as a whole, I did question the choice of the father to not tell his wife, but when faced with a choice like that, fear in some people does take precedent over common sense.

[@mikeseverance5676]

Nick Botic you sir are an amazing writer. Where Can I find any of your other work?

[@ProdJORDO]

@@nickbotic this story had me on the edge of my seat the entire time man if a part two is ever made i will be very invested more then i was

[@jaywish2822]

"we decided to go from north carolina to the east coast, through the midwest." i- *B O I*

[@morgancunningham9230]

✩ Jaywish ✩ my brain was like ?????🤔🤯📉📈

[@suggestedusername6662]

Lol I said the same shit

[@dalpz205]

Ty.. I was thinking I must have heard that wrong

[@spanningbread]

Hoolld thefuckup

[@fylker4888]

Probably meant North California

[@xmanmartinez00]

I just want ONE GOOD ending where it doesn't end in a twist where everything is actually still fucked up

[@Anomalyresearchlabs]

I agree, remove the last 30 seconds and it’s golden

[@Alex_The_Barbearian]

​@@Anomalyresearchlabsthe only thing is I had a hunch that the story was gonna end like that once I first stumbled on it because when Katie was kidnapped I figured out there were two assailants...so this ending makes sense.

[@sniperdude657]

Go listen to the story borrasca and then borrasca V very good listen

[@earndoggy]

If my husband had kept a secret of this magnitude from me he would be in more trouble than any damn stalker and the stalker would not be stalking anyone ever again.

[@earndoggy]

@@nonozworld yep lmao!

[@Heating56]

When someone gets shot in the throat and left to bleed out they don't come back. So im gonna take the "I killed him and rescued my family ending" because adding in a "and then he came back" to the ending doesn't make the story better in any way, it's just a cheap ploy to try and make it seem scarier. The terror of losing family, of knowing someone is directing intentional malice at you from some unreachable place, is the real horror of this story, not some Michael Myers or Jason villain who never dies

[@kelvenoptimusmaximus4301]

I don't think that's what it meant, I think it meant that even though Katie claims she only saw one kidnapper at any given time it could be that each different mask denotes a different member of the crime syndicate, given that one person could probably not pull all off this off alone. Even with all his compatriots back at Daisy's Diner.

[@kalebs7375]

Ya there where 2 kidnappers. I thought that was kinda obvious.

[@x0Chiggie0x]

I was thinking more along the lines of a brother

[@Mrspiderman20014]

yeah other than the fact that there's more than one kidnapper so the ending *does* make sense in this story, i agree with you on that.

[@mg3873]

I mean I agree but at the same time, people of small towns know everybody and everything that goes on through their lives. It's odd but I got a Criminal Minds vibe to this story but I feel that a town in on kidnapping a child isn't beyond the realm of possibility. We hear from sources of the underground female sex trade that goes unnoticed by the police.

[@LeonTheBig]

This should be a movie, just like borrasca. The ending to this one is so good. I really wish there were more creepypastas that are made into movies. Instead of just stupid remakes of old movies

[@dashajordan6655]

Arson Aleks borrasca was made into a movie ? Is that the title of it ?

[@bobcabbit6343]

We're still waiting on a slenderman movie and he's been around for over a decade so... not likely. Though I do agree with you. And knowing our luck it'd be directed by shamalon...

[@MrEvan312]

Some day I want to make stories like this into proper films. This one, "dared my friend to ruin my life", among many others would make great additions to the horror film genre. Hell, I've seen at least one major production recently ripped right out of a pasta, Bollywood's probably getting desperate. Independent writers will put most AAA bunglers to shame.

[@nickbotic]

Hey! I'm the writer of this story, and indeed, it's being shopped around independent studios. We have a financier who is backing it, right now we're just trying to find a filmmaker who is as passionate about my story as both I and the manager I'm working with are. SO stay tuned! Go to nickbotic.com and sign up for the mailing list to get updates!

[@ChannelOfTheWriter]

Have you edited this story since writing the version that MrCreepyPasta reads because the ending is nice but I didn't feel it completely made up for some of the weaker writing in other parts of the story. Examples include that the wife, the son, and the daughter really have no character other than that they are the protagonist's wife, son, and daughter. Hell, you could have cut the son out of the story and it wouldn't really have changed anything. Speaking of characters, I feel a lot of the things the bad guy does in this story is justified by just saying that he crazy, like why did he mutilate the dog? And why did he kill his daughter? Throughout the story, there were moments, that I can't specifically recall right now, but that just kept taking me out of the story, and they all culminated to the moment when the protagonist wakes in the room with the TVs, and that completely took me out of the story. Earlier in the story, you were going for a very realistic tone, telling a story about a family being tormented by a faceless, mysterious stalker, and then the guy is in a underground room with tons of TVs in it where the villain threatens him be broadcasting himself live to all the TVs, and it suddenly feels like it SAW Movie. That scene took me out because it was very tone-ly inconsistent and made the story feel kind of silly. This may not be a real flaw, but I thought the story was going to get really dark at the end, and the protagonist was going to be murdered by the townspeople who were in on the kidnapping ganging up to murder him. I was hoping that wouldn't be the ending because then this would be one of those frustrating Creepypastas that leaves you saying, "Then who the f wrote this story?" (Creepypasta/noSleep Stories are fiction but they are fiction that try to convince you that their stories did happen.) But it was really weird that no other townspeople showed up to gang up on the protagonist because that's what it felt like the revelation in the bad guy's house that many of the townspeople were in on the kidnapping was building up to. Even if that wasn't meant to be the case, you would think the diner woman would have warned the bad guy that the father was looking for a barn with an X. It didn't seem like the bad guy knew he was coming when he felt like he should. The letter said bring no one or the girl dies, but from how this story went down, he could have brought people with him and the bad guy wouldn't have known until they already started pulling guns on him. These are just some of the things I had problems with, so I would like to ask again, have you revised this story anymore since?

[@ethanhicks6103]

So glad you put this whole story together

[@laughingmask3118]

The fact that people like this stalker exist in real life fills me with a rage I can't describe. This was masterfully written to invoke such emotions.

[@sammie9639]

Every so often I come back to these longer stories and every time I'm surprised by how good these things are written and narrated because WOW

[@baha17222]

Daddy is filled with determination

[@bobcabbit6343]

I see what you did there >.>

[@RedWolf777SG]

Unfortunately the Child Stalker is equally filled with determination and fuel on corrupted hopes and dreams to boot.

[@Richie4Z]

this needs to become a movie asap

[@nickbotic]

We're working on it! I'm currently working on the script, and we have a financier, just looking for a filmmaker as passionate about the story as both myself and the manager I'm working with are!

[@moonscript4675]

What state was it? Was it Iowa? People need to get their entertainment somewhere in that desolate wasteland.

[@josephbernardthesecond4974]

SlingJellyStickyGlue hey... ya your right

[@IntelligentlyStupid]

SlingJellyStickyGlue Colorado, you can find the story on their news station.

[@dehydratedculture9126]

Is Iowa in the mid west?

[@anniedetroit7525]

@@dehydratedculture9126 yes.

[@joshuacruz6702]

Wasn’t it in Connecticut

[@saranorris1122]

“i dOnT waNt tO hUrT mY frIenDs” “ i w i l l s k i n h e r l i k e a d e e r” bIT- igghhT thEN maN 🤦‍♀️

[@HairyScrambler]

"It wasn't like the movies." *shoots off a lock*

[@dannylamb456]

aaaaand that's why you double tap.

[@psyjinx]

I'm replying to a 5 month old comment, but holy shit this gave me a good laugh

[@marcelogimenez4749]

@@psyjinx and here I'm replying to a year old replay to a two years old comment. Curious isn't it?

[@Gloonious]

@Marcelo Giménez and here i am responding to a 2 month old comment that it responding to a 1 1/2 year comment responding to a 2 year comment lol beat that

[@Kuuumiikoo]

Isaiah Davis 🤠

[@juliabennett7843]

Gloonious - here i am replying to a 2 month old comment that’s replying to a 5 month old comment that’s replying to a 2 year old reply on a 2 year old comment.

[@gellartwigglewallop6228]

David FUCKING King

[@ethans3387]

Lel

[@poppywelsh3966]

Dead David fucking king

[@angelsandoval4848]

Gellert WiggleWallop david fUcKinG king

[@nesthe460]

Gellart Wigglewallop ayyyy

[@omnikingkadence]

DAVID. FUCKING. KING.

[@judas_christ01]

I find it amusing how easily one can hear when you smile while you narrate.

[@rucealexander2848]

Person breaks into the house, steals someones dog and gives it to him, kills his dog and writes messages in blood. Main character still doesnt tell the family

[@rucealexander2848]

He does literally nothing. This character is easiest person to stalk. Dont even hire a private eye. Smh

[@rucealexander2848]

And he TOUCHES THE PRESENT?! Call the cops then, it could be a bomb for all he knows!

[@rucealexander2848]

He sees the man and has a gun, but he doesnt shoot him???

[@themysteriousface7633]

Stalker: “Now you’ve really made me mad.” The Fathers indomitable human spirit:

[@Knucklehead5757]

The scariest part is we're he orders a Pepsi instead of Dr.Pepper or coke, I gasped and covers my eyes at that part

[@starvrii]

coke is ass dr.pepper and pepsi are the only acceptional options

[@noahdouglas369]

Jesus that's horrifying

[@nicegoatdoctor8224]

*where

[@buttered_wheel7382]

If I ever order pepsi it's a sign I'm in danger. Call me crazy but my friends know I only drink coke or Dr.pepper if I don't drink water.

[@astrological9997]

This sounded really good at first but then it got real fucked up 0 to 100 real quick

[@alexburton1483]

Ablerta Huntz I know. Escalated real fuckin fast. 😂

[@kari7403]

Huh. It doesnt seem to really pick up until close to 20 mins. Like about 18 mins in.

[@dr.health1688]

RY_of The_fallen11247. I would love to see another version of this where nothing bad happened. Just some stalker doing a bunch of good things for them. The creepy part is not knowing when it’ll turn dark. So you’re left wondering when something will happen till the end.

[@deecomposerr]

i hate this protag so fucking much. Gotta lie to your wife about a growing danger and force her to live in ignorance in order to be an alpha male, no way that could backfire.

[@jarrinroot4061]

Apart from the ending this story is really well done. Does make you wonder though why Katie specifically, was The stalkers daughter born specifically to die? How did the stalker acquire a German Shepherd exactly? It's just so terrifyingly mysteriously.

[@herpderp6874]

I loooooooooove stalker stories! Love 'em. Can't get enough of 'em.

[@brendencline6583]

Herp Derp have you read penpal? if not its a good one imo

[@kokichiowo6599]

Ugh same

[@Bedhead_Brodi]

@@brendencline6583 Read it. Fucking chilling. Makes me look over my shoulder every time.

[@notmyssstique9221]

“I was the protector of this family” he says as he increasingly keeps putting his family in harms way 🙄

[@willsil3097]

man this one had me shaking with anger and sometimes fear. this was one of the only creepy pastas out there that truly scared me due to the fact that besides the ending, this could happen to anyone. scary stuff.

[@vinsio1712]

"The man who told us was the man who did it." He self reported

[@gyrips4284]

amogus

[@jakeberry9532]

And it worked too man

[@loxyloafcake5184]

"There's a strange man stalking me an my family. Better make sure my family never knows about this guy that clearly wants to kill us all." Like, damn, you basically did half the cover up for the guy.

[@KingGigahertz]

The writing in this story is top-notch and so is the narration! The entire thing with the small town my god it's terrifying. It sounds so real... Like this really happened it's so well written. The bombshell AT THE END holy crap man.

[@sabrinafakkeldy1]

eeeek we need the next part this is getting intense. i suggest you guys also check out "i dared me best friend to ruin my life"

[@cayleece7890]

David. Fucking. King.

[@Downinbama1]

Yes David fucking king the part where they had an auto accident and hit a tree while in back seat handcuffed really set my anxiety level off the charts

[@cayleece7890]

@@Downinbama1 hey don't give it away to anyone reading lol 😆

[@glossyplane542]

The Rosco part made me feel very ill and very very depressed

[@FoundVegas.]

I cried at the Rosco part. I love animals way way way too much.

[@nicegoatdoctor8224]

Wow. A needlessly brutal description of a dead dog made you upset? You don’t say!?

[@miraculousmememaker2986]

The sick man who killed dogo Rosco deserves the deaths

[@Bli757]

29:04 that just makes me picture The Game Grumps imitating Palpatine saying "DO IT!"🤣🤣🤣

[@dog-gone-it5944]

I swear I was about 30 minutes in and I was thinking the father had a split personality and was doing this. The fact that everytime he went outside to not see anybody or went to check cameras that just happened to not work was why i thought this was suspicious. I was pleasantly surprised. Good story!

[@therejects1424]

Starting from North Carolina going to the _East_ coast? How the hell does that work? North Carolina *is* on the East coast.

[@autumnfreeman3201]

I cought it too lole wHaT!!!!! O_o

[@Caleb1874ya]

Wormhole apparently

[@milkpup9201]

The went to the East-er coast

[@murkyhydra6351]

They probably meant North California

[@serviceroadsss]

shut up you fat dumbass bitch

[@lakillu4927]

Don't tease me like that thought that this was like a sequel or soMETHING,, PLEASE

[@Hollobaby1231]

Jayquix i said whatttttttttt....damn lol

[@CircusCuties]

SAME.

[@giannap.9798]

ME TOO I WAS SO UPSET

[@toddhoward789]

me 2 still intense though

[@quartzboy5069]

I hope for a part 2 for this story also, please

[@Dark4156k]

Guy should've gotten a security system and some cameras as soon as the problem started.

[@thelastofthecoychicas4701]

WHOA, that was INTENSE! What a ride...enough to drive a person mad! Great story, Bravo.

[@HaywoodJablomii]

this was george floyd’s favorite creepypasta. we were friends 6 years ago before he got into drugs. he was a good guy and i miss him.

[@Kaybug150]

For some reason, this story kind of reminds me of "Penpal".

[@cristianajewel969]

Kailah Butler saaame

[@yeahyeahyeah1762]

Kailah Butler SAME

[@bobcabbit6343]

Similar but not equal to. If I'm being honest penal couldn't hold my attention, and this one has a much better ending.

[@Tiberius_Productions]

Penpal is better than this in my honest opinion. This story is going for more shock value, especially the overly climactic ending. Penpal is more subtle and that makes it more creepy and realistic.

[@Bradleybus]

Saame

[@CezaMVO]

wow, simply, wow. This is incredible

[@toebeans31]

You know no matter hiw many times I listen to this one? I wish we could get a part 2, like years later with Katie dealing with the aftermath of what all had happened. That would be interesting

[@Peanut778]

"I didn't get into a long drawn out fight or something. That kind of thing doesn't happen in real life." *Proceeds to shoot open a lock*

[@snipingdemonftw2641]

Lol "my grass was freshly cut" BOI IF MY GRASS EVER GET MOWED I WOULD BE DAMN RIGHT HAPPY I WOULD NEVER BE AFRAID lol my lawn is very huge so thank u mister stalker man

[@lizbmusic11]

Excellent story! Guess I'd better get back to work now. Or just sneakily listen to another one. Thank god for ear buds lol. Love your work.

[@yushika5958]

Damn i would have flew to another country

[@anniedetroit7525]

I'd"ve also changed my name.

[@juliabennett7843]

yeah, why didn’t he?

[@misdafireinfexus5828]

Damn

[@RedWolf777SG]

That wouldn't stop the child stalker. If he was determined to stalked this family for four whole years than moving to another would've been an inconvenience for the bastard.

[@iEnderJaysonTDA]

We got a VCR about a year back for $3 too! We watched like 3 hours worth of my parent's high school and college tapes.

[@JakubWojciechowski933]

That was GOOD! Like, seriously good, even better then many books and I'm super impressed by how great this story is! God, I hope I'll be able to write stories of this calibre!

[@karaswanson6730]

This is the 3rd time I've listened to this. I absolutely love it. I LOVE your villain voice in this one. Not to mention how you voiced him talking to the dad when he was kidnapped.... Repeating words, simple..simple..simple. Was that it? So absolutely creepy. This is one of my top fives of your stories. Poor little girls, how traumatizing. Reminds me of so many different scary movies I have seen put together into a new story. Great job to you and the writer. Love it. Xoxoxo

[@Akiihito]

DAMN IT CREEP I thought this was the "I dared my best friend to ruin my life" part 6 please upload it Thursday

[@ethanharris3145]

Puppetplays be busta did the whole series on his channel

[@youpissflap]

Puppetplays but does he have a good voice to read it though..?

[@ZorGofaded]

Sirstyx already happend expect the entire thing in one and the story’s fake so

[@jimboismydog4030]

@@youpissflap be busta is one of the only youtube cp narrators that is anywhere near as good as mcp. 😉

[@itskatastrophe]

When you hear a piano version of one of your fav creepy songs in the background :0

[@sarashakeri6561]

His reasoning for keeping everything a secret from his wife (at the very least) is absolutely ridiculous. Guess they shouldn’t be given a heads up in order to help keep themselves safe. At least get another dog to help keep watch! 🤦🏻‍♀️

[@PB-N-Jenny]

Yeah if anything that's the one thing I'd change if I was the writer, the kids? Whatever, best not scare them. Your own significant other? Better tell them, she had every right to be mad he hid it from her

[@That_Weird_Choir_Kid]

wow these videos give me chills! the "dared my best friend to ruin my life" was amazing

[@amyhicks5241]

That was awesome. It kept me on the edge of my seat. Your voice is amazing. Thank you for the channel. Love it.

[@rioistrash]

This has been and allways will be my favourite creepypasta ever!

[@jeehawave7710]

I know Chris Chan's a creepy guy, but I never thought someone would make him the antagonist of a creepypasta.

[@jaylush8566]

I’m dying lol

[@bryanstars7784]

😳

[@kanna-san.]

CHRIS ESCAPED JAIL?!?!?!

[@Alex_The_Barbearian]

HEYOOOOOOO!

[@guteral495]

I'm only 19:43 in, roscoe just bit the dust, this woman is gonna blame him for everything simply cause he is hiding it from her, quit trying to convince the world your fkn superman, im a former Operator and this shit where all men wanna be perceived as being tough and without emotion is bullshit. You know in your own heart how physically and emotionally tough you are. You literally cannot protect anyone from the world.

[@kiralonely]

This. Also, your language isn't any bad, it's expected in the situation of the stupidity of the main guy. Regardless of intention, all he's doing is giving the stalker the advantage of surprise and guard's being down, ruining his own relationship, and showing his wife he doesn't trust her when she does eventually find out. It's, there's no good side to the situation, and it's one that people need to realize is very stupid. It's one of those things where you shouldn't have to prove your own toughness or masculinity or any of that, nor is it the time.

[@guteral495]

I agree, I also can agree with the fact that , a person never truly knows love till they have a child. Knowing how I feel as a father I cannot imagine a mother being any kinda forgiving if a man knowing withheld the fact that her child was in danger ,,,,, of anything.

[@Vlad-CT-]

This is the best video and story ever, I never expected that the whole town would be in on it

[@BillStevenson1976]

This was one hell of a story, I usually don’t listen to anything longer than 30 minutes but this kept me captivated! Great job!

[@ditzydoo04]

Truth be told, I like the fact that the stalker likes the daughter’s art so much. As an artist myself, I love when people comment positively about my skills

[@MrEpicMouse]

hey mrcreepypasta :). I like the long onces. I was curious tho, the best friend tried to ruin my life series has a part 2(i know its 1 to 8 ) but its a sequel and can't find a narration. Are you planning to do it after the 1st 8 are over? Please consider. And keep up the good work :)

[@TheLudlowReaper]

MrEpicMouse I would be surprised. He sometimes has trouble even finishing the narrations he's started. The Darklings, Confessions of a Deep Sea Diver, and The Twin Paradox to name some of my favorites. I don't know if he loses interest, stops caring, gets too busy, or genuinely forgets, but it does get frustrating.

[@MsSpidey2]

The Creepy Cast There was another part to Confessions of a Deep Sea Diver?

[@leoanything7285]

Can you share the link I want to read it

[@callgrl]

ones*

[@NeiasaurusCreations]

@@TheLudlowReaper Well the problem is when you make a video on a piece like this, and the author isn't done, or sees the success and adds to it, it becomes really hard to constantly keep it updated. And then to continue with sequels and updates would take away the ability to draw attention to different stories. So perhaps these should be taken more as a 'up to this point complete' narration, and then any updates or sequels you'll have to watch the actual author for. Spreading the attention so to speak.

[@Crispymaster1776]

This guy is pissing me off with all the secrets from his wife , you are stronger as a team

[@RTSChicago]

Great job- really terrific narration. I commute to MCP every day & it is always a (scary) delight. Keep up the good work!

[@MrV1r00zz]

this might be one of the best once i have heard for years had me at the edge of the seat and your voice and voice acting fits it so well good job m8!!

[@pablothekidd279]

One of the best creepypastas I've heard

[@quizrift5034]

I don’t get scared or disturbed easily but I had genuine goosebumps listening this

[@user-mm8zs5yn2x]

This would make a good film

[@networktoriqhill3241]

Loved this one. The dad was a badass and he did what he was supposed to

[@cloverchan1008]

crazy that 4 years can be shortened down to 1:23:15 and it doesn't even feel that long

[@HeR3tOSt4Y]

Well, I know what I'm doing tonight!

[@doiu92]

Pizza me too

[@Happy-TeeF]

What are you doing?

[@Joseph-di9ht]

Me too

[@fisher5892]

ⱧƎⱤE ϮØ SȾAY

[@JokerChany]

Are you doing this? Here's what you do in this situation ladies and gentlemen 1st tell your family 2nd have security cameras installed all around the house 3rd get a security system installed and tell your family the code in a small room that is checked for cameras and or listening devices 4th have large deadbolts installed that can only be locked from the inside and can't be unlocked from the outside or have it be a normal deadlock that can be unlocked from the outside but it requires a separate key from your normal house key 5th give everyone in your family guns and tell them to shoot anyone that is not in the family ie brother or father or mother keep the guys under your pillow 6th have everyone in your family armed with a hidden places in a reachable spot. What do I mean by reachable I mean if you are in bed be choked to death you are able to grab your knife and stab the attacker that's what I mean by reachable 7th this only applies for kids if the stalker tries to lure the kids away for kidnapping while they are in bed play along until he is far away from your bed enough that you can safely pull a gun out and shoot. There you are for your survive a guy who can break into your house with ease this guide gives you 4 layers of protection against attackers. P. S when you tell your family about the guns do it in a room that was checked for cams and listening devices that is also small. You're welcome future family that needs to protect themselves

[@edwinortiz3287]

i thought this was gonna be 5/4 😭😭 this was such a good creepypastsa make a part 5 please

[@anxxony8460]

Edwin Ortiz this is the whole thing it's on reddit there's no more

[@alexryan1027]

there are 8 parts im pretty sure

[@anxxony8460]

alexryan1027 there's like seven but mr creepypasta mashed some of them together to make the videos longer so he doesn't have to do a crap ton of videos if you want you can read it just search it

[@kxrmaxszn954]

anxxony where on reddit can i find these kind of stories?

[@thotpockets690]

This is when you move as far away from the U.S as possible.

[@staying_silent]

Hooray for being (gay and) European!

[@Phevos_Athena]

I'm European

[@yeehaw289]

@@staying_silent is this a legally blonde reference

[@Tatusiek_1]

@@staying_silent It’s just a story lmao

[@ohitkat]

i listened to this when it was first uploaded and loved it. im now listening to it again and im still loving it. i cant even imagine how much time went into writing it. great job as usual on the narration :)

[@pleasedontknowmeirl]

bro this narration is the BEST one i have ever heard for this story!!!

[@Wallbeige]

those damn ads ruin the moment. place them somewhere calm instead. I know you have them where they are for reasons. but they ruin​ the moment. Everytime

[@jackbelden3851]

Mooie124 AND THEN HE GRABBED MY THROAT AND THEN *HI BILLY MAYS HERE WITH A NEW REVOLUTIONARY PRODUCT OXY CLEAN!*

[@Tabirus1661]

Jack Belden Lmao

[@aliceboerner924]

I got an ad about adopting dogs right after rosco had gotten killed

[@michaellee3600]

I am spoiled with youtube red no ads ever

[@CelesteTheeDragonLady]

@@michaellee3600 same. Same. Same. I will pay this subscription before I pay for netflix.

[@goopybonez]

The footage in this video makes me sad, I miss driving out west...

[@brandino679]

Is there anyway to submit a creepy pasta story I wanna make I wanna name it “ If You Hear the Door Fidget at Night Don’t Open it.”

[@TVEDJS14999]

Brandino 679 too long..maybe..don’t open the fidgeting door?

[@noahdouglas369]

I wanna read it!!!!

[@michaelshea4862]

Dude I have to drive 30min to an hour to get to wrk and it used to be torture till I found ur channel. Now I’ll just play ur narrations over my speakers and be completely content! So thanks man!

[@michaelshea4862]

Disclaimer: I don’t look at my phone I just listen like it’s an audio book

[@giniwalters8401]

Absolutely Awesome!!! Kudos to the author!!! Kudos to the narrator!!!

[@tiredyetsoft]

I wanna see this as a movie so much

[@blakestreetips7470]

Sam Johnson i agree

[@isaacspaseski5350]

Do you really trust Hollywood with this

[@Alex_The_Barbearian]

​@@isaacspaseski5350independent film makers.