Music Critic Actually Tries to Make a Song

[@ShotzInTheLight]

Shotzi here! I really enjoyed the song! Your vocals were good, dude, dont put yourself down like that. Anyways, epic video as usual. Keep up the awesome work!

[@keaganshiva3323]

Ngl the song is not great. But that is the point. For a first try it's something and you should be proud. Well done

[@lunabay27]

Wow, such an interesting process! Thanks for sharing this journey. It demonstrates your willingness to participate in all the different sides of making and enjoying music.

[@NAETEMUSIC]

We stan and support. Hope it gets millions of streams brother.

[@danculbert6349]

Its alright

[@renatocfrancisco]

"produced by chase ceglie" THIS SH*T HARD :D

[@josephmahony7099]

What a beautiful and fun musical journey, cannot wait for more

[@DannoTA]

This was awesome and really inspiring! And I like the chorus a lot. We may not get more music after this, but this was dope enough.

[@switch_cave9247]

super cool video man! was very neat to see the whole process behind the song and the actual song is really good too!

[@randbradbury]

Fantastic! The new video format, the process, the song... Love it!

[@Mcluvintime]

I love this. Fuckin kudos to you putting yourself in the shoes of a musician. There ain’t no one willing to put themselves out there like this and be so open. I wish more people did shit like this.

[@simonyoung6462]

Such a brilliant perspective of creating music

[@kjhee12500]

You and Chase did a great job! That hook really is great! I think this has some real potential!

[@kudagenit]

Melodyne can help discover possibilities and fix your studio performance too. The key is exactly the rhythm and you got it right. It's catchy!

[@boycemallas8190]

The best artists and musicians always make for themselves. I have mad respect for people who try to make the art they have opinions on. Hell yeah brother.

[@dankelly8441]

I have a whole lot of respect for this!

[@chaseceglie]

😈

[@ShotzInTheLight]

the man himself! keep making that awesome music my guy

[@canada8574]

I’m impressed nobody found your comment! It’s the guy from the thing

[@Beatlesbro7]

Very entertaining video! Good shit, man!

[@maxmartinkosky3022]

finished track sounds like bleachers to me

[@chasesinatra6846]

Now I need a remix featuring Asa doing a rap

[@tommy4578]

Song good i like song

[@TrentonF505]

Not too bad for a first release! I think the only thing I didn’t like was the vocal mix. I think the vocals were good but the distortion brought out too much mids that didn’t compliment your voice imo. It could just be a matter of personal taste though.

[@Tedcarter-if2mg]

Good song if it had an actual singer on it would slap

[@TheMikeGodwin]

Was using the meter and tune from "Pictures of Dogs" for the pre-chorus an active decision and homage to sleepwell. or just one of those coincidences you stumbled upon while working out the kinks of the song?

[@arnoldfrontkey]

Had to come to the comments to remind myself where I knew that melody from

[@tylerhackner9731]

We support

[@gregkelland]

Banger!

[@RedEyedEaglez]

sick video

[@stellalanz8904]

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