How to Hook a Reader with Your Screenplay - The First 10 Pages Explained

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Chapters: 00:00 - Introduction to Starting your Screenplay 00:31 - The Importance of the First 10 Pages Explained 01:19 - Tone 03:52 - Character 06:42 - Setting 08:50 - Theme 11:39 - Stakes 13:45 - Deep Dive: Sideways 17:56 - Takeaways

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It's worth noting that the stakes aren't necessary in the first 10, but they can be very helpful....

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A Complete Audiovisual encyclopedia about the Art of Screenwriting. Like for the Art of an Opening Scene, to Hook the Audiences, Everything should happen in the First 10 Pages. Thousand Thanks StudioBinder for this Inspiring video.💯💯💯

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Superb work as always. I love your content. One of my favourite movies is Snatch. Everything done brilliantly in the first ten pages by Mr. Ritchie.

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00:00 🚀 Introduction: Writers grab attention with thrilling action, complex characters, and gripping plots in the first 10 pages. 0:32 📜 Importance of First 10 Pages: First 10 pages are crucial as they establish key story elements like tone, characters, setting, theme, and stakes. 1:20 🎭 Tone: Opening pages set the tone and genre of the film, priming the audience for what's to come. 3:52 🧑‍🤝‍🧑 Character: First 10 pages introduce primary characters, showcasing their essential qualities and motivations. 6:43 🏞 Setting: Setting is established early to give readers a sense of time and place, influencing the narrative. 8:50 🎭 Theme: First 10 pages often hint at the larger ideas and themes the movie will explore. 11:40 ⚖ Stakes: Stakes are introduced to answer the question: Why does any of this matter? 13:46 🔍 Deep Dive - "Sideways": Examines how the opening pages of the script establish characters, setting, tone, themes, and stakes. 17:57 💡 Takeaways: First 10 pages are crucial for establishing key story elements and getting the audience on board for the rest of the film.

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The examples you've shown were as exciting on paper as on film. A few others: Apocalypse Now, Inglourious Basterds, Dunkirk, The Witch, Donnie Brasco, Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan, Raiders of the Lost Ark, Silverado, Coraline, Henry V, The French Connection, Rocky III, The Killer, Battle: Los Angeles, Grand Prix title sequence, and of course most James Bond pre-title sequences.

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Great examples!

[@spinsandneedles]

@@StudioBinder Thanks. Again those scripts were wonderful that you've shown. I don't know how many pages went into the opening of Once Upon A Time In The West, but there was an opening which certainly hooked viewers in with the various characters, sights, and sounds.

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On the first five minutes of "The triangle of sadness" I knew it would be a masterpiece of cinema, that is a great example of a perfect opening

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The first 10 pages can truly make or break a screenplay's chances 🎬

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[@DavidBeaumont]

I'd have loved to see more examples of films where the first 10 pages were known to have helped make the difference between it getting picked up or not. I doubt anyone would have stopped reading a script by Monty Python, at the height of their fame, if the first 10 pages didn't wow them. Same for a Disney film where the script was likely written at the direct request of the studio. Were any of the examples breakthrough projects for young screen writers for example?

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[@SuuSinator]

Thanks for your videos (and software)! I think "Lawrence of Arabia" definitly has one of the best opening pages.

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One of the best for a reason 👌

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Loved this. Writing a screenplay now and I was unsure about the opening scene. This video got me thinking about it differently. :) Also, very good to see American Fiction in this video. It was one of my absolute favorite films last year.

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From a technical standpoint, the film, *"In Bruges"* is a perfect movie. There is not one scene which doesn't propel either story or character development. The writing is sublime, the cinematography is stunning, the acting is pitch perfect. It is the perfect example in showing how something small and seemingly innocuous may seem inconsequential, can have vital importance in a later scene. "Cause and Effect." (SPOILER) For example, when Ken is at a booth paying the entry fee to access the tower, he empties his pockets of small change to be rid of his coins. He comes up short 10 cents only having €4.90 when entry is 5 Euros. The attendant sternly refuses entry to Ken several times regardless that it's only a 10 cent discrepancy. Ken's haggling with the attendant is futile, and is forced to break a fifty. At face value, we could chalk this up as just a small, light-hearted and humourous scene, as not another thought is given to the incident, that is...until the end. Ken, again at the top of the tower, bleeding from a gunshot wound, must warn his friend, Ray that his life is in danger; though Ray is at a cafe in the courtyard at the bottom of the tower. The threat is their former boss who after shooting Ken, is on his way down the tower to kill Ray. Ken knowing he can not walk down the flights of stairs in time to protect his friend he decides to jump from the tower-his suicide alerting Ray to the impending threat. Looking over the balcony, Ken is unable to see below due to a thick fog blanketing the courtyard. Not wanting a pedestrian below to be injured or foil his suicide, Ken pulls a fistful of coins from his pocket, and drops them over the balcony. The tinkling sound of the coins hitting the cobblestones below alerts the pedestrians below to steer clear. Then Ken jumps. Had Ken have been granted entry to the tower the first time, then he would not have had the coins in his pocket which eventually contributed in saving Ray's life. Cause and Effect. The "dum-dum" bullets are another example of how something that seems so frivolous can later be of such consequential magnitude. In Bruges is a perfect movie to study and to use as a blueprint for writing drama.

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Great example!

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This is always the hardest part when I write my scripts.

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At least you can get it over with first haha

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for a great script, there must be a great introduction.

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[@mainstay.]

So am I correct in thinking 'the first 10 pages' of a script corresponds to the first 10 minutes of a movie/show?

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[@clausvergara9702]

Maybe I cheating a bit, but the screenplays that I personally read is Casablanca, Butch Cassidy and Sundance Kid and The Banshee Of Inshierin has the hook in the first ten pages.

[@StudioBinder]

Those are great examples!

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Aye, shout out to Power Rangers the Movie at the end. The sky diving scene is burned into my brain since as a kid as being one of the most fun intros to an action movie lol I appreciate the deep cut references in your videos

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I know I watched this video when it first came out - hot off the press. I am not sure if I commented on it. The thing is, I love this one a little bit more. I hope second or third viewings don't hurt.

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I struggle so much with writing in general. I get in my head thinking I’m not good and that prevents me from even trying at times. Imposter syndrome, lack of confidence, lack of practice..a lot of things. But I do have stories, I have ideas…but they need a place in a script.

[@brain_respect_and_freedom]

Sometimes people don't follow this rule and we watched movies like for example "Elizabethtown" /2005/ or maybe SNOOZETOWN: "It’s fitting that the very first line of Elizabethtown, delivered by Orlando Bloom in voice over, is a line about collosal failure. The actual line is “As somebody once said, there’s a difference between a failure, and a fiasco.”

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Best ways to pitch a script

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They have videos about how big directors direct their actors

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Getting more deeper in how to direct non-actors/first time actors and how to avoid end result notes

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What about it would you like covered?

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Can you guys make a separate video series on how to review or analyze movies?

[@DidYouGetSniped]

This will definitely help me write my latest script! Nice Work.

[@michaelmkd8968]

Hi StudioBinder! How much screentime does 10 pages mean? Is it an average of like 15 minutes or a percentage relative to any story length?

[@StudioBinder]

Would be about 10 minutes. Scripts work at 1 page a minute

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@@StudioBinder ok thank you very much! I suppose the inciting incident is not usually included in those first minutes

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Blade Runner Opening scene is wonderful

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My favorite hook-me up movie from the start is Enemy at the gate

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Cars has one of the best openings, in my opinion

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Man, Sound of Metal is so good

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Could you share the aspecto ratio of this video?

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16:9

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I like the the intros (first 10 pages) of Kung Fu panda but particularly Kung Fu panda 2.

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I have a question. Let's say youre making a series or anime season. Should you establish that in the first episode?

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Scorsese - Goodfellas and The Irishman, Goodfellas in particular

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It would’ve been nice to get more examples of scene description, aside from dialogue.

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Where do people purchase screenplay/scripts!?!?!?

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@studiobinder Do you have a video that resembles Denis Velleneuve recent comments about letting the visuals tell the story, rather than dialogue heavy conversations/exposition?

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Not exactly instead of dialogue, but all of our cinematography/editing videos is about visual storytelling

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Hello. I present the hero and the villain of my story in the first page, but over time the story reveals that the character that seemed to be the hero is the villain and the character that seemed to be the villain is the hero. Shoud I reveal this slow burn realization in the log line? Thank you!

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Big twists don't need to be mentioned in a logline

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Please, re-do the thumbnail using a different typeface: reads like "First IO pages", which did not make sense to me for about five seconds :)

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I think Boogie Nights had the best opening 10 pages.

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Definitely a winner!

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Thanks for the suggestion!