Reading & Performing the First Movie Script I Wrote... *i'm scared*

[@MakaylaLysiak]

Which script was your favorite? 1 or 2?🤔💭

[@KeilaniMartinez101]

Script 2 is so creative I love it

[@done.productions1655]

1 is def better haha

[@nicolev7420]

Loving script two!!! 😆😆😆

[@dodisdiary]

2

[@pandaqueenvictoria1203]

Defiantly the first one

[@veronicavidal5335]

Locker! Script #2 was my fav, I mean how could u not love that AmAziNg Girl scout flashback scene?! They were like "GET HER!!!!" *SLAP SLAP SLAP SLAP, RANDOM FLYING GIRL SCOUT COOKIE BOX!* 😅Also those bloopers were so funny!🤣🤪 BLOOPER GANG!!!!

[@MakaylaLysiak]

Hahaha thank you!😂

[@MauraHayden]

The re-enactments were so funny! Love watching this and your editing is so good! Great work Makayla! Literally am obsessed 🤩 (locker)

[@christahailey4730]

“LOCKER”🔒A part two definitely needs to come, This was very entertaining and we can see your acting skills come into play. I think the second script was my fav, It is HILARIOUS 😆

[@mellamojami]

Editing and acting on point. So entertaining! As a girl who used to write a lot of unfinished stories in middle school, this is very reminiscent of the kind of content a young girl would create

[@like.clarkwork]

Oh. My. God. I could never look at my first scripts LMAO. I applaud you not only reading, but PERFORMING all of these.

[@baileythefilmmaker]

Honestly, these are better than a lot of sitcoms I've seen,

[@CoraniYT]

great video 😄💯 def make a part 2 and script 2 was my favorite 🤩

[@IwishyouRoses444]

Locker 🔐 Script twos fight scene was so funny 😂 I want to see some more of script two. The bloopers 🤣

[@brisbackup]

oh, and PLZ PLZ part to the suspense is KILLING ME!!!!!!!

[@AnthonyPOG]

script 2 HAS SOOO MUCH potential *(video Idea - rewritting my old scripts and preforming them) I think this would so great to watch. This video was amazing overall and really innovative I haven't seen anyone do this on KZbin yet I loved it

[@edits.by_clove]

“Locker” We need a part 2!!! I need more! I watched the BLOOPERRRRS

[@racheldeschaine]

I like how quickly the Girl Scout scene escalated 😂

[@lilliansaari6266]

We NEED to see more of these!! They are so good 😊 (also Locker)

[@iiminty9230]

I loved this. Please make a part 2, maybe including one of your newer scripts for a comparison? The bloopers were very funny. Also Locker ☺

[@maslenka3558]

locker, blooper gang! i loved the bloopers too much! and the whole video, i needdddd part two 🤍

[@s4raa_xz]

You're a really amazing actress and i've always loved to act and i finally asked my mum to enroll me to acting classes!! Is there any tips that you would give to someone who wants to start acting or just someone thats practicing acting?

[@s4raa_xz]

Also, locker

[@s4raa_xz]

BLOOPER GANG

[@y4zsm1n]

be confident, pretend like nobody is watching and try your best

[@s4raa_xz]

@@y4zsm1n thanks! I’ll try my best😅

[@baygurl29]

@@s4raa_xz you got this! Make sure for lines you might have a friend that acts like that character, If so, study their speech and body movement.

[@callmenonku]

Apple 🍏 and thank you for posting again, love you like always and may God bless you hun❤️

[@FantasyFreakTrin]

This was a great video! I’m just starting out in my career, so in a few years, I’ll come back and look over some of my stuff too. It’s so awesome to see how far we’ve come as people and actors. Wade is the man, and also, LOCKER!

[@stefanross8129]

...... Good job and kudos for just completing a first draft of a script!! Bravo!!

[@jemimawilley4572]

That was so cool! seeing you reading your old script encouraged me to break out some of my older novels - and just like you, my younger self would dieeee if she saw my writing today! Loveee always (locker!!)

[@Swaggysausage]

I already this video is gonna be great it’s amazing to see your growth as an actress/screen writer! Ur so inspirational!

[@pepperminttree]

you literally put so much effort into ur vids🤯

[@oliviajoyorange]

That made me smile so much! Brilliant as always! I especially loved the blooper reel! Locker and BLOOPER GANG!!!

[@Thatgalfinley]

BLOOPER GANG!!!!!!😤

[@neoreulboyeojweooooooooo]

I find so funny to comeback to the stories i wrote when i was younger so this video was definitely entertaining. I relate so much to the thoughts like "why did i wrote this" or "what went through my mind" lmao (also, blooper gang)

[@caileycarrot]

This is honestly one of my fav vids from u im serious

[@optimalinheritance1008]

Such amazing content! You’re so inspiring. Love watching your journey! You’re a gift to many. 💕

[@mellowyellow5865]

Don’t worry my first script was so bad… I wrote a full length movie, on good docs. 100 pages, on Google docs, all in the wrong format😅 I was 14, and uhh, I based it roughly on my band section, not in the people, but the concept, and one of the guys read it. He decided this one character was this girl in the group (it wasn’t her) and that character died at the end (I was bored). So this girl HATED me. She was my section leader the next year too, and she was already trying to get me to quit, but then she started to full on harass me, like badly. Like very badly. She spread rumors, got my band directors to hate me too, and also made fun of my writing that she had never read. Yeah, uh, it was so bad. She was also like over two years older than me, which made it even worse, but safe to say, after a lot of pain and crying, I quit band and decided to only write fantasy from then on. Yours are so good, honestly that and your acting too. Idk how good mine would be acted out, but definitely not as good as what I just watched here.

[@MillisThings]

Locker 📚 I would love to see a part 2! Your reenactment was really funny and cool to watch! Great job!

[@imhannahbrooks]

Yayy!! This is so exciting!

[@mae4780]

This is hilarious! I can see how much you’ve improved with your screenwriting. (Locker)

[@IanTheAlternative]

OMGGG this was amazing!! Slayy

[@madej4118]

This was my favorite video of your by far 🤣🤩( all of them are amazing though💜) The time you put into editing this definitely paid off, and it was so good!🥰 A part 2 would be so fun to see! And all of your acting videos are so helpful! locker Blooper gang😂

[@AddisonBechard]

Locker and BLOOPER GANG! So funny! I liked script 2!

[@MakaylaLysiak]

Thank you so much!💖🥰

[@jermainegrundyyoutubechann7650]

This video was amazing and embarrassingly relatable Trust me I’ve written my own movie on Google docs too so don’t be embarrassed honestly it’s funny to someone did the same thing and is teaching others how to act, screenwriter, and more I absolutely love your channel and hope you do this more 😂🥰 Edit: script two was more funny I want myself to make it lol 😭😂 Edit 2: PART 2 NOW 😡! Hehe 🤪

[@emi_2811]

Hi Makayla! Loved the video :) I’m not an actor myself… But your videos are so inspiring, and always makes my day better! The bloopers were so funny, thanks for including them!! Locker, and blooper gang

[@elliepapadopoulos5453]

Blooper gang 😅yes I would definitely like a part two!

[@foreverrsage]

this was so amazing! please keep up the good work!

[@someoneandsomebody8938]

3:36 wades random noises 😂😂😂 had me rolling ngl

[@racheldeschaine]

This video is brilliant oml pleaaase do more of these the editing is so impressive-I laughed so hard at the pick me girl😂

[@saffiregoat6432]

“ GET HER GIRLS” 🤣🤣🤣 omg these scripts r Hilarious Locker

[@gabriellemartin6313]

"locker" and the bloopers were everything😂. I also really love your hair🤍 "bloope gang"

[@anisia-rachel]

i can't wait to see and hear your progress from your very first scripts to your most recent ones!! LOCKER🔒📚🎒 edit: also i was laughing so much during the bloopers that i almost choked on my food

[@Aveeruth]

This video really inspired me! I’m going to go work on a script right now! I would love it if you made a part 2! “Locker”

[@Sageeex]

I love your videos! You're a really funny and talented person :) I'd love to see more of these!

[@autumnadams4574]

Omg make this a series!!!!

[@lauraguevera3423]

While watching this I was laughing so hard 🤣 best content ever .

[@waidiasakoraevans2190]

they were hilarious especially the second act with the girl scouts🤣

[@KeilaniMartinez101]

I’m the 9th like

[@noe2toes]

yas we need a part2 !!!! and I love the re-enactments, (locker) the bloopers were literally so funny though

[@sydnieASMR]

I wrote a script with my friend Carys once about a girl named Angela that goes by Angie getting a letter in the mail and it was meant for her neighbors bc it was their niece and she wrote back to the girl that sent the letter and they kept writing back to each other and started kinda getting feelings the parents and friends of Angie was teasing her about having a bf that's a important factor but then one day the girl that wrote the letter aka Kim was staying at her aunt and uncle's which is her neighbor next door and they hung out and eventually really really liked each other but then one day Kim had written a love poem about Angie and her aunt found it and called Angie's mom and they where mad at them bc this was in the 70s so they told them to stop talking so that night Kim and Angie Elop if your wondering why her name is Angie I was listening to songs .from the 70s and one called Angie from the rolling stones came on about a sad girl named Angie and in the story Angie's sad it makes more sense if u read the script bc her dad left and her brother died in a car crash last year then she came home one day from roller skating with her friends and her mom had a new boyfriend that was a drunky and stuff anyways and I said maybe her name can be Angela since it's a popular name in the 60s-70s and Angie could be her nick name but then I googled the song and the girls original name was Angela so it went perfectly Idk why I did this I was really bored one day it's called call me Angie btw nobody copy it bc I'm almost done the script

[@L4xuryN]

No body wants to copy you

[@camillestaes6991]

Please use some punctuation marks..

[@berniceahortor9578]

​@@camillestaes6991 True

[@berniceahortor9578]

​@@L4xuryN Understand me here when I say that's not really nice. I'm not trying the be mean. I'm also ten so like, understand 🥺

[@L4xuryN]

@@berniceahortor9578 Now k understand why the script was so bad

[@oliviaataga5187]

Please do a part two!!!

[@mr.successful1943]

Yo, you’re very talented! Great video!

[@thetaydenrock]

“Locker” I would love to see a pt 2!!!

[@thais.carvalhods]

Hey Makayla, you might not even see this but i just need to say a big thank you for inspiring me every time i watch your videos. My dream is to be an actress and i feel like you help me so much with tips you post + just seeing you talk and act makes me feel motivated. Thank you again for being yourself in front of the camera and dedicating part of your life to help people who wants to join the acting career. 💌

[@sophias_planet]

BLOOPER GANG

[@ManaKhorshidi]

Thw way that they shoved Jordan in her LOCKER, and when James said SECRET BLOOPER GANG for no reason at ALL

[@eunchaelee08]

Locker🔒📚🎒!!! I would want sooooo much to see your now writtings😆😍 Great job on your improvment, you should be really proud of yourself. I've been watching your videos years ago from the first video and loved your great personality and talent ever since. I really root for your career and thank you always for these videos^^

[@eunchaelee08]

P.S, I really love your haircut~~

[@umbramann1139]

Definitely Part 2, and 3, 4 5 etc. these are great fun, loved the girl scouts, that was some serious "fed up" energy, I hope you have a large back catalogue of these to revisit.

[@MG-qh4nl]

I definitely want a part 2!! Those were hilarious!!

[@caileycarrot]

The way this combines scriptwriting AND acting

[@keyiryan7981]

I love this 😆😆

[@serenacampbell5844]

Please the bloopers where so funny 😂

[@BrittBakker]

BLOOPER GANG

[@nyairajones]

We need part 2 🤣!!

[@theshaymaah]

i love the reenactments they were so funny! it's giving zendaya in her disney/nickelodeon era with a pinch of victorious.

[@Wonderingabouttwd]

I see its alot of cliche stuff in movies period but its really helpful on how to do a script a bit and i love how you would tell us if its something not to do in a script so its really helpful because im making a mini movie on my channel that will show my face the only bad news is i play every character but i have the clothes and stuff for that-

[@kyrafelice30]

BY far the best/ funnies video I’ve seen on this channel!!! The editing is top notch too! PART TWO PLEASE

[@HAHAHA-sofunny]

Yess, pt. 2! The scripts were hilarious

[@iness4832]

Part 2 is a MUST . Locker ✨🤫

[@KeilaniMartinez101]

BLOOPER GANG!❤️

[@zakiyawiltz]

I’ve always wanted to do little acting screens like this but I have no idea how to do these🤣😭but this was really good!♥️btw locker

[@MakaylaLysiak]

Thank you for watching!💕🎬

[@tjskeyblade]

I really appreciate The different kind of sense And I really appreciate your acting Makay

[@samanthavo-17]

Wow that green screen editing was perfection!!! Honestly that should be a tv show!

[@tiasvoid]

literally in LOVE with your videos.

[@Dexcters]

Locker, and 2 was definitely my favorite!

[@chloeragui9473]

I think what you should do for another video is you could continue with the scripts but finish them how you would write them now. Locker was my favorite by far it was so funny loved the editing .x

[@itsmelennaaa]

this was so funny!! 😭part 2 please if you have time, also...LOCKER 📚🎒

[@briii_1548]

Locker!! And i would love a part 2 these were so good and hilarious 🤣

[@yasmeenomar4668]

Also, could we please see more videos on script writing and the thought processes behind it. I have been trying to move from novels to screenplay writing and its proving to be more difficult than I thought it would.

[@loisstoger5571]

BLOOPER GANG !!! Amazing video Makayla ! Actually I think all of your videos are amazing ✨

[@kd_tk]

Locker... Can't wait for part two... Ur editing is AMAZING

[@galacticagamer2000]

You should do a recent script and compare them, for me I have been writing not movie scripts but novels since I was nine and its great to see the improvement. (Locker)

[@mikaelakanin]

locker and BLOOPER GANG!!! And I reeeeally want a part 2! This was so fun

[@MGM.Vlogs_]

My favorite was script 2 ❤ I would definitely recommend your channel to anyone interested in pursuing acting or the film industry in general. I love your videos, they are very informative and most of all entertaining!! LOCKER.

[@Maddy_lx]

STOP HER TRYING TO FIND HER SCRIPT WHILE THE GIRLS “BEAT HER UP” WAS SO FUNNY

[@jaida1327]

PLSSSS I REALLY WANT A PART TWO IT WAS GOING SOO GOOD. I love love love how funny the reactions were with the girls scouts and the bloopers LOLL i love it ( locker)

[@mae4780]

Incredible! I know you will reach your goal, soon I will be hearing your own movies everywhere 😊 (Locker)

[@samens9924]

You're such a good actor and I love you. You are DEFINITELY my idol. ❤ love you

[@l_srbast]

You go girl!! You did great!

[@Mellohai]

I’m starting to get invested in the plot now- The picture you used for the “ Locker “s were cool ( idk anymore )

[@tahirahaa6982]

this was too funny o loved that this is out of your normal videos but i feel like you should do this more! Love this and also your amazing!

[@fr3yaaah312]

The bloopers were beautiful

[@daniiyaa]

Locker!! 📚🎒I love ur videos makayla!! Ur bloopers were so funny and i really would love to see a part two! ❤️

[@אבישגחלפין]

plzzz I need a PART 2!!!! we all need it

[@monique6612]

LOCKER! Love this video! The editing was amazing :)

[@dianamakaryan9187]

Makayla, this was soo great!!! Definitely waiting for part 2!! ( Locker)😊💖✨

[@Sara-qo9qo]

I would love a part two of this, and in general more screenwriting videos. Locker 🔒📚🎒

[@Cootje143]

Locker & blooper gang! Loved this video from start to finish.