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@MinervaRandom5 жыл бұрын
essay writing this weekend amirite
@anthonyhui13225 жыл бұрын
YES!
@ltctv33615 жыл бұрын
big fax
@keishon24434 жыл бұрын
Yktv
@edsradio58173 жыл бұрын
Can you review and edit my saqs for college, please (Preferably if your good with essay writing - leave an email please)1
@joshuawilliamson45744 жыл бұрын
Anyone from Class of 2021 that didn’t start yet
@LeilaLiT4 жыл бұрын
Now is a good time to start that’s why I’m here
@michaely96064 жыл бұрын
Lol already started out of excitement
@oliviabishop80524 жыл бұрын
Guilty
@georgioalba61434 жыл бұрын
im staring today omg
@MalakhiW4 жыл бұрын
yessssir
@nagisa26594 жыл бұрын
How to write a WOW college essay 1. It's impressive 4:04 2. You value excellence 5:03 3. Tell a story 5:58 4. Should reveal something good about you 6:45 5. Highlights qualities that show your awesomeness 8:30 6. It reveals your values 9:10 7. Shows a sense of vision 10:38 8. It captures the zeitgeist 12:12 9. The power of your intellect 13:33 10. It takes the reader on your journey and provokes empathy 14:54
@matthewkang87124 жыл бұрын
Thank you
@deanndrakaydee1234 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much!
@espenmarston10184 жыл бұрын
Not the hero we deserved, but the hero we needed.
@Yehe134 жыл бұрын
Thanks :3
@meteo55823 жыл бұрын
not all hero wear capes
@harrisoncentner68765 жыл бұрын
Senior stress season
@khaledalsafadi44483 жыл бұрын
yes indeed
@mattsmith29243 жыл бұрын
Starting now lol
@wc14143 жыл бұрын
@@shuddup3618 Yup that’s me haha. Good luck you got this !
@adls043 жыл бұрын
Ahhh
@harpermartin78132 жыл бұрын
Jesus is King! If you do not know Jesus as Savior please pray, “ Jesus save me. At this moment I choose to have faith that You gave Your life for me and rose from the dead. Doing this You defeated death, even though it meant You had to die. You surrendered Your life for me, so I chose to surrender my life to You. Forgive me Jesus, my God. Amen.” Jesus loves you so much. Please accept His love. I encourage you to read the Bible and pray. “For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only begotten Son into this world, that whoever believes that in him shall not perish but have eternal life.” John 3:16 🙏❤️🙏 Jesus is enough! Again I tell you, Jesus loves you!
@muhammadshakirshabbir5225 жыл бұрын
Good luck everyone! May u all get into ure top choice unis🙂
@veronicamieres57885 жыл бұрын
thank you! same to you :)
@nightxlight29685 жыл бұрын
Yo thank you for the wishes
@lozatajebe4694 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much. Seeing that the comment is 9 months old I hope u got in where u belong
@kayliejoye51584 жыл бұрын
did you?
@rainicornucopia92443 жыл бұрын
You too!
@azharvirani29794 жыл бұрын
Anyone else class of 2021?
@lighthousesniper1244 жыл бұрын
indeed
@edsradio58173 жыл бұрын
Can you review and edit my saqs for college, please (Preferably if your good with essay writing - leave an email please)1
@sct.803 жыл бұрын
I'm class of 2024😕
@isaiahdaniel1855 жыл бұрын
Perfect timing for these upcoming 5 days left...
@baberico14325 жыл бұрын
Me :')
@MultiCrazybunch5 жыл бұрын
Upcoming 6 hours left 😩
@amirasharif79694 жыл бұрын
@@MultiCrazybunch 5 hours left ;')
@emilygarcia52474 жыл бұрын
1 week left :(
@erikakeka1214 жыл бұрын
Mood😭
@giadinhbeo Жыл бұрын
My son was recently admitted to Top 30 NU. I did not read his essay in detail and I told him I was a little disappointed about his essay because his topic was sports (I read many blogs and they all said sport was bad idea). After watching this video, I might change my mind because his stat was not competitive. He wrote about the day I gave him a ball and said someday, we would play football together. For few years, he was among the best soccer players in the city and chosen for a national competition. Then, he had difficult time, failing and losing all motivations in life. It was his last game in the secondary school and we have family team (fathers, students) against other classes. After the game, he realized he did not need to become a superstar to be happy. The game reminded him about the first day he got a ball from me and he felt connection between us. Those helped him to stand up and motivated him to involve in community and to make impact. I changed my mind, maybe I should tell him about how much I was proud of him.
@Ohio_Boss6969 Жыл бұрын
This is a wow piece, Dad. Best wishes to you and your children.
@tanayapickering46054 жыл бұрын
Easy way I have found to begin an essay and get straight into it was using a personal anecdote. Tell a story about yourself briefly, could be one specific moment that caused you to introspect or great change etc. having this anecdote allowed me to branch off without getting off track and maintain a concise application
@lobnanagi1297 Жыл бұрын
Did you mean anecdote in the intro? Can you give as an example, please?
@paolanotpaula335 жыл бұрын
okay but how do i do that in 550-650 words
@Majestic4695 жыл бұрын
Have really good word economy. Don’t waste any space, be as efficient as possible
@c3po6125 жыл бұрын
Avoid tautology
@nataliyachepurnova295 жыл бұрын
“Wow” thank you so much for saying that you do not have to be wow to get into college. I have been stressing and stuck by thinking I have to make my essay perfect.
@poultryg3ist4 жыл бұрын
Three minutes in, and "wow" doesn't even sound like a real word anymore
@MalakhiW4 жыл бұрын
you aren't wrong
@thewrongtruth81295 жыл бұрын
I have been dying for last few months trying to write about myself
@keepingcool75105 жыл бұрын
Christopher Ramos tbh deadlines are on Friday and my common app is still pending. This video came at the right time
@wakmanazimi16435 жыл бұрын
Angela Wilson mine too. Still pending for essay :(
@Majestic4695 жыл бұрын
Angela Wilson LoL yep :)
@sidd82575 жыл бұрын
Christopher Ramos yeah the common app essay’s hitting hard. Months I’ve looked at my screen thinking of essay ideas to no avail. Let’s hope deadline pressure helps us all in a productive way!
@saharaaweys22955 жыл бұрын
@@sidd8257 same
@lauhityaaashwinkumar11 ай бұрын
this channel is really helpful, you have shared many valuable insights. thank you
@povhengyam33953 жыл бұрын
This is something that I do after I write my essay. I pull out all the keywords that she talked about and turn it into a rubric. When you read your essay try to check the box as many as you can. Good luck!
@tiraichbadfthr64545 жыл бұрын
watching this 4 hours before deadline
@talhadawood79313 жыл бұрын
I'm literally keeping this video on replay trying to keep reemphasizing the ideas in my mind cus they are are so many good points they get lost along the way in the writing process. Its SUPER important to keep looking back and stay on track.
@alwaysme_t5 жыл бұрын
Can you do a video about getting scholarships and more about financial aid and securing money for college?
@saharaaweys22955 жыл бұрын
Did u apply for fasfa
@sanjanashriram56095 жыл бұрын
When the due date is in two days and you're starting 🤪
@violetbeur66084 жыл бұрын
did u get in??
@missguapa4 жыл бұрын
you got in?
@lou_bet2 жыл бұрын
Did u get in 😭😭
@wurunsen23685 жыл бұрын
When the due date is in 6 days, and you still haven’t finished yet
@ankitmehta49245 жыл бұрын
Due date for what? Which universities?
@kal-muzel8755 жыл бұрын
@@ankitmehta4924 early admission/action
@ezragrant87105 жыл бұрын
same but my dumbass forgot teacher recs existed and i haven’t even requested them. regular decision for me it is lol
@kayleeseifert34275 жыл бұрын
Ezra Grant you can submit your apps without recommendations and your teachers can add them later as long as you assign them too the common app
@ayushshah21035 жыл бұрын
@@ezragrant8710 ^^
@TheThekoopalings5 жыл бұрын
I’m just finishing up my personal statement but I stop and dropped after seeing you uploaded this video 😃
@harrisoncentner68765 жыл бұрын
Brooke, do you recommend we use a narrative type essay for the “Why this college?” essay too?
@Majestic4695 жыл бұрын
It’s not something you need, but yes definitely (from my experience watching supertutor TV)
@chayannesantiago64183 жыл бұрын
I think you gave various AWESOME advice!!!!! This is not an easy thing to really stand out and apply to college. You hit all the points I needed to hear, now I have a much clear direction!!!
@leslie63494 жыл бұрын
my college advisors wants it Friday, haven’t started... wish me luck! 😬
@yallreallybetestingmypatie99283 жыл бұрын
How'd it go?👀
@andrewblake29773 жыл бұрын
Absolutely love this video. For some weird reason i can understand every thing that she said.
@ryanchoi24155 жыл бұрын
These tips are brutally honest and so useful especially when mine due tomorrow for early action
@theexperimentalist37772 жыл бұрын
lol what?, how are you going to manage my man. well goodluck 🙄🙄
@rabayaakther86115 жыл бұрын
I think it’s the best video on essay writing
@addisabebe57942 жыл бұрын
such a great video. I will be using these tips for my college essay.
@GauravGRocks5 жыл бұрын
Already submitted most of my apps. Thanks for the advice though! 😊
@sheilaj64912 жыл бұрын
This is awesome. Thank you!
@mohanadahmed31175 жыл бұрын
Pls Make a video about "How to get a full ride scholarship ? "
@Surfing5664 жыл бұрын
Loads of people have videos on this just search it up!!
@mirriamkatenda17433 жыл бұрын
Great video and well explained👏👏 madam..I dunno why I was wasting ma tym on other channels 😤🤭...new subscriber here😍❤️
@kalebbradburn52984 жыл бұрын
For University Of Michigan's Math and Science Scholars, the prompt for the essay is "Personal Statement explaining why you believe you are well-suited for the MMSS program and how you hope to benefit from it." How do I go about writing this essay without being too cliche or too boring? Do you use a story for a personal statement? Any help would be really great!
@fuzzywhyyy9639 Жыл бұрын
It’s been 3 years. How did your application process go? What did you end up writing about?
@lidia33994 жыл бұрын
I love her videos, but always see a lot of haters in comments. Why???
@nataliyachepurnova295 жыл бұрын
Also, is it possible to ask you a question about my essay privately? I have an idea, but not sure if I need to narrow down my essay to a more specific topic.
@anthonyc43404 жыл бұрын
I’m starting today and I’m screwed
@wishIKnewHowToLove Жыл бұрын
you are awesome!!!!
@CP-ww1nj3 жыл бұрын
Brooke the BEST!
@nataliyachepurnova295 жыл бұрын
Very impactful video. Number 7 especially hit hard!
@deeptime55814 жыл бұрын
Excellent video on writing essays for admissions to a college.
@abbasmogul70395 жыл бұрын
I scored 1290 on the SAT 710 math + 580 English I'm an international student and I was wondering if I score well in my IELTS will it make up for my English score on the SAT? I plan to study mechanical engineering Please recommend some universities in my score bracket
@anijosheyy5 жыл бұрын
You could go to Penn state..if you're not seeking scholarship.
@abbasmogul70395 жыл бұрын
@@anijosheyy thanks for the info
@피터슨-j7b4 жыл бұрын
Hello teacher, I'm student korea so your video very good and thanks.
@michaeln.2383 Жыл бұрын
You need to show that you're a skilled problem solver who's going to change the world.
@selbiernepesova41325 жыл бұрын
Guys, I am an international student. And currently I'm working on my essay. It's about how I was miserable all the time moaning about my life. At that time there were happening lots of dreadful stuff. Diagnosed spine problems. My family was broke. And we did need to be frugal. And I was mournful and sometimes I wanted to commit suicide. But I overcome it by learning English, and that changed me. Because of English I stopped dwelling on problems around me and by the time they wore off. I discovered lot of things for myself as well. Learning gave me motivation to learn and do many other things. So now I am an upbeat person. So now I know Turkish. Also I am learning French. From English my multilingual way started. Now because of English I became better. What do you think about this essay?
@takeinventory78375 жыл бұрын
Sounds good dude. Best of luck!
@selbiernepesova41325 жыл бұрын
@@takeinventory7837 Really? Thanks for your response, I needed it.
@samleethepianoboy64825 жыл бұрын
Good concept, definitely. Just focus on the writing! ;)
@selbiernepesova41325 жыл бұрын
@@samleethepianoboy6482 Thanks dude. Your comment made my day!
@summerhana1104 жыл бұрын
class of 2021 with only two weeks left ;)))))))
@2320Jason5 жыл бұрын
Anyone taking the ACT tomorrow?
@markashton19423 жыл бұрын
I would love to see a video on the under qualified the ones whose schools didn’t at the time have them proper resources to accommodate that person, the schools didn’t offer any extra curricular activities other then Band or track and you had to compete for those limited spots aka a crappy public school system in a low income area.
@Majestic4695 жыл бұрын
Thank you for following up on my request Supertutor TV :)
@adls043 жыл бұрын
Class of 2022 where yall at?
@dedley90305 жыл бұрын
Those were very good tips, thank you!
@zg38694 жыл бұрын
i have no idea what to write about
@BestCollegeAid5 жыл бұрын
Great video!
@KillaKelzz4 жыл бұрын
I have a gpa of 4.3 and a 1130 sat, I need a wow essay 😔
@ndy89834 жыл бұрын
4.3 sis???? that’s so good
@Kayla2fly4624 жыл бұрын
4.3? You’re giving off pick me vibes 🙄
@ValerieShutack4 жыл бұрын
girl i felt that i have the same scores and the sat rlly bringing me down
@bunnyfood36464 жыл бұрын
Omg sameee
@Aiden-et5po4 жыл бұрын
My gpa is a 2.9 ur chillin
@mohammadali-jx8ic4 жыл бұрын
11:51 She meant it from her heart lmao. U can see shes done with life.
@musa29014 жыл бұрын
was just bout to comment this
@anmolagrawal53584 жыл бұрын
Extremely helpful video. I would definitely try to incorporate these elements and make them dance harmonically in my essay!
@wishIKnewHowToLove Жыл бұрын
they r only abstract before writing. but once u have an essay, watch this video again to check if u r on the right rack
@Justsomeone022 жыл бұрын
Is there any way to get our essays reviewed from you
@partymode15175 жыл бұрын
this is so helpful!!! I love this! Thx!!
@keishon24434 жыл бұрын
Appreciate you teach’
@mohammadali-jx8ic4 жыл бұрын
8:23 wholesome content alert!!!
@kellypalestrant82444 жыл бұрын
im not good at writing so I just wrote about the biggest hardship I went through in my life so it was really easy to write but I dont know if it was gonna enough lol
@celiartp99394 жыл бұрын
I was bullied as a kid, but I dont want to make the person reading my essay feel bad for me. This experience help me became who I am so it is important. How can I do it??
@TheLegend-mu6zg4 жыл бұрын
Try to make sure that it is clear that you have gotten past the bullying and that it is clear that you have grown as a person because of it. Make the focus be on the your growth rather than the bullying itself.
@beatriznascimento92133 жыл бұрын
How can I figure out what I have to offer the world?
@khizzerahmed25374 жыл бұрын
I'm writing an essay to get into college comp and I'm not the best at writing yo my stress has never felt like this before.
@elizabethdedeus51634 жыл бұрын
Thank you for this :)
@janellecorea43105 жыл бұрын
wait do we pick one of those points or do you recommend doing all those things in one essay?
@tsetenthakuri53634 жыл бұрын
watching it when my essay is due midnight................... Wish me luck .
@yallreallybetestingmypatie99283 жыл бұрын
How'd it go?!
@jennaspencer4604 жыл бұрын
Is it a bad idea to write about my diagnosis of High functioning autism and being bullied then depressed but I come out on the bright side by proving people wrong with three labels and upholding leadership positions and wanting to now major in early education and special education to help kids with severe special needs
@spicywaterr39305 жыл бұрын
Brooke I have an important question with essays... is it stupid or too cliché to write about sexuality in them?
@samanthacui47575 жыл бұрын
NathanRubin21 what about sexuality ??
@SupertutorTV5 жыл бұрын
If you are LGBTQ then that typically is life defining and worth discussing
@zohdkhan4395 жыл бұрын
For all my 4 UC personal insight questions, do you think that they all have to be narrative styled writing? Can I have only 2 be narrative style and the other 2 just be me looking back on things in the first person?
@mirsimtoverlani71603 жыл бұрын
Hello! Can you help me to write an essay with title "Science teaching and learning in school: implications for popular scientific communication.
@rheyafeghali74795 жыл бұрын
Is writing an essay related to MUN too cliche? Is it possible to stand out with it? Do lots of people write about it and how it changed them?
@VolFan1114 жыл бұрын
😬😬please tell me how this worked out if you did end up writing it
@nneomax93583 жыл бұрын
this is actually what i want to write about too did you ever write about MUN if so did you get into like your top schools with it?
@ukeera25492 жыл бұрын
Did it work?
@ukeera25492 жыл бұрын
@@nneomax9358 How did it go?
@nneomax93582 жыл бұрын
@@ukeera2549 perfectly got into schools like nyu,barnard,uni of rochester with that essay
@umanggarg60355 жыл бұрын
Can I write about my failure in my essay? And lesson learnt?
@ivi1225 жыл бұрын
umang garg it May not stand out bec so many ppl seem to be writing about the same thing
@jessicaskinner13635 жыл бұрын
Depends on what it is
@jessicaskinner13635 жыл бұрын
But yes
@faustsiftar7683 Жыл бұрын
Another way to rephrase #10 is "show, don't tell"
@sids77354 жыл бұрын
6:49 That quote hit kinda different ngl
@vishwakrishnan5 жыл бұрын
I just finished my essay, but I just don't feel it. It's a unique story but I would really appreciate it if someone can read it and give some advice. Thanks!
@ErinMacanze5 жыл бұрын
Vishwa Krishnan I would totally be down to do it if you want to
@azamatatabayev49915 жыл бұрын
Agree, have the same problem
@samanthacui47575 жыл бұрын
Vishwa Krishnan yo let’s read each other’s story
@notedna5 жыл бұрын
Vishwa Krishnan I’m down to give feedback and receive some!
@rimzaher81625 жыл бұрын
Im down, what if we do that! Let’s have each other’s instagram and create a group. Mine is @rimzaher I understand how lost we all feel and how some feedback would certainly help us! Comment down below your instagram user so i know who to add to the group ! Take care xx!!
@Addelorme205 жыл бұрын
my essay is told in a figurative voice-it’s like a motif almost
@samleethepianoboy64825 жыл бұрын
Lexi DeLorme risky, yet bold. I like it
@ahkim34 жыл бұрын
Did it work?
@jahnvisingh80624 жыл бұрын
what do i do when i screwed up my junior year?
@bagellover41023 жыл бұрын
Class of 2022?
@spysearice56955 жыл бұрын
Imagine being untouched by the hardships of reality
@raze69195 жыл бұрын
Hi! I'm from the UK, and I'm looking to apply to Colleges in the US? I'm currently in the American equivalent of Grade 9. I'd like to know if you have any advice or know anything about international students. To apply do I have to do the SAT? And what sorts Extracurriculars would you encourage? Because, in the UK. Extracurriculars aren't as important as in the US. Also, is it better to take the ACT or the SAT?or do I fake both?
@nightxlight29685 жыл бұрын
Yes you have to take SAT/ACTto apply. Do any extracurriculars you like or passionate to do never fake that
@mayarrr64154 жыл бұрын
Night X Light I’m from saudi arabia and I just got graduated, My highschool score is 99.6 can just do the IELTS test instead of the sat test because we don’t have it here but I would gladly do it because (I’m a nerd) but like were
@mayarrr64154 жыл бұрын
Where*
@khaledalsafadi44483 жыл бұрын
if I took the lyrics in nf new song clouds and put them in my essay would that work
@oliviasimon94883 жыл бұрын
taking attendance for class of 22
@jmenon60252 жыл бұрын
Hi, can I email you my essay so that you can check it?
@david-liorusa64223 жыл бұрын
Is there a form to respect ? intro, arguments...
@mdv98313 жыл бұрын
Any of my comrades from the class of 2022 here?
@kimanipanthier10985 жыл бұрын
So timely Brooke!
@Cybergirl3 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@2RFC25 жыл бұрын
Im peer tutoring president in my school!is it helpful for college admission?
@RedDotPink3 жыл бұрын
11:51 Oop gotta rethink on that one.
@spysearice56955 жыл бұрын
Is it recommended to keep pessimism to a minimum? or does that count as pouring my heart out into my essay?
@cristinasullivan10264 жыл бұрын
Sorry no one answered you but it should end with a warm and fuzzy feeling or why higher education will give you a ticket to better life
@derek77625 жыл бұрын
What if I'm already downtrodden?
@prod.dejavu73723 жыл бұрын
haven't started an it due today :(
@tencelTechnologist3 жыл бұрын
When the due date is literally tomorrow
@sidlalwani59263 жыл бұрын
lmaoo yup
@Keith_Furtado3 жыл бұрын
So, me
@shlokmalpani31573 жыл бұрын
@@sidlalwani5926 indian
@Fortheloveofcosplay-wl6ox4 жыл бұрын
Question i want to be a Linguistics major would it be a good idea for me to start off by saying hello in 4 different languages (that i know) for a wow factor i really want to know because i wasnt sure if is a good idea
@atrivyas85123 жыл бұрын
What did you do and did it work out?
@Fortheloveofcosplay-wl6ox3 жыл бұрын
@@atrivyas8512 it was a good idea i actually got into all my colleges because of me knowing more languages at the beginning i "hello Merhaba Konichiwa bonjor you maybe be wondering what languages i am speaking" and then i went on from there on how much i loved lanuages
@emmaluk48994 жыл бұрын
I’m literally a freshman why am I causing myself unneeded stress by watching this.
@leilazak84054 жыл бұрын
sAme
@sealy9995 жыл бұрын
do these values and visions have to be necessarily true?
@saicharanrajpusuluri17615 жыл бұрын
Hi! I'm gonna talk about how I couldn't accomplish my dream to become a pilot due to financial reasons and how I didn't let this affect me by giving a just about my maturity. Do you think it's a good essay?
@abrahamlincoln87485 жыл бұрын
My dream school is UPenn. My grandfather, grandmother, great uncle, and mother all went to UPenn. I visited the campus and fell in love. I want to get in so badly. I have one question. I plan to take 3 AP classes by the end of my senior year. Is that enough?
@nightxlight29685 жыл бұрын
Yes It's totally fine but do your best....Go boiiiii Upenn is in your genes
@abrahamlincoln87485 жыл бұрын
@Cs Shine thank you so much. It’s good to know I'm doing something right