Reading My Essays that Got Me Into UPENN (with common app tips)

This is the Common App and Questbridge personal essay that got me into the University of Pennsylvania! I applied regular decision to Penn in 2021 and I got lucky enough to get in.
Hopefully, this video provides a little insight on college essays in some way, shape, or form. There's definitely better writing somewhere out there, but this is what I wrote and what worked for me. Maybe this will provide a little bit of inspiration for the struggling high school seniors (me at one point).
It took me awhile to film this video because I was really hesitant on whether I wanted my personal essays to be read, heard, or seen by other people. I used to binge watch all these college videos when I was applying so I eventually wanted to make my own. These essays are a deeper side of me and I wanted to be more transparent. I started this KZbin channel as a video diary for myself and I'm determined to continue that journey.
Hope you enjoy and good luck! I'll be sure to read and make a couple comments on my own to provide some more advice. Feel free to comment any and all concerns so that we can get a community thread going to help each other out and provide some motivation. There's a lot more I have to say about the college admissions process so shoot me any comments/questions.
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[@saman8793]

Throughout your Questbridge essay, I got goosebumps in so many parts. The ending of the essay made me cry so much. That was so heartwarming and your such an amazing person and inspiration, you 100% deserve UPenn! Congrats!

[@vladgurmanov9064]

Omg, your essays are so amazing and great😍I literally started crying when you read your Questbridge essay. You are such a great writer and you deserve the acceptance to Penn🤩queen

[@graceyeo9864]

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[@frankfeng936]

Wow, such a touching essay. I vote this essay to be 2022 viral essay.

[@Bao_to_julie]

When I was notified Jenny Zhang just started a premiere of “The essay that got me into upenn”, I was excited!! I am prepping right now as a sophomore for these common apps!

[@teskuol]

Same!

[@lisa-ne4cd]

Girl trust me don't worry about it till your summer of junior year, u need to focus on your grades this year because some schools will want your transcript. please take the advice I didn't because I only cared about my grades last year (aka junior) and I regret it

[@miraaims]

Thank you for sharing such a personal story. You are wonderful and strong and inspiring. Hope you think of this when things get tough. As a middle child with the 'smarter' 'more studious' 'more sociable' older sibling, I can relate to the feeling of always being compared and always being in the shadow. I am glad you have grown into your own person, young as you are. You have the future in front of you and you'll do great things!

[@zhanggjenny]

Aw thank you so much for sharing. It definitely helps a lot reading comments like this because it keeps me motivated and somewhat validated. It is really hard being the middle child, but it's a burden that we're going to have to overcome. I wish you all the best

[@user-gm1my3ie4v]

wow thank you so much for sharing!