Pokemon Creepypasta Abandon Lonliness RED

[@scarfdrawscattos4190]

Here is the story: Red woke up in his room, a while after... that happened. Red got his Pikachu back from him mother, and talked to his rival, Blue. Blue mentioned Loneliness and Leaf. He then mentions Pikachu having a spell tag on it. He says that, either way, the Prof. wanted him. Red goes into the lab, to find that the Prof. has been turned into a ghost. The Prof. then says to run away, which makes Red confused. Red leaves and heads to the Pokemon Tower, possibly to mourn a Pokemon, or maybe something drew him to go there. A lady says that somebody awaits Red up there, in which confuses Red even farther. Red starts climbing the tower, in which another lady tells him to go back because he isn't Blue. Red then heads back to Pallet Town, in where he encounters Blue, who says he looks terrible. Red then heads back home to rest, in which he encounters Loneliness' Ghost. It repeats, "Help us, Red.... Help us, Red..." Over and over. The last time Loneliness says it, they scream it out, making sure Red can hear the two. Red heads up his stairs, in which he finds Blue using his computer. Red tells Blue about what happened, and Blue responds that Loneliness was a curse, that Leaf was basically stupid to take him in. Blue says this is getting silly, and for the two to go to his house. They talk about Blue's dream, Pikachu's Spell Tag, and Leaf with Loneliness. Blue's Dream has to do with Red, because Blue challenges Red to a battle. Blue uses Raticate, whom doesn't even have a sprite. Red beats Blue. Blue asks Red to help him, and that he is scared. Blue screams out Loneliness was a curse, and that he abandoned him. Red goes to the tower to try and fix things. The signs say: "Blue was torn when Raticate died. Out of frustration, He abandoned that little eevee..." "He ran. He was scared. Eevee was confused... Eevee chose Leaf as a friend. But Leaf was lied to by Blue..." "Leaf... She murdered Eevee. Only because she believed he was nothing but a curse... But... I'm not... a curse... Im just... Lonely. Lonely... So alone..." "Leaf chose to ask for forgiveness... And she was forgiven... But what about Blue? Did he ask to be forgiven? .................... He asked to kill his friends. Loneliness.... Leaf.... And now... Red..." The signs end there, and Red meets Blue by the ghosts. Blue says that it is only them left now. Blue calls Red a curse, and says he will destroy Red. A battle then starts, and Raticate places a curse on Pikachu. A condition is placed on the battle field, where it says "Loneliness is crying." "Raticate cannot be hit." "Pikachu is in agonizing pain." Pikachu slowly dies, and so does Red. It ends off saying: "Loneliness' voice echoed in the darkness... But nobody heard it." And that is the end of this part of the storyline, have fun sleeping tonight kiddies! (3

[@keeganbyrd5279]

Scarf Draws Cattos the longest sentence of my life

[@owenncool]

r/wooosh

[@azurecolezlaw]

Thats deep

[@alguienrandomxd2847]

that really sad :

[@HammerCain-x1y]

Future Red says How _ dare you - Say that Leaf and her sweet little Eevee didn't deserve it and I really walk the World of Pokemon with a real hard level of PTSD

[@kezzstar24]

This isn't a creepypasta, it's a sadpasta. Poor Eevee.

[@guyfilledwithbananas294]

Can i eat it?

[@todorokishutoybrunaCamargospel]

No no sim 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😨😨😨😨😨👿👿👿👿👻👹

[@josephrecoleto7872]

If i were the owner of eevee i would love him or her alot because its my fav pokemon

[@ViridianNoob]

Guyfilledwithbananas 2 can I eat it too

[@eeeeanimates]

Thats actually true.

[@mattmayugatheidolmasterfan3474]

Loneliness is crying. (It is raining.) Foe RATICATE cannot be hit... (It doesn't affect Foe RATICATE...) Tears fall on the Battle Field. (Rain continues to fall.) PIKACHU is in agonizing pain... (PIKACHU is afflicted by the CURSE!) PIKACHU Died! (PIKACHU fainted!) Player fell to CHAMPION BLUE! (Player lost against CHAMPION BLUE!) RED is seeing darkness... (RED paid [insert Pokémon Dollar symbol here] 100 as the prize money...) It[']s over! (RED whited out!)

[@josecayetano2955]

good translation

[@dbb1561]

MattMayugaThePuyoPuyoFan 038 AVGCP AUTTP o

[@luisfernandohernandezfranc947]

K

[@SchumiJr.]

I think foe raticate cannot be hit it's because that raticate had the wonderguard ability, so a move that is not fighting type will always fail against him

[@BlissfullyTired]

Everybody die because of BLUE maybe he was a curse

[@twotonedearly]

needs to be a part 4 with Blue getting what's coming to him from the ghosts of Red and Leaf and Lonliness.

[@greengalaxy5597]

Blue becoming a murderous maniac wanting to kill all his friends for no reason is hilarious

[@Zombitology]

Please don't ever say that Red and Ash are the same person. Red is 10x the trainer Ash could ever dream about being.

[@lenarratorsocietyofsuperio2731]

Red is Ash

[@Thedarksenshi]

Ash is better than Red

[@sans22333]

I come from the future and now ash is better trainer 🗿

[@airam1721]

I have news for you bro

[@KittyEdwardLuver]

Me too. (When I saw Blue all of a sudden in Red's room, I thought: "HOW THE HELL DID YOU GET IN THERE BLUE? YOU STALKER.")

[@idontknow9801]

Barry: *allow me to introduce myself.”*

[@kentguiller]

Blue is obviously a simp

[@Revidescent84]

If you were abandoned TWICE, you'd have a lot of "Loneliness" and feel pretty "Unwanted" too...Reading the story also helps. The game goes without being used for months, so a bit TOO realistically, the Pokemon become neglected and die.

[@Baconboy20997]

I think the ending would have been more "effective" if the word "heard" wasn't misspelled. This was a herpy derpy creepypasta.

[@MegaMegajennifer]

if you mean removing the e then it would spell hard

[@llSuperSnivyll]

It's a bad creepypasta, that's for sure, but there is merit in actually trying to hack it to the game.

[@EpicTyphlosionTV]

True. It is kinda wierd how it basically says that Blue ended up murdering everyone. Though the younger me still seems to like it, as with some of these other creepypastas, lmao

[@idontknow9801]

@Brenden Dobbs when it said “someone is awaiting you at the top” I thought it meant buried alive

[@DarkSonic377]

I can hear the persons fingers clicking the buttons on the computer! :3

[@dfiddi2121]

Me too!

[@BillNyeTheRussianSpy]

You know, unlike other Pokemon creepypastas this actually seems to make a decent game on its own. At the very least, it's grittier than Pokemon's gotten recently. Remember when the games had dying/dead Pokemon and a terroristic mafia? And now we have Leaf and Blue possessed by demons and killing Pokemon/people. Definitely beats Team Plasma. XD

[@milesfarber]

Man, this comment aged like wine.

[@pavo116]

​@@milesfarberit's so funny reading comments from so long ago when people considered Plasma and Black and White in general to be bad, funny how things change over time like this

[@milesfarber]

@@pavo116 In black and white 2, Ghetsis literally actually tries to murder you. USUM literally points out how Plasma is by a country mile the most violent team ever created in history, way worse than Team Rocket. You can really tell how back in 2010 the new trend was spreading fake news about games they never played.

[@trqshy]

SOMEONE PRAY FOR ME IM GOUNG FULLSCREEN

[@ribbon4796]

;-; I'm sorry Eevee I promise to play with u in Pokemon Amie

[@teammagmasmaxie6107]

Well leaf is the one

[@ChazAndDaveGaming]

there should be a part 4 with trainers from other reigons like gold, lucas, dawn and hilbert.

[@GodsRighthandman]

Dude, imagine seeing this as a poke mon fan at an early age…

[@mansay500]

1:11 wait, trainer leaf died????

[@Zombitology]

I didn't know his name was Gold. I always named him Silver lol. It's hard to say who the better trainer is because we don't know what Red accomplished in the 3 years that passed since blue/red. Red is still considered the only true pokemon master in the series.

[@chris_32195]

5:25 the transition from the final Battle Is too cool in this situation

[@mpwarrior-wr1yo]

i absolutely love this creepypasta! although i believe that loneliness isnt a curse

[@SarahDavis-bx1zi]

So sad I love Eevee even Loneliness :'[ 😿😿😿😿😿

[@vampysesparker436]

my baby is hurt eevees not a curse hes the opasite...joy

[@allisonmwcrisis92]

My guess is as simple as: after Blue abandoned Lonliness, Lonliness approached Leaf, and Leaf took him in.

[@polarisgemini52]

That increase in the sound of help us red tho. Fucking scared the shit out of me.

[@TightSweaters4]

What happens if you use tail whip to let Blue win?

[@SandvichGuardian]

Tummy Rubs then red was a a a CURSE

[@gtafan666]

You know when you cant use a move on the enemy you really should use a different one.

[@chris_32195]

That Raticate Is a literal Ghost, he can' t be attacked in any way, you can only lower his stats but It's no use

[@8BitMisdreavus]

What happens if you purposely tank the Blue fight?

[@UltraAryan10]

Its a hack of FireRed or LeafGreen..... I know.....

[@milez570]

It is but he won't let me download it

[@Sand42992]

Its leafgreen the story is about leaf

[@ianfinrir8724]

Couldn't even attempt to slowly build up the spooky stuff. Came right out of the gate with the tv being weird.

[@Lordestic]

LONELYNESS,voice echoed in the darkness but no one heard it

[@HammerCain-x1y]

I really feel depressed and devastated to hear such sad and frustrating things that can ever In any Pokemon game

[@IMGOATXD]

I love dark stuff

[@KuroHinata0321]

That 'LONLINESS is crying' cracks me up every time XD

[@Nikki_81]

loneliness let's just say if anyone ever betrays you again they'll suffer the fate that was handed to you because they taught you were a curse your not your an amazing little eevee -amber one of the people that would never betray you

[@SarahDavis-bx1zi]

I'm with you

[@vampysesparker436]

+Nicole Maj im with you too

[@josecayetano2955]

+Vampyses Parker same here

[@togied-little9328]

Right here with you.

[@BladeGamester]

lol plus i love people like this who go and try and fix my grammar mistakes, cause when i'm raging i can care less for grammar and spelling :D

[@infinite_sun_rays]

"Hey, Professor Oak! You said you wante- OH GOD"

[@BladeGamester]

depending on the person on whether you find yellow a spin off or not, I think it is a spin off considering you can catch all the starters in it and you start with a pikachu, while every game after and before it you start with the standard 3 fire water or grass so ya its a spin off buddy.

[@waterninten]

LONELINESS' voice echoed in the darkness... But no one heard it. I started crying. So sad. Wonder what the last part will be like...

[@PivotSeq]

Well, Green/Gary abandoned Eevee (Lonliness) when his Raticate died. So Lonliness ran confused and stuff, it found Leaf/Blue (LOL) and they became friends, but then Green tricked Blue to kill Eevee because he thought it was a curse. She killed it, and then asked for forgiveness. Then Red got to know the truth and so Green killed him.

[@13CrystalHeart]

Thanks for uploading this!

[@BroilerTM]

When you battle your rival at Lavender Town, he asks you if your Pokemon are dead. At this point on, he no longer has his Raticate he used in previous battles. Because of the luxury confusion on the S.S. Anne, he wasn't able to make it to a Pokemon Center in time, so the Raticate passed away.

[@Vi3Voide]

no,Blue just traded raticate

[@angelguzman9010]

Why is it raining indoors

[@teammagmasmaxie6107]

Angel Guzman eevee cries

[@iNinjeek]

You did a great job! :D i love this video!

[@TheBlueBeatle3]

2:14 - 2:30 When he walked into the room and Loneliness cried "help us red" ........fuck. That scared the shit out of me!

[@TheTediousTedd]

The moment I saw raticate this video became pretty funny. The leaf making a Pokemon sound was pretty funny though.

[@sflahaut62200]

Poor LEAF, poor EEVEE...

[@Hugouuz]

Man i really have seen that video on 2011 and 8 years after this KZbin recommend to me WTF?!?

[@USSR_BALL-e]

This is a creepy pasta since the first minute,cuz Gary is being nice to us

[@NewbieTetris]

when my first time listening into a creepypasta, i could not sleep

[@izayahnonnenmacher8140]

I find the champion theme of this game creepy now. All because of this series

[@PlatinumX3000]

In elementary school, they teach us that you are not supposed begin sentences with conjunctions. In actuality, you can begin a sentence with one if you use it correctly. They also teach us to use contractions in elementary school, but then later in life you find that people frown upon them. Yes, I am aware that I also used contractions in my previous comments. But if we are going to nitpick at tiny grammatical errors then by all means have a field day.

[@hilmanihsan7403]

Dear Blue,Where Did You Get That Invisible TM/HM

[@milez570]

That resembles raticate's death

[@felipebarreto_]

Is his dead Raticate...

[@FlitteringSnowdrops]

Thank you sir. You are a good man of KZbin too. Keep up the good work.

[@MusicOfAdam]

"I'm sorry Red...I'll have to beat you down NOW!" Wtf? XD

[@boltdragon31]

either the horror stories are getting worse, or i'm getting used to them. i think the second, because this one was pretty good.

[@Hrrmpf66]

Poor leaf and lonliness

[@OrigamiJungle]

In the pokemon tower when the lady greets you and tells you to go upstairs she says someone is waiting for you, that someone is evee,so when she says oh your not blue she says to go back then you know what happens next

[@CadDriftarus]

best creepypasta storyline ever. i want to do an anime version of this

[@burninfire3878]

Eevee got murdered me: o-okay WHYYYYYYYY

[@BladeGamester]

ya i hate ppl that act like they know everything even tho they never read the manga, thank you for actually knowing your stuff sir :)

[@FormerlyDoomed]

of course, but the small chance it does happen, all hell breaks loose.

[@slaw9514]

Why they ALWAYS teleporting to POKèMON TOWER?

[@snowspade3954]

Dread, isn'it? Maybe because you see them always so joyful and full of life and here seem normal, but ...

[@puppybork3054]

Did anyone notice that because curse worked that way Blue's Raticate was ghost type?

[@boltdragon31]

aww, it's ok. i still have trouble sleeping when i think about ao oni's face. the trick is in the sound. try putting on a small light, and falling asleep to a song that relaxes you. i listen to the end credits from ocarina of time, fall asleep like a kitten

[@jeweltara]

that actually makes since so this is more of a wtf raman then a creepypasta

[@Cherry_and_ko]

Gary! you're the champion! Why is you're Raticate at level 8!?!? Gary: IDK

[@BladeGamester]

thank you sir, you truly are a good man of youtube :D

[@JRC1325v2]

holy fuck the thunder at 4:20 happened right when the thunder here actually got loud

[@RockmanZeroModernDay]

Translation: It is raining. It doesn't affect Raticate... Rain continues to fall. Pikachu is afflicted by the Curse! Pikachu fainted!

[@SuperPhantomfox]

2 and a half mins in and this is already creeping my out >.>

[@RockmanZeroModernDay]

Loneliness voice echoed in the darkness... But no one heard it.

[@HaloFanRedvsBLue12]

Well that's an uberkill to what little immersion there was.

[@mcdonald20101]

è....Semplicemente....Stupenda.

[@jaypopple5004]

to me it happened to soon I mean wow tragic but most invigorating

[@lydiabucey1692]

This is really some creepypasta! As a creepypasta hunter, this seems very sad to me.

[@ShadowOnTheWall666]

I enjoyed this but the story was a bit difficult to follow because you scrolled through the text a bit too fast and placing the Italian translation over the top of the text boxes made the English hard to read. There were also some confusing elements. What was the significance of Pikachu's spell tag and how did Blue get his dead Radicate back?

[@SyndicateOperative]

Pikachu's spell tag was basically pikachu being superstitious - he was trying to ward off the ghosts. His dead radicate was a ghost - that's why pikachu couldn't hit it.

[@milez570]

I'm actually glad this guy didn't put any jumpscares in these vids.... I shouldn't say that should I?

[@FlinnyWinny]

... I feel so sorry for lonlyness, it's so sad! *cries* :'(

[@cry4823]

i want to download it

[@NicoTheCinderace]

Gary: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooo.... *Dies* Red: ...And that's what you get, Murderer.

[@Kostasdxi]

that's how blue became champion, he had a freaking invinsible raticate.

[@OrigamiJungle]

Blue got evee in yellow version in that version when you fight gary or blue on the ss. Anne you kill the raticate without knowing,gary is torn in despair so he abandons the first pokemon he got, evee, know this person is playing firered version so the other one is leaf.evee,when abandoned was lonely so he chose leaf as a friend gary influenced leaf that evee was a curse so leaf killed it know blue has that dream were it becomes real and when you go to prof oak and then go back your in the

[@alexebarnhart]

the idea is that red is abandoned and alone his real mother is dead and everyone is nice and cares for him since he is abandoned and lonely but when that care goes too far...

[@mmomario12]

we all know that when we played red and blue, we killed Blue's Raticate. Or at least I hope we all know. If you don't know, here is the theory behind it for anyone who doesn't know and is reading. in the last battle with blue before facing him in Pokemon tower, he had a raticate. when you fought him in the tower, he no longer had a raticate and said you had no business there since none of your pokemon have died yet he is there without a raticate. EVIDENCE >:D

[@cress493]

raining and thundering inside a tower? seems legit.

[@v0idspamz636]

No one noticed [Rival Name] is much nicer than reg. games?

[@VarthRock]

DEAD END

[@AkiraComplex]

People don't realize that you can just mod a rom, and that it's much easier to do for less complex games such as ones for older handheld consoles. You could just switch out the text and the sprites, creating your own events and conditions. Play through it, and record it. That's it. There you go. Everyone go home.

[@Queenlord22]

Why does no one use different attacks? "Oh, that didn't work. Better try again. And again. And, maybe a few more times for good measure. ...F* these other attacks!"

[@KnAtiOn12]

Blade is wrong. The game came first in 1996. His first pokemon was either a charmeleon, a squirtle, or a bulbasaur. When you fight him in gold, he has all three in their evolved forms. Pidgey would have been his second, and Pikachu his third.

[@MAZZ0Murder]

same with the rain in every level of the Tower!

[@DrHaxful]

Level 8 to level 100, well that escalated quick.

[@ialtog]

am i the only one who thought it was kinda funny that when it said "tears fell on the battlefield" that it started raining? i probably am lol

[@Matt90765]

no, i love eevee's, they're so cute and hugable

[@Thedarksenshi]

So I was right, this story does have to do with the Sadpasta "I won't leave you"

[@spaghetti5914]

video used confusion! it's super effective against spaghetti spaghetti is confused it hurt itself in confusion!

[@CherryCokeKitten]

Never heard of this one before. Should be interesting :)

[@Trutenxforever]

was watching this, than it froze, so I reloaded it....now it won`t load....it`s the curse....