check out more of the authors work on amazon! www.amazon.com/s?k=Brandon+Faircloth Heres the song i made for this story: kzbin.info/www/bejne/rHuWqYaijduVmtk Special thanks to Romnex and Deqster for joining me in this video! Romnex: kzbin.info Deqster: kzbin.info
@alexandergeorge59082 жыл бұрын
What is this book called?
@jackdare2 жыл бұрын
@@alexandergeorge5908 There are like 100 stories he's written so far in the same universe but idk which book this story's in nor how many are in his Amazon books... Maybe there's a better starting place but I'd start with "The Outsiders: Book One" then "The Outsiders: Book Two" to get started? Those explain how some of the worlds are connected and are pretty good imo
@jackdare2 жыл бұрын
Tried posting links to Verastahl's story database and visual map but KZbin said "NO!"
@brandonfaircloth48452 жыл бұрын
Hey everybody! The novel this story comes from is called The Ghost Tree. You can find it and all of my other books at the link above. Thanks to DS, Rom and Deq for the awesome narration!
@jackdare2 жыл бұрын
@@alexandergeorge5908 what Mr. Faircloth said.. he properly knows better than me lol /s
@gizzmo9522 жыл бұрын
I was supposed to get scared not happy and sad at the same time, this story weirdly played with my emotions and I've never experienced that before with one of these, this was a great one.
@malachiham92922 жыл бұрын
If you liked this one watch "my sleep paralysis demon is actually a pretty chill guy" its gotta different kinda vibe
@jackdare2 жыл бұрын
Verastahl stories be like that! He's built a HUGE world of interlocking stories.. like a new world to explore....
@bsb87052 жыл бұрын
Dark Somnium does that a lot.
@Golden_Projects2 жыл бұрын
watch out for shady government organizations, maybe your emotions are linked to someone on the video
@bsb87052 жыл бұрын
Listen to "What's Happens When the Stars Go Out" it's a Dark Somnium narration from a couple of years ago. If you don't cry, you're not human.
@beefytaquitos2 жыл бұрын
This wasn't horror. This was just an incredibly intriguing and well-written story that I'm glad was done in your incredible style in any case. Kudos to Brandon.
@superluminalprobabilityclo68842 жыл бұрын
So you wouldn't throw this story on the ground?
@brightsoull2 жыл бұрын
Thats kinda what most creepypasta's are nowadays. Just really interesting stories by writers who are experimenting with different styles Which mind you isnt a bad thing
@aswope60512 жыл бұрын
So would you even go so far as too say "Let's go Brandon"?...
@bittersweetsymphony21132 жыл бұрын
@@superluminalprobabilityclo6884 I love your name!
@Vicky_Hyenas2 жыл бұрын
It was really cute!
@WingsAboveCS2 жыл бұрын
33:00 awww, a happy ending *sees there is still an hour left *''something's wrong i can feel it''*
@RiceWitch-dingus-4002 жыл бұрын
yup
@anotherwaterroute2 жыл бұрын
I paused there for a day because honestly stories that do the fakeout happy ending are usually the ones that really get me. Simple ploy, I know but when it works it really works. Holds up here too.
@brandonjones99982 жыл бұрын
There’s been an awakening… have you felt it?
@lynnetrathen45872 жыл бұрын
Pmsl 😂😂 yep
@viderevero13382 жыл бұрын
Just got to 33:00 at the very time of writing this, and I honestly can't expect what the next hour will be about.
@puppetmaster94212 жыл бұрын
God, this story was absolutely beautiful. I cannot get over how Rachel, despite knowing that she didn’t have long to live, did everything she could to held Thomas and the other Rachel find each other. The fact that the first Rachel and Thomas had a relationship that transcended time and space, even the fact that they subconsciously knew each other’s names… I imagine that now, a piece of her resides within him, while he and this other Rachel live out the rest of their lives in peace(finally). This was a beautiful story, and you captured its tone, plot and characters perfectly.
@Darksomnium2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it :)
@canyounot89 Жыл бұрын
@@abdullahkamal5366I'm confused as well. If thar Rachel was dead and the other was trapped, what Rachel came to his apartment?
@jizou1581 Жыл бұрын
it was a fake double the company hired to trick him@@canyounot89
@lanceward540 Жыл бұрын
Have you seen Your Name. Your comment reminded me of it
@sirganku9502 Жыл бұрын
@@Darksomnium mddddddd n f nb the g😅
@justcommoncurt2 жыл бұрын
This is now the third time I'm listening to this and my jaw still drops at 1:07:00. The music you compose is always a treat but there's something about this one I love.
@Darksomnium Жыл бұрын
thank you :)
@Bobin10101 Жыл бұрын
@@Darksomniumhonestly such an underrated aspect of your content. The sound design is unrivaled
@NamasW248 ай бұрын
Have you 👂 to the bar series Ronnie did a great job I hope he’ll do the follow up the hotel/ bar
@Sh4tterdL0g1c4 ай бұрын
Literally same. I can’t even describe what I felt when that music started. It brought so much more to the story
@nrg62452 жыл бұрын
“She really was a great actress” if only he knew… this story was magnificent
@cathleenmoyle14762 жыл бұрын
...What do you mean?
@exploringthefoundation65982 жыл бұрын
@@cathleenmoyle1476 that she was dead, and wasn't acting.
@soda_asian81562 жыл бұрын
@@exploringthefoundation6598 how did you guys figure that out?
@exploringthefoundation65982 жыл бұрын
@@soda_asian8156 By watching the video.
@miralemribic80132 жыл бұрын
@@exploringthefoundation6598 loooooool
@TheKcrellin2 жыл бұрын
This is right up there with "The Girl the Universe Forgot" and "What Happens When the Stars Go Out." Another story that will stay with me as the years go by.
@ericexp4972 жыл бұрын
Right
@DEVIANT-FRACTURE2 жыл бұрын
Thank you for the recommendations im gonna listen to both of these now
@roblesink61192 жыл бұрын
The girl the universe forgot is amazing, so far it's my fav. Imma go see (what happens when the start go out) next thanks to your recomendtion
@maiajarvis4042 жыл бұрын
Ooooo more things to add to my audio list. Thank you!
@funlo.vingco2 жыл бұрын
Thanks for the suggestions! I'm sure no matter which one I chose next would be great but now I'll go with these two🙌🏼🤙🏼
@carlosmanuelderiquerhernan9062 жыл бұрын
This needs to become a movie, holy shit, such an intriguing, captivating, beautiful story, loved it 😮💨👌
@BiggestChungus212 жыл бұрын
Considering safety not guaranteed got a movie and that was an old "fad" if this story got some traction it hopefully can
@staceyrowan91892 жыл бұрын
Being John malcavitch
@davidu86882 жыл бұрын
Who would play the woman and who would play Tommy?? As long as they didn't make like one of today's types of movies yeah but if not just LEAVE IT!
@lilithlevi95342 жыл бұрын
Oh yes neflix eàt it with the hunger it has for all not watchin the quality often so wonder this see it buy all before hollyweird
@bigbandtaka17912 жыл бұрын
Finally somebody said it. I listened to this other story and said it should’ve been a movie.
@krispr1me2 жыл бұрын
The background music was especially moving and fitting with this one. Very well done. Thanks for plugging the author too; their material should go nicely on my Kindle, haha.
@Darksomnium2 жыл бұрын
thank you! i posted the song over on my music channel, im so glad you like it! kzbin.info/www/bejne/rHuWqYaijduVmtk
@thatmexicanllama2186 Жыл бұрын
That was probably one of my now favourite stories that really made me feel something for the characters and the story. the amount of depth in the story and how you brought it together was super pleasing. You are doing a great thing to bring these stories to life and I know it not much but thank you for that story, keep up the good work and be proud in what your doing
@Darksomnium Жыл бұрын
thank you so much :)
@jackson23082 жыл бұрын
The only thing more heartbreaking than this story is the fact that stories of this caliber are very hard to come by. I've listened to hundreds of hours of stories while working for the last 3 years and only a few have matched up to the power and emotion in the writing of this story. Truly incredible story telling and the narration was perfect. You deserve an Oscar.
@prickles75792 жыл бұрын
Do you have any recommendations of stories of this caliber? I would love to listen to more.
@jackson23082 жыл бұрын
@@prickles7579 Yes I do! Lemme find those and I'll get back to you 🙌🏼
@jackson23082 жыл бұрын
@@prickles7579 They're a bit long but you can't put a limit on good story telling lol also the channel Dr Creepin only does longer very intense stories and he's got a fantastic voice for narration.
@finlayharris85112 жыл бұрын
Have you listened to the penpal series it lasts a good 8 hours but it’s well worth it
@leekendall71552 жыл бұрын
@@prickles7579 The Fifth Trumpet is amazing. Definitely worth a listen. Cheers, Lee.
@timverrecchia16542 жыл бұрын
Wow, this breaks the traditional creepy pasts style of dumb main character gets lost or discovers something horrifying this felt like a real story with genuine and smart characters!! love the narration as well it fits perfectly
@omniken24942 жыл бұрын
I wouldn't consider this a creepy pasta honestly
@timverrecchia16542 жыл бұрын
@@saintjezebel well yes but I'm more talking about the protagonist being relatable and not stupid with the story not following a traditional linear development the twists are unexpected and shit just comes out of no where but it's more of a story then a creepypasta
@ReaIJackhammer2 жыл бұрын
@@timverrecchia1654 ehhh, the character acted pretty dumb when he didn't go to the police. Sure it might be an experiment but damn, first few days of seeing that I'm going to the fbi. And she shows up and is just promising to come over if he waits another month? Nah, the worst that happens if it's an experiment is nothing
@timverrecchia16542 жыл бұрын
@@ReaIJackhammer well he explained his thought process clearly, he cared for the girl increased over time, he realizes she is there against her will, his mind attempts to rationalize this fact when faced with the felling of cognitive dissonance with attempts to numb the pain by making self-serving justifications he receives money and it's a easy job he should keep but his morals and beliefs prevail especially as the recording develops into a more sinister undertone he can no longer make excuses and begins to become worried And accept that infact she does need help, many humans do this, morally wrong jobs but since pay is good they attempt to justify. After seeing the message help he then made a plan to speak to another employee to get facts rather then making assumptions, after speaking to him he learns the power the corporation/ government that is running the job, he is told they are always watching and know everything and the other person says that they are willing to kill if he has not already killed both of them which only heightens his anxiety making him even less likely to act, only acting when he knows his plan will work/ has enough evidence but he will act as he can't live with himself if he doesn't, this isn't a movie and the protagonist is no hero, he has anxiety's so over thinks so obviously he thinks about police but since he doesn't know who he works for he is not sure if police are influenced/ under control by these people but still he knows he must act so decides he will go to police after getting the evidence and posting the evidence from his phone to social media, evidence which he hasn't got any yet so like you said going to the FBI would ultimately be pointless. They know he is about to crack and try help Melanie so they send the actor which is identical to the original girl, who wouldn't be fooled by this act and not to mention he has feelings for her so when he hears that they need to stay because she needs the income he is willing to help after all he was just about to help her by trying to leak the video why wouldn't he continue to help her it's his nature ?. when he goes to work the next day upon reading the new message in the painting telling him that the girl who he believed was Melanie was not his sense of security and justification for his job crumbles his cognitive dissonance floods back in and panic, the fact they sent the actor means they knew about the messages and the fact he wasn't pressing the buttons, upon this change of state he immediately goes and gets his phone to expose the situation as it's his nature to help especially as he has feelings for the girl, this was the first time he truly knew what was going on and that his job wasn't innocent at least for now as if you listen whole story this development is only 1% of the plot. I can keep explaining but in my opinion this is the only time in the story where his actions could be considered dumb but as I have explained it's human nature and psychology the fact he acted this way his just an average Joe after all
@Ame8652 жыл бұрын
@@saintjezebel I don’t think you listened to the whole thing. You should.
@gillyp2 жыл бұрын
This story broke into my top three, along with “the girl the universe forgot” and “the sounding of the fifth trumpet” there are probably other really great ones but these the ones that stick out to me.
@fer781302 жыл бұрын
Thank you for mentioning the names of the stories. I'm always on the look out for great stories such as this one. If interested in horror, I just listened to "I Own a Motel: I've been renting out to a family of vampires" . One of the best vampire stories I've heard in a long time. Anyways, looking forward to checking out the stories you mentioned sometime in the very near future.
@titusbelmont93792 жыл бұрын
@@fer78130 the thing in my basement is getting batter at mimicking people was just released and honestly one of the craziest endings if you haven’t checked it out I highly recommend it or the 6 hour long one about a monster created by the government is another fantastic story or there is a fun one about a high level prison full of people with abilities that try to escape and it’s also a good one too if you’re looking for longer road trip stories
@charleyblack1012 жыл бұрын
I'm just starting the girl the universe forgot now after just finishing this
@annabellee31182 жыл бұрын
I just heard both stories because of this comment. Thank you! “The girl who was forgot by the universe” made me cry!
@JuanGonzalez-iw1hi2 жыл бұрын
Does anyone remember the title of that one story about the guy who takes a night shift at some abandoned building gets a series or rules and things get progressively more insane? Like he gets trapped in a room with a monster that moves on sound has to avoid looking into screaming faces in the window and find another person in a park at night. In the end I'm pretty sure he got accepted into some place called the foundation or company something like that. I really liked that story and I want to listen to it again but forgot the name
@lindsaym88082 жыл бұрын
I’m an artist, and I usually listen to your videos while I paint! This was such a fitting story to listen to while I was painting, and for some reason I am left with so much artistic inspiration after this. Beautiful story
@hre713 Жыл бұрын
Rachel?
@chubbzer21722 жыл бұрын
I stumbled upon this story on a Reddit tiktok account and I had no idea this was fictional until I checked the comments. This was an amazing story although I had thought this to be real. Very relieved and less confused. Still, absolute masterpiece of work
@monkiram2 жыл бұрын
I thought it was real too but realized it was a fictional story when Rachel started sending subliminal messages
@luisarnold34542 жыл бұрын
Well it is a nosleep story I believe, as a nosleep writer myself who actually wrote 2 stories inspired by this one, they're supposed to be plausible, and you're supposed to role-play as if it is true.
@kyleemory63912 жыл бұрын
Same I watched up to like part 15 on the TikTok account and the comments told me to come here and I immediately did so, such a great story no matter if it isn’t real.
@opesop46922 жыл бұрын
@@kyleemory6391 lmao my dumbass tought it was a real story
@annalishaalfreds74562 жыл бұрын
Same here. It took me until like part 10 to realize it was not real, made it even more interesting
@literallycharlie81442 жыл бұрын
I didn’t think I’d be crying at almost 3am but y’know what for such a phenomenal story with equally beautiful storytelling?? I’d say it’s worth it.
@DigiCube42 жыл бұрын
Worth!
@filleraccount24992 жыл бұрын
Tttttt
@filleraccount24992 жыл бұрын
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@filleraccount24992 жыл бұрын
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Tttt
@maron37772 жыл бұрын
This story really has it all - secret government, twists so you don't know what to belief, but also love and something magical. And it's all so beautefully packed together! Truly one of the best storys I've ever heard!
@Anglila_smile2 жыл бұрын
THE BEST STORY
@gagescheurman50902 жыл бұрын
I just found your page maybe a week ago now, and I'm just absolutely amazed by everything you do for us. And we as a community are extremely grateful that all of this is given to us for FREE.
@Darksomnium2 жыл бұрын
thank you so much :)
@dattromboneguy2 жыл бұрын
@@Junior10847 I would DEFINITELY pay to listen to some of these, his hard work deserves it... heck, there are some books I have purchased I wished he would narrate, like Jack and the Gas Station... I would even pay for a book version of The Left/Right Game, if there was one 😒
@dattromboneguy2 жыл бұрын
NEVERMIND, I JUST LOOKED IT UP, AND THERE *IS* A BOOK VERSION OF L/R GAME!! Last time I looked, there wasn't one
@dattromboneguy2 жыл бұрын
I lied, the "book" online isn't actually a book, its just a podcast style narration of it, that was posted to Amazon... THEY ARE ACTUALLY MAKING THE STORY INTO A REAL MOVIE!!!!
@dattromboneguy2 жыл бұрын
@@Junior10847 I wish I knew myself... all I could find online was that the "movie" won't actually be a movie... it'll be an Amazon Original TV series, looking to be about 10 episodes long, just like the story. Hopefully the TV series adaptation won't be shit, as TV series book/story adaptations with Amazon tend to be
@lassekankila3807 Жыл бұрын
To be honest. You have one of the most neutral voice on youtube that reads horror stories. It's easy to listen to you speak for hours where as with most other people I grow tired of them after an hour or two. Keep up this fine art of yours.
@briancarney18272 ай бұрын
Sounds like Justin Long.
@creepykato2 жыл бұрын
The music from the piece inside of him at the end made me feel warm and sad within my heart. I could feel the longing of the tree, how wild. Such a masterpiece. Kudos to the author and yourself for such a wonderful reading
@Darksomnium2 жыл бұрын
thank you! im so glad you like it! :) i make the music myself, here is a link to the song on my music channel: kzbin.info/www/bejne/rHuWqYaijduVmtk
@julyol1192 жыл бұрын
"We didn't treat her badly other then her confinement." Ah, yes. Solitary confinement, totally fine for human beings, not at all psychological torture.
@liambrasier65902 жыл бұрын
Its not that bad...
@ducksongfans2 жыл бұрын
@@liambrasier6590 yu try not being able to speak with anybody or leave a room for years
@williamsmilliam-2 жыл бұрын
@@liambrasier6590 it is that bad when I was 13 I was in a mental hospital for sucide attempt this was my second time there. I was put in solitary confinement for 2 weeks by week one I was worse then when I came in. So yes it is that bad but thankfully I was alowed to talk to my roomate, that was the only thing keeping me from putting the mesh blankets over my head and showering trying to drown myself. So yes it is that fucking bad.
@teresanoel40352 жыл бұрын
@@ducksongfans First of all it’s fictional secondly it was for hours they went home at the end of their shift and was getting paid $35 an hour I want that freaking job!!!!!!!
@diversezebra67542 жыл бұрын
Well....but WAS SHE alone? She had HIM... The whole time, she knew he was there and was communicating in limited ways. They didn't really talk, but they were incredibly close and connected.
@DicemSpicems2 жыл бұрын
I was having such a terrible day today. This makes it so much better. Thank you so much!
@Darksomnium2 жыл бұрын
im sorry to hear your day hasnt been that good, im glad i can help at all!
@DicemSpicems2 жыл бұрын
@@Darksomnium You help all the time! I know you help a lot of people with your stories.
@clevernugget20312 жыл бұрын
Felt
@ImAnEmergency2 жыл бұрын
Hope it turns around for you tomorrow!
@nrg62452 жыл бұрын
I am so sorry and I am here for you. I truly believe you will find happiness. Keep fighting. You’re strong.
@CptKorn2 жыл бұрын
I love the stories that arent just horror and dying and violence. This, Maria on the moon, and There is only embers at the end are absolutely beautiful stories and I'm glad they get the attention you can provide. Do you have any plans to stray away from creepypasta to different kinds of short stories? I would love to see the full range of your talents
@Darksomnium2 жыл бұрын
yeah i dont limit myself to creepypastas, i would love to do any type of story that interests me.
@CptKorn2 жыл бұрын
@@Darksomnium I love to hear that, and I trust you to bring the high quality content that you're so good at picking out
@projectdavid51092 жыл бұрын
You know what other stories he does like this one aside from the ones you just mentioned?
@JaePlay2 жыл бұрын
It was definitely creepy around the middle, but i agree the author definitely added much more to this story that makes it a great story in general.
@Darksomnium2 жыл бұрын
@@projectdavid5109 you might like "the northern lights" and "what happens when the stars go out"
@moy9948 Жыл бұрын
Came to this story after listening to "the monster trapped in my basement."This author has a way of making the most heartfelt moments that make your eyes tear up and your stomach flutter. I hope he keeps making stories like these. And the sound design and music was just the cherry on top, Mister Somnium pls don't change, and keep making amazing vids like these.
@ShadoDiablosXD2 жыл бұрын
Even though im late as hell. This is an amazing story. It was actually terrifying as hell, it go my brain running with ideas, but then near the end all the paintings made sense even that bittersweet hand holding one. At the very end, she painted them being together as her final wish in life before her death and in an odd way, the tree granted her that wish. In the end they did end up together oddly cute and horrifying that a space-time tree with dimensionally manipulative powers can unintentionally grant wishes. But again amazing story, it was so nice to have that relieving end, a bittersweet comforting end. I honestly love this story.
@ShadoDiablosXD2 жыл бұрын
Somnium out here hearting my comment lol, thanks btw. I do love your narrations of these stories like honestly your so nice to listen to and the fact you add more people into it is amazing to me, you add so much more life and detail into these stories with a little auditory editing and such, it brings genuine life to these stories
@advena9962 жыл бұрын
Right? I was not expecting such a cute, wholesome, slightly sad but good ending! And the music is fabulous for this one.
@trashcrow2 жыл бұрын
I have neither the ability with words that this author clearly has, nor the incredible narrative ability that you all possess, nor the musical talent you always display, to be able to describe the way this story made me feel. Regardless, I wanted to thank everyone involved for this. This was truly beautiful.
@ianfortuna93852 жыл бұрын
Wow soul crushing and yet still a bitter sweet ending you never cease to amaze us Mr. Somnium if you don’t post again before Christmas you and Ms. RomNex have a merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
@nrg62452 жыл бұрын
Heavy resident evil vibes at 01:08:00
@animeloverlk98 Жыл бұрын
I started this series and came in expecting a scary story and ended in tears. The story, soundtrack, voice acting, all of it was incredible.
@bluedorito94812 жыл бұрын
I’ve never felt this way during and after a story, truly a master piece.
@Apple-rt3uh2 жыл бұрын
A masterpiece. I ended up having to take my lunch at work to be able to full digest this story as it ramped up towards the end. Definitely made my day getting to listen to this story and background music.
@destroytheboxes2 жыл бұрын
Som and Rom… two gods of Creepypastas. Together, the synergy is unbelievable. Deq did a great job as well. He has a good channel. Make sure to check him out.
@missluciddreams34722 жыл бұрын
Som and Rom...I like it...good one 🖤
@twizzboyszyt76912 жыл бұрын
I didn't even notice so much time had passed. The story is just like something you would get in an dream. Loved every second of it. Thanks to you and the author of the story. Great job!
@monkiram2 жыл бұрын
Why did you copy and paste somebody else's comment?
@JordanMayjor3p72 жыл бұрын
I loved this story so much… My GF that I love dearly is named Rachel and she is an amazing painter so I really connected with the main character.
@Darksomnium2 жыл бұрын
So glad you liked it :)
@sydneyscholfield99132 жыл бұрын
agreed!
@youngmasterzhi2 жыл бұрын
Just don’t go tunneling into any huge trees yet
@adi67462 жыл бұрын
it started out horror but halfway through or more like towards the end it got really, really beautiful. the music played a big part too it fit right everytime especially in the more "happy" moments.. I got so many goosebumps sometimes I even felt like crying, I felt my heart beating faster. I, in some way wish I could've listened to this at night so I would've gotten a better experience. But I loved it, every part of it.
@adi67462 жыл бұрын
I'll definitely be listening and following this account more
@VivecWolf Жыл бұрын
My dear narrator, I want to say that your stories are like lighthouses guiding my voyage through terrible storms. Everything I listen to one of your narration, it makes my day better. It feels like a cold breeze in the middle of summer, like the first ray of sunshine after a long and hard winter, like the smell and sight of trees's blooming in the spring. I thank you for that. I also would like to thank your narrator friends. Please, don't stop narrating.
@zacharythinks2 жыл бұрын
Goddamn this was good....the story..the twists....the music....it drove to me such a huge relief and captured my heart dearly...this is officially the best creepypasta I've ever heard..
@mentalpeanut5752 жыл бұрын
Same
@nrg62452 жыл бұрын
Facts man fucking amazing
@theicequeen322 жыл бұрын
Do you know the song that played at the end?
@zacharythinks2 жыл бұрын
@@theicequeen32 i believe he makes his own music and sounds, try checking his music channel there's a good chance you'll find it there
@obscure48472 жыл бұрын
as someone whose been listening to you for awhile. It's your constant top choice of stories and quality of production that differentiates your channel from the rest. Cheers!
@SolidifiedHoney2 жыл бұрын
This really was a beautiful story. It was so well written, and could have gone wrong so easily. 10/10 for story and for narration!
@TwoRavensMinis Жыл бұрын
Such amazing stories. I just listened to the prequel to this story. Absolutely wonderful writing and narration. Heard this when it just came out, and I simply had to hear it again. It's mindboggling and almost criminal that you don't have more subscribers than you do. You deserve all the subscribers! ❤
@hazaelmolinamoreno80932 жыл бұрын
This story was absolutely amazing. The ending is absolutely perfect, but I just really wish I could hear more of what happens afterwards. Such a cool story
@josephfoster5405 Жыл бұрын
Just listened to this today....loved it ...but really want to hear a 2nd part of it
@jeremymontasser6182 Жыл бұрын
This is actually the second part. Prequel just got released with part 3/4 soon to follow
@josephfoster5405 Жыл бұрын
@@jeremymontasser6182 What's the name or link to the prequel
@cap5575 Жыл бұрын
There is a prequel. But I hope a proper sequel never gets written, this story literally has the perfect ending, especially since Rachel already gave us paintings explaining how it all plays out. This story is a masterpiece and it’s complete.
@Glaycier Жыл бұрын
So, I have good news!
@Deqster2 жыл бұрын
Oh man, can't wait to see how this turned out! Thanks again @The Dark Somnium for having me on! It's an honor!
@rofflesvanwagon2 жыл бұрын
Excited to listen
@cleaner75302 жыл бұрын
You’ve become so much better. Proud to call myself one of your first subs👏
@javochavo70882 жыл бұрын
definitely subbing bro 👍
@Deqster2 жыл бұрын
@@cleaner7530 thank you so much!
@TusharSharma-oi2vt2 жыл бұрын
You have done s great job👏👏
@shadowstarnine2 жыл бұрын
Such a beautiful story i haven’t enjoyed one like this in a really long time.
@Darksomnium2 жыл бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it
@lionlord58742 жыл бұрын
Absolutely astonishing work. Both to your voice acting and the author. It played with my emotions and was beautiful. One of my most favorite listens to date. I can't even put into words how amazing this was. Thank you.
@CadenceTheSloth Жыл бұрын
With the context of part one, im literally crying
@siggyunsichtbar69809 ай бұрын
Wait there is a part one?
@yammerrryeet5118 ай бұрын
What’s part 1?
@siggyunsichtbar69808 ай бұрын
@@yammerrryeet511 Found out DS has a playlist with all parts called ghost tree series
@iWindBlade8 ай бұрын
Come Live in The Ashes of My Heart is part 1. There's a part 3 as well. I agree, this is beyond beautiful
@audaciousintrovert69uwu377 ай бұрын
@@iWindBladeHey there! What’s the title of part 3? :D
@DearSoberUs32 Жыл бұрын
It likely wasn't intentional, but I love that you released this first so long ago. It easily established itself as one of my fav pastas. Then to listen to the other 2, Ashes, and Package, it's amazing to come back to this story with a deeper understanding of what exactly is going on. It feels Pulp Fiction-esque, going from present, to past, to future, in the "release order", and I love it. 10/10 narrator, 10/10 author, 10/10 in general.
@Darksomnium Жыл бұрын
im so glad you enjoy it! and yeah i didnt know it had other stories connected when i did it haha xD
@SpartanFilms19972 жыл бұрын
This is probably one of my favourite creepypastas. Not overly scary, but very well written
@markusroth87702 жыл бұрын
This legit made me cry. Go Thomas, respect to the writer and to the narration.
@Max-js1mx2 жыл бұрын
I haven't had a story make me feel this kind of magic feeling for a while, the writer did an amazing job, and you did an excellent job narrating it :)
@Belforem24 Жыл бұрын
Here after watching the one just posted today. Stoked for the 3rd and 4th heart tree story to come out. Keep up the amazing work!!
@anxiousangel381 Жыл бұрын
This is a very well written story and I love the way it was narrated and the music oh the music perfectly painted the picture of the story !!!
@sicuw17732 жыл бұрын
What a beautiful story, when I got into creepypastas I never expected to listen/read something so beautiful, I already had this feeling with a few of your videos, you just experienced a masterpiece that gave you some heavy emotions and maybe resonated a little too much, yet now you finished it, you feel empty Regardless, props to the author, loved this story! and to you dark somn, you're the best at what you do
@Darksomnium2 жыл бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it!
@marcusbergman61162 жыл бұрын
I started with some minor channel reading kinda bad and cliché short stories. Mostly just to drown out my tinnitus. Then I found a couple of really good ones like this channel, finding gems and turning them into high quality audio books. And my life is better for it
@NutellaRLZ2 жыл бұрын
I always love this story. I don't know why, really. It's one of my favorites and I'm glad you did a rendition of it. As an aside, I could've sworn you already read this one before, but i might've either heard someone else read it or read it on my own
@destroytheboxes2 жыл бұрын
Pretty positive he hasn’t done this one before.
@loganlewis17902 жыл бұрын
Im pretty sure solomon is in other stories, i thought the same thing
@missyd50162 жыл бұрын
I thought DS had also read it before. But, it was Mr Davis.
@xshaq2 жыл бұрын
is there a book, and if so, can u tell me what it’s called? thanks
@lyndellrobinson36112 жыл бұрын
Outstanding work, DS! I really loved all of the twists and turns and the payoffs. Great story and voice acting by everyone involved, and amazing sound and musical score. You truly know how to create an ambiance. On another note: How sad is it that when the protagonist first started describing his job, I immediately thought of Brtiney and wondered if that's how some of the security who were "guarding" her during the conservatorship felt/rationalized their jobs?
@Darksomnium2 жыл бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it!
@616gnosismaster2 жыл бұрын
❤️ shattering good score
@Bob-kn7nc2 жыл бұрын
I just wish I knew what the song of the ghost tree singing was, it is hauntingly beautiful, @ The Dark Somnium you are amazing with your music!!
@ghostfumes2 жыл бұрын
i wish more creepypastas were like this, i absolutely love the time travel aspect. the recent one about mimicking was really interesting too. and of course my fav is the sounding of the fifth trumpet. are there any other stories like this instead of the common scary creepypasta? i wish there was another genre of creepypasta like this lol
@antimaterijaYT2 жыл бұрын
Try "the story of my grandfather's missing arms". That one is a masterpiece
@kumahuma7 Жыл бұрын
Coming back to this story a year later makes so much more sense after listening to the 1st story. God I love it.
@hoot24152 жыл бұрын
I'd love to see this story turned into a film! It was so intriguing and easy to get lost in.
@reverse57682 жыл бұрын
truee
@Brodie02982 жыл бұрын
@@reverse5768 they made it into a tv show and changed alot of it
@Brodie02982 жыл бұрын
achieve 81
@joshuacarpenter59972 жыл бұрын
@@Brodie0298 yeah that’s something folks forget, tv/movies will change what you like about it
@hoot24152 жыл бұрын
@@Brodie0298 Oh yeah! I watched "Archive 81." I really enjoyed it, but it's actually quite different. I can see how it reminds you of the TV show though.
@ezduzitgarcia7842 жыл бұрын
Hell yeah! Always Waiting for another story, props to your co-narrator, ya'll make amazing stories, ✌
@jasoncarto2 жыл бұрын
Co-narrators, no? I thought there were atleast 2 others.
@ezduzitgarcia7842 жыл бұрын
@@jasoncarto idk?
@lukaCOOKIE2 жыл бұрын
@@jasoncarto just him and his gf I believe.
@lukaCOOKIE2 жыл бұрын
I hand deqster, but I’ve never heard of him before.
@thatoneguynamedd.o.c612 жыл бұрын
Wow... Just... Wow. I'm so used to just hearing scary or impersonal stories about death or monsters or terrifying events and yet this story made me feel happy and sad again and again like it was toying with my emotions while listening and that even I AS the listener was agitated because of it. Thank you for voicing it and thank the author for making this beautiful story for my late nights.
@youngbandit3795 Жыл бұрын
I just listened to this because of the story Dark released today, the prelude to this, and I cannot wait for the rest of the story!! Absolutely amazing! I love it!
@joshuastrickland52642 жыл бұрын
I feel like I've heard this one before, but every twist still hit me...Its great. also Love your voice and delivery. I appreciate how not all of your videos are -scary, spooky and under your floorboards- I really like your more...ethereal content (like all of the angel content) and situational horror (like this).
@advena9962 жыл бұрын
Yeah these are my favorite too! Scary in the middle but sweet at the end!
@cockroachbait2 жыл бұрын
I came into this half expecting another generic paranormal job with weird rules story, but boy, did this took me for a ride... you have wonderful taste when it comes to picking up stories, and your voice and music make great stories hit even harder. Thank you for your hard work as always, and for what you're putting out there. Never stop being awesome :)
@kristofers11392 жыл бұрын
I listened to this last night while trying to sleep. It didn't go well, too much emotions from listening. Very well written and very good narrating. Love it!
@videoss3412 жыл бұрын
God damn son, you don't upload as frequently as other channels but GOD DAMN those stories are worth the wait. The narration, the story, the ambient sounds and music are top notch. I'm always excited when I see you upload, you're doing an amazing job!
@cheeeesecaa8419 Жыл бұрын
This story has greatly impacted something within me. I am now completely unaware how I would continue my way of living, after this story. Overall, this story was a Rollercoaster of emotions. I have never felt utterly disturbed, sad, happy at the same time. Kudos to whoever made this story ! 👏
@Darksomnium Жыл бұрын
Oh wow I'm so glad you liked it!
@RedTRM2 жыл бұрын
This story pulled my heartstrings, I can't put into words how much this story made my day and probably even my whole week, I honestly don't get emotional at stories, movies and things, but this one did. I was very invested in the characters and the story, I came looking for a scary story to listen to for a while and found a timeless golden masterpiece. The fantastic narration with the sad and bittersweet sounding music and the perfectstoryline just made for an excellent blend that has truly burrowed its way into my heart as a favorite
@arvidvanoosten14162 жыл бұрын
Wow. This is one of the best creepypasta's I've ever listened to and definitely the most beautiful one. Thank you for the amazing narration
@Darkboy25252 жыл бұрын
Hij is echt KEI goed hé!!
@KventWasHere2 жыл бұрын
MAN I WAS EXPECTING TO GET SCARED DURING MY STUDIES NOT BAWL MY EYES OUT. ;-; but good shit somnium you’ve come a really fucking long way and I couldn’t be more proud of you and this channel and community you’ve built up. You truly are the king of Creepypastas. I Love you man keep up the good work
@releasethechimp94992 жыл бұрын
I've said this before, but you are the only KZbinr I get excited to get notifications for, and you never miss with what you put out. Kudos to the author
@Paigelikesfluffythings2 жыл бұрын
This story was incredible, it's made me feel so many emotions. I long for something I don't know, miss something I never had, and cry for something I've never lost. But you made it come to life. It wouldn't be nearly as good without you telling the story. I'm in awe. Bravo!
@beetee69862 жыл бұрын
I can't even remember the last time I just straight up started sobbing, but this did it for me. Good work to both the author and yourself and the others you work with on bringing the story to life like that.
@jasoncarto2 жыл бұрын
The readings you do are my favorite. They're always a mystery with some emotion intertwined into them.
@Korbonite Жыл бұрын
Such a beautiful story, I'm excited for the other two!!
@Darksomnium Жыл бұрын
Glad you liked it!
@cinders28942 жыл бұрын
Beautifully written and narrated. The details, the characters, the quantum physics, right up my cosmic alley. Adored it! 🥰
@FeenieVonKarma2 жыл бұрын
This whole thing was really good but the way it closed out was incredibly beautiful. Got me right in the heart.
@JadedBelle2 жыл бұрын
Wow...what a beautiful story and I'm blown away by the music! 😍
@multikatee5552 жыл бұрын
That was one of the best stories ive ever heard. Whoever wrote that, youre a very talented, amazing writer
@ianopia25032 жыл бұрын
I work long shifts at work and I have been listening to your hour+ long creepypastas and you hadn't dropped any in a while. This was a big surprise last night!! Great story! Great narration.
@dark_a_shark2 жыл бұрын
This story is like some of my favorites, just the soft yet serious feeling of the stories, the detail and mystery and the main character feeling lost yet knowing what to do. These stories are my favorites, like The Giver, or Requiem. Amazing ♥️
@bread4108 Жыл бұрын
Rewatching this for the full ghost tree series, and it makes me remember how good this story is, but also so much more interesting having the basic connections to the first story in the series also... 2…43…26…89
@thetwitchywitchy4 ай бұрын
this was absolutely beautiful, so well written. I can’t praise this story enough, it’s honestly amazing stories of this caliber are just uploaded for free, like this is worthy of a physical print run.
@smoothoxygen48712 жыл бұрын
There's something so amazing about this story, it's beautiful, and feels so amazing to listen to. There need to be more stories that have this feeling.
@RagnarokMaster2 жыл бұрын
My goodness! I was looking forward to being scared...or at least feeling some cosmic dread. This was so good and wholesome at the end. I can honestly see this being some kind of full length sci-fi movie. You told this story so brilliantly. You and your colleagues brought these characters to life. Thank you so much! I look forward to your next reading!
@mmmcloud27712 жыл бұрын
Never thought I'd hear a story so beautiful and yet still so tragic, definitely one of the best I've heard in a long time
@Shanaevaz2 жыл бұрын
Frankenstein is one of those. But I might listen too the book tho
@eyeruscat94395 ай бұрын
This story was phenomenal, and the music, voice acting, and effects just made it even better. Definitely one of my favorites now.
@AlissaSss232 ай бұрын
Amazing story and beautiful done, as always. I have found a couple of your short stories from 8 years ago, those were just as high quality as your recent ones. I'm shocked it took 8 years for you to get the well deserved recognition ❤
@maxcorvus11742 жыл бұрын
This is an absolute masterpiece. Such a phenomenal, gripping and fantastic story. And the voice actors are amazing.
@magiofthoth Жыл бұрын
Rewatching this due to the "come live in the ashes of my heart" Want more of this story line now 😅🎉
@audaciousintrovert69uwu377 ай бұрын
Hi! I heard that there is a part 3 of this, do you know what it is? That is, if you ever notice this 😅
@DigiCube42 жыл бұрын
My god...this was beyond words. I can't ever thank you enough every time. This goes up there right next to "because you are my baby". Thank you Verastahl so much, and thank you Somnium so much
@Slomurr7 ай бұрын
I always love creepypastas that take a genuine approach at storytelling and emotion. This has to be one of my favorites for sure!
@sarahpolley32762 жыл бұрын
This story was so beautifully terrifying, I loved every minute of it, I cried a little bit at the end where he finally felt content and happy with Rachel hand in hand
@drigondii2 жыл бұрын
This story went a whole different direction than I expected in the second half. And that music… chills, as always
@lessonslearned3162 жыл бұрын
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@lessonslearned3162 жыл бұрын
Hhhh h. H hhh. H. H. Gh h. H h. Gh. H. H
@lessonslearned3162 жыл бұрын
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@lessonslearned3162 жыл бұрын
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@tommeakin17322 жыл бұрын
This was genuinely phenomenal. The story itself, the reading, the music selection. Amazing. I love how the supernatural was weaved in, and how it directly correlated with the story transitioning into a dreamlike experience. I'm not one for emotional or romantic fiction, but this story managed to really immerse me and pull at my heart strings. Stories like this are the kinds of stories that should be getting turned into high budget films.
@Nameless00Soul Жыл бұрын
This story was already beautiful the first time I heard it but now its so much more after having heard the first part. Cant wait to get to the rest of the series, its very interesting.
@vanitum9172 Жыл бұрын
I never fail to be amazed by this channel. This story was beautiful. The writing was amazing and the narration really elevated the story. Thank you for creating this.
@screamitloud79232 жыл бұрын
This genuinely made me cry. Not only was the writing and story great but the narrator and audio was amazing to, I was really brought into the story, and for once the ending of a creepy pasta didn’t make me feel sad and alone at the end. Amazing story and amazing video.
@bloodofwinter84512 жыл бұрын
I've never cried while listening to these stories. But omg this was so sad and beautiful all at once. It was such a good story! 😭 I loved every second of this emotional rollercoaster.
@gabbreilblue4432 жыл бұрын
I have never once listened to a story like this one, it was tragic, sad, happy, but most importantly beautiful. So very well crafted and left me at shock when it came to an end desperately wanting more. To the author this was amazing, the part when he first mentions the birds in the painting with them almost being words sent a cold shiver down my spine more so then any other story iv ever heard. And to the Narrators what a beautiful job voicing it the way you people did. Absolutely Bravo.
@myherobobbarker86402 жыл бұрын
Thank you for doing what you do, may not realize how much a audio narrative story can help some one on a bad day. Thank you for what you do.
@XRyuhayabusaX2 жыл бұрын
This story left me beyond speechless. It was so haunting yet beautiful in so many aspects. The tension about the big mystery. The slight shivers of hope and light and the twists all around, paired with this touching sad, yet hopeful music is really a piece of art. You, dear sir, earned so much more than a sub. You earned a fan and a human being that got touched by this story. Thank you SO much for this!