Semester 1 Paragraph Writing Exam (2) امتحان مع التصحيح

[@AhmedElrhazi]

كلمة شكر و دعوة صادقة تكفي... اتمنى التوفيق للجميع

[@hiriomaima2993]

Lah ysahal 3lik.

[@amounachannel6973]

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[@emmababy939]

thaanks

[@bachiryouness3622]

الله يجزيك بخير

[@FatimaZahrae-l2m]

Thank uu soo much sir You posted the video 5 years ago and it still works for new generations

[@AhmedElrhazi]

@FatimaZahrae-l2m enjoy learning FZahrae

[@saidaaouardi4951]

شكرا شكرا شكرا جزييلا والله انك ملاك مرسل من السماء ..جزاك الله خيرا

[@AhmedElrhazi]

بارك الله فيـــــك الله احفظــــــــــــك

[@posneramiir2871]

No one denies that living away from home is more popular for students. However, as a university student, living far home taught me a lot of things. First, responsibility. In other words, I would be more independent, such as preparing food, cleaning the room, doing laundry, waking up alone, etc. Second, getting a part-time job, which is important to help you pay your bills and fees. For example, your apartment, books, etc. Third, making connections, friends, and relationships and to experience their traditions, and see how they behave. Fourth, to face and solve problems, which is really important in order to build your personality. As a result, become more powerful in the future. The transformation that happens in this process from innocence to maturity acquires more and more knowledge and experiences.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

No one denies that living away from home is more popular for students. However, as a university student, living far FROM home taught me a lot of things. First, responsibility. In other words, I DEPENDED ON MYSELF TO preparE food, clean MYroom, AND IN doing laundry, waking up alone, etc. Second, getting a part-time job, which is important to help you pay your bills and fees. For example, your apartment, books, etc. Third, making AQUAINTANCES, friends, and relationships and to experience their traditions, and see how they behave. Fourth, to face and solve problems, which is really important in order to build your personality. As a result, I / YOU become more powerful in the future. The transformation that happens in this process from innocence to maturity acquires more and more knowledge and experiences.

[@posneramiir2871]

Thanks so much

[@رشيدةبركاش]

شكرا استاذ انا منقطعة مدة ودرت باك حر دابا درت الانجليزية العام اللول شكرا على المساعدة ديالك بلا هاد القنوات المفيدة مغنقدرو حنا لي منقاطعين نديرو والو جزاك الله خيرا

[@AhmedElrhazi]

All the best inshalah

[@lloiisaa2574]

ربي يحفظك استاذ بارك الله فيك انا طالبة جامعية سنة اولى و فيديوهاتك تساعدني بزاف ربي يفرحك دنيا و اخره 🌺💮💮❤️❤️❤️

[@AhmedElrhazi]

الله يحفظك و شكرا ليــــــــــــــــــك

[@hassinefatimazahrae4710]

Living away from home is an important experience. And it has many benefits: we learn to be self-reliant in all every day matters, and this help us to mature and learn responsibility, such as organizing time and expenses. In addition, through this experience we gain essential skills and experience. because we fall into some situations and learn from them. Finally, living away from home is a truning point in everyone's life.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Living away from home is an important experience THAT has many benefits: we learn to be self-reliant in all every day matters, and this helpS us to mature and learn responsibility, such as organizing time and expenses. In addition, through this experience we gain essential skills because we fall into some situations and learn from them. Finally, living away from home is a truning point in everyone's life.

[@hamzaouga8975]

I ve really appreciated that , thanks sir .

[@bellatrex3068]

بارك الله فيك استاذ، الله يعطيك الخير ان شاء الله.

[@Yassine-tg1lw]

Thank u Mr.Ahmed ♥️ Mkrhnach dir lina words li kaytsta3mlo bezaaaf f lessons

[@soumiaelouafi9679]

You are very great teacher💙

[@saidasaida-r2c]

Thanks so much teacher for this effors i need

[@nassimazerbani5115]

Thanks a lot Brother for you'r effort s

[@aichaoumina1659]

جزاك الله خير الجزاء استاذي الفاضل

[@nezhakabiri7362]

Thank you so much for great lessons.👍👍👍👍

[@asmaeelbaze85]

So glad to found this videos thanks a lot for your clarification

[@AhmedElrhazi]

You are so welcome!

[@rosesebastien6828]

You are the best 💖💖

[@ayoubelhebaze4783]

Essaouira or Mogador it's one of the most popular and contemporary cities in the Kingdom of Morocco. Essaouira is a small city in the west of Morocco, is a beach city with a gleaming Atlantic shore resort. As long as you stay there, you feel comfortable and majestic, with here fascinating beach, that makes you feel relax with its clean air and the sounds of sea waves. More of that Mogador its an ancient place and nostalgic you can find Allot of here historical masterpieces and there are many cultures like Gnawa, and Jewry traditions and their buildings. This cosmopolitan city is one of the touristic cities in the world we should protect it and decorate it.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Essaouira or Mogador IS one of the most popular and contemporary cities in the kingdom of Morocco. Essaouira is a small city in the west of Morocco. IT HAS a beach with a gleaming Atlantic shore resort. As long as you stay there, you feel comfortable and majestic. THE fascinating beach makes you feel relaxED with its clean air and the sounds of sea waves. More of that, Mogador IT IS an ancient place and nostalgic. You can find A LOT of historical masterpieces HERE IN ADDITION TO OLD MUSIC/ CULTURAL MUSIC like Gnawa, and JEWISH traditions and their buildings. This cosmopolitan city is one of the touristic cities in the world THAT we should protect and decorate .

[@zakariaoussete9638]

You rock mate thx again 🙏🏻👌🏻

[@AhmedElrhazi]

You rock!

[@goolff6787]

Thank so mutch sir😘😘

[@SamsungSamsung-il9tt]

Thank U so much💙💙

[@nouhailamaroc777]

Nowadays, many people are living away from home, specially students. Originally, most of students move to another country or city because of the lack of possibilities in their own university or maybe, they don't even have a place to study their universal studies. In the other hand, even if some others find that, they prefer another place far from home just because it has more public utilities, so that when they would finish studying, they will hang out with their friends . Furthermore, sometimes people choose another cities who have big companies to join, since they were hoping to improve their business. Leaving home, to work or to study in better conditions is important for a lot of people.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Nowadays, many people are living away from home, Especially students. (E in Especially) Originally, most students move to another country or city because of the lack of possibilities in their own university or maybe, they don't even have a place to study their universal studies. -----PLEASE REFORM THE ABOVE STATEMENT. USE SIMPLE AND SHORT SENTENCES AND DONT TRANSLATE FROM DARIJA TO ENGLISH. In the other hand, even if some others find that, they prefer another place far from home just because it has more public utilities, so that when they would finish studying, they will hang out with their friends . Furthermore, sometimes people choose OTHER cities who have big companies to join, since they were hoping to improve their business. Leaving home to work or to study in better conditions is important for a lot of people.

[@chimi8911]

مشكور وفقك الله للمزيد

[@hiriomaima2993]

Thanks Ahmed

[@samdobens7087]

Brother Ahmed i do appreciate your great efforts so please dont pay any attention to those Nihilists.

[@ibrahimazegrar5322]

Thank you so much for your efforts

[@AhmedElrhazi]

So nice of you

[@davidjames3259]

yarby ayt7t lina f pw shy haja hekda, wmat7tsh lina prof shy haja llah w akbar

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Just practice and be ready nd don't worry. You will make it (y)

[@Medmed-ds4xj]

ههههه اودي ضحكتيني على داك الكائن لي انتقدك كلمة هههه باز للبعض تتوريه الشمس وهو تيشوف لك فصبعك keep up the good job Thumbs up الله اجازيك بالخير

[@nouguinz8387]

Thank u so much teacher

[@hamidel6019]

we are thankful sir

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Welcome brother Hamid

[@redalaila780]

شكرًا جزيلا

[@asmaaboukaiba5765]

Thnk you very much

[@yassinerca1859]

Thank you ❤️💚

[@mouhsineelmalki3198]

شكراا بزااف

[@saidamanchaou2890]

go on man

[@salahdine-maarifa]

says need colon or not

[@hajjiasami7001]

Very good job Sir. Thank you a bunch .by the way don't pay attention to the one's silly remarks , please.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Thank you..I have taken your suggestion seriously ;)

[@ayaelamrani4488]

Please correct 😍 Linving away from home is a difficult experience .For the following reasons. Firstly, for example wake up early, preparing the meals of the day ,also cleaning the house daily ,washing clothes ,and to do the dishes, besides, doing shopping. Secondly, being responsible for everything you do, such as the relationship with other students and neighbors. Finally, living away from home is hard, the students must be very responsible.

[@omarelghaz1918]

Thanks for all bro Ahmed

[@hajar.aaz2899]

thank u so much ^^

[@gameswxc8364]

.......Living far from home is a hudge adventure. You get to live your own way, this is an advantage especially if you and your parents have quiet different lifestyles and outlooks on life. Furthermore, there is an ability to learn things, develop ower support system, make new friends. But, one thinks i have realised over time your household they miss you more than you miss them. It is more of a sacrifice for them than us. To sum up, living away from family it is freedom, good and bad both, but it is an necessary experience make you more mature. hopefully you see this.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

I have, unfortunately, just seen it. ---.Living far from home is a HUGE adventure. You HAVE to live your own way. This is an advantage especially if you and your parents have QUITE different lifestyles and outlooks on life. Furthermore, there is an ability to learn things, develop ower support system, make new friends. But, one MAY THINK I have realised over time your household they miss you more than you miss them. It is more of a sacrifice for them than IT IS FOR us. To sum up, living away from family IS freedom, good and bad, but it is A necessary experience THAT makeS you more mature.

[@hindchannel5107]

Merciiiii....

[@فذكر-ح2و]

Thank you sir

[@AhmedElrhazi]

So nice of you

[@AhmedAhmed-xc6te]

Thank you so much ..3afak ostad wax bhal haka i9dr ithto lmtihanat bnsbal jihat mrakx koliyat 9adi 3iyad

[@AhmedElrhazi]

You are welcome....Usually bhal hakka f all universities

[@elmannanihassna9048]

شكرا

[@ayaelamrani4488]

Please correct 🙏 To be a successful student of English have to do the following steps: the time management such as finding the right time of studying, and making a list which prioritize your tasks, studying the difficult subjects first ,also reviewing lessons everyday, use the highlight and mind map method for memorization. All these skills at home. But in University ,have to finding the good seat near the front ,and looking at the teacher, Take notes while listening ,Don't let the mind wander. Finally, English is a wonderful subject and language.

[@abderrahim5609]

A hell of a man

[@AhmedElrhazi]

All the best ;)

[@narjissritaj5906]

Thaaaaank u

[@ouhejjoumohamed6246]

Please do reconsider number 3 about Taha Hussein. Taha Hussein whose books are very popular is a writer.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Salam, brother Mohammed. What was the original sentence please?

[@fatimadjj3392]

Topic: How to be a successful student of English. Ther's three phases how to be a successful student English.First,you must read a lot of books .such as ,Stories and Poèmes.Second ,don't waste time in other things.Third , search for any santenses don't undrestand of English.Finaliy ,to be a successful student of English,you chould read ,write ,and search a lot. Successful don't easily also,don't difficult.

[@fatimadjj3392]

3afak sahah liya had writing

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Topic: How to be a successful student of English. There ARE three phases OF how to be a successful student OF English. First, you must read a lot of books such as stories and poems.Second, don't waste time in other things( not clear idea).Third , USE A DICTIONARY TO EXPLAIN ANY WORD YOU DON'T UNDERSTANDr ,and do lots of research. SUCCESS ISN'T EASY AND ISN'T DIFFICULT

[@صباحبنواحي]

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته Teacher! واش الى تعطات لينا بحال Topic sentence Support detail 1/2/3 Concluding sentence واش نجاوبوهم ومن بعد نكتبوهم فالفقرة ولا نديرو ليهم التعريفات؟

[@emmababy939]

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[@AhmedElrhazi]

Check the playlist

[@ديماكاينالامل]

استاذ عفاك ممكن شرح prallelism

[@AhmedElrhazi]

I will..just remind me later

[@ديماكاينالامل]

واش فسؤل B واش كتختار ولا كديرهم كلهم

[@AhmedElrhazi]

فكرني في السؤال عفاك باش نجاوبك خويا

[@ديماكاينالامل]

@@AhmedElrhazi أنا بنت، بفيت نكول سؤال C فاش قال you can use:cordinating conjunction subordinating conjunction relative pronoun...

[@amaldrissi9353]

This is the topic The person who helped you most in your life İ consider my father as a role model in my life for several reasons.First of all,he is a symbol of happiness;he always supports me and teaches me how to be optimistic.İn addition,my father usually encourages me to be a successful girl. Moreover,he is supportive person;i find him in any hard situation, whenever I have a problem helps me to solve it.Also he guides me by giving a piece of advice and tenderness.He never ignores my dreams.my father teaches me how to become a good thinker, thanks to him İ really realize the true meaning of fatherhood.To conclude,my father is everything in my life,he is my sustance İ can not live without him

[@AhmedElrhazi]

The person who helped you most in your life I consider my father a role model in my life for several reasons. First of all, he is a symbol of happiness; he always supports me and teaches me how to be optimistic. He usually encourages me to be a successful girl. Moreover, he is a supportive person; I find him by my side in any hard situation. Whenever I have a problem, my father helps me to solve it. Also, he guides me by his pieces of advice and tenderness. He never ignores my dreams. My father teaches me how to become a good thinker. Thanks to him, I really realize the true meaning of fatherhood. To conclude,my father is everything in my life that I cannot live without him

[@amaldrissi9353]

Thank you 💕 so much teacher

[@AhmedElrhazi]

@@amaldrissi9353 Merhba

[@bachiryouness3622]

الله ينورك أستاذ بغيتك تنصحني أنا خديت باك هذا السنة باك ليبر ودرت الدراسات الانجليزية وبحكم العمل منقدرش نحضر واش ممكن نساير الدراسة وبغيتك تقولي كيفاش تيحطو الامتحانات والوقت ديالهم باش منضيعهمش حيت تنسول تلفوني كل واحد تيقول حاجة بحكم تجربتك حطني على السكة الصحيحة الله يرحم والديك مع العلم أن المستوي ديالي ضعيف

[@AhmedElrhazi]

ممكن تساير الدراسة لكن لازمك تعرف الاساتدة دياولك والدروس ديالهم وتبقى متبع معاهم باش تعرف فين وصلو و بخصوص الامتحانات ماتفكرش فيهم في مرحلة التعلم غير قرى وتعلم وحسن مستواك مايكون غير الخير الى قدرتي تحظر غايكون دائما افضل بالتوفيق أخي

[@bachiryouness3622]

@@AhmedElrhazi الله ينورك أخي ويرزقك من واسع فضله. قناتك رائعة وأنا متأكد غادي تساعدني بزاف

[@soumiaelouafi9679]

You are very great teacher💙

[@karimalouabdia]

Thanks

[@hmdcae1]

thanks

[@AhmedElrhazi]

Welcome