Steven Universe: Rewritten

[@RoundtableVids]

What would you change about the story of Steven Universe? 🤔 4,000 LIKES ON THE VIDEO FOR EPISODE 2! BIG thanks to ArtwithKoda for providing the storyboards & thumbnail! Please give him a follow on the following platform: artwithkoda.tumblr.com/ instagram.com/artwithkoda/ kzbin.info/door/zNnvLLuJ7qhu1c9-_d5oKg

[@AM-jh8ug]

You did an awesome job explaining all this thus far!

[@Jdmenendez22]

Suggestion: you should've called this series Steven Universe Rescored or Polished Shining

[@goawayplease6456]

I want the diamonds to let the zoo humans go to earth

[@KHsupergeek]

Everything. Scrap the entire show and start over from scratch with ACTUAL good storytelling, no vauge hints of character development and story plots, and make Rose an ACTUAL character instead of making her Pink Diamomd. She'll still be around but stays as Pink when the revolution started and be the leader of the Crystal Gems, or maybe she travles the rest of earth to really satisfy her love of the planet.

[@foxtatertot]

I would have Opal appear more.

[@LostSwiftpaw]

We're giving Vox too much power. He'll eventually rewrite the whole universe.

[@goawayplease6456]

Haha

[@Purpie_Slurpie]

would that really be a bad thing? lol

[@r00b27]

Oh no,

[@tacomayre5110]

L E T H I M

[@catliker888]

;0

[@JustinY.]

Looks like Steven Universe got the Full Metal Alchemist Brotherhood treatment in the thumbnail

[@Just_Plague]

👌

[@OvvovvO]

Yo, I haven't seen you in awhile, nice to see once more👀 (Btw, you should watch Joana Ceddia, shes really f u n n y)

[@themaxatator2211]

Me: Justin Y!!! Also Me: Hm Ok...

[@ferretman40]

Steven will forever be in the brother zone

[@stickthelanding4785]

Vhat do du mean

[@benoitdot3756]

14:45 "Amethyst shiftshapes" Getting a little jumbled up there huh Vox

[@ImGonnaBeAStarr11]

gaskeep, girlight, gateboss.

[@SorbetAuxFramboises]

True to Steven Universe, there is a more-than-6-months hiatus between episodes.

[@unitds27-delta]

More like 1 whole f***ing YEAR

[@kathleenpfeiffer5016]

It's been legit over year.

[@ex0tickyber558]

Yeah

[@minorvibesandNUKES]

@@kathleenpfeiffer5016 indeed

[@minorvibesandNUKES]

@@unitds27-delta yep

[@NickNitro]

Enjoyed the heck out of this, personally I like the use of the characters in more main story episodes. keep it up vox!

[@Jayd0993]

Hey Nick,I’ve been listening to your undertale nitro remixes and they are excellent

[@anonymous-rv2mq]

Oh hi nick nitro

[@Dian_Valencia]

Nick. We got undertale remixes. When's the Steven Universe remixes?

[@ALEXABC1989]

Same

[@valyntine666]

Last time I was this early Steven was stress free

[@sergiubleoca9917]

@JC [Ridley] It sounds great!

[@j0sh_u_a892]

12 years ago-

[@keishaj1977]

@JC [Ridley] don't remove filler completely, like if a major thing happens you'd want a breather. Just like escapism in Diamond Days. It brings anticipation.

[@jasperquartz4612]

You ruined a perfectly good Diamond is what you did! Look at her, she's got Anxiety!!

[@paperplanespaperhearts]

JC [Ridley] don’t remove much filler, for it brings important points and helps the plot.

[@lapislazuli250]

A Steven Universe Fan-fiction without incest, uncomfortable and forced romantic scenes, and even its very well narrated? Oh ma' Cookie Cat!

[@Mr_Mimestamp]

I’d wait until episode 3 to see if there’s any incest.

[@spacecest.slimes9944]

What stories have u read that involve incest?

[@j0sh_u_a892]

Can there really be incest unless steven and Greg. You know. Or his uncle. Other than that i dont really see how that could be a thing-

[@cameoshadowness7757]

@@j0sh_u_a892 there are other families in SU.

[@FelipeSouza-gb7yf]

SU has more pedo fanfics than incest ones, Gravity Falls is the one with lots of incest lmao fandoms are the worst

[@myachi_art]

4k likes unlocks episode two! People who aren't signed into Gmail: *You don't have enough experience for this skill.*

[@jaydent4641]

True.

[@pineappleman1558]

I’m so jealous you got liked by the round table

[@myachi_art]

@@pineappleman1558 Well, making a witty comment will surely get you noticed next time. 😊

[@minebutter5241]

Creeper

[@rusticbb8]

@@minebutter5241 Awwww

[@Ella]

3 years later still want a part 2

[@DamariFergusonVids]

Yup.

[@breadbreadbreadbreadbreadbread]

Indeed

[@greencopper12]

Same

[@matthewcron8842]

I’m still waiting

[@breadbreadbreadbreadbreadbread]

@@matthewcron8842 Me too💀

[@stuff5757]

Rebecca Sugar:*Writes Steven Universe* Roundtable:It's rewind time

[@SliderGamer55]

Rewriting SU for me would basically end up being: 1. Have Steven not presented as 100% in the wrong when Connie got mad at him 2. Have a Bismuth episode where she somehow escapes the bubble in season 4, and has to confront her own anger before getting poofed again (maybe she tries to free corrupted gems and they poof her, i dunno), thus not having her instantly be a-ok with everything when she comes back in season 5. 3. Have the Homeworld White Diamond stuff be an entire season

[@ChespinCraft]

Idk, I feel like if Bismuth was unbubbled again it would make her appearance in Made of Honor much less satisfying.

[@VIIK.]

Ok I get the whole thing where diamond days was rushed, but *an entire season* dedicated to homeworld and white diamond seems a little much. Maybe if they built up white diamond more then maybe they could have had more episodes dedicated to homeworld.

[@KeepCalmContemplateYourChoices]

With White's part, I feel like it shouldn't have rushed, but I feel like a midseason arc would be fine. Like with the Peridot redemption arc.

[@preciousyoung357]

Good suggestions

[@atelierofwitchhat]

COMPLETELY AGREE with #3!!! The White Diamond stuff should have been an entire season!! From the moment we first hear about Yellow Diamond, then Blue Diamond, all the way up to the point where they FINALLY see eye-to-eye-that takes SEVERAL seasons. But White gets mentioned then defeated in like 3 or so episodes??? WTF?? She's supposed to be the final boss, the most difficult challenge yet, and yet it only takes a couple episodes to get there?? Gutted.

[@rulamantic]

_I want Vox to rewrite my school popularity_

[@araisdead]

ew...

[@Max-cr6vx]

Lieutenant he was joking... ew to you 🤢🤢

[@georgiacurtis-monro3488]

Stop being childish

[@Artizap_]

Georgia Curtis-Monro Shut up you use finger spaces while writing your comments.

[@m.yfazeli1577]

Haahhaha

[@perspicillazaplaza7737]

Love that the changes involve giving characters more screen time for development. It was what I always wished was more emphasized in the show.

[@DrawciaGleam02]

Same here! I'd do something similar!

[@phazer2439]

0:33 peri is so short and her hair is so big there and she’s on a farm that now we can officially call her a ranch dorito

[@neonkrypton]

Ocrap.

[@greenapple5255]

Underrated comment!

[@sicko033]

She’s pretty awesome too, so is she a cool ranch Dorito?

[@andistansbury4366]

boo

[@average-walrus-productions]

I think season 4 was made for more character development, introdecing new charatcers, and give certain characters more screen time, etc. and stuff like.

[@REMdonor]

art with koda has been improving like crazy

[@wyskoi]

i love your pfp

[@chancesassy7963]

henlo felo hamstack

[@wyskoi]

@@chancesassy7963 hemsteocc yisss

[@jasperquartz4612]

it looks really convincing.

[@CakeoftheMews]

This is such a breath of fresh air! Most of the time I see people "rewriting" something, ESPECIALLY with Steven Universe, it mostly just feels so aggressive, like they really are trying to "one-up" the actual writers. THIS, however, feels like a genuine love letter to the series. You love it, and have your own ideas about how certain elements should be. It's fun, it's creative, and more importantly it ISN'T attacking the creators. Stay positive, my dude

[@DrawciaGleam02]

Any examples of rewrites that "one-up" the writers? I'd like to read them!

[@poweroffriendship2.0]

*Overarching Storyline:* [appears in its existence] *Writers:* IT'S REWIND TIME!!!

[@Casterisks]

"next time" - Vox six months ago

[@raineermstuff]

I know, right?

[@onettaviator5396]

Nearly 7 now

[@axelbratz]

11 months ago now

[@farateq]

a year and six months (i think)

[@SenFandomsProductions]

almost 2 years now

[@a.bomkamp1821]

I really liked Peridot's older design with her limb enhancers, so seeing her find some and keep them permanently would've honestly been amazing.

[@charlieseely3464]

Either finding new ones, or going and finding/fixing her old ones would have been epic

[@Gattsu_the_struggler]

@@charlieseely3464I honestly like the idea of her finding them only to decide she’s moved on from needing them

[@charlieseely3464]

@@Gattsu_the_struggler that would be a pretty awesome character moment.

[@silliestcreature]

This is really great! Adding Peridot, Connie and Lapis to the Zoo arc really made them feel like more than side characters, and I was always disappointed about how they said they would go back for the Rubies but never did. I can't wait to see an episode 2 of this!

[@coreytaylor8151]

"Go back for... but never did" Steven for the Rubies or Ash for Pidgeot and Primeape or James for Cacnea?

[@ALEXABC1989]

Me too tbh I’d pay money to see this as an actual like rerun of the entirety of season 4

[@jacobripley3926]

Yeah I think that Connie, peridot and Lapis could have been even more help because Steven and the Gems could use some backup because when Steven and the Gems went to the Human Zoo they barely escape.

[@theclods5643]

Wait, wouldn't Connie die during hyper space? I'm pretty sure that Pearl or Garnet said something about being worried for Steven cause he's organic.

[@FelipeSouza-gb7yf]

That entire thing happened because Steven messed up with the ship, with Peridot there this wouldn't have happened.

[@bouncindoughnut5636]

plus if lars can handle it in the fastest ship of emeralds fleet (even tho he was revived) connie should be the same

[@BM-ts1yi]

PINK CONNIE!!!! (Like lars/lion)

[@DJIsDumb]

@@bouncindoughnut5636 no, remember, he says the ship is still messed up

[@emeraldsky2823]

Steven’s body is physical obviously, and his body could handle it, he just had some restraint when trying to move. It doesn’t matter if he’s half gem, he has a human body and from that we can deduce that Connie would be fine unless she isn’t in a seat, she’d just fall back onto the wall

[@BluffsCastle]

I would make it so that Steven isn't in every episode and scene so that we could get other's POV

[@civil-.7407]

Cartoon Trash Productions we actually have a couple episodes like this.

[@roar_roar_rorafex]

That's why it's called Steven Universe.

[@bluefilmsbt6094]

I used to think like this but Steven Universe wouldn’t be Steven Universe trust me

[@cbsyll]

@@bluefilmsbt6094 I still dont think this means it's a good way to tell the story tho. Many things would've been fleshed out and such If we didnt have to wait for steven to get there. Shows like adventure time and svtfoe are good BECAUSE of how expansive the universe is, and having more than one point of view is part of the reason why imo. I do see what you guys mean though.

[@tobiasbayer4866]

@@civil-.7407 Name one example.

[@vish5942]

yo why can't i find part 2? didn't he have plans they reached the like goal

[@gregroitbourd]

i was abouta say

[@YourLocalMyrmecophile]

Well, he HAS lied waaaaay too much before so I'm not that surprised but I sure am DISAPPOINTED >:(

[@gregroitbourd]

DBZ_ Meif'wa LMAOOOOOO

[@zero-gravity5927]

Well he said something like he MAY continue this as the series has ended

[@djsilly9964]

Vox doesnt know how to keep promises, sorry.

[@mizstinkie]

I love that the show changed from Magic to Sci-fi it feels like we’re living through Steven. Going from believing that the gems were this do no evil group of goddesses to finding out the secrets that lie behind it. Once suprised settled it felt great😭

[@kirstyshadowdancer5095]

Honest the first 20 eps of Steven U felt disconnected from the rest of the series. The gems started off more magical than scifi. I wish they'd kept Magic based Tech in the brief.

[@fayev1360]

Its kinda the whole 'Steven's Perspective' thing. He kinda had no idea that the gems where aliens the whole first season (and the magical girl references started becoming less frequent)

[@boneshatter9979]

Yes, blending magic and sci-fi can turn into some cool ass stories! Ive seen theory's and such that come out of this show that get bat down immediately with the whole "oh there is no magic it was all tech" and I'm like, if you look they has been and STILL IS MAGIC!!!! Sure, they kinda go away from it but that doesn't mean that it doesn't still exist and it kinda suck it just got dropped. Most of the gems powers are still magic for example, that's not tech that's doing weird things to manipulate the environment around them, that is magic generated from their gems stones!!!! Well, anyway I would have love if they kept magic more :(

[@corposap]

@@fayev1360 Yeah the gems become less magical from Steven's point of view both in terms of "magic is sufficiently advanced technology" as he learns more about their powers and nature, but they also become less magical in terms of "enchanting" as he finds out their dirty history. It's a good, thematic progression.

[@fayev1360]

@@boneshatter9979 "Any sufficiently advanced technology is indistinguishable from magic" - Arthur C Clarke. Really all the magic the gems do have scientific explanations. They are beings of light and are able to create and manipulate that light. Their gem weapons are hard-light constructs (just like their physical forms).

[@kirstyshadowdancer5095]

@@fayev1360 The reverse is also true. Any sufficiently advanced form of magic is indistiguishable from science. - Ben Aaraonivich 1988 is the earliest version of this phrase I know of.

[@anthony-lm1yv]

Roundtable: How many more Steven universe episodes you want? Us: *yes*

[@mileslugo6430]

I think a crying pink murial would be too on the nose, but pink zumans would be tasty foreshadowing

[@surytheworst805]

you genius

[@claireglover1391]

Yeah a zooman that is really tall and like lar’s a pink man/woman

[@GreenGhostGuy]

5:11 Steven: do you know pink diamond? Peridot: bro I was born in era 2 so yea 😬

[@ciscojacobo7168]

Makes me wonder why Steven never asked Lapis about Pink Diamond. Even though she served Blue Diamond 🔷️, she must've had some information about Pink Diamond.

[@dav1d_the_human]

Yes i always wanted Pearl to wear her space suit in the zoo instead of obviously showing her Crystal Gem star. it was such a missed opportunity in the first place

[@thesandguardianofthesand]

It makes more sense

[@8bitty192]

Like wow pearl That’s very stupid

[@dav1d_the_human]

Yup

[@freedomdude5420]

I think they made the biggest mistake. 🤦🏻‍♂️

[@pinkbubblesnake]

That cool scene in adventures in light distortion probably wouldn't happen with peri on board, as she would know how to callibrate the ship properly

[@officaldaelight]

Kinda assuming that Steven and/or Connie accidentally pushed some buttons and Peridot was about to callibrate the ship but is knocked off with the other gems. That moment with Steven's breakdown is still kinda crucial~

[@sthp5925]

"Why do you think steven universe is a good show?" Me: Yes

[@user-ki4yt5dz5s]

"Is Steven universe a good show? Me: Yes but actually no

[@sthp5925]

@@user-ki4yt5dz5s dont you mean "well yes but actually yes"

[@Ironysandwich]

@@user-ki4yt5dz5s Yes...ish

[@shirochii]

"Is Steven Universe good?" *Yesn't*

[@kawaiipanda6850]

@STHP YT I think you meant "well yes but actually yes but actually no."

[@First_LastName]

“Let’s save that for next time!” Many months later...

[@ValeskaTAdams]

At first I was unsure if I would like it but after hearing what was had to be offered was actually waaay better than I expected and I began to love these new changes and would really love to see this becoming a Comic Dub series! 🤩

[@pinkbubblesnake]

My least favourite bits about the show are the lack of consistent development on Lapis, and that Connie Steven fight and Connie on homeworld

[@King_Jab]

I really started to hate lapis because of how back and forth her character went with development.

[@riokamishiroakameragkastle3077]

My least favorite bit is the show refusing to grow Steven up and use Zach's normal voice.

[@REMdonor]

rip peri's limb enhancers

[@br3qnn]

Her limb enhancers will be missed

[@snovaspectre2]

I still dont get why lapis cant search for them lol

[@M.T_Void]

Him: IF we can get 4k likes on this... IF... IF... Us: were about to START this whole buttons career.

[@Brosethorns]

Why did we never get episode 2? It’s not too late, vox! I’d still watch it!!

[@Chris-kringle]

4years later and still waiting for the next part😢

[@spritemon98]

This is why fanfiction exists 😅

[@IanERoco]

Ikr

[@hysodz7730]

Spritemon 98 in that sense its mostly fiction and it could very commonly be an exxagerated story which is mostly based on the same storyline only adding up for more of whatever exxagerated thing they can really add, compared to this video being a recommendation for what would they do based on the show without changing the characters and much of the show.

[@tilenmuhic1434]

lol but i did find 1 big plothole.... stevonnie is way stronger than those amethysts

[@spritemon98]

@@tilenmuhic1434 how?

[@spritemon98]

@@hysodz7730 what you described is fanfiction

[@DemonicCylo555]

13:11 is a must do!! Peridot getting her stuff back will be amazing!! Oh gosh so cool!

[@poke5082]

Vox:see you in the next episode Me: it’s been 84 years

[@CallofDutyCat1]

Poke ! Did he make a part two? I can’t find it.

[@poke5082]

Nope he still hasn’t

[@ciscojacobo7168]

Even though that this video may never get a part 2, I think I can tribute by giving out some ideas of my own. The New Crystal Gems: This episode would also be a half-hour long episode since I would include more characters. Two of them would be the Rubies (Leggy and Dot), and the other two would be gems in bubbles who weren't corrupted (mostly because they were poofed and bubbled before the blasted). The two gems would be a Jade and an Amber.

[@emanuelrojas2]

I think the rewrite was pretty great for most part, we needed more stuff with Pink Diamond, Peridot, Lapis, and Jasper and I say you did well.

[@Adventuregirl1985]

I am LOVING all of these tv rewrites so far. I really enjoyed the altered ending of Star vs the forces of evil, which did a much better job at giving a proper ending to the show. Your rewrites have fixed all of my problems so far, and I'd really like you to more of these.

[@noelle3780]

Okay, this reminds me: Bucky should have become mayor. It's so small and so pointless and a theory that Vox gave _so_ long ago, but I was so pissed that the episode called "Dewey wins" didn't feature a Dewey actually WINNING.

[@shutupberdly]

"Dewy Frickin Loses"

[@gummysnacksandknives9229]

It was a reference to an american election when the newspaper reported the wrong person won when he actually lost

[@dawnofchr0matica.]

I personally prefer The Pizza's Mother/Grandmother. I think his dad has feelings for me..

[@TantrumCouture]

20:50 chile you got me so excited for a couple of seconds I thought we were gonna see Peri and lapis fuse, I literally screeched

[@erin4364]

I was kind of hoping instead of the uncomfortable moment where everyone fights over Greg I would've made it to where Steven's side of Stevonnie's earrings lights up and then Connie's side lights up choosening them and yeah

[@mahimultiverse6792]

Actually I would have it like this- Steven and Connie Unfuse and Greg says Steven will decide and Steven Chooses J10 and everyone is happy and the joy is so loud That Lapis and Peridot come up with a plan and Amethyst is called and sneak them out and into the ship,meanwhile Pearl, Ruby and Sapphire run behind Holly's back, she finds out Pearl and Steven Intimidate her and they go back home.

[@ciscojacobo7168]

​@@mahimultiverse6792 I would've played this episode differently. In the Zoo episode, there is someone named K-10 (almost sounding like Caitlin), and she's unlike the rest of the Zoomen. She's more curious and active. She even leaves with Steven and the rest back to Earth to explore more.

[@emilythetigerneko]

This is the kind of content I needed oh my gosh!!! I do have to say I never thought of writing in Jasper that way in her monster form. I doubt it would have been easy for Steven to handle at first with her just considering him Rose, but I like your spin! Also, all the things with Connie, Lapis, and Peridot. Dude, those three give me life! I definitely love the Stevonnie bits added to the Zooman arc as well, and just the thought of the Zoomans interacting with them makes me grin! Sorry for the ramble. I really love this, and can't wait to see Part 2!

[@ventusxzephyr13]

I would rewrite the story so that Ruby and Sapphire say, "I love you" to each other and we see more of them as a their own gems, not just as Garnet all the time (like, maybe have them separate naturally doing their own thing without it being triggered by conflict. You know, seeing two people beyond just a relationship) It can't just be me that wants to see Steven interacting with his mom's without him acting as an emotional support pillar.

[@solomoyo8026]

that actually happened in the episode “together forever”

[@JasTheMansmells]

steven universe futuuuuurrreeee

[@tomcollins7672]

I'm excited to see where this series goes; there was a lot of stuff that I agreed with on the video. Love the channel man.

[@mothercosma3023]

You didn’t put down the episode two yet 😭 I’ve been waiting so long

[@lucasg.9319]

Dude, this is so good, please make part 2

[@skitty5598]

Thank you so much for this i really enjoyed hearing a cleaned up version of this arc! please keep up the amazing work Vox! :)

[@somethingbanter]

pink Steven makes sense. for him to exist, the physical form of pink diamond would have to be so intricately woven into his cellular structure, making it so complicated that the pure light form on its own is complex enough to mimic human anatomy perfectly. and this complexity causes it to even emulate the brain, giving the light form it's own control that usually the gemstone would have. so no, pink can't control her own physical form, it's controlling itself. hopefully you understand?

[@GumSkyloard]

So, it's just Steven's REAL gem half, with Flesh Steven being Steven's REAL flesh half, with them eventually refusing into Steven.

[@yourmother__]

Steven is a fusion

[@galaxyforever70367]

So basically, once Steven dies, Pink won’t reform

[@GumSkyloard]

@@galaxyforever70367 If Steven dies, the gem will die.

[@galaxyforever70367]

Gum Skyloard how? The gem itself isn’t a organic being. It was active for millennia before, and 16 years will cause it to die?

[@haruko3490]

What if corrupted jasper walked over into pinks palenquin and fell asleep and then garnet poofed her so jasper can finnaly feel at peace

[@AmeliaSegan]

So sweet and sad

[@jsheios4073]

We've gotten used to long hiatus's at this point, I can handle a year long hiatus. Yep. Definitely.

[@lonely_plumeriaflower8390]

I know this was like 3 years ago but, I honestly agree on your idea of the show being re-written in your way. And seeing Jasper as more than a villain is something i wish the writers would have done too. I honestly had wished the the writers and Rebecca would have given Jasper more screen time with just as she did with Lapiz and peridot.

[@leikomoon6897]

Honestly your changes are interesting! I can t wait to hear next episodes ^^. I love how you put jasper lapis and peridot more role ^^ it s very good and it makes more sense somehow ^^

[@larsandtheoffcolorsanimeto672]

Interesting rewrite on the Zoo arc, it would be really cool if Connie, Lapis, and Peridot came along with the Crystal Gems to the human zoo.

[@talonsofart]

We need an animator to animate these episodes *STAT*

[@Thatseikokin]

Steven:connie Pearl:lapis Amethyst:peridot Garnet:bismuth Lmao I would love this so much I wanna see them fuse

[@Martinxo51]

And who would be Rose?

[@kristal6658]

Who’s connie, is steven a gem or why is steven = connie???

[@theoneandonlyZef]

when you realise full humans and full gems can't fuse

[@goommooster7572]

The round table: Let’s get 4K Likes! Fans: **25K LIKES**

[@ShafiqYoutube81]

Noice

[@Dr.Create]

The round table: *doesn't make part 2 by 2021*

[@Martinxo51]

Almost 50K now

[@claireaquos6532]

I'm sorry, but in the zoo arc, you can't put Lapis here. Mostly because she's afraid to go back on homeworld at that time...

[@ChespinCraft]

Yeah, I feel like it would only work if Peridot pressured her into it or something, otherwise it would be really off-character.

[@beepyyy]

yeah but thats why it'd be good for her character development. i think you, me, and the whole fandom knows that she is criminally unfamiliar with the concept.

[@nataliaborys1554]

Unless both Steven and Peridot pressured her to come... which in turn would be off-character for them. Damnit.

[@StevenUniverseRomanian]

Claire Aquos That doesn’t mean she can’t bring herself to do it. Lapis’s been noticed of being able to overcome her fears at this point. I think Steven or Peridot would encourage her, telling her they are all gonna be by each other’s sides while being in HW’s hostile teritory. Peridot could reassure Lapis that there aren’t as many Gems taking care of the Zoo. I’d love to see her there because it’d bring a lot of tension in the Blue Diamond scene.

[@FelipeSouza-gb7yf]

Okay but the zoo isn't even in Homeworld? It's much closer to the Earth than Homeworld is

[@nyxvoidess]

This is fun and i like how you rewrite everything in a better way. I never got to see most episodes air at all and i didn't feel what most fans felt because i didn't get to see the full episodes on youtube without paying so i went for other people to provide clips at least so still never a full episode without missing parts. But your version from what i thought is better and more worth my time to see. 😌

[@kingjb554]

This was awesome, so much more please! You're ideas are too intriguing to be kept intact in that big head of yours

[@Dimonds456]

Loving this rewrite! A lot of the story makes a lot more sense and flows better when put this way. Thank you! Question: is Part 2 up yet? Not trying to rush, I just want to know. If not, take your time with it! Looking forward to its release :)

[@psychoticleverage3374]

You NEED to make this a series! I'm still waiting for parts and I watched this since it came out PLEEEAAAASSSSEEE!!!!!!!😢😢😢😢😢

[@zero-gravity5927]

@Psychotic leverage he said he probably will

[@Julayla]

I wouldn't mind a Steven Universe rewrite at all. I mean I'd do a Star vs reboot myself if I ever was in charge of the series (with less pandering and romantic plot tumors obviously)

[@GumChewGames]

We all need to think for a minute. Some of u might already know about this gem. Hope diamond. The diamond that is the most famous and most powerful diamond. It’s in a museum right now, because it has caused deaths to the owners. So hope diamond would be a great villain for su

[@skydragonslayer9820]

Hmmm yeah I guess so that'd be cool hahq

[@Ott3rpup]

Since Hope Diamond is a dark blue, what if she was a failed blue diamond who instead of being overly emotional, she cant feel anything?

[@nancy91286]

@Grace Boden isn't the hope diamond blue? Perhaps its like pink but blue WAIT this!must be the main Villon for the movie!

[@CrimesAgainstHuFranity]

And maybe the next conflict with her could be "What's the reason of life?* And with this, the only one who could help her is pink Steven. Because Pink Steven is dead, maybe It can help Hope Diamond for calming down and be like "No....calm down....nothing is the meaning of life..."

[@GumChewGames]

You guys, hope diamond would not be easy to redeem. More harder than white diamond. She would have the ultimate power, like killing/shattering a human/gem in a blink of an eye. When Steven finds out about hope diamond, yellow says “I’m afraid we can’t go with you. She is to... scary..” then blue saying “sorry Steven.” Then white says “good luck. You are going to need it.” Hope diamond will be the ultimate antagonist for Steven universe.

[@batatafrita2783]

5 years, no part 2

[@ciscojacobo7168]

Too bad I actually have some ideas of my own. I even include something for the Zoo Arc. In the episode, The Zoo, Stevonnie actually meets someone in the zoo named K-10, which later they pronounce as Kaitlyn. Unlike the others, she's more curious and wanted to leave the zoo to explore.

[@Tom-fi7xt]

Lowkey had a better time watching this than most of season 4

[@FelipeSouza-gb7yf]

season 4 sucks lmao

[@isaacharris8875]

I would love absolutely love seeing these episodes in real life or even if you create a story board abput it and or make it an animation. Just something to qennck (obviously dont know how to spell that) our thirst for steven universe. That will be all. As steven universe is an important thing to me and really gave me the courage to open up and accept that i was bi and many other things so seeing something like this just rewriting our favorite show as a community really stans out to me. So many puns in this comment

[@taykumori]

100k LIKES each video‼ WE GOT THIS ~

[@Mausika]

This was a really good rewrite and feels like more satisfying character development and continuity/flow compared to what the actual gave us show. Though I think Jasper being 'redeemed' in monster reunion might feel rushed in just an 11-minute episode due to her stubbornness and need for extra convincing, I could maybe see it being similar to the bismuth episode?

[@OutlyingFruit]

I realized this a while ago, but, you guys know when the Crystal Gems form got changed to the really small size in “Adventures In Light Distortion?” That was the size of *Pebbles.*

[@johnmobley9369]

I saw this last video

[@justjamminaround]

Pebbles can fly the ships??

[@OutlyingFruit]

JustJamminAround Maybe if they all work together they can

[@powerONdelta]

meanwhile: spinel waits in the garden...

[@charrmander32]

Everyone: *actually giving good ideas and some changes to a plot* Me: LaPiDoT FuSiOn?¿

[@SpaceWaveKitty]

Me: *clicks on video* Video: *STEVEN UNIVERSE-*

[@felobatirmoheb4884]

What?

[@SpaceWaveKitty]

@@felobatirmoheb4884 He was very loud and sudden in the intro, that's what I was referencing.

[@felobatirmoheb4884]

@@SpaceWaveKitty understood

[@leonardokalyn7756]

Come on Boss Sugar, we need this man on the team.

[@pepdelrey]

Who is still waiting for a part 2?

[@likimdvnbkr]

Man those ‘you should be a writer’ comments totally stroked his ego

[@GuyNamedLoffi]

💀how

[@yes3801]

Bro this is so awesome I’m so sad we didn’t get a part two 😭😭😭

[@kahlil2001]

GODDAMNIT A CLIFFHANGER I WAS REALLY GETTING INTO THE STORY ;-;

[@coreytaylor8151]

That's how you know it's good.

[@Rob-nf1xr]

And theres still no part 2

[@springsgarden]

0:01 a popaler show

[@ipostmemessometimes801]

Bruh I've have been waiting for 6 months and still no part 2 rip

[@segapop469]

This is amazing, I know it's probably never going to happen but I would love to see this animated into an actual fan episode

[@danielmarmolejo19]

That cliffhanger at the end doesn’t matter if you don’t make a part 2

[@Crissybaby]

What if in “The Zoo” the lady speaking from the earrings could be Rose aka Pink Diamond? Because PD loved humans so much and didn’t want none of them hurt from the actions happening on earth. And the Diamonds already put a handful in there. And blue wanted more humans in there to remember pink because pink loved humans. Maybe after PD gave birth to Steven, she went back to the zoo to have the actions of “Rose” on earth to later die down so everything will go right. However, they don’t. This is my theory and I also like your rewrites! Your doing a great job and it’s perfect! Thanks for listening!

[@theshamanite]

So good. 1/5 people are liking though; Let's make it 1/4.

[@theshamanite]

@@matrixgtav1876 I actually haven't checked the likes count since first seeing it. I'll update the ratio soon.

[@theeveryonechannel101]

*I love The Jasper part. I wish that would have happened-* "Im a hardcore Jasper fan-"

[@BoberTee]

Introducing my new totally original show: Sorta Cool-iverse

[@m1grand559]

4:20 this is when the video BEGINS

[@riokamishiroakameragkastle3077]

The only thing I'm gonna change is Steven's Birthday to which the plot point Steven must decide to stay a kid forever or grow up normally and it ends with Steven keeping his tween form. The rest of the episodes(now with his new tween default form) can go as usual even with the Vox rewrites. Although I'm gonna add new powers for Steven as the episodes goes on maybe in "Scavenge Hunt" or add in my own episodes involving discovering his new offensive yet pacifistic powers.

[@shinvoldemort5852]

Ah s**t here we go again with your comments

[@solidsnape9557]

Why are you swooned by Zach's normal voice?

[@supernukey419]

But then he’ll have a neck!

[@dustinfernandez7922]

Love all of this, I kinda wish that's what actually occurred in the actual story lol

[@ssk.8619]

I love Steven Universe, this show gives me so much creativity and I've always wondered what SU would be like if it was more gore, horror kinda theme, I even rewrote it a while back and tweaked it a little not too long ago, Blue Diamond is one of my absolute favorites and I had many Inspo backgrounds that I thought fitted her perfectly For Example: I wanted Blue to be a mystical terror, like those in ancient folklore with some kind of serpent or threat deep in the ocean. I got that inspo from a CHILDREN'S MOVIE (Ponyo by Studio Ghibli), the one scene where Granmamare was scene floating on her back in the ocean. A couple twists and change of setting/mood and she could turn into a horrifying monster floating on the ocean floor/surface. I imagined blue with big sharp psychopathic eyes that she opens rarely (Inspo from Ballora, FNAF) and a screeching laugh. I also took Inspo from that one scene in SU with malachite in chains, so instead of malachite being in chains on the ocean floor it was Blue. ALSO (one more thing) Blue can be such a cinnamon roll, she is amazing and I think it would great to see that side of her in the show..but I believe that the redemption arc is something I don't see fitting. She was a mass murderer who inflicted pain on others and I don't think it would be very easy for her to relieve that traumatic experience in just a few episodes. So instead, I decided that Blue would lose her sanity and well being after the loss of Pink Diamond, (which is kinda fitting since her powers revolve on emotion and psychological control..) tell me what you think I think this version seems kinda cool :"D

[@Ohyumuddies]

I love how he is playing Ruby Rider in the background 😂

[@khalinmayor6568]

It has been 2 years. 2 YEARS!!! i've been hoping and waiting for episode 2 of this cause i really like the way u rewrite steven universe. It's brings out my fav characters that weren't focused in the original story.😭❤❤❤

[@WeatherReportsHat]

It has been a year, I will continue my wait.