OC Animatic - Ship in a Bottle [ FLASH WARNING! ]

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shandzii

shandzii

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@Inno4138
@Inno4138 3 жыл бұрын
It took me three rewatches to realize the coat they were wearing for most of the animation was the dead captain’s coat.. oh god, the level of character in that single realization :0
@soldier_76_darkknight
@soldier_76_darkknight 2 жыл бұрын
I mean he/she did watch the captain of the ship get killed right in front of him/her so why not wear it in honor of the captain
@TheCoolestCookie
@TheCoolestCookie 2 жыл бұрын
@@soldier_76_darkknight just so you know you can use they instead of he/she :)
@soldier_76_darkknight
@soldier_76_darkknight 2 жыл бұрын
@@TheCoolestCookie I know
@arandomgirlintheinternet2636
@arandomgirlintheinternet2636 2 жыл бұрын
That makes me sad ; - ;
@ghostbreadaxolotl4254
@ghostbreadaxolotl4254 2 жыл бұрын
my fifteenth
@JadeBlades098
@JadeBlades098 3 жыл бұрын
"I killed the monster that slaughtered all of my friends and family, and now I'm BECOMING IT." What a terrifying premise for a character. I can't imagine how horrifying it would be, how disgusted with one's own body it would make them. It's an amazing narrative, and brilliantly executed here.
@Supported-Characters
@Supported-Characters 3 жыл бұрын
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@zoeypongo7765
@zoeypongo7765 3 жыл бұрын
agreed ! i swear i've seen narratives like these now and then, but the way the story isn't so forced, and the character you can connect with without a single word being spoken, other than a rhythm and a song. honestly, it's amazing. Shandzii, Mel and Victor you lot are truely amazing at this !
@kikikillian1208
@kikikillian1208 3 жыл бұрын
@Pancake Man It's nowhere to be found outside this comment section, but a novel about it would be great
@gender_demon
@gender_demon 3 жыл бұрын
@@kikikillian1208 If I ever get the motivation I might make a fanfic about it but I hope someone with more talent and motivation than I can do it. But until then it will be saved in my idea list.
@kikikillian1208
@kikikillian1208 3 жыл бұрын
@@gender_demon Talent: maybe Motivation: definitely Time: sadly not so much, otherwise I might do it myself. Definitely an interesting character
@beybladeocto7116
@beybladeocto7116 3 жыл бұрын
My initial thought was “Oh good, finally an animatic for Ship in a Bottle” but now I’m thinking “I’m glad I already knew the song so it couldn’t distract from the gorgeous visuals”
@justeundonut-moi.7979
@justeundonut-moi.7979 2 жыл бұрын
What do you mean finally ? There's already a pretty good one with the magnus archives ! (Although I agree this is amazing)
@meliavalentine3709
@meliavalentine3709 2 жыл бұрын
right?? I love this song so much (+all of Fin's music) and I'm delighted there's animatics for it
@arandomgamer2417
@arandomgamer2417 2 жыл бұрын
lmao
@queenofrats1454
@queenofrats1454 2 жыл бұрын
Ikr
@kallamigmarre6137
@kallamigmarre6137 2 жыл бұрын
Same
@user-LoomaMoth226
@user-LoomaMoth226 Жыл бұрын
The most amazing detail about this animatic is when Delta’s running towards Marzia, she yelled her name. You can’t hear it, but you can see her mouth it. It’s amazing
@celebenarinya
@celebenarinya 10 ай бұрын
....WOW I didn't realize that!! Beautiful!
@PIZZAGOLDXD
@PIZZAGOLDXD 5 ай бұрын
i don't get it where is thsi from?
@anandbleep2337
@anandbleep2337 4 ай бұрын
@@PIZZAGOLDXDIt’s the video makers original characters they have made other content about them
@Teal_Lotus
@Teal_Lotus 3 ай бұрын
I didn't realize that because I didn't know her name 😂 (I found this/these videos on my school computer during class, and for some reason, I can't access the comment section on it ¯⁠\⁠_⁠(⁠ツ⁠)⁠_⁠/⁠¯)
@snackleggg7802
@snackleggg7802 3 жыл бұрын
I love the fact that she wears her captain's old coat. Especially the small details of the shreds in the back from where the glass hit. Honestly I'm probably looking to deep into it but that coat seems like a symbol for all the grief she is carrying around. It was probably one of the only things she kept from her old ship (as most other things with sentimental value probably sank), it belonged to the first person she watched die that day and was helpless to save and her discovering it again after she lost her memory, it reminding her of everything she lost and everything she once was. Mwuah, brilliant Edit: something else I just noticed is that the sea monster at the start blue colour fades into gray the longer they are on screen. Really neat detail!
@shandzii
@shandzii 3 жыл бұрын
ding ding ding! you got it :O!
@mylatestcommentismyname.du7400
@mylatestcommentismyname.du7400 3 жыл бұрын
Huge brain
@grynrmes2927
@grynrmes2927 3 жыл бұрын
The main character is a boy right?
@snackleggg7802
@snackleggg7802 3 жыл бұрын
@@grynrmes2927 no, she is a girl and her name is Mariza if I'm not mistaken
@nightcollapse
@nightcollapse 3 жыл бұрын
@@grynrmes2927 no it says girl in the description
@miauxy_
@miauxy_ 2 жыл бұрын
I love how her hair transitioned and turned shorter and shorter, as if she always chopped the teal ends off even when she knows it doesn't make a difference.
@immagoholdupd3878
@immagoholdupd3878 2 жыл бұрын
The teal is actually water, it's why she hides it.
@miauxy_
@miauxy_ 2 жыл бұрын
@@immagoholdupd3878 where'd you get this info from? I kinda wanna know more background story of the character.
@immagoholdupd3878
@immagoholdupd3878 2 жыл бұрын
@@miauxy_ In the other videos with this OC in it on this channel. When they have color, it's water instead of it's usual teal.
@brittanyhams7816
@brittanyhams7816 2 жыл бұрын
It’s a man
@miauxy_
@miauxy_ 2 жыл бұрын
@@brittanyhams7816 the creator literally refers to her as "water girl" 💀
@Krowno_
@Krowno_ 3 жыл бұрын
This is mind-blowing!! The story, the slow transition of Marzia from human to ocean creature, the colour choice of all grey except for the teal, the light and darkness in every shot, the designs, everything about this is absolutely stunning!! Your story with your pirates is a huge inspiration to me. Its a phenomenal piece of work. This is a masterpiece.
@thegentledevil4027
@thegentledevil4027 3 жыл бұрын
Quick Question: how do we know the person's name is Marzia?
@ariartsy9220
@ariartsy9220 3 жыл бұрын
@@thegentledevil4027 I believe the character was talked about in a server
@gachalauren9773
@gachalauren9773 2 жыл бұрын
Is there a series that explains what’s happening with this oc and there world?
@calschier4628
@calschier4628 2 жыл бұрын
It’s mentioned in a previous animatic by the creator
@RE3-Nemesis
@RE3-Nemesis 2 жыл бұрын
Man I've cried to this song so many times
@spiritedaway0tutu
@spiritedaway0tutu Жыл бұрын
This is absolutely gorgeous. The idea of a character that kills the monster that killed their crew, only to slowly become it is a terrifying and fascinating premise, and the character designs and animation are both beautiful.
@celebenarinya
@celebenarinya 8 ай бұрын
It's a high concept idea.
@KatDoesCrime
@KatDoesCrime 2 ай бұрын
That, except the monster they killed was actually the god of the sea :) Because when Mariza drowned, she injested the blood of the god, she gained it's powers and the previous god became mortal and died! I definitley reccommend looking into the lore, it's absolutley amazing!! :D
@SiffrinISAT
@SiffrinISAT 3 жыл бұрын
I encountered this by accident and I'm in LOVE with this premise of "character kills monster, gets cursed to become it" and just...the whole story, it's amazing! Not just that but the style of art is STUNNING to look at
@arandomgamer2417
@arandomgamer2417 2 жыл бұрын
fax
@VapidWater22
@VapidWater22 2 жыл бұрын
SAME,
@pencilRC1
@pencilRC1 2 жыл бұрын
I wanna make a character kills monster to be cursed to become it story now
@dustybird_arts8998
@dustybird_arts8998 2 жыл бұрын
BRO SAME
@scrapykatofficial
@scrapykatofficial 2 жыл бұрын
couldn't have said it better myself, Ralsei
@snazzi_2590
@snazzi_2590 3 жыл бұрын
I'm honestly in shock that I was able to watch this for free. This seems like a storyboard to a whole movie, the pacing, characters, just everything! The art and story is so incredibly engaging it didn't even feel like five minutes, yet it also felt like an hour (in a good way)! Phenomenal work, can't believe I stumbled upon such a masterpiece at 4am on my recommended.
@anitakhcreate
@anitakhcreate 3 жыл бұрын
Same, but it’s 6 A.M. HAHAHA
@RealWardenAnimations
@RealWardenAnimations 3 жыл бұрын
@@anitakhcreate Me to but it's 9 P.M after caroling
@randomopotato
@randomopotato 3 жыл бұрын
I feel the same!
@pirastarborn2003
@pirastarborn2003 2 жыл бұрын
I agree I wish this was a legit series that I could watch on Netflix lol, it's just so interesting and I want to know the adventures this girl has ahead of her.
@firewolf3457
@firewolf3457 2 жыл бұрын
@@pirastarborn2003 ya but not on Netflix I don't have that
@cat-napsss
@cat-napsss 3 жыл бұрын
The use of blurring certain areas to give a real sense of depth is just another thing you excel at. Fantastic work, as always!
@hostonaroll4639
@hostonaroll4639 3 жыл бұрын
I didnt even notice-- it was so cool-
@tumblingartist
@tumblingartist 3 жыл бұрын
Ikr!! It just takes the animatic to that next level and I love it
@alllisda_idiot7087
@alllisda_idiot7087 3 жыл бұрын
*This is unedited and terrible brain rot* It starts, with the shattering of a glass window, the piercing of one captain’s body, the blood flowing out from the ripped holes on the jacket. the serpent’s eyes glowing and its gleaning black scales in the dark. And it ends, With the death of her everything. The ship-annihilated, The comrades-drowned. The serpent-pierced with her saber; through the sheer strength of vengeance. And it comes, The grief, The mourning, The emptiness, The gray in blurred vision. Is it exhaustion or anger? She does not know. But she reacts too late, And the glowing swallows, The spirit of a deity- unready to end. And one mortal with her fate forced. And all she has left is herself. She loses that too in those moments. She suffocates in that stormy water, She asphyxiates, She chokes. Her spine is forced back- chin tilted up; desperate for relief. Her eyes bulge out of their sockets, There’s blood? She does not remember. She has lost consciousness. When she awakes, There’s something. Wispy blue, the glowing strands. They do not leave, cursing her to forever be remembering. The hate comes, People do not like strangers, They do not like ill-tempered strangers with uncontrollable powers. They do not like monsters that take. They’re right; she doesn’t like what she has become either. She has become that serpent, Savage, havoc-wrecker, inhumane. She tries again on the ocean, With the old ripped and worn coat on her back. But the mist, The glowing stranded in her mind; Like jellyfish tentacles, They wrap around her brain and drive her insane. She does not see, or feel, or manage. The serpent all-again grows. And it takes her everything again, But all she has left is herself. She loses that again. It is not pain or strangulation. It’s relief of finally letting the pent-up creature out. She is a coward. Always has been. It’s gotten her everything taken away, But she never deserved anything anyway. She escapes to the bottom of the ocean. At least they wouldn’t be hurt again by the monster. It’s just her; not her and too many thoughts there.
@tumblingartist
@tumblingartist 3 жыл бұрын
@@alllisda_idiot7087 OOOOOH!!! THIS IS GREAT
@alllisda_idiot7087
@alllisda_idiot7087 3 жыл бұрын
@@tumblingartist ty! it's terrible, unedited, and an absurdly limited use of varied vocabulary.
@ghoulishffx
@ghoulishffx Жыл бұрын
DUDE IN THE FIRST HALF I WAS LIKE "doesnt seem like a very fitting song for a battle scene, considering what its about, but beautiful animation nonetheless" but the scene where all the ghosts appeared and quickly vanished made me realize exactly why you chose this song and it left me in tears. your ability to draw expressions bewilders and impresses me - this is so incredible and just beautiful. thank you so much for this.
@averagedysphoriahaver7945
@averagedysphoriahaver7945 Жыл бұрын
Tobias curtis schneien detected
@ghoulishffx
@ghoulishffx Жыл бұрын
@@averagedysphoriahaver7945 STOP RIGHT NOW I LOVE HIM SO MUCH ‼️‼️💗💗💗💗
@ghoulishffx
@ghoulishffx Жыл бұрын
@@averagedysphoriahaver7945 i am also a dysphoria haver (not very average)
@williamg4654
@williamg4654 Жыл бұрын
what do ya mean it fit well becuase that no one exept he/she could stop the beast including his/her freinds
@ghoulishffx
@ghoulishffx Жыл бұрын
@@williamg4654 bro. how little do you know abt the lore
@seanmurphy3430
@seanmurphy3430 3 жыл бұрын
I love this. A lot of OC animatics can be pretty hard - often downright impossible - to follow without context, but this one tells a complete story that I had no trouble keeping up with. Everything I need to know in order to follow what's happening is apparent purely from the visuals, and the narrative beats themselves read very clearly.
@Auriacularia
@Auriacularia 3 жыл бұрын
yessss
@alexpuppylover1261
@alexpuppylover1261 2 жыл бұрын
I like how at the beginning, Mariza is shown to have this cheerful and friendly personality, however after the sea monster destroyed her ship and crewmembers, she became cold and withdraw.
@couch_potato2087
@couch_potato2087 2 жыл бұрын
Withdrawn*
@crowbarium14
@crowbarium14 2 жыл бұрын
How do you know their names?
@purpledshadow
@purpledshadow 2 жыл бұрын
@@crowbarium14 They posted a google document in the description describing the whole lore and stuff. The sea monster was a sea goddess and the curse was basically Maria turning into the same sea monster (and pretty much into a goddess too). In which killing the previous god / goddess usually does not cause the person to turn into one too in the lore.
@crowbarium14
@crowbarium14 2 жыл бұрын
@@purpledshadow could you add a link to it?
@purpledshadow
@purpledshadow 2 жыл бұрын
@@crowbarium14 I did
@karlhyetravelerofworlds
@karlhyetravelerofworlds 2 жыл бұрын
This was probably a unintentional detail but 0:36 On the captains map you can see a sea monster near the island this is odd as on old maps sea monsters were normally closer to the edges of the maps and represented uncharted waters The fact that the sea monster was on the map so close to the island should have been of immediate concern especially since it appeared to be a treasure map and therefore should be very well charted And If a sea monster is closer to the middle of a map it normally means those waters were too dangerous to chart This means the captain either intentionally put his crew in danger or failed to read the map properly
@lethequin
@lethequin 2 жыл бұрын
I mean what’s more dangerous than a sea monster?
@I_am_not_a_Bread
@I_am_not_a_Bread 2 жыл бұрын
@@lethequin A FLYING CHILD THAT WILL DISTROY YOUR CEILING FANS
@I_am_not_a_Bread
@I_am_not_a_Bread 2 жыл бұрын
or the captain wants everyone to go ded
@Sento404
@Sento404 2 жыл бұрын
I saw that too.
@ashleysilver4295
@ashleysilver4295 2 жыл бұрын
Or just wanted the treasure
@garrett1703
@garrett1703 Жыл бұрын
Does anyone else want to see this turned into an animated series or just me
@alexanderp8882
@alexanderp8882 Жыл бұрын
I mean with the indie animation boom going around recently its a chance higher than zero and also yes , i rlly want to see a series aswell
@Shadowandsauce
@Shadowandsauce Жыл бұрын
I do. Why wouldn’t I
@joelt7731
@joelt7731 Жыл бұрын
Hopefully it turns into something
@extremeeaters4207
@extremeeaters4207 Жыл бұрын
Yass
@nicholasblewett3945
@nicholasblewett3945 Жыл бұрын
Me
@AlexPBenton
@AlexPBenton 2 жыл бұрын
I love the detail of the character using an eyepatch to hide the changed eye, it really fits the Pirate theme while also having an intriguing explanation for the aesthetic!
@Vukan.Kos.
@Vukan.Kos. 2 жыл бұрын
It's not really pirate exclusive.
@jackofclubs6229
@jackofclubs6229 2 жыл бұрын
Actually, the eyepatch was apparently made popular by pirates because they’d use it even without being injured, because if they wore an eye patch over an eye and walked below deck, they could just remove the eyepatch to have an eye that’s already adjusted to the darkness.
@wonderstorm116
@wonderstorm116 2 жыл бұрын
@@jackofclubs6229 *shocked WonderStorm face*
@jackofclubs6229
@jackofclubs6229 2 жыл бұрын
@@wonderstorm116 I’m afraid to ask, but what is WonderStorm?
@wonderstorm116
@wonderstorm116 2 жыл бұрын
@@jackofclubs6229 my-my username-
@misterpseudonym
@misterpseudonym 3 жыл бұрын
i just realized that when she blinks at around 2:05 , there’s a frame or two where her eyes are blue and black like later in the animatic! the attention to detail here is incredible, i can only hope to create something this wonderfully done one day
@mysticdragoon5789
@mysticdragoon5789 3 жыл бұрын
And what's even more incredible the lyric there is "There are red spots under your eyes From when you cry" like holy shit, attention to detail is ON POINT!
@harpywiththebrownfeathers
@harpywiththebrownfeathers 3 жыл бұрын
Wait... the person is a she?
@ash-lynn7856
@ash-lynn7856 3 жыл бұрын
@@harpywiththebrownfeathers same. I thought they where a dude with long hair
@umariqbal7557
@umariqbal7557 3 жыл бұрын
@@harpywiththebrownfeathers In the description is says about a "disaster water girl"
@harpywiththebrownfeathers
@harpywiththebrownfeathers 3 жыл бұрын
@@umariqbal7557 Yeah, I read it after I made the comment. :P
@thelovelyladylil
@thelovelyladylil 3 жыл бұрын
This is…. Incredible. I was planning on watching a few seconds and then watching the rest later, but it was so engaging that I had to finish it all at once. The story, the visuals, the way it matches the beats of the music, it’s all absolutely incredible. I am utterly shocked by how amazing this is- it must have taken so much time and effort and it absolutely shows. The story is so compelling and I actually fELT for these characters, the beginning is so well paced and it’s absolutely haunting to see the main character being the only survivor. This video made me feel sad and surprised, but most of all curious. And that’s the purpose of animation, to make people feel emotions. This video felt like a whole MOVIE and it’s hard to believe it’s only 5 minutes long. Gorgeous designs, visuals, animation, I’m gonna be rewatching this a lot hehe fish people
@tori2046
@tori2046 3 жыл бұрын
bruh i planned on watching the first few seconds abd then not but i couldnt stop lmao
@milktea6676
@milktea6676 3 жыл бұрын
Hello
@howtodrinkwaterin5simplesteps
@howtodrinkwaterin5simplesteps 3 жыл бұрын
@@tori2046 bro same
@cryptidwithhat123
@cryptidwithhat123 3 жыл бұрын
I've rewatched it 5 times!
@Befuddled-draws
@Befuddled-draws Жыл бұрын
It's weird to think of Mariza the sailor, Mariza as she becomes more withdrawn and consumed by the curse, and Mariza the fucking god as the same people. Great animatic, this is gold in video form
@Yuekitty
@Yuekitty Жыл бұрын
1: Happy 2: Depressed 3: *God*
@sherifgamleldin1277
@sherifgamleldin1277 Жыл бұрын
I thought she was a boy
@KaizokuHaru
@KaizokuHaru 3 жыл бұрын
As a pirate addict myself, and a lover of anything pirate-related, this was a blast, I absolutely loved it! The tones, the lines, the animation, the way it goes with the song, EVERYTHING in here is amazing!
@Krieg_Guardsmen_40k
@Krieg_Guardsmen_40k 3 жыл бұрын
Hell yes brother I’m with you
@boweeg5299
@boweeg5299 3 жыл бұрын
@@Krieg_Guardsmen_40k bruh same
@Krieg_Guardsmen_40k
@Krieg_Guardsmen_40k 3 жыл бұрын
Anyone else want more of a story?
@boweeg5299
@boweeg5299 3 жыл бұрын
@@Krieg_Guardsmen_40k I want a series that in depth talks about each step of her corruption and each part of the only five minute video
@Krieg_Guardsmen_40k
@Krieg_Guardsmen_40k 3 жыл бұрын
Indeed
@OfficialLuni
@OfficialLuni 3 жыл бұрын
Holy shit?? The fact that you made a five minute animatic with clean lineart, backgrounds, SO many frames, and colored it!?!??? The art looks amazing, and the perspective with rooms and places looks natural. The storytelling was phenomenal. I would absolutely read a book or watch a show about this too! Everything in this took my breath away! I honestly can't believe how good this is, especially with the fact that this is a 5 minute polished animatic with a lot of frames. This is incredible! Can't wait for this to blow up EDIT: the video got a million views!! This definitely deserves it. Also, i just realized that this was posted on my birthday!
@hpthelonesomeartist
@hpthelonesomeartist 3 жыл бұрын
EXACTLY. The backgrounds are insanely detailed, the story set-up and climax is phenomenal, the music fits so darn well, the character designs are beautiful, the camera and character motion is done so smoothly….this really is a professional level animatic right here I honestly hope this animatic gets more and more views as time passes. It still deserves so much more than what it already has currently
@youraveragenobody4228
@youraveragenobody4228 3 жыл бұрын
._. It's a very badass Animation
@jtheiconicprogamer6456
@jtheiconicprogamer6456 2 жыл бұрын
Oh wow oh wow oh wow ohOh OK then I’m not gonna worry about rolling her new robot really feel anything deeper than the oh Captain in your brain w
@laP-Productions
@laP-Productions 2 жыл бұрын
4 million
@zacharyrenfro3716
@zacharyrenfro3716 3 жыл бұрын
I can't state how much I adore that serpent design enough. It's everything I think of when I imagine an eldritch serpent
@bedi3983
@bedi3983 2 жыл бұрын
Too many eyes? Check .. blue...? Check? Serpent? Yea i guess.
@xblueinfernox25
@xblueinfernox25 Жыл бұрын
4:30 honestly gave me chills, it’s one probably the best parts in my opinion- but the animatic itself is A M A Z I N G
@Solkyel
@Solkyel 2 жыл бұрын
I like how her eyes were dark for a split second at 2:05 and then when she woke up fully turned normal, which told us how she survived the shipwreck :D
@Mui_Noob
@Mui_Noob Жыл бұрын
So did I and I loved it.
@Random_Hooman
@Random_Hooman Жыл бұрын
@@Mui_Noob S A M E
@ginkgomoth
@ginkgomoth Жыл бұрын
And the lyrics drawing attention to it too
@ginkgomoth
@ginkgomoth Жыл бұрын
@@Butterman-777 their eyes were dark like when they use their powers, so you know they used them to save themself even though they don’t know about their powers yet.
@ilovepeace229
@ilovepeace229 Жыл бұрын
I nkow this is some good story
@Zeraphymm
@Zeraphymm 3 жыл бұрын
The detail at 4:28 when the last piece of her hair turns blue and she fully loses herself is just *Chefs kiss* perfection, love this video
@thehistoryandbooknerd8979
@thehistoryandbooknerd8979 2 жыл бұрын
I just noticed this because of your comment! Thank you!
@dominikalaska7320
@dominikalaska7320 2 жыл бұрын
And the eye changes too
@soldier_76_darkknight
@soldier_76_darkknight 2 жыл бұрын
I watched this twice and I didn’t even notice
@tazule6874
@tazule6874 2 жыл бұрын
is the character a girl?
@redd3797
@redd3797 2 жыл бұрын
@@tazule6874 I thought it was a boy too
@clorgborg
@clorgborg 2 жыл бұрын
3:38 love how this implies that the news about the sea god dying spread rapidly, as Mariza walks by and probably hears about the sea god that she killed, died. The ones who've heard the news having furrowed brows to indicate their anger/sadness showing how important that god was to them Then Mariza gets drunk and spills the beer about how she killed the sea god, making people chase after her and becoming wanted This was probably the consequences of her actions I keep replaying this way too much
@chrisgomez1262
@chrisgomez1262 Жыл бұрын
How did mariza kill the sea god
@connormcconnell7805
@connormcconnell7805 Жыл бұрын
​@@chrisgomez1262the giant serpent at the start was the sea god. In the desc for the "it's tough to be a god" animatic you can read how the cycle works
@chrisgomez1262
@chrisgomez1262 Жыл бұрын
@@connormcconnell7805 I thought it was the shadow figure
@connormcconnell7805
@connormcconnell7805 Жыл бұрын
@@chrisgomez1262 no that's the moon goddess she was in love with the sea god and now has to tolerate the new sea god taking his place
@chrisgomez1262
@chrisgomez1262 Жыл бұрын
@@connormcconnell7805 doesn’t the moon control the tides so technically
@bakka_jr
@bakka_jr Жыл бұрын
I love how throughout the animatic mariza gains more and more sharp teeth, the point where at the final scream all her teeth are sharp!
@lachlanmccormick3486
@lachlanmccormick3486 2 жыл бұрын
Damn, I always love the concept of forced godhood and/or terrible ascensions, this animation is like *chef's kiss* to me. And it's absolutely beautiful, well done.
@bubba6599
@bubba6599 2 жыл бұрын
Got any stories one could read online about such a premis?
@lachlanmccormick3486
@lachlanmccormick3486 2 жыл бұрын
​@@bubba6599 I'll think on it but at the moment what I believe I was talking about in my comment was two things in particular, the backstory of The Outsider in the *Dishonored* series, and just about every run of the game *Cultist Simulator.* If you're a fan of beautiful writing and card games I'd _highly_ recommend *Cultist Simulator,* it's written and developed by the amazing Alexisis Kennedy and Lottie Bevan, known for the equally well-written Fallen London and Sunless Sea. *CS* is all about gathering forbidden knowledge, making a cult, and enacting a terrible ascension to stand behind, or if you're prudent, beside, the eldritch gods known as Hours.
@kimi-quitreadbio8891
@kimi-quitreadbio8891 2 жыл бұрын
@@lachlanmccormick3486 thanks, i’ll check it out.
@DestinyPogChamp
@DestinyPogChamp 2 жыл бұрын
I've never even realized stuff like that exists. Thanks for telling me about it though, I'll check it out right now.
@lachlanmccormick3486
@lachlanmccormick3486 2 жыл бұрын
@@DestinyPogChamp For the Dishonored stuff I'd probably recommend watching a letsplay, it's not until the third game, *Death of The Outsider* (which is kind of a standalone DLC for the second) that it dives into the story of the titular Outsider, as for *Cultist Simulator* I'd recommend going in as blind as possible for the best experience, just as long as you make sure to read everything new that you come across in the game, though I won't fault you for looking up some gameplay tips. Alot of the fun I found in *Cultist Simulator* was in trying to piece together the cosmology of this eldritch pantheon, because almost all information you read about it comes from people who wrote it down, which means there are some things that contradict or are argued on in-universe, and it doesn't help that there are several different, yet equally valid, histories.
@itsamiya7727
@itsamiya7727 3 жыл бұрын
4:01 I'm noticing here that for a split moment, along with the moon goddess, there are 3 other figures. I think the girl here became some kind of god- specifically of water, because in that one frame the 3 others seem to represent air, fire, and earth. The goddess may be their guardian or superior
@fishworshipper
@fishworshipper 3 жыл бұрын
Looking at the tumblr, you're correct! The sea serpent she killed was the previous god of the ocean (and the Moon's lover). By killing it, she forced a transition of power. Bird-man is indeed an air god of some sorts.
@thehistoryandbooknerd8979
@thehistoryandbooknerd8979 2 жыл бұрын
Makes sense - the moon pushes and pulls the ocean, alongside being why it rises and falls :3
@SolarBlyze
@SolarBlyze 2 жыл бұрын
@@fishworshipper it makes me wonder, if the sea serpent was an ocean god why did it attack the ship? It seems they were heading to an island, presumably to raid the treasure that was marked on the map, but the sea god attacked them before they could get there. However ... they hadn't actually done anything. If the god just wanted to stop them from getting whatever was on the island there was no reason to kill them, all the god would need to do would be to get them to leave. Killing them was unnecessary. No explanation was given so of course they defended themselves. Ain't the girls fault that the sea serpent suffers from Dark Souls plunge attack weakness.
@fishworshipper
@fishworshipper 2 жыл бұрын
@@SolarBlyze If the ocean is known for any one thing at all, it is decidedly not "mercy".
@ezrabean8771
@ezrabean8771 2 жыл бұрын
What I got from tumblr: The one on the far left: Larus, (weather god) The one next to him: Ebeko, (I guess fire god he also lives in a volcano) The one next to Ebeko: Samira, (moon goddess) The one next to Samira: Dahlia (nature goddess? something about plants or life) The girl who the animatic focuses on her name is Marzia and then what fishworshipper's said (also the one who appears multiple times like at 4:38 her name is Delta and she's a mershark)
@unfunnymoth2114
@unfunnymoth2114 2 жыл бұрын
The actual embodiment of "I have become what I have swore to destroy", all packed in an amazing animatic. Well done, please keep up the good work!
@keimarionclayconley6066
@keimarionclayconley6066 2 жыл бұрын
Exactly like that but it's "I have destroyed it what I wanted to destroy but as my punishment I shall become what I swore to destroy"
@ViviansLibrary
@ViviansLibrary 2 жыл бұрын
@@keimarionclayconley6066 to rephrase that, “i have slayed what i have wanted to slay, but my punishment is to become what has died”
@infaknightthedarkmage6700
@infaknightthedarkmage6700 2 жыл бұрын
I was thinking that exact same thing
@shinyskitty
@shinyskitty Жыл бұрын
I’m late to the party but I love how at 4:00 the memories are used as a transition to the fight scene. Shows that these things were constantly consuming her, and our shock as the audience in the transition helps us feel her shock as well. A beautiful emotional piece.
@rolanslide8509
@rolanslide8509 3 жыл бұрын
2:12 that transition?? and the small detail of the water droplets responding to her movement??? there's so much detail this is so good
@daddyridz
@daddyridz 3 жыл бұрын
2:14 Is Where It Was Just Letting You Know
@keylavandemaele4104
@keylavandemaele4104 3 жыл бұрын
ye
@no-oneimportant6861
@no-oneimportant6861 2 жыл бұрын
My first thought as someone addicted to DnD - “holy shit this is a really good animatic…wait, fathomless warlock who’s patron lives inside them and as they level up they become more unstable because their slowly fusing with their patron..” my thoughts then rapidly devolved in mutterings that a madman would be scared of But seriously, this is some of the best work i've ever seen
@floydthomas5562
@floydthomas5562 2 жыл бұрын
I'm stealing that and you can't stop me
@no-oneimportant6861
@no-oneimportant6861 2 жыл бұрын
@@floydthomas5562 You're right I can't, but I must demand that you tell me how it goes
@Dex7579
@Dex7579 2 жыл бұрын
@@floydthomas5562 I'm thinking about doing the same thing. It'll force the party to role play better, rightnow they break the 4th wall more than they ever should
@Sunified
@Sunified 2 жыл бұрын
I was just thinking that myself as I was scrolling through the comments (though i didn't think of the merging with patron and more becoming their patron after killing them, fusing with their power) Nice to know im not alone xD Also i think theyd be a water genasi thats obtained abilities the same way as their warlock abilities
@benthomas8264
@benthomas8264 2 жыл бұрын
i was thinking the same thing but the only magic thing we see her do is the water shaping so maybe like a swashbuckler rogue with a feat or something
@undefined5323
@undefined5323 3 жыл бұрын
2:14 The subtle movement in the puddle here is so small but so amazing! It could be that I'm overanalyzing but it looks to pronounced to just be a normal splash, but rather power manifesting through the water as we see later! Simply brilliant!
@DedOops
@DedOops 3 жыл бұрын
I thought that as well!
@Seinari
@Seinari Жыл бұрын
I love how at the start (and I guess at the end as well) of the animation she's literally holding on to the last shred of humanity she has left in the form of the torn coat she used to wear back in the day.
@melissaoconnell1
@melissaoconnell1 3 жыл бұрын
Damn, this right here. This masterpiece. This could make a hell of a dnd campaign. Set in the ocean, a band of pirates try to uncover the history of the creature from the deep, and one of the characters had a personal encounter with it, leaving them adrift alone and stranded in the ocean. So much could be done, your story is truly magnificent my friend, well done ^^
@LordJuk1
@LordJuk1 3 жыл бұрын
thought of the exact smae
@flabbergastedpicklerickrol8204
@flabbergastedpicklerickrol8204 3 жыл бұрын
“Sooo, how much trauma do you plan to intagrate into your oc’s character?” *y e s* No but genuinely I loved this, felt bad for the characters I only had know for 3 seconds and the designs, pacing, and art were AWESOME. Plus I’m a sucker for settings like this I have absolutely attacked the subscribe button and am now a wanted man
@Auriacularia
@Auriacularia 3 жыл бұрын
y-yeah? I found him
@randomfandomcreator2376
@randomfandomcreator2376 2 жыл бұрын
Ok I literally NEED this to become it's own full show! This animatic is phenomenal! I literally cant stop watching this it's sooooo good!
@pimpong9
@pimpong9 2 жыл бұрын
TRUE OMG
@ajysuperfly7788
@ajysuperfly7788 2 жыл бұрын
this could also become a videogame.
@MoonstarTheVoidrolf
@MoonstarTheVoidrolf 2 жыл бұрын
I’ll make a full animated version soon!
@noahdupuis250
@noahdupuis250 2 жыл бұрын
Exactly what I was thinking
@someguy15721
@someguy15721 2 жыл бұрын
Well a show is ambitious. However a comic could be doable.
@Emma-mj3pz
@Emma-mj3pz Жыл бұрын
the ghosts at 2:44 and all the memories and flashbacks make Mariza's life even more tragic and how she loses control and hurts the people who care about her aaaa so sad in such a cool way. the design and the water shapes are really good. I like how you can tell she gets significantly more depressed and withdrawn after the ship wreck. the gods have cool designs too they make me want to learn more about them. the facial expressions in the scene with the captain starting at 1:11 are absolutely heartbreaking
@Kenpoviper
@Kenpoviper 3 жыл бұрын
the way this story is told going along with the song just makes it seem like the song was made with this specific story in mind, also i really like the thing with only one thing being colored and everything else being black and white, i've seen it done a lot and it always looks so cool
@jaydgaoi5400
@jaydgaoi5400 2 жыл бұрын
3:45 "Your cosplay is pretty good, but your eyepatch is on the wrong side." "The eyepatch is *not* on the wrong side!"
@nisansparow3390
@nisansparow3390 2 жыл бұрын
Haaaaa, avatar reference.
@TheMind129
@TheMind129 2 жыл бұрын
I can't unsee it now. WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?!
@sassylittleweasel18
@sassylittleweasel18 2 жыл бұрын
@@TheMind129 thats rough buddy
@christinevu5260
@christinevu5260 2 жыл бұрын
LMAOO
@wwellthemage8426
@wwellthemage8426 2 жыл бұрын
Wait, isnt it "your costume is pretty good" I could be wrong but if I've been quoting that wrong my whole life I'd be so disappointed
@kittypost3929
@kittypost3929 3 жыл бұрын
The amount of storytelling this video does in just 5 minutes is incredible and deserves lots of credit. Not only is the pacing is good, the emotions that come out make you feel for the characters. The art is just amazing and goes rather swimmingly with the story and song. The song was an amazing choice because the scores just get more intense and it’s really just a banger! I really hope this blows up because it’s a good example of great storytelling! ✨
@gh05tb0yz
@gh05tb0yz 3 жыл бұрын
also you can tell whats going on! without audible explanation or spelling it out to the viewer! incredible all around, especially since it’s assumed to be produced and made by only one person. truly incredible
@teddytackleson595
@teddytackleson595 Жыл бұрын
This made me feel so much emotion and empathy for the main character. I couldn’t come back to watch it again for months because of how sad it made me, but after that I was able to appreciate what a truly beautiful and sad story this is. Amazing work
@cori6632
@cori6632 3 жыл бұрын
Oh my gosh. This is incredible! The backgrounds are so detailed, and the poses, and the framing... There were so many amazing images on screen for just a flash! It told it's story really well (which is a very cool one), and went so well with the song. And it's five minutes long! I think this may be my favorite animatic ever. I'm going to watch this so many times.
@voyaginghopian1316
@voyaginghopian1316 2 жыл бұрын
_“Mariza desperately clings to the tattered fragments of her past identity, attempting to suppress and bargain her way out of coming to terms with her shattered reality and the terrifying, new identity beginning to emerge.”_ As someone currently undergoing a major identity shift, I can relate to Mariza’s narrative on a personal (and I mean _heart-achingly_ personal) level. Watching this animatic has helped ease the growth pains related to my transition (which, in retrospect, is a weird thing to say about an animatic), but, anyway-thank you for creating this visceral yet perceptive work of art!
@Bagelshark2631
@Bagelshark2631 2 жыл бұрын
She forgot everything after she ascended
@Sento404
@Sento404 2 жыл бұрын
I’ve scrolled through the comments a bit, and I haven’t seen anyone say how well it fits with the music. It is really amazing.
@BanHammerFromPhighting
@BanHammerFromPhighting 2 жыл бұрын
It really DOES fit!
@pinkajou656
@pinkajou656 2 жыл бұрын
I know right
@Mebuny
@Mebuny Жыл бұрын
What music? I can't hear it
@ilovepeace229
@ilovepeace229 Жыл бұрын
I nkow bro it’s dope
@IceyPlayZ4
@IceyPlayZ4 Жыл бұрын
IKR
@doomeddm3319
@doomeddm3319 Жыл бұрын
This is an amazing animation, but I have to say, it is very funny to imagine the initial fight between Mariza and Indra as a DnD battle. DM internally: 'Alright, we can have Indra attack the ship and have Mariza be the only survivor, that could be cool as an origin. Maybe have a revenge plot against Indra as a plot hook.' DM externally: 'Alright Mariza this giant serpent is attacking your ship and you just dodged it's head. Make an attack roll' DM: 'Oh you rolled a nat20, cool, and you rolled max damage, wow. I guess you cut through several of the serpents eyes.' DM internally: 'Now to add tension let us have a cannon fire at Indra to add more tension. And wow the cannon crits as well, now *that* is luck. But should have Indra finish them off on her round.' DM externally: 'Alright so you climb the broken mast and jump at the sea serpent. Oh wow, uhm, sure make an attack roll combined with an acrobatics check.' DM internally: 'Wait Mariza rolled a double nat20 ? Are these dice fudged ? AND MAX DAMAGE AGAIN !!! Oh no, Ingdra is looking pretty bad. But she still has some health, she can still retreat on her turn.' Mariza: 'I use flurry of blows' DM internally and externally: 'Oh no' DM: 'Well Indra is dead now, good job, let's just roll with this I guess.'
@ciderofthearctic392
@ciderofthearctic392 2 жыл бұрын
Bro I can tell how tragic this is even if I don't know the full story. You captured it WELL! Extremely well. Though there's no real dialogue you can tell when characters get terribly depressed at something or if they're horrifically enraged (I'm gonna take a moment to say "no duh" to myself real quick.) Even though this is just an animatic, the animation and the art is nice and clear. And the fact this is the perfect, literal portrayal of "To get what I want, I became the monster I always hated." Yes I had to search the Internet for that quote lol.
@Kyumifun
@Kyumifun 2 жыл бұрын
"you have become the very thing you have swore to destroy!" also fits
@ciderofthearctic392
@ciderofthearctic392 2 жыл бұрын
@@Kyumifun Maybe that's the better one skslsjgjdg
@danielschield5788
@danielschield5788 3 жыл бұрын
Imagine a game based around this character, that would be cool. Great animatic btw, you did a really good job!
@MMM45698
@MMM45698 3 жыл бұрын
The water powers would probably be a mid to late game charged ability which increases damage by a lot but lowers your defence, like a kind of blind rage ability
@mrchicken6817
@mrchicken6817 2 жыл бұрын
dont let netflex hear that
@Nick-Bel
@Nick-Bel 2 жыл бұрын
Lol
@Nick-Bel
@Nick-Bel 2 жыл бұрын
Gamedev skills go Brrrrrrr
@shadowwolves1446
@shadowwolves1446 2 жыл бұрын
thanks for the inspo lmao
@SYNTAX_ERR0RZ
@SYNTAX_ERR0RZ 3 жыл бұрын
I actually cannot get over how amazingly stunning this is. I’ve already watched this 4 times, and every little detail you put into each scene is absolutely incredible. I’m probably going to come back and watch this over and over. I know you’re going to get so many comments like this, but seriously this is professional level here.
@thejuggernaut1793
@thejuggernaut1793 9 ай бұрын
I joy the fact the deeper the "curse" progress less of her hair got turned into water which made it so u can visualize how powerful the "curse" is that who ever has it may gain abilities but lose there sanity with it
@mr.frenchdressing3701
@mr.frenchdressing3701 2 жыл бұрын
I honestly love this! i love how when she first wakes up from aftermath of the monster in the beginning and she opens her eyes slightly you can see her eyes are different but then they go back to normal. awesome foreshadowing!! I also just love your art it’s amazing.
@eugeniawelch3646
@eugeniawelch3646 2 жыл бұрын
She is actually a he with long hare.
@mr.frenchdressing3701
@mr.frenchdressing3701 2 жыл бұрын
@@eugeniawelch3646 I believe in the description she was referred to as “water girl”.
@eugeniawelch3646
@eugeniawelch3646 2 жыл бұрын
@@mr.frenchdressing3701 sorry didn’t bother to check the description
@Wishkeirs
@Wishkeirs 2 жыл бұрын
The lyrics also was amazing for that moment Same for the whole video but still-
@slightlycoolcube2514
@slightlycoolcube2514 2 жыл бұрын
This isn't an animatic, its literally a SHORT FILM. Seriously, im breathless. This is so beautiful. ❤
@ForwardStory
@ForwardStory 2 жыл бұрын
This hit me like a truck 5 hours ago and I'm still feeling it. The art is fantastic, the emotions are realistic and perfectly displayed, and the theme is absolutely soul-crushing.
@lightningbolt9155
@lightningbolt9155 Жыл бұрын
It took me 5 rewatches to realize that’s just Mariza in front of the captain at 1:02, and _he doesn’t just have a ginormous beard._
@HammerDownNu-7
@HammerDownNu-7 10 ай бұрын
Pfft I see the beard now
@airy214
@airy214 6 ай бұрын
lol
@kittyyoutuber9
@kittyyoutuber9 5 ай бұрын
I didn’t notice that Mariza was in front of the captain until now.
@lessdepressomoreespresso
@lessdepressomoreespresso 3 жыл бұрын
Oh my fucking God this is amazing the motion and the way you draw water is amazing and I love how much story this conveys with a few short scenes it's awesome
@darkarmour8971
@darkarmour8971 3 жыл бұрын
Wait how did you comment on this video 2 hours before it was posted?
@owo3414
@owo3414 3 жыл бұрын
@@darkarmour8971 ◉‿◉???
@lessdepressomoreespresso
@lessdepressomoreespresso 3 жыл бұрын
@@darkarmour8971 Don't question my powers, mortal.
@jelly_elli
@jelly_elli 2 жыл бұрын
I’ve been avoiding watching this for a while now *cause i knew i’d have to rewatch it a million times*
@spear-throw-legacy
@spear-throw-legacy 2 жыл бұрын
Same
@yoonyiachang1390
@yoonyiachang1390 2 жыл бұрын
I watched this 7 times now- don't do it,you can not stop
@slushy4289
@slushy4289 2 жыл бұрын
Same here brother
@stargazingwishes
@stargazingwishes 2 жыл бұрын
@@yoonyiachang1390 its a curse that we all have now.
@Auriacularia
@Auriacularia 2 жыл бұрын
@@stargazingwishesyou still stuck?
@shawntuason1528
@shawntuason1528 2 жыл бұрын
“Under the deepest of waters, where shipwrecks dwelled, stood a sea monster holding a torn old jacket. As she stared up to the dim light of the surface, memories appeared in front of her. She remembered she was once a cheerful girl, with her crew mates, best friends and the captain, those who treated her like family, but was slaughtered by a sea monster. Even though she managed to get her revenge by killing the monster, she ended up slowly transformed into the same monster. No matter how many tries the girl tried to rid herself of the curse and tried to seek the Moon to turn her back, she failed at every attempt. At her final moments, the girl finally succumbed to become a sea monster as waves brought her down from the surface, and at the depths the sea monster was born. I pity the sea monster as she was slowly turning into the only one who took away her happiness, friends, and family. This is the story of the sea monster, Marzia.” - Random storyteller P.S. I think how Marzia turned into the monster is that the blood affected her when she was brought under the water after she killed the sea monster. Also I swear I’m getting addicted to this animatic, the art style, the story, everything about this video is immaculate! ✨✨✨ The story really hit on me when Marzia succumbed to become the monster and Delta didn’t want to leave her, this isn’t ok for me- Also, sorry if the storytelling sucks-
@GenGBby
@GenGBby 2 жыл бұрын
I have another theory about how she turned into the monster. If you look at the very last flash of it dissolving in the water, the fin turns into what looks like an arm and hand. I think whoever kills the beast becomes it, an endless cycle of torment as they slowly become the thing the destroyed.
@aao_music
@aao_music 2 жыл бұрын
I also have a suggestion to make: I don't think that she did it for revenge. She probably did it to save the rest of her crewmates, but that's just a theory. Personally I think she meant it for both.
@alenasuchs7274
@alenasuchs7274 2 жыл бұрын
Dude..............this was awesone
@Dextersauve11
@Dextersauve11 2 жыл бұрын
Wow, I like this
@petergant183
@petergant183 Жыл бұрын
So, it seems you may be saying, this is how this creature MAY be reproducing itself, as a race/species of ONE, through the curse it's infected with, as long as people hunt it, it will NEVER go extinct, there will ALWAYS be at least one!
@tee-sam-ee-red
@tee-sam-ee-red Жыл бұрын
This feels like a story that couldn’t possibly be done justice in a single animatic. And yet, you did it justice, in a single animatic. Amazing job!
@O5-council_12
@O5-council_12 Жыл бұрын
Imagine a whole story though
@artsygremlin9755
@artsygremlin9755 3 жыл бұрын
THAT POWER THAT YOU WIELD WITH THOSE MAGIC FINGIES IF YOURS!!!! This is honestly some of the most impressive animatics I’ve seen, you are able to tell a WILD, AMAZING story in only a few minutes. U really brought those funky characters to life and I love all of them!!!!!!! Incredible job as always buckaroo ❤️🏴‍☠️✌️
@Speckaboo
@Speckaboo 3 жыл бұрын
THIS IS AMAZING!! The grief and anguish in the characters, the details in each background scene, the transitions and camera panning and perspective- theres so much effort into every part of this and i love it.
@anjanabindhu6317
@anjanabindhu6317 3 жыл бұрын
The attention to detail!!!! Every frame of this thing feels like it has purpose, none of it is filler to keep align to the song, it feels like. It’s amazing the things I’ve missed and noticed and noticed every time I watch this video, like 2:05 when their eyes look the same monstrous way near the end, to the elevation of the puddle in the shot right after.
@polistinimdae
@polistinimdae 2 ай бұрын
THIS IS CRAZY!!!! The timing on "You are the captain" after the previous one just went down and "no one on the deck who can help you" as the deck comes up in front of the character.. so many good points like this, chilling! Very good, thank you for sharing!
@jokingmaiden4461
@jokingmaiden4461 3 жыл бұрын
i'm going to need an in-depth explanation of everything this character has ever experienced please and thank you i love them so so much
@thehistoryandbooknerd8979
@thehistoryandbooknerd8979 2 жыл бұрын
S A M E - need that confirmed backstory (I think the captain was her dad? Either bio or adopted? And the crew she was first with was like a family to her - maybe she grew up on that ship? Idk -pure speculation rn - I just love this content creator and their marvelous creations
@thetrashiestpada403
@thetrashiestpada403 3 жыл бұрын
HOLY SHIT!! IT CAME OUT SO FUCKING GOOD!!! FEELS LIKE WATCHING A WHOLE ASS MOVIE!! SO FUCKING PROUD OF YOU DUDE!!!
@thetrashiestpada403
@thetrashiestpada403 3 жыл бұрын
AND CONGRATS ON BREAKING THE DELTA CURSE!!!
@shandzii
@shandzii 3 жыл бұрын
HEHEHE THANKS BROOO
@earmuffstar2074
@earmuffstar2074 2 жыл бұрын
This makes me feel so many feelings. I immediately went to replay it and then paced around my room thinking about every aspect of this animatic and its story. It is so incredibly well-executed w/ the art, the pacing, the storytelling, how everything is black and white except for the teal. i will be thinking about this for a long time.
@RealmDragolord_X
@RealmDragolord_X Жыл бұрын
It took way too many rewatches to realize that she’s actually saying Mariza at 4:39
@SuperSlavey
@SuperSlavey Жыл бұрын
Your comment is the only reason I saw that. Thank you for sharing this information. :>
@sapphire2113
@sapphire2113 3 жыл бұрын
This is so beautifully done considering it is only an animatic, from the perspective of someone with no knowledge of the universe it takes place in; this is incredible for getting you intrigued about its world and characters, without telling you exactly who and how they are. It doesnt overdo the spectacle, and genuinely seems like this person just has a story they wish to tell and this is the first step, 10/10
@playername3134
@playername3134 3 жыл бұрын
The only disappointing part about this is I don’t know when there will be a part 2 or if there ever will be one…
@oneSneakySnake
@oneSneakySnake 3 жыл бұрын
I wouldn't worry about that. This isn't a set up like a whole narrative. This is just an origin story.
@MMM45698
@MMM45698 3 жыл бұрын
Probably going to be a fanfic or two, most likely with a narrative and words, not the lyrics to a song in the background.
@TEchNoDrd
@TEchNoDrd 3 жыл бұрын
There is
@Team_Kyro
@Team_Kyro 3 жыл бұрын
there's an entire story on their tumblr, but its mostly 3 friends goofing off, its a excellent story, but don't expect something super big, occasional GODLY animatics is all :O
@mnllia
@mnllia 3 жыл бұрын
Pootis
@sweetflowersucrose9839
@sweetflowersucrose9839 2 жыл бұрын
Wait… this is an animatic? I don’t thing I’ve ever seen one so freakishly detailed. You gave movement to the most minor details and it all works perfectly with the overall narrative and the music and it’s just a feast to the eyes. You should be very proud of this because it is a beautiful animatic and an amazing storyline. Five stars
@drongodyle3156
@drongodyle3156 2 ай бұрын
2:04 I've seen this animatic a bunch of times and only just caught the brief glimpse of the glowing eyes here. Epic foreshadowing
@ninjakitten9981
@ninjakitten9981 3 жыл бұрын
THIS IS INCREDIBLE!! I LOVE THE DESIGNS, THE PLOT, THE BACKGROUNDS AND THE MOVEMENTS!!
@FleurMarigold
@FleurMarigold 3 жыл бұрын
WOW!!!!!! this brought tears to my eyes just from the sheer emotion of it all.
@derp2318
@derp2318 3 жыл бұрын
Same
@ArcuK._
@ArcuK._ 2 жыл бұрын
Me too!
@ashidraws2621
@ashidraws2621 2 жыл бұрын
I don't even know how to describe this animatic. It's beautiful, heart wrenching, with powerful emotions and expressions that are so dynamic. The angles make the animatic even more Pixar quality, and the artwork itself is simply stunning. The story and the song line up so beautifully to create a real masterpiece that you should be proud of And the FORESHADOWING in the beginning, rewatching it again I can see the torn jacket in her hands, it's so beautifully executed!! It feels like it could be a sailor tale or turned into a sea shantey
@leanoreay884
@leanoreay884 Жыл бұрын
Thank you so f****** much for making this, i swear, every SINGLE time I get art block, i watch this and it goes away like poof. Thank you thank you thank you.
@eebydeebyz
@eebydeebyz Жыл бұрын
I feel art block radiating
@happilychaotic2719
@happilychaotic2719 3 жыл бұрын
The story is amazing, the characters feel real, the art is beautiful, the music fits and adds even more emotion, all in all this is perfect and I can’t stop watching this
@gh0st_mov
@gh0st_mov 2 жыл бұрын
My heart geniunely aches for her, ive never had a story so beautifully tell the fall of a character- absolutely FANTASTIC!
@bubblegumdonuts63
@bubblegumdonuts63 2 жыл бұрын
my first thought when seeing this was 'oh cool something to watch' but now im watching it over and over and never get tired of it its a masterpiece
@wanderer_1018
@wanderer_1018 2 жыл бұрын
me too lmao
@mars_starz420
@mars_starz420 2 жыл бұрын
Same
@yellowduckgamedev
@yellowduckgamedev 2 жыл бұрын
Same
@rayyanalam8495
@rayyanalam8495 2 жыл бұрын
same lmao
@tahirmahmood3496
@tahirmahmood3496 2 жыл бұрын
same
@Unidentified952
@Unidentified952 Жыл бұрын
I am ENAMORED by this lore, and I love the bits of humor in the document linked in the description!! AbSOLUTELY my next hyperfixation for the next couple of months, 100000000000000000000/10 Addition: the idea that you just made up this universe by just messing around with your friends and having fun has inspired me to keep going on my own story I’ve put off making with my friends!! Ty for the motivation to continue it
@KZFathom
@KZFathom 2 жыл бұрын
this has to be one of my favorite things ever. I debated on whether or not to rewatch it because no story in recent memory had made me feel such pain for all the loss in it. 3:59's sequence especially is really horrifying and intriguing. in a great way!
@kristynab.6539
@kristynab.6539 3 жыл бұрын
Masterpiece of an animatic! The storytelling, the stakes, the art, the emotions, it's all here! Well done, loved the slow transformation into the sea monster, loved the style, loved how you matched it up to the lyrics :D
@imuneimmy944
@imuneimmy944 2 жыл бұрын
During the major flashing bit with the stuff that's happening really fast, I found that there are more "God's and goddesses' not just the moon one. I love this soooo much!
@ilovepeace229
@ilovepeace229 Жыл бұрын
I nkow I saw it too it’s 3 more if you count the animal
@IrishPlagueDoctor
@IrishPlagueDoctor 10 ай бұрын
Animatic-wise, can we all appreciate the dedication to how elaborate all the backgrounds are for each scene?! 🥹
@NerdyStuff570
@NerdyStuff570 2 жыл бұрын
I literally didn’t even know this song until now, and it’s now one of my favorites. But forget the song, THIS IS INCREDIBLE. The visuals are STUNNING, and the story is so interesting. “My friends and family were killed by this horrible monster, and I swore to destroy it, but now I AM IT.” Gives me chills. I would love to read a Wattpad story about this, no, see a Show about this!!! Amazing work as always, you are able to tell such a cool story with nothing but pictures and music. What a gift. Keep up the amazing work!! 💙💙💙
@Voidmoth1
@Voidmoth1 2 жыл бұрын
time to write
@calebrobertsbendemeerss8537
@calebrobertsbendemeerss8537 2 жыл бұрын
The title “My friends and family were killed by this horrible monster, and I swore to destroy it, but now I AM IT.” sounds like what a My Story Animated title will be like, just ridiculousness.
@NerdyStuff570
@NerdyStuff570 2 жыл бұрын
@@Voidmoth1 HECK YEAH
@lemmetalkaboutthis
@lemmetalkaboutthis 2 жыл бұрын
Omfg, this was so unexpectedly amazing! Like, sure the artstyle was obviously good, you can see that from the thumbnail, but I didn't expect THIS! The pacing, the framing, the flashes with the drums creating goosebumps, the _character_ and emotion that comes across from everyone (and without anyone saying even a _word_ ) I'm so frigging invested in these characters now That's a sub for sure, I'm so glad yt recommended me this (also btw this is the first result that comes up when you google the song lmao, which is definitely deserved) Edit: details I especially like and that _deserve_ to be appreciated: -the gradual turning of the hair, first of -the the OC is wearing the old captain's coat, and the holes are always present -"to see what is breaking the foremast" as the OC runs out to see what is attacking the ship -the first "let's say what we both really feel" - OC slashes across the serpent's eyes.... yeah, that ought to adequately express their emotions towards the serpent lmao -"I'm starting to sink" as the OC's friends are about to get smashed, the final tragedy that tips off the rest of their journey -when OC opens their eyes first, they're already black, accompanied by "there are already spots in your eyes" - _nice_ -"into the skyyy" - screams at sky -the water rising up in the puddle OC is stepping into is already so cool already, but it ALSO goes along well with "water rising" in the lyrics -"feeling the glass crack" as it becomes clear OC can't hide/control what's happening to them -"no one on the deck who can help you" with the visual of the ghosts of the former crew - oof, ow, right in the feelings; but damn that's cool tho "I only sink deeper the deeper I think" in trying to undo what's happening, they inadvertently made it WORSE - poetic -the blood in the water when OC accidentally hurts their fishy friend -not a detail, but I love in general that we see a journey that goes from "denial" to "carefully dealing with it" to "reluctant acceptance" to full acceptance in a montage -how..the frick...did you manage to so vividly and clearly express that the OC is more and more desperate during that fight, and in their desperation give up the fight against the changes to their body as they finally reach their breaking point when they see the destruction they've caused, and gives into it with a sad hysterical humor as they succumb to the bitter irony that was their effort to try and out-run these clearly inevitable changes, which then turned to "fuck it, I give up, just take me and be done with it, I'm done fighting, and-" as their friend runs to them, obviously to stop them, and they close their eyes to it "-and I'm done hurting people" IN _LESS_ THAN TEN SECONDS??? I've seen less character development in entire seasons I tell ya, this was marvellous
@helloitsaperson6447
@helloitsaperson6447 2 жыл бұрын
FINALLY SOMEONE MENTIONS THE PUDDLE I'm sorry, I'm so happy I finally found someone mention it
@Wh1teNoise616
@Wh1teNoise616 2 жыл бұрын
Man I want this as a TV show, about a lost sea creature slowly peacing together her past through finding her old possession in a ship wreckage.
@redymedy
@redymedy 2 жыл бұрын
how I met your mother exists bro
@Wh1teNoise616
@Wh1teNoise616 2 жыл бұрын
@@redymedy god damnit >:(
@BE-fw1lr
@BE-fw1lr 2 жыл бұрын
She's a girl.
@BE-fw1lr
@BE-fw1lr 2 жыл бұрын
@@Wh1teNoise616 Just correcting you.
@pyrostorm1700
@pyrostorm1700 9 ай бұрын
4:01 holy shit they already had the WHOLE PANTHEON made as far back as ship in a bottle. This animatic reveals something else every time I rewatch it!
@sa2_astral
@sa2_astral 3 жыл бұрын
Everyone is saying this is professional level, and it is! But I want to talk about the story. I was just watching KZbin about to go to sleep and saw this, thought it looked interesting and clicked. I didn’t realize at first the main character WAS the sea monster at the beginning! It was really fun to watch and I could pretty much understand what was happening. It’s so good, and now I’m really interested in this story!
@Sillythingamagig
@Sillythingamagig 3 жыл бұрын
I feel like with more lore she’s actually gonna be able to turn into a sea monster when she wants to 👀
@Anonymous-73
@Anonymous-73 2 жыл бұрын
“Pain, this is what I fight for”
@TetraTerantula
@TetraTerantula 2 жыл бұрын
I think its interesting how she slashes one eye of the monster and in the beginning stages of the transformation only one of her eyes gets transformed :D Love this :D
@ajb7709
@ajb7709 Ай бұрын
i genuinely have no words, this is epic. checks ALL of my boxes; stunning visuals, dope artstyle, amazing use of color, movement, and storyboarding, pirates i love this so much AAAA
@Sleepyhonkshew
@Sleepyhonkshew 3 жыл бұрын
THIS LOOKS AMAZING! THE STORY! THE PACING, THA ACTION, ITS ALL AMAZING! This is so great! You're very talented
@Jasper_KN
@Jasper_KN 3 жыл бұрын
I’ve honestly never seen something so emotionally impactful on this platform my entire time being on here. You’re so incredibly talented and I wouldn’t be surprised seeing your name on some well known animation company’s movie credits like Disney or something, or maybe even you starting something of your own. This piece is so beautiful and the small vivid green components really add something stunning to your art! I cannot wait to see what you do next, this is definitely one of those videos that I’ll rewatch all the time!
@rianoconnor9078
@rianoconnor9078 3 жыл бұрын
The frame where the eyes are just pearing through the window is just perfect. This is the best animation ive seen all month. :)
@AshenCinders
@AshenCinders 8 ай бұрын
I absolutely LOVE the art style of this animatic! How the background has more of a grey line art while the main focus is on the characters lined in black is a wonderful visual element to direct the viewers focus is done very well. Not to mention the use of monochrome, aside from the bright cyan blue really stands out. Overall I love this, visually from an artistic perspective AND the music too :)
@thehistoryandbooknerd8979
@thehistoryandbooknerd8979 2 жыл бұрын
After looking at some of the Tumblr posts, I gotta ask - why did the ocean god (I’m bad with names) attack the ship to begin with? He was the moon goddess’s lover/partner, and he seemed so sweet and tender with her - he seemed to also have the intelligence for communication and such, so why would he brutally attack a ship for what seems like no reason?
@KZFathom
@KZFathom 2 жыл бұрын
okay, ive been thinking about this, and the sea monster only starts attacking the boat after the captain points to something on the map with an x on it, maybe they were about to do a no-no on the sea monster's list? This adds additional symbolism to them wearing the captain's old clothing, as the main character journeys out to the place with the moon, and loses themself.
@makushonjongramiresu1577
@makushonjongramiresu1577 2 жыл бұрын
I think the captain is trying to steal something from the sea God and that's why it attack?
@OnonO3
@OnonO3 2 жыл бұрын
@@makushonjongramiresu1577 The captain tried to capture the egg of the god of the seas and the goddess of the moon (and fathers can be villent when it comes to their children)
@arandomgamer2417
@arandomgamer2417 2 жыл бұрын
future lore?
@Team_Kyro
@Team_Kyro 2 жыл бұрын
both gods were female btw
@charliemandarin4052
@charliemandarin4052 3 жыл бұрын
Holy Shi- THAT WAS AMAZING!!! Edit after watching like 80 more times: I love the use of color, the only major colors in this are the blue, also the visuals of the two ships, the first one filled with happiness and cheer, and the other being lonely and filled with nothing but sorrow. The music choice was amazing, fitting the story with perfection. The reactions are amazing, the emotions on their face are so real. I think the true mark of good story telling is when you can fall in love with a character with only knowing them for five minutes. It’s just amazing and I hope to see more of this or just from this creator.
@chalkywaters
@chalkywaters 3 жыл бұрын
The backround charaters are well desgined and make the animatic feel more live-ly. This is a awsome animation btw and im glad to see you get more recognition!
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