I like a lot of this, especially at the start when the base kicked I really got taken for a groovy spin That being said, I think the extremely prevelent foreground Synths that play in a different key (and I think the instruments are also not pitch shifted / tuned for each other) are more distracting from than adding to the music You dont have to be a professor, but a little bit of music theory goes a long way to instantly know what works and what doesnt Also, try avoiding instruments that drown out everything else like the piano in 6:50 Definitely keep at it, youve got talent 👍