Semester 1 Paragraph Writing Exam (1) امتحان مع التصحيح

[@itszoldik5434]

I chose to study English for many reasons. Firstly, English has been my favorite language since I was young. I was watching a KZbin video of people speaking English, and the obsession began. Secondly, I’m planning to travel the world, and by learning English, I can make friends in each country and learn about their culture. Finally, my dream job is to be an English teacher, so by studying it, I can achieve that goal and be like my high school teacher. English is the most popular language, and by improving your level in it, you can do a lot of things.

[@mouhsineelmalki3198]

Every new student knows how he will improve his english.To begin with, reading short stories,fables,small articles,and especially what you are interested in . Thanks to reading you can improve your writing,the more you read the more you write . In addition,the best to memorise new word is repeat It many times,link it with a picture in your mind, and put it in sentences . Moreover,watching english movies,TV shows,and listening to music,radio such as BBC Radio,will you improve your listening and pronunciation skills. At last,if you follow those pieces of advice,and other things you will increase your english level.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Mouhsine El Malki this is better than the first one . I'll give u my feedback

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Mouhsine El Malki remove unnecessary words and don't give much details. In addition to that, You're telling students ways to improve their English and NOT EVERY STUDENT KNOWS HOW TO IMPROVE THEIR ENGLISH. Correct that and good luck

[@mouhsineelmalki3198]

@@AhmedElrhazi شكرا راه كتبت فالرقة should knowsغيرفكومنطير نسيتها

[@mehditouijer8718]

شكرا بزاااااف على مجهوداتك معانا الله ارحم ليك الوليدين 🌷

[@ultrasmaroc7409]

أحسن وأفظل استاد ، جزاك الله خيراا ❤

[@bv36e]

بغيت نسولك واش دوزتي ولا مزال!؟😑

[@ultrasmaroc7409]

@@bv36e غدا ان شاء الله غاندوز

[@bv36e]

@@ultrasmaroc7409 اه حتا انا بحالك ربي يوفقنا وصاف

[@ultrasmaroc7409]

@@bv36e اللهم امين ❤

[@nouhailamaroc777]

There are a lot of advantages of speaking a foreign language. First of all, you'll have another resource of knowledge. In fact, many books are not translated to many languages, so the advantage here is you would have the opportunity of reading new books. In addition, when you are learning a language, you're discovering a new culture, and that will probably make you more open-minded in life. Finally, it's a good outil to make different friends and it helps to get more social. Without talking about how it's good for your mind, a foreign language is very useful.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

--Good There are a lot of advantages of speaking a foreign language. First of all, you'll have another SOURCE of knowledge. In fact, many books are not translated to many languages, so the advantage here is you would have the opportunity of reading new books. In addition TO THAT, when you are learning a language, you're discovering a new culture, and that will probably make you more open-minded in life. Finally, it's a good TOOL to make different friends and it helps to BECOME more SOCIABLE. Without talking about how it's good for your mind, a foreign language is very useful.

[@nouhailamaroc777]

@@AhmedElrhazi thank you so much teacher,❤️🙏

[@mohaago4135]

Nice

[@azzafiomar9983]

I agree with. There is a matter to focus is we have to read much of books to be successful

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Exactly Mr. Omar. Reading is wonderful and it helps us develop our language

[@daliarabiai6005]

You really save us sir, you explained everything without make us confused

[@rekaiaguen382]

This is 1st year??

[@fatimadjj3392]

My reasons for choosing study English. Ther are a lot of reasons for choosing Study English.First,Ilove very much English.because,my perfect Lange.Also,It's international language ,you can help me for work in a many places. Morocco,France ,and Other places.For me, study English is a best etudes in University.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

My reasons for choosing TO study English. Ther are a lot of reasons for choosing To study English.First, I love very much English because IT IS my perfect(=?) ALNGUAGE. Also, it's AN international language THAT can help me GET A WORK EASILY IN DIFFERENT DOMAINS, AND IN MANY COUNTRIES LIKE Morocco, France. For me, STUDYING English is THE best FIELD in University.

[@SELYNA-n5j]

Sir please carry on with us in the second semester pleaaaase !!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

[@AhmedElrhazi]

I will do my best to help you improve your English. Thanks for your comment ;)

[@souhailabrouk4156]

I found this on my recommendation , and I have exam is writing after 2 weeks. I like how KZbin understand my desires. And thank you for your efforts.

[@mariemboudaoud9357]

sir S2 laystr 3lik w chokran lik bzaf 😍

[@aymenk2733]

Thank you so much for this i was really lost on this subject well i guess not anymore i know what to do

[@salaheddine5238]

thanks, man that was really helpful wish you the best

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Welcome bro Salah. Wish you the best too

[@abdoamari4703]

I have an exam this evening, I wish your video will benefit me to get a good grade

[@AhmedElrhazi]

I prayed for your success

[@abdoamari4703]

@@AhmedElrhazi thank you so much

[@moughitoscar9783]

thank you very much sir for your efforts i think a lot of students need this kind of lessons in youtube because the teachers don t give us the full explination of the lesson and i hope in the future you will drop all the modules

[@AhmedElrhazi]

So nice of you and thank you for your words. Check playlists for the other MODULES

[@lostman5881]

The Best Advice In English The better advice to new students of english . First , Listening a music and you were watching video on youtube , listening in podcast alwys time .Moreever , Reading a books and story , poems or news everything , reading is good for brain , he thinks brain in english . Next , The social media you followers artist speaking english or they were following speakers in usa or uk , you should changes yourself and phone , pc , laptop everything . To sum up , The best languages of words it english , And good luck in learn english.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

@@lostman5881 The Best Advice to Learn English ---> I have just seen this comment. Many apologies. After this time of studying English, you should be able to spot your own errors and improve them, I believe.

[@saidaitahmed490]

الله اجزيك بالخير ...واو شرح جميل جدا

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Said Ait Ahmed بارك الله فيك على التعليق المشجع السي سعيد..أتمنى لك التوفيق

[@saidaitahmed490]

@@AhmedElrhazi really we need your helpe , jazakh Allaho khayran

[@mounamessai9881]

Thank you very much sir 😊🎉

[@crystalsnow338]

Thank you sir Iam so lucky to find your channel and I appreciate your great efforts for us. Thanks again 🙏🏻🙏🏻

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Thanks and welcome.It's my pleasure to help ;)

[@posneramiir2871]

No one can deny that shopping online has a lot of disadvantages. First, virtual shopping is not completely secure; a lot of people have lost money by buying things online, besides, the problem of personal information being hacked. The second problem is receiving the wrong order. In other words, you order something and you receive something else, or the size is wrong, or the color is not what you ordered. Third, it can take a long time to receive your order, the average time might be from six days to one month. Therefore, you are not able to receive your order quickly. Lastly, you only see the product in pictures that cannot give a lot of information, and you can't touch the product to find out about its quality. As well, you can't bargain over the price. Shopping online can really be problematic because of these disadvantages.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Well done! No one can deny that shopping online has a lot of disadvantages. First, virtual shopping is not completely secure; a lot of people have lost money by buying things online, besides, THERE IS the problem of personal information being hacked. The second problem is receiving the wrong order. In other words, you order something and you receive something else, or the size is NOT EXACT, or the color is not THE ONE you ordered. Third, it can take a long time to receive your order, the average time might be from six days to one month. Therefore, you are not able to receive your order quickly. Lastly, you only see the product in pictures that cannot give a lot of information ABOUT IT, and you can't touch the product to find out about its quality. As well, you can't bargain over the price. Shopping online can really be problematic because of these disadvantages.

[@abderrahim5609]

Good job brother

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Thank you so much

[@رشيدةبركاش]

شكرا متتبعة جديدة

[@tarektarik6886]

Its very very helpful , thanks a million bro

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Always welcome

[@dinamd3009]

شكرا بزاف على لمجهود 🙏🏻دعيو معايا❤️❤️

[@AhmedElrhazi]

مرحباا الله يسر ليك

[@Unusual_stuff]

تحياتي استمر ❤❤

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Thank you

[@mohamedloukhnati6431]

Smoking cigarette was the biggest expérience moment from my teenager to moment. i was tottaly alone at my house. my dad, who didn't smoke had a shelf where he put souvenir. so there was a Marlboro pack, I inhale before freaking out and running to the bathroom to take a shower and brush my teeth. The following day i felt like a man who has a small secret, i felt like a man who become a responsible for myself, a man who changed and become a really man. After 10 years of smoking the result is i'm a addicted to this thing i become skiny, Anxiety and Trouble concentrating. I have been trying to overcome my addiction. Smoking cigarettes is really bad habit.

[@gsmty8907]

Thanks for your efforts

[@AhmedElrhazi]

It's my pleasure

[@ctrl-alt-del0]

Thanks for your time please take a look at this one and give me your opinion teacher. Thanks again. Shopping online is a dangerous process can lead to serious financial problems. First of all; the internet is a place full of scammers, you can get easily tricked by shopping from an unknown website and they will steal your card bank information. Secondly shopping online means waiting days if not months to get what you have ordered, getting your orders quicker means paying more money. Therefore you end up paying the double price of what you can get easily from the shop in the city. Moreover, most of the shipping companies don’t care about your items if they are fragile ; all they want is money. thus sometimes you will get your orders broken or damaged. Not to mention that when you are shopping online you don’t know what you will get; you may see in the images that it is a chair but what you get is different, you may recieve just a toy or a painting of chair who knows. In summary, shopping online is a risk that should be avoided

[@sarabelmaati5489]

Good job 👍 Teacher

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Thank you

[@abdelilahtv2395]

Merci pour le moment frèrot u are the best

[@rasputin2961]

thank you so much man ..... you are the face of hope .

[@AhmedElrhazi]

God bless you, hopeful man...

[@nihalamahfouf5581]

Thank you So much, I'm so Happy because i Found U Sir, i was Upset because i cant Understand from my university teachers, please Sir Can U Please Check For Me If These lessons are The same in Fes University also Are all Grammar lessons for s1 s3 too

[@PoHMMORPG]

Disadvantages of shopping online Shopping online is a new method of shopping. It allows you to buy whatever you want via the internet. However, there are some disadvantages to this shopping method. First, sometimes, there is no guarantee that the product you want to buy is as good as that in the product review. For instance, buying a dress that looks so good in the review but when you receive it, it doesn't look that good which is very disappointing. Second, delivering a product, sometimes, may not be easy. You have to pay extra money to receive the product faster. However, sometimes you don't receive any, and you have no choice but to contact the web site you've shipped from. Briefly, shopping online has a lot of disadvantages. ana deja tan3rf nktb wakha new f writing in general walakin i feel so basic and i want to improve and write like a pro . l content dyal had paragraph might be misleading or incorrect never mind it and thank you

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Salam, I have honestly liked your writing and I am just giving you my feedback as a friend, not as a teacher . Sometimes is repeated three times here = leave just one. However, sometimes you don't receive any,= remove however and sometimes. Instead write: In some cases, you don't even receive the product... The rest , for me, is auite good. Best of Luck!

[@kaoutarelmrini1478]

Thanks for youuu ntmnna t3awnna Hta f l s2 inchallah

[@shadowyt2891]

look so easy from here

[@hibamorocco-h4m]

7:30 😂😂😂 thank you for your efforts

[@AhmedElrhazi]

hhhh my first one

[@Carlinyurv]

Thank u so much your channel helped me 🥺😁💜

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Happy to help Hajar

[@user-po4kd3ui5i]

Thank you very much

[@AhmedElrhazi]

You are welcome

[@aminbentouhami7951]

Thanks!! this was really helpful ❤❤❤

[@mehdikoka2906]

In Morocco there are many factors for dropping out of school today.A lot children exposed to dropping out of school because of poverty. Second, the must reason of dropping out of school because of it is so far from the mountains population. Females are the most likely to dropping out of school for reason to mariage. In the end, Nobody denies that the government is doing everything it can to reduce the dropping out of school in Morocco. Despite this , the rate of this phenomenon is still rising. That's why the government must find more effective solutions to the shortage of this phenomenon. استاذ تنمنى تجاوبني. اذا كنتي نتا هو الأستاذ لي غيصصح ليا شحال تعطني على هاد الشي لي كتبت بكل منطقية الله يحفظك.♥️

[@AhmedElrhazi]

In Morocco, there are many factors for dropping out of school today. A lot OF children ARE exposed to dropping out of school because of poverty. Second, the must IMPORTANT reason FOR dropping out of school IS DISTANCE, ESPECIALLY FOR PEOPLE THAT LIVE IN the mountains . Females are most likely to drop out of school TO GET MARRIED. In the end, Nobody denies that the government is doing everything it can DO to STOP dropping out of school in Morocco. Despite this , the rate of this phenomenon is still rising. That's why the government must find more effective solutions to END IT VERY QUICKLY. -----Correction brother. Concerning the mark it is entirely up to YOUR UNIVERSITY PROF!

[@posneramiir2871]

Thank you so much for your effort! I would like to tell you about my first cigarette. No so long ago I was travelling with my friends to Moscow to spend time there and enjoy the city. When we arrived the weather was ideal; the sky was cloudless and the air warm. It was bright and the trees were everywhere. Then, we walked down the street on our way to the hotel. Suddenly, we found a box of cigarettes which I put in my pocket until we reached the hotel. Next, I bought a lighter that was so beautiful. I felt like a real man; strong and powerful. Then I lgot comfortable in the armchair, and I said to my friend with confidence that I was the danger. After I smoked, when I felt some pain in my throat and had a few coughs. Then I couldn't control myself, and I even lost consciousness and ended up in the hospital. I discourage people to be addicted to cigarettes. That is dangerous.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

---Good Job, man ! Well written (y) I would like to tell you about my first cigarette. NoT so long ago I was travelling with my friends to Moscow to spend time there and enjoy the city. When we arrived the weather was ideal; the sky was cloudless and the air warm. It was bright and trees were everywhere. Then, we walked down the street on our way to the hotel. Suddenly, we found a box of cigarettes which I put in my pocket until we reached the hotel. Next, I bought a lighter that was so beautiful IN SHAPE. I felt like a real man; strong and powerful. Then I lgot comfortable in the armchair, and I said to my friend with confidence that I was the danger. After THAT, I smoked AND felt some pain in my throat and had a few coughs. Then I couldn't control myself, and I even lost consciousness and ended up in the hospital. I discourage people to be addicted to cigarettes. That is dangerous.

[@ayaelamrani4488]

Correct please ! 7- Reasons for choosing to study English . English is one of best languages in the world. There are some causes why I choose to study English. First, I love English which is my favorite subject, also I enjoy listening to Western music because I like the lyrics, atmosphere and Adele's British accent ,in addition to watch the films. Second, I want to be an English teacher or a cabin crew but that requires speaking the language with the native speakers. In the end, I would like to travel to United Kingdom and United States to talk with foreigners fluently, discover new cultures, taste food, visit museums and meet different people. Instead of wasting time make a plan to develop your language by watching movies, listening to music and podcasts.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

@ayaelamrani4488 1. Capitalise Choosing, Study. -->I love the English language. It is my favourite school subject. I enjoy listening to Western music. In addition to that, I like watching English films.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

@@ayaelamrani4488 rewrite the paragraph using the S V O structure to express your ideas with clarity. Svo(Subject Verb Object)

[@ayaelamrani4488]

​@@AhmedElrhazi Thank you so much

[@bachiryouness3622]

Thanks for you teacher

[@AhmedElrhazi]

You are welcome

[@yossefra8198]

thank you so much for your efforts. you really help us a lot topic: money a blessing and a curse Money is a blessing or a curse ? Money is a blessing in the same way that guns do not kill. People kill people and people abuse money. First, the big abuse comes when people convert money into power to manipulate and enslave others. For example when rich people exploit the poor class because they need money to survive. Second, overworking to earn more money. Most people measure their self-worth by their bank account. The bigger it is, the better they fell about themselves. Therefor, we put so much energy into earning money and that cause endless anxiety. Third, money can make people change badly. Greediness and power becomes the most important thing in their lives. In the end, the blessing or the curse part comes depending upon how you respond to it.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

---Sorry, I was traveling...Just saw your comment, Youssef. Money Is a Blessing or a Curse ? Money is a blessing in the same way that guns do not kill BY THEIR OWN/ BY JUST OWNING A GUN. People kill people and people abuse money. First, the big abuse comes when people convert money into power to manipulate and enslave others. For example, THE rich exploit the poor because the LATTER need money to survive. Second, overworking to earn more money. Most people measure their self-worth by their bank account. The bigger it is, the better they FEEL about themselves. ThereforE, we put so much energy into earning money and that causeS endless anxiety. Third, money can CHANGE people badly. Greediness and power BECOME the most important thingS in their lives. In the end, the blessing or the curse part comes depending upon how you respond to it./ HOW ONE USES MONEY

[@yossefra8198]

@@AhmedElrhazi thank you so much🙏🙏🙏

[@mohammedelamrani7775]

Please, correct this paragraph. 3- Advantages of speaking a foreign languages . Foreign language is to speak another language than your mother language for example French, Spanish, English..There are many advantages to speak a foreign language. First, the languages provide job opportunities because the most of job require the languages, for example there are two people who want to be chosen to the job, the first person speaks English, French, and Spanish, while the second one speaks just fresh, consequently, the first one was selected. Second, sometimes the opportunity comes to go abroad this is why learning foreign languages is important. To sum up, a foreign language can make a person feel confident.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

@@mohammedelamrani7775 --A foreign language (no indefinite articles with plural forms) --Foreign language is to speak (change it to =Speaking another language means an additional ability to communicate using a different tongue) ---many advantages to SPEAKING. ---

[@AhmedElrhazi]

@@mohammedelamrani7775 Rewrite the paragraph employing the S V O structure to facilitate your clarity of ideas (subject Verb Object)

[@hamzaatbir146]

thank you so much, that's very helpful

[@doshamitv5020]

Vive Ahmed, best teacher save us from death :D

[@AhmedElrhazi]

DoshamiTV hhh viva Amigo... I'm doing my best bro

[@posneramiir2871]

No one can deny that money is a blessing and a curse. First, money is a blessing that depending on how one uses it. In other words, if you use it for useful things or essential things like food, clothes, travel, etc, one can say it is a blessing, and it makes life easier. Second, money can also be a curse depending if it is used for useless things like drugs, alcohol, murder, and many other things. If it is used for these means, one can say it destroys lives and is not helpful. Money can be both a blessing and a curse so use it carefully.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

--Good !! No one can deny that money is BOTH a blessing and a curse. First, TO SAY money is a blessing that dependS on how one uses it. In other words, if you use it for useful things or essential things like food, clothes, travel, etc, one can say it is a blessing, and it makes life easier. Second, money can also be a curse if it is used for useless things like drugs, alcohol, murder, and many other things. If it is used for these means, one can say it destroys lives and is not helpful. Money can be both a blessing and a curse so use it carefully.

[@ihbachzineb2067]

شنو النصيحة لي تقدر تعطيني باش نطور من نفسي ف writing عندي نقص في vocabulary

[@wiambachtawi8845]

Thank you so much about your effors

[@malikalousra1129]

Thank you very much teacher

[@HichamLouazri]

English study essential department in the university. The reason why I choose to study English: First of all, I found myself in love with this language, also, it is easy to comprehend. that's why I didn't hesitate of choosing it. second, with English, you can find the information easy to learn about the culture to be open in the world. third, the man reason I want to be a teacher in abroad in other to take a huge experience, therefore, I choose to study English. If you could teacher give a mark on this

[@AhmedElrhazi]

English studIES AT university. The reason why I HAVE CHOSEN to study English: First of all, I love this language. It is easy to comprehend. That's why I didn't hesitate TO CHOOSE it. Second, with English you can find the information easILy AND learn about OTHER cultureS to be open ON the world. Third, the maIn reason IS THAT I want to beCOME a teacher OF ENGLISH AND TEACH IT abroad.

[@fatimaboutouga4703]

The reasons for dropping out of school. There ara three main reasons for dropping out of school.First ,the bad economic situation of the family or poverty.Second, most parents are uneducated,so the are ihnorant of the importance of the study and its benefits.Third in many village in particulare,the school is too far from home,and lack of school transportation.Finally.there are many reasons for dopping out of school.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

The reasons for dropping out of school. There ara three main reasons for dropping out of school.First ,the bad economic situation of the family, which is poverty. Second, most parents are uneducated, so they are ignorant of the importance of the studying and its benefits.Third, in many villages in particulare the school is too far from home, and lack of school transportation also. These are the three important reasons that I see for dopping out of school.

[@fatimaboutouga4703]

@@AhmedElrhazi thank you

[@nezhakabiri7362]

👍👍👍

[@imngg5531]

Thank you. That was helpful.

[@mohsinebenhassi9721]

Thank you so much sir

[@mariemboudaoud9357]

شكرا ليك بزاف

[@mohammedboudhir2110]

اخي ممكن رابط السلسلة لي دكرتي ديال improve language

[@sarabanani4766]

شكرًا

[@YassineQostal-ib3dy]

Wex maxi mouchkil njtbou 3onwan ousstad li 3endna gal lina makhassekx tketbou

[@chimi8911]

شكرا بزااف كتعاونونا

[@khadijalakrakss1252]

عفاك شنو سميت السلسلة لي نقراو بالنسبة لي عنهم نيڤو طايح

[@AhmedElrhazi]

اقرا وتعلم + تمارين في الكتابة + اساسيات النحو Basics of grammar

[@salahdine-maarifa]

خويا ممكن تعطيني اجوبة على هذه الاسئلة Transforme the following topics into clear and purposeful topic sentence 1 smart phones and education (an opinion paragraph) 2-drugs addiction(a cause /effect paragraph 3-motivation and success (an expository paragraph) 4-learning a foreign languages(process paragraph) 5-summer vacation (narrative paragraph

[@ayaelamrani4488]

Could you correct this paragraph please😊. 4- Reasons for dropping out of school . Dropping out of school is a common phenomenon. There are some reasons of dropping out of school. Firstly, the family problems that affect the student's life psychologically and physically such as parent's divorce, which leads to student addiction. Besides, the meetings of bad friends and the thoughts of the teenagers that say there are many ways to forget the issues. Finally, lack of money is the biggest problem that leads students to look for work to earn a living. To conclude, the parents play an important role in raising their children and their attachment to school.

[@sarabanani4766]

شكرا

[@hajarlabibb]

The major disadvantages of online shopping are as follows; first, late shipment or delay in delivery. when you buy any product online it takes from 1 week to 5 weeks or for the product to arrive at the destination country, and if you want to get it earlier you need to pay more. second, the products are not similar sometimes to what you have seen online when you receive them, they can be completely different in size or quality. The third disadvantage is you don't receive your product at all due to weather or other circumstances. However, there are many other disadvantages of online shopping yet the advantages outweigh them.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Would you like me to correct it? (just seen your comment)

[@hajarlabibb]

@@AhmedElrhazi Yeah I would like to and thank you!!!

[@AhmedElrhazi]

@@hajarlabibb The major disadvantages of online shopping are as follows: first, late shipment or delay in the delivery. When you buy any product online, it takes from one to five weeks for the product to reach you. In case you want to get it earlier, you need to pay more fees. Second, the unsimilarities of products. Sometimes the product you see online is not the one you receive them. They can be completely different in size or quality. The third disadvantage is that you don't receive your product at all due to weather or other circumstances. However, there are many other disadvantages of online shopping yet the advantages outweigh them.

[@hajarlabibb]

@@AhmedElrhazi thank you so much I appreciate your help 💖💖

[@Joussefme]

Pre - writing n9dro nzidoha m3a ( B. o. d. e. r) steps

[@AhmedElrhazi]

It can be added. But this will only help you in writing yuour draft

[@Joussefme]

@@AhmedElrhazi thank you so much bro ♥️♥️

[@fatimadjj3392]

Please teacher chrah Lina course "Quotations"

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Kifach "Quotations ?

[@fatimadjj3392]

@@AhmedElrhazi Writing skills :Incorporating References and Quotations.

[@achabitelevision1085]

3afak Chi exemple dyal reading comprehension

[@praisebetoallah3369]

ممكن التصحيح أستاذ ☺️ "I am very simple, I love my nature and I hate to be pretentious in order to gain admiration. I believe that the eye of the lover sees beauty in faults. My words are not elegant and I do not know compliments. I love kind words but I hate hypocrisy. I do not tend to be too much, but the sincere few are enough for me. I care about her sincerity..💛!

[@AhmedElrhazi]

I am very simple, I love my nature and I hate to be pretentious in order to gain admiration. I believe that the eye of the lover sees beauty in faults/ FLAWS. My words are not elegant and I do not know compliments. I love kind words but I hate hypocrisy. I do not tend to be too much (=your idea here isn't clear to me as a reader), but the sincere few (unclear idea here, too) are enough for me. I care about her sincerity. (Her? who is she? Unclear meaning) ---Good try, just edit your paragraph.

[@younessmaghfour3602]

Nicee

[@darkvibes4587]

شكرا شكرا شكرا

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Asmaa Filal Share share share hhhh

[@soumasoso6923]

Merci bcp

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Souma Soso Avec plaisir - - partager svp ^^

[@hassinefatimazahrae4710]

Dropping out of school. Dropping out of school is leakage that happens in procession child's school which stop in certain phase without complete his studies. There are many reasons for dropping out of school: first, socio-economic conditions such as poverty and early marriage for girls. Also, illiteracy or long distance for school. Secondly, weakness of pedagogical means such as overcrowding in the school and bad relationships between student and school. Finally, in order to fight dropping out of school must be diversification of teaching and learning methods and avoiding all forms of violence in the educational field.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Dropping out of school is leakage that happens in procession child's school which stop in certain phase without complete his studies=== Please REWRITE THIS INTRO There are many reasons for dropping out of school: first, socio-economic conditions such as poverty and early marriage for girls. Also, illiteracy or long distance FROM school. Secondly, weakness of pedagogical means such as overcrowding in the school and bad relationships between student and school. Finally, in order to fight dropping out of school must be diversification of teaching and learning methods and avoiding all forms of violence in the educational field.

[@amalbakka9055]

Btw thank you so much for your efforts 😊

[@chimi8911]

thank you

[@ilhamhimed4996]

I still remember the day when I smoked my first cigarette. It happened ten years ago with a friend of mine. We were young and reckless. We decided to try it together. We bought two cigarettes. After that, we went to my friend's house. The house was empty, so we took our opportunity. Next, we lit the cigarettes, and we took a puff at the same time. At that moment, I could not see my friend anymore. It hurted me a lot. I felt like my throat and my chest are burning. After a few second, I could not breath well. I started to throw up for almost two minutes. It was a horrible sensation. Finaly, I drank a big glass of water and promised myself that I will never do it again.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

I still remember the day when I smoked my first cigarette. It happened ten years ago with a friend of mine. We were young and reckless. We decided to try it together. We bought two cigarettes. After that, we went to my friend's house. The house was empty, so we took our opportunity. Next, we lit the cigarettes, and we took a puff at the same time. At that moment, I could not see my friend anymore. It HURT (irregular verb) me a lot. I felt like my throat and my chest WERE burning. After a few secondS I could not breathE well. I started to throw up for almost two minutes. It was a horrible sensation. Finaly, I drank a big glass of water and promised myself that I WOULD never do it again. ----Well done! I liked it

[@ilhamhimed4996]

@@AhmedElrhazi thank you

[@gameswxc8364]

...........Buying things from the virtual world is modern thing, there are some problems behinds it. First of all, it's hard to find safe web site or app to buy things moreover this issue many of us have, this is why people do not intend to buy from internet. Second, there is issues whit confined payment options, in fact, your money may be lost or stolen. Third, you may not be at home when your parol is delivered so there is a possibility of it being stolen. To sum up shopping online can be bad if you are not sure about the security of the site. I want to asck you if it's ok to use ideas from to internet. thanks a lot.

[@Abdelati_um6p572]

The first smoking The first time I smoked seem a little sad.first,when I entered prison, I met someone who was ruthless in his behavior with new prisoners,he was the reason that made me smoking so, I took a cigarette from him without hesitation due to his harshness.since then, I have been addicted to doing this.finally I wish I hadn't smoked because it has become an addiction that difficult to face.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

The first time I smoked WAS a little sad. First, when I entered prison, I met someone who was ruthless in his behavior with new prisoners. He was the reason that made me smokE. So, I took a cigarette from him without hesitation due to his harshness.Since then, I have been addicted to doing this. Finally I wish I hadn't smoked because it has become an addiction that IS difficult to face.

[@Abdelati_um6p572]

Thank you ❤️ that means my paragraph is good

[@AhmedElrhazi]

@@Abdelati_um6p572 you can write a better one next time

[@Abdelati_um6p572]

Thank you inchaallah I'll

[@aloustademustapha5016]

هذا paragraph انجزتوا فاطار الاستعداد لامتحانات S2 2021 My First Cigarette My first cigarette permitted me to achieve two paramount goals for me . Firstly , I proved to others I was no longer a small child but an adult . Since I decided to smoke , I showed my parents, my family members, and my friends that I became a man who acted like men . If my friend Ali could drive his father's car , l was able to do the hard like smoking . Secondly, I achieved my autonomy as I practiced my individual freedom in making decisions related to my personal life . I broke obstacles and taboos , set by society , based on control especially in relationships between adults and children . Finally , It was my first cigarette which let me to realize two quite important things in my career . نتمنى نكون احترمت فيه. توجيهاتكم شكرا بالنسبة للاسطر ميمكنش كتابة التعليق مكتعطيكش text Ajusté

[@AhmedElrhazi]

My First Cigarette My first cigarette permitted me to achieve two paramount goals. Firstly , I proved to others I was no longer a small child but an adult . Since I decided to smoke , I showed my parents, my family members, and my friends that I became a man who acted like men . If my friend, Ali, could drive his father's car, l was able to do the hard THINGS like smoking . Secondly, I achieved my autonomy as I practiced my individual freedom in making decisions related to my personal life . I broke obstacles and taboos THAT ARE set by society , based on control especially in relationships between adults and CHILDREN . Finally , It was my first cigarette which let me to realize two quite important things in my career ----Quite good. Keep up the good work!

[@aloustademustapha5016]

@@AhmedElrhazi Thank you very much professor

[@aloustademustapha5016]

This paragraph can be taken as a scinario of a movie or a short story about a children who was Ignored by his parents and lived an inner struggle . Consequently, he decided to rebel against all restrictions and social norms . Therefore, everything was forbbiden became permissible to him . Writing needs an unusual imagination and a large fiction

[@AhmedElrhazi]

@@aloustademustapha5016 if you want to read it in this analytical way, I would definitely agree. And it can make a good short story for such analysis of rebellion

[@shaimaebrk5987]

❤❤❤

[@laila09873]

Morocco has a amazing places to visit ,and it is characterized by delicious. استاد عفاك واش هاد topic sentence صحيحة حيت لبروف كالينا خصنا نهضرو على جوج حوايج كايخصو داك الشي لي غاتهضرو عليه

[@saad8126]

Sir, is it necessary to write a title when it comes to paragraph writing, especially in the exam?

[@AhmedElrhazi]

yeess

[@saad8126]

@@AhmedElrhazi thank youuu

[@khachba_moha7581]

Speak a forgein languages have many adventages in our life . First , if you learned the second languges you will use it in a lot of things ,such as , when you meet with people who speak another language , it will help you for communicate with them and inderstand what did they say . Second, the forgein languae will help you if you want to travel , as in airport . Third , you can get a good job , like ,to be teacher of that language which you learned it or works in the company , in the hotels , ect . Final , Learn the second language is very important in you life, because it will help you a lot .

[@AhmedElrhazi]

khachba_ Moha General remarks : -work on your spelling -subject -verb agreement (rah dert 3liha dars f lesssns grammar ) - your ideas are not clear to the reader. - revise Grammar tenses - Linking words... ( finally, ...) You TRANSLATED from Darija to ENGLISH = wrong. I advise you to do more reading. And your level will be better. Anyway, I understood your ideas. (Y)

[@doshamitv5020]

@@AhmedElrhazi 9rite hadshi dialo rj3ni mkelkh f had lila hhhhh nari 3la blan khssni 3awtani ntel videowate kamlin

[@nuhaa4950]

Shopping online has become extremely popular nowadays, yet it still has many disadvantages. First, shopping online could be so frustrating to the clients when they do not receive the right color they ordered, the right size, or even the right piece of cloth. It is very common for these unprofessional mistakes to happen. Also,in shopping online the order could take extra time than what it supposed to, or arrive after its deadline when you no longer need it. Another disadvantage of shopping online is being a victim of the fake stores out there. Where you will get robed ; you will not receive your order nor get back your money. Finally, in online stores the items are usually expensive than the normal shops. They take the advantage of the fact that you will get the item to the door of your house, and add some extra costs to the order. In v2, online shops are not always the perfect choice to buy all of your stuff. Prof could u please check this if it's possible 🙆🏻

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Shopping online has become extremely popular nowadays, yet it still has many disadvantages. First, shopping online could be so frustrating to the clients when they do not receive the right color they ordered, the right size, or even the right piece of clothES. It is very common for these unprofessional mistakes to happen. Also, in shopping online the order could take extra time than what it IS supposed to, or arrive after its deadline when you no longer need it. Another disadvantage of shopping online is being a victim of the fake stores out there. Where you will get roBbed, you will not receive your order nor get back your money. Finally, in online stores the items are usually expensive than the normal shops. They take the advantage of the fact that you will get the item to the door of your house, and add some extra costs to the order. In v2, online shops are not always the perfect choice to buy all of your stuff. ----Good writing style

[@youssefaitahmed4700]

شكون من هنا كيقرا فعين الشق؟

[@saidasaida-r2c]

Im stading in mohamedia

[@amalbakka9055]

I find a lot of difficulties for answering about the topic sentences .

[@doshamitv5020]

Baka :p

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Amal Bakka It take some practice Amal..keep trying your best

[@amalbakka9055]

Thanks a lot 🙂

[@posneramiir2871]

_ Write a paragraph about : Advantages of speaking a foreign language. I would like to tell you about the benefits of speaking a foreign language. First of all, it allowing you to make connections, relationships, and friends from different countries. Next, a foreign language would give you a lot of information about culture, religions, and many other things. Then, easy traveling and communication in a comfortable way. Secondly, Improve memory to learn other things very fast. Next, a big chance to solve problems' in different ways. Then, See life with a different version. Lastly, Making money through teaching it to others. Next, competitive advantage to get the job. Learn foreign languages is very important, I encourage people to avid languages.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

I would like to tell you about the benefits of speaking a foreign language. First of all, it ALLOWS you to make ACQUAINTANCES, relationships, and friends from different countries. Next, a foreign language would give you a lot of information about culture, religions, and many other things. Then, iIT MAKES traveling easy and communication comfortable.Learning another language also improves memory and helpts to learn other things very fast. THERE IS a big chance to solve problems in different ways. Lastly, IT CAN GIVE US THE CHANCE TO EARN money through teaching it to others, AND TO GET A GOOD JOB. LearnING foreign languages is very important. I encourage people to LEARN THEM.

[@posneramiir2871]

@@AhmedElrhazi thanks so much How is my paragraph?

[@fatimadjj3392]

3afak sahah liya had writing.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

I did

[@hasnacharia6398]

شكرا دير لينا شي حاجة على الجديدة

[@roubad9034]

This article reveals how to write a paragraph in English: mcpfreelance.com/the-paragraph/

[@soumiaelouafi9679]

What about controling idea ,sir

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Salam, explain your question please :)

[@soumiaelouafi9679]

Bghit nswl 3afak wach l controling idea hya sentence ra9m wahd flparagrph wmn moraha mobacha 2 w 3

[@daniaelotmani683]

Hi how are you doing? I really appreciate your efforts

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Dania Elotmani Thank you so much Dounia. I'm doing well : )

[@helloandroid3994]

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[@AhmedElrhazi]

Hello android You are welcome : ) thanks

[@Laila-ui1jo]

Please dir lina the old man and the sea charha lina please 💓

[@AhmedElrhazi]

I swear I just don't have time for university novels, many students ask me for the way we analyse stories, and that is what i am trying to prepare now. As a piece of advice, you have to read the story in order to understand it.

[@Laila-ui1jo]

@@AhmedElrhazi okay thanks Mr ahmed

[@marleymarlen9841]

God help anyone with their tests .

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Yassir amtot Amiin bro

[@marleymarlen9841]

@@AhmedElrhazi thank u teacher for your lessons , it's so helpful.

[@trekking_ourika_valley1753]

I wrote the same structure and ideas but unfortunately the prof give me 7 as a mark!!!

[@AhmedElrhazi]

If you still have the draft, share it here exactly as you wrote it. I am sure you made other mistakes because structure is just one THING. There are PUNCTUATION, USES OF TENSE, SENTENC STRUCTURE, CAPITALIZATION...you see ?!

[@fatimzahrakhalidi3879]

السلام عليكم أستاذ شكرا على المعلومات اللي بارطاجيتي معانا فهاد الفيديو الله يرحم الوالدين ابغيت نسولك وانتمنى تجاوبني او يجاوبني شي واحد عندو فكرة واش هاد للتصحيح اللي درتي على الامتحان واش الطريقة باش جاوبتي بيها هي نفسها اللي غادي نجاوبو بيها حتى حنا فالامتحان يعني هذاط التعريف ديال الفقرة والتقسيم ديالها من بعد على حسب الموضوع اللي اختارينا هاكا خاصو يكون ؟ الله يحفظك وشكرا مرة أخرى وانتمنى تجاوبني انا طالبة سنة أولى s1 كلية ابن زهر أكادير

[@AhmedElrhazi]

السلام عليكم فاطمة الزهراء يالله شفت التعليق ديالك سمحي ليا.....على العموم داك التقسيم كايدار الى طلبو منك الأستاد و نا درتو باش نشرح ليكم طريقة الخدمة و في غالب الأحيان غايعطيكم تكتبو فقرة متكاملة نتمنى ليك التـــــــــوفــــــــــــــيــــــــــق

[@fatimzahrakhalidi3879]

@@AhmedElrhazi صباح الخير أستاذ شكرا على الجواب ديالك الله يحفظك المهم غادي نحاول نركز على المنهجية كيفاش خدمتي انت ومن بعد نطبق داكشي

[@ilhamhimed4996]

Hii Ahmed I hope you're okay can you correct my paragraphe please thank you

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Sure !!

[@SaraRegdou-pw8be]

أستاذ اليومة دوزنا الامتحان وعطاتنا الاستاذة موضوع على uniforms in Moroccan schools يعني opinion paragraph عاااافك أستاذ الله يرحملك الوالدين بغيتك تعطيني التقييم للفقرة لي كتبت عارفة كتبقا على حساب الاستاذ ديالك لكن بغيت نعرف راسي شنو درت بقات ليا غير المسودة لي عندي فيها الافكار على ديك شي حاولت نتفكر شنو عملت في الامتحان وكتبت ديك شي لي عقلت عليه مع ديك شي لي عندي في المسودة وبغيتك تعطيني التقويم عااافك يعني بالنسبة ليلك واش الاستاذة تقدر تعطيني شي نقطة مزيانة لمهم هادي هي paragraph ديالي Wearing uniforms and. equality Wearing uniforms in Moroccan schools should existed both in private and public schools for many reasons. First, it's creating a kind of equality and justice between all students especially in the public schools and making all in the same level, because as we see today in shipment schools a lot of students dropping out from schools due to lack of equality between social classes especially when they are teenagers they focused on their appearance more than their studies to be attractive so uniforms is the best solution for this problem. Second , if all students dressing up the same clothes would better to make them that they are in their second house , and they are not foreign or less than other students. Third , some students when they feel that they do not have an attractive clothes for going to school. They prefer to have a part time job for providing themselves what they want. Finally,the students must wear uniforms and the whole schools should obligated it's students to do that . كان هذا موضوعي في الامتحان ارجوك ان تعطيني التقييم على 20 بكل صراحة كتبت لك من المسودة فقط لكت هذا تقريبا هو ما كتبته في الامتحان ارجو ان تجيبني في اقرب وقت جزااااك الله خيرا

[@SaraRegdou-pw8be]

بالنسبة للجملة الأولى كان العنوان لمهم عااافك انا مكنقراش في الجامعة كنقرا في لينيس لمهم انا عارفة ان التقييم كيبقا على الاستاذ ديالك لكن عااافك بغيت غير نعرف شحال تعطيني مثلا الله يرحملك الوالدين لما تجاوبني عااااافك

[@صندوقالمعرفة-ه6د]

ها لعار ما صحح ليا هاد الفقرة الله إيجازيك بيخير دوماج شفت القنات ديالك معطلة مابقا والو ليكزام . pieces of advice for students to improve English.First, listening considered as one of the basic rules to English Improvement. students have to know how to listen and repeat in English because that will help them to get used This language.Second,reading is very important in English learning process.students Should read as much as possible to enrich their English vocabulary. Finally,writing also help English learners to think and express their ideas. Students that write every single day they will improve their English faster than students do not write. Practice listening,reading and writing will surely improve English Language.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

يالله شفت التعليق والله Here are some pieces of advice for students to improve English. First, listening skill is considered as one of the basic rules for those who want to emprove their English. Students should know how to use listening in a benefitial way. That will help them to get used to the way words are pronouncec. Second, reading skill is very important in the proccess of English learning. Students should read as much as possible to enrich their vocabulary. Writing also helps English learners to think and express their ideas. Students that write every single day will improve their English faster than those who do not write. Praccticing the four skills: listening, reading and writing will surely help learners improve their English.

[@صندوقالمعرفة-ه6د]

@@AhmedElrhazi الله إينورك على البراجراف عافاك بغيت نعرف واش ديك الفقرة ديالي واش مقبولة ولا لا