Redesigning Security Breach | From the Story to the Gameplay

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[@idran7096]

And this also opens the possibility that instead of the whole finding Vanny's name written in her hideout, for some reason, we could have it so that when Vanessa introduces herself to Gregory, he calls her Vanny, she finds the nickname annoying, and says something like "My name is Vanessa, not Vanny" and have this type of interaction a decent amount of times so that when she switches personalities, Gregory says something like "Vanny are you okay?" and Vanny thinks that that is her name, so she sticks with it

[@dollydachshundart]

I LOVE that!

[@kris.p.bacon1361]

That could work it’s the trope of the stupid yet catchy nickname

[@daneiacfilms]

Vanny are you ok? Are you ok Vanny? You’ve been hit by, you’ve been struck by a smooth Gregory

[@CW-qw9nx]

​@@daneiacfilmsNah, he hit Roxy lol

[@GenderfaePlushie]

​@@CW-qw9nxooooof

[@Cozm1k]

There’s a cure for main character chronic sarcasm. It’s injecting them with silent protagonist syndrome.

[@VanHealey-ud6dn]

Gregory bouta get the Micheal treatment.

[@mslightbulb]

@@VanHealey-ud6dn now that you mention it, he had to die for us to be able to hear his voice. We never heard homeboy alive.

[@dollydachshundart]

After playing Ruin, I have to say Ruin is SO much better than Security Breach as a good horror game experience, and as a good game experience in general.

[@mooniera2810]

Are you going to talk about it? I think it would also make a good part two to this one.

[@dylanroldan6077]

Are you gonna be in fnaf movie ??

[@Thegrimaceshakeincident]

Although the dlc seemed too short and had a major cliffhanger and Monty was a very easy enemy to get away from, walk or run and your out of his sight but in the cut scenes he's fast?

[@connorschultz380]

Oo I'd love to see you talk about it!!

[@Mimiyan_or_Pikapikafan]

As someone who has only seen both games gameplay wise, then also played like 10 minutes of FnaF SB, getting a glitch somehow that prevented me from jumping, and then my friend wanted me to get off his computer that can actually play SB (this is literally post all big patches), Ruin actually looks kinda fun, like if it wasn't DLC for SB I would actually think about buying it separately, to the point I forgot it was a free DLC when thinking that

[@TequilaMockingBird91]

I feel that the intro could be slightly reworked. I think instead of starting at Freddie’s office, you play as Gregory moments before the start of the show where Gregory is (mostly) free to wander around the crowded lobby. This gives the player a sense of how the pizzaplex “should be” on a typical day. Then when he reaches the central stage for the show, the beginning scene plays with Freddy malfunctioning onstage. Maybe Gregory bumps into Vanessa who notices that he’s not a paid guest and gives chase?

[@Thedawg2604]

And the chase could end with gregory hiding in freddy as a last resort

[@LeoIsSpeaking]

maybe they’d meet but vanessa is a little suspicious of u not paying so she’d ask where are his parents and if gregory runs badically whay y’all were talking about idk tbh but if you dont and manage to convince her { somehow } she’ll still be sus but’ll let you off the hook for now

[@saeklin]

I'm positive the original gameplay blueprint was that you had to survive 5+ nights in the Pizza Plex. Basically, Gregory is homeless and decides to live at the Pizza Plex. This is why he has to avoid Vanessa. The first night is relatively benign. The lights are bright and the animatronics are friendly, etc. Play some arcade games for tickets. Even Glamrock Bonnie is still active. The only Game Over would be if Vanessa catches you. Complete some objectives like finding food and water, using the bathroom, finding a Level 1 security pass, buy equipment and other prizes with your tickets, and all while trying to avoid capture. Then you find one of the campsites scattered around the complex to call it a night. The next night, things start to get weird. Bonnie is missing. The other animatronics are acting funny especially Monty, the lights flicker, arcade machines glitch, eerie noises are heard behind closed doors, some vague clues about power drains from the sublevels, that sort of thing. The horror begins in the last hour when a new animatronic appears, the creepy white rabbit. You don't learn it's called Vanny till later. Instead of taking you to the security office, she knocks you out and drags you to the basement to some unknown fate. Like you speculated, when Vanny is in the area the lights go out and you need your rechargeable flashlight. When you complete your objectives and upgrade your security pass to Level 2, you find a new campsite because the last one was compromised. Through the week you have to progress through the zones and sometimes back again because the cameras are always giving away your hiding spots. You have to keep finding food and drink and medicine and upgrades for your security pass. Each new night, the "Vanny Time" starts earlier. Also, the animatronics become more and more horrifically damaged from their malfunctions. If you make it through night 5 you get the basic "lone escape" ending. But you can keep going and that's when the difficulty ramps up. Night 6 unleashes all the animatronics to all the areas and awards you a better ending. You can learn what happened to Bonnie as well. Night 7 is all Vanny Time, all the lights are out, all animatronics are full tilt and free roaming, the rides going haywire, and you gain access to the dark bowels of the complex to see all the horror going on behind the scenes. Saving Vanessa and/or Freddy would be secret endings. Night 7 would be the intended Burntrap Ending. Yeah, that would have been a great game...

[@julianemery718]

This sounds like a much better idea than what we got, and you were just spitballing ideas. What did steelwool do to miss the mark so badly?

[@montanajackson3713]

Steel wool should’ve hired you a long time ago!

[@syweb2]

The more this comment goes on, it sounds less speculative and more "what I wish happened", which isn't exactly the same thing. It still sounds great, but not exactly in line with what the original intent of the game probably was.

[@saeklin]

@@syweb2 That's fair. I never meant it to sound accurate, it's all just hypothetical. I'd even go back and change some things after rereading it, but I just can't be bothered. Next time I will preface with "this is the outline I would have used". Sorry :(

[@saeklin]

@@syweb2 Also, one thing I realized later is about the various endings. I've convinced myself that the Save Vanny ending was for one night and the Burntrap Ending was for the last night. Of course, this isn't an original idea by me, the so-called "mixed ending" theory has been debated since SB came out. But combining "multi-night" and "mixed ending" theories makes a lot of sense in my mind.

[@laraprisma6381]

what you said about Roxy being a narcissist is a bit wrong, she's just very insecure about herself, the dlc shows her more sensitive and gentler side, I love Roxy because of how complex she is as a character, the dlc just made me like her even more!

[@dollydachshundart]

Yes! You can still be a narcissist and insecure about yourself. Sorry if I made it come off like I didn’t like her or something like that. I really love Roxy

[@Mike14264]

Yeah... I'm honestly a little sad they didn't do much else for Chica and especially Monty tho...

[@laraprisma6381]

@@Mike14264 Yup, like, I love Monty because of the context given about the characters with the staff notes and little details about him (I'm also a believer that he didn't kill Bonnie)But Chica is unfortunately my least favorite, she literally wasn't given a personality compared to the others! Even DJ Music Man had more personality than her!!

[@Mike14264]

@@laraprisma6381 yeah, at least we know that big fella was nice, just a bit grumpy when they woke him up too early.

[@zootzbootz]

most narcissists ARE actually quite insecure. it's kinda how that whole thing works. (coming from a person with NPD, here. so having first hand experience) /info /nm

[@JoshuaA1307]

Honestly when it comes to upgrades here’s my take: Sight- Monty: Fazbear Entertainment has allowed the updgrade of Monty’s eyes to be of heat vision. This will allow Monty to keep track of everyone in Gator Golf while being in the catwalks. However the eyes are very sensitive to light, thus it was provided a pair of glasses for Monty to use for protection. Sound- Roxy: Due to an increase of accidents in Roxy Raceway, Fazbear Entertainment provided a new set of ears for Roxy, allowing her to hear even the slightest of sounds. This allows her to find any lost kid or injured kid in Roxy Raceway. Voice- Chica: this one stays the same tbh

[@GaymerMajor]

it makes sense ı mean monty is the only design where the eyes are a prominent feature, so switching roxy and monty around make sense

[@duck_duck_goose]

This actually makes sense for Monty having sunglasses. It is shown in the ruin dlc that Monty’s glasses are actually his and not Bonnie’s

[@JoshuaA1307]

I figured that the animatronics would be decommissioned the same way. However in each case (except Chica) would be a bit different. Gregory, being scared that Monty would suddenly spring back and attack him would just take the eyes and the glasses. However since he felt bad for taking it he would give Roxy’s eyes that he would get from Roxy With Roxy one of her ears would fall off including her eyes, the face would be so damaged that they couldn’t be put back on. Gregory feeling bad would give one of Freddy’s ears that fell off when both where going to Maintenance and Moon incapacitated Freddy. With Chica he would find the beak and give it back to Chica (while he keeps the voice box) and unlike in the game her voice after loosing the voice box will just sound like someone with a taped mouth but also sounding like Morse code (she isn’t doing Morse code but the sound looks like it while her way of speak is like she has taped her mouth) This would give a bit more humanity to Gregory then just decommissioning them and leave them to rot

[@ashtraydelicacy5773]

"ROCK N ROLL" (evaporates Gregory like Homelander)

[@JoshuaA1307]

@@ashtraydelicacy5773 not that kind of heat vision XD

[@25shadow11]

22:17 Well, in regards to the "no evil" tropes there, I believe Monty might represent the mostly unknown 4th wise monkey. Where the other wise monkeys are the "see no, speak no, hear no evil", the 4th wise monkey is "do no evil" where it has it's hands on it's lap, resting

[@Eterco]

That would mean Freddy would fall under Hear no Evil, which... He does have the largest ears and is purposefully helping Gregory, ignoring the influence of the virus so it could work.

[@CW-qw9nx]

​@@EtercoThat's what I was thinking, because he easily drops the subject of his friend's injuries when you give a meh answer to how you got the parts, and he resists the Afton control (that's the whole thing in the game).

[@dumbly-stupid]

​@@Eterco also he loses his head so he can't hear

[@IrregularityRowan]

that would mean that Gregory is the evil

[@25shadow11]

or perhaps it is in reference to Bonnie. I know there is a lot of talk about if Monty doing Bonnie dirty, or the virus/Vanny@@IrregularityRowan

[@crow2935]

24:08 "This is going to be our new cannon ending" Ruin: "THIS IS THE CANNON ENDING"

[@TheFazzyDude]

I once heard a theory that Vanny and Vanessa didn't appear that often because steel wool wanted to make the game very kid-friendly, and that's also why Vanny has no knife in-game, and ALSO why she has that glitch effect

[@CW-qw9nx]

The whole concept of FNAF is in no way child friendly (especially considering children are literally murdered and stuffed in suits as the concept), so that was a bad move on their part if that's what they wanted to do.

[@CW-qw9nx]

Oh, and this also was p responsible for one of MatPat's key points of proof that Gregory was a robot, because Freddy said "I feel you are broken" rather than "I detect an injury" or something. There's this screenshot of what the code was replaced with, and it turns out that Freddy was supposed to take Gregory to the first aid station because he had a heavily bleeding arm injury.

[@PhantomOfficial07]

@@CW-qw9nx Wow that's stupid. So people aren't allowed to bleed? in a game about kids getting murdered? bruh

[@CW-qw9nx]

@@PhantomOfficial07 It just doesn't make sense.

[@dragonspirit996]

I love this idea! I think the only thing I would really add is that when the Vanessa/Vanny dynamic is introduced is to add something that makes it very obvious its not a natural thing. I'm no designer, so I don't have great ideas, but maybe some kind of particle effects around her to make it more supernatural-y? Because my main issue with the multiple personalities trope is that the fear of it blends over into real world mental health conditions, which then causes some really sucky stereotypes. So adding something minor to make it obvious that it's a malicious outside force causing it would be beneficial I think ^^

[@dollydachshundart]

Oh yeah, for sure. Maybe her eyes would turn purple? Like a glowing, unnatural look.

[@Vince5754Pro]

Perhaps the issue could stem from some sort of neural implant? Grandpa Afton/whoever we want to be responsible in this concept could be hacking into and messing with her brain? And severing that connection to free her from the "mind shackling" could be a plot point for the finale?

[@Ryoba__chan]

@@dollydachshundart good idea but would be cool if vannesa have purple eyes only before she will soon go away and turn to vanny and would be cool if she uses her v.a.n.n.i. mask to get around mega pizza plex not seen by other animatronics and it would actually explain some bugs like why she coming from door that blocked or why she teleports randomly......

[@kerran4550]

@@Ryoba__chan With Ruin out, maybe the Mimic could be the one making Vannesa do horrible things?

[@Ryoba__chan]

@@kerran4550 maybe mimic is glichtrap maybe at old place they found body of mimic and got it's chip and they more likely used mimic's chip to make game easier ? it's just theory I guess

[@psychojester8242]

I’m going to be honest I think the ruin dlc is the best dlc I’ve ever seen as it makes this meh game into a fabulous game

[@lagoom7025]

YEES I AGREE I love Cassy so much more than Gregory

[@psychojester8242]

@@lagoom7025 i like her character more but her design is off

[@laraprisma6381]

@@psychojester8242 her design is adorable!

[@psychojester8242]

@@laraprisma6381 hey everyone has theyre own opinions mine is that they tried to hard for her

[@Psycoitc_coin]

@@psychojester8242but that’s also their opinion…….

[@madproductionsss4831]

The problem with the game was that the Trailers looked more fun, and how much better the character acted made you really want to play the game. Like, Monty sounded scary, "You will do as I say, you will bring me what I want, and if you fail me? Then you will, BOTH of you, burn!" He is my biggest disappointment with the game, I really felt like he would've been that one character we love to hate. We got a self-destructive muscle head who's only scary moment is the implication that he killed Bonnie, they should've run with that! Shown him being a total jerk to staff bots, or the other character, and they could've had Freddy mention something like being scared of Monty (because he knows what he did to Bonnie or because he's worried he'll be replaced/destroyed), you could have Monty talk about how he plans to get rid of Freddy at 6am, something like that would've made you want to destroy Monty. I feel like instead of Chica, Monty should've lost his voice, to show he no longer has any real power, with the others now making fun of him. It would make you feel less bad for destroying Monty. I have other problems with the game, but you mentioned the perfect solutions to them, kind of makes me upset we didn't get those moments in the real game.

[@dollydachshundart]

I agree with all of that!

[@Wowimsick]

fun fact: "You will do as I say, you will bring me what I want, and if you fail me? Then you will, BOTH of you, burn!" is said by afton and not monty

[@madproductionsss4831]

@@Wowimsick You know what, you are completely right. I had to double check because the voice in the trailer doesn't have the same accent as the voice at the start, but it's also definitely not Monty's, who has a noticeable southern accent. Even if the filter on Monty's voice in game makes it difficult to hear, it is clearly not Monty, but now I'm so confused by the context. Is our not so favorite, never dying, always coming back killer talking about Vanny and Vanessa? I think the reason I thought it was Monty is it makes more sense, but you are right.

[@Wowimsick]

@@madproductionsss4831 well its said by the voice actor for music man but it was likely meant to represent burntrap

[@corbinwillier4011]

Actually that voice in the trailer was actually revealed to be burntrap

[@VectorPrime-wx3lx]

Funny how you said “in my version of security breach, princess quest will be the canon ending”, while when ruin came out, it confirmed Princess quest to be the canon ending of security breach lol

[@Toybonnieboi1028]

I wish they would’ve done a stay in the daycare ending that would’ve been hilarious 😂

[@bubbaberriboo]

i LOVE the chica rollerskates idea. instead of mazercise she could’ve had a roller rink… now i’m mad that’s not real 😭

[@Pandie2828]

Yeah but mazercise plays into her whole eating disorder thing which is all she's got going on. On second thought maybe taking away her thematic set price would force them to give her more to work with? Idk they really only seem to care about Freddy and Roxie.

[@AdventureHusky]

Imagine Chica's roller rink with obstacles to avoid and a fun roller skate minigame or getting an upgrade to help with free roaming like roller blades that make Greggory slightly faster. Maybe as a draw back you ping pong like Chica, or you can only skate in specific locations.

[@OneroseArts]

I love your idea for chica have roller skates! I really wish that was part of the game play now! I mean, it would add so much more variables, but in a cool way, if you're on carpets then you try to out run chika or even lead her around, it would be fun even light hearted, but then when you need to get through a hallway, that when the pressures on and suddenly chika with skates becomes a real problem and not just a funny gimmick.

[@noravanguard]

22:23 Monty might be Do no evil. which is consider the fourth one of the "Do Nos". Which could have made Freddy Hear No Evil. bears do have really good hearing. maybe in safe-mode Freddy can't uses his super hearing. so, you would have to re-enable it.

[@StrikeCrossoverNexus]

hear no evil works perfectly for freddy because in his ruined form he cant hear anything

[@kinomiyadomi6528]

Incredible video, i love the new talking sprites you made! Such a glowup

[@novastein9567]

Oh yeah, definetly! Lore is much better (still confusing though...), The characters have gotten better both in design Like Glitchtrap and Chica, and in behavior like Monty and especially Roxy! Also, it is actually terrifying throughout most of it!

[@SassyLass]

I really liked your ideas on how Security Breach could of been made better! While I do like how the game is, it definitely could of been better. I honestly wish the animatronics would of interacted with one another more, example being how Roxanne tells Freddy to get out of her room when Gregory and Freddy walk in on her crying. It's not like the animatronics are mindless zombies while controlled, so why wouldn't they occasionally have conversations with one another and Freddy? It could of added some intensity, or some funny moments. Moments that would show that the animatronics DO really consider one another like friends/family. Also, a route where you wouldn't have to destroy any of the animatronics for their parts would of been nice. (I think there's something that says you only NEED to destroy one animatronic to get the canon ending [Save Vanessa], and it has to be either Chica or Monty.) Maybe a pacifist route would of added an extra star on your endings. (I like your idea of Gregory discovering that the animatronics were on some sort of security mode, considering Freddy himself stated that none of them were supposed to be capable of killing people. Freddy has scrapped voice-lines of him begging his friends to resist Vanny's control, so why wouldn't they realize that the others are being controlled somehow or influenced by some sort of virus? It would of given Gregory more of a reason to hesitate on destroying them.)

[@Emm3342]

I'd recommend the security breach malware comic. It's not done. But it contains more to the idea of helping the animatronics, and they use their abilities to help Gregory, who has more personality and is an actual child who gains a robotic family one by one.

[@adammartinez8061]

@@Emm3342 Just About To watch this video and here’s another take. Instead of staying one night like in the game….we stay five nights….but here’s another catch….instead of playing as Gregory on the other nights after the 1st one….we plays as a different kid on each night…..Each night we get a glimpse onto one of the Animatronics true personality outside of the virus….. 2nd night, Roxy. 3rd night, Chica 4th night, Monty. 5th night: Moon. Each night, the kid grows sympathy for their favorite animatronic….also more areas become accessible……also the animatronic becomes her/his guardian on each night and each night when we play as a different kid, the girl/boy develops a bond with the animatronic. Another thing each night, every arcade cabinet such as Chica’s Feeding Frenzy, The Arcade Cabinet in the Gator Golf, Balloon Boy world and the PQ Arcade Cabinets become playable. First you’d have to play one of the arcade cabinets for the next to be playable the next night.

[@CW-qw9nx]

I really liked that hint that Freddy could have been shown to comfort his friends and help them through what they were going through. I think it would have been a much nicer game if they had made Gregory and Freddy try to break the animatronics of Afton's (or whoever, it was said to be the Mimic after ruin) control. It would have been cool to see Freddy be like "How could you have done this to [insert animatronic here]!" when Gregory broke them, and then he tells Gregory about the whole control thing, and Gregory feels like crap while Freddy shuts down to avoid an overload. It would have been a way deeper storyline.

[@Conkerscrib]

As a fan of the Batman Arkham games that's what I was expecting the animatronics to do. The criminals talking to each other is one of the many things that made those games alive

[@SassyLass]

@@Conkerscrib It could of brought more life to the game! Plus, animating Freddy's conversation with Gregory while Gregory was in his chest the first time they met would of been a nice touch instead of him staring blankly in his mirror.

[@ultimaterizzlord]

The only thing i'd say is about Roxy's eyes with the dead kids, if her eyes had heat vision or whatever she'd only be able to see fresh dead bodies and not older ones since they would be pretty cold

[@TiaMay7]

Two Things: 1. I love your version of Security Breach's story and wish this is how the game was. 2. The Omori music you used in the background hits hard.

[@moistwrmonastring1017]

I think Monty should be the eye one, he has glasses and that bright red colour to emphasise his useless eyeballs! Since Roxy is a wolf character, her ears can be her strength and since they’re super visible, Gregory rips them off and rips out Monty’s eyes instead of what actually happens in game. That makes the most sense to me, at least! Seeing/hearing footprints can be applied to Roxy and Monty seeing body temperature would make more sense since he’s a reptile 👍

[@syweb2]

Taking Roxy's eyes is relevant to her character, though, as you take away not only what makes her more threatening (her enhanced vision), but also her ability to see herself and thus indulge in her narcissism. Plus, you also totally wreck her face in the process, so even if she could still see, she would be hideous (at least as far as her self-image is concerned).

[@creativename2567]

Everytime I think about what SB could have been it makes me remember what no other fnaf game will ever be. Now I'm depressed again.

[@maeisasuperstar]

I feel like Vanny and Vanessa had so little screen time. Your ideas are creative and way better than what we got in my opinion.

[@BaconNuke]

Honestly the Jeckle and Hyde situation with Vannesa also seemed implied from all the trailers with.. well Vannessa being helpful and nice and Vanny.. wanting murder.. I wonder if Gregory was made last minute since they realized "how tf will be have our protagonist also be the villain?" since.. how would you convey Vanny while playing as Vanessa without just.. blacking out.. so they just reworked stuff.. If they weren't for some reason catering to kids with the.. murder robots.. I could totally see if Vanessa was playable protagonist you maybe have a few nights (ie not all one night and it is more like other FNAF games with multiple) of actually being a night guard but one night the screen gets and odd tint for a bit as you are "helping" a lost kid.. and only later (maybe only revealed to player) you learn you were playing as Vanny and had been the cause of the disappearances.. like how twisted would that be to be forced to do it even when you figure out what is happening.. Alt idea.. you as Vanessa check the tapes and since Vanny messes with electronics you are trying to figure out why there are so many glitches and thus track the path they took one night (ie the night you were playing) and find a kid.. or you always have a random changing room you for some reason can never enter despite it being presumably where you have your non-work clothes.. until you finally push past the mental block to find the Vanny mask in the room.. and either you put it on (maybe bad ending?) and hear a giggle before just generic slashing sounds after another kid is lost in the Pizzaplex.. or you resist it and tear up the suit thinking good ending before a fade to black and still hear a giggle, it just isn't altered by the suit anymore.. like seriously having two bad endings sound cool to me.. obviously the good ending requires some kinda extra requirement that makes you just incinerate the suit outright or something.. like it unlocks some extra room.. but if you try to go there early (ie you know where it is but didn't earn it) an even worse ending happens where somehow Vanny takes full control and is shown burning the guard outfit instead

[@TheTimon64]

Really cool ideas! 😁 Vanny and Vanessa had too much potential sad that steelwoll could not live up to it

[@Will-by3sb]

“oh and there’s a rabbit lady” really sums it up

[@richardkirkland6805]

With the Monty Hearing thing it could also have a visual representation of the S.T.A.F.F. Bots' pathing, as Freddy would be able to hear where the S.T.A.F.F. Bots go. Also, Steel Wool also feels that the Save Vanny ending is the best ending, as the original canon ending with Peepaw Afton is now held in the same respects as the comic book endings.

[@johnicthecronic3197]

personally I always liked the idea of the shattered robots leaving "oil" where ever they walk

[@AllExistence]

"Monty being the chillest" literally against the guys whole personality

[@mannofdober873]

*Chica: Brings out rollerskates.* *Gregory:* "Finally! A worthy opponent! Our battle will be legendary!" *Brings out cut go kart* Cue the world's slowest chase as neither of them can get any traction on the carpet.

[@dollydachshundart]

YESS!

[@terrantitanium6441]

only halfway through the video so far but- Yes? There IS a mention of disappearances? FNaF's story has always been something you have to stumble upon or seek out in order to understand. The message bags are the story. And they're all over the place.

[@VanNessy97]

Hey, yeah! I want to run with that and make even more mentions of disappearing children show up in the message bags!

[@TheTrickyShow1]

this game has an actual story, its not like the other fnaf games where there isnt an obvious story other than "survive 5 nights". you cant have BASIC details of the story be hidden in a game with an actual written story. them making basic story info collectibles is also just an excuse to not put much budget into the actual story

[@MusicalFreak812]

Considering most of that is optional if you forget or don't bother with getting the messages then you're gonna be really confused when you reach 6 AM and it's starting with disappearances out of seemingly nowhere Like that piece of dialogue isn't triggered by finding the messages, it IS here even when you don't collect any

[@terrantitanium6441]

@@MusicalFreak812 Try thinking about everything else that's currently known about FNaF's story. And how much of it is optional The secret posters detailing the children's disappearances in FNaF1 The good ending of FNaF3 The Lorekeeper Ending in FNaF6 That's Kind Of The Point You get rewarded for seeking out the secrets and learning the story. If you're confused, that is your fault.

[@terrantitanium6441]

The answers are there. You just have to find them.

[@paperbag466]

"monty being slow balances out roxy being fast" pretty sure they all move the same speed but monty would technically be the fastest since he usually never loses agro especially in the west arcade. each time you see monty he is usually differently programmed to fit the situation, so a lot of the time monty is actually the fastest. id even go so far as to say that chica is probably faster than roxy in a lot of situations. whilst chica tends to match the speed of the player, making her slow if you dont sprint, most of the time when you see roxy she is given the ability to jump which allows the player to gain distance

[@MarvelousButter]

I love your Avatar and her hair it's so cute. 4 minutes into the video but I'm already sold on your style

[@spoopyghost3333]

I have a few things to add! In the game files, you can find cut dialog from all characters. Like Chica's Valley Girl voice lines, Freddy talking abour T-shirts, Vanessa's playable lines, etc. For Gregory's lines, you find a differwnt line for the beginning of the game when he talks about Vanessa. He says "Shes trying to kill me!" instead of "Shes trying to get me." Fans speculate this line was changed, because even though this is a horror series with dead children and an animated child killing corpse, cant say the K.I.L.L word. In more of the finals, a survival mode was removed from the game. And they removed a whole "chapter" of the game, where Freddy and Gregory go to the Vat Rooms, and a fridge area. TetraBitGaming does a great job showing off the crapton of content that was cut from the game. Plus even though it seems like Gregory out for blood, the jumpscares show the animatronic pulling Gregory in to bite him, especially Monty, and their shattered forms, and everyone thinks Pepaw Afton is mind controlling them (yeah not Vanny)

[@erikawithaknotac]

I think this is a great rewrite! Only a few things I would change; give Vannessa some more play time, like for a few minutes every hour you get to play as her, running around, trying to deactivate some of the security protocols because she would have security clearance, depending on how well you do, certain paths (like mazercize) are already open. Additionally, I think the shattering’s should be mostly accidents. Maybe Gregory is in the kitchen and he hears Chica coming after him, so he runs through the garbage compactor and trips on the activation button. Maybe there’s some objective beneath Roxy Raceway that requires you to use a go kart to get down into a maintenance area. There’s a lot of possibilities, even if just by my personal preference I would’ve liked all the animatronics to stay intact and you save them like you do with Vanessa.

[@dollydachshundart]

Same! I personally prefer saving the animatronics as well, but I tried to keep a lot of the story beats the same. I do understand why they didn’t though, as they probably wanted to focus on Freddy more. That’s why Ruin is great because with Freddy out of the picture, they’re also able to focus on Roxanne.

[@sprintbell]

I don’t really care much about the horror aspect so much anymore. I like the main game more because of the environment and setting. Seeing the pizzaplex destroyed in Ruin broke me. ( ཀ͝ ∧ ཀ͝ ) But most of all, was the dynamic between Gregory and Freddy. I would go to the ends of the earth for these two ❤ I just can’t stand them not being present currently (prototype Freddy definitely does NOT count). But everyone has their own personal opinion so eh ┐(´∇｀)┌

[@dollydachshundart]

The environment and characters are my favorite part of the main game! I really love Freddy too. The character designs and Pizza plex are AMAZING

[@sprintbell]

@@dollydachshundart they do indeed. ʕ ᵔᴥᵔ ʔ

[@yuukianimates3318]

Freddy and Gregory is old news! Roxy and Cassie is where it's at now!

[@kingofcrap4414]

That's all well and good, but FNAF was literally created to be a horror series, so making a FNAF game without any horror in it at all doesn't fit tonally.

[@yuukianimates3318]

@@kingofcrap4414 yeah taking away the horror from a horror game is like taking away the ice cream cone and just eat the ice cream with just ur hand without the cone lol

[@dika_hilman]

I think it can be even scarier with vanny because canonically there are two vannessa, one as a security guard and one as vanny. It can affect the gameplay that vanny can appear more unexpectedly. also, I think they have this "hidden" story where Gregory is secretly "corrupted". so, he has a "secret" reason to avoid vanessa since the beginning. Even before the game happened, he already did something bad/sinister. that's also why he has this crazy idea to disassemble the other animatronics. I think the idea to disassemble them can be delivered better. During avoiding Roxy, Monty, and Chica, Gregory has to learn HOW USEFUL it is to have the eyes, claws, and voice box. The audience needs to know how important it is to take them and give it to Freddy BEFORE actually doing it. Right? Or am I playing a different game here?

[@scrapbabyluvr]

I really wish we got to see what the game was gonna be. If you look at the first trailer, it’s very obviously different. I’m pretty sure they changed it last minute and I’m just like… why?? The game seemed so much more interesting and fun.

[@duck_duck_goose]

I like vanny battle motive being to destroy the mask because it actually mamkes sense for her first introduction in Help Wanted and how she puts on the mask n stuff. That would have been SO MUCH BETTER. And you could still probably implement the princess quest games with this in a way

[@0rnami]

This was an enjoyable video, and you've got muh noodle working, so here's a rough draft of my own redesign of Security Breach: Full disclosure: I know almost nothing about the preexisting lore. The emphasis is much more around the story, and specifically the characters. In the beginning, the player (Gregory) spends time with Freddy and Vanessa separately. Both of them get to spend some time with Gregory and become friends. Though, it can't stay that way: At some point, there comes a crossroad where the player must choose loyalty to one or the other: Freddy or Vanessa. Whichever one they choose, the other gradually becomes the main villain. If you befriend Freddy, the game's story is more or less the same, with Vanessa becoming Vanny and actually having things to do in the story. If you befriend Vanessa, Freddy starts to become estranged, and slowly starts to unravel, leading to a vulnerability that causes him to become possessed in a manner similar to the other animatronics. In either case, the good ending or bad ending would depend on whether or not you could save Vanny/Freddy. I was thinking that, no matter which one you pick, many secrets are revealed about the animatronics. Namely, that despite the fact that the Pizzaplex staff are ordered to perform memory wipes of the main animatronics, the animatronics have discovered a way to keep their memories. Using this method, they are able to learn day by day, and become sophisticated in ways far beyond what the engineers intended. Through a series of story bits and cinematics sprinkled throughout the entire game, the player discovers that each animatronic has developed a goal: Roxy is tired of performing in a band and singing happy birthday every day; she believes that she is greater than that, that she was made for more. She wants to become so globally popular that she becomes the new face of the Fazbear franchise, even if that means a total rebrand. Monty has a sobering realization about who he is, and what he is: he is an animatronic in a world dominated by humans. Because of his pride, he cannot accept being treated as a mere distraction for children, and seeks to go against his programming: where he once brought fun and joy to children, he now seeks to define his existence for himself; to cause pain and suffering instead. Chica has stumbled upon decades worth of knowledge related to the Fazbear franchise, and in the face of her realizations, she sees nothing but a dead end for all of them; that their inevitable fate is to be deactivated permanently in some old forgotten warehouse someday when they are no longer of any use. Her ultimate goal is to create a bubble for herself where she can exist forever in a constant state of ignorance and bliss, regardless of what happens to the others. Freddy befriends children every day, but he knows he will have to say goodbye, that he may never see them again. It hurts him because he is programmed to make children happy. He sees the world itself as a factory that turns happy children into sad adults, and so he works tirelessly to create a world where he and all the children can all be friends forever, by any means necessary. I might revisit some of these ideas later.

[@dollydachshundart]

Dangggg! I really like this concept

[@0rnami]

@@dollydachshundart Not sure if I should keep adding comments to this comment thread, but I don't know where else to put all these ideas for a "what-if" Security Breach game. The main challenge in redesigning SB is definitely Vanny, especially since I'm not exactly a FNAF lore wizard as stated before. She needs to be redesigned very carefully in such a way that her redesign will not negatively affect her in Ruin or Help Wanted 2 at the very least, since those games heavily imply that she broke free of Glitchtrap's control. Best case scenario, her redesign actually bolsters her redemption story. With respect to those 2 games, my first instinct is to make Vanny a powerful, series-defining, short-lived character who simply serves her purpose in SB, so that Glitchtrap can at least afford to lose her. Or worse, that he intends for her to "break free" from the beginning. What's notable about her is that she wears a costume instead of being an animatronic. I'm thinking that Vanny could possibly represent the newest chapter in Glitchtrap's attempt to give life to the unliving. Maybe Glitchtrap's scheme is to create life itself. Manipulating Vanessa is a start, and he can have her wear the Vanny suit. It could be "recording" all of her evil behavior as a template for some sort of bioengineered AI. Now that's a good start, but it still has more to do with Glitchtrap than Vanny, so she definitely needs to express more agency. Maybe Vanessa thinks that there's no way for her to completely escape Glitchtrap, so she figures she might as well get as close to him as possible in an attempt to learn his secrets and exercise some of his power, even at the risk of losing her mind to him (either that or risk dying). But since Ruin and HW2 imply that she escaped, it's possible that her escape doesn't even matter since Glitchtrap has already obtained her evil imprint from her time wearing the Vanny suit. In that sense, Vanessa/Vanny could resemble Siegfried/Nightmare from Soul Calibur, only that Vanessa has (supposedly, according to HW2?) embraced the Vanny persona(?) and made it her own. Maybe she still wields some of her power. Go figure

[@RyGaming24]

If Steel Wool does all the changes you just described I think the old fans and even new fans would run to this game! The only thing that would make this a bad thing is ruin came out, so its very unlikely they would do something like this because they've already locked in DLC's to the base game. But because of the assumed Canon ending being the princess quest ending changes could still be made to the base game Another cool idea, what if in the game the total amount of time you get is equal to actual 6 hours to get an ending. So if you run out of time you get the bad ending. If you cut some parts of the game put at the same time make the other parts better plus adding more endings and cohesive lore in the story (mostly the mimic) then the people would be happy including me! So yeah! Steel Wool I'm looking for the job of new storyteller!😅

[@Mike14264]

"oh my goodness gracious, a child" best line in the game we could've had for real Honestly, I really like the ideas you have going here! Not sure about the periodic "Vanessa turns to Vanny" thing, I wonder how that would go for normal Vanessa during gameplay... like, would Gregory try his hardest to avoid her then? Would she still convince him that she's fine at fixed hours? I feel like the times at which she changes into Vanny could be a lot more unpredictable, it could add to the spook factor. I love the ideas to make her menacing tho. Yeah, just have them make pizza to lure Chica. Who knows, maybe you could even have a FNaF styled minigame where you have to keep working on the pizza, putting the ingredients on and such, while also avoiding her gaze, hiding in the kitchen. That'd be pretty cool! Not sure how we'd handle the fact that Freddy would know they'd have to break Chica for her voice box... Maybe he'd just be willing to make the sacrifice for all of them... even if I feel like it'd be easier regarding Monty, given what we currently know of their characterization. Regarding the fear of losing progress, maybe they were trying to do the thing that Survival Horror games do? Y'know, limited saves and all that? But it's a vastly different genre, it doesn't really have things like... well, combat mechanics, for instance. So yeah, we could do without that. Well, Monty's claws were his way of displaying his violent tendencies. The robots didn't really have that whole "wise monkey" thing going for them, it was moreso related to their vices, which are typical vices of rockstars and whatnot. Tho apparently there's a very less known fourth monkey of "do no evil", and that would fit well with his claws. Either way, maybe Monty could have his own headphones that you use as the upgrade! Maybe you get those from Music Man instead! Or maybe some other animatronic that you can wreck, like Sun/Moon or even a new one they could've added (Puppet, Baby, Ballora, the list is a vast one). Either way, it's still easier to get behind of than the original idea they had - taking Monty's _whole ass legs._ That could work if Freddy was the one carrying them, but still, it probably wouldn't be to smash open gates, unless you like, kick them or something. Ooh, neat ideas afterwards, yeah... especially the missing kids and Vanessa's ending plot. Who knows, maybe you could actually fix the other Glamrocks... oh, and one thing that has to be included during this arc is Shattered Freddy, kinda like in Ruin, but... maybe with a head? Maybe you'd have to try and fetch his head from his body to save him from the corruption, leaving his body as another threat, and making you even more vulnerable in the hardest part of the game against three weakened animatronics, a really dangerous one you helped upgrade, and Vanny proper. Ooh, and maybe at some point you could even find Bonnie's broken body, at a point where you're separated from Freddy perhaps, and maybe you could even fix him and that could be part of steering you towards the good ending! Maybe he becomes your new guardian to go save Freddy!

[@beetroot6016]

I completely agree with everything in this video! Everything you thought of for redesigning the game was so genius and even the video editing and everything in general was so well done!!

[@deadinside8394]

I watched Markipliers let's play and that part still makes me laugh

[@rowanheart8122]

I think in ruined, its implied that Foxy was/is a part of the glamrock cast in some manner as a villain to Roxy. Bc both Roxy Raceway and the log ride take place in a wild west setting, and I think an AR item relating to Foxy referred to the log rides. So I can easily see Foxy being a criminal who tries to blow up the race track or steal the winning prize or something

[@BrookesDreamery]

Security Breach is honestly the game that got me into FNAF (even though I’ve never played it- long story), and is probably my favorite story line because of all the potential it had. I loved the designs of the characters, how Freddy was actually your friend, Sundrop☀️, and overall I just really enjoy watching the game… but that said the game has LOTS of flaws. Which is why I absolutely LOVE your take on everything!!! I swear your narrative is EXACTLY what I thought the game would be like and how I wanted the story to go!!! Vanessa deserved SO MUCH MORE spotlight in game that she never received, and the way you rewrote her was perfect! Both in personality and game mechanics!! Also your different gameplay features for the animatronics?! ✨INSPIRED✨ (My favorite has to be Chica’s roller skates!!!🛼) Steel Wool should hire you IMMEDIATELY✨✨✨✨ Fantastic video!!!🫶👏👏👏

[@The_best_Catnap_is_here]

I still think Monty should be the aggressive one and Roxy should be the middle with chica being the chill one, I just wished they gave Monty more screen time because there are times where it should be showing Monty but then it shows..chica….(chica is like the worse animatronic in this game for me) and once Monty gets destroyed he gets even more useless since he’ll have no legs… I feel like you shouldn’t choose which one to break first and in story you should break chica first then Roxy and then it will give Monty more screen time and once Monty is destroyed it can give canny more time to be more threatening, so like the more you destroy an animatronic the more the other animatronics get more screen time and vanny…. Also Burntrap shouldn’t be in this game and fnaf just needs new villains but that’s my take

[@casecyrus2500]

Burntrap is literally just mimic

[@dumbly-stupid]

FNAF has had a new villain since 2019 we just didn't see the hints (tales was also written in 2019)

[@xavierschoen5747]

17:01 why would the egotistical maniac that destroyed his room be the chillest lol

[@betlgusbinet8208]

Fun fact: Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde aren't split personalities. It's a transformation of the body, not the mind. Dr Jekyll just acts differently when in the Mr. Hyde body(he acts differently because he feels that there's no consequences as Mr. Hyde).

[@GaymerMajor]

ı loved your changes, now that the ruin dlc basically confirmed that the free vanny ending was cannnon its even more heartbreaking that not only we've not seen a vanny at all, also we never had any emotional connection with venessa to want to save her, she is the head of security in the most kid friendly place why is she such an agressive character?? ı love the big sister vibe you've mentioned maybe while youre walking around with venessa she could get gregory and herself a drink from the vending machines with some secret trick and goes like "lets keep this between us" or maybe by the time gregory find venessa he's gotten bruised up a lil bit so venessa is the one that puts the band-aids on him. ıdk ANYTHING. gregory has no emotional connection to venessa to want to save her and the way his character is written, wouldn't save her just because its the right thing to do, the way gregory is written right now both in main game and in ruin is so cold blooded youre wondering what kind of kid is he, the lore being hidden in collectibles is okay ı think security breaches best quailty is its ability to show not tell with the envoirement like the postit room or nightmarionne plushies etc. but it would be cool if venessa was talking about it maybe something like "its dangerous for a kid like you to be here at this hour didn't your parents hear about the dissapearances?" or "thank goodness ı found you before something bad happened now lets get you back to somewhere safe" honestly maybe the lockdown on the pizzaria is automated so even venessa cant stop it making gregory staying till 6am make sense maybe like "the whole pizzaplex is on lockdown lets get you somewhere safe for the night" or something. and maybe as you progress throughout the game with venessa and vanny switching between at intervals venessa registers you to the animatronics system so the others dont chase after you one by one but maybe after registering the first two "monty and chica maybe" monty becomes curropted with the mimic virus so he starts attacking you again and by the time you register with roxy same happens to chica and both you and venessa feel trapped in the pizzaplex with you especcialy fearing because both of your allies (venessa and freddy) may end up being corrupted like them venessa having to turn into vanny every hour and freddy being an animatronic like the otherss keeps him in danger of the virus and that also gives your a idea of how the animatronics usually are around kids they arent trying to murder like maybe they all have a specific catchphrase like freddy calling gregory superstar monty calls him chump or chica squealing at him etc. and first half of the game you can ask for individual animatronics help for a certian part, you dont have a flashlight? ask roxy to help you through the dark part etc. and after they start becoming corrupted freddy instructs and maybe even helps you defead them one by one knowing they are not acting like how they should and endangering both you and venessa, so you crush them with the help of freddy and upgrade freddy with the necessary parts as usual

[@Ninjaboy101]

The vanny chase looked so funny

[@danriley3770]

I just had an idea! Maybe instead of whatever the heck Mazercise was, Chica’s main attraction could’ve been a roller rink.

[@dollydachshundart]

Ooooh I like that!

[@K9OK_]

I'm coming back to this video to comment: I think there's a chance that if this was the story, people with mommy issues would latch onto Vanessa in a similar way people with daddy issues latched onto Glamrock Freddy. If she was handled right obviously

[@amevlia]

Im amazaed that you got alot of the vanny stuff right without ruin

[@Docolate]

I love Security Breach but there is definitely too much of the game missing and I think the problem with the Burntrap boss fight is someone who has no fnaf knowledge will be less confused than someone who has kept with the lore to this point like I shouldn't understand less the more I know.

[@IrregularityRowan]

really feel like security breach should've removed the unnecessary plot points that weren't fleshed out Also very minimal lighting except for the daycare because that's where the lights are important

[@AllExistence]

"Chronic sarcasm" character is generally called "Smartass"

[@vrtlmage]

the most horror part for me is the endo basement part

[@Greencumulon]

Loving the smile for me music in the background

[@Queen_Of_The_Stars]

Idc if it’s 1 year old- OMG THE OMORI + COTL MUSIC, THE GENUINE CRITIQUES, THE STUNNING ART, BRO THIS IS AMAZING!!! >:O

[@Victor-056]

25:12 When I picture a "Fight of the Ages"... I picture Glamrock Freddy operating like a Titan from Titanfall, or maybe even having it be like Lost Planet 3, where at the end, Jim had to fight Isenberg on foot while his Rig completed its grim mission. Seriously, the Biggest Missed Opportunity would have been for Freddy to actually have Combat-based Upgrades, likely found while you are going through the Plex, and for Vanny to have a set of Powered Armor in the event one of the Glamrocks or Law Enforcement managed to track her down and bypass her electronic cloak ability... Which Vanessa is unaware of when she locks herself in that room. I feel the fight would be one where Gregory has to tell Freddy how to fight while he's trying to find a good position to grab onto Vanny and rip her mask off... And some of the fight will involve Gregory having to Bail out of Freddy so he can prevent Vanny from hacking Freddy.

[@Victor-056]

14:42 for this case, Security Breach had a much broader plot, but because it was "Christmas Rushed" to fit into a Deadline set by Sony so they could get Security Breach into the Playstation store, Security Breach ended up cutting out a LOT of the original Plans, such as having a "Vanny Meter" which caused Vanessa to be replaced by Vanny if you linger in an area for too long (Which would make Gregory wanting to escape rather than look for a green room make more sense), access to the Service Corridors that allowed for more natural transversal of the Pizzaplex (Which needed the Level Ten Pass), changing the final enemy (It was implied NOT to have been Burntrap), removed entire locations such as the Boiler Room and a Warehouse like area, and even took away an entire Minigame where Gregory would actually have been able to DRIVE in a Go-Kart! They also censored some things in Security Breach, such as taking away Vanny's Knife, and removed any references to Blood. And to be frank, while Ruin does add more to the Horror experience, it also feels unfinished _AGAIN._ There was apparently supposed to be a FOURTH ending, but for some reason, it was _SCRAPPED._ You find remnants of it in Ruin where you are able to return Chica's Voice Box, and you were supposed to be able to acquire a Collectable in the form of a Photo... Which makes me wonder how it was supposed to Go... Was it a "Repair the Glamrocks" ending, have them Duke it out with the Mimic?

[@somerandomguy7325]

I'm surprised that you didn't bring up that George has zero to no personality and he's just there, or how Freddy gives no reaction to you killing his friends.

[@lagoom7025]

OPINION ALERT!!! Okay so I personally really really liked the FNAF 6 ending and would’ve kinda hoped it ended there. I think security breach’s story is unhinged and really out of place compared to the rest of FNAF. It’s like a big time jump too (why would you even continue at this point). I do think that Vanessa would’ve been a much better main character since she’s actually a security guard + she seems to have a bigger role in the movie (but that might be a parallel and not canon idek). BUT Ruin’s gameplay was surprisingly good and id like for the lore drops in ruin to reveal something that would turn around the whole story of sb. Idk that was my rant, replies are really appreciated!!!

[@dollydachshundart]

I’ve liked what I’ve seen of Ruin so far. I just started today!

[@vaultboyyearsago]

Pizzeria sim goes hard they really should have made this a spinoff

[@SamuelDancingGallew]

One crazy idea I had: Instead of trying to destroy the animatronics, you could alternatively lure them into traps that disable them long enough to force them to boot in Safe Mode, and basically get them to help you survive the night. This way, we could get attached to different animatronics, and feel bad if you ever destroyed them (ala Ruin). (Brick Warning) Now if I were to implement this, I would make it so that you have to monitor each animatronic for odd behaviors and maintinence. But instead of upgrading Freddy with stuff from the other animatronics, you'd be able to find replacement parts that you could bring to Parts and Service to ensure each animatronic was as unlikely to go into "murder mode". And for Vanny, I'd make it so that Vanessa is fully aware of the Vanny personality, and actively tries to keep Gregory away from her, mostly by sticking to office rooms where she could give him a heads up when one of the animatronic has a "tell". But after the first couple of hours, she would switch, and the more nights you complete, the earlier she changes until you've gotta face off against her all night until she's no longer a threat. Also... I'd also remove the burntrap fight entirely, since it's a mess anyways. Now the twist: the main cast aren't the only ones trying to get Gregory. I'd make it so that all the staff bots seek out Safe Mode animatronics (prioritizing Gregory, who they stun as normal), and stun them for a time. And the more they stun an animatronic, the more likely they are to go "murder mode", as it degrades their condition. But if Vanny encounters an Animatronic, they begin having "tells" that have a chance to turn animatronics against Gregory. As for the story? Gregory isn't just looking for a way out, but establishes that he noticed some odd behavior in Pizza Plex animatronics, but had a hard enough time to get Freddy into Safe Mode, and hides inside of him to redo some of the programming without putting himself at risk (as he rigged up a bypass to allow him to keep the chest cavity sealed shut if Freddy were to try and force him out). He'd need to talk to Vanessa to tell her more about the missing kids, and yadda yadda yadda (you covered this part very nicely). Hop skip and a jump forward, meet Vanessa, she's wary about Gregory and runs off, dropping a walkie talkie behind her. After a while, she gives her "you are in trouble" speech, but in more of a "you gotta get out of here!" kind of way. Gregory explains himself, but Vanessa does end up helping to the best of her ability, guiding Gregory through the Pizza Plex to an exit that gets cut off. From this point forward, time progresses according to real time, and not various "key events" that Gregory completes. But I think your ideas are sound. Come night 2, Gregory has wormed his way into Parts and Service with one of the most worn-down animatronics, but Freddy appears (but he's not in Safe Mode). Begin a chase sequence where Gregory passes a throwaway Security Guard character (that Freddy attacks), but narrowly escapes. After that, Gregory manages to reboot the new Animatronic who puts two and two together and files a report. Problem is: Safe Mode likely wouldn't boot with a connection to the database, so Gregory would have to either file it manually, or allow the Animatronic to go into "murder mode" to progress the story. A certain amount of time later, and Vanessa appears, having come in because of either an "accident" involving Freddy, or a security report that didn't get answered. But after learning of the details, she agrees to allow Gregory to stick around, provided he doesn't let anyone else catch him while they solve the issue. Of course the police get involved at some point, but they can't come up with anything beyond more disappearances, and are absolutely confused by Gregory's description (which fliers for a "found" child begin appearing afterward). On Night 3, Gregory assembles a collection of traps that he can use to stop a specific animatronic long enough for him to boot them in Safe Mode, and this is where staff bots become aggressive. And if they find you trying to boot an animatronic in Safe Mode, they boot the animatronic in "murder mode", while Vanessa hints more about her struggles with Vanny, not quite giving the full reveal. Night 4, Gregory finds one of the missing children, but it's too late to save them and he can only retrieve their body (or some identifying clue or item from them). This is where the animatronics can be shattered for the first time as well, allowing Gregory to roam in relative peace from each one. Here, Gregory also discovers a deeper plot if the player hadn't gotten that far already. Night 5, The Pizza Plex has been shut down. The Vanny reveal is out, and there is no clock. No Vanessa hints to keep the player going forward, no more friendly Staff Bots, just a player-defined showdown that determines whether the player wants to either save or destroy Vanny, Vanessa, or hunt down one of the night 5 "escape" endings. The player can collect everything they missed, provided they can outsmart and outmaneuver the animatronics and Vanny in the process. Now of course there would be opportunities to end the game on earlier nights, but that assumes the player manages to fulfill the conditions to reach said endings. I'd make the tells subtile until the last possible second (where the player could run if they catch it in time), and make it so that they sometimes happen, even when still in Safe Mode, but with versions that never play if the animatronic is still in Safe Mode, and vice versa. Plus, things like the icon disappearing from the minimap. I would actually replace teleporting with a "phased movement" system where the animatronic simply doesn't render, and loses all collision properties until the cameras start loading. At which point they load into a pre-determined point in whatever room they're in, and start moving in the player's vague direction. As for the upgrade mini-game, I'd use that to enable Gregory to increase battery capacity, add a chance to boot into Safe Mode, and even a retaliation against Staff Bots when they're attacked. Problem is, Gregory must keep the other animatronics out long enough to complete the upgrade, or the system will reset and boot the animatronic in "murder mode". Otherwise, it's just a pointless mini-game. Oh, and failing any instructions would reduce the animatronic's condition, but otherwise force you to redo the segment.

[@thepagansu_u]

I feel like they added the "disappearances" part because of the fnaf lore, y'know, how almost every single Freddy's pizza place has a murder of six or more kids, so i think thats just a thing for the in-universe fazbear company, lmao

[@sky8ash]

Not all Foxy's are Pirates btw, as there is one that breaks the mold & that is Funtime Foxy as they're a stage performer. (Mangle doesn't really count due to the toy poster showing them as Toy Foxy with a pirate hook) Also Burntrap (Which was comfirmed to NOT be the actual name via the Character Encycpidye) is not William Afton at all. (Just mimic-ing him)

[@MysteryKar]

i think instead of just being different amounts of aggressive the robots should instead pursue you in different ways, chica just blindly chasing you down but being easy to lose (making her good as a first threat), roxy being less aggressive/fast as chica but following you for far longer as well as not being tricked by disguises or freddy (if she still has her xray eyes) and monty being very sneaky and ambushing you (like a real gator)

[@stevesamuals2651]

The idea of the animatronics having different personalities when you explore the pizza areas sounds pretty cool to me. Like when get to the food court area, chica will never chase you because she's too busy eating food, and would even give helpful hints to the player. Monty would be alot more cautious in their, complaining about the tight seating, and if freddy was with you he'd comment about his products constantly being recalled from chicas actions. And Roxy would be much slower because the cleaning bots make the floor wet, causing her to slide into walls.

[@voodokitty6897]

This new sb that you made actually sounds fun! And I'm also happy that you didn't change the Sun and moon part also they really shouldve give vannesa and vanny much more screen time and maybe just maybe try to give player a chance to get friends with sundrop. He's a nice character and he would willing to help. And moon would try to show that hes not that bad

[@Timyngo]

I feel like the beginning of security breach needs some rework, such as having Gregory climb into a vent in the back alley, and yes this is NOT going to be the same vents as the vents we use to climb out of Freddy's room, meaning we wouldn't hear the glam rock animatronics, but rather hear tiny little pitter patter sounds, which foreshadows little music man later on , Gregory would fall into Freddy's room where Freddy notices him and tries to help him up but then begins to ask questions about why was he even in the vents, Gregory tells Freddy about how he is investigating the missing children incidents Freddy joins Gregory in his investigation, Freddy recommends to ask Vanessa to join him as well because he thinks that she would be good help, now you can't go back to the vent you came from because it's to high up to climb back in, and you go as usual, climbing into another vent, but I think moving the," Escape the Pizzaplex." thing to when we find out what happened to the missing kids would be the best option saying that now you already figured out the answer to your question, and by the way if you ask me,"Then why did Freddy malfunctioned?." the answer is that Freddy simply had low power and that's final, anyways I hope you enjoyed reading my comment and have a good day.😁❤ ( I also would prefer a darker tone, not pitch dark but just dim the neon lights to make a more scarier atmosphere, and BTW I love your adaptation on Security Breach and it's my favorite re-imagining but I would prefer instead of seeing dead bodies you cold see a bunch of ghost and they disappear as you go closer, and maybe have a little mini arcade game that answers the mass murdering of Vanny just to capture some of the true magic that the original Six Fnaf games had in store for us, that would probably please Fnaf fans, and BTW ruin exist so I would make you have to fight of Vanny till an arcade in the corner finishes loading, and once done the arcade game comes in.)

[@area52ron]

The original line was Gregory was going to say that Vanessa is trying to kill him but that was censored to she was trying to get him

[@LilBuddyArmy]

I just realized, the hear no evil would work PERFECTLY for bonnie, rabbits are very good at hearing

[@ItsMeFern2019]

14:57 I actually felt my adrenaline spike here :,) I wasn't ready for how fast she was-

[@julianemery718]

The bugs and glitches in SB are glorious. I watched a video of someone using them to play the game backwards, specifically a Reverse boss order speedrun. As in, getting to the final boss FIRST, then breaking the game to escape the endgame sequence animation and beat all the other bosses after.

[@Victor-056]

20:28 Would be even funnier if Gregory has the option to start the whole "I'll have Two Number Nines" meme...

[@rizztrakskskdje]

woah, i love these ideas tbh, vanessa is so silly [and i love how u drew her hhrhrhrhrhrhrhrhrhrhrhr] this def fixes a lot of security breach's plot holes :3333

[@katebrown2501]

Nice video! Imagine if someone actually goes out of their way to make a reimagined version of SB according to the original plot. (Or maybe even this video)

[@syweb2]

Your drawing style is very cute. I know it reminds me of something in particular, but I can't quite attach a name to it. 5:55 We'd basically have another Mangle situation. 6:40 You gotta be _real_ tough to _wear_ a motorcycle ;). 7:30 That's actually a _really_ cool idea for a gameplay gimmick! 9:34 Maybe it's also the eye shape? 12:15 They do attempt other exits before choosing to amputate Freddy's bandmates.

[@floofycupkim1197]

I'd say a good example of chronic sarcasm only works for characters like TDI's noah and MK. Where you can tell they're using sarcasm.

[@jackofhearts9123]

Here’s an idea you switch the hearing thing with Roxanne (since hounds like wolves have good hearing) and you give the eye things too Monty (than you give an excuse why he wears shades, cause he has “sensitive eyes” or something)

[@Smicc]

Im glad the burntrap ending isn't cannon

[@Billyblue98]

17:02 I like this idea but I think I can add just a tiny bit more nuance here Monty is the chillest in terms of just looking for Gregory, but once Gregory's in his sights Monty's seeing red (basically the same as the base game). But he also loses track of Gregory the easiest. Chica's fine the way you described, lol. She's a bit of a glutton. Roxy's the one most aggressively looking for Gregory but almost feels the slightest bit calmer once she actually finds him. Like she might still lunge at him, and when she's searching her voice lines are the same, but. . . I dunno. Something about her demeanor just sounds a bit gentler when she's chasing him. Not much gentler, but like. . . . She talks big but it's partly a facade (Says she's the best but is the only one that can be found crying in the game. She's mostly just hyping herself up.) She is, however, the hardest to shake off. She just kind of sees you better than Monty or Chica. 17:34 In a similar vein, Roxy's most likely to actually search through an open door, while Monty almost might not even notice it.

[@kingraplhmativo5178]

So far, I feel like Freddy has a personality and dynamic in the game; he made me interested in the game.

[@gobstopper2.0]

DUDE HELP ME I WAS WATCHING THIS WHILE DRAWING A SMILE FOR ME AU OF SUN AND MOON AND HEARING THE SMILE FOR ME NIGHT THEME FREAKED ME OUT LIKE "OH COME ON!!!! WHAT!!!!!" BAHAHHAHHAHAHHA

[@dollydachshundart]

FR? That’s hilarious

[@VellusTerennia]

"FNAF needs no introduction, so I'll introduce it" Alright, you've got me, I'm here for the video, I'm impressed.

[@bethprince3326]

Oh my gosh that just your mother line is just so funny ``What your mother``

[@Freshly_Toast]

I personally love Greg's stinky sarcastic one liners, but I can totally see how people find him annoying! That's kinda why I love him though, he's an annoying little middle schooler just like me

[@Mekap_Oble]

Finally someone speak facts and bothering about right problems, like why we get to know MC motivation only BY THE END OF THE GAME? And this motivation also contridicts his whole character? I know Michael also told his motivation by the end of SL, but he was whole 5 games completely silent and you need to remember those games were made by 1 man, who didn't think he will make a sequel, so there is no excuse for Steel Wool

[@nineCryptids]

“And is also going to be our new canon ending” Foreshadowing

[@sev1120]

I like your chica change, though considering the design of the pizzaplex there'd need to be one change made to the building for it to be great: Have her attraction being a Roller Rink, with a roller derby track nearby for Chica to show off her moves. It'd fit with her "barbie-fitness" design theme with the leg warmers she has And one addition I'd personally make to the Vanny/Vanessa dynamic: It'd be painful for Vanessa to switch to Vanny, so it gives the player a reason to want to help Vanessa get rid of Vanny without killing her. It'll fit into the Jekyll & Hyde analogy you used in the story. Maybe when you see her change for the first time on screen she's barely able to stand upright because of it, and she gives you a single instruction "run, run fast, and don't look back"

[@markbutspelledcark3362]

i think it would be fun if moon made sure all the animatronics were charging at the end of every hour. while you would lose freddy for a bit all the other animatronics are gone,. he would still be a danger to gregore tho so maybe you could distract him with getting freddy to a recharge station? it would only work once ofc and you would lose freddy. moon also has to get the other animatronics to recharge so they would also keep him busy for a bit. idk there's just so much potential in the game !!!!!

[@salt_artsss]

Im glad im not the only one annoyed with montys achievement name, I thought it was dumb because they couldve just made it "do no evil", and if you want all four you could get a achievement for giving freddy all of the upgrades, and call it "hear no evil"

[@NoNameNoname-je3xp]

Looking back at this is making me excited for sb blast to the past and the remains mod because the vibe security gave in the older trailers gave me the sense that it was gonna be this nostalgic horror game? I feel like it was gonna have more horror for some reason,Also I wished they changed the intro a bit so it can line up with why Gregory is in Freddy I feel like there should’ve been a sequence where we have to sneak away from Vanny in some dark room like in the old teaser trailers where Vanny says “Gregory I know I lost my temper” and maybe moon would also be in there as he was seen stalking us

[@gold3987]

Imma be a bit honest... I REALLY hate how we just destroy all of the animatronics, cause like it or not I feel like their way to human, and every time I just re-look at it... it just seems like Gregory is a psychopath. . . more feeling like I'm the monster then them, when it's really smart/sentient AI. . . . I swear I feel like I am the only one that feels like that, but I just don't want to cause pain to others because it makes it easier, even if it's plot reason for why, it just makes me feel more like the Villain. yknow

[@soupturn2485]

Love this video!! Also loved the background addition of the soundtrack to Smile for Me :]

[@tinycandleman6020]

I wish that more was done with Freddy. Im pretty sure Roxy is the only one who ever interacts with Freddy, which is a big missed opportunity. Showing how the animatronics interact with Freddy would show you more of their personalities. Juxtaposing that with how they do a complete 180 when they see Greg might help clue the player in that something is actually wrong with them, not just "Animatronics Evil Because Fnaf". If I was in charge of making this game, I'd add on to Freddy's battery mechanic with a suspicion/stealth mechanic. Make it so the animatronics will get suspicious if Gregory just vanishes exactly where Freddy happens to be. Freddy would still be a safe option for traveling around, but the more you use him as an escape, the more the Rockstars will realise. Wait a while without using Freddy and the suspicion would go down. If suspicion hits max, the animatronics would just tear Gregory straight out of Freddy, regardless of if they saw him enter or not. I love Security Breach, but there's 1 million and 1 little tiny things that just geel like they're missing.

[@huyguy2]

Not even a minute in and I'm already loving this

[@speedybrowntaylor9792]

This... This is a work of art..... I agree with this story you made it works with the hole Vanny is Vannasa thing also the ending where we switch to Vannasa and we lock the door behind us and she turns into Vanny every hour that was so cool! Also I thought the same thing when I played the game nice work! Also Roxys eye upgrade with the body heat thing was cool keep up the good work Also when chica turns her head around than she takes about 2 to 3 seconds to click her head back also with montys foot prents thing was super cool! I love your work.