I'm a lonely old lady, lost most of my family so for me this is my highlight for the day. Thank you
@mandyboozan4 ай бұрын
If you ever need a friend to talk to, I too enjoy these stories
@SageReacher-ot8bu4 ай бұрын
❤ I like these stories just as much as the next person BUT this one is practically identical to another one the only exception is the other one is a guy and his wife instead of a gay couple it's the same Punch to the face the same deer collision same revenge plot... Ps. I can only imagine how hard it is coming up with ideas for these stories can be at times BUT having a story that's almost identical to another doesn't really feel like your really trying hard to come Up with a new one....😅 The first story wasn't half bad even though it was a almost copy of another....🤔
@jenniferspoon51434 ай бұрын
You have this community as your family. You only need to post a need for conversation and I believe with all my heart that someone will see and offer companionship. I have recently had a stroke and I'm temporarily bedbound so I get it. I am usually on Dr Plague's channel, just post a need for companionship and know I will come runnin when I see it. Or any other fan will offer conversation.
@jefferyhill49324 ай бұрын
@@jenniferspoon5143 I agree, and am here as well if you ever need an ear.
@BOMBPOP-n4i4 ай бұрын
@@mindyyounker2184 I'm with you on that, my family has either passed away or abandoned me so I know about loneliness, no parents so left as I feel an orphan so these stories are my highlight as well, much Love dear
@RashadHoward-dg3dg4 ай бұрын
“ meet me at a hotel at 8”.. sounds like Jake just wanted to do the monster mash with him
@jeffjames40644 ай бұрын
I like where this is heading... Is that wrong?😅
@RashadHoward-dg3dg4 ай бұрын
@@jeffjames4064 lmao
@RashadHoward-dg3dg4 ай бұрын
@@jeffjames4064 I mean hm dudes can say they banged a supernatural creature
@arlesthegreat4 ай бұрын
Help step-monster I’m stuck!
@nemesisastraea66594 ай бұрын
My thoughts exactly
@CLCinflorida4 ай бұрын
Fantastic Writing, awesome Story, Love the deer revenge ❤👏👏👏👍
@markbirchette87404 ай бұрын
I hpoe to be here today, dealing with a brother's death is never easy. Thanks Jordan, the stories help so very much, and all the great people in chat too!🙏🇺🇲🦅🥃
@mariahoekstra3704 ай бұрын
✝️Our most heartfelt sympathy goes out to you. We are here to listen if 🐑 need to vent or just know we are sending long hugs.
@claudekidder72804 ай бұрын
You have my sympathy and condolences.
@BOMBPOP-n4i4 ай бұрын
I know u don't know me but we share in a sadness that only those that have lost a brother would relate to...I too have lost my brother Sgt. David Backus, he was my best friend and it's a heartbreak truly undescribable, we don't have memories, memories have us...but I promise u that the same memories that make you sad will in time bring a smile to your face because of the fact u shared time that noone can ever take from u, forever in your soul... take care
@aggromando73234 ай бұрын
We’re all a a community here and you have our deepest sympathy. I’m so sorry for your loss.
@michellej78314 ай бұрын
Aw I'm so sorry. I wish you strength and lots of support in your terrible time of grief. I hope the stories help to give you space from your grief.x
@froginprogress85104 ай бұрын
Jake sounds like an odd... creature... Fae? As soon as "anything" was spoken, you know it goes sideways.
@TrevorCunningham-wl1jx3 ай бұрын
It's possibly a mix between like a demon and a ghoul the waves able to survive being gutted and Deals as in deals with the Devil and using Fire based attacks reminds me even more of demons or Jake could be a manifestation of fear by the people who have died by the Cryptids sound like a concentration of negative energy kind of like how negative and negative to make a positive
@ToasterToastMan2 ай бұрын
@@TrevorCunningham-wl1jx Either or I'm simpin 🤣
@kxngthrone91064 ай бұрын
Narrator sounds like that one dude that lives in the lighthouse in the purge episode from rick and morty
@winstonwins10964 ай бұрын
Except people actually want to hear Jordan's stories.
@mojofier19094 ай бұрын
Oh I love that story with those 2 kids and the 'you're a girl?' monster hahha
@agathacamilladcruz49384 ай бұрын
Need a series of its own.
@Bluesit324 ай бұрын
Ah, ah. Wording matters. "Any THING" As in, one act. Jake cashed in her debt whether it was for their sake or not. Since she doesn't play fair, however, she was able to trick them into making a different deal.
@gunraptor3 ай бұрын
Theory about all of the eyes on the giant deer head: each one controls / empowers a separate undead deer.
@ZedMazaus4804 ай бұрын
These were some really fantastic stories. I'd love to hear more tales like these 2. Especially about Jake. Did she actually eat the older brother, or did she drag him off somewhere to start helping her do things to repay his debt.? So many questions and possible tales yet to be answered and heard. JAKE 2: Sigh... Damb it are you ever going to repay your debt? 😮😮😮
@Site13.3 ай бұрын
Or maybe they smashed
@ZedMazaus4803 ай бұрын
@@Site13. I'll ship that. LOL
@Site13.3 ай бұрын
@@ZedMazaus480 FR
@agathacamilladcruz49384 ай бұрын
Freaky and Fabulous! KUDOS to both Author & Narrator!
@malachigamingandtalk99704 ай бұрын
Omg it's jake from state farm
@Site13.3 ай бұрын
WAIT IT IS
@daniell14834 ай бұрын
I especially enjoyed the final story. I like Jake, based on what we saw here at least. I'm not sure why but I can't help but feel that if I were in her position in this story I would have made the same decisions. Since the narration mentions further possible stories including Jake, I hope we get to hear those soon. Maybe something like an origin story?
@earlgibson64923 ай бұрын
We need more stories with Jake!!
@CNinjaa4 ай бұрын
That truck driver was a deer 😠
@Tugoose4 ай бұрын
Been waiting for a long one. I just can’t handle the sub 20min stories
@EvelynWade-k6w4 ай бұрын
👍👍fantastically unsurpassed, both stories were thrilling and exciting. I loved and enjoyed them. Thanks Jordan. 😇💖
@GamerGod3534 ай бұрын
You sound like you are going to tell me you have aurora borealis entirely within your kitchen
@Site13.3 ай бұрын
Damb
@AmyHelenHughes4 ай бұрын
I have been waiting for this 🖤 best wishes, Jordan, from Scotland 🏴 🖤
@BeamMeTheFeckUpPlease4 ай бұрын
Which part of Scotland are you fae? I'm a Fifer unfortunately 😢, bloody dump.
@inthegloaming53184 ай бұрын
Loved the stories, hope the last one has more to it.
@jenniferspoon51434 ай бұрын
OOOO SNAP,! I just read the first story on Reddit about an hour ago.
@SpookyEchos3 ай бұрын
This sounds like it fits right into the Worstverse. Fun story
@sirbig82922 ай бұрын
"Those aren't Wendigos" wasn't what I was expecting, but it was pretty entertaining in its own way. I'd watch the Jake anime.
@claudekidder72804 ай бұрын
Great story Jordan. Thanks for this one.
@PhilieBlunt6664 ай бұрын
Hes treating his poor brother like hes 4 not 13...
@1ronw1ll784 ай бұрын
He's like a huge bag of anxiety about to explode.
@PhilieBlunt6664 ай бұрын
@@1ronw1ll78 Oh most definitely my dude!!!
@naji_aka_Tracey4 ай бұрын
These were great stories 👍🏻
@lindaarrington93974 ай бұрын
Just starting Tnx dude😊❤❤
@mikek28244 ай бұрын
One thing that would make these stories better is different voices for each character!
@Dumpsterfiregrace4 ай бұрын
3:25 oh this relationship is off to a great start ...
@OveltineJenkins4 ай бұрын
Two stories in one. Sounds like we got the deal not Jake
@jakethegoat10284 ай бұрын
Hey so the depiction for the wendigo is more like a starving human not a deer creature. I was wondering if anyone had the actual correct name for the deer creature. I think it starts with a C in the name I could be wrong. If anyone can tell me the name or if I am thinking of a different creature all together please lettering me know.
@Samagryn4 ай бұрын
To my knowledge, the closest thing to that depiction is a wechuga. There's not really a proper 1 to 1 with the pop culture wendigo (the deer thing), as they've taken multiple myths and sorta twisted them together.
@AnomalyINC4 ай бұрын
You might be thinking of Cernunnos, the Celt god of the hunt. He's often depicted with antlers.
@greekstyle57884 ай бұрын
Oooooh sh*t i think I've heard this one before in a fever dream and couldnt ever find it again ❤
@chipdipleraka73433 ай бұрын
She’s worried that since his friends sell drugs they might start selling drugs out of the bathroom while at their wedding. Like what ?! Hah
@creepypastaarchiver30884 ай бұрын
I thought this entire story was gonna be based on the first story just extended due to more events transpiring but its multiple stories
@Shadowstar13114 ай бұрын
Happy Canada Day 🇨🇦 I knew as soon as he offered anything as a bargain, it was going to be bad. The only entity you should offer anything to is a benevolent deity like Christ, Buddha, Creator, Great Spirit, Aradia, Nature, Thoth/Hermes, or an Archangel. Anyone who represents wisdom, love, kindness, altruism, etc. Because anything you’re asked to do or give will be for your greater good as well as the greater good in general. Of course, with benevolent beings, you won’t always get what you ask for, because it’s a detriment to be able to have whatever you want whenever you want.
@mattcat06084 ай бұрын
Happy Canada Day from a fellow Canadian
@residentidiot96944 ай бұрын
Christ does not offer such faustian bargains and the other entities you mentioned are all different ranking demonic entities.
@Absolute_Goblin4 ай бұрын
Can't even get into it because so many minutes were wasted with drama. Idc about your relationship get to the skinwalkers ffs
@j0917DW4 ай бұрын
Good stuff
@WhitneyDahlin4 ай бұрын
I want more of Jake!!
@nathanc51084 ай бұрын
Same honestly
@XAntiHeroXDD4 ай бұрын
I need more of Jake, jeeze Louise
@flappy73734 ай бұрын
i feel like when jake asked the guy what he'd give her for saving him, if the guy said "i'll.. uh.. i'll make you my girlfriend!" to her, she would've blushed and accepted. i mean, why did she save him? why the weird rule about having to call her when she was right there anyways? because he was the only one with a cell phone, and she had a crush on him, obviously! she wanted to woo him with her awesome powers but she scared him instead. that's why she got so annoyed! clearly this is what part 2 will be about ;D
@ЕвгенийБикбов-т2з4 ай бұрын
Bro is down bad for monstrussy
@bournelucid4 ай бұрын
He should have said "ill give ya 20 bucks"
@JhadeSagrav3 ай бұрын
"She told me to meet her at a motel at night. Clearly this means something terrible and not what people usually want when they ask you to meet them at a motel at night." Bro, read the SIGNS! 😂😂😂
@flappy73733 ай бұрын
@@JhadeSagrav exactly!
@dollarsignmexican3 ай бұрын
Anyone have a link to the second story?
@andylipsco97834 ай бұрын
I don't do stories with abuse in them I'll pass every time
@Hy-Brasil4 ай бұрын
thanks for the heads up.
@1ronw1ll784 ай бұрын
Not many creepypastas without some type.. these are Horror stories not bedtime stories
@dirkz.duggitz15674 ай бұрын
@@1ronw1ll78little bit of both for me homie
@silverdrag0n_4 ай бұрын
@@1ronw1ll78 maybe they just don't like hearing about domestic abuse because it hits too close to home
@jeffjames40644 ай бұрын
Domestic violence, but with a satisfying ending.
@tinynekoking64883 ай бұрын
I feel weirdly attracted to jake 😂
@bluefirefoxowo4 ай бұрын
Honestly I'd help the dear at that point
@WilliamHewitt-mv3xe4 ай бұрын
IV the hight of respect for you taking care of your siblings your sincerely a good person may god bless your soal you seem like a really good person
@chillimack4 ай бұрын
Kill Bill III: Pain Deer.
@oh-hey-a-handle4 ай бұрын
Huh. Anyone else notice somethings just a little off with Jordans voice? Or is that just me? Like the tones flat when normally they would end on a lower note.
@aricchio72224 ай бұрын
I'm wondering what happened now damn IT.
@shakycameratheater4 ай бұрын
Are every one of these stories abusive relationships. At this point tell the authors to change hair color from blonde every now and then. So let's guess. Mr wife beater won't outrun the bi-peadal deer. At least this is a human narrator. Thanks for that. Yes I already know not to hit women. My family taught me that wisdom
@StephanieGaelan4 ай бұрын
Perhaps the author is female, women tend to seek to establish themselves as a victim while men tend to establish themselves as worthless for sympathy. So in a lot of these stories the guy is a recovering addict, fresh out of prison, or dumb. The girl is usually a victim of violence, has evil parents or just got cheated on.
@toast63754 ай бұрын
Yea lol, this is a good narrator though, he has plenty of non abuse stories including the majority of the stories he writes. There’s a playlist (my favourite series of his is hallows end)
@JeditHawkfury4 ай бұрын
Would love to hear more about Jake. She sounds kinda sexy.
@dravenbladesong14 ай бұрын
Follow up, please
@dantekinkade87654 ай бұрын
Jake is one of those things that is evil and horrible on every level, but because it comes in the form of a girl you just know people are going to like the horrible thing.
@JhadeSagrav3 ай бұрын
i mean, it also saves people (when it wants to). People tend to like that too.
@dantekinkade87653 ай бұрын
@@JhadeSagrav it does not save, it turns things into hosts and destroys them, it is a evil monster. idiots tend to support creatures like this and become food
@claydragon60554 ай бұрын
Did I miss something? Isn't the brother 13? The story treats him like he is a frigging baby it's kinda annoying. I mean shit the crap that i had already seen and been through by the time I was 13 was insane.
@JhadeSagrav3 ай бұрын
🥺 i'm sorry you went through trauma at such a young age. 🫂 About age in these stories, i've noticed sometimes writers are very bad at understanding developmental stages. 😄 I guess they don't remember what it was like to be that age. So you get 13 year olds that need babysitting like they're 10, or, like my biggest gripe in the Witcher series, a girl hitting puberty that talks like she's 7 years old. Not sure why that happens, but i just re-write the age in my head to match what the behavior shows and then continue enjoying the story. E. g. in the Witcher, i guess she just starts menstruating at 7 because fantasy.