English Language Paper 1, GCSE 2024: Grade 9 For Question 5!

[@myst7038]

This guy is carrying all of our GCSE’s not going to lie 😂

[@KamayalAli-sb6wc]

this guy is not carrying my RS

[@onlyfuty9826]

Like if ur here the night before the exam 😂😂😂.

[@sneaky8219]

fr I'm sweating rn haven't revised lang for like 3 months 💀

[@onlyfuty9826]

@@sneaky8219 inni

[@papapadododo]

​@sneaky8219 what grade u got In last mock?

[@mr0ne697]

@@papapadododo i got 7

[@mr0ne697]

@@papapadododo looking for higher what u get?

[@theai_1]

The number 1 tip from my teachers is that if you're doing story, write about the most mundane of settings - the most ordinary of occurances. A good example was that one time a student who got grade 9, top marks, simply wrote about getting milk from the fridge in the morning. Write a lot about a little

[@EliteEGG101]

a student got grade 9 by writing about a person sitting down on a bench and what the person saw

[@AIRZ.1]

fair enough to mr everything english,went from teaching macbeth in scotland to teaching students all around the country.

[@mrswifteurope1442]

now i see why aqa tell schools to avoid this man hes an absolute goat

[@AliAbbasi-nn4on]

Do they actually do that??

[@mrswifteurope1442]

@@AliAbbasi-nn4on yh my teachers said avoid him but he’s very good

[@AliAbbasi-nn4on]

@@mrswifteurope1442 was there any reason why they said that.

[@mrswifteurope1442]

@@AliAbbasi-nn4onno clue

[@ejpilot3725]

Good luck to you all doing your exams!

[@gurleensingh835]

Thank you Mr everything english, I came here 4 yrs ago from Italy , I really struggled with english, but with your videos i improved a lot I will be forever grateful to you . YR 11 good luck to everyone tomorrow hopefully we all pass

[@malaikajawad-wn7kr]

babe, you atleast had 4 years, i started school here 2 months ago and he helps alot , best of luck for tom

[@gurleensingh835]

@@malaikajawad-wn7kr you too bro

[@cherryslushieonly6382]

How ur exam went?

[@JRAZA-g9l]

Night before exam?? Like this if u are in this situation

[@rnimations3181]

Got my mocks 2maro morning 😭🙏💔

[@josephvarghese327]

Dhar Mann doesn't change lives... he does

[@slowedtoperfectionsongs]

“dont want no cuzzies dont want no bros” LMFAO 😂

[@yukimodz9127]

It’s not that funny

[@dermanater]

@@yukimodz9127 shut up your life is without whimsy

[@itzmo6516]

@@yukimodz9127 its funny when ur revising shit like english, learn perspective

[@mr0ne697]

@@yukimodz9127 im seeing bro on every video fam stop being negative gettin mad in chat wont help noone. Hope u do well.

[@silentaimer]

@@mr0ne697 hes failing

[@B07549]

6:37 "Thank you guys my maths is amazing"😅😅😅 it was quite funny for me😂

[@ukstudent1]

True

[@rpg6695]

who else is here the night before the exam!😭

[@Daily_Motivation4U_]

Me I’m finished😂😂😂

[@itzalif4658]

🙌

[@Nifsper]

Literally watching this right now I'm predicted a 5 😭

[@abbie3336]

Meee

[@Chloe-yl4hq]

morning before LOL🤣🤣🤣

[@i2576]

Doing this story in 45 min is mad

[@blueIceblues]

Sir I thought you were wearing your Eid clothes or something in the thumbnail 💀

[@Lets_get_to_1K_subs]

Sameee!

[@lunalingo4461]

my ignorant ass was abt to comment that ur stupid for saying its eid now 🤦‍♂ how to get humbled 101

[@Furyios_Cereal]

After watching all of paper 1 I went from grade 3 to 7 much appreciated

[@girlwithpearls7624]

Tip : incase you want to get through the vid quicker put it on 1.5x

[@garethbale2927]

That’s what I did 😂

[@saheer1211]

never fails to make me laugh ahahah he said "this student got a grade 9!, im joking guys they got a -5" lloooooooooooollll

[@Clie_xx]

Thank you so much..i had my English literature mocks on Tuesday and it went really well after studying 3 of your videos on macbeth and Christmas carol and inspector calls

[@tahirah.chris.girl2000]

who's here morning of the exam

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😢😂😂😂

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Yep!

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Me 😂😂😂2024

[@rayyanmohammed]

meeee

[@Jijis_delivery_service]

I’m cooked 😂😂😂

[@syncx3409]

15:59 my dumbahh thinking about malevolent shrine in jjk

[@VadidLawrence]

was thinking malevolent kitchen ngl

[@kitcat653]

literally same i’m so cooked

[@r4ven160]

I was thinking that too lol

[@Fac1L1s]

😂fr

[@takiee4071]

😭😭

[@nnadeem8562]

You are awesome, sir. i hope i pass my gcse language

[@farhanyaqoob9507]

Inshalah we all pass 🎉🎉

[@reoqq3842]

@@farhanyaqoob9507Inshallah

[@Brandinho_18]

GL for everyone tomorrow

[@j.jeongguk]

BRO I SAT PAPER 1 LANG TODAY AND LITERALLY TYSM YOU SINGLE-HANDEDLY HELPED ME STRUCTURE MY POINTS AND MANAGE MY TIME CORRECTLY

[@kim-Kardashian1OFFICAL]

I GOT GRADE 9 GCSE EXAM BECOUSE OF YOU THANKS 🤗

[@Undo_udon]

I want grade 9 too❤

[@Xavier-gr7hz]

Q1-4 is cooking me but Q5, I am cooking it

[@NedaBigdeli-z2y]

Your videos were so helpful today. God bless you.

[@zackislost1813]

It's the morning of bro, good luck all of you😨 Edit: how'd everyone's exams go??

[@JoannaM007]

Language Paper 1 was AMAZING, I had so much fun😁😁😁

[@jxyda5579]

You are a master of English, I salute sir 👍🏻

[@SifatIslam-yg1mo]

sir your the best no other words

[@itsmebigbert]

HEY GUYS! If anyone's up for it, here's a practice Q5 I did for you guys to mark. Marking always helps you improve! :) The rickety frames of the old house looked as though they were about to fall. There was not a single plank of wood on that unimpressive roof without some type of damage. Tapping my wet boots on the dry concrete path, I made my way towards the shed. The lacklustre appearance of the shed contrasted with the sprawling fields in every direction. The lackadaisical lump of dirt, directly next to the house, lay carelessly as the gentle wind breathed through it. The rain had stopped for the last few days allowing the sparse sunshine to illuminate the prairie. Every flower, which was once gulping for breath under the merciless onslaughts of constant rain, had now blossomed. The mountains were as colossal as ever, like snow-capped guardians watching over the peaceful prairie. Every object in view seemed at harmony - except the house. The wooden structure, which showed signs of once being an ornate and well-decorated building, looked empty. It seemed as if the previous owners had taken away every item alongside the memories and moments shared inside it; leaving it barren. Frighteningly, the two large windows on each end coupled with the wide, steel door in the centre made the house seem like an indignant creature. A creature who had been abandoned and forgotten. The long forgotten house was covered in years and years of 'art' left by reckless teenagers but the steel door looked impeccable (as if it had just been installed). Carefully prising the door open, I stepped in. After taking some seconds to register my surroundings, I began walking to the centre of the room like a moth to the flame. The insipid features of the empty room contrasted heavily with the masterpiece lying directly in the centre. It was a piece of art like no other. Its ornate framing glinted in the few rays of light which shone upon it. The vibrancy of the paint, the detail of the shapes and the flawless composition left me absolutely dumbfounded. Carefully, I used the tips of my fingers to feel the frame which was engrained with floral patterns and encrusted with what seemed to be gold. It was gold. Possibly the purest gold I had ever seen. This gold was not just on the frame but every little detail on the luscious painting was made with gold. I took five steps backwards and stared at the painting in awe. It was an angel, bright with the light of its candour, surrounded by a blissful darkness. It truly was a masterpiece.

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[@itsmebigbert]

@@spookah_hhhh that’s calm bro 👊

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well done bro inshallah u do good tomorrow

[@itsmebigbert]

@@user-yx7le2pm7j inshallah bro

[@leylaamess5951]

I read it and it's fantastic!! Your style of writing is so beautiful Like snow capped guardians!! Aaaaa what a beautiful simile I wish I could think of things like that Also the paragraph and sentence length variation is ON POINT!! Well doneeee I think you will be COMPPLLLLEEEEtely fine 🎉❤

[@Lee-fp4oq]

Like if you bought to pull an all nighter💀💀💀

[@quackss6384]

That will just make you sleepy

[@anodhyalankathilaka1696]

wait what, its not creative writing, my exam is tmrw💀💀💀

[@saheer1211]

"if your dog or if your pet tells you that this is a creative writing question, guys its not"bahahahha this guys such a W

[@Yaiena1111]

It’s tomorrow guys good luck 😢

[@idk-ud6kl]

Cramming with one hour till exam, im so cooked😭😭

[@wiktorlis6380]

Same

[@movie_clips346]

40 mins for me 😢

[@mrxsz26]

SAME😭

[@cherryslushieonly6382]

How did it go?

[@idk-ud6kl]

@@cherryslushieonly6382 eh it was alright ig, question 5 defo carried me😭😭, hby

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genuinely saved my English gcses

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Mr Everything English's mathematics is amazing ➕➕➕

[@Sf_femz]

Who is watching this on the exam day?

[@ollieb6998]

were finished

[@vent5125]

We're not finished

[@tanwirnory1468]

Me rn 😭

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@@tanwirnory1468 fr

[@h4mm4d69]

Me😂😂

[@SamuelSCA2772]

Thank you!

[@ProdByPalmarius]

Got a grade 7, big thanks to your channel!

[@idk-ud6kl]

you know how he planned it with the graph, did you plan it in the exam paper or did you memorise?

[@rajaaneeq6248]

What about if your doing a description of the picture? Is it the same?

[@sketion5188]

its better if you dont write about the picture because it might limit your ideas. instead use it for inspiration for the actual question as the picture is usually linked to the question anyway.

[@rxf5920]

@@sketion5188imma just merge them

[@steppingstones3114]

@@sketion5188 tbf can't you just make up random things in the picture cause that's what my teachers tell me, and focus it?

[@hightech2165]

@@steppingstones3114yh you dont need to be limited by the picture you can imagine what goes around the picture

[@motionprimeaep]

​@steppingstones3114 you can. If the picture is just a forest for example, later after describing the forest all u can, you can say "bewildered, he layed eyes upon a great piece of architecture and fortitude, as the serenity of the tree house, left suspended in the air, stood proud, with immaculate stature." And then keep describing

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Bro is saving lives differently

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Like if ur here the morning of the exam 😂😂

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this guy is the only reason i’m passing english because my teacher cannot teach to save her life 😭😭

[@Thrive_Trail899]

That plan for question 5 i soooo helpful! thank you

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THANK YOU!!

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Yes sir, English Language paper1 done 🎉

[@samiii1880]

what r u tapped we aint done it yet

[@rofwoozer]

What are you on

[@aimenali7439]

What was it abt

[@Mary-MagdalineAyeebo]

Hi, just wanted to ask about the pre-planning, can you pre-plan it on the answer sheet in the exams or you need to plan it in your studies before the exams??? Thanks

[@deadm4n881]

I mean you can't pre plan the answer before the exams because you don't know what image or what the question will be but I'd definitely pre plan if I am going to do the image or the question and then stick to it no matter what

[@deadm4n881]

Or there is a video of pre planning P1 Q5 on this channel, I'm also about to watch it so u can watch it aswell

[@micha1704]

Wow this was sooo useful thank you soo much

[@MitaD-kn8ib]

Thank you mr everything l hope am gonna pass my exam

[@raghadhilo6669]

Thank you

[@MitaD-kn8ib]

Good luck everyone for today exam english language paper 1 🎉

[@Hajira_xx]

east and west mr everything is the best

[@the1bredman]

Morning before exam :)

[@hargabyaYohannes-zw3ij]

nice im witing my story about going to a toilet, thats gonna get me a 9 watch and see

[@Boniface-db5io]

good luck on that

[@AliAdeel777]

Okay………tell me how it goes.

[@ukstudent1]

I'll keep my eyes peeled for your message.

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it better be an explosive story

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😂😂

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We needed this!

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thank you it's so helpful👍

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GERAFF HAS ME CACKLING

[@SanamSxz_]

Like if ur here in the morning before the exam 😂

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2 hours left!!

[@frederickaa]

Sir you are honestly the best

[@zilafn330]

without bro idk what id be doing helped me a lot it lit

[@football_united8789]

hello sir i just wanted to ask you if you would recommend the photocard description or the story

[@sohlemm]

depends on if on the day the image is more appealing to you but generally go with the narrative/story one since it’s easier to do your own ideas and you can apply the paragraph plans to whatever question they give for the narrative one

[@ReggaeShark-rd7vf]

hoping for a grade 5 minimum to get into the english language course, wish me luck

[@lite_playz7168]

im begging for a 5 lol, best of luck

[@footballeditzz569]

I have a question what’s easier to do write about or describe the image or write about a story

[@astral284]

describe image only do story if the image is really bad and u dont know what to say for it

[@LaticsBase]

How are you meant to pre plan it if you have to write about certain thing in the exam. You can’t just write about anything

[@gurleensingh835]

You can add staff like the netflix and kill pre planned story . Last yr it as encounter with an animal you could say she saw a rat making all of that noise , something supernatural could be that she heard those noise but there is no one in the house Hope it helped

[@Isha-ux9lc]

sir if i write a story VERY similar to the example one, is that plagiarism? because i really want to write one about waiting for something or someone.

[@hypnoonval2440]

have you not watched the video hes repeated 10 times its not plagiarism

[@christyho4571]

Mr Everyday English, I sat in the Nov 2024 exam for AQA Eng Lang this week. I am a big fan of your KZbin videos and they were all very brilliantly helpful. For Paper 1, Q5 - I adopted your plot of "Prison Breaks" and learnt my story by heart and made a good story out of it. When I opened the exam paper in Q5, there was the option of a picture with a car in the middle of nowhere under the moonlight. And the other option was "Describe a forest" not even write a story about a forest. So I panic and wrote a narrative story about starting with my protoganist driving in the car to her bestfriends wedding and got caught by the police of dangerously speeding etc. I am now panicking if I didn't write a description instead. Will I fail or will I have very low marks from it? Can I write a narrative story stems from the picture or has it to be descritive. I was paniking and now really worried.

[@deadm4n881]

As long as you had good vocabulary, language devices, punctuations and a good structure of writing the paragraphs then I think you'll be fine. It's not like your going to get less marks because you did the image instead of describing a forest.

[@apexking8610]

I planned the first story the netflix kill and what if the story is on you being in a street or in the beach you see soemthing in the water how do you link them?

[@Caseohclips00]

For the street u could say that u go out into the street at the end of the story

[@Caseohclips00]

And also for the beach u could say that u live near the beach at the end and u go out and there was something on the beach

[@SoobiniesDimples]

Don’t know how I ended up in top set but watching this to stay .😅

[@Shimeez]

Thank you. I also struggle coming up with an idea for a simile for some reason

[@omaratbouli8066]

Thank u thank u thank u ,

[@mariai7014]

mocks today !!

[@um4lik398]

Do you do the story in third person or first person?

[@aspin1202]

how do i adapt my story to fit the question

[@AdamMonkey-so3yh]

whos here at 1:45am?

[@ateequechowdhury9156]

What about plan for description ? Or is this both for description and story ??

[@indeliblevictory]

sir you are so funny you make me love english

[@XLEPFNR]

im acc so cooked

[@feefahguyy]

Nah just write

[@shlassassin3178]

absolute legend

[@hossshy]

good luck hsnr

[@rabailriaz9001]

One second so the story they tell us in the exam don’t we have to write related to the picture. My whole life was a lie. Please someone clear me with this doubt please

[@aibah_]

no, only the description has to be related to the image

[@ka3470]

You can chose the picture or the description at the bottom usually they link

[@nudratanees5851]

Mr everything can I use this in picture for gcse equivalency exam????????

[@insidious8054]

Sorry but how do u pre plan question 5? Like if it just with the plan u showed or do people have there on storys and just adjust it to what the question is asking

[@Lovebreakfastt]

Second

[@RudZ_qlf]

Gl yall

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Im here an hour before exams

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yo i swr this is gonna come up tmrw????

[@--SOLO--]

11:38 , 16:34 (my own timestamps)

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This guy is amazing

[@hey.georgia]

10:09 lmaooo

[@Rap1996-o7i]

Thank you sir please I have question about content is it true should we write about 700 words in content?

[@emroyle2353]

Who’s here at 07:50 am

[@myoomyoo1941]

I’m here at 8:30

[@idk-hb6eu]

I will use this plot

[@hokeungpoon7164]

How to answer the question of picture ?

[@baldkenobi8727]

This is the one about photo

[@tommycookings7450]

Please post videos for paper 2 🙏

[@Teereezy]

This guy has saved my English exams 🎉🎉🎉🎉

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How was the first paper

[@itsMudz]

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