Pony Tales [MLP Fanfic] 'Apple Valley: A Hearth's Warming Horror Story' (GRIMDARK) - GROGAR SEQUEL

[@autumbreeze1129]

Okay, I thought what Grogar did in the last story was horrifying, but this is even more disturbing, especially when you realise this means Rarity could've been right by Sweetie Belle at the end of the first story, begging for his sister to notice her, hear her, know, somehow, that she was there, only for Sweetie to be completely oblivious to her sister's plight. That truly is horrible.

[@thomascrain4832]

What a lovely little shivery idea...

[@yorhano.2typeb141]

Im pretty sure Rarity was already taken by the time that story ended. Though this does mean that Grogar was taking every other pony during the downtime sweetie belle and the others had.

[@nikitaheredia416]

What does Grogar make the foals and fillies do? Are they in the same condition as the adults?

[@Archiver_Studio]

@@nikitaheredia416 I assume they were left to freeze in Apple Valley like the mares and stallions, he only needs specific helpers on his missions and it isn't known how to undo the curse that Grogar is causing

[@Double-R-Nothing]

Grogar: Damn, they spittin bars. Aight, you're cool.

[@raven3067]

Lol!

[@silverbutterfly1739]

LoL (^^)

[@treblewine453]

I didn't read the title fully and when he brought up four surviving fouls that got dumped at Sweet apple acres my jaw dropped in realization and I got so hyped

[@jakupharrison8051]

Same I would like to know who got sent to family and who got locked up though.

[@r1na_r0se]

@@jakupharrison8051 My guess is Sweetie Belle & ButtonMash who got sent to family while Applebloom & Diamond Tiara got locked up

[@ace_of_cups4096]

I wonder if Rarity knows that Sweetie Bell survived....

[@autumbreeze1129]

What's disturbing is she probably does and, since the end of the first story is in the morning of the next day, Rarity could very well have been right by Sweetie's side, begging her to know she was there, but Sweetie being oblivious as Rarity is already rendered unknowable.

[@thomascrain4832]

She knows. And knowing that her sister is safe and somewhat happy is what allows her to hang on to that last shred of who she used to be.

[@raven3067]

Grogar: "Damn! They're singing! I can't take them!" Also everypony in ponyvill is a ghost now?

[@thomascrain4832]

ALMOST everyone. A few were out of town...

[@Aquamarinix_]

Fanfics that portray Grogar in a better light than in the show are always the best! That rarity is spooky asf! Good job to everyone who were involved in this project did a good job! Wish you well.

[@VeraxFriends]

Yeah, in the show he wasn't terrifying at all it was kind of disappointing

[@NeoDragonCount]

Massive improvement over the canon Grogar, I will fight anyone who claims otherwise. Also I was one of the voices behind the specters. Thanks for having me Scribbler.

[@abrakadabra6364]

Great work

[@mikistenbeck6517]

yea, in this and the story before this Grogar truely lives up to his "Terror of Tambalon" nickname.

[@joshuaball5916]

Don't you dare say fight anyone who claim otherwise!

[@yazmenakamura6750]

Or you can look at it this way. Spoiler Warning. Don't click Read More if you don't want to be Spoiled on the Season 9 Finale. Grogar was actually Discord in disguise. If anything, reforming Discord was a Mistake, and now all of Ponyville is gone because of him (or specifically Silver Spoon if we're going to be precise).

[@ditzydoo4378]

Oh yes, Yes, YES!!! I have been Soooo hoping for a sequel to that devilishly dark Grogar series you all did back in 2018. Jade Ring is simply as wonderful as are you Scribbler. I see that Christmas wishes Do come true.

[@ryanlozano9086]

@Rach it got canceled

[@MichelleandHoodwink]

Needless to say, I'm surprised that town name hasn't been used more often in MLP fanfics, Tho Apple Valley irl is a rural desert lol. Lived in a neighboring town when I was a kid

[@thomascrain4832]

Jade Ring here! What a lovely Christmas surprise this was. The full song caught me off guard, I won't lie, but it was fun to hear the fleshed out lyrics. How about some notes? -I happened to be sitting at my computer around Christmas last year and realized out of the blue that it had been five years since I wrote 'Grogar.' Not wanting to let a good anniversary sneak by, I quickly got this out just in time for the holiday. -The tone of this is very much inspired by the Stephen King short story "One for the Road," wherein King revisits the town of Jerusalem's Lot sometime after the events of his vampiric best seller. Revisting sites of past horrors seemed like fertile ground, and it became the basis of this one. -The year after 'Grogar,' I actually started a full on sequel called 'Screams Upon a Winter's Night,' wherein I tried to see how their trauma would affect the surviving kids as adults AND tie in the events of the recently released "Hearth's Warming Tail" episode. It... was too much. Only the first chapter got finished, but the full plot can still be read on the story page. -As of this year, I've actually started plotting yet another visit to Apple Valley. Not to give too much away, but it would seem that there were maybe a few others besides the remaining kids who happened to be out of town that fateful night. Who knows? Maybe when that one's finished, it'll get it's own amazing reading from Scribbler!

[@MirrenTheDragonKnight]

I hope you do write that second visit :).

[@davidfarmer2047]

More of this wonderful tale please.

[@ryanlozano9086]

Oh my god your the auther of the story

[@thomascrain7726]

@@ryanlozano9086 Yes I am.

[@ryanlozano9086]

@@thomascrain7726 it’s an honor to meet you

[@Rockhoppr3]

It ain't a proper Hearth's Warming celebration with Scribbler without some horror and heartbreak! And some impromptu singing too, that's nice!

[@CrimsonShade007]

YESSSSS SCRIBBLER YOU AHVE MADE MY CHRISTMAS WITH THIS STORY seeerious flashbacks to Grogar: A hearthswarming horror. One of my all time faves

[@summersweete09]

I heard the gorgar story for the first time just the other day! This was spliendid just the right amount of tragic and terrifying I love stories that draw fear without restoring to blood and gore great job!

[@kingstar5494]

Now that’s very disturbing imagine calling for help and no one is able to hear you. Now that’s terrifying. And also the story was also pretty sad if you think about it because the entire town was frozen then demolished And forgotten ,Now that’s a sad way for a Town to end Not to mention Everyone that went “missing”

[@CheezerTheGrate]

This makes things truly horrifying knowing that the Mane 6 were probably there with the young fillies that night begging to be seen.. ponyville probably begs every hearthswarming eve to be seen and visited by the princess and to be saved But… I bet they all are happy that those four survived.. except for maybe the riches though

[@nikitaheredia416]

I wonder if Luna could see into their dreams and hearing the voices of the others……

[@CT-BONITA]

What a delight to see a sequel to this Christmas story, Merry Christmas Scribbler.

[@RadiantBleu]

Always a pleasure working with you Scribbler! ❤️

[@RadiantBleu]

It was fun voicing a frozen zombie! Thank you again Scribbler !

[@derpfrancis]

Let all those who recall His tale recall the lesson that it brings forth should one forget the meaning of Hearths Warming, and those who know His name recall the chill in one's bones when not even a whisper can protect thy from His memory; let all those merriers sing of the warmth and the joy of this holiday season yet their songs reach even the coldest of hearts on this merry night; let all those who have seen His face know of the bells that come for those that do wrong even on the merriest of nights this holiday season, and to know when it is time to fear the jingles carried in the wind; let all those who know of Grogar know that he is winter's cruelest lesson and its coldest part should the sinners ring out that they care not this night nor the Tartarus they bring down upon everyone they know; let all those that carry His bells ring them tonight and remember how even the smallest of mercies can often be the only mercy He ever gives

[@TheCommenterDragon]

Such a delightful and stupendous reading once again Scribbler and friends i love it, you all did a topnotch job narrating this story a very Happy Hearth's Warming to you all!!!

[@TheGamingChefKen]

There has to be a happy ending to this series, it's to good to just leave everypony in Grogar's grasp. There has to be a way to save them, it's hearthwarming Eve. Scribbler, please make one last sequel that has a miracle where everypony gets saved.

[@ThatOneMan830]

Outstanding work. The author did a phenomenal job and you and your friends did a brilliant effort in bringing it to life.

[@chelbiexhunter]

when I saw this get posted me and my gf instantly started to watch it! we watched the first one and it broke our hearts for the ending, but it was a amazing story to listen, to share, and to and imagine it all while listening with others. When watched this one we were both silent at the edge of our seats listening to it all, the ending was even better. Keep up the amazing work everyone! merry Christmas and happy hearth's warming!

[@roukerasati9611]

I loved the original story and have re-watched it an unhealthy amount of times over the years, and probably still will- as everyone did such an amazing job! I knew when I read the sequel that I was looking forward to seeing what y'all would do and I was not disappointed. It's spooky and amazing! I love this.

[@thehowlinggamer5784]

Wow. Making Grogar like Krampus. Nice.

[@MirrenTheDragonKnight]

Ey, a fellow Scot is in here! I was meaning to read this story for aaaggges, so it's nice to see I can just listen to in my busy days... And I love it. I left a review on over on the website, so all I'll say is that you always good voice actors, Scribbler.

[@quintonjones2699]

I didn’t know that there was a sequel to the this story but I love it and also Happy Hearth’s Warming

[@lahannasingh8598]

Oh my goodness Scribbler darling you didn't! Oh, this is wonderful! I remember reading the first story and loved it! It was just the right amount of heartbreaking and terrifying at the same time and now a sequel oh you are so good! Love you hun 😁😘

[@vladivoices]

What a wonderfully creepy sequel to one of my favorite stories!

[@kimskreaturekomforts]

Wicked! Awesome story and performed really well. I was really caught up in.

[@blackroseknight77]

keep the hearth's warmin spirit alive or die tryin.. Wonderful Sequel! I really enjoyed this an the first one. Scribbler's de best in autofic business! 🎄 Happy Hearth's Warming!

[@arwolf1354]

I love it love it love it from the first story i never expected a continued one the second i heard the first line my face had to biggest smile got so excited thank you scribbler for the wonderful stories you do

[@bethanyhaffey975]

OH MY GOD THANK YOU!!!! 😅.....sorry I got real into the "grogar" story when I first heard it from your channel and when i went on to mlp fimfiction i saw this a prayed that you would read this! I kinda made it a tradition to listen to the Christmas horror stories you read, old and new.......that's not creepy or stalkerish is it?

[@XephinaTheEleven]

An absolutely phenomenal sequel to an already haunting story!!! 👏👏👏

[@joshuagoforth1658]

Oh hell yes the first one was amazing 😍

[@koraknight6995]

And this is why I start making Christmas presents early… and play Christmas music the night of Christmas (hearts warming) eve and day. Beautifully done and now I shall not be able to get any sleep.

[@smc0718]

Oh *YES!!* i definitely enjoyed Grogar very much. So glad to see a follow up. And the lore for this is also great.

[@SuperBluethedog]

This is soooo 😎 awesome! I thought I was gonna have to settle for the cliff hanger of the last story. I had no idea there was a sequel!

[@kingk1rby]

Yoooo a sequel to the only my little pony horror fic to actually creep me out?

[@sampalmer7102]

I want somebody to get interested into the story and go to visit the cutie Mark crusaders because I believe that sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom are the ones in the insane asylum

[@bendewalt5560]

And then they went and told celestia, and the next year on hearthwarming eve, ol groggie found a nasty surprize waitin'

[@mushu1105]

For realzz!!! THANK YOU SCRIBBLER FOR A GROGAR SEQUEL!!!!!

[@zozupskystar8639]

That story was amazing! What a great sequel!

[@Bunni-6942]

So happy this is out! I loved the first one and listened to it every Xmas 🎄 This is gonna be awesome 👏

[@wendydomino]

When Grogar kidnapped the ponies, including Granny Smith, they turned into foals. Why does Rarity look like a full grown mare again suddenly?

[@Epic11705]

20:14 This song is a mlp parody carol of ‘good king Wenceslas’

[@Devonlui]

Wishing merry christmas doesn't mean much when i don't celebrate it, but merry christmas everypony

[@abinatorholmes5030]

Scribbler you have done it again!!! I have no words of this new story!!! The boys who play as the stallions sound so beautiful when they singed 10 out of hundred!!! They did fantastic everyone did!! XD!!! I hope you and your family including the cast families and everyone else have a great Christmas and a happy hearth’s warming!

[@bendewalt5560]

Groggar: mwahaha more ponies for me to...wait...are they...singing, ugh more christmas carols, i thought i had enough working retail...ugh, just stop! FOR GOODNESS SAKE!!!

[@craftyarts7431]

My excitement rises as my curiosity peaks

[@hmhsbritannic1292]

The main 6es looks more creepy then Gorgar but this horror story is amazing

[@SeamlessShelf35]

I did not expect a sequel of Grogar, but wow!

[@ryanlozano9086]

Well this isn’t really the sequel in the official fanfic author

[@nilgnoimv2803]

So this is the sequel to Grogar series... and he did this much damage. However since belongs to Hasbro... Yawgmoth: hold my blood soaked chalice.

[@magicdawn1973]

My ONLY complaint about this one is that the fire gif flickers as a black rectangle when it loops and that was a little distracting 😅 Fantastic and chilling (lol) work as usual!

[@fluttershyandfriends]

Omg I loved grogar a heart's warming horror story I can't believe their is a sequel this is so good I loved it

[@trexadvent4726]

What do you think happened to Spike and the rest of the gang in this fanfiction?

[@cartoonfangirl_1136]

Well if i remember correctly applejack died in first story i have no idea if the others survived or not

[@gothmoth6293]

They all died

[@knightspearhead5718]

Stories like this are why i love MLP

[@carolinecheney]

This was good. I was laughing and tapping my foot to the song, lol.😂

[@ЖаксатРахманов]

Oh my! Oh my! I love this! Gosh, that Rarity was horrifying... And Grogars bells are ringing around! Awesome! (Also I leave the like for yours hard work😃✨)

[@FriendsOfSon-uvaDash]

Did Rarity turn selfish? Or was she possessed? Or... die, eventually?

[@ЖаксатРахманов]

@@FriendsOfSon-uvaDash. She the lost spirit too. Like others.

[@FriendsOfSon-uvaDash]

@@ЖаксатРахманов She's a ghost, then? Oh man! I'm sorry for her!

[@angel-nv7jk]

I wonder if they can be saved... Celestia help ponyvilles' citizens pass on

[@adrianbaker1411]

Epic! I’m so glad our heroes got out of there! Super creepy lol

[@monicadelgado5296]

At least these guys didn’t went insane and saw their town get destroyed and one of them getting caught by grogar

[@Kik3509]

Wow this was so scary and awesome at the same time great job everyone!!!

[@SuperSpike47]

Merry early Christmas everyone.and amazing video scribbler 😊

[@Lisafay22]

Happy hearth's warming eve Scribbler

[@mikaylawollam8]

Marry Christmas scribbler productions and happy new year 🎊🎆 and I love your Christmas videos so much

[@grimreaper345]

So is groger still around when the pony divided in next gen? I wonder have a happy hearths warming and to that cast ty for amazing Holliday stories !

[@anyamazing7619]

when i first saw the white unicorn I knew it was Rarity

[@nikitaheredia416]

At first I thought it was a grown up version of Sweetybell…or one of Pinkies sisters…

[@TheSailentOneFrostlight9675]

Merry Christmas Scribbler!! ❤🌲🎉☃❄☃

[@AuraKnight-kn1ux]

Nice Sequel to the grogar horror story Miss Scribbler this was terrifying to say the least but so informative as well will you do another next year I hope ❤️💙. Kind Regards AuraKnight 😉 Also Merry Christmas to you & your family & friends & please stay safe 👍👍.

[@spoopymotives1084]

Absolutely amazing

[@bendewalt5560]

This is like the 6-10th story at least where christmas carols are wraponized against something or other...like is there a class ponies attend to learn this, where's that story...

[@icandoanythingproduction1100]

These stories will always give me the shivers great job as always the funny thing about legends is that some time it might just be true so for goodness sake Be nice to everyone because he is always watching he’s always listening so be nice because if you are naughty then might faintly hear the sound of a bell and rusty chains and by then it’s already too late

[@ltrm75]

I'm glad we got a sequel, but could we get the adult side of this? Learning the adults side with rejecting friendship

[@brandonboltz647]

Merry Christmas Scribbler and merry Christmas everyone or should I say Hearths warming

[@AbigailP02]

God I want 1v2 celesta x Luna vs grogar

[@trexadvent4726]

Was Rarity possessed by Grogar?

[@justinw-s1694]

Someone has gotta tell Princess Celestia about this, surely she can do something? Anything? She does have a whole year to plan.

[@gren8te319]

12:57 grogar's definitely real now

[@CrazyGreenFluff]

they HAVE to tell celestia!!!

[@HandheldGamer1991]

There is a sequel? Welph today is the 24th here in Poland so the timing is just right :D

[@krismoon3901]

find happy place, find a happy place, find a happy place!

[@EmeraldLilly94]

One question remains. Who would win? Grogar or the Candy Mare?

[@FriendsOfSon-uvaDash]

Is that... The Mane 6 that I see in the background?! Why do they look dead?! I don't like this! Dang it, Grogar! You old punk! You wanna come at me then? Come on, boomer! Yeah, come at me, boomer!

[@obsidianfury5133]

0:00

[@MasterKen1803]

But what happened to Apple Bloom, Diamond Tiara, Sweetie Belle & Button Mash? What happened to all of them?

[@sammielopez620]

I think their fates are up to you to decide. There was another sequel to the first, but it was cancelled.

[@MasterKen1803]

@@sammielopez620 Ya know what I just decide? I decide that Apple Bloom, Diamond Tiara, Sweetie Belle, and Button Mash journey to Tambelon and defeat Grogar once and for all and bring back others. This is the true ending for the story. At least if the author writes it again.

[@jcj268]

@@sammielopez620 what was the story?

[@MasterKen1803]

@@jcj268 Grogar: A Christmas Horror Story

[@jcj268]

@@MasterKen1803 thanks

[@Sparky855]

I enjoy watching these i hope there's more in the future ^w^

[@obsidianfury5133]

15:00

[@davidmoreira8191]

that was fantastic

[@Frederick-San]

Here's a ❤️ from me Scribbler!

[@vampsjen87]

You know what I first well not really I didn’t like that the main characters were 3 random ponies but when you think about it it shows that time has really gone by of course ponyville doesn’t exist now it’s apple valley and sure I would have like it if we saw anything of the 4 fillys mentioned in copper’s story but whatever hopefully there’s more to this story trilogy anyone

[@kingemo7806]

Just got done listening to this the story was good

[@hmhsbritannic1292]

I wonder if applejack is trying break free to see applebloom again

[@aphmeoowfan7053]

Ok before I go and give myself nightmares if i'm able to sleep after this which one is more scary the first one or this one so I can try to prepare for the scares Edit: I was doing so good with not getting scared until I just got to 16:12 their no longer alone I don't want to unpause it now I know it's going to get worse... I'll be back Edit: ok this was definitely less scary for the simple fact there was no one getting hurt or killed for me I think the scariest part was seeing HIS FACE and the main six when the tent was open... I think I'll be able to sleep tonight hopefully

[@obsidianfury5133]

10:00

[@finnthebeefyhuman2174]

Man...wish there was more of this sequel really good. I feel really bad for Rarity and the others, are they ghouls or something? They are thin as if its to indicate they are somewhat alive but still need sustenance

[@derekdumas5861]

I don’t care what it takes I’m saving those ponies

[@RedWolf777SG]

"Be good for goodness sake" Mwa-ha-ha-ha!😈

[@sebastiansaman]

Oh no, Grogar, I'm scared 😱, but I liked the story 👍 Another story like this would be: What if Grogar returns 😱