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[@TheFuntimeSFM]

I would like you to leave your opinion about this episode and the new series. Any suggestion you have helps me to continue improving

[@Vorgmorok]

The only thing to improve is to keep reviewing your script reading out loud or in your head so if you see any type of grammar errors, feel some words don't touch right, then rewrite the parts that don't make sense to you as well as keep the storyline within same slow but good pace time to make a good story without ending up doing Cliche, plot contrivance, or Deus ex Machina. If you don't what it is look it up on the internet. I am giving you KZbin writers' videos to help you give you an idea and help you improve your story. ShaelinWrites, Jedherne, Writer Brandon McNulty, Wrestling With Words, How to Write Effective Horror by Reedsy, How to make your writing suspenseful - Victoria Smith by Ted-Ed, and lastly How to Build a Meaningful Plot Twist by Tyler Mowery. These are tips or hacks to help you guide your creative storytelling and writing so you can get inspired about what kind of stories or scenarios they're going to be about 😊.

[@giannossky9393]

Happy birthday

[@maxi_max78]

The animation is perfect, the story seems intresting, I love the details, hope you post more

[@Jameson3D]

That last scene 👀

[@Celestia7908]

8:53 wow James tú estuviste ahí también como el video de Maty estuviste increíble no sabía que tenías un Pokémon de dragón 🤩💖😍🌟🌟👍🏻

[@TheFuntimeSFM]

The best scene👀🐻

[@auguinacasro88]

Hi jameson3d

[@auguinacasro88]

What you doing mean...

[@auguinacasro88]

I'm not sure about but for now probably Jut looking to go back

[@shubewithaleaf]

Awesome!!! The animation is so clean and I'm finding the story intriguing. Excited to see more :> ❤️

[@TheFuntimeSFM]

Thanks!!

[@funtimestudios2403]

i just find this one my KZbin Recommend, and it took me back when i watch Fnaf sfm animations from 2016-17 and its crazy to see people still doing those type of stuff. i mean.. its nice too. you're animation on this was pretty outstanding, better then all the another animations i saw from 2017. keep doing what you are doing and have fun :)

[@TheFuntimeSFM]

Thanks!!

[@thebluebear5351]

Pretty interesting episode, well done :)

[@Kingturbo847]

ofc the amphibia outro music and nice work i miss amphibia just for that i am going to start from season 1 to 3

[@Notneon0]

the old animation style omg i love itttttttt

[@Celestia7908]

Wow tu video es genial 🤩💖😍🌟👍🏻

[@TheFuntimeSFM]

Muchas gracias!! 🐻

[@Celestia7908]

​@@TheFuntimeSFMde nada amigo mío

[@thebrokentrap]

2:31 Bro, I expected everything but not this, lmao Looks really interesting, good luck with future episodes

[@cesurpro500]

perfect, its perfect ,ı cant say anything, just perfect

[@TheFuntimeSFM]

Tysm🐻

[@andretalanay753]

I see this is you're first in this Series, Nice work! 👍👏

[@Fredguy31Official]

WTH UR AN AMAZING ANIMATOR HOW DID I NOT FIND U BEFORE

[@SergioGamingCornerVA]

Nice animation! I can't wait for what you have next😊

[@karinasfm1781]

AHHH ESTOY EMOCIONADA!! por favor seguíla!

[@nanduzi2355]

I actually like it keep it up!🙌

[@TheFuntimeSFM]

Tysm!!

[@yoshua40SFM]

Para ser el primer capítulo estuvo interesante siguelo tiene potencial

[@TheFuntimeSFM]

Muchas gracias :3

[@Scar_trapp1]

Amazing animation, keep it up!

[@TheFuntimeSFM]

Thanks!!

[@sprigyuna1419]

Oh hermoso video 😮 si

[@TheFuntimeSFM]

gracias!!

[@sprigyuna1419]

@@TheFuntimeSFM de nada :3

[@SilverJackYT]

Nice video! :3

[@TheFuntimeSFM]

Thanks!!

[@cargo4nimations]

Bueen capitulo!

[@TheFuntimeSFM]

Gracias!!

[@kaylamiller1096]

I know that's Foxy in the glasses

[@Z3sty_Freddy]

Meh, the kids are tough but every thing is fine. *eye twitches*

[@Vorgmorok]

The only thing you need to improve is to keep checking your stories being connected, don't do any type of cliche, Deus Ex Machina, Plot Armor, and story dragging. If you need inspiration or help don't worry I wrote a lot of video titles along their channels in order to help you with your writing, story & Ideas. How to Build a Meaningful Plot Twist by Tyler Mowery, How to Write Effective Horror by Reeday, How to Make Your Writing Suspensuseful - Victoria Smith by Ted-ed, 7 Key Elements of Thriller Stories (Writing Advice) by Writer Brandon McNulty, How to Write Awe-inspiring Cosmic Horror by Kat Clay, How To Create Scary Monsters (Fiction Writing Advice) by Writer Brandon McNulty, 18 Writing Hacks for Stronger Prose by ShaelinWrites, and Why I Ran From Evangelion by Totally Not Mark. This is so you don't feel stressed or overwhelmed with your upcoming projects what to write or get inspired 😊.

[@TheFuntimeSFM]

thanks for the advice!!🐻✨

[@Vorgmorok]

@@TheFuntimeSFM You are welcome, and I have one more thing for references: watch Tale Foundry videos that intrigue you and tell you what type of story building or world building you want to explore. That's all. Have a wonderful day or night, dude.

[@CrackANutter]

Heyy im new to animating in SFM so i was wondering if you could maybe help me with imporving?

[@TheFuntimeSFM]

ok, here are some little tips 1.- Download the "universal rig" they will help you a lot. 2.- watch tutorials to learn how to animate 3.- download the "color correction" it will help you a lot for lighting 4.- When you light a scene, try to mix the colors, if it is day or night, make the yellow or blue stand out more without the light illuminating too much (you will learn that over time, I like it). It took 2-3 years to light well) 5.- take your time, it is a slow process, do not despair to learn quickly

[@CrackANutter]

@@TheFuntimeSFM Ok thank you ill let you know if i am successful

[@CrackANutter]

@@TheFuntimeSFM anything with changing colors for FNAF Models or something?

[@fabianrienecker5874]

Fredbear/Golden Freddy: Unwithered 1983 Withered 1985 Rotten 1987 Desreoyed/New 1993 Damaged 2017 Fixed 2017-2023 Dirty 2024.

[@fabianrienecker5874]

Freddy Fazbear: Unwithered 1985 Withered 1987 New 1993 Damaged/Phantom 2017 Fixed 2023 Dirty 2024.

[@gcgames_]

They are ufmp models