Tale of the Mapmaker pt.2

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@DarkJusn2020 Ай бұрын

Oh no, don't tell me Nessen is actually stuck in a loop where he always loses the memory of cartographing the ruins every time :00

@ionryful Ай бұрын

It's supposed to be one recent memory, unless Megnu was lying. I hope Nessen is ok!😢

@mossyabyss Ай бұрын

@@ionryful For a potentially ageless being, "recent" could be misleading.

@jobobminer8843 Ай бұрын

@@mossyabyss Good point. If this being has memories of thousands of years, a small joyful memory could be your entire lifetime

@khyronthethunderhawg6577 Ай бұрын

Everything has happened before. And everything will happen again.

@danielestrada5773 Ай бұрын

if the ruins are great enough, it could be another Nessen

@octo_contra Ай бұрын

pretty cool to just have a worldbuilding and lore channel without a game or a movie or a show driving the content, I'm glad enough of us are watching that you can release some merch! The voice acting went very well, no need to cringe (although it's hard not to, especially editing yourself). Keep up the great work!

@Eternal_ruins Ай бұрын

Thanks for the support, really appreciate it!

@thedapperdolphin1590 Ай бұрын

There are quite a few of those now.

@hugocastermans4048 Ай бұрын

Don't worry about any cringe of the voices, it turned out great!

@Skinnypop-vc4jm Ай бұрын

The atmosphere of the ruins is very well done, it makes you feel as if you are indeed, sitting on the damp rock, listening to a great story.

@charmingcobra Ай бұрын

This was a welcome notification to see!

@brasstail Ай бұрын

I like the voices! Glad to have an update to this story

@iminacatsuit Ай бұрын

I’m so happy that finally there’s a new video The only thing that complicated the things was the voice of the entity, the filter made it a bit hard to understand, but the subtitles helped I love the storybuilding of the world you created!

@Eternal_ruins Ай бұрын

Aha yeah the recording was a bit messy too, glad the subtitles helped. Thanks for watching!

@PelicanPirate Ай бұрын

This feels like a bedtime story, I love how cosy these videos are!

@Eternal_ruins Ай бұрын

Thanks, always hoping these bring some calmness to people's lives.

@Aetius_of_Astora Ай бұрын

The voices turned out very good! I know it's incredibly difficult to not feel cringe-worthy listening to your own voice acting especially when you're not at your best, but i think it was a great addition to this.

@fisch37 Ай бұрын

Regarding the voices: The spirit's voics isn't bad at all, though I'd have opted not to have them speak. That spirits would rather deposit information directly into your mind. In the sense of "The spirit did not speak and its empty eyes, unblinking, stared at Nessen. Then, at once, Nessen knew: It was the spirit who placed the mark on his maps." Something like that. I feel the spirits would be best written to be inhuman, with inhuman ways and inhuman desires, and I feel them being non-verbal would suit that theme best

@Eternal_ruins Ай бұрын

Hmm yeah I thought about this too, it would definitely be more mysterious. I might do that instead in the future. Thanks for the feedback, always appreciate it

@LonganNguyen762 Ай бұрын

The amount of times that the Eternal Ruins posts a video after I think to myself "hmm... The Eternal Ruins haven't posted in a while" is uncanny

@itamarsadan6089 Ай бұрын

4:43 they are really cool!!

@4TheWizard Ай бұрын

Maaan, wish I could do voice acting for projects like this. It's so cool to see the old tales others have made. I really enjoy the creative works that are made just for the sake of it, in their own little niche! AND THE LORE IS SO GOOD!! I wanna be a voice actor, maybe for my own projects, but I'd love to help tell the tales I love most too! Maybe one day I'll make a career out of it, if I can... Good stuff as always, my friend! And remember, say it with vigor!

@danlap5697 Ай бұрын

SAME i would love to do voices for these amazing characters!

@adamg.2933 Ай бұрын

Your Voice acting is on point. Keep at it!

@Alburrito457 Ай бұрын

I feel totally at peace now… and I have a craving for tea

@imos_theos Ай бұрын

I've been anticipating this video. It lived up to my excitement! Can't wait for the next one 😊

@Eternal_ruins Ай бұрын

Glad to hear it, thanks!

@skistorm739 Ай бұрын

@Eternal_ruins, this world doesn't feel real because an infinite maze and ground doesn't change make underground

@imos_theos Ай бұрын

@@skistorm739 ?

@LamarjorieQueen Ай бұрын

Oh god, he posted, LETS GOOOOO-

@danlap5697 Ай бұрын

LOL

@dudesuh Ай бұрын

Top notch, really nothing else is quite like the feeling of the ruins. I always feel so ready to step right into them and get lost in the trance of it all. Can't wait for the next chapter of this tale.

@danlap5697 Ай бұрын

Ditto

@sloth3066 Ай бұрын

There is no cringe, keep going with the voices, they are great !

@Eternal_ruins Ай бұрын

Haha thanks, gotta keep fighting the cringe!

@trijacz9814 Ай бұрын

The voices feel very natural and pleasant to the ear, hope you feel better soon!

@rafavizuetecastro Ай бұрын

Thank you so much for the full transcript/captions! I love writing down quotes! It's like Ghibli's Castle in the Sky + Made in Abyss.

@Eternal_ruins Ай бұрын

Glad they're useful for someone, I always take the time to fill them out. Thanks for watching!

@mosterfire1737 Ай бұрын

Really great voices and worldbuilding!

@hollijae Ай бұрын

Such a wonderful, peaceful channel. Thank you.

@EchoDrifter Ай бұрын

I love that you did voices! It brought the story to life.

@elgringo4923 Ай бұрын

I'm so happy to have an update, and can't wait til part 3!!

@thomasfoster7387 Ай бұрын

I think I know where this is going. the spirit will draw the memory of the Library's location from the cartographer's head

@ddm4life915 Ай бұрын

Oh nooooooo

@mmgmismas Ай бұрын

I love this world so much and I think it has so much potential. What do I know, maybe in the future, there might actually be a series or a game set in it!

@fabi-fe2uw Ай бұрын

The other commenters are right, the voices are really good. Great video as always :)

@thatguyaknow5557 Ай бұрын

I liked the voice of the spirit, but it was slightly hard to understand at times. That seems apt though for a recently awakened ancient spirit so I don't mind

@Eternal_ruins Ай бұрын

Haha yeah the recording was a bit funky. Glad you liked it anyway

@kawaigentzler1473 Ай бұрын

im obsessed with this series !great story telling and the voices weren't cringey at all.

@Eternal_ruins Ай бұрын

Glad you're enjoying it! And thanks, I need to hear that

@pebz117 Ай бұрын

I really enjoy your storytelling style, you managed to really capture a calming ambience of a late night story by the fire. i wornder what cherished memory the curious cartographer has offed up maybe it was the joy he had from finding the temple on the old map or maybe he ironically offeded up meeting mignu, so he could return again to offer up a map for a cherished memory or Mignu takes everything leaving him lost to roam the eternal ruins no longer knowing who he is.

@hank.hacking Ай бұрын

Excellent work, homie. Cheers!

@hollowednight5290 Ай бұрын

The voices are fine, especially considering that it is just one guy telling the story. Keep the great work up! I always love seeing your world grow and develop.

@ThatRobHuman Ай бұрын

The voices turned out great!

@Layki357 Ай бұрын

Спасибо, за прекрасный и таинственный мир руин. Ваши видео невероятно вдохновляют и дарят приятную атмосферу!❤

@-sator8352 Ай бұрын

No way I read that as Tale of the Markiplier

@meapyboy12345 Ай бұрын

The Markiplier really is a fascinating Entity

@bigboyart1 Ай бұрын

I've never gotten into a video early before... This feels nice

@Eternal_ruins Ай бұрын

Welcome

@princessthyemis Ай бұрын

same!!!!

@mimicray Ай бұрын

I wonder what the maps of these ruins would look like

@s_e_r. 27 күн бұрын

lovely! and you did well with the voices, no cringe here, just vibes. this feels like a bedtime story, cant wait to see where it goes.

@p_pthenoob Ай бұрын

IM GONNA NEED THAT *bangs table with credit card in hand IM GONNA NEED THAT

@danlap5697 Ай бұрын

SPRITE PLUSHEEEEEEEEEE

@lilysillustration Ай бұрын

✨It’s such a creative world you’re building! Looking forward to seeing it grow!✨

@Hannah-co9bv Ай бұрын

Just to let you know, the link to the plushy does not currently work. Hope the page goes back up soon! The eternal ruins always makes me smile. :)

@donuthurtmyhoney8313 Ай бұрын

I worry Nessen will lose his love of and sense of purpose in mapmaking

@chillaxon 28 күн бұрын

Damn, I was so immersed. The voices are good, no worries! So happy to see more of Eternal Ruins, it's been too long!!

@Jihell77 Ай бұрын

LET'S GOOOOOOOOOOOOO NEW VIDEO ! I'm following all your work very recently and it inspires me a lot for my own project ! (I'm not copying any of your stuff I'm talking about being motivated and hype because of what you do ) might join the discord soon

@Eternal_ruins Ай бұрын

That's awesome to hear, I'm glad it could inspire your own project. Thanks for watching!

@honema123456789 Ай бұрын

only feedback I have on the voice acting is that it was heard to understand the spirit, absolutely loved the rest!

@newProz66 Ай бұрын

Dude I just wanna say, the world you built is so interesting and unique and I love it everytime you upload a new video, I do not want to wait another 2 months for part 3😭. Just wanna say your very good with your art and storytelling. If you turned this into a comic or manga I would literally pay to read it. If this was an anime which I wish it was would definitely be one of my favorites and it reminds me of Made In Abyss. Me myself is working on a story but I don't have good drawing skills unfortunately. But anyways keep up the awesome work and please don't make us wait another 2 months!

@AtomskZoe Ай бұрын

Once again Brina is proven right to worship the spiral, we shall ride the spiral to the end to usher in the age of moss and spore!

@Amathu Ай бұрын

Put your damn tea down!!! I need to hear the rest of this!!! Love the voiceacting in this & the story is super good very excited to see what's to come :)

@kaicastle. Ай бұрын

I really like that there are these stories. Really brave of you to step out your niche of just worldbuilding.. turned on the notifs! 😊

@kreativekendrick Ай бұрын

YES!! So happy you are back bro!! Let’s goooo

@c_karis_1 Ай бұрын

I liked the voices. They are pretty cool.

@Ink2Screen Ай бұрын

I love this and please, don't be cringe, I think you did pretty well! Embrace the cringe! But in all seriousness, make sure you drink lots of warm water and honey (or whatever soothes your throat) if you're doing that low growl - I know from experience it can hurt the throat pretty bad without sufficient lubrication (for lack of a better word). Get well soon, and thank you for the video!

@Eternal_ruins Ай бұрын

Haha yeah the fight continues. And thanks for the tip, was pretty rough on my voice!

@ShockedTaiLung Ай бұрын

Peak is back

@observantowl1726 Ай бұрын

Lovely story! get well soon!

@robinHobin Ай бұрын

i liked the spirits voice

@leoknight7763 Ай бұрын

I think your voice acting was great, loved the video

@Rowan-g5n Ай бұрын

Can I just say how amazing ER is and despite very little being released, it means a lot to me! I get so excited every time a new video drops! Also, will we be finding out more about relics and the magic system in the ruins (or if there is really a magic system even?)

@Eternal_ruins Ай бұрын

Aha yeah I should try and make more videos, I really want to do a video on Relics. Thanks for the support even if I'm slow

@tomburns7544 Ай бұрын

I liked it very much! Thank you!

@mossofthemoon Ай бұрын

I like the voice for the spirit

@TheKingdomSleepsPod 28 күн бұрын

Loving the story, loving the characterization! Do more voices!

@juanm.5544 Ай бұрын

Keep on worldbuilding bro! ❤

@Eternal_ruins Ай бұрын

Will do, thank you!

@Nachotaco101 Ай бұрын

Love your content! God Bless!

@Humblerbumble Ай бұрын

The voices were great, not cringe at all! ❤

@FosforoArsenicoCobre Ай бұрын

Really cool! I love your work

@bartvandervoort9449 Ай бұрын

New video, is this some kind of cosmic reward for cleaning up my youtube subscriptions?;D

@Eternal_ruins Ай бұрын

It is, good job!

@Misosverse Ай бұрын

Bro probably keeps forgetting that he's the original map maker and keeps going back without realizing. But that'd also be really cruel of it were true bc that spirit would just be stealing from him over and over.

@andomrtoob7338 Ай бұрын

I love the eternal ruins

@Ever_green2021 Ай бұрын

Oooooh conlang! I love the eternal ruins!

@Aesiris Ай бұрын

I was just thinking about this 😅

@genesisPiano Ай бұрын

I liked the voices. I didn't think they were cringe.

@Indestructablepeace Ай бұрын

Thought you disappeared. Good to see another video

@Eternal_ruins Ай бұрын

Still here, just always a struggle to balance stuff as one person! Thanks for watching

@GrauCasper Ай бұрын

Poor fellow, going around in circles, finding maps and signs of his own making, perpetually clueless about the fact that he had been the one to make them in the first place...

@itsmaxmint 27 күн бұрын

I like the voices, but as a foreigner I had to use subtitles to fully understand. :)

@plswatchinfinitytrain Ай бұрын

Loved this

@DTinkerer Ай бұрын

Commenting for the algorithm

@Eternal_ruins Ай бұрын

Thank you!

@befrey Ай бұрын

I love your art style and world you're making , if I can support in anyway just let me know 😊

@Eternal_ruins Ай бұрын

Thanks! The patreon is probably the best way, but likes and comments are always appreciated if that isn't possible for you.

@Decatron-ox7se Ай бұрын

Amazing video, thank you

@Eternal_ruins Ай бұрын

Glad you liked it! Thanks ☺️

@pawots6448 Ай бұрын

: ) Love the ruins

@stellao.7365 Ай бұрын

I’ve been reading an amazing book that really reminds me of this project! It’s called Underland by Robert Macfarlane. Required reading for anyone who loves eternal ruins!!

@pokepoke1889 Ай бұрын

blush u my broski

@Rainbowgunsh Ай бұрын

AAAHHHH I LOVE THIS

@Managarm Ай бұрын

I really like your world and writing, but would also like to offer some advice if it's okay. Your voice acting is decent, but it lacks in range, making the narration feel a bit flat. This extends to doing voices, where you could play with stress, rhythm and other parameters to make them more distinct. Good references for this kind of narration are monstergarden (especially early narrative ones) and mapcrow (video on better witches) Finally, I think this cliff hanger didn't create much suspense as there is no established risk, so I would have preferred to not have a split this time. Thank you so much for your uploads, your work is gorgeous and I'm looking forward to the next one! :)