speaking of books!!! here’s my new comic book 🤍 Unfamiliar Vol 2 a.co/d/ckKaoSe
@tenedria8 ай бұрын
I liked this idea, good video c:
@xquenda2758 ай бұрын
Eek i asked for unfamiliar for Christmas (1 & 2!) i really hope i get it
@Very_Unique_Handle_28 ай бұрын
YES! YES.
@UnhealthyCatObsession..6 ай бұрын
hello! what app do you use to draw? i want to try drawing on computers.
@xquenda2756 ай бұрын
@@UnhealthyCatObsession.. I think she uses photoshop
@tangledheadphonecord42859 ай бұрын
"i know its not the most natural pose, but this isnt the most natural prose" was an ICONIC line
@dinoheartnerd22659 ай бұрын
HELL YES
@DemiseDarling9 ай бұрын
fr
@dumbysoup90119 ай бұрын
I read this as she said it 😭
@ahseymania9 ай бұрын
REALL
@Acorn9059 ай бұрын
Can i ask what a prose is? •3•
@Midnightlunar109 ай бұрын
The second girl is not built like a refrigerator. She’s built like a mini freezer.
@ahseymania9 ай бұрын
DONT DO HER LIKE THAT BHAHAAHHA
@Kanna_Kizuchi9 ай бұрын
Bro she looks like a fucking Lego character lmfao
@BeanKally9 ай бұрын
As someone built like a refrigerator I can confirm
@SemiColon.29 ай бұрын
Nah she’s built like a roblox char
@carmensfootstool73779 ай бұрын
@@SemiColon.2she looks like tgat one body package?? Like the woman one but with the rounded feet instead of the blocky ones 😭
@lozzytheuncreative9 ай бұрын
The girl described with a ‘knife edge cheekbone’ made my brain immediately go to Yzma from emperors new groove.
@Ohmygod_neilciccerega8 ай бұрын
I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY ONE-
@Polikaize8 ай бұрын
YES, EXACTLY HER
@riverselive_kdmz_84586 ай бұрын
Who the heck is that? 🤔
@blank_line5 ай бұрын
@riverselive_kdmz_8458 the main antagonist of Kuzko's life 😂
@ordinarystranger66675 ай бұрын
I was thinking Curella De Vill lol
@Burbthebirb.9 ай бұрын
As a female writer, im now changing all my female characters to look like this because this is peak character design
@kikosawa8 ай бұрын
"She walked though the door and gazed into my eyes. She looked like the most hideous creature I have ever seen."
@skibidigamingcoolpro1297 ай бұрын
@@kikosawaLMFAOOO
@LilLostSoul6 ай бұрын
@@kikosawaHELP THAT MADE MY DAY
@fern35678Ай бұрын
@@kikosawaWAIT I ACTUALLY HAVE THE POWER TO DO THIS, GIVE ME A SECOND-
@reddy161Ай бұрын
I haven't seen ONE of the designs yet, but I totally agree with you
@sincerelytheo9 ай бұрын
An unexplored alternative possibility for the lashes she could lick is that her eyelashes are totally normal, she just has a freakishly-long snake tongue, which is of course for the purpose of making it easier to lick her own eyeballs
@cutiepie1200489 ай бұрын
🤣🤣🤣
@madelinelizabeth89 ай бұрын
Or somewhere in between where her toungue is extra long but so are her lashes 😂
@lovebirddraws84759 ай бұрын
She is straight up a lizard
@internetsnail9 ай бұрын
you could even go as far as to say it isnt her tongue or lashes that are short or long but infact her face is so incredibly short that her tongue reaches her lashes
@thesittingstick72559 ай бұрын
All of these replies are horrifying i love them
@thegreatzucchiniidkalastna37439 ай бұрын
The second one actually was the author just describing stereotypically beautiful aspects in a woman, he’s obviously one of those people in love with his car
@wanderingintime9 ай бұрын
not just any car... late 80's, 90's cars..
@rubys.shibanigans9 ай бұрын
Your comment actually made me snort out loud! Can't help but to think of Queen's "I'm in love with my car", written and sung by Roger Taylor: 🎵🎶 I'm in love with my car Got a feel for my automobile Get a grip on my boy-racer Rollbar Such a thrill when your radials squeal 🎵🎶
@bxttercxp_swxxts9 ай бұрын
is that a Queen reference? haha
@Pony_Stang9 ай бұрын
I’m in love with my car too lowkey but I’d never describe my chest that way 💀
@Merilirem9 ай бұрын
...is she a transformer?
@Anonymousweirdo20008 ай бұрын
As a dude I once asked my audience how to write women and they said “Write them how you write men. Like actual people.”
@Hana-Lee19872 ай бұрын
W to that person
@Encantur9 ай бұрын
Nothing on that subreddit will ever beat the absolute silliness of the infamous "breasted boobily" post.
@Ayeeshaeditz6 ай бұрын
Where and why
@Snake-b7fАй бұрын
Wait what-? Why-
@maarshiexcryxxАй бұрын
w h a t
@Berutoruto_aotАй бұрын
LMAOO
@FletchChokieboe24 күн бұрын
"Breasting boobily, she titted down the stairs"
@iseetheendisnear24169 ай бұрын
“her f***-me shoulder blades” Ahh, the haunting imagery of shoulder blades morphing into a mouth to beg the author to sleep with their owner.
@greenapple94779 ай бұрын
Wait, is that what it said????
@jellyfishfingernail9 ай бұрын
LMFAOOOOO
@bluchismoon9 ай бұрын
@@greenapple9477yes, usually I see that describing someone's gaze (f*ck-me eyes), or something, never seen anyone describe shoulder blades that way...
@JBarlow-ee8cv9 ай бұрын
NAHH
@amiable_monster9 ай бұрын
Sometimes people should just....think what they're doing.
@autisticbaconenjoyer9 ай бұрын
im sorry but i have to laugh at how she kept using the 'giving birth to a bailing-wire' part as an example for how weird these people can get describing female characters lmao
@LavenderTowne9 ай бұрын
i could not get over it,,, i could not move on
@TNP-9 ай бұрын
@@LavenderTownepraying they meant the entire coil and NOT a singular wire
@ettaetta4399 ай бұрын
Dude, authors like these loveee to specify puberty features when it comes to young girls and teens. It's like their fav thing to point out "budding breasts" or "growing hips" or birthing ability specifically towards young characters. Major creep vibes, to be that focused on a young girl's growing process.
@autisticbaconenjoyer9 ай бұрын
@@TNP- damnit now thats making me giggle even more lmaooo
@autisticbaconenjoyer9 ай бұрын
@@ettaetta439 yeeah, its why i tend to avoid older books. but [unfortuneately] it happens in a LOOOOT of fanfics too. its one thing to want to describe your characters well enough that the reader can visualize them as if they knew them in the real world. but pointing out things like uhm...that? yeah no. its like an immediate ick for me. bonus points if the reader has actually had experience with a pedo preying on them like that..
@suneater_zeef0509 ай бұрын
i find it funny how the second author went into so much detail describing her square elegance but with the face he felt "her face was nice too btw" was enough haha
@Rilesjean9 ай бұрын
the way you drew the first girl is just... so compelling? like man idk what it is about her giant eyes and ridiculous lashes, i just love her lol
@elisabetlagato15209 ай бұрын
It’s very shojou 😅
@Wheeinpaint9 ай бұрын
Haha same. It looks weird but I love it. The big eyes makes her look cute
@kikosawa8 ай бұрын
And this foot, mmmm
@AshKittenPKXD6 ай бұрын
it’s her art style i think
@randomhuman2318Күн бұрын
I was thinking the same thing 😂
@SwordTune9 ай бұрын
As a man who writes mostly female characters... I don't feel called out, because I write them like people.
@It-Could-Be-Fun-Tho9 ай бұрын
THANK YOU!
@onigiri80469 ай бұрын
Yo that confidence
@devilslayer35489 ай бұрын
What is writing females correctly means
@bluelfsuma9 ай бұрын
Good on you, not feeling the need to apologize for something you're not responsible for.👍
@Spookatz.9 ай бұрын
well you start by not using the term "females" to describe people@@devilslayer3548
@glitterytrash9 ай бұрын
Is it bad that I still think they're actually kinda pretty in their own unique way?
@superfoxgal9 ай бұрын
nah bro/girl, they are kinda pretty.
@axe-tq2wn9 ай бұрын
It’s thanks to her artstyle
@andpeg9 ай бұрын
No, they’re very cute in her style
@sillyclowntown9 ай бұрын
the way haley draws makes everything look pretty
@Milk-ck1wv9 ай бұрын
it's the art style
@lilylin42849 ай бұрын
“With lashes so long that sometimes she could lick them” Gurl what 😭😭😭
@th4t0neMairy-_-9 ай бұрын
Yeah that must look kinda creepy😅
@Ohmygod_neilciccerega8 ай бұрын
ONLY SOMETIMES?? do they fluctuate in length?
@chipi3978 ай бұрын
how do you lick your lashes??? it literally makes no sense
@Avi_studiosАй бұрын
@@Ohmygod_neilciccerega maybe they grow really fast so she cuts them very short every day
@sparo_art9 ай бұрын
Honestly "she looked like she had been eating bees" is a pretty "men writting women" valid descritption x)
@chixkgoddess84998 ай бұрын
I don't even know what that means can someone explain 😂 Who eats bees? like i stepped on a bee expression ?
@sparo_art8 ай бұрын
In the video, Lavendertown says that the lips are so big and swollen, the girl looks like she ate a bee/ was stung by a bee on the mouth. I thought that would make a good bad descricption of big lips in a woman descritpion written by a man :D@@chixkgoddess8499
@catbatrat17607 ай бұрын
@@chixkgoddess8499 I think she was comparing this woman's lips to the lips of someone with a bee allergy getting stung.
@Blackbird747339 ай бұрын
I hate women's hips being described in terms of giving birth.
@iEemeee9 ай бұрын
Same, it’s just disturbing tbh
@Pandie28289 ай бұрын
Right like it can be a genuine medical concern to have narrower hips in the context of birth. So, it weird to throw that out so flippantly
@bumblebeagan9 ай бұрын
agreed, whenever they do it it just feels like they only see women as baby making tools :[
@Hiraeth_Nightshade9 ай бұрын
People said that a few times to me when I was a teen (which makes it worse) and I found it so creepy.
@SuperiorGothCat9 ай бұрын
But is basic biology, lol.
@piperricca78329 ай бұрын
“she looks like she’s been eating bees” the author should have combined this line with the 16 year old girl
@nineblackgoats9 ай бұрын
At least she would have been eating something, poor dear.
@elainez9 ай бұрын
@@nineblackgoatsYeah. Is bailing wire girl eating okay? I am actually a little concerned for her.
@Ashlee_alt9 ай бұрын
NOOOO THE BEES :((((((
@saddlerrye67259 ай бұрын
My friend said something like "the winner of the yearly nettle-sucking competition" once. I was reminded of that.
@kikosawa8 ай бұрын
@@elainez'least she has those shoulder blades
@Mindelan12318 ай бұрын
Sis is out here slaying while gracefully smuggling 2 toasters in her shirt. 😂💀 Great art and love the idea of drawing them as literal as possible!
@green_pikmin9 ай бұрын
I love how each girl is almost a representation of a different part of r/menwritingwomen: eyes/lashes, breasts, cheeks/hips, and finally lips (only the avatar, writer of all elements, will get the subreddits top post of all time)
@AmithystCh9 ай бұрын
They said be there or be square and this is what she did
@iEemeee9 ай бұрын
THIS HAS NO REASON TO MAKE ME LAUGH AS MUCH AS I JUST DID 😭✋
@P-P-Panda9 ай бұрын
IM DEAD BRO
@Jesicaah9 ай бұрын
LMAOOO NOOO
@samamies888 ай бұрын
a content creator friend once had "be there or be square" title on their live stream, i saw it going live on discord but didn't have time to watch.. but for some reason i had time to do simple "photoshop" (iirc i used ms paint) where i changed spongebob square pants color, clothes and face to reflect my avatars features and i shared that pic on discord with "i guess i am square then"
@thelodgersenthusiast3538 ай бұрын
girl WAS there, and she WAS square as well. get you a girl who can do both
@MaiaEmpyrean9 ай бұрын
I actually really like the square girly. In spite of the writing mistakes, I think that it's kinda nice that a non-stereotypically beautiful or feminine girl is being shown to be lovely and graceful.
@DanGabrielle9 ай бұрын
Yet they described her body in the finest details giving it all the protagonism, but when describing her face the author just wrote "and her face is pretty too" like 💀
@chimera98189 ай бұрын
She is honestly sounds like the most unique of them
@thethmooteresa9 ай бұрын
Yeup
@mmangalisomasinga4329 ай бұрын
@@DanGabrielle The author's name is Moto Moto
@valenciageode259 ай бұрын
Her description is weird for unique reasons. The author could do better, but it’s not awful. Besides looking like she’s shoplifting boxes, she looks the most human.
@JoelTheParrot8 ай бұрын
The giant eyelashes are honestly a vibe when they're SUPPOSED to be cartoony. wh- THE SHOULDER BLADES?!? SIXTEEN!!?!?!
@sketchbook87259 ай бұрын
I like they they are trying to describe beautiful women but when you draw out and see what they are describing it actually becomes something horrifying
@MissSirenita9 ай бұрын
I always thought the whole “hips so thin she could not give birth to a baling wire” was talking about how extreme the beauty standard was and how predatory the modeling agency was. I pictured her severely underweight with her collar bone showing and ribs showing and all that and found it super sad
@Marrianno9 ай бұрын
Tbh, if this book realy is about horrors of modeling agency, than description of main character realy got the point across and could be considered actualy good
@xxaavviieerrrrr9 ай бұрын
exactly i took it as a hyperbole for how thin you must be to be considered in the modelling industry
@odacova33199 ай бұрын
Could be, but I ain’t gonna read to book find out.
@VOlDNOVA9 ай бұрын
@@Marrianno I doubt, the title of the book is "Easy Prey". "orz
@moonstarstories12989 ай бұрын
That description was the creepiest for me. Talking about a sixteen year old giving birth in her description like that.
@delaineyjohnson42629 ай бұрын
I’m sorry, but I want someone to write a story using all of these as the protagonists.
@alizaaa17619 ай бұрын
Someone please do that I will read it immediately!
@chimera98189 ай бұрын
With the majestic box girl has the mc
@ashkash95819 ай бұрын
Or maybe an animated reality TV show bc 😂
@Ry-miosis8 ай бұрын
I might do it lol
@delaineyjohnson42628 ай бұрын
Ok everyone, now we just have to think of a name.
@readingdino7119 ай бұрын
I'm a guy who writes a lot of female characters and I am so glad that I studied up on my women's anatomy before writing women and I'm also glad that I love this subreddit because it's so funny how some men write women. Like just write them as people, it's not that hard and when you need to describe things such as periods (I tend to include mentions of those in my books because they're just part of every day life), just do your research.
@animationcomicsstudiosatcs77338 ай бұрын
I’m sorry, you’ve dropped this, you beautiful human being: 👑 But fr, let’s normalize this sheet!
@ItsDaJax8 ай бұрын
When I found that subreddit, I aspired to never be a subject of scrutiny.
@kikosawa8 ай бұрын
"Her hips were breedable in the most anatomical way possible"
@DesmoTwanipop9 ай бұрын
Because of LavenderTowne's distinctive art style, I feel like these gals could be a friend group! XD
@mostlyghostey9 ай бұрын
The way you drew the “easy prey” girl reminds me of what happens when your legs atrophy after you’ve been in a wheelchair for a long time. Which don’t get me wrong people in wheelchairs are just as gorgeous as anyone else.
@satellitestargazer27709 ай бұрын
I thought the exact same thing I just didn't know how to say it. It looks like it could be someone with a disability.
@airplanes_aren.t_real9 ай бұрын
It's kind of funny to think that if they actually went with the route the character would have looked less nightmare fuel
@HiBuddyyyyyy9 ай бұрын
I don’t think it changes your waist and hips size though?
@jellyfishfingernail9 ай бұрын
@@HiBuddyyyyyywell of course not but in a cartoon art style things can be exaggerated
@HiBuddyyyyyy9 ай бұрын
@@jellyfishfingernail oh yeah, that makes more sense. Sorry for misunderstanding.
@elizabetholson15619 ай бұрын
I don't know if I can get over the "lashes so long that sometimes she could lick them." I wonder if they continuously grow, like the hair on a person's head 💀
@bleh3299 ай бұрын
"What? You mean to tell me women don't try to lick their eyelashes???" - male author
@EvTheFlickFan8 ай бұрын
I hate how it reminded me about The Man from Nantucket 😭
@4feels8 ай бұрын
No because the picture of eyelashes that long isnt even attractive at all anymore. 😭
@ItsDaJax8 ай бұрын
Imagine waking up and your eyelashes are so long, they got tangled and fused with eye boogers, your eyes can't open. 😂😂
@hayleybartek86438 ай бұрын
@@ItsDaJax I remember a show that had a "city" girl with mascara so thick her eyelashes had trouble opening sometimes. It was played for laughs.
@Crystre9 ай бұрын
The way the girl friend was describing that one girl was one of the gayest things I’ve heard today. In my head all I could see was the girl rapidly describing every detail and being like “no you don’t understand, she’s perfect! Let me tell you everything I love about her appearance!” While the guy is kinda concerned about how down bad this girl is.
@aviendhaandreoli40788 ай бұрын
That’s actually kinda true! I read the book and there is a heaven “gay-but-don’t-say-gay-because-it’s-the-90s” vibe the whole series. They even kinda get married later in the series but… not really it’s weird.
@Kahli218 ай бұрын
If you're talking about the last one - the series has explicitly homosexual relationships that are common and unremarkable in society, meaning there is no stigma behind them. The culture of the woman doing the describing of her friend is such that talking about the physical form of another person is not a sexual thing. They see nothing wrong with nudity even between sexes, and are open about sexual relationships (not to say they are all just constantly screwing, they aren't). The woman talking about her friend is supporting her and listing her good qualities, and knows that the man she's talking to DOES like her friend (he is not the same culture as them). There is nothing wrong with this in her culture. HIS culture is very restrained, so it seems exaggerated even more to him. If he didn't stop her from talking more, then she would have gone into more detail and talked about her personality too. BTW, tomatoes don't have to be super red, they can be pale pink and other shades too. And "fine and well-rounded" bosom doesn't mean big, it just means that the shape is nice. The other commenter talking about the 2 women being "married" is incorrect about what the relationship is between them. They both love the man, and he loves them (and gets both pregnant), but there is no marriage. The women do NOT have a sexual relationship between them, they are friends as close as sisters. The relationships are important to the story as they are exploited by the antagonists, especially one who loved a previous incarnation of the man and is now extremely jealous of the women.
@evers_clawАй бұрын
@@Kahli21 Are you the author defending your book 🤨
@thejawajedi8711 күн бұрын
@evers_claw the author is dead 😅 I love his series but yeah, he sucked at women.
@xero11349 ай бұрын
I love that the first girl looks like she stared into the void, then put it in her gaze to make everyone experience what she did
@4akrosslastname7649 ай бұрын
If you turn the third girl cheek bones into literal knives I think you might just have a new creepypasta on your hands.
@mer_acle81019 ай бұрын
"you might wonder how I ended up with these scars..."
@omegabet39128 ай бұрын
Ah yes, the ol' Jenny Knifecheeks.
@AFarmerCalledChicken8 ай бұрын
@mer-acle8101 “My father… he wasn’t a very good man”
@cloudy_cat118117 ай бұрын
JENNY KNIFECHEEKS 🤣@@omegabet3912
@oatmeal_1016 ай бұрын
Edwina Scissorcheeks
@Bunny_Bill9 ай бұрын
As a male writer, I don't understand how things like that even come up. I never even THINK about my characters chest or screwability
@dollycheesecakes36589 ай бұрын
Its just incels who write this stuff. So long as your not an incel, I presume your writing will stay fine
@amiable_monster9 ай бұрын
Right? Like...do you have any self-awareness or understand that you're writing book that everyone would see and read, not just you?
@SuperiorGothCat9 ай бұрын
I was about to take serious that "men writing women" subreddit, but then I remember that she hulk and captain marvel are written by women, and Kim Wexler and Carmela Soprano are written by men. Reddit just being reddit.
@SuperiorGothCat9 ай бұрын
@@dollycheesecakes3658 The writers who are criticized in that subreddit have wives and kids, wtf are you talking about? "Incels are men who do something I don't like".
@mmangalisomasinga4329 ай бұрын
You don't? I do. I just don't write it.
@mr.tweaty8 ай бұрын
2:04 If i saw someone with lashes like that, I'm getting outta there before I get sacrificed.
@Abitopia9 ай бұрын
0:32 “SOMETIMES”??? 😭😭😭 HOW IS IT ONLY SOMETIMES
@Soapz_drawzzz9 ай бұрын
The way they describe women scares me sometimes 💀
@airplanes_aren.t_real9 ай бұрын
Those guys saw a woman their whole life and decided to take inspiration from kitchen appliances and infrastructure
@drfluffff9 ай бұрын
OH MY GOD A WILD SPOOKY MONTH FAN!!!!!!!! HI!!!!!!
@Soapz_drawzzz9 ай бұрын
@@drfluffff YES HAIIIIII
@WhatABinglylittlescronklylil-9 ай бұрын
Men tend to have a problem with thinking women are always about trying to look pretty, or be feminine all the time. I have no idea why so many men have so much difficulty when writing women, you literally just write a character Who goes by she/her It’s not hard
@drfluffff9 ай бұрын
@@Soapz_drawzzz AAAAAAA ITS SO RARE TO FIND US OUTSIDE OUR NATURAL HABITAT!!!!!!!! HELLOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
@sillyclowntown9 ай бұрын
as a girl, i can confirm, i think of myself as having "lips made for kissing" and frequently make out with my own reflection /j
@lorddumb219 ай бұрын
Huh
@galaxyjam37429 ай бұрын
You joke but when I pass I mirror I genuinely think "Damn"
@psycho-delicpyromaniac95959 ай бұрын
@@galaxyjam3742ngl same, I always think I'm kinda ugly the moment I'm not looking at my reflection...then when I actually see myself I am pleasantly surprised.
no like srsly i look at myself and think "how am i single"?@@galaxyjam3742
@eeeev_aa9 ай бұрын
11:33 "she looks a little bit like she's been eating bees" so many good sentences in this video
@eeeev_aa9 ай бұрын
i would love a part 2 of this
@igotdisconnectedno9 ай бұрын
"this is suggesting a narrowness of the hips that is haunting and terrifying" THAT WAS SO FUNNY 😭 whoever wrote that one literally just needs to go to a gas station and talk to a woman.
@NayvieNoir9 ай бұрын
“describing a 16 year old in possibly the creepiest way I’ve ever seen” Oh it gets SO much worse
@genesisofthebetween8 ай бұрын
I’m pretty sure I’ve seen something on there about describing a 13-year-old as having “budding breasts” 🤢
@oneechanknowsbest6158 ай бұрын
@@genesisofthebetween That's typically the time they start getting them, if not sooner.
@AgTheFreeborn8 ай бұрын
@genesisofthebetween to be perfectly fair, I was a double d at 13 and had friends who were just beginning to develop. The context in which a description like that happens is of more concern to me. It could be very normal and kinda basic or super creepy depending on the perspective it's coming from.
@urcryingteacup8 ай бұрын
@@oneechanknowsbest615yeah but it’s still weird…why are you describing a child’s breasts
@oneechanknowsbest6158 ай бұрын
@@urcryingteacup Writers, I assume, have this tendency to want to be extremely specific so you can visually imagine the character in your mind. You could see someone like this in real life, and it'd be perfectly normal. All they are doing is describing that perfectly normal thing so you know what you're looking at. If it were a drawing of a teenager, you'd expect their to at least be some sort of chest size on a female character as opposed to a male one and wouldn't bat an eye if it was just an innocent drawing, but for some reason, having it described in a book is weird? I think people are overthinking it, honestly.
@stingingcake8539 ай бұрын
That last one made me remember all the time characters would be described with "ruby red lips" or "lips like ripe cherries" for characters that either don't wear make up, or wouldn't have access to make up (in general, or of those colors). Because like, that's a sort of unnatural color for lips to be. Idk, not a huge thing, just sort of funny. It's the same sort of break in realism when a character is described as having smooth legs when she lives in a time period and culture where leg shaving wasn't a thing.
@SuperiorGothCat9 ай бұрын
1. Natural red lips exist, not that red like the drawing, but exist. 2. Shaving exists since first humans.
@stingingcake8539 ай бұрын
@@SuperiorGothCat You missed my point. Most people don't have bright red lips without make up. And like, many cultures did not shave legs. Many cultures to this day do not shave legs. Oh sure the greeks and egyptians might've, but the english until the modern era didn't. It wasn't a beauty standard in america until razor companies started pushing it in like the 40s.
@Fluff_Noodles9 ай бұрын
@@SuperiorGothCat You're such a bad troll. You comment bullshit but then when people call you out on it you don't reply because there is no defense for the nonsense you're saying.
@Kat-qf7ov9 ай бұрын
@@SuperiorGothCat OP: it's not natural for people to have ruby/cherry led lips You: it's not natural for people to have lips just like how you literally just described, but I will mention that natural red hued lips do exist because I want to argue against something you never even said bro you either lack comprehension skills or just want to argue for the sake of arguing... or both
@citrus_sweet8 ай бұрын
Rosacea and that a large percentage of the world doesn't naturally have that much body hair, I guess. My mother doesn't have very much body hair because that's not a trait common to her ancestors from western africa and south east asia (neither have that much body hair naturally) but I wouldn't know what ethnicity the character in your story was.
@abhajn9 ай бұрын
10:27 To be fair though, as someone who is a huge fan of this series the context for this is actually that Aviendha (the one describing her friend) is an “Aiel person”, and these people have no boundaries AT ALL in these kind of things and all the women in it are sort of gay (it’s never made explicitly clear but that’s the vibe I always got from them)
@Kahli218 ай бұрын
Nah. They say pretty often that the Maidens sleep with guys. I don't remember any references to them sleeping with other women, and I've read the series several times. They're explicit with other characters having homosexual or even bisexual relationships, so RJ wouldn't have been coy about it. Especially with the Aiel.
@BB-TheCandleFairy9 ай бұрын
I think the most off-put part abt the “square” girl (and what proved they needed to be put on the subreddit) was the way they described the *whole* body. The body itself was described is weirdly specific details, but when they got to the face it was suddenly just “-oh, and her face was beautiful too ig (idk)” LIKE *that’s* what really cemented the fact that the author was weirdly describing this womanly character
@4feels8 ай бұрын
Literally, like man had to seriously add in the "her FACE is pretty" Like what about the rest.
@damienearl83028 ай бұрын
And it was described after it already seemed to be done with her physical description and was getting into describing how she walks, as if the author was like "Alright, finally described my character properly, now I can get into the actual story...but why do I feel like I'm forgetting som- OH, right, her face! Uhhh, I guess it's just...pretty?"
@chixkgoddess84998 ай бұрын
He first checked out her assets and then only found her face , like a true man 😂
@UberdragonGames8 ай бұрын
To be fair if you saw someone like that their face is not gonna be the defining feature lol, so it’s just an afterthought there too
@Sun_S3t_22_Official6 ай бұрын
This would be definetly me but with plots. I imagine the most detailed, especific and complex lore and then I just wake up and remember that I need a plot.
@kittentea41019 ай бұрын
I'm surprised at how Lavendertowne always gets such creative ideas for her videos. No wonder why she's so beloved in the art community
@CasperCanvasАй бұрын
As someone who was in the modeling industry from 8-16. It’s definitely creepy like this. You have to be unhealthily skinny, having scars on your body could be the death of you, and you have to style your hair so much it gets damaged. And the agency is DEFINITELY CREEPY. Kids that aren’t even in middle school have to wear really revealing clothes, and have to wear so much makeup it takes a day to get off. And they also give you insecurities you didn’t even know you had like “Your arms are too muscular, you look like a guy!” It’s a sick… sick system…
@Narzissist8 ай бұрын
She looked like a car …And her face was beautiful. Just wtf 😂
@shr1mpsush19 ай бұрын
"Eyelashes so long, she could like them." She got them Patrick Star eyelashes
@sparaxisblanc24738 ай бұрын
"He'll probably give us 40 lashes!" "Ohh noo!"
@lyannnnnnnwolf9 ай бұрын
The last one is actually kinda terrifying cuz she doesn't have even a hint of emotion, there's absolutely nothing behind those gem-like eyes, just the sound you'd expect to hear when the void's calling you lol Edit: I'd love another video like this! It's both hilarious, unsettling, and thought inducing. I agree with the other comments, I adore the second girl!!
@aino-kaisav55046 ай бұрын
Robert Jordan apparently goes overboard with equally describing everything. Wheel of Time is actually a really good fantasy series but even the fans joke how ridiculously over-board Jordan's descriptions go.
@roseville4129 ай бұрын
7:40 not the Cruella de Ville cheekbones💀😭😭😭
@siilverREAL9 ай бұрын
i think its crazy that in the second one it describes her as "moving on the fronts of her feet" like thats desirable OR graceful. like i walk on tip toes as a habit and i trip like 5 times a day. and not in a "perpetual dance" way in an eating shit on the concrete on the regular way
@wutguycreations9 ай бұрын
As a guy writer, I always see a lot of other guys write women in the weirdest of ways. I know it's tough to write someone who has had different experiences, but come on it can't be THAT hard right???? I always try to make all of my characters as realistic as possible in terms of personality and design and stuff. I know I'm not perfect but I'm working to get better all the time!
@4feels8 ай бұрын
In this day and age all you have to do is add more then just pale hour glasses and your practically the best male writer dont worry. (Partly joke)
@RacingPepe8 ай бұрын
You know you can just ask women for their experiences. You don't have to know anything or learn anything. Just listen and take notes.
@sophiamcl8 ай бұрын
My advice would be to always remember that women are not aliens or a different species, so most of their experiences are simply people experiences, just like the ones you have.
@cryingwatercolours81279 ай бұрын
the first description: woman has feet, lashes, eyes, shoulders… there’s literally no description of what she actually looks like
@neriumsuitedher8 ай бұрын
And yet she is probably the most described character in the books
@kikosawa8 ай бұрын
What, you've never seen a woman? She probably looks somewhat like them
@AshKittenPKXD6 ай бұрын
@@kikosawawhat’s a woman
@kikosawa6 ай бұрын
@@AshKittenPKXD a man, but different
@ReiAnikaAyanami6 ай бұрын
@@kikosawawhat's a man
@Trashpanda.archived9 ай бұрын
I love how you draw 😩 i know the characters are creepy and weird but even when scary the hair is sooo beautiful or the HANDS and anatomy (proper anatomy, not the one with shrunk hips lmfao) is so beautifullllll. I love when you draw plump girls too, don’t get me wrong. They look so amazing but i dont see their skin as much, the skin/anatomy is hidden behind clothes so i appreciate the ones with tank tops more. Im now realizing how creepy this sounds but artists please tell me you understand what i mean 🥲 ya know when you find good reference or inspo and you really like it and wanna draw it but its hard to draw a pose with clothes??
@UrLocalViolinist8 ай бұрын
1:00 Actually, high arches are very commonly talk about in ballet like how they “want high arches” or “how terrible it is to have high arches in pointe shoes” 😂
@-SunnyShinesBright-9 ай бұрын
Just from the title I can tell it’s going to be amazing and hilarious
@abriishpotato47299 ай бұрын
The long lashes are kind of cool but I can't imagine how HEAVY that would feel
@CaramelTillies9 ай бұрын
Imagine them just getting stuck in your eye aswell 😭
@mer_acle81019 ай бұрын
imagine having to wear glasses with these
@Btw.electric_spacez9 ай бұрын
The "she's going full minecraft mode" had gotten me, I was already laughing a little lol
@Nox-box448 ай бұрын
Im now inspired to write some characters (both male) who are trying to get their friend back with his ex girlfriend and are describing her weirdly, while the boy theyre trying to convince is just horrified.
@bowkatiewow9 ай бұрын
What male authors think women think when they look in the mirror: “my flawless white skin and lush lips. Stunning” What we actually think: “what in the cinnamon toast fuck has sprouted on my face overnight!?”
@Aaa-vp6ug9 ай бұрын
Or: “Great, that bruise STILL hasn’t healed, I should get that checked out.”
@spam-el3ee9 ай бұрын
"Dang. I guess them eyebags are permanent huh"
@puggyboy6949 ай бұрын
@@spam-el3ee Relatable as a guy, too.
@Pupsuli8 ай бұрын
Sometimes when I look in to the mirror, I start to think about how weird and bald humans look compared to other animals and I start to freak out... XD
@puggyboy6948 ай бұрын
@@Pupsuli We have the worst skin. Other mammals have hair that keeps them warm, but we have to purchase our equivalent. Now we're more vulnerable to cold temperatures and sunburns.
@MollyMustache8 ай бұрын
4:36 Even tho I saw the cube-boobs in the thumbnail, I STILL nearly choked on my dinner from wheeze-laughing once you started shading them in. 😭
@IDONTWANTANAMEARGH8 ай бұрын
ITS HILARIOUS
@Funkyism.8 ай бұрын
4:56 SHE LOOKED LIKE SHE WAS A ROBLOX CHARACTER
@sanannybananny9 ай бұрын
finishing up homework before break! cannot wait to watch this new video! r/menwritingwomen is a good example of how women are stereotyped and sexualized in all types of media sometimes
@houxerablier9 ай бұрын
I love how the first description is so wild that google thought she was talking about an injury.
@bleflar91838 ай бұрын
3:08 i kinda hoped she would draw Alex from minecraft.
@Jacklo-the-catsect9 ай бұрын
As a guy who draw and writes whole world's, im glad I learned how to describe characters, and draw characters. Also I never realized how so many blonde haired girl main or side characters there are in stories
@koiyei9 ай бұрын
YEAH why did they make her 16 and then go onto talk about how hard it would be for her to give birth,,,,,,that is a child 😭
@wanderingintime9 ай бұрын
let's not forget the f-me shoulder BLADES (???) ... mixing predatory sexual desires with knives 2x already (cheek/jaw, I forget..)
@strangeanimations5889 ай бұрын
*pubescent teen. Not child.
@Youareaidiot9 ай бұрын
@@strangeanimations588does it matter? Either way it's wired as hell teens may not be little kids but there definitely not adults and there like older children in a way if that makes sense
@iam_crumb9 ай бұрын
@@strangeanimations588 still a child though, any adult would still refer to a teen as a child. I'm almost 16 and I still feel very young
@moonstarstories12989 ай бұрын
@@iam_crumb Yeah, I'm 16 and before I was a teen, I would definitely not think of 14+ as "child" just "underage" but now that I am sixteen, I do still feel that me and even other people my age are still children.
@_Gooday9 ай бұрын
As a man, I’m so sorry for our terrible women writing skills
@axe-tq2wn9 ай бұрын
Oh no, not the dude apologizing for other dudes to whom he has no relation.
@NoTax9149_banned_on_reddit9 ай бұрын
Lucy Steele and Hot Pants:
@axe-tq2wn9 ай бұрын
@@NoTax9149_banned_on_reddit *Steel Is that a m*therfucking JoJo reference?
@satunbreeze9 ай бұрын
As a trans man I'm just here for the entertainment. Why did I specify that I'm trans? Idk why did you make your comment? 😂
@nagigachamania69369 ай бұрын
@@NoTax9149_banned_on_reddityeah, Araki is some of the few male authors who knows how to write characters regardless of their gender. But he explicitly said he got some help from his wife (basically, ask people of your opposite gender how they feel or act in a certain situation and you'll learn how to write them)
@melkor978 ай бұрын
9:00 looks like enki from fear and hunger 😭😭😭
@greenbean_123ean3 ай бұрын
Whenever i feel like my writing is bad or cringy These makes me feel a LOT better Cant get musc worse than this 😂
@blindmouse16139 ай бұрын
3:48 Not the ‘Mom I threw up’ pose 💀
@onigiri80469 ай бұрын
☠️☠️☠️☠️
@tao_19 ай бұрын
when i heard "lashes so long that sometimes she could lick them" my stupid ass closed my eyes to see if my tongue could reach my eyelashes and was more disappointed in what i had just done than how disappointed my parents are with me
@lylyart5 ай бұрын
IM GONNA CRYYYYYRHDGGDGDGGWGQYYSHSD
@zoieaaliyah8 ай бұрын
0:29 so much detail damnn
@watersauce-pi3yh9 ай бұрын
5:17 “let me be square ☝️🫡🤔”
@astripedgoon65799 ай бұрын
This premise would be a great horror themed drawing. Like you could really exaggerate to make them skinwalkers.
@FluffDragonArt9 ай бұрын
The way you went at Aviendha's description of Elayne is hilarious, and I couldn't agree more. XD Although, in the book series, the whole point was that Aviendha was hyper-exaggerating to compensate for having a serious crush on the same guy she was trying to hype her friend to on top of her whole culture being seriously socially awkward by our standards. So it fit. I also had no idea love-apples was another name for tomatoes. That's so funny!
@CrescentMond9 ай бұрын
When I read the books way back then I thought that Aviendha had a crush of her own on Elayne and was in fact a bisexual disaster... Which, I mean, considering how (keeping it spoiler free) the whole thing ends up working out with Rand, well, that's just a plus
@danielbroome56908 ай бұрын
@@CrescentMond That's definitely a possibility. Doesn't exactly work with the whole "sisters" thing they go for, but still possible. I don't think it's strictly what was intended, especially with how subtle he had to be at the time with "pillow friends" etc, but it was certainly something he WAS inserting into the plot.
@neriumsuitedher8 ай бұрын
I'm just here annoyed at the people in the comments missing the context.
@Chai-the-Artist8 ай бұрын
I was searching for this comment, and I want to add that it wasn't just the crush, it was also Aiel culture lol
@Kahli218 ай бұрын
@@CrescentMond They literally went through the process to become sisters. Like, not in the sorority way, but in the "we are family" way. That's really, really disturbing thinking that. You wouldn't think of someone in a sexual way and then try to become their sibling. Homosexual relationships aren't stigmatized and they even blatantly say that there are characters who are not straight. If Aviendha was into women, then that would have come across at some point.
@claudefrollo60009 ай бұрын
Looks like she’s been “eating bees” caught me off guard
@elzies_mice4 ай бұрын
9:28 (kind of) Bet it’s a pregnancy fetish 💀
@snake-number12 ай бұрын
fr
@Gir_fan9 ай бұрын
Love the use of meme overlays, made me genuinely laugh. The first one reminds me of that one creepy drawsta that you drew.
@bluelfsuma9 ай бұрын
"Lashes so long she could lick them." Wh... What? Why... why would you want that?? That sounds extremely uncomfortable and creepy. I would've just drawn a Minecraft character for the second one.
@YayaFeiLong8 ай бұрын
1:32 "I know it's not maybe the most natural pose, but this isn't the most natural prose" Bars.
@Insert_Creativity_Here8 ай бұрын
Poet and ya didn’t know it lol
@funnyvideoguy32169 ай бұрын
The 3rd girl looks like she’d make a great monster like character, it’s pretty well designed especially in juxtaposition with her discription
@prettymuch17729 ай бұрын
That is one of my favorite subreddits, the descriptions are just mind boggling
@Glitch_Shift9 ай бұрын
“She looks a little bit like she’s been eating bees” 💀
@slavishentity67058 ай бұрын
Ur mom looks like she's been eating bees
@wrenrudnick21859 ай бұрын
Took one for the team and checked out the baling wire book and it‘s? A detective novel? Where Alie’e dies. Every sentence of the summary got steadily worse and also they reused the “knife edge cheekbones and jade green eyes” description again because they were really proud of it I guess
@astraamarante62339 ай бұрын
The arch of a character’s foot is also a really weird thing to describe unless they have some sort of condition… 😅
@Batteries519 ай бұрын
I would LOVE a part two, this was so enjoyable to watch and laugh at!! It's so creative and you did an amazing job
@Ohmygod_neilciccerega8 ай бұрын
YES
@facethreetimes9 ай бұрын
The dude describing the second girl was sooo close. Like I can see how she would look like and I know what he means it’s just…the way mans described her is out of pocket and made me think “damn…you didn’t have to do her like that” 😭 as Lavender said it was giving “so I know she isn’t conveniently attractive BUT like look tho!!! she still cute I swear” 💀
@orrangechocolate12078 ай бұрын
4:24 her chest looks like smart, glasses wearing anime character lol
@saddlerrye67259 ай бұрын
XD Thank you for this video, I laughed so hard! And the drawings are great as usual. I think the weird names are also a "see, she's Exotic!" type of thing. Like when I wrote my totally not cringe first story at 13 and gave the totally not self-insert main character a latin name to sound cool. Actually, a lot of these descriptions remind me of cringe preteen (fan)fiction.
@Luxndr9 ай бұрын
I think that with "love apples" the writer meant "caramel apples". Love Apple is how we call caramel apples here in Brazil for example (we call them "Maçã do Amor")
@Batata_com_Vida9 ай бұрын
Eu tava procurando alguém pra explicar isso KKKKKKKKKK tanto que quando ela leu eu imaginei uma boca com um lip tint bem vermelho e com gloss por cima
@Kahli218 ай бұрын
Definitely not. He meant tomatoes, but probably not the bright/intense red ones. They come in other colours/less intensity.
@SoApparentlyINeedAHandle9 ай бұрын
On the last one, it feels like the friend describing her other friend has a unresolved crush on her while trying to deny it by pushing the male character towards her 😭 And the 16 year old one was the worst 😟
@Kahli218 ай бұрын
The female character describing her friend is doing that on purpose... and they later go through a process to become sisters. Like, actual sisters, not the sorority type. They do not have a sexual relationship of any kind.
@ramonrangel012 ай бұрын
honestly i found this to be hilarious the way the woman were descripted was wild but your art work was very nice keeping to the descriptions
@skeleton_sketcher8 ай бұрын
they look like a friend group that met in middle school and stuck together and bonded over their “weird” features :) honestly i want to be their friend
@TheAcrylicWolf9 ай бұрын
literally love them all. authors can be funny when describing people lol
@XenoKnightAlpha9 ай бұрын
You absolutely know how to draw everything so cute, even when the descriptions are far from it. Fantastic editing btw.
@jamespquinlan48756 ай бұрын
Hi man here, The way he was describing the first character in the book we've hardly broken 5 minutes and it already feels like he was talking about an Eldritch horror. And the second one reminds me of a dwarf not as in someone with dwarfism a literal tolkein-esque dwarf
@emmawestergard62966 ай бұрын
You GET IT! Mormon moms (in Utah at least) name their kids SO WEIRD 😂😂😂 I am so glad this was made as a connection. Made the video 1000% better. (Other than the amazing art as always!!)