My Law School Statement

Getting there…

[@pilotvanquish3886]

Good luck man! Have always enjoyed your videos and hope you are able to stick around if you can.

[@swpdisciple]

Your support means alot to me. I know it’s not poppin’ like it was back in the early days but I’ve enjoyed the small audience tremendously. Y’all have really helped me and I hope I’ve been of some benefit to you. I’ll be kicking around for as long as I can until the signal is given that I must halt.

[@georgew1522]

Man, Disciple, I've been listening/watching your videos for as long as I have been using KZbin, just weird thinking that you are probably gonna shut it down. I'll miss you, but I get it. Everything must change... Anyway, the statement sounds good, but maybe you shouldn't call the Hartford tort department "toxic" in the statement. Seems a bit harsh (even if true). Perhaps you can add a sentence or two really solidifying what you feel are your best strengths (determination, adaptability, etc.) which would make you a good candidate for law school. Good luck! I'm sure you'll get into the program.

[@samandoh7956]

Same regarding listening to him for a good while. I started on GenX though. Only "criticisms" I have is to not mention that it was the adjective "Toxic" more than once. You brought it up and these people can read - Leave it alone. Also you mention a few exclamation points? I am past writing Statements and just glance at Cover Letters... But an exclamation point would stand out, and more than one would probably lead to me looking for more oddities with a more critical eye. HOWEVER - I would think that your breadth of experience would be attractive to any institution, especially given the successes you've had with MBA/GSRE. Unfortunately that means keepin' it to the grindstone, but after awhile it unfortunately becomes second nature...

[@swpdisciple]

@@samandoh7956noted…I will revise it a couple times both for the reasons you outlined and syntax/ prose. I also have to comb it for excessive first person singulars if there are any. I really appreciate you listening to my chronicles and thoughts all of these years. It means more to me than you realize 🙏🏾

[@swpdisciple]

Thanks for the kind words! It means a lot and time has taught me that people staying with you over the long haul is not to be taken for granted and quite rare. So, for that I’m exceedingly grateful. The Hartford Insurance company’s department was …toxic tort. That’s like if you’ve been exposed to any kind of dangerous substance and a person or company is responsible for that exposure, you can pursue a toxic tort claim. So, I wasn’t adding an adjective lol. I really appreciate you fam 🙏🏾