Macbeth: One FULL Essay Plan Which Fits EVERY GCSE Question

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Icl macbeth aint that deep but Jekyll and Hyde especially Lanyon

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Here are some interesting quotes!! Macbeth: "Fair is foul and foul is fair" - Inversion, saying we shouldnt trust appearances, a common theme in the play, Macbeth is also told to "Look like the innocent flower but be the serpent underneath it". Its almost as if he's been corrupted by the supernatural (link to context and writers intentions) 'Stars, hide your fired, let not light see my black and deep desires'- Macbeth aims to hide his intentions from god (the stars). He knows what he's intending to do is wrong, and hes worried that even thinking about doing it will not please God. Prehaps it creates the idea that Macbeth is doing this out of free will? His ambition here leads to his suffering, but it wasn't forced. He knows this is wrong yet he still does it. (Link to context/writers intentions) "Yet i do fear thy nature"- Lady macbeth does not think Macbeth is "man enough" to commit regicide (lol), it links to the idea that Lady macbeth is occasionally seen as masculine while sometimes Macbeth is shown as more feminine, for example when he is panicking after killing duncan ("Macbeth does murder sleep") while Lady macbeth is calmer ("A little water clears us of this deed"). Prehaps its shakespears way of telling us not to overstep our roles, as Macbeth and lady macbeth do not fit into the norms of the jacobean society. "Unsex me here"- Similar to the last one. LMB is asking dark spirits (link to supernatural and the witches) to strip her of her femininity, so she can help macbeth kill duncan and become king. "Is this a dagger i see before me"- Macbeth hesitates, this is one of the turning points in the play, IT IS THE LAST CHANCE FOR HIM TO TURN BACK, yet he thinks it is a calling (fate? As predicted by the witches?) "Macbeth does murder sleep"- Reflects macbeths Guilt, sleep is a symbol of peace, which macbeth purposefully disrupts after breaking the great chain of being. It reflects his mental state and marks the start of his downfall. "Tis' unnatural, even like the deed that's done"- Proves that the great chain of being has been disrupted, the actions of macbeth have seemingly broken nature and the order of things. Shakespeare does this to warn the audience not to commit any kind of treason or overstep their place/consumed by ambition as it will only lead to chaos. "A little water clears us of this deed"- Irony, opposes LMB later "Out damned spot! Out i say". She pushes away her guilt but is eventually consumed by it. Those are some key quotes for Macbeth. A Christmas Carol key quotes: "Scrooge was his [...] sole freind and soul mourner"- Establishes the nature of his business partner it shows how he lived his life, mostly alone, consumed by money and it is the same path scrooge walks. Links to later "Chains i forged in life". This is not the right path scrooge should walk, we see how marley ends up. "He carried his own low temperature [...] and didn't thaw it one degree at Christmas" - Establishes Scrooges cold and cynical nature, even at a very happy, joyous time he remains isolated and pushes others away from him. "As Solitary as an oyster"-A very interesting quote, as it shows how scrooge is isolated and introverted, but also shows how deep down he HAS something worth saving, this is the pearl you find in oysters. "Christmas has done me good and will do me good"- Fred is saying how Christmas has affected him, he is trying to show scrooge the light, only for him to ignore him, prehaps it DOES however awaken something in scrooge, as later we see that he finally notices marley, despite him apparently having visted many times before, but he is never seen. "If they would rather die, they'd better do it and decrease the surplus population"- Links to the Malthus theory, the idea thay we dont have enough supplies to supply a growing population. Scrooge (a microcosm of the upper classes) shows his belief of the poor of them being prehaps lazy and unproductive, despite them being the people who uphold society. This is a belief hold by many at the time. At the same time this quote is criticising the theory, as we do not trust scrooge, due to his negative and pessimistic nature, and is further disproved later (see later quote) "Fezziwig has spent but a few pounds"- Fezziwig is the boss Scrooge could've been, he doesnt spend much, only a few pounds, yet he brings joy to so many people. Fezziwig is shown here by the GOCP in order to show scrooge that he can be a boss that brings despair, or one that brings joy, he will loose little bit will gain much more.. "Another idol has displaced me [...] a golden one"- Scrooge is so afraid of poverty that he has become obsessed over wealth and is now consumed with greed. He has forgotten what really matters, his relationships with others, such as Bell in this situation. "Heaped up on the floor, to form a king of throne, were turkeys [...], sausages [...], puddings."- Disproves the malthus theory, there is evidently an excess of resources. "I see a vacant seat in a poor chimney corner"- Scrooge now understands something- the lower classes are people like bob cratchit, hard workers who do everything they can to stay alive, yet they are unable to afford basic healthcare for an innocent, kind tiny tim. The ghost of Christmas present also mocks him for this, referencing his earlier quote of the surplus population, scrooge now understands the value of life and the reality of the poor. "Am i the man who lay upon the bed"- Scrooge is horrified, he just watched many people mock, steal and disregard this dead individual, some people are even happy because of it, he realises then that if he doesnt change he will truly die alone, just like marley, none will remember him, none will care about him, and his life will have been for nothing, only resulting in the same suffering marley has. "He knew how to keep Christmas well"- He's changed, now he realised the error of his ways and he has now become a better person. Hope this helps, if you did anything else i wont be able to help you (sorry)

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This helped me a lot and made me have a better understanding of Macbeth and how he has been manipulated by the witches and the supernatural 🙌🏾🙌🏾

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paper 1 is before the break, no?

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paragraph 1: 00:47 paragraph 2: 5:40 paragraph 3: 10:09 paragraph 4: 15:25 good luck to anyone doing this exam on Monday hope these time stamps and quotes can help

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More analysis on the 4th quote: Verb 'unseamed' makes us to think of the tearing of clothing, the tailor seams clothes. They are very precise, one mistake abd the clothes are ruined. Macbeth is reversing this, hes unseaming a human body, making, makes his enemy suffer. Hoped this helped, inshAllah we all pass on monday

[@ALY-09]

Can we talk about how Macbeth is so skilled and experienced in battle, that he can carve and slay his enemies

[@akmalhussain5439]

@@ALY-09 Less of skill, more of power and overwhelming ease at which he does does it. also mention feminine connotations for context, Jacobean audience left seam-stressing and sewing to the women, making the action seem so easy, a woman could do it.

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[@KTGmf9wh]

thank you for this video, ive been watching you since year 10 mocks, now im about to sit this exam, whenever i dont watch your videos i struggle, lets hope this one last time, it gets me the best marks like it does whenever i watch you, thanks again

[@taphaz9488]

Thank you sir, on monday i'm going to "unseam the paper from the front to the back"

[@MrEverythingEnglish]

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[@Vanaolla]

I’ve let myself fall off… natural 9s with no revision now struggling worrying about passing, I’m going to try to revise now as biology foundation was a wake up call and was so embarrassing walking out the hall and evryone saying the paper was so easy, when I know the paper is easy and yet I also know I haven’t done as well. Better late than never I suppose. Thank you for the video

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The natural 9s guy doing foundation biology😂

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@@withoutname3922 lol uh and still not passing

[@ethereal41]

was like that except i'm in year 10. i'm literally gonna flop lit hopefully not but we'll see. (take lit in yr10 in my school)

[@chaeremika]

in order *act 1* : “unseamed from nave to chops” *act 1* : “instruments of darkness…” *act 2* : “heat oppressed brain” *act 4* : “something wicked this way comes”

[@kuzhy.]

im glad i took notes, else i would have forgotten everything by the end. wishing best of luck to everyone taking the exam tomorrow :))

[@JamezzGamez]

I can work really well with the Macbeth question now, luckily I’ve been given extra time for my real exams so I have less worries and also I can focus on my literacy techniques so I can get high marks.

[@ethereal41]

i didn't know schools allowed extra time/postponed exams for some... how?

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@@ethereal41 for people with reading difficulties and that

[@stagsophs9572]

@@ethereal41 a lot of people have extra time or use laptops for typing instead due to dyslexia and things like that, so could be something to do with that

[@ethereal41]

@@stagsophs9572 makes sense... I was told back in year 6 that if my handwriting did not improve I would have to use a laptop to do the exam. My handwriting, in fact, deteriorated, I can't even read it now. I'm scared. My exam is tomorrow.

[@stagsophs9572]

@@ethereal41 i recommend trying to slow down so that you take the time to make it a little clearer. because it doesn't matter about the quantity of your writing in english lit, it's the quality that's important!

[@hafsa5995]

Thank you so much sir, i used the heat oppressed brain anlysis as my first quote in the exam today and applied it to lady macbeth as u said and linked it to patriarchy, the question was amazing this year tbh so that also helped

[@G.a.b.b.a]

Icl this video is actually perfect. U provided 4 perfect quotes that u can relate to any character within the play and for any theme. Im gonna make sure to remember these 4 and thats macbeth sorted.

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[@MrEverythingEnglish]

Ameen, thank you

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The Macbeth question was beautiful but wth was A Christmas Carol 😭 caught me so off guard I didn’t realise it’s basically transformations

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2..5 hours before the exam this is coming in clutch

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[@kudasai7822]

Could you talk about how the witches calling Macbeth wicked is ironic because they are evil themselves

[@MrEverythingEnglish]

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Can you post one like this for jekkyl and Hyde?

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Hi sir, is there anyway you could possibly do one of these for English literature paper 2 for lord of the flies? I’m really stuck on what to say as there aren’t many resources online and your videos are so good

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What fo you mean by freud and id ? 2:19

[@AbAweis]

You know in cartoons where a character is deciding to make a choice i.e whether to steal something or not and they have the devil on one shoulder and an angel on the other? The devil is your psychological 'id' and the angel is referred to as your 'super-ego'. I hope this explanation makes sense.

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very helpful, thank you Mr everything English

[@MrEverythingEnglish]

You’re welcome

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thank you so much bro im so thankful as ive had just about the worst teachers you could ask for over the past 2 years and ive got no idea whats going on 😭 and you also make these videos so interesting and keeps you hooked keep doing what your doing🙏

[@varishakhan7328]

for the third quote can i say that the fact that the witches are called "instruments" and lady macbeth tells macbeth to be a 'serpent' links to the idea of a snake charmer and how the witches manipulative nature is shown as similar to how a snake charmer controls a snake as well as foreshadowing his deceitful nature?

[@RealAkiyama]

thank you so much i was legit stressing so much since i got a grade 3 in lit

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same acc praying i pass

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@@vyper3472 i hope it goes well for both of us, goodluck!

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@@vyper3472 how tf is your reply older than his comment

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I went from a 3 to a 4 down back to a 3 I’m so cooked

[@telks3486]

Dear Mr Everything English, please let me know if this suffices as a grade 9 AO1 point, before I then go on to analyse the quotes you have explained in the video. Keep up your hard work bossman. If I get a 8 or 9 in English Lit I will give you £100 through paypal or smth (not joking cos i got 6 in mocks) P.S this point can be adapted to any question (guilt, kingship, supernatural etc.) The witches' malevolence and duplicitousness catalyse Mabeth into committing regicide, and he is psychologically consumed by guilt as he recognises that his 'unvaulting ambition' (his hamartia), was inextricably linked with his desire to obtain the utmost power and control , causing him to lose any sense of moral conscience as he disregards the eternal, damning consequences of violating the divine right of kings, because Macbeth succumbs to the irresistible allure of supernatural powers.

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Got aired

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But good writing

[@nameinprogress1319]

isn't it vaulting ambition instead of unvaulting ambition

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@@nameinprogress1319 oh yh my bad

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[@Hyper_Bow]

A sinister block of bulding thrust forward its gable. best quote ever. Setting: Conotations of sinister (say what this effect does) Plosives used 'D' (created harsh tone ect) coupled with Sibilance creating omnious undertones ect the violent verb thrust shows (explain what it shows) Prepostion forward (showing how it affects people...) Impact on reader ect Link with context and the writers intention (ofc there is some more things u can add but this overall is a VERY nice little answer!)

[@deadm4n881]

Sir please upload last day revision or jekyll and hyde revision and romeo and juliet asap my exams on monday and i think most of the people has it in Monday aswell

[@compilationg5423]

he said romeo and juliet will release today within 1 hour idk about jekyll and hyde tho

[@POMBAT07]

could you please explain what the freud:id is I don't quiet understand the context

[@wilbofreeshan6340]

i want to know too its making me go insane

[@ITZRawand]

Look at his context video

[@M_G_Z_R]

Can we say it how Macbeth didn’t cut open him fully to the head foreshadowing he is protecting his crown?

[@boat-guy3176]

no thats just silly

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@@boat-guy3176 oh well just came in my mind

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@@boat-guy3176all of English lit is silly

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[@itzdhruv5207]

So basically I need to take 2 quotes from this 4 and find two quotes from the extract in exam and write 4 paras????? Please someone reply me quick

[@youwillneverknowwho9811]

Yes

[@pro_ploperz]

That is exactly what you need to do

[@pro_ploperz]

But it's fine if you do 3 in depth analysis paras

[@izzydapikachu]

sir thank you sm i managed to sneak in heat oppressed brain for my lady macbeth question because of you 💪

[@aaqilstech]

what about if they ask to show how Banquo and Macbeth's friendship changes as the play progresses?

[@BOBJeffrey-bq5ku]

1:21 what does Freud : Id mean??

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theres avideo on it

[@MindGames_y]

goodluck fellow crammers

[@firestorm4798]

Sir can you do one for Jekyll and Hyde?

[@compilationg5423]

this might just help me clutch up lit, thank you bro

[@Rakzj]

Bruh its either i cook in this exam or this exam cooks me

[@AB-iu7dh]

Just did the exam, I’ll update this on results day. I found it easy I think.

[@ProfDrMrPengalangTheThird]

what does freud id mean at the start for context cos im a bit lost

[@mahfuzrahman778]

I was just abt to ask this I’m so cooked😭

[@ProfDrMrPengalangTheThird]

@@mahfuzrahman778 idk what it means, but I'd js way instead of using it as context, my English teacher says that we should focus on the big ideas, and the big idea, for thay quote would be that, by letting yourself give in to desires temporarily will lead to suffering, or for something else, the writer teaches that letting yourself be manipulated by evil forces (could be lady macbeth or the supernatural) you will lead yourself to suffering, still didn't find that Freud Id is but hope this helps 👍

[@AbAweis]

You know in cartoons where a character is deciding to make a choice i.e whether to steal something or not and they have the devil on one shoulder and an angel on the other? The devil is your psychological 'id' and the angel is referred to as your 'super-ego'. I hope this explanation makes sense.

[@Islamiadeentv]

Can you do one for the strange case of dr jekyll and Mr Hyde

[@ikoffda5312]

Can someone tell me what does pretzel stand for and what’s freud id please

[@modz897]

He made vids on them I recommend giving them a watch

[@AbAweis]

You know in cartoons where a character is deciding to make a choice i.e whether to steal something or not and they have the devil on one shoulder and an angel on the other? The devil is your psychological 'id' and the angel is referred to as your 'super-ego'. I hope this explanation makes sense.

[@ikoffda5312]

@@AbAweisthank you so much 🙏

[@AbAweis]

@@ikoffda5312 no problem bro

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@@ikoffda5312 no problem

[@youwillneverknowwho9811]

At this point find something else to link it too that's what I'm doing you only need two points for contexts so 2 out of your 4 should have context(it's only worth 6 marks)

[@zuzug1083]

Very helpful thank you sir 😊

[@fat_laddoo9552]

guys whats fruid in the first paragraph he talks about. can anyone give me a brief explanation

[@youwillneverknowwho9811]

At this point find something else to link it too that's what I'm doing you only need two points for contexts so 2 out of your 4 should have context(it's only worth 6 marks)

[@AbAweis]

You know in cartoons where a character is deciding to make a choice i.e whether to steal something or not and they have the devil on one shoulder and an angel on the other? The devil is your psychological 'id' and the angel is referred to as your 'super-ego'. I hope this explanation makes sense.

[@POMBAT07]

which one goes well with the theme of guilt?

[@ethanstirland-flynn]

you actually deserve the best head of your life

[@ileaveyou8618]

You actually saved me the. Quotes was all relevant tysm ❤

[@AbdulazeezOyediran]

I found macbeth easy because of this video thank you very much 🙏

[@klaudiastanczak6997]

Hi I used this in my exam today and it was about Lady Macbeth but now I’m stressing out thinking I’ve lost marks because none of the quotes I used Lady Macbeth saiddd.Can anyone tell me if that matterss tyy

[@Crystallised-jo5td]

it doesn’t have to be said by lady macbeth. as long as you linked it to how she’s a strong female character, you’re fine

[@user-nv7ig3fh2y]

You didn't use one from the extract? And 2 of mine were not from LM I think it's better as we saw the result of her being powerful, i.e., macbeths heat oppressed brain

[@user-nv7ig3fh2y]

@Crystallised-jo5td yeah I linked it to how she is strong because she changed macbeth from 'brave noble macbeth' to 'wicked'

[@Crystallised-jo5td]

@@user-nv7ig3fh2y pretty nice, I talked about the look like the innocent flower but be serpent under it and the heat oppressed brain to show how she is commanding and has control over macbeth

[@moosyo3942]

How do these quotes apply to guilt?

[@HK-it8vu]

can we use these quotes if the question is on other characters in the play.

[@shorekotun]

Thank you so much!

[@DanRo42]

is there any other context for the first one as i have never learnt freud id???

[@tahafarooq2927]

Can someone please mark my essay and give me feedback? How is Macbeth presented as a powerful man? Macbeth is used as a dramatic vehicle by Shakespeare to successfully reinforce the idea of excess ambition and thirst for power as being a leading factor for society and ambitious peoples’ downfalls during the Jacobean Era. In the beginning, Macbeth is highlighted as a valiant and noble during his reign as a brave and merciless soldier for the King Duncan. “O valiant cousin, worthy gentlemen” is an indicator of his previous position in Jacobean England and how he was a generally respected and very high ranking member of society. The fact that he killed the traitor Macdonald ‘mercilessly’ and ‘from the nave to the chaps’ with full support and even praise from the highest ranking level on the Great Chain of Being suggests his seriously influential and crucial decisions in ensuring England during the Jacobean Era was up to the standards of the King and conformed to the Great Chain of Being and Divine Right of Kings. The plosive alliteration of ‘merciless Macdonald’ elevates and emphasises his position and tier on the unfair hierarchy of the time through the harsh sounds provided. Furthermore, Macbeth is shown to be promoted in his work as not only a soldier, but also as the Thane of Cawdor by Duncan directly after the conflict of England with Scotland. During the climax of the play, Macbeth is portrayed by Shakespeare as powerful and influential due to his impact on Duncan’s life and as a result, the entire natural order of Jacobean England. The regicide of Duncan would be especially influential due to the Jacobean belief that disrupting and disturbing the Great Chain of Being would lead to damage in the natural order of things such as crops dying or natural disasters; or in this case, the tragic downfall of Macbeth and his ultimate death. “The deed is done” suggests that Macbeth is accepting of the diabolical and savage act that he committed. The calm and collected demeanour further heightens the idea of Macbeth being powerful as he seems accustomed to the violent and gory death of the king. However, this could also be an indicator of his insecurities and overarching fears through the indirect reference rather than stating the murder has happened. The verb ‘done’ also suggests that Macbeth tries to show his hamartia and insatiable desire as being satisfied indicating his power to influence society and not face the consequences, which is proved wrong at the end of the play Finally, Macbeth is presented as powerful through his murder and planned execution of Banquo and his son Fleance. “champion me to the utterance, take my part in a mortal duel” effectively describes him contacting the supernatural and requesting their assistance in order to kill his loyal companion. This suggests that he has so much power, he can contact the witches and similar entities in order to fuel his sick and twisted determinations. This would have very negative connotations during the Jacobean Era and would essentially cause a negative reaction from the audience. Overall, Macbeth may be presented as powerful and influential as a deterrence for Jacobean society to not pursue their ambitions to the extent of Macbeth in order to fit in with societal stereotypes and norms to prevent disruption of widely believed conformities such as the Great Chain of Being.

[@Firqse]

I skim read it, and I think it's in level 4 over half marks. Definitely not L6 as a lot of the ideas don't sound mindblowing as they seem to be what many candidates say (having read at least 30 Macbeth essays in preparation for the exam.) What sets you apart is the AO2 and for some teachers/examiners, that can be the decider between L5 and L6.

[@tahafarooq2927]

@@Firqse Ok thank you i will keep that in mind

[@Zany-wf8yx]

Mid essay( ur gonna make the grade boundaries high)

[@tahafarooq2927]

@@Zany-wf8yx i might j be stupid but is this sarcasm i cant tell please enlighten me

[@bipencho]

@@tahafarooq2927 it’s sarcasm, it’s a solid essay but if everyone starts witting good essays, the grade boundaries are gonna get raised

[@VeryBizzyIzzyy]

this is so helpful, thank you so much!! could we get a grade 9 with this?

[@capical7585]

this makes me so happy 😍

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@@capical7585 ???

[@Osama-wk7vv]

can someone tell me how you would incorporate "freud:id" into a sentence for context

[@simxlyzach]

Perhaps, Shakespeare was trying to portray Macbeth as the 'id' - from Freud's theory - as he was a slave to his evil desires to satisfy himself and Lady Macbeth to feel like a man in the patriarchal society that existed during the Jacobean era. Additionally, the imagery of him being a slave is further emphasised as he knows committing treason is putting him under pressure but he's willing to do it. i'm not the best at english but i tried 😭

[@atharasghar5097]

How can you relate these quotes to guilt anyone??

[@2Siq.]

anyone need help on the theme of kingship ask me is easy for me

[@YourFairyGodmother_]

Help me please

[@kaidoa1539]

Help me out please

[@sjsvdhd8978]

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[@2Siq.]

@@YourFairyGodmother_u got anything like discord i could help in ?

[@2Siq.]

@@kaidoa1539 u got discord or anything i could text u ?

[@Johnnytheprogamerboy5781]

One for jekyll and Mr hyde please thank you

[@r44men]

Sir i think you made a mistake. unseam'd him from the nave to the 'chaps' not the 'chops'. but other than that, I'll be so honest this guy has actually made me enjoy English, my most hated subject!

[@stagsophs9572]

different copies of the play spell it differently:)

[@ilovetoeatwa3151]

Is this also for edexcel?

[@lucaquenet1259]

Are you allowed to add elipsis in the quote in your exam to show that you are ignoring part of the quote?

[@Whois_elise]

He helps a lot ty💗

[@teehee6141]

sir you know when you talk about the first quote and the plastic and hear explanation, should we write that tomorrow as our interpretation of the quote? how do we present it in our essay?

[@davidadewuyi825]

is there not going to be a thesis for the introduction of the question?

[@munkee4199]

Bit late but can you help me understand how to write about the technique of a soliloquy. Im struggling to understand how to write about it as the technique. Thanks

[@PlaneCrazyManchester]

Just say how it shows his inner thoughts and desires not the pretend face he shows to others

[@munkee4199]

Thank you so much

[@Arloidz]

Im here 8 hours before the exam guys, am i cooked

[@shafichowdhury2790]

Same here we really should be asleep man 😭😭😭

[@Lem.ons_]

Nah we up 🔥🔥🔥 mess em up tomorrow gs

[@Revision-ug5db]

Imma watch it in the morning

[@T.E.K_studios]

10 minutes brother

[@Lem.ons_]

@@T.E.K_studios lmk how u did

[@officialtechity]

what is Freud : id ?

[@AbAweis]

You know in cartoons where a character is deciding to make a choice i.e whether to steal something or not and they have the devil on one shoulder and an angel on the other? The devil is your psychological 'id' and the angel is referred to as your 'super-ego'. I hope this explanation makes sense.

[@officialtechity]

@@AbAweis thanks, i get it now ima use it in my exam luv

[@AbAweis]

@@officialtechity no problem g

[@blablablabla557]

i feels soo gratefull to this man honestly thank you sooo very muchhh

[@MindGames_y]

How would we link the first paragraph to guilt or ambition? Im just stupid I cant make sense of it in my head lmao

[@MrEverythingEnglish]

Shows you how badly Macbeth wants power, how crazily ambitious he is- the fact that he is willing to ruin his peace, and have a “heat oppressed brain,” all to become king.

[@MindGames_y]

Ahh I see thank you

[@esqbao]

Hi sir I've got a question. When you comparing Macbeths change throughout the play do you do that In one paragraph or do them in two.

[@antoniopacanea6847]

sir which one of the four quotes link to macbeth's fears

[@jaganmayeepenumuru]

Can you please do a Jekyll & Hyde one of these as this is very helpful? - thanks in advance

[@Darus4711]

Sir, if all questions about Macbeth start with "from this point onwards" why should we memorize quotes from early act 1 if it's unlikely they'll be able to be used

[@compilationg5423]

it doesnt say that, it says "starting with the extract" which just means you need to start your first paragraph based on the extract

[@Darus4711]

@@compilationg5423 THAT'S WHAT IT MEANS??? OMG TYYYYY I DIDN'T INTERPRET IT LIKE THAT AT ALL LOL

[@abcabcabc434]

When doing an essay for macbeth, do my quotes in each paragraph have to be in order? After the extract, can i do a paragraph using a quote from act4 and then in the next paragraph jumping to act1, or does it have to be from the start to the end.

[@JamieKing-wn1qm]

No, it doesn't have to be, although you can structure it better if you do.

[@ItzEtErNaLz]

The first paragraph where you talk on a quote should always be from the extract you are given. The next paragraph just needs to be about a quote from another part of the play that isn't in the extract. Any paragraph after that, just talk about any parts of the play but talking chronologically is a better way especially as there is marks for structure and form.

[@crossfire5376]

Light that lit paper on fire 🔥🔥🔥🔥

[@Glitterfalls4-38]

thank you so much

[@rubysteward6340]

Pleasee say your doing a jekyll and hyde version of this before Monday 🙏🙏

[@user-nv7ig3fh2y]

Do we do 2 paragraphs from the extract, then 2 paragraphs of these or 2 extract and all 4 of these

[@btluvz2920]

2 and 2

[@user-nv7ig3fh2y]

@btluvz2920 bro thank you so much its the morning of and I still didn't know

[@btluvz2920]

@@user-nv7ig3fh2y youre welcome, that lady macbeth question was nice yk

[@AmreetBirak]

What is freud: ID

[@AndyZeng-y5d]

Hi could you do one for Jekyll & Hyde and Romeo & Juliet thanks!

[@lalayys]

He did one for Jekyll and hyde

[@Osama-wk7vv]

Hi sir, when we're asked about 'how _ presents _ in the extract', how many prtezel paragraphs do we do for the extract? Is it 1 on the extract and 3 on the whole play? or is The extract not included in this video?

[@giaansingha5223]

2 on the extract 2 on the whole play

[@Osama-wk7vv]

@@giaansingha5223 tysmm

[@exprone3759]

you've helped me so much. thank you

[@joekelly7858]

what would be the effect on the first paragraph?