Homework 1: Give me a good title for my poem- post it in the comments section Homework 2: Do the Quiz shawenglish.com/quizzes/basic-english-poem-quiz/ Homework 3: Write a poem and post it in the comments section
@thebestones96102 жыл бұрын
Teacher is so beautiful and the way how she teaches also beautiful, THANK U 4 effective lesson, you r a great teacher Hello from Uzbekistan🥰
@Dash-oz5py Жыл бұрын
Best poem teacher... 🤓
@swaroopskitchen5648 Жыл бұрын
The morning
@swaroopskitchen5648 Жыл бұрын
Ok
@pankajjha342410 ай бұрын
Tension but fun likewise life
@stem22322 жыл бұрын
Colours They are mesmerizing and bright Sometimes dull but still shine You see them with your eyesight Mixing colours give you fine line
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Thank you for sharing! 😃
@juanperdomo12 жыл бұрын
Hi, I can't wait to listen to another class with you. I love listening to your sweet and soft voice because it inspires me to improve my English. Thank you.
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Great! Thanks for the visit and comment.
@fadumohussein95110 ай бұрын
I don’t know if I should be concerned with the amount that you are going through or not because you have a very strong sense that you’re not doing it right and I know you have to do that but you are doing what you’re supposed be done with and you have a good heart so you should have that confidence in your body that you’re going to be able with it so I think that is a great way of going through this process of getting through this and I hope that you’re able and you have some time and
@maihassan551010 ай бұрын
How do you dare you say that !!
@Joseph-hh6jp Жыл бұрын
Howdy, am Carlyle I love your teaching style. Now here is my poem about atmosphere Before I disappear , Like a spear In the atmosphere.
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Short and Simple. Good.
@laylasart6772 жыл бұрын
Hi Robin! I'm Layla! I watched this video again on my account. I hope you do more videos about poetry and give more examples if that possible. I want to learn more. I know that might take you more time and money, but it would be fruitful lesson. Thanks a million to you dear Robin for all the efforts you make. I'm so lucky to have a lovely and honest teacher such as you. I never can do all that without your help. You are the best ever. ❤️
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Thanks for your interest in the video. I doubt we will have another video on poetry soon. -Robin
@twomasks6794 Жыл бұрын
My first try: After school, i get tired Whispers me : get ready My mood's off , i cried Sleepy breezes , cozy pillows Cruel homework , my head's fried Maths questions , makes me freeze Science logics like fairies on trees What's left ? It's just the fate Bitter and bitter , the homework taste.....
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Oh a very powerful poem. Well written. I feel your emotions. Great homework!
@shajeeratk14433 ай бұрын
❤wow
@Nanasang6312 жыл бұрын
My 6-year-old girl said the title could be "The Best Morning". Thank you for your great lesson! 👍
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Love that!
@vasavi2813 Жыл бұрын
Title:AN ELEGANT MORNING Tq for your wonderful explanation mam, i liked your way of teaching and your voice also very smoothy
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Thanks a lot
@MiguelRobloxL0L Жыл бұрын
She is a good and very understanding English teacher. Thanks! 😍😎
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Glad you think so!
@artercrafterantics47 Жыл бұрын
The Morning When I'm Alone is a nice title for this poem...❤
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Love that!
@FirdavsiGameDev2 жыл бұрын
Hey Shaw, that's a new experience. Thank you!
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Great! Thanks for the visit and comment.
@laylaallili30902 жыл бұрын
Hi Robin and Leigh! I have watched this lovely lesson. I really enjoyed and I hope you make another one. This is an a especial video with a special teacher. 💗. My Homework!: 1. The title of the poem I suggest is LONELINESS. 2. I did the quiz, but I think there an issue in the link or something else, it doesn't show me the result. I will try to try again next time. 3. My poem: Spring I want to smell the flower, I go and see lots of grass, I will feel more power, I drink fresh water from my glass.
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
My Homework!: ✔️1. The title of the poem I suggest is LONELINESS. TRY AGAIN 2. I did the quiz, but I think there an issue in the link or something else, it doesn't show me the result. I will try to try again next time. 3. My poem: ❤️Spring ❤️I want to smell the flower, ❤️I go and see lots of grass, ❤️I will feel more power, ❤️I drink fresh water from my glass. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
@ThisisFit2 жыл бұрын
Everyone’s poetry examples are so good! I love seeing that creativity ~
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
They are!
@laylaallili30902 жыл бұрын
You are really a special. I love this lesson more than any 😍..I am looking forward to watching more lessons like this.
@ThisisFit2 жыл бұрын
@@laylaallili3090 I hope I get to make more also!
@MayedaTariq-el6zc3 ай бұрын
It's my first ever poem guys..It's quite simple, pls tell me how is it Playing in the snow, little kids were giggling Rubbed the fog on my window, Thinking of days I couldn't bring A cup of coffee in my hand Listening to music on my phone Completely lost in a wonderland Where I was all alone
@manasvi20948 ай бұрын
If my english teacher would be like u...my interest in english would have been doubled along with excellent pronouciation skills!
@ShawEnglishOnline8 ай бұрын
I am here. You can watch my videos to learn.
@Tenzinsangay4962 жыл бұрын
The precious smile on your amazing face. The authentic maxim never stops in your mouth.
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Thank you! 👍
@chessgame427717 күн бұрын
5:52 : the convenient title is ''In the morning''
@enjoyingpoetry-rizalelsarif Жыл бұрын
Your tutorial is very useful for developing a culture of writing poetry
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Many many thanks
@Garfield_Minecraft Жыл бұрын
3:24 She can't stop rhyming😂
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
I hope you enjoyed it
@INAYAT786112 жыл бұрын
Very Useful 👍. It's quite easy for me to write a poem now ! Thank you so much for. Loving from Pakistan 🇵🇰💚
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for watching.
@TreasureTimothy270 Жыл бұрын
Am I the only one who noticed the RHYME in her speech. Wow! You inspire me to improve my English skills 😊
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Yes, she is amazing.
@artinshorttime5604 Жыл бұрын
for my best teacher in all times 1- thank you for your lesson 2 - you can choose from this names for the poem . the summer, today will be good.with no plan.the fun of the summer. 3- i will right different kind of poetry for my friend Mia .she is youtuber model and i will write it for you in the comment soon too . 4 - and that is the important point but i have not time to write it now by details that point is why we write poetry?sure it is beautiful but the important reason which i will write it now comes from our language .poetry in arabic language means the feeling and we write the poetry to give the others our feeling to share us our feeling or to teach others or to help others or to ask others for helping to other people or for us or to our girls to show them how much we love them and or, or, or we will have a lot of or if i will write for you why we write the poetry . i wrote my first poetry from 35 years for my girl .i was in 15 years old . and i wrote some english poetry in my channel for who i love and for fatherless and motherless .i wrote for homeless a poem too but i want to make it song .i tried to find somebody to do it in usa but i did not find anybody.i have more than 5 or 6 poem for the girls who i love but i did not download it yet. i will try to make it songs because i try to learn how i make songs as a professional and i am trying to learn english very well because to much words in my mind and the grammar will help me to write more good poetry .you will surprise when you will know the reason . the reason is the searching for beautiful women to marry her in usa or in any country which they are speaking english .i am 50 years old and i am not married yet.and the reason for that will make me tell you my life story and no time for that. i will be happy if you visit my channel on youtube art in short time and you watch my poetry and my songs which is by english language which they need some fixed for the voice but the important point is your watching to my movie the dream. it is by arabic language but i translated to english and please give me your opinion about it. may we will work together in my magazine the art light electronic magazine. i had a lot of problems to publish it from many years until now and this the second reason make me i want to leave egypt . i need people from every where in the world to work with me because my first target is make the people around the world and governments loves the united world which no egypt, no usan no england but only one united world that the principle which make that world became united is the science because that is the only principle will make us will become united in one-day and i wish that day comes soon and may be you can help in that. i do not promise by giving you money because that is will depend on your sales in your country which you will be the manager to my magazine over their.you and who will work with you will take 70% from the sales in your country. thank you for your time .best wishes . god bless you.
@temesgenwoysha37462 жыл бұрын
Wow, it's more helpful to me to learn English in a very colorful way. Thank you very much.
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Thanks for your support.
@Ladorani.official3437 ай бұрын
@@ShawEnglishOnline
@mimii-w8i2 жыл бұрын
Beautiful 🥰 poem thanks. I will call it . Awaken emotions.
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Wonderful!
@Dash-oz5py Жыл бұрын
Help me understand poems a lot better!
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much
@shivamsingh-yc6hl2 жыл бұрын
I learn a lot from this video Love from india🇮🇳 💝
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Great! Thanks for the visit and comment.
@SurprisedMakeup-be3it19 сағат бұрын
Today was my first time riding a poem and now I cannot stop thank you a lot 🙏🏻💖
@fahgamer1224 Жыл бұрын
It is very easy explanation of how to write a poem.
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Yes.
@madumaligallage53612 жыл бұрын
What a calmly voice😘
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Thank you! 👍
@Bro124556 ай бұрын
Tomorrow is my poem competition
@ShawEnglishOnline6 ай бұрын
Best of luck!
@SandaliAyodhya5 ай бұрын
Mine also 🎉
@DonaldZeanLirazan5 ай бұрын
Same😅
@shilpakumbhare46235 ай бұрын
My also 😊
@apekshaapurkar5 ай бұрын
Same
@lyricsyaar Жыл бұрын
Best English teacher I have ever seen I hope you don't mean but ma'am you daam look like a queen and now I hope you don't mind 😅 And ma'am title I think for your poem "EVERY MORNING I'M ALONE" :)
@corazondeargentina2 жыл бұрын
This channel is great!
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Thank you.
@arzumardalieva38749 ай бұрын
I’m grateful 🙏🏻 For the video and clear explanation! Poem is a song of a Soul! It can be written in a spark of inspiration! Doesn’t matter if big or small. Power of One’s imagination has no limitation! If well written - able to touch the hearts of all! Poem is a beautiful form of self expression! Blessings 💜
@ShawEnglishOnline9 ай бұрын
Awesome comment! And poem! 👍 😃❤️
@arzumardalieva38749 ай бұрын
@@ShawEnglishOnline Thank you 🙏🏻 I am a quick learner.☺️
@manjindersaini35142 жыл бұрын
Thanks teacher .
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Thank you! 🙏🏻
@FcJayjeet Жыл бұрын
The title name is the Golden morning 🌄. This is very nice title
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Thank you for watching my lesson.
@FcJayjeet Жыл бұрын
❤❤
@dailydose702Күн бұрын
1. Morning Serenity 2. Sunrise Solace 3. Calm Awakening 4. A Peaceful Start 5. Morning Bliss But if i had to choose just one,I'd say: MORNING HARMONY This title just captures,the soothing atmosphere,the balance of the nature,the sense of inner peace that prevades your poem. By the way this is my poem and actually iam pakistani my national language is urdu but my favourite subject is english and i am the best at it. Here is a new winter poem: Winter's snow falls soft and deep, A magical world, in silent sleep. The trees stand tall, with frosty might, A winter wonderland, a pure delight. The fireplace crackles, warm and bright, A cozy haven, from the winter's night. The stars shine bright, in the winter sky, A celestial show, as the snowflakes fly. Winter's joy, is a peaceful sight, A time for dreams, on a cold winter's night. So let it snow, and let it be cold, For winter's magic, is a treasure to behold.
@imesha20012 жыл бұрын
Good evening teacher...😍 most useful video...thanks for your video 😊
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
You are welcome 😊
@wataworks6478 Жыл бұрын
I can listen to you all day. ❤
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Thank you for watching
@cutestanimequeen1847 Жыл бұрын
I find this was fun and I enjoyed your video, I hope to see a next video like this, u help me a lot so thx u😊
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it!
@sumailaometerewinner2 ай бұрын
The morning sun shines bright Still on my bed admiring natural creations Lazy to get up and do the rights my conscience beckons me to appreciate the creator
@RaviShankar-xm2vk Жыл бұрын
Thank u sis, its very useful for my verse competition
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Glad to hear that
@nazrulamin43532 жыл бұрын
It's very useful for me, thank you madam. We want to more videos about this topic
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for your support and sweet comment.
@imranabegum44912 жыл бұрын
Hearing upcoming test. My head gonna mad. How to do my best. My friends, the days gonna end.
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Awesome poem!
@Whitney76055 ай бұрын
It’s a lonely morning Perhaps am still mourning For my long late sibling Named conni Probably siblings are the enemies we can’t leave without Without u am left out I miss our Good old memories Here I am about to black out U slept and woke up in another far way colony 😢 Poetry ❤
@ATorturedNerd5 ай бұрын
Wow! That's good❤
@hachandana Жыл бұрын
Nice Lesson teacher...❤ From : Sri Lanka student..
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Thanks and welcome
@dubai2402 жыл бұрын
Good morning Teacher thx for this video i love it
@abdurrahimazad532 жыл бұрын
Good Evening
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Thank you! 😃
@healthyspaceclinic8903 Жыл бұрын
The way of teaching is very nice
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Thanks and welcome
@laibascones73889 ай бұрын
Tittle: Summer I went to the beach, I ate some peach. I run in the sand, I hold your hand.😊
@ShawEnglishOnline9 ай бұрын
Awesome! 👍
@nbfds46482 жыл бұрын
Thanks a lot for this channel, I love you all ♥️ ^^
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Thank you too!
@ArshadAli-dv6bt Жыл бұрын
A Usual Morning I love your way of explaining things ❤
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Thank you! 😃
@ArshadAli-dv6bt Жыл бұрын
@@ShawEnglishOnline your welcome, thank you
@mdabdurrahim8090 Жыл бұрын
Excellent analysis. I am extremely pleased. Very helpful lesson on composing poems.
@chidinmasibigem56749 ай бұрын
You are a very good teacher. This poem is so lovely ..helped my 8 year old son learn about writing a poem. He has been struggling at school.. For the title of your own poem, he gives it.. A lovely day. Here is his own poem... My mum is kind And has a good mind She gives me pills Whenever I am ill. 😊 thanks Ma'am we need more videos...
@zainungrace3322 жыл бұрын
Hello Leigh and Robin! Leigh, you are an amazing lady! I never thought that you were good at poetry. 1. Title: A Good Day 2. I did the quiz but no results appear at the end. 3. I am not good at poetry but I try my best for Leigh. "Someone like you" Looking out the window, you see the cloud, Looking at the door, you see a purity, Looking in the eyes, you see a crowd, Looking at your heart, you see humanity.
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
✔️1. Title: A Good Day 2. I did the quiz but no results appear at the end. ✔️Try the quiz now. ✔️3. I am not good at poetry but I try my best for Leigh. ⭐Love it! "Someone like you" Looking out the window, you see the cloud, Looking at the door, you see a purity, Looking in the eyes, you see a crowd, Looking at your heart, you see humanity.
@pallavi62282 жыл бұрын
💫Leigh ma'am, I will try to write a good poem next time.😊 Thank you again!💕
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Great! Thanks for the visit and comment.
@taulemsphom4725 Жыл бұрын
Wowww ,, so nice it really helps us to understand and learn... 👍👍👌👌
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
It's my pleasure
@gitanjalimalik49182 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much ma'am it's really super class ma'am and u are teaching super super ❤❤❤❤❤❤💐💐🌹👌👌👌
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Thank you dear student 💚
@molinchandro27923 ай бұрын
Woo i am so, happy in your Video.. Thank you so much 🥰🥰😊
@joelmembrillos55462 жыл бұрын
Thanks for sharing this video
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Thank you! ❤️
@hemanthadesilva5272 жыл бұрын
Excellently wonderful lesson. It's Awesome. You too look like a Beautiful 💖 Poem with Rhythmic Rhyme...! God 🙏 Bless 🙏 you.
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Thank you! You too!
@devminayt Жыл бұрын
I HAVE A EXAM TOMMOROW AND THIS HELPS ME ALOT. 🙃 🙂
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
How did you do on the exam?
@SandoNyumah Жыл бұрын
Lonely morning feels good
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
great
@namantheslayer58812 жыл бұрын
This Is Extemporary, Thank You So Much, Really Helpful, I Just Learned How To Write A Basic Poem...
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Thank you dear student 💚
@walkietalkie16663 ай бұрын
"I'm light, I'm bright, I'm dynamite!"
@oluwatoyinosofodunrin60738 ай бұрын
Thanks for the video. Been trying to learn to write light poems. My poem THE RAIN Cold night, Icy at times, Not enough light, Much lesser grime. No one dares stay out Else risks a bout Here comes the rain Don't worry, it isn't all pain!
@ShawEnglishOnline8 ай бұрын
Good one!
@agustinamansur56652 жыл бұрын
Beautiful and warm poem! 💞🌈🌿🌾I think a good title for it could be "Sun" 😁🌞
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much.
@nisattasnim3044Ай бұрын
My Favourite class Mam From Bangladesh ❤Take love❤❤
@english_professor Жыл бұрын
A blessed morning
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Good title.
@NaveenMatibag3 ай бұрын
Thank you so much I need to write a poem for teachers day ❤
@Joshwin55964 ай бұрын
My brother His playful way His melodious voice He likes to play And to make noise
@ShawEnglishOnline4 ай бұрын
Awesome!!!
@arushm9424 Жыл бұрын
thanks it helped me a lot
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Glad to hear that!
@gerbemichel2 жыл бұрын
Leigh, I suggest this title to your poem: "All ingredients assembled!" Quiz done. (my score is 9 of 10) Here is my poem: My family I’m happy with my parents, No worry, there's evidence. They cared of me when I was sick, And sang a song when I couldn't sleep. With my siblings in confidence, Were sharing our innocence, Even so, life brought us some kick, were steadfast to reach the peak.
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
This is wonderful!❤️
@gerbemichel2 жыл бұрын
@@ShawEnglishOnline Yes, I surprised myself. 😀
@SanaafzalSanaafzal-z4m Жыл бұрын
You're great English teacher ❤
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much!
@augusto5658 Жыл бұрын
Love From 🇧🇷
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@Secrethunter1204 Жыл бұрын
Love from Bangladesh. You are really amazing.
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Thank you very much! ❤️
@ricktagoy-rt5vs5 ай бұрын
Thankyou for teaching me
@hrushikeshsahu52532 жыл бұрын
Thank you ma'am 🙏🙏🙏
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Most welcome 😊
@TenzingLama-m1f4 ай бұрын
You gave good information how to write poem. Early morning is the tittle of your poem.
@koree61722 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
You're most welcome
@lovelythings35882 жыл бұрын
Lovely morning
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
For a title!? Yes. Sounds great!
@CherieAnnGornago5 ай бұрын
Thank.ubfor the vedeo Maam
@ShawEnglishOnline5 ай бұрын
You're welcome 💙
@zainungrace3322 жыл бұрын
Hello, Robin. I did the quiz and I tried twice hahaha. On the first attempt, I only got 2/10 and this irritated me so I decided to try again and the second attempt was 5/10. Okay, I admit that I am not a poet.
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Haha. Poetry is not for everyone.
@BlueRoad_Vietnguyen2 жыл бұрын
Thank you for the video Maam 👌👌
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Most welcome 😊
@MikeLibarnes4 ай бұрын
Wow so the best poem, tommorow is my poem quiz❤
@ShawEnglishOnline4 ай бұрын
How did you do?
@NakatoRose-w3y4 ай бұрын
Oh thank you for the handwriting ❤❤🎉 3:12
@ShawEnglishOnline4 ай бұрын
No problem 😊
@Psvv9802 жыл бұрын
A lovely morning
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
I like it
@Voccent2 жыл бұрын
Hello 💙
@poojaparshad-by6ex Жыл бұрын
My morning 🌅🌅🌅🌄
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Great!
@ZerfyL2 жыл бұрын
this is the title for your poem Happy to be alone. i writed a poem, the title is "Lazy" I don't want to wake up in the morning, I feel hot because of the sun, I close the windows because it's annoying, I turned on the electric fan.
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Great little poem!🌹
@ntj20108 Жыл бұрын
A Blessed Morning
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Thank you for watching!
@pallavi62282 жыл бұрын
Hello Leigh ma'am! Thank you so much for this fantastic lesson, I loved it! Homework 1: 'The early morning beauty' or 'The early beauty of morning' Homework 2: I got 9 out of 10 in the quiz. Homework 3: 'Our English teachers ' When my teachers teaches us English, I understand everything in English very clearly, Because our teachers teaches us English very sweetly, I want to say "thank you" to all my teachers who teaches us for free. (Thank you💫 Esther ma'am, 💫Fanny ma'am, 💫Leigh ma'am, 💫Sara ma'am, 💫Fiona ma'am, 💫Alexandra ma'am, and also thank you to 💫 teacher Robin,💫teacher Mike, 💫teacher Bill. Again Thanks a million my dear all teachers for helping us to learn English.😊❤️🙏 Lots of love from India!😇🙏🤗🤗
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
You are a super student! ❤️❤️❤️ Thank you so much!!!🥇#1 Shaw English fan.
@OgundeyiRoqeebat3 ай бұрын
Stunning Day To Begin With ❤❤
@saranyaminu5300 Жыл бұрын
Thank you ❤
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
You're welcome 😊
@saranyaminu5300 Жыл бұрын
It's ok 😊
@natiemeru5563 Жыл бұрын
I love you so much much and much!!!
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much.
@chhimichhimi7955 Жыл бұрын
Early in the morning 🌅🌅🌅🌅
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Great title!
@solomonkenea34392 жыл бұрын
When I saw you on this lesson tonight It was my first time but I hope it won't be the last Would you come again with another video So I could see you every then and now!
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Great poem.
@haswanthsp2661 Жыл бұрын
First, thank you for your tips. Second, here is my poem, it is about sadness. It is my first time, so please don't judge me🙂 It is a pain, When my money drain, My life is a gloom, Where i never bloom.
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Every poem is beautiful. It is very sad. Your words are very powerful. I hope you smile, I like your style, Your life is great, Trust your fate.
@walkabout16 Жыл бұрын
A bright summer's day ------------------------------------ A bright summer's day, the sun's warm embrace, A gentle breeze whispers through leaves, so free, Nature's symphony, a tranquil, calming grace, In the azure sky, birds paint a jubilant spree. Fields of green stretch, where wildflowers bloom, Their colors dance, in meadows kissed by the light, Underneath the trees, there's a sense of perfume, As the world awakens from its peaceful night. Children laugh and play, their joy knows no end, In the golden hours, where innocence finds its way, With each passing moment, new memories they'll tend, On this bright summer's day, in the sun's warm display. Picnic blankets spread, families gather near, Sharing laughter and stories, a bond so strong, Ice cream in hand, there's nothing left to fear, As the hours waltz by, like a cheerful song. Cicadas hum their tune in the midday heat, Nature's rhythm plays, a soothing, timeless song, Underneath the shade, it's a perfect, cool retreat, Where the daydreams linger, and memories prolong. As the sun sets low, painting skies in shades of fire, A bright summer's day bids a sweet adieu, In the tranquil twilight, as stars begin to inspire, We'll cherish these moments, forever in our view.
@ShawEnglishOnline Жыл бұрын
Wow, yo uwent above and beyond. Great job!
@Ni.Orchid-t1j7 ай бұрын
❤i tried it won the poem award caz of u thank u so much tr.❤
@ShawEnglishOnline6 ай бұрын
Wow! Glad to hear that. Congratulations! 🎉
@choidanny59945 ай бұрын
Here's mine. It's not that good, I think. Please do correct if I made a mistake. And please recommend what else to add. Teddy Bear Soft and fluffy, That's how it feels. Like a buddy, The heart, it heals.
@hemantbc36982 жыл бұрын
My morning ✌
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
Morning!
@Alqesa_ma3_dina2 жыл бұрын
Amazing morning in summer
@ShawEnglishOnline2 жыл бұрын
❤️ Good one
@Chocomira-11Ай бұрын
Praises and rises she owns Serene beauty she holds Her heart splatter the scent of An astonishing rose, piercing The heart of withered florets Ransoming the emerald marine kingdom There spills her blood, by a withered majesty Oh Dear withered florets, She lives in with you Spread her mesmerizing aroma To the ethereal marine palace Oh dear emeralds, save your tears Oh dear saviours why did takeaway the precious gift She fades, the moonlit she owns never The moonlit memories she gifted us Rule our hearts -Dylin
@premkumarpremkumar3296 Жыл бұрын
In the cold winter night, Moon glows like light, The climate is very chill, As we do anything as will. We usually wake up late, But,we blame the fate, We drink hot coffee, And,eat some toffee.