Something Sweet to Bite - Part 2 [MLP Fanfic Reading] (Grimdark)

[@CharliMorganMusic]

"Subject's parental unit..." oh my god gross. This is gross. Like my stomach hurts. This is so disgusting. Five stars

[@alannahvowell7270]

Exactly how I feel! The effects make it scarier

[@camillahearsch4807]

Exactly

[@chloenieuwsma4846]

the heck is wrong with you?! ugh now i feel sick

[@mirzaramishbaig8980]

Agree🤢

[@sidneyswope3000]

*Que McDonald's Theme*

[@scottmaurning9591]

nightmare night what a fright give me something sweet to bite! if you're salty i won't care you'll never escape the candy mare!!

[@charlieeiler1245]

You got skillz

[@scottmaurning9591]

Charlie Eiler thanks

[@robertkunz7097]

+Yanne Mounier did you hear that its the sound of your fat ass body btw I aint no brony everyone who watches this is probably not a brony because they want to watch violence oh I 9 I am not scared of a lot of things but oh god the deep sea creatures and clowns that's probably on my scary list

[@scottmaurning9591]

Robert Kunz first: not every one on youtube is fat. second: I don't care what you are or what you fear, but I don't like that people like you go up to a random person and call them fat. last: who cares why people watch youtube, what's important is that you enjoy the stuff people make for other people. and if you can't be nice to other people I think you won't get any friends any time soon.

[@scottmaurning9591]

Robert Kunz I'm an atheist. and next time you make a joke like that, consider it that it isn't funny.

[@lulualma4139]

Damn fluttershy. I always knew you were a survivalist. But Daaaaamn.

[@coyotealienss]

She learned all of her skills from the woodland animals she lives with

[@Bimbows07]

If it were BO3 Based, she would be Nomad

[@meekaleebz3487]

I know right

[@davidradcliffe955]

You didn't read the second story did you

[@foxoftheshadows9272]

Nah mate. She ate the piece of the candy-pony's nose she had bitten off. That was pretty stupid.

[@envynoson]

That mlg survival skills Fluttershy has.

[@scottmaurning9591]

She's the only one who follows the survival rules

[@zgirl8572]

+Envy Noson She the only one that followed the bucking rules

[@glaxir7906]

+Envy Noson I can't belive Survival Shy isn't a meme yet!

[@thunderhorse9974]

Yep

[@sournote8610]

Fluttershy is the true survivor. Nothing can destroy her.

[@samueltrusik3251]

The fact that Fluttershy out of all people managed to not only survive, but fight through this mess is oddly nice.

[@Twinklethefox9022]

Wait, she lives?

[@Enter_the_Toshiverse_1996]

@@Twinklethefox9022 Yes, so does Rainbow Dash but only because she was out of town when this all happened.

[@pissapocalypse]

I don't think she survived because she took a bite out of one of the candy ponies

[@sherrymiller4069]

But she didn't eat it

[@hypedragon2197]

No she doesn’t, if u listen carefully she ate a piece of one of those monsters, so it can be concluded that she turned as well, it’s like a reverse zombie, if u bite them u get infected

[@rei-sb5mn]

*ruNS DOWNSTAIRS *GRABS DOG *RUNS BACK TO BED iMGoINgtOBEoKAy

[@berryfizz7195]

Here have some soup 🍜 and a hug 🤗 Better?

[@mmdxfnaf7885]

Chihiro Fujisaki LOL

[@kyoukomomo4953]

Josef Mengele AKA Todensengel I will grab my dog and keep hiding in my bed

[@berryfizz7195]

Josef Mengele AKA Todensengel *throws candy into the fireplace* no candy allowed. This is a no Candy Mare zone, aka the comment section

[@_silent_memory_2252]

What? Please translate this...

[@Flutter_Aeina]

When the little filly started screaming and crying after being forced to eat her father's flesh, my heart almost felt like it was being ripped out of my chest.

[@somedudewhodraws9377]

Knackermann knows how to make us cry and feel bad for Pumpkin Patch AKA Candymare.

[@Epic11705]

Poor little pumpkin 31:49

[@aurorynfrost9817]

You think your heart was being ripped out then you should listen to home sweet home when she finds her mom again

[@savannahhague4989]

i would like a what if fanfic where the little filly’s conscience didn’t become warped as what it became and chose to be a good candy making pony.

[@SmegEgg]

Okay am I the only one who imagined this girl: WHY WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS?!? YOU'RE A MONSTER! Doc: Frankly my dear, I don't give a damn.

[@mmocashout1843]

That, would be, fucking, amazing.

[@zgirl8572]

+Eva19 EWF Sweet celestia that would be SO.BUCKING.AWESOME. an the fact that it would be in a British accent would make it even more BUCKING AWESOME!!!!

[@robertkunz7097]

+Eva19 EWF damn boy where u find this its ade out of candy but mostly weed WEED WEED WEED

[@mmocashout1843]

It would sound like the doctor from doctor who

[@robertkunz7097]

lol

[@TheNervousMedic]

"So please...do shut up." I shouldn't laugh..... BUT OH MY GOD THAT WAS FUNNY AF XD

[@shawneeetherington5479]

The candy mare wants to know your location 😂

[@gloriabertram4776]

Why so you can kill me already over My Dead body

[@gloriabertram4776]

You're not knowing my location don't ever take me alive okay you can scare me or you want but I'm sitting here so you know that's not just what you're saying before

[@wh1tevo1d90]

@@gloriabertram4776 miss girl it was a joke

[@gloriabertram4776]

@@wh1tevo1d90 But I'm a boy

[@thedarklrd6714]

Why am I watching this at night? Because: *_CHALLENGE ACCEPTED_*

[@archeishere1]

Come At Me You Creeps I Accept Your Challenge

[@Charlie19508]

Me too

[@undeadban8692]

Same it’s 12:00 pm where I am at and I am a little unsettled my this story

[@PeachTeaDragons]

@@undeadban8692 its 02:51 AM but i have my dog next to me (GAMEPASS: 1¢)

[@Cart00nist101]

For me it is actually day but I think I'll still have a nightmare maybe cause truth be told am a total Fluttershy except without her survival skills!

[@GLMELEE13]

I was in shock and grasped in fear's vice grip until the very last line spoken, " ... So please, do shut up." Then I couldn't stop myself from spreading a grin across my face and chuckling to myself. Just the way it was said was perfect.

[@Wuten]

GLMELEE13 Delivery is key~

[@GLMELEE13]

Wuten AiE Indeed it is, good sir

[@alcoholanon]

GLMELEE13 when was that? I never heard that ._.

[@baldpai1047]

Dr. Pony: Do shut up. |My reaction: Can I give you to Pinkamena?

[@kawiicookie6057]

More like "let me introduce you to my dear friend pinkamiena"

[@revaslatts8011]

Clever, but isn't that a bit rash? 😕

[@Partyboxd]

@@revaslatts8011 no

[@chloenieuwsma4846]

@@revaslatts8011 not at all trust me. i have her contact info should i call her?

[@OceaSpray]

@@revaslatts8011 Nope.

[@beesfiles1460]

I didn't notice how scary this story was until I was laying in my bed, alone, in the darkness.. Guess I'm sleeping with a locked bedroom door and lights on tonight..

[@mephistoknackerman1406]

Just don't eat any sweets before bed. That's how she gets you! (Unless you share.)

[@Blueklima9708]

+Mephisto Knackerman Shit

[@auradraconis1901]

+KZbinWolf 3045 Don't worry. A door wouldn't keep her out anyway ;)

[@mephistoknackerman1406]

Aura Draconis XD It's true!

[@auradraconis1901]

+Mephisto Knackerman I'm probably a complete idiot for asking, but you're the Knackerman that wrote this? Just wanting to make sure if I can freak out now 😅

[@mythmask7864]

This is so cool... WHY IS THAT LITTLE KID BEING HURT? IN EVERY STORY, WHAT HAPPENS TO HER IS SEEN IN THE- Oh fudge. I knew it. She's the reason for Nightmare Night. She is what is killing ponies.

[@unknownunknownfreak3209]

Her soul goes and slaps the demon awake

[@BlackArcherGaming]

WHO IS SHE

[@ladyren1575]

@@BlackArcherGaming she's the Candymare

[@shaunyjimenez9637]

BRO SPOILERS

[@Adahy_Bullet]

Pumpkin Patch = Candy Mare. In theory. Or is current reincarnation. Idk which precisely tbh. If ya watch Home Sweet Home by Scribbler, it goes more into the backstory a bit. If currently has 2 parts

[@dylandavies4379]

Am I the only one who loves the candymare as a character

[@mephistoknackerman1406]

+Dylan Davies Well, no, but I'm not sure I count.

[@lolipopgamer4811]

no

[@zaidahharun8695]

I like candy mare

[@babybunny0003]

Me too! I scared my sister with her and OMG! Wow I love this pony

[@harrypotter2700]

Nope

[@vengeance4927]

"So please, do shut up." Wow. The rudest remark in the most polite of ways.

[@charlieeiler1245]

I do love the way the filly got excited about Lemon Drops opening the door with magic, it was pure adorableness.

[@vengeance4927]

"Your mouth is for eating, not for crying. So please, do shut up." Sorry, this is my favorite line so far. I hate and love this guy.

[@TheSwordofFlames]

Oh my God, this fic is so FUCKED. I love it.

[@pattzilla2747]

fuck yeah!!!

[@micahbowers2562]

That's what makes it so good

[@madmother58]

Fuck yeah this is sooo Fucked but I love a good horror story

[@tiredashell7205]

I know

[@KimikoKusanagi]

Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees

[@OblivionFalls]

At first I had a heart attack from that adorable Sweetie Belle, then I had an actual heart attack 'cause this is some scary shit. I love it ~ 10/10

[@JessetheSlayer13542]

OblivionFall your awesome

[@arnoldmws6330]

I can't hate Pumpkin Patch. All the awful things she did should make me, but knowing why and how she turned into the candy mare breaks my heart so badly...I just can't hate her...

[@AymaraMagaliCastroMontiv-mc9ub]

Que le paso

[@woodkiller4496]

​@AymaraMagaliCastroMontiv-mc9ub you don't know what happened to pumpkin patch?

[@pomeranianpleb5110]

@@woodkiller4496 What happened to Pumpkin Patch?

[@themadhatter6519]

"Please do shut up." -_- Dat line delivery doe XD

[@austinteiflingman1345]

I can see this as a sort of really creepy urban legend that ponies could tell to each other every Nightmare Night, as a bit of a gruesome tale teenagers could tell each other. I dunno

[@austinteiflingman1345]

And the "Please do shut up moment": you lost me there, but boy I love it

[@Tbsav.J]

“you mouth is for eating, not crying. so please... do shut up” bro i could not stop laughing 😂😂😂

[@sammiepatty4863]

I used to feel bad about Flutters at 1st, but looking back at it years later I realized she was actually spared the worst of it all. Thinking about it: living the closest to the forest, you would think she'd be attacked 1st, but it was Applebloom instead. 🤔 And to top it off: the bite she took wasn’t even big enough to cause anything; nither did she swallow anything. So she and Granny Smith were possibly the only two in ponyvile to have survived.

[@janesullivan1969]

I think based on the scene with Apple Blooms head she went for the Apple Family first because of a combination of the barn being a good place to hide from the sun (which weakens her) during the day and her being attracted by the Caramel Apples they were making.

[@gallifreyangirl9232]

I LOVE the voice for Lemon Drops :D I love characters that sound nice but they're sick, evil villains.

[@willphully]

I wish I had found this before Halloween, that laughter... chilling.

[@draxxlie8311]

I love how his voice is so emotionless and matter-of-fact

[@science8847]

This is so sick, terrifying, and dark but I just love it for some odd reason...

[@tiredashell7205]

Moral of this episode: Be a coward and don't go outside if you hear *any* bone-chilling screams

[@SuperStar-ij9sm]

"So please, do shut up." Best line in the whole part XD

[@M.W.K6996]

This is without a doubt, one of the most terrifying fanfics in the MLP universe. Though there are other fanfics we'd like you to try: "Cupcakes", "Sweet Apple Massacre", "The Experiments of Twilight Sparkle", "Rocket To Insanity" & "Lil Miss Rarity". 0:09

[@wowisntitanamazinglyamazin9550]

Rocket to insanity wasn't too scary but please don't mention sweet apple massacre. that aside this one is my favorite one by far

[@wowisntitanamazinglyamazin9550]

or a puppet to her fame

[@dp2989]

M .W. K And Rainbow Factory

[@kawiicookie6057]

You can't forget " An apple sleep experiment", " The Trees are Screaming", "Never Open the Door", "Grogar", "It Moves Below, "The Friendship Text", " Let Her In", and " My Little Amnesia"

[@camillahearsch4807]

@@kawiicookie6057 yus

[@emilyendergirl4732]

Poor fluttershy..and aj and applebloom

[@emilyendergirl4732]

im so scared

[@Blueklima9708]

I can tell

[@3Mewthree]

That was an interesting choice of the author to move back and fourth in different parts of the story. It keeps us in mystery and is pretty well done. :)

[@shanlevine]

+Autumn Heart I love your OC

[@3Mewthree]

shannon levine Thanks :D

[@pacakemaster29]

A think a phrase to describe this story so far would be "fucked up" A story hasn't made me want to vommit in my life, I LOVE IT THANK YOU FOR POSTING THIS AND THANK YOU DUDE WHO WROTE IT!!!

[@mephistoknackerman1406]

You're welcome! I find mostly it just makes me hungry. So very hungry.

[@vinegardoppio8637]

Mephisto Knackerman mephisto...knackerman? mephisto akerman? blue exorcist and attack on titan? i see what you did there >:)

[@eggsandwitch679]

>:0 WUTTTTTTT! Also 35:51 "so please do shut up" :)

[@VanillaHetalianOwl]

This is so much more interesting than I had originally thought it would be. Am I am so happy we didn't have to know how Fluttershy dies! T^T

[@mephistoknackerman1406]

So I was really looking forward to Lemon Drop. Kudos to Wuten AIE on his work, those scenes would've just fallen completely apart if he hadn't done such a good job! The whole things was great of course, and still really loving the SFX. Can;t wait for next Friday!

[@holyalexander1737]

so the first chapter got me really good this one not so much. after all I can still eat candy unlike taffy apples, I don't think i'll be eating any of those till next year. Happy you didn't kill Fluttershy right away, though I see where this is going for her, looking forward to next week to see how this continues.

[@mephistoknackerman1406]

Holy Alexander Actually, sad to say that if you want to find out what happens to Fluttershy you'll need to read the sequel. Good news is I posted that up yesterday. www.fimfiction.net/story/61205/something-sweet-to-bite-too

[@holyalexander1737]

Maybe. I will at least have to wait until this is done, spoilers and what not.

[@mac2272]

who is lemondrop

[@confusingzeus8921]

I like how this story gives you multiple ponies perspectives of this terrible night

[@wafflethespottedkittykat8567]

This should totally be a book, I would pay $30 for it!:)

[@doodlewing6840]

The song in the beginning is this is Halloween is the beginning song in the nightmare before Christmas. Good fanfic two I love the first part in the beginning.

[@dp2989]

Plot twist: IT'S JUST A PRANK, BRO.

[@mephistoknackerman1406]

Nah, that's Hasbro's official version of this story. Only they used cookies instead of candy.

[@videowatcher3458]

I'm glad she survived

[@mangleandfoxysisters3166]

barely

[@ameliasegan2138]

You mean fluttershy she is a badass

[@Twinklethefox9022]

I'm not sure if... Flutters is alive or maybe she didn't get the candy fully in her

[@adorablecenturion8436]

I cant stop laughing at how many clash of clans notifications im getting saying "Your village is being raided by (insert name here)!" Every 20 seconds..

[@themegagamer4294]

Me to it sucks

[@sullivinfox6878]

this is so dark,mean,crazy,insane,disgusting,and a lot of weird stuff............................................................. I love it !!!!

[@mariag.5422]

"So please shut up" ...I laughed...I am a cruel cruel person lol 😂

[@alexlovesfellsans5621]

* everyone else is so scared while this ten year old sits here unfazed by the video. Actually enjoying it * Me : Yay! someone : AHH * grabs dog * Dog: really?

[@_-NatureMations-_]

If you're seeing this message somehow, please wake up. You've been in a coma for 6 years. This message may appear in a billboard, a Toktik comment, or even on the ground. Your family is waiting for you.

[@hellooooothereeee]

WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP.

[@storm_xo07]

Candymare: Trick or treat human! Me: *gives her an apple* Candymare: :0 *dies* Me: Diabetes cravings was never kind to you.

[@taylormullins6204]

Honestly, I truly love how this story and the sequel were written. though.. I didn't agree with how the sequel ended I still loved the story itself. which makes me kinda sad that emogak hasn't read the sequel yet :(

[@taylormullins6204]

and I would love to make my own short side story to this but I'm not much of a writer :p

[@darkdance0]

There was a sequel?

[@darkdance0]

Also, I just realized this was 5yrs ago 🙂

[@SomeAutomaton]

@@darkdance0 I knew there was a Prequel, but I’m sorry a SEQUEL!?

[@jodieburton1827]

​@@SomeAutomatontheres multiple sequels, i think Theres... 6 sequels currently?

[@DSR_AA-12]

For me this one takes the cake for the creepiest MLP fanfic. Far more nightmare fuel than Cupcakes or Rainbow factory or Sweet apple massacre.

[@skulljail.1]

SAM was just disgusting, this story is legit scary

[@alphonselover825]

Oh god... please don't tell me that's Blueblood!

[@monkeybusinessinc.9950]

+Crystal Bloodsucker oh no...

[@thunderhorse9974]

It is good that he is dead

[@darklight5562]

At first, I was like „Who is BlueBlood?” and then I was like „Oh! That brother of Princess Celestia!” XD

[@revaslatts8011]

No, it doesn't sound like him. The voice, I mean.

[@ki77ymid]

WHY DID I WATCH THIS???? ITS ALMOST HALLOWEEN ;-;

[@deuceofdiamonds]

Yeah, I'm watching it even closer. Hah. Hah. Hah. HELP ME.

[@lpsparadise9874]

Crystal Midnight to late-,-

[@saverkittylovelypunch1730]

+DavidT2002 well im whoch it on Halloween and after!

[@dosbrosgaming2309]

Crystal Midnight I watched dis shit around chrismas

[@mmdxfnaf7885]

DosBrosGaming me too! im watchin it now at 8:27 freakin pm

[@iwasneverhere8902]

"we have many other tests to do today, so please, do shut up" -Mysterious evil person 2016

[@mephistoknackerman1406]

more like '- Lemon Drop 2012' but sure, why not?

[@shaunyjimenez9637]

This book captivates the terror so well that it's bright sunlight in the middle of the day rn and i am terrified

[@arse7296]

i was freaking EATING at the puking part :L

[@mephistoknackerman1406]

+Name The Artist That must have been fun.

[@shesakiraqueen6002]

+Mephisto Knackerman yeah, swallow that shit.

[@SmegEgg]

+Mephisto Knackerman I bet

[@seriowosly]

me too ;3;

[@arse7296]

So fun. Much fun.

[@shadow_fangirl_2005]

(31:49) I know she becomes a blood thirsty monster later, but I can't but feel so bad for Pumpkin Patch. She was an innocent child stolen from her home, treated like a lab rat and was even tricked into eating her own father's flesh. I can't blame her too much for becoming a vengeful hellish abomination 😢

[@777Rowen]

Also Fluttershy is such a badass here! Holy crap. This is so messed up! I feel so bad for the little filly being tortured by the evil unicorn stallion. :(

[@emeraldmaster2599]

24:45 WHERE IS HER DAMN BEAR WHEN SHE NEEDS HIM!?!

[@elenasmith3941]

Hibernating

[@winniejohnson2944]

This is...just scaring. I've never thought mlp could have gone so grim...I like it😈!

[@mmocashout1843]

“Your mouth is for eating, not crying. So please, do shut up."

[@mitskifanboy15]

“your mouth is for eating, not crying” is genuinely scary

[@kimdemersseman]

32:00 i think candymare is picking the mane 6 off one by one

[@katt-nokjoke3688]

Welp merry Christmas XD

[@myrtlejones28]

That One Orange Katt I think the candymare's real name should be Lily Rose when she was still alive.

[@revaslatts8011]

Good thing Fluttershy didn't eate the candy. Yeah, she actually bite the nose off. But I doubt she ate it in her struggle. That means she's the only survivor.

[@myrtlejones28]

Aw Fluttershy sounds so cute in this video!

[@Thedragonlover95]

fluttershy really is knowing the ways of the survival skills

[@jaiden5941]

Never eat the corrupted candy of the Candy Mare and her puppets. The corruption of the cursed candies, they spread like a disease and destroy one while robbing them of their lives.

[@tobytwistedd69420]

* runs to a safe place *

[@evilfloydleech]

nightmare night .. what a fright .. give me something sweet to bite .. once it’s dark .. you will hear .. the giggles ... until you scream .

[@chaselayman6815]

Shy DOES have decent survival skills tho, you gotta give her that.

[@dementedinsanity6666]

I listened to this just now in my bed at 11 pm. I'm going to regret my decision in my dreams, aren't i?

[@woodkiller4496]

poor flutter shy she was brave

[@emilyendergirl4732]

yeah and scared to death at the same time

[@woodkiller4496]

​@emilyendergirl4732 right hopefully fluttershy is safe

[@epicsyincs7261]

the candy mare looks exactly like pinky pie!

[@cadlovestlb]

Ya I know that's what I thought

[@coyotealienss]

Yeah but covered in candy and on steroids and a canibal monster

[@blueberrysans2640]

looks more like the cupcakes Pinkamena, on steroids, went through a month of torture by butchershy, and doused in a candy dream/nightmare

[@chinasenpai8869]

I know, maybe it's her crazy ancestor XD

[@MisterDread]

U wot

[@harrypotter2700]

"Front or back makes no difference to our business,muppet." That's what she said

[@404delusions9]

Why am I watching this whilst I'm alone downstairs at 10pm

[@Draconea77717]

I want... No I need to cosplay the candy mare now... Must make candy mare cosplay.... Nightmare night... What a fright... Give me something sweet to BITE!

[@jewelmine442]

"so pls shut up" Me," FEELS GOOD TO BE A GANGSTA"

[@sullivinfox6878]

i liked the end."your mouth is for eating, not crying. so please, do shutup." lol

[@NitroShard]

Am I the only one that thinks Grimdarks are the best. xD

[@reversebeartrapped]

No

[@lisaafuang7402]

You are not alone 🎶

[@henryb8513]

I want more grimdark

[@rusnaniishak663]

NitroShard No you are not

[@jamiekagemori1299]

NitroShard they are usually the most well written

[@MischiefHowlVA]

Creepy and a great listen with some sadness. Loving it!

[@markfreeman1155]

random person "would you watch this in the dark" me "nope nope nope nope nope nope nope nope nope nope nope nope so much nope"

[@sagaislame8797]

This is crazy! I LOVE IT!

[@typicalgway]

Oh, poor fluttershy and the mysteriously family child! I wonder what family that is?

[@Phoenixtear101]

Wow, that pony is the polite killer/scientist, like Hannibal. :D

[@nathanalcantara7892]

The distorted ponies part...did anyone detect Laughing Jack reference?

[@hollowjack7152]

Nope.

[@greenmistarts2174]

No! Bad! We don't talk about that! Such a bad creepy pasta..

[@r4dicaltrickster678]

+Nathan Alcantara OML YAAAAS!

[@emissary8071]

Yup. Thats Laughing Jack

[@Silverdiamond22]

Nathan Alcantara yes

[@artemiscole8903]

Just, what is happening to the candy mare? It feels like she is being forced different experimented candys and then they feed her her fathers flesh? Thats something

[@RedWolf777SG]

O_O; Oh, Damn...That scene near the end.......that's really fucked up. Lemon Drop is a sick, sick bastard of a stallion. Q~Q And that poor, poor filly.

[@mephistoknackerman1406]

Lemon Drop was a hard character to write. The detachment came naturally, but it was difficult to tell if he was a little too over the top. I'm glad you like him. >D

[@RedWolf777SG]

Well, you did a pretty damn good job in writing his character. I mean what he was doing to that filly was fucking twisted, mate. And the voice acting really sells him. =3 So good job, keep up the good work. I'm really looking forward to next Friday's installment of this story. it's really hard not to just go ahead of read the actually fanfic to see what happens next. ^_^;

[@mac2272]

oh!is he that dude who is candy testing the little girl?

[@mac2272]

+Orianna Beesinger so mean

[@LanceTheAutobot]

I usually don't post before the end of the video but before the grim dark aspect of this fic gets to me I have to say that sweetie bell picture at the beginning gave me diabetes

[@momoplays9669]

I'm gonna tell this story at my school now...😈)My school allows us to tell spooky stories or make a play out of it!)Can you guess which one I'm doing...?😈😈😈🔪🔪🔪

[@mephistoknackerman1406]

If your friends like it, tell them to check out the video. If they don;t like it, tell them the Candy Mare is coming for them! XD

[@skittlestinav4534]

Mephisto Knackerman XD

[@lucystewart29]

Mephisto Knackerman won't they call Bull$#it on the Candy Mare's existence?

[@mephistoknackerman1406]

Jessica, Emily & RachelTV The power of suggestion is a funny thing. Yes, they will know she isn't a real threat. But it's funny because subconsciously they may still feel threatened regardless. This is how children end up being afraid of the 'boogieman' in general.

[@mmdxfnaf7885]

Mephisto Knackerman MEH I don't care

[@lolipopgamer4811]

HUUUH THE FOAL FROM THE INTRO IS THE CANDY MARE 😱

[@tobytwistedd69420]

Me to I thought Apple Bloom was dead at the first part 😬

[@daanimegrlderp3910]

Sophia Gallag But was she? Could this all be a flash back in little Appleblooms mind? Before she died in the caramel pot? So IDKKKK

[@daanimegrlderp3910]

Tick tock Labs hmmmmmm....... at the end I think it wasn't

[@chouxi]

Guys, If you pay attention the decorating is a week BEFORE nightmare night.

[@MartianMoth2302]

This was a flashback. The caramel pot was a day before, this part was a week.

[@LittleWerewolfPlushie]

The more i listen the more the story grows. Very interesting.

[@leef2305]

soooo.... zombie.... ponies..... HELLS YEEEAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!!!

[@nonamenoname9322]

A spell to force vomiting, peeing , and pooping all at once... this 'cleansing spell' is what disturbs me.

[@kimberlyvoss9032]

I'm watching this at 3:00 am the witching hour...what am I doing with my life......

[@dizzydots4786]

I really just like the aesthetic, I do struggle with the slightly janky subtitles but with a bit of patience I can gather whats being said

[@DarkGhirahim]

"So please, do shut up" wow XD

[@unknownunicorn404]

"Your mouth is for eating, not crying. So please, do shut up." Why is that line so funny to me. 🤭

[@Latoos976]

Literally any child would be delighted to get fed a lot of candy in am experiment lol

[@missmadness564]

"i wish we could stay here forever!" you shouldn't have wished for that